Im not good at english!!!!!
Thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!_Meep_ wrote:
First modze mods by ze meepExtra
00:12:264 (1,2,3) - Overmapped fixed
00:00:396 - Why no map first part? I suggest mapping it like how I did in my own diff(You can ask if you want to take my diff, WIP though) http://puu.sh/rTZwd/f2ff0de054.osz
start of drum and music (and vocal) is 00:10:945 - I'll change if more suggestion about it
change to your diff's it XD if add these
00:16:055 (3,4) - Dont put so many sliders on red tick,sounds bad
vocal and musicsound follwing. I'll change if more suggestion about it
00:20:835 (1) - Stream should start 00:20:176 -
keeping patarn 00:18:857 (1,2,3) - and 00:19:352 (1,2,3) - 00:19:846 (1,2,3) - 00:20:341 (1,2,3) -
00:21:494 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - Slow part,why so many notes?
As you said, using many notes there. but using simple patarn and not put hitsounds to distinguish fluctuation.
should I use 1/1 or 2/1 slider?
00:24:132 (3) - NC fixed
00:31:385 (4) - NC fixed
00:36:000 - Stream sound but no stream? fixed
00:39:626 - No sound,why is there a stream? fixed
00:39:956 (8) - NC fixed
00:53:308 (7,9) - Blanket better fixed
00:51:824 (4) - NC fixed
00:54:461 (3) - NC keep
00:56:439 (1) - Remove NC keep
00:56:769 (1) - NC fixed
01:01:055 (1,2,3,4,5,9) - Stack and blanket with 01:01:714 (7) - fixed
01:03:692 (6) - NC fixed
01:04:681 (1) - Remove NC keep
01:05:011 (3) - NC fixed
01:06:989 (1) - Remove NC keep
01:07:319 (3) - NC fixed
01:10:286 - Put note here, then put spinner 01:10:368 - fixed
01:28:665 - Silence spinner fixed
Just a small mod, but I would like to say this
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[*]Your beats are very good,though some do not make sense,such as 00:31:385 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - . This part is supposed to be mapped in 1/3,however you simply added a stream,which is ignoring the song. You need to know when to stop putting notes, You dont need to fill up the whole song, you can leave 1/1 spaces as well
00:31:385 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - . I think 1/4 beat can follow these part cause strong beat is 00:31:385 - and 00:31:632 - and 00:31:879 - .
another part is... I'll check!!
[*]These are not all of the errors. I'm highlighting some of them hoping that you would see that some parts of your map have the same errors as the others,therefore the errors I stated above occur all the time in your map,such as NC and no slowing down of song.
[*]Note placement is somehow fine,however there are still errors in overlapping such as 01:21:824 (4,1) - and 01:23:143 (5,1) -
I did it intentionally. I think no problems as extra diff
[*]Hitsounds are good,but do not use hitsounds to coverup an empty part of a song 00:39:297 (3,4,5,6,7,1) -
fixed
[*]Try not to leave out part of a song that can be mapped, see my version as I posted ontop and you'll know what to do there,hopefully.
[*]I'll take a look at the other diffs later and see the whole map later. You can keep improving,just map more <3 This song is really nice,and it's a good start, though changing from mapping 1/4 to 1/6 or 1/3 may be confusing to you, but you can approach/ask me anytime if you have a problem <3
I'll check~!!
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