Hey Low!
M4M from your Q!
BASIC
00:19:694 (1,1) - This is really, REALLY confusing, I know you did put a "New Combo" here, but the chance of a newbie NOT missclicking here are very low, especially when 00:22:220 (1) - appears as soon as 00:19:694 (1) - fades out and can trick players into thinking the yellow is right next, in my opinion, you should CTR G 00:22:220 (1) - and re-arrange 00:24:115 (2,1) - , maybe a kinda sharp triangle like: http://i.imgur.com/Gj6mhnM.png
00:27:273 (1) - Just for flow, Curve this a little bit and try: http://i.imgur.com/og1fdhS.png
00:55:062 (1) - Try turning this by 6 clockwise and move 00:56:325 (2) - to x424 y128
01:38:957 (3,1) - Try http://i.imgur.com/pdPW7eA.png tho you would need to move 01:40:536 (2) - a small bit
Nice diff!
MEDIUM:
Gonna be honest, the DS of this diff is at times kinda all over the place, Aesthetic wise is "fine" and the patterns are also OK, but you should take a look at the DS for some parts where the song is not changing but somehow the DS is all over the place
00:07:063 (1) - Here it goes from 0.9 to 1.0 for no reason,
00:09:589 (1) - 0.9 then 1.0 on 00:10:221 (2) - , etc etc
Actually, one of the reason why I guess is like this is because of the Grid size, I would use just Small Grid and try to pay attention to these DS changes, and while yes, you might say "a change from 0.9 to 1.0 is not so noticeable", well, this is still a "normal", aiming for consistency is a good thing, also check AI MOD
00:58:379 (2) - CTR G, move next pattern a bit for DS
01:25:378 (1) - Maybe consider a NC here?
ADVANCED:
01:09:589 (5,6,1) - This looks very messy http://i.imgur.com/UOXqcgK.png try something like http://i.imgur.com/piA7JGy.png ?
01:19:694 (7) - CTR G?
01:25:378 - This doesn't feel like it should be a slider tail, instead of having a reverse arrow on 01:25:141 -, end this slider here, and put a note on 01:25:378 -
01:33:589 (1) - No reason for this to have a NC
01:52:378 (2) - Make similar shape as 01:51:904 (1) -
01:53:483 (1) - New Combo
01:54:431 (1) - Delete new combo, there's not even a strong beat or something that would make it be a different new combo.
Gonna stop here as the other diff are over my threshold, just one thing, the spread between the ADVANCED and EXTREME is massive.
These diff were cool, sorry if this wasn't helpful, an IMGUR link doesn't work or Copypaste timeline doesn't fit
Good luck!
M4M from your Q!
BASIC
00:19:694 (1,1) - This is really, REALLY confusing, I know you did put a "New Combo" here, but the chance of a newbie NOT missclicking here are very low, especially when 00:22:220 (1) - appears as soon as 00:19:694 (1) - fades out and can trick players into thinking the yellow is right next, in my opinion, you should CTR G 00:22:220 (1) - and re-arrange 00:24:115 (2,1) - , maybe a kinda sharp triangle like: http://i.imgur.com/Gj6mhnM.png
00:27:273 (1) - Just for flow, Curve this a little bit and try: http://i.imgur.com/og1fdhS.png
00:55:062 (1) - Try turning this by 6 clockwise and move 00:56:325 (2) - to x424 y128
01:38:957 (3,1) - Try http://i.imgur.com/pdPW7eA.png tho you would need to move 01:40:536 (2) - a small bit
Nice diff!
MEDIUM:
Gonna be honest, the DS of this diff is at times kinda all over the place, Aesthetic wise is "fine" and the patterns are also OK, but you should take a look at the DS for some parts where the song is not changing but somehow the DS is all over the place
00:07:063 (1) - Here it goes from 0.9 to 1.0 for no reason,
00:09:589 (1) - 0.9 then 1.0 on 00:10:221 (2) - , etc etc
Actually, one of the reason why I guess is like this is because of the Grid size, I would use just Small Grid and try to pay attention to these DS changes, and while yes, you might say "a change from 0.9 to 1.0 is not so noticeable", well, this is still a "normal", aiming for consistency is a good thing, also check AI MOD
00:58:379 (2) - CTR G, move next pattern a bit for DS
01:25:378 (1) - Maybe consider a NC here?
ADVANCED:
01:09:589 (5,6,1) - This looks very messy http://i.imgur.com/UOXqcgK.png try something like http://i.imgur.com/piA7JGy.png ?
01:19:694 (7) - CTR G?
01:25:378 - This doesn't feel like it should be a slider tail, instead of having a reverse arrow on 01:25:141 -, end this slider here, and put a note on 01:25:378 -
01:33:589 (1) - No reason for this to have a NC
01:52:378 (2) - Make similar shape as 01:51:904 (1) -
01:53:483 (1) - New Combo
01:54:431 (1) - Delete new combo, there's not even a strong beat or something that would make it be a different new combo.
Gonna stop here as the other diff are over my threshold, just one thing, the spread between the ADVANCED and EXTREME is massive.
These diff were cool, sorry if this wasn't helpful, an IMGUR link doesn't work or Copypaste timeline doesn't fit
Good luck!