TwillghtSparkle wrote:

M4M

Easy:00:21:241 (5) - nc okie!
00:48:833 (4) - x336 y128? changed, but in another way.
01:27:811 (6) - Nc ugh I'm bad at NC D:
01:43:577 (4) - change a bit slider for a blanket with 5 alrighty.

Normal : 00:26:059 (3) - Better replace with 00:24:745 (1) - and ctrl H yeah. It looks better.
01:47:300 (1) - what about a nc here? alrighty


Hard :00:14:672 (2,1,2) - Not stacked um, it feels weird to me.
00:33:286 (2,3,4) - Looks better stacked I'm making a recognizable pattern here, just like 00:31:205 (1,2)
01:24:307 (1) -Remove NC fixed.
01:39:198 (4,5) - Blanket wokeh.
01:42:264 (5,6) - Blanket sip.
01:52:337 (1) - Remove NC ? I'm putting NC in the end on purpose..

Sorry for this short mod , good luck! ayy thank you so much for modding! Really appreciate it!

Lily Bread wrote:

m4m

[Easy]
AR3 OD2 is better. most easy diffs do this. mm okay c:

00:30:000 (2) - in fact, it should be 3/4 reverse slider. but it's an easy diff, so i suggest a 3/2 slider. I disagree, because I think it will make it more difficult for beginners.
http://puu.sh/sPdaW/bbda161f18.jpg

00:40:511 (3,5) - this pattern is an unrankable issue. reverse slider should be visible in any diff. besides this, this pattern and rhythm are too hard for an Easy diff. what about this? oh, my mistake. I've changed it slightly.
http://puu.sh/sPdhD/889573bc50.jpg

00:55:183 (1,1) - in easy diff, objects after a spinner should be 4/1 away at least. for example: changed in another way
http://puu.sh/sPdoX/f1a7872ea4.jpg

01:02:847 (3,4) - in easy diff, we should not do stack. so better to take them apart. okie

01:07:665 (5,6,7) - objects that under a slider within 2/1 or shorter are also not good in easy diff. better to take them apart. fixed

01:26:935 (4,5) - ^ yes

[Normal]
ar8?! @.@ ar8 is often be used in hard diff. od7 is too high, either. i suggest ar5 od4 hp4. yes. sorry i'm not good at this orz

00:55:402 (1,1) - in normal diff, this gap should be 2/1 at least. example: changed in another way
http://puu.sh/sPdF0/aaffde55d9.jpg

[Hard]
00:12:044 (3,4,5) - they should be 2 1/2 sliders imo. the violin goes like this. yes
http://puu.sh/sPdM1/029032f115.jpg

00:46:096 (1,2) - this flow can be improved: fixed
http://puu.sh/sPdQg/d8639b342e.jpg

00:55:402 (1,2,3) - what about 2*1/4 reverse slider? thank you, but I would keep it like this
http://puu.sh/sPe1u/5752ed3e0a.jpg

good luck! yes! thank you very much!

SaltKing wrote:

Hi! Random mod here, because I love Yunosuke and this song </3

General

1. Change offset to 207, because music actually starts here.
2. You should add to title Short ver. - it isn't full song.
3. Combo colours are too bright, they should be more toned because they don't match background very well (I'm not saying you should use the exactly same colors that background have!).
4. Kai time should end on the end of the beatmap, because chorus actually ends here too.

fixed!

Easy

1. 00:12:920 (1) Why is an inherited section on this spinner? oh, sorry.
2. 00:31:314 (1,2) Fix this blanket. yes
3. 00:38:322 (4) Place this circle more apart from slider, it will not be so packed. fixed
4. 00:44:891 (3) Move this slider one greed to the right, it will look nicer. ok
5. 00:52:774 (1,2,3) These sliders represents the same sound, so they should be the same lenght. I actually emphasizing the vocal from 00:53:637 (2)
6. 00:55:183 (1) This spinner doesn't match the music and it's too short for easy, delete it. Also, why is on it (again) an inherited section? fixed :'(
7. 01:00:219 (1,2) Blanket this two sliders, it'll look better. okay
8. 01:03:723 (1) This curves are totally unnecessary here, make a one smooth curve instead of it. yes
9. 01:08:541 Delete this inherited section, this slower slider can confuse beginners. really? mm okay then.
10. 01:10:730 (1,2) Blanket these sliders. alright.

Normal

1. Circles are too small for normal, you should consider that many beginners are playing them. fixed.
2. It would be better if all objects were distance snapped, there are many jumps on the map, when there should be none of them. If you were not using it because you thinked map will be too packed, you can always change x1,0 to 1,2 - it'll be absolutely fine. I never knew any of this. Thank you for the info!
3. 00:13:358 (1) This curves don't match the music, delete them and make nice smooth curve. yes.
4. 00:19:490 (2) This shape of slider looks weird here, because you were using on this section only nice, smooth sliders. fixed
5. 00:41:387 (5,1) Fix this blanket and delete new combo on second object. okay
6. 00:49:271 (7,8) Fix this blanket. yes.
7. 00:59:782 (1) Delete new combo here and place it on the next object. okay c:
8. 01:09:855 Snap this inherited section. fixed.
9. 01:22:336 (3,4,5) I'm not sure if overlaps like this are okay on normal, cause they can easily confuse new players. Same thing 01:24:964 (2,3,4) here fixed
10. 01:24:088 (7,1) On the end of the slider actually Kai starts, so to flow it nicer you should next slider make begin on the beat which Kai starts. good suggestion :3
    
11. 01:27:373 (7,1) Here is the same thing as above - Miku's vocal starts on the end of the slider. You can fix it in similar way as previous. yes.
12. 01:41:168 (7,8) Delete the circle and reverse the slider, it fits better here. alright.

Hard

1. 00:08:103 (1) Delete new combo.
2. 00:09:855 (1) ^
3. 00:15:986 (2,3) Make blanket here.
4. 00:20:803 (1,2) Make second slider curved like the first one.
5. 00:26:059 (5) Curve this slider, it looks weird while you used in this combo only curved ones.
6. 00:35:256 (2,3) Make blanket here.
7. 00:47:300 (4,5) ^ I'm making a 1/2 pattern here, so I can't blanket.
   fixed everything!(except for the last one)

Good luck with your map!! Thank you for the mod!