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theowest
irc mod. Did you want me to make a diff or not? ;V
Topic Starter
C R E A M

theowest wrote:

irc mod. Did you want me to make a diff or not? ;V
oh~~ theowest. Thx for star. and.... diff hmm... I already made half of my easy diff so... there won't be more space.
theowest

C R E A M wrote:

theowest wrote:

irc mod. Did you want me to make a diff or not? ;V
oh~~ theowest. Thx for star. and.... diff hmm... I already made half of my easy diff so... there won't be more space.
okay :)
KRZY
이제와서 매핑하려고 맵을 봤는데, [Patche] 난이도가 너무 적절해서 지금 상태로 Diff spread가 완벽한지라 내가 난이도를 어떻게 만들어도 맵셋이 그리 나아질거 같진 않네. 다른말로 하면 노멀이랑 파쳬 난이도 중간즘의 난이도로 맵을 만들 자신이 없어. 그냥 빼려고 하는데 어떻게 생각해? 한번 시도는 해볼까?







EDIT: 인센보다 어렵게 만들면 된다는걸 깨달았다 KRZY's Extra를 만들어주마
L i a
Kurowolfe
Hi there~
Sorry for the late mod, so here you go:

[SB]
0'18''087 - If you're following the soft rapping sounds, you'll need to add another 'SB\OP effect' at this point.
0'18''559 - I think it'll look better if you move 'Lyric\Title' and 'Lyric\Patche' slowly downwards maybe until the middle of the screen before fading out.
0'22''339 - The candle light effect on 'SB\Patchouli' is a great idea, but it's hardly noticable during gameplay. Maybe move the initial position of the second 'SB\Patchouli' just a bit to the right, and make it a bit darker, for a more realistic effect?
1'03''441 - Spelling error for 'Lyric\donw'. It's 'down' not 'donw'.
1'17''614 -> 1'18''795 - The lyrics in here are not shown correctly. To fix this:

+ 1'17''614 - Please extend the Scale, Fade and Rotation timelines for 'Lyric\kowa' to end at 1'18''323, not 1'18''087.
+ 1'18''087 - Push the timelines for 'Lyric\re' here so that they start at 1'18''323 and end at 1'18''559.
+ 1'18''559 - Start the timelines for 'Lyric\so' here, and end them at 1'19''032, together with 'Lyric\u'
(I wish I could just give you the codes, but my osu! software has problems saving the changes I'd made.)

1'34''150 - End the Fade and Move timelines for 'Lyric\11' at 1'42''181, not 1'41''709.
2'04''386 - Spelling error for 'Lyric\15'. It's 'Friday', not 'Fryday'.
3'04''858 - Are the lack of any lyrics from here until the end intentional?
3'19''032 - I think the 'SB\White Effect' would look better if position close to Patchouli.

[General]
Add 'knowledge' in the tags.

[Easy]
0'25''173 - *nazi* For this slider, move the endpoint 2 grids left, level 3, for a smoother flow.
1'19''032 - Try using a finish here.

Nice diff!

[Normal]
Can't find anything major.

[Patche]
3'38''992 - Extend this slider so that it ends at 3'39''347.
3'46''551 - Same case here, extend so that it ends at 3'46''906.

[Insane]
0'45''725 - Add another stacked note here.

Love the custom hitsounds, though this image of an electric oven keeps on popping in my head. So a star for you~
All the best! :)
Topic Starter
C R E A M

kurohacker wrote:

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Fixed. Thank you for mod kurohacker.
Snowy Dream
;)
Netia
Star for you. Good Look ;) .
Norn_NNN
nice map~~~ :D
Acyfd
C R E A M~>w< star~
Patchouli
I'm Sorry.I'm late.
SB fixed.
http://puu.sh/359g Lyric file.
http://puu.sh/359q osb code.
thank you for modding,kurohacker
Topic Starter
C R E A M
Thank you for star Snowy Dream, Netia, Norn_NNN and Rmt.
Thank you a lot patchouli for SB and pink star. >w<
Cyril Scarlet
:oops:
Acyfd
>w< star~
Daiguren
mod req from my Queues
-w-

Easy
I think this Easy is too difficult, because there are too many sliders here, beginners often cant read so many sliders clearly like this. Also , timeline is nearly full.

00:26:118 (1) - finish here is too strange,remove it plz. or add finish at [00:28:008(first hit)] and whistle at [00:27:063 ]
01:01:079 (1,1) - too close
01:13:362 (2) - clap
02:01:551 (3) - whistle
02:02:969 (5) - add finsh at the second and third hit.if you want more combat flu here, reduce 1 repeat and add a circle behand
02:42:181 (1) - add clap at the last hit?
02:58:244 (2) - finish here is too strange,i think use clap instead will be better
03:35:095 (1) - add finish at the first hit

Normal
00:18:559 (x) - add a note here,dont worry too close here
01:03:441 (9) - how about use clap here , and use SC2-finish at the first hit of the next slider ?
01:10:528 (6) - make the last sliderpoint down 1 grid
02:01:079 (1) - Extendby 1/1 beat
02:41:236 (6) - remove finish at the last hit
02:42:181 (x) - add a note with finish?
03:19:504 (4,1) - same as easier
03:26:591 (x) - how about a slider here? it will end at 03:27:063 ,(so plz delete (1) if you do)


Patche
01:14:780 (x) - add a note here
01:24:701 (x) - ^
01:24:819 (x) - ^
01:33:914 (11,1) - how about use clap here , and use SC2-finish at the first hit of the next slider ?
02:34:386 (10,1) - ^

Insane
OK

good luck ~ star~
Topic Starter
C R E A M
Star thank you S i R i R u ~~~
and thank you for your mod Daigurenhyourinmaru.
Patchouli

Daigurenhyourinmaru wrote:

Patche
01:14:780 (x) - add a note here ok
01:24:701 (x) - ^ ok
01:24:819 (x) - ^
01:33:914 (11,1) - how about use clap here , and use SC2-finish at the first hit of the next slider ?
02:34:386 (10,1) - ^
mod thx~ :>

Download: XL Project - Weekend Clock (C R E A M) [Patche].osu
Artemus_old
[SB]
I like it! :) Maybe those white circles at the bottom should move faster at 01:03:914 to 01:33:677?
When I played your map, I didn't see that the girl is getting bigger / smaller (or whatever it does).
I checked it only when I scrolled down in the edit mode!

[General]
Use more sounds. Because I'd suggest you too many of them I'll let you do :D. (At least 30 only on easy! Guess what that was on Insane.)
This song has a repetitive beat, but you ignore it. Just put a clap in there each time.
I miss much finishes, too! For example on 00:33:677 or 00:48:795.
Each time something in the bachground changed one must be pu there I think, but maybe it's only because I love them^^.
Even Insane doesn't have enough for me.
Also, try to put circles and sliders sometimes symmetrical.
Additional to the SB, you might also enable Kiai Time on each diff from 01:03:914 (or 01:19:032?) to the beginning of the break on 01:34:150.
In the Kiai Time section it doesn't sound really bad on Normal instead of Soft.

Whatever, your work is worth a star of mine :).
Sallad4ever
Hi C R E A M :)
A full wall of text you've been warned~

SPOILER
[General]
- nice choice of custom hitsound
- maybe add the name of the sequel of touho where patchouli first appear on the tag?

[SB]

- First of all, there's a sub folder on your Lyric SB. This made your Lyric SB won't appear as the code on the osb file is not referring to the sub folder. It's very easy to fix this, just copy all the images in the sub folder then move it to the main folder. Don't forget to full submit it~
- 01:03:441 - you're missing another "down" for the Lyric, I'm guessing you forget to fix it. To easily fix this find this line on osb file
Sprite,Foreground,Centre,"Lyric\donw.png",320,240
then change the donw to down
- Some of the lyric SBs are not cropped properly. This is some of them please fix it
- On Lyric 15, the correct word is "Friday" not "Fryday"
- Starting from 03:19:977 to 03:35:095 the SB load increase to 5 and even beyond that. This is unrankable.
I'm not an expert in SB but my guess is, it's happens because of you're scaling the BG Effect01.png waaaaaay to much thus when it's fully appear it shot the SB load to 5. Try replacing the BG Effect01 with a full black image with appropriate size (640x480) so you won't have to scale it
- While you're on it, change all of the BG Effect01.png that you used to cover the field into a full black image one

[Easy]
00:26:118 (1) - add finish?
00:53:047 (6) - hmm maybe NC this?
01:01:079 (1) - This spinner would fit more if you start it at the same place as the vocal in 01:02:024 and end it on 01:03:914
01:25:173 (5) - NC
01:30:843 (6) - ^
02:02:969 (5) - ^
02:19:977 (3) - ^
02:53:520 (1) - I suggest to unstack this. Different combo color stack may easily confuse newbie
03:39:819 (5) - NC this
This diff is quite dense for an Easy it's almost like a normal

[Patche]
Could you use the same combo color as the other diffs? Default combo color doesn't fit with Patchouli imo
00:37:457 (1) - This NC is unnecessary, I suggest to remove it
00:58:244 (1) - the 1/4 beat doesn't sound very good cause there's nothing to follow in that place. I suggest to make it into a 1/1 slider
01:00:607 (7) - remove the finish then move it to 01:00:488 ? That way it'll follow the vocal
02:01:079 (7) - same as above, I think it's better if you move it 1/4 beat back
02:40:055 (1) - could you change this into a slider or a circle? the previous notes are following the vocal so it's kinda break the flow when you suddenly put a slider repeat like this. Maybe use something like this ?

[Insane]

00:54:701 (1) - add a timing section with 40 % volume for this spinner. The spinner sound is kinda loud compare to the soft vocal
01:55:173 (1) - ^
01:37:693 (5) - this is kinda sudden, maybe include this slider into the 0.5 timing section
01:28:008 (6,7,8,9,10,11) - these jump is kinda random and they don't fit well with the song
01:28:953 (10) - NC this then remove NC from 01:29:425 (1)
02:00:607 (7) - the slow down doesn't fit
02:18:323 (1) - unnecessary NC
02:39:110 (6) - I suggest to remove this so the whole pattern on this section follow the vocal
03:09:110 (4) - add clap?
03:09:819 (1) - add clap at the repeat?
03:11:473 (1) - add clap at the end?
03:14:780 (4) - add clap?
03:16:197 (1) - add clap at the end?
03:17:142 (3) - ^
That's all from me, the effect of the SB is nice~
Good Luck and ~star
KRZY
Easy
00:22:811 (2) - 제거
00:29:425 (X) - 노트 추가
00:29:898 (1) - 노트로 변경해서 00:29:898에 배치
00:34:150 (2) - 노트로 변경해서 00:34:622에 배치
00:35:095 (3) - 제거
00:35:567 (4) - 노트로 변경해서 00:35:567에 배치
00:36:984 (6) - 00:37:457로 이동, 반복 한 번 추가
00:39:347 (1) - 노트로 변경해서 00:40:292에 배치
00:41:236 (3) - 노트로 변경해서 00:41:236에 배치
00:42:181 (X) - 노트 추가
00:49:268 (1) - 제거
00:49:740 (2) - 노트로 변경해서 00:49:740에 배치
01:06:276 (2) - 제거
01:06:748 (3) - 반복 제거
01:08:638 ~ 01:09:110 - 슬라이더
01:09:583 (2,3) - 슬라이더 한개로 교체
01:12:418 ~ 01:12:890 - 슬라이더
01:23:756 ~ 01:24:229 - 슬라이더
01:24:701 (X) - 노트 추가
01:25:173 (5) - 제거
01:26:118 (7) - 노트로 변경해서 01:26:591에 배치
01:51:630 (3) - 노트로 변경해서 01:52:103에 배치
01:56:827 (2) - 노트로 변경해서 01:56:827에 배치
01:57:772 (3,4) - 슬라이더 한개로 교체
01:58:717 ~ 01:59:189 - 슬라이더
01:59:662 ~ 02:00:134 - 슬라이더
02:00:607 ~ 02:02:024 - 슬라이더
02:02:496 ~ 02:02:969 - 슬라이더 (반복 두번) 즉 02:04:386 (6) 얘는 그대로 냅두기
02:17:614 (1,2) - 스피너로 대체
02:19:977 (3) - 반복 없애고 02:20:449에 배치
02:21:866 (5) - 제거
02:22:339 (4) - 노트로 변경해서 02:22:339에 배치
02:27:536 (1) - 제거
02:27:536 (1) - 제거
02:36:512 (2) - 노트로 변경해서 02:36:512에 배치
02:37:457 (3,4,5) - 반복 한번 하는 슬라이더로 교체
02:38:874 (1) - 제거
02:39:347 (6) - 반복 제거
02:40:292 (X) - 노트 추가
02:40:764 (7) - 노트로 변경하여 02:41:236에 배치
02:44:544 (2) - 제거
02:49:740 (1) - 노트로 변경하여 02:49:740에 배치
02:50:685 ~ 02:51:630 - 슬라이더 (반복 한번)
02:51:158 (2) - 제거
02:51:630 (3) - 02:52:575로 이동
02:53:047 (4,1) - 제거
02:55:410 (4) - 노트로 변경하여 02:55:410에 배치
02:56:355 (X) - 노트 추가
02:56:827 (5) - 제거
02:58:244 (2) - 반복 제거
02:58:244 (2) - 02:58:953에서 끝나도록 연장
03:18:087 ~ 03:19:977 - 스피너로 대체
03:19:977 (2) - 제거
03:20:921 (X) - 노트 추가
03:22:339 (2) - 03:21:866로 이동
03:23:284 (4) - 제거
03:31:315 (1,2) - 슬라이더 한개로 통합
03:33:205 (4) - 반복 한번 추가
03:34:622 (5) - 제거
03:35:095 (1) - 노트로 변경하여 03:35:095에 배치
03:36:040 (2) - 노트로 변경하여 03:36:040에 배치
03:39:347 (4) - 제거
03:45:016 (4) - 노트로 변경하여 03:45:488에 배치
03:45:961 (5) - 제거
03:49:268 (4) - 반복 추가

Normal
00:45:488 (5) - 그리드 스냅을 적절히 풀어주는 것으로



이런 패턴을



이런 식으로 바꿀수도 있음, 물론 저런거 하나하나 따지는 건 개인적 취향의 문제지만 난 저런거 하나도 정다각형 모양으로 맞춰주는게 보기가 좋더라고
01:04:858 ~ 01:05:567 - 반복 한개 있는 슬라이더로 교체
01:05:567 (5) - 01:05:803에서 시작하도록 변경, 끝나는 부분은 그대로. 즉



01:12:890 (2) - 반복 한개 있는 슬라이더로 변경
01:28:008 (2) - ^
02:36:748 (4) - 제거

Patche
02:00:607 (X) - Add a note

Insane
00:31:788 (5) - 뉴콤보
00:36:748 ~ 00:36:984 - 슬라이더
01:00:843 (2) - 피니시 제거
01:03:914 (1) - 피니시 추가
01:06:748 (1) - 끝에 피니시 제거
01:19:032 (14) - 피니시 추가
01:21:158 (6) - 피니시 제거
01:39:819 (1) - 피니시 제거
01:43:126 (7) - 앞에 휘슬 제거
01:46:906 (10) - 피니시를 휘슬로 대체
01:53:284 (7) - 끝에 피니시 제거
01:53:992 (1,2,3,4,5) - 이건 좀만 신경쓰면 정오각형 모양 만들 수 있을거같은데, 그리드 스냅 풀고 한번 만들어보는걸 추천함
02:17:614 (1,2,3,4) - 갑자기 1/6이 등장하는 부분이기 때문에 반복슬라이더 후 노트가 나오면 읽기가 굉장히 어려워지니까 노트후 반복 슬라이더가 나오는 방향으로 하면 좋겠다
02:38:402 (3,4,5,6,7) - 정체를 알수 없는 점프다... 저 다섯 노트끼리는 스페이싱을 일정하게 하는게 나을거같음, 1.5x가 됐던 2.0x가 됐던
03:02:024 (1) - 03:01:788으로 땡기고 끝나는 부분은 그대로
03:35:095 (1) - 이 슬라이더가 나오면서 그전 패턴의 어프로치 서클의 sightreading을 조금 방해하는거같아서 슬라이더를 그전 패턴과 겹치지 않도록 배치하는게 좋을거같다
Nymph
:P
ElectricShock
별은 먹으라고있는거지
별드세요
Topic Starter
C R E A M
Thank you for star Nymph_ and ElectricShock
Shohei Ohtani
Storyboard
On the left (your left) side of. . . that purple haired person whose name I forget. . . you can still see some of the red from the library. Try either blurring that out or going supper zoom mode to get those pieces out :3~.
02:04:858 -It's "Friday"
Why does she say Thursday twice? Like, I hear it too, but it seems kind of odd that she says Thursday twice and never says Tuesday o-o.

Insane:
02:00:607 (7) - Hullo unfitting slow-down slider~
02:46:433 (5) - ^

Patche:
Add the combo colors on this diff~

Normal:
02:46:433 (7) - NO ME GUSTA

Yay~.
Jilka8
There ' s a typo .

Lyrics no15 - [ Fryday ] -> [ Friday ] .
Topic Starter
C R E A M

Jilka8 wrote:

There ' s a typo .

Lyrics no15 - [ Fryday ] -> [ Friday ] .
Thank you. already many modders pointed out that and waiting for Patchouli's fixed SB.
Topic Starter
C R E A M
All cleared. I think it's enough. Now waiting for MAT/BAT.
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Kotone
Vocals by Chata
Original song is Locked Girl ~ The Girl's Secret Room
So please add 'chata locked girl the girl's secret room' to tag
Topic Starter
C R E A M

karenying wrote:

Vocals by Chata
Original song is Locked Girl ~ The Girl's Secret Room
So please add 'chata locked girl the girl's secret room' to tag
Fixed
minyeob
별 박아둡니다 :p
edit: 60자 이하 되네....... 언제부터였지
arien666
[Easy]
02:49:268 (4,5) - [Nazi Suggestion] Little closer so its distance becomes 0.80x?

[Normal]
02:33:677 (7) - [Nazi Move 2 grid up so 5-6-7-8 have same distance?

[Patche]
This diff has different preview time orz
01:36:984 (3,4,5,6,7) - [Suggestion] Distance...? Actually, it is not necessery but I would suggest to make them same distance orz
02:49:268 (7) - I think this note is misplaced :3? (Spacing orz)




Star(Current) -> Bubble
Topic Starter
C R E A M

arien666 wrote:

[Easy]
02:49:268 (4,5) - [Nazi Suggestion] Little closer so its distance becomes 0.80x? / Fixed

[Normal]
02:33:677 (7) - [Nazi Move 2 grid up so 5-6-7-8 have same distance? / Fixed

[Patche]
This diff has different preview time orz
01:36:984 (3,4,5,6,7) - [Suggestion] Distance...? Actually, it is not necessery but I would suggest to make them same distance orz
02:49:268 (7) - I think this note is misplaced :3? (Spacing orz)




Star(Current) -> Bubble

Thx for mod~~~ Waiting for Patchouli's response.
Patchouli

arien666 wrote:

01:36:984 (3,4,5,6,7) - [Suggestion] Distance...? Actually, it is not necessery but I would suggest to make them same distance orz
02:49:268 (7) - I think this note is misplaced :3? (Spacing orz)

Star(Current) -> Bubble
All Fixed~
thanks you~

http://puu.sh/7M0n

Download: XL Project - Weekend Clock (C R E A M) [Patche].osu
arien666
Since things are fixed now :3
Whatever :3 :3 :3



[Look at icon left of created time of this reply <3]
Topic Starter
C R E A M

arien666 wrote:

Since things are fixed now :3
Whatever :3 :3 :3



[Look at icon left of created time of this reply <3]

Thx for bubble arien"666" >w<
Garven
[General]
Patche's diff has different tags. Also different combo colors, but that isn't required.

[Normal]
00:16:670 (1) - End this at 00:17:851 - to give a little more recovery time
01:36:512 (1) - Remove new combo
01:37:457 (1) - ^
01:38:402 (3) - New combo
01:40:764 (1) - Remove
01:41:473 (2) - Make into two circles and have the second one be a new combo
02:50:213 (1) - Too soon after a spinner
03:30:370 (1) - Remove new combo

[Patche]
AR, OD, HP -1
Kind of a big jump from Normal to this diff, but if you lower the diff settings it's not as bad.

[Insane]
01:34:150 (1) - I don't understand having a slower slider speed here considering the intensity of the song changes... hardly at all, really. They don't fit very well, and when you transition back to normal at 01:37:693 (5) - it's just sudden and awkward at best. There are some later too that just don't fit the gameplay. You aren't even consistent when you do apply a slightly faster transition that works during the final chorus. 02:49:740 - this part goes back to 1.0x instead of 1.2x after that weird .5x. :/
02:50:981 (3) - Slider end is unsnapped.

I was a little disappointed since this song has a good swing feeling to it, but the maps didn't reflect it much at all. It's still technically okay though - just losing a lot of potential with this song, imo.
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Garven wrote:

[General]
Patche's diff has different tags. Also different combo colors, but that isn't required.

[Normal]
00:16:670 (1) - End this at 00:17:851 - to give a little more recovery time
01:36:512 (1) - Remove new combo
01:37:457 (1) - ^
01:38:402 (3) - New combo
01:40:764 (1) - Remove
01:41:473 (2) - Make into two circles and have the second one be a new combo
02:50:213 (1) - Too soon after a spinner
03:30:370 (1) - Remove new combo

[Patche]
AR, OD, HP -1
Kind of a big jump from Normal to this diff, but if you lower the diff settings it's not as bad.

[Insane]
01:34:150 (1) - I don't understand having a slower slider speed here considering the intensity of the song changes... hardly at all, really. They don't fit very well, and when you transition back to normal at 01:37:693 (5) - it's just sudden and awkward at best. There are some later too that just don't fit the gameplay. You aren't even consistent when you do apply a slightly faster transition that works during the final chorus. 02:49:740 - this part goes back to 1.0x instead of 1.2x after that weird .5x. :/
02:50:981 (3) - Slider end is unsnapped.

I was a little disappointed since this song has a good swing feeling to it, but the maps didn't reflect it much at all. It's still technically okay though - just losing a lot of potential with this song, imo.
Thx for modding Garven.
I was a little disappointed since this song has a good swing feeling to it, but the maps didn't reflect it much at all. It's still technically okay though - just losing a lot of potential with this song, imo.
So sad.... but I really agree with this statement. Actually this map was made when I am poor at mapping so I found out many defects when I check out this again after your modding. I will remap Insane diff and considering to add Hard diff because "Patche" diff is originally made as Insane diff. My "Insane" diff will be very hard since it wil have plenty of 1/6 beats so two Insane diff in one mapset would be OK.
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GYAAAAA! Don't go to Graveyard T.T
Making Hard diff and wating for KRZY's Extra.
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Nyahaha~~
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