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07th Expansion - Dread of the grave -More fear-

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Mukku

ShadowLord wrote:

[Mukku's Easy]

Wow <3 this diff

00:49:189 (x) - Hitcircle with clap sounds epic imo. uh, and doesn't look to bad if you place it like this Ooh, very nice.


01:13:804 (x) - hitcircle with clap again, to keep ^ in sync with above suggestion unsure about this one's placement =p but here is a suggestion. Done with my own placement.


01:20:343 (1) - I like the idea here, but try this.. is just a scaled version (50%) and added a few more way-points & "fits" (for the lack of a better word, dunno how to explain it in English) that particular part of the song, try it before you dish it at least. The slider might need a little more tweaking, but that's the best I could get it. (I'm bad at slider art D:) Tried it out. TBH I prefer the way it was. I think the look of your slider doesn't fit in with all the other sliders in this map very well.


Slider code:
SPOILER
360,300,80343,6,0,B|340:324|312:292|312:292|280:324|264:316|256:300|256:300|248:316|232:324|200:292|200:292|172:324|156:300,1,240,0|8

01:24:958 (3) - It seems like you trying to keep "it" easy, but I think you should repeat the slider once.. :O sounds soo much better. Sounds nice. Done.

01:41:881 (1) - For the following finish repeats, increase volume a little bit a time, for impact. Done.

02:21:496 (5) - whistle (the custom hitsound) on the first white tick too, listen to it at 75% speed then at 100% Done.

Yea, very very enjoyable easy.! and it looks sexy. Thank you so much :D
A very nice mod I say!

Download: 07th Expansion - Dread of the grave -More fear- (Lanttu) [Mukku's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
Lanttu
AAARGHHHGHDFADSFKL. Sorry guys it look me so long. ;_______; I've been busy with irl..

ShadowLord wrote:

[Normal]

00:56:881 (2) - hmhm yea, this should totally end on the white tick, sounds bad on blue. What, I think it sounds great. ;_; But arranged some stuff.
00:58:420 (2) - this fits the music :3
00:59:958 (2) - but this, and 00:56:881 (2) - sounds... wrong. White tick please orz. ;________;

Later in the beatmap, you have a few more of these, sure it might look cool, but it just sounds wrong and feels awkward to play. I'd highly recommend you try something else here.

- Personal Placement Suggestion: -feel free to ignore-
01:12:650 (1) - following the music, this pattern fits better, but this is my opinion I was trying to avoid 1-grid-overlay, but yeah, it looks better that way.

01:20:343 (1) - swop 2/3 places and fix the spacing/hitsounds of course (just follows the music better imo, as above, feel free to ignore) Ahh, I can't get it to fit. ;_;

[Normal] & [Insane] hitsound suggestions
SPOILER
[TimingPoints]
23420,384.615384615385,4,1,2,40,1,0
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25054,-100,4,1,2,40,0,0
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108708,-100,4,1,1,60,0,0
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109862,-100,4,1,1,75,0,0
110246,-100,4,1,1,80,0,0
110631,-100,4,1,1,85,0,0
111112,-100,4,1,1,75,0,1
113323,-100,4,1,1,57,0,1
113708,-100,4,1,1,67,0,1
114093,-100,4,1,1,83,0,1
114285,-100,4,1,1,75,0,1
116400,-100,4,1,1,57,0,1
116785,-100,4,1,1,67,0,1
117170,-100,4,1,1,85,0,1
117362,-100,4,1,1,75,0,1
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145631,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
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147939,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
162554,-100,4,2,1,80,0,0
162746,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
172650,-100,4,1,0,100,0,1
172843,-100,4,1,0,75,0,0
OK~

[Insane]

01:47:650 (1) - Please remember give this one a volume bump, if you decide to keep hitsound suggestions. Hee, I think it sounds good enough like this also.
orz

02:41:112 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - <3 this <3
Thank you and sorru again for being so late~ orz
Niva
Hya Lanttu :3
Saw this in #modReqs

[General]
-> "SB" in tags... As far as I know the osu! search bar won't search for 2 chars word, so maybe remove it?

[Insane]
-> OD-1 ?
00:48:035 (1,2,3) - I still think it looks weird in play mode. Manual stacking here by moving (2) and (3) few grids apart is better imo
00:58:420 (4) - The clap sounds weird imo, I think with lower volume it would be better
01:19:477 (2,3,4) - I found the app. circle color blends with the BG (at first thought I think it would be a slider here orz). Not a big problem though
01:33:420 (2) - imo, rather than a repeat slider, remove the repeat and add note at 01:33:804 and 01:33:996 better
02:01:112 (3) - CTRL+R here plays better imo because of the next (4). Not something you have to do though
02:19:093 (7) - Hard to guess the rhythm >< Combine this note with (6) to be a slider would be better imo
02:48:227 (7,8) - Tricky enough. I suggest to alter 02:47:650 (4,5,6,7,8) to a star-shaped jump

[theowest's Hard]

00:33:516 (4) - Make this into a 1/2 slider maybe? :3
00:42:650 (7) - I'd rather stack this to (5)'s end but it plays fine too this way xD
00:55:727 - Unused inherit section here, delete?
01:22:650 (7) - Add clap on repeat?
01:25:343 (7) - I think it's better to place clap on this slider's start rather than on the (6)'s end
01:38:996 - Unused inherit section here, delete?
02:21:496 (7) - You could try adding clap on the slider's end

[Normal]
00:29:766 (1) - I don't think 3/4 is friendly for a Normal here... (my intuition says it is 1/2 lol)
00:55:727 (1) - Weirdly touches the HP bar, but it plays fine
01:23:420 (1) - I'm sure this could be curved neater ><
01:55:727 (1) - Remove whistle from slider's start?

[Mukku's Easy]
00:24:958 (1) - You could set S-75% on the timing section and delete the inherit section here (:
00:48:035 (3) - Curve it a bit to the left? Would be more flowy imo
01:31:112 (2) - Convert this into 1/1 slider?
02:02:266 (3) - Add clap hitsound here?
02:28:035 - Drag break here?

Good luck Lanttu~
Hope my mod helps you again this time :3
Mukku

Nivalis wrote:

Hya Lanttu :3
Saw this in #modReqs

[Mukku's Easy]
00:24:958 (1) - You could set S-75% on the timing section and delete the inherit section here (: Done
00:48:035 (3) - Curve it a bit to the left? Would be more flowy imo
01:31:112 (2) - Convert this into 1/1 slider? Naww
02:02:266 (3) - Add clap hitsound here? No
02:28:035 - Drag break here? Done o/

Good luck Lanttu~
Hope my mod helps you again this time :3
THX

Download: 07th Expansion - Dread of the grave -More fear- (Lanttu) [Mukku's Easy].osu
Topic Starter
Lanttu

Nivalis wrote:

Hya Lanttu :3
Saw this in #modReqs

[General]
-> "SB" in tags... As far as I know the osu! search bar won't search for 2 chars word, so maybe remove it? hmm, ok. ;u;

[Insane]
-> OD-1 ? OK~
00:48:035 (1,2,3) - I still think it looks weird in play mode. Manual stacking here by moving (2) and (3) few grids apart is better imo Hee, I think it looks just fine. ;_;
00:58:420 (4) - The clap sounds weird imo, I think with lower volume it would be better Nah, I just removed the clap.
01:19:477 (2,3,4) - I found the app. circle color blends with the BG (at first thought I think it would be a slider here orz). Not a big problem though I'll try to ask for more opinions about that~
01:33:420 (2) - imo, rather than a repeat slider, remove the repeat and add note at 01:33:804 and 01:33:996 better Hmm, I made it a bit differently~
02:01:112 (3) - CTRL+R here plays better imo because of the next (4). Not something you have to do though omg, it sure plays alot better!
02:19:093 (7) - Hard to guess the rhythm >< Combine this note with (6) to be a slider would be better imo Hmm, ok then.. ;u;
02:48:227 (7,8) - Tricky enough. I suggest to alter 02:47:650 (4,5,6,7,8) to a star-shaped jump Hee, sure, why not~

[Normal]
00:29:766 (1) - I don't think 3/4 is friendly for a Normal here... (my intuition says it is 1/2 lol) But it's 1/2 isn't it? ;u;
00:55:727 (1) - Weirdly touches the HP bar, but it plays fine
01:23:420 (1) - I'm sure this could be curved neater >< I hope it's better~ ;u;
01:55:727 (1) - Remove whistle from slider's start? OK~
Thank you~ >u<
theowest

Niva wrote:

Hya Lanttu :3
Saw this in #modReqs


[theowest's Hard]

00:33:516 (4) - Make this into a 1/2 slider maybe? :3 WHAT? WHY
00:42:650 (7) - I'd rather stack this to (5)'s end but it plays fine too this way xD WHAT? WHY
00:55:727 - Unused inherit section here, delete? DOESN'T MATTER, BUT OK
01:22:650 (7) - Add clap on repeat? YES
01:25:343 (7) - I think it's better to place clap on this slider's start rather than on the (6)'s end YES
01:38:996 - Unused inherit section here, delete? DOESN'T MATTER, BUT OK
02:21:496 (7) - You could try adding clap on the slider's end DOESN'T MATTER, BUT OK

Good luck Lanttu~
Hope my mod helps you again this time :3
update
http://puu.sh/7JeC
Topic Starter
Lanttu
MODDERS Y U NO MOD MY MAP?
theowest
becuz they're racist.
heintsi
So mean. ;____;

//Oops, wrong account. *u*
Topic Starter
Lanttu
Graveyard is not fun.
NatsumeRin
[Mukku's Easy]
01:01:881 (1) - I hope you don't use sliders like this in the easiest diff... though it probably won't cause a combo break but anyway you know the reason.
02:01:881 (2) - whistle?
02:25:727 (1) - clap?
02:40:343 (1) - similar thing to 01:01:881 (1)

[Normal]
00:26:112 (3) - i don't really get the feeling of 3/4 sliders orz....
01:03:420 (1,2) - you could make the shap better i guess. http://puu.sh/cRSB
01:49:958 (2) - remove finish?
02:18:804 (1) - 3/4 in this part makes some sense to me at least... but in other parts sorry i still need to say i don't get it...

[theowest's Hard]
remove SB in the tags.
00:33:227 (3,4) - just saying, it plays not so fluent to me, maybe use a 1/4 triple+ 1/4 slider?
01:34:958 (6,7,1) - spacing is a bit ugly
01:57:843 (2) - whistle?
02:20:727 (5) - add sliderwhistle?

[Insane]
HP7 is a bit high imo, the song is really slow in some of the parts and HP drains faster than expected. if you want to keep scores, raise OD by 1.
00:43:323 - add a note?
01:34:093 - ^
01:37:266 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - consider about beats like this? http://puu.sh/cRTZ
01:56:112 (2) - miss a clap at the beginning
02:17:073 - add a note here and move 02:17:266 (1) 1/2 later?


Still not sure about the 3/4s. Since the map keeps untouched for 3 months or so, i'd prefer to see 2~3 new mods come to it before bubble or anything, leave a star here first.
theowest

NatsumeRin wrote:

[theowest's Hard]
remove SB in the tags. ok :v
00:33:227 (3,4) - just saying, it plays not so fluent to me, maybe use a 1/4 triple+ 1/4 slider? sure
01:34:958 (6,7,1) - spacing is a bit ugly fix'd
01:57:843 (2) - whistle? ok, sure.
02:20:727 (5) - add sliderwhistle? that's cool i guess.
my diff is so damn old. dayum

here's the update http://puu.sh/cSuw
Topic Starter
Lanttu

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Normal]
00:26:112 (3) - i don't really get the feeling of 3/4 sliders orz.... I'd really rather not make it just 1/1 sliders, but I guess I have to. OTL
01:03:420 (1,2) - you could make the shap better i guess. http://puu.sh/cRSB ok~
01:49:958 (2) - remove finish? ok
02:18:804 (1) - 3/4 in this part makes some sense to me at least... but in other parts sorry i still need to say i don't get it... changed. ;u;


[Insane]
HP7 is a bit high imo, the song is really slow in some of the parts and HP drains faster than expected. if you want to keep scores, raise OD by 1. OK~
00:43:323 - add a note? Ooh, sure thing.
01:34:093 - ^ ok~
01:37:266 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - consider about beats like this? http://puu.sh/cRTZ Hmm, I think I like it more the way it is.
01:56:112 (2) - miss a clap at the beginning oops
02:17:073 - add a note here and move 02:17:266 (1) 1/2 later? ok~
Thank you<3 ;u;

Theowest; this whole mapset is getting so old w~
Mukku

NatsumeRin wrote:

[Mukku's Easy]
01:01:881 (1) - I hope you don't use sliders like this in the easiest diff... though it probably won't cause a combo break but anyway you know the reason. WHAT. NO. WHAT? ASD. No wait.. What?
02:01:881 (2) - whistle? Sounds cool. Added
02:25:727 (1) - clap? Makes sense. Sounds better. Added
02:40:343 (1) - similar thing to 01:01:881 (1) I BELIEVE IN THE POWER OF THE NEWBIES THAT ARE ABOUT TO PLAY THIS DIFFICULTY! MY TRUST IS WHOLE-HEARTED AND PURE!! THEY CAN DO IT, YES WE CAN, YES WE CAN!
Thanks :>

Download: 07th Expansion - Dread of the grave -More fear- (Lanttu) [Mukku's Easy].osu
Garven
Did some IRC modding on Lanttu's diffs. Mostly just slider nazi stuff and to add a reverse arrow to skin and add sliderborder colors to .osus

[Mukku]
00:49:573 - Extend break to here

01:32:650 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Kinda boring
02:40:343 (1) - It's really obvious when you reuse a slider like this. Especially when it's in the exact same position. :/
Also, you really should try using more of the play field. You stuck to the center way too much.

[theodore]
Remove SB from tags
00:27:073 (1) - I really don't like how you don't stick with a certain amount of repeats on these short sliders. It makes the player guess at how many there will be instead of just intuiting it and enjoying the map.
01:38:804 (1,1,1,1,2) - Really weird alignment of these notes.
theowest

Garven wrote:

[theodore] theodor
Remove SB from tags lol why is that even in the tags
00:27:073 (1) - I really don't like how you don't stick with a certain amount of repeats on these short sliders. It makes the player guess at how many there will be instead of just intuiting it and enjoying the map. Ok, ok. Yeah, fix'd.
01:38:804 (1,1,1,1,2) - Really weird alignment of these notes. I hope this is better.
http://puu.sh/dHx8 update
omg so old. why i not remap. oh yea, lazy. and that would require more mods n shit.
Mukku

Garven wrote:

Did some IRC modding on Lanttu's diffs. Mostly just slider nazi stuff and to add a reverse arrow to skin and add sliderborder colors to .osus

[Mukku]
00:49:573 - Extend break to here Done

01:32:650 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - Kinda boring Altered
02:40:343 (1) - It's really obvious when you reuse a slider like this. Especially when it's in the exact same position. :/ Wut.
Also, you really should try using more of the play field. You stuck to the center way too much. Selecting all the notes doesn't actually show all the sliders for some reason. There are notes beyond the ones that are visible in your screenshot, just to be clear. I wouldn't remap this anyways either way :D
Download: 07th Expansion - Dread of the grave -More fear- (Lanttu) [Mukku's Easy].osu
Garven
[Mukku]
The copy/paste slider commentary was a general statement against really blatant copy/paste, hehe. Try to make it less obvious next time~

And the select all notes thing is still a general illustration of the placement of most of the notes. If you scroll through your map, there aren't many (if any) notes at all placed in the edges or corners of the play field. The map in general just felt cramped and set in the center for the most part.

Anyway, things are looking good now. Bubbled!
narakucrimson
To be honest, I was a little concerned by the kick sliders in [Normal] (if they can be considered as that), but I ended up thinking that they are ok~

Anyway, very cool mapset and a great job, as always.

Here you go~
Faust
Oh finally.

Congratulations.
ryuu
congratulations,lanttu >w</
Topic Starter
Lanttu
Thankyun~<3 \;u;/

/me does a happy-dance around the room
Natsume
Congrats, Lanttu-san! :)
UnderminE
Yes... YES! Finally! Gratz Lanttu <3
Haruhi_sama
Congratulations.
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