[General]You'll need a <three-star diff to be rankable (or enough MAT/BAT-friends). Try mapping an easy with max. 1,0 Slider Velocity and stick to 1/1 and 1/2 beats.
[Normal]Spacing is a bit inconsistent throughout the map.
00:15:782 (X) - how about adding a note here?
00:21:330 (4,5) - you could replace the 2 notes with a slider to better fit the song and fix the strange gap there
00:27:918 (3) - remove the last repeat
00:33:813 (4,1) - maybe don't stack here. It plays weird.
00:39:014 (7) - shorten the repeats to the small white tick at 00:39:361
00:39:707 (X) - add a 1/2 slider from big white tick to red tick to match the beat
00:40:228 (1,1,1) - turn these into sliders: http://puu.sh/2Akg This will follow the beat more exactly and play MUCH better
00:50:803 (X) - Imo it would be great if you copy 00:45:255 (1) here once more!
01:00:165 (X) - maybe add a note, empty space plays and sounds bad
01:04:673 (1,2) - maybe turn this into a slider
01:06:060 (X) - add a 1/1 slider from white tick to white tick and repeat it 1x
01:11:261 (X) - again maybe add a note here...
01:12:648 (3) - ... and delete this one here as it doesn't follow your previous patterns
01:15:768 (1) - add one more repeat
01:26:864 (1,2,3) - turn these three notes into one repeating slider to match the difficulty setting
[Hard]Very interesting beat-pattern! I like it. But you should really fix the spacing! I suggest changing slider velocity to 1,5 with fixed 1,5x spacing for jumps and 1,0x spacing for everything else. Rearrange all notes and check all slider-endings after that.
00:39:014 (3,1,2,3) - Use the exact same pattern that I suggest in [Normal]:
http://puu.sh/2AkgWhatever you do: Keep the interesting beat-pattern. The beat-pattern itself is complex enough to make this map a "Hard", confusing spacing will just make it "bad" and not "harder" so please fix this and this map will be great!
[Insane]Maybe set AR -1.
Spacing seems very random overall ranging from 0,5x to 3,6x and very few combos have consistant distance snapping. If this is intended: Extremely rondom/insane map! Not sure if this is still rankable.
I think the [Hard] is very good because of the unique beat mapping and everything else can be fixed easily.
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