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7!! - Sayonara Memory ("NARUTO SHIPPUDEN" Ending Ver.) [OsuM

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Topic Starter
- Ly0572 -
UPDATED
eyes
left side - left hand - 1st and 2nd columns
right side - right hand - 3rd and 4th columns
Tailsdk
1|2|3|4

Ed's MX
00:01:561 - remove 1 note because there is only 3 notes at other sounds like this one
00:20:705 (20705|2) - remove this note there is no sound here
00:30:968 - add note as in all other places
00:33:139 (33139|3,33139|0,33139|2,33337|3,33337|0,33337|2,33534|2,33534|3,33534|0) - change to doubles and not triples as in all other parts
00:34:521 - add 1 note as in all other sounds like this
00:35:508 - ^
00:37:679 - add 1 note
00:37:679 (37679|1) - make this ln countinue until 00:38:271 - and move 00:38:271 (38271|1) -
00:38:666 - add 1 note
00:39:258 - add 1 note because hard sound
00:36:100 - ^
00:40:639 (40639|0) - make this a very short ln
00:40:837 - add 1 note
00:42:218 (42218|0) - remove note
00:42:416 - add 2 notes
00:43:995 - add 1 note
00:44:982 - add 1 note
00:46:462 - add note at 3
00:50:310 (50310|1) - remove note
00:53:271 - remove 1 note
00:53:468 - ^
00:54:850 - add 1 note
00:55:047 - add 1 note
00:57:021 (57021|2) - remove note
00:59:192 - remove 1 note
01:01:264 (61264|3) - remove this note
01:09:850 - remove 1 note
01:10:639 - remove 1 note
01:11:429 - remove 1 note
01:12:218 - remove 1 note
01:12:810 (72810|1) - remove this note
01:15:771 - remove 1 note
01:17:350 - remove 1 note
01:18:534 - remove 1 note
01:18:929 - remove 1 note
01:19:324 - remove 1 note
01:20:113 - ^
01:20:705 (80705|3,80705|2,80705|0,80903|0,80903|3,80903|2,81100|0,81100|3,81100|2,81297|3,81297|2,81297|0,81495|3,81495|2,81495|0,81692|3,81692|2,81692|0) - make these doubles
no kodus if the mod was not usefull
Cokii-
NM for our queue no kds if it didn't help

HD
00:24:060 (24060|3) - you mapped those as triples but i guess it's for play ability
00:34:521 (34521|3) - add a note
00:37:679 (37679|2) - ^
00:38:666 (38666|2) - ^
00:40:245 (40245|3) - ^
00:40:837 (40837|3) - ^
00:47:745 (47745|3) - ^
00:49:324 (49324|1) - ^
00:51:495 (51495|0) - delete a note
00:51:692 (51692|3) - add a note
01:07:876 (67876|2) - delete a note
01:09:455 (69455|3) - ^
01:11:034 (71034|2) - ^
01:12:613 (72613|0) - ^
01:14:192 (74192|3) - ^
01:17:350 (77350|2) - ^
01:18:929 (78929|3) - ^
01:20:508 (80508|3) - add a note
01:22:087 (82087|2) - delete a note

Ed's MX
00:28:403 (28403|0,28403|1,28403|3) - - this is the same sound as 00:28:205 (28205|2,28205|1) - delete one note
00:29:982 (29982|2) - ^
00:36:100 (36100|2) - add a note
00:46:462 (46462|2) - add a note
00:46:659 (46659|3) - ^
00:47:251 (47251|3) - add a note and move 00:47:153 (47153|1) - to C0
00:48:830 (48830|2) - add a note
00:51:988 (51988|2) - add a note and move to C0 00:51:889 (51889|1) -
00:54:307 (54307|1) - add a note at 1/8
00:54:850 (54850|2) - add a note
00:55:047 (55047|2) - ^
01:08:863 (68863|1) - consider deleting a note
01:11:824 (71824|3) - add a note you mapped those as triples in this section
01:16:560 (76560|3) - ^
01:18:139 (78139|3) - ^
01:19:718 (79718|0) - ^

well idk if this mod will help and no mods for EZ and NM because I still can't map diffs like that xD

good luck with your map
Topic Starter
- Ly0572 -

Cokiiplay wrote:

NM for our queue no kds if it didn't help

HD
00:24:060 (24060|3) - you mapped those as triples but i guess it's for play ability
00:34:521 (34521|3) - add a note
00:37:679 (37679|2) - ^
00:38:666 (38666|2) - ^
00:40:245 (40245|3) - ^
00:40:837 (40837|3) - ^
00:47:745 (47745|3) - ^
00:49:324 (49324|1) - ^
00:51:495 (51495|0) - delete a note
00:51:692 (51692|3) - add a note
01:07:876 (67876|2) - delete a note
01:09:455 (69455|3) - ^
01:11:034 (71034|2) - ^
01:12:613 (72613|0) - ^
01:14:192 (74192|3) - ^
01:17:350 (77350|2) - ^
01:18:929 (78929|3) - ^
01:20:508 (80508|3) - add a note
01:22:087 (82087|2) - delete a note

well idk if this mod will help and no mods for EZ and NM because I still can't map diffs like that xD

good luck with your map
nyaa thanks for the star cokii~ applied most of your suggestions 8-)
HD UPDATED
waiting for Ed's update :3
_Stan
Hey~ I‘m coming and here we go

|1|2|3|4|

EZ
  1. 00:04:718 (4718|0,4718|1) - I suggest you can move these two notes to [3] [4], cuz then, you can continue keep same direction, like 00:03:139 - or 00:06:297 - , then in order to avoid jack, you can move 00:04:521 (4521|2) - to [2], just like 00:09:258 (9258|1,9455|2,9455|3) - you did after
  2. 00:26:824 (26824|2) - I suggest you move this to [4], cuz it's can same with here 00:21:297 (21297|0,21495|2,21889|1,22087|3) -
  3. 00:28:403 (28403|1) - I suggest you move this to [1], be symmetrical with 00:24:455 (24455|3,24653|0,25047|2,25245|1) -
  4. 00:46:166 - I do not understand why you doubled here
  5. 01:09:455 (69455|2) - I suggest you move this to [2], then you can avoid triple-hit 01:08:666 (68666|2,70245|2) -
NM
  1. 00:36:297 - I suggest you should doubled here, cuz you did doubled here 00:33:139 -
  2. 00:39:455 - 00:42:613 - the same
  3. 00:46:166 - I do not understand why you doubled here
  4. 01:22:087 (82087|2) - You can move this to [2], for better parttern
HD
  1. 00:29:784 (29784|0,29982|0) - I suggest move these two notes to [4], cuz from 00:29:587 - to 00:30:376 - , Col [3,4] is too blank
  2. 01:11:034 - I suggest you add a note here, cuz 01:09:455 - You make 2 notes + 1LN, but they are absolutely same music and rhythm, right?
  3. 01:22:087 (82087|2) - You can move this to [2], for better parttern
Ed's MX
  1. 00:42:613 - I think you wanna make a doubled notes stair here but the LN 00:42:218 (42218|2) - block the way, so I suggest move LN to [2], move this 00:42:613 (42613|1) - to [3] to make it

So great map and I like MX diff, Good Luck and go for rank it~ :)
Topic Starter
- Ly0572 -

_Stan wrote:

Hey~ I‘m coming and here we go

|1|2|3|4|

EZ
  1. 00:04:718 (4718|0,4718|1) - I suggest you can move these two notes to [3] [4], cuz then, you can continue keep same direction, like 00:03:139 - or 00:06:297 - , then in order to avoid jack, you can move 00:04:521 (4521|2) - to [2], just like 00:09:258 (9258|1,9455|2,9455|3) - you did after
  2. 00:26:824 (26824|2) - I suggest you move this to [4], cuz it's can same with here 00:21:297 (21297|0,21495|2,21889|1,22087|3) -
  3. 00:28:403 (28403|1) - I suggest you move this to [1], be symmetrical with 00:24:455 (24455|3,24653|0,25047|2,25245|1) -
  4. 00:46:166 - I do not understand why you doubled here
  5. 01:09:455 (69455|2) - I suggest you move this to [2], then you can avoid triple-hit 01:08:666 (68666|2,70245|2) -
NM
  1. 00:36:297 - I suggest you should doubled here, cuz you did doubled here 00:33:139 -
  2. 00:39:455 - 00:42:613 - the same
  3. 00:46:166 - I do not understand why you doubled here
  4. 01:22:087 (82087|2) - You can move this to [2], for better parttern
HD
  1. 00:29:784 (29784|0,29982|0) - I suggest move these two notes to [4], cuz from 00:29:587 - to 00:30:376 - , Col [3,4] is too blank keep
  2. 01:11:034 - I suggest you add a note here, cuz 01:09:455 - You make 2 notes + 1LN, but they are absolutely same music and rhythm, right? nope i dunt think so hehe i hear loud cymbal compared to the others so i doubled it :)
  3. 01:22:087 (82087|2) - You can move this to [2], for better parttern

So great map and I like MX diff, Good Luck and go for rank it~ :) thank you so much~

UPDATED
EFP

tailsdk wrote:

1|2|3|4

Ed's MX
00:01:561 - remove 1 note because there is only 3 notes at other sounds like this one
00:20:705 (20705|2) - remove this note there is no sound here
00:30:968 - add note as in all other places
00:33:139 (33139|3,33139|0,33139|2,33337|3,33337|0,33337|2,33534|2,33534|3,33534|0) - change to doubles and not triples as in all other parts
00:34:521 - add 1 note as in all other sounds like this
00:35:508 - ^
00:37:679 - add 1 note
00:37:679 (37679|1) - make this ln countinue until 00:38:271 - and move 00:38:271 (38271|1) -
00:38:666 - add 1 note
00:39:258 - add 1 note because hard sound
00:36:100 - ^
00:40:639 (40639|0) - make this a very short ln
00:40:837 - add 1 note
00:42:218 (42218|0) - remove note
00:42:416 - add 2 notes
00:43:995 - add 1 note
00:44:982 - add 1 note
00:46:462 - add note at 3
00:50:310 (50310|1) - remove note
00:53:271 - remove 1 note
00:53:468 - ^
00:54:850 - add 1 note
00:55:047 - add 1 note
00:57:021 (57021|2) - remove note
00:59:192 - remove 1 note
01:01:264 (61264|3) - remove this note
01:09:850 - remove 1 note
01:10:639 - remove 1 note
01:11:429 - remove 1 note
01:12:218 - remove 1 note
01:12:810 (72810|1) - remove this note
01:15:771 - remove 1 note
01:17:350 - remove 1 note
01:18:534 - remove 1 note
01:18:929 - remove 1 note
01:19:324 - remove 1 note
01:20:113 - ^
01:20:705 (80705|3,80705|2,80705|0,80903|0,80903|3,80903|2,81100|0,81100|3,81100|2,81297|3,81297|2,81297|0,81495|3,81495|2,81495|0,81692|3,81692|2,81692|0) - make these doubles
no kodus if the mod was not usefull
thanks that so helpful

Cokiiplay wrote:

NM for our queue no kds if it didn't help
Ed's MX
00:28:403 (28403|0,28403|1,28403|3) - - this is the same sound as 00:28:205 (28205|2,28205|1) - delete one note
00:29:982 (29982|2) - ^
00:36:100 (36100|2) - add a note
00:46:462 (46462|2) - add a note
00:46:659 (46659|3) - ^
00:47:251 (47251|3) - add a note and move 00:47:153 (47153|1) - to C0
00:48:830 (48830|2) - add a note
00:51:988 (51988|2) - add a note and move to C0 00:51:889 (51889|1) -
00:54:307 (54307|1) - add a note at 1/8
00:54:850 (54850|2) - add a note
00:55:047 (55047|2) - ^
01:08:863 (68863|1) - consider deleting a note
01:11:824 (71824|3) - add a note you mapped those as triples in this section
01:16:560 (76560|3) - ^
01:18:139 (78139|3) - ^
01:19:718 (79718|0) - ^

well idk if this mod will help and no mods for EZ and NM because I still can't map diffs like that xD

good luck with your map
thanks cokii~

_Stan wrote:

Hey~ I‘m coming and here we go

|1|2|3|4|

Ed's MX
  1. 00:42:613 - I think you wanna make a doubled notes stair here but the LN 00:42:218 (42218|2) - block the way, so I suggest move LN to [2], move this 00:42:613 (42613|1) - to [3] to make it
So great map and I like MX diff, Good Luck and go for rank it~ :)
thanks stan :)


sorry i forgot to mark mod that i've accepted or rejected my bad, but yeah.
those mods are helpful, and you guys maybe can do another check later and see what i've changed :D
thanks~

here you go
http://puu.sh/sa63b/3a404719c9.osu
Topic Starter
- Ly0572 -
Ayt UPDATED
Drum-Hitnormal
hitsound done

http://puu.sh/sbo4I/4bf7d8bab5.zip

I updated my hitsound copy program:
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5392330
Topic Starter
- Ly0572 -

dudehacker wrote:

hitsound done

http://puu.sh/sbo4I/4bf7d8bab5.zip

I updated my hitsound copy program:
https://osu.ppy.sh/forum/p/5392330
cool :D thanks
Syadow-
NM from me >w<)b ay ay
Ly0
[NM]
00:07:482 (7482|2,7580|1,7679|0,7778|1) - make it to roll pattern ( 4 3 2 1 )
wew nice >w<)b
[HD]
00:28:797 - try like this for more playable http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6527053 n 00:30:376 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6527058
00:39:258 (39258|2,39455|1,39653|1,39850|1) - swap col for balance
00:46:659 (46659|3) - remove this
00:54:850 (54850|0,54850|1,55047|3,55047|2) - actually this notes are in same pitch
EFP
[MX]
00:07:087 (7087|3) - ganggu banget LNnya mending ganti ke note biasa
00:07:876 - kalo di acc ^ add note buat cymbal
00:11:232 (11232|2) - move ke col 1 biar balance imo
00:13:797 (13797|2,14192|1) - tuker tempat, rada aneh gitu n ke col 3
00:25:047 (25047|1,25245|1,25837|1,26034|1,26626|1,27021|1,27218|1) - re arrange lagi, byk yg numpuk
00:32:547 - double here
00:44:587 - cymbal add note
00:44:982 - sama kek 00:43:995 -
00:55:245 - only ET can do this with pefect :V lol
01:05:508 (65508|0,65705|0,65903|0,66692|0,66889|0,67087|0) - susah ini mah ;w;
Good Luck ly0 n efp >w<)b
Topic Starter
- Ly0572 -

Syadow- wrote:

NM from me >w<)b ay ay 8-)
Ly0
[NM]
00:07:482 (7482|2,7580|1,7679|0,7778|1) - make it to roll pattern ( 4 3 2 1 ) oki :3
wew nice >w<)b hoho <3
[HD]
00:28:797 - try like this for more playable http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6527053 n 00:30:376 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6527058 rearrange
00:39:258 (39258|2,39455|1,39653|1,39850|1) - swap col for balance oh nice
00:46:659 (46659|3) - remove this oki
00:54:850 (54850|0,54850|1,55047|3,55047|2) - actually this notes are in same pitch ayy rearrange xD
Good Luck ly0 n efp >w<)b thank you nya~
[ NumLock ]
Hi - Ly0572 - :D

column 1|2|3|4


HD
00:26:824 (26824|3) - Move to column 3
00:28:205 (28205|1) - >
00:29:784 (29784|0) - >
00:31:560 (31560|3) - <

Good Luck - Ly0572 - :D
[ NumLock ]

Syadow- wrote:

NM from me >w<)b ay ay
Ly0
[NM]
00:07:482 (7482|2,7580|1,7679|0,7778|1) - make it to roll pattern ( 4 3 2 1 )
wew nice >w<)b
[HD]
00:28:797 - try like this for more playable http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6527053 n 00:30:376 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6527058
00:39:258 (39258|2,39455|1,39653|1,39850|1) - swap col for balance
00:46:659 (46659|3) - remove this
00:54:850 (54850|0,54850|1,55047|3,55047|2) - actually this notes are in same pitch
EFP
[MX]
00:07:087 (7087|3) - ganggu banget LNnya mending ganti ke note biasa
00:07:876 - kalo di acc ^ add note buat cymbal
00:11:232 (11232|2) - move ke col 1 biar balance imo
00:13:797 (13797|2,14192|1) - tuker tempat, rada aneh gitu n ke col 3
00:25:047 (25047|1,25245|1,25837|1,26034|1,26626|1,27021|1,27218|1) - re arrange lagi, byk yg numpuk
00:32:547 - double here
00:44:587 - cymbal add note
00:44:982 - sama kek 00:43:995 -
00:55:245 - only ET can do this with pefect :V lol
01:05:508 (65508|0,65705|0,65903|0,66692|0,66889|0,67087|0) - susah ini mah ;w;
Good Luck ly0 n efp >w<)b

:v gara2 ditikung ni sama syadow- dikit gua dapet :3
Topic Starter
- Ly0572 -

[ NumLock ] wrote:

Hi - Ly0572 - :D

column 1|2|3|4


HD
00:26:824 (26824|3) - Move to column 3 00:28:205 (28205|1) - >
00:29:784 (29784|0) - >
00:31:560 (31560|3) - < im sorry i have to reject cuz its all intended :)
still thanks for checking my map

Good Luck - Ly0572 - :D
Gravey-

Background
Timing
Song Setup
Metadata
- - Misc. . .
EZ OD 6.5 HP 6.5
NM OD 7 HP 7
HD OD 7.5 HP 7.5
MX OD 8 HP 8
|1|2|3|4|
With regards to the hit-sounds it seems like it needs more refinement and fixes. I ignored the hit-sounds for now lol i just saw the hit-sounds per diff and as i can see they are all different to each other.
[EZ]
00:10:639 (10639|2) - Add 'LR_Tom Hit Z'

00:17:350 (17350|2) - Move to |2| then 00:17:745 (17745|0) - Move to |3| for better transition and consistency

00:22:087 (22087|2) - Move to |4| then 00:22:482 (22482|3) - Move to |1| then 00:22:876 (22876|2) - Move to |4| for better consistency and relax-able pattern

01:22:087 (82087|0) - I think what you followed to end this is the vocal, i highly suggest to end this either 01:25:245 or 01:26:824 Guitar pitch ended/changes.

[NM]
00:11:232 (11232|3,11626|1) - Move to the left by 1 column for better notes transition and pattern.

00:34:521 (34521|1,34916|0) - Move the LN to |1| then the end SN to |2| (Alternate place the notes) for better hand coordinated pattern.

01:22:087 (82087|0) - I think what you followed to end this is the vocal, i highly suggest to end this either 01:25:245 or 01:26:824 Guitar pitch ended/changes.

[HD]
01:22:087 (82087|0) - I think what you followed to end this is the vocal, i highly suggest to end this either 01:25:245 or 01:26:824 Guitar pitch ended/changes.

[Ed's MX]
00:01:561 (1561|1) - Move to |4| instead. It's better to start with a balanced start (Left - Right hands)

01:22:087 (82087|2,82087|3) - I think what you followed to end this is the vocal, i highly suggest to end the LN at |3| in 01:25:245 then 01:22:087 (82087|3) - End it here 01:26:824 The guitar pitch ended here/changes.

Nice map! Good luck! >w<)b
EFP

Syadow- wrote:

NM from me >w<)b ay ay
EFP
[MX]
00:07:087 (7087|3) - ganggu banget LNnya mending ganti ke note biasa oke
00:07:876 - kalo di acc ^ add note buat cymbal ^
00:11:232 (11232|2) - move ke col 1 biar balance imo ^
00:13:797 (13797|2,14192|1) - tuker tempat, rada aneh gitu n ke col 3
00:25:047 (25047|1,25245|1,25837|1,26034|1,26626|1,27021|1,27218|1) - re arrange lagi, byk yg numpuk fixed
00:32:547 - double here added
00:44:587 - cymbal add note ^
00:44:982 - sama kek 00:43:995 - fixed
00:55:245 - only ET can do this with pefect :V lol lol
01:05:508 (65508|0,65705|0,65903|0,66692|0,66889|0,67087|0) - susah ini mah ;w; diubah dikit
Good Luck ly0 n efp >w<)b
terimakasih Syadow~
updated
http://puu.sh/sebuM/37eb921b35.osu
Topic Starter
- Ly0572 -
UPDATED
Topic Starter
- Ly0572 -

Gravey- wrote:


Background
Timing
Song Setup
Metadata
- - Misc. . .
EZ OD 6.5 HP 6.5
NM OD 7 HP 7
HD OD 7.5 HP 7.5
MX OD 8 HP 8
|1|2|3|4|
With regards to the hit-sounds it seems like it needs more refinement and fixes. I ignored the hit-sounds for now lol i just saw the hit-sounds per diff and as i can see they are all different to each other.
[EZ]
00:10:639 (10639|2) - Add 'LR_Tom Hit Z'

00:17:350 (17350|2) - Move to |2| then 00:17:745 (17745|0) - Move to |3| for better transition and consistency

00:22:087 (22087|2) - Move to |4| then 00:22:482 (22482|3) - Move to |1| then 00:22:876 (22876|2) - Move to |4| for better consistency and relax-able pattern

01:22:087 (82087|0) - I think what you followed to end this is the vocal, i highly suggest to end this either 01:25:245 or 01:26:824 Guitar pitch ended/changes.

[NM]
00:11:232 (11232|3,11626|1) - Move to the left by 1 column for better notes transition and pattern.

00:34:521 (34521|1,34916|0) - Move the LN to |1| then the end SN to |2| (Alternate place the notes) for better hand coordinated pattern.

01:22:087 (82087|0) - I think what you followed to end this is the vocal, i highly suggest to end this either 01:25:245 or 01:26:824 Guitar pitch ended/changes.

[HD]
01:22:087 (82087|0) - I think what you followed to end this is the vocal, i highly suggest to end this either 01:25:245 or 01:26:824 Guitar pitch ended/changes.


Nice map! Good luck! >w<)b
aaa thank you gravey~ applied all
EZ NM HD UPDATED
currently fixing le hs
Amiichii
Hello o/

From O!M 4K Newbie Queue

4K=1~4

mod
  • [EZ]
  1. 00:02:745 (2745|1,3732|0,4521|1,5903|0,6692|1,7087|0,8468|1,8863|0,9258|1,9850|1,10245|0,10442|1) - hmmm. unbalanced. suggest :
    00:02:745 (2745|1,3139|3,3139|2) - ctrl + H then move 1 colomn to right
    00:04:718 (4718|2) - to 1
    00:06:297 (6297|2,6692|1) - Ctrl + H
    00:08:863 (8863|0,9455|2) - swap colomn
    00:09:850 (9850|1) - to 3
  2. 00:14:587 (14587|1) - delete. since after it, you only use 1 note for clap sound
  3. 00:46:955 (46955|3) - move to 1 for variation
  4. 00:48:337 (48337|1) - to 1
  5. 00:48:534 (48534|0) - to 4
  6. 00:48:929 (48929|2,49324|0) - to 1 and 2
  7. 00:53:468 - add note for cymbal?
  8. 01:10:245 (70245|2,70639|3,71429|0,71824|1,72218|2,73008|1,73403|2,73797|3) - to much stairs like this. it make kinda boring. maybe try this?
    https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6552541
  9. 01:19:718 (79718|2) - to 4
  10. 01:20:113 (80113|3) - to 1

    [NM]
  11. 00:50:409 (50409|1,50508|0,50903|3) - to 1 4 3?
  12. 00:51:988 (51988|2) - to 4
  13. 00:54:455 (54455|0,54653|1,54850|2,55047|0) - to 2 3 1 3?
  14. 00:57:218 - 00:58:797 - 01:00:771 - 01:01:955 - 01:02:745 - 01:03:534 - 01:05:113 - 01:06:692 - 01:08:271 - etc. add note each clap sound? for consistency with 00:58:008 (58008|3,58008|0) - 00:59:587 (59587|1,59587|0) - etc
  15. 01:08:666 (68666|1) - delete? just kick

    [HD]
  16. 00:14:982 - 00:16:560 - 00:18:139 - 00:19:718 - 00:20:014 - etc. add note?
  17. 00:46:363 (46363|1) - delete? no kick and avoid this 00:46:363 (46363|1,46560|1,46758|1) -
  18. 00:47:153 (47153|1,47251|0) - to 1 and 4?
  19. 00:47:942 (47942|3,48041|2,48139|1) - to 3 2 3?
  20. 00:54:258 (54258|2,54653|0) - move to right 1 colomn
  21. 00:55:047 (55047|2) - to 1? then delete 00:55:245 (55245|0,55442|3,55639|1,55837|2) - ? no kick there and calm sound tho.
  22. 00:57:514 - 00:59:093 - 01:00:672 - 01:02:251 - 01:02:547 - 01:03:830 - 01:05:409 - 01:06:495 - 01:06:988 - 01:08:567 - etc. missing note. you can reference from MX diff
  23. 01:19:817 (79817|2,79817|0) - wrong placement? should be double at here 01:19:718 -

    [MX]
  24. 00:13:797 - add note. consistency with before.
  25. 00:26:429 - missing note
  26. 00:33:337 (33337|2,33337|0,33337|3,33534|0,33534|3,33534|2) - ctrl + H? since the sound note same with 00:33:139 (33139|3,33139|0,33139|2) -
  27. 00:35:705 (35705|0,35903|1) - delete. no kick sound. and calm sound tho
  28. 00:38:863 (38863|3,39060|2) - delete. same as before
  29. 00:42:218 (42218|1) - delete. same as before
  30. 00:48:337 (48337|3) - move to 1?
  31. 00:48:337 (48337|3) - 00:48:337 (48337|3) - missing note

Goodluck. Have a nice day :)
Topic Starter
- Ly0572 -
thanks for the mod amii~
applied most of it :)
EZ NM and HD UPDATED
Another Lie
Mod req from PM & Queue
Sorry for this late reply & i haven't save our chatlog at sunday
EZ
00:46:166 (46166|2) - maybe move it at 4th?
00:55:245 - add LN until 00:56:034 - , that will be better since NM already have much note after this part
NM
00:02:745 (2745|3) - move to 3rd / 2nd? because this sound isn't really loud enough
00:03:139 (3139|2) - move to 4th? following the double note before
00:04:126 - 00:04:718 - maybe like this, this is just suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6567919
00:07:087 (7087|3,7284|2,7482|1,7679|0) - i would prefer this part using LN, since there are particulary HD diff.
00:13:797 (13797|1) - keep at 1st column
00:14:192 (14192|0) - for pitch relevancy, maybe this note will suits good enough at 3rd column
00:14:587 (14587|2) - ^ 1st column
00:14:883 - add note, since you're adding this 00:18:041 (18041|2) -
00:16:462 - add note ^
00:32:547 - add mini LN there, like HD
00:55:245 - maybe like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6567984
Mod ends here. If you want some SV at HD diff, tell me :D
Topic Starter
- Ly0572 -

Another Lie wrote:

Mod req from PM & Queue
Sorry for this late reply & i haven't save our chatlog at sunday its ok :)
EZ
00:46:166 (46166|2) - maybe move it at 4th? rearranged
00:55:245 - add LN until 00:56:034 - , that will be better since NM already have much note after this part
NM
00:02:745 (2745|3) - move to 3rd / 2nd? because this sound isn't really loud enough rearranged
00:03:139 (3139|2) - move to 4th? following the double note before
00:04:126 - 00:04:718 - maybe like this, this is just suggestion https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6567919
00:07:087 (7087|3,7284|2,7482|1,7679|0) - i would prefer this part using LN, since there are particulary HD diff.
00:13:797 (13797|1) - keep at 1st column ye youre right
00:14:192 (14192|0) - for pitch relevancy, maybe this note will suits good enough at 3rd column
00:14:587 (14587|2) - ^ 1st column
00:14:883 - add note, since you're adding this 00:18:041 (18041|2) -
00:16:462 - add note ^
00:32:547 - add mini LN there, like HD
00:55:245 - maybe like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6567984
Mod ends here. If you want some SV at HD diff, tell me :D
thank u anlie ~
EFP

Gravey- wrote:


Background
Timing
Song Setup
Metadata
- - Misc. . .
EZ OD 6.5 HP 6.5
NM OD 7 HP 7
HD OD 7.5 HP 7.5
MX OD 8 HP 8
|1|2|3|4|
With regards to the hit-sounds it seems like it needs more refinement and fixes. I ignored the hit-sounds for now lol i just saw the hit-sounds per diff and as i can see they are all different to each other.


[Ed's MX]
00:01:561 (1561|1) - Move to |4| instead. It's better to start with a balanced start (Left - Right hands) okey

01:22:087 (82087|2,82087|3) - I think what you followed to end this is the vocal, i highly suggest to end the LN at |3| in 01:25:245 then 01:22:087 (82087|3) - End it here 01:26:824 The guitar pitch ended here/changes. nice

Nice map! Good luck! >w<)b
thanks Gravey~

Amiichii wrote:

Hello o/

From O!M 4K Newbie Queue

4K=1~4

mod

  • [MX]
  1. 00:13:797 - add note. consistency with before. added
  2. 00:26:429 - missing note ngikut gitar juga biar ada break bentar
  3. 00:33:337 (33337|2,33337|0,33337|3,33534|0,33534|3,33534|2) - ctrl + H? since the sound note same with 00:33:139 (33139|3,33139|0,33139|2) -
  4. 00:35:705 (35705|0,35903|1) - delete. no kick sound. and calm sound tho okey
  5. 00:38:863 (38863|3,39060|2) - delete. same as before okey
  6. 00:42:218 (42218|1) - delete. same as before okey
  7. 00:48:337 (48337|3) - move to 1?
  8. 00:48:337 (48337|3) - 00:48:337 (48337|3) - missing note missing timming link?

Goodluck. Have a nice day :)
thanks Amii~
updated
http://puu.sh/siN9c/1172788c33.osu
Damaree
Haarooooo(lol) punta here to prioritize ly0-senseii maps. . .
nuu more irc, i crie meni :roll: :roll: :roll:


NO KDS pag di nakatulong(translated: if it doesn't help at all
HD
SPOILER
magtatagalog na ako, pain in da ass mag english :p :p * teeheeee*
00:06:692 - 00:08:468 - 00:09:850 - consider double?
00:27:613 - 00:28:205 - 00:29:192 - 00:29:784 - 00:31:363 - 00:30:771 - add another note, the second intro part
00:33:337 - 00:33:534 - erm bat double? pede single? either way, parehong fit sa song depende puu sau
00:50:508 (50508|2) - mov sa col1? 00:50:705 (50705|0) - sa col3? kaw na bahala sa conflict dito na part 00:50:903 (50903|1,50903|2) - pero di naman gaano.
00:52:778 (52778|3) - mov sa col3?
01:20:508 - ermm single nalang?
01:21:889 - pede add note vocal :D
01:22:087 (82087|1) - kung approve to -->01:21:889 - then mov col3
01:25:245 - to 01:29:982 - di mu imamap? sayang sounds lol hahaha 8-) 8-) 8-)

Ed's MX
SPOILER
00:02:350 - 00:05:508 - do you consider mapping vocals? if you then add note? erm or did i miss the right sound?
00:32:350 (32350|3) - make LN?
00:34:521 - to 00:35:113 - you can make LN in this like you map int this part 00:35:508 (35508|1,35705|2,35903|3) -
00:37:679 - to 00:38:271 - ^
00:46:955 - 00:47:745 - 00:50:113 - 00:51:692 - add note?
01:15:672 - missing sound?
01:25:245 - to 01:29:982 - consider map here? but still depends on da creator, lol

Just a joke comment. . . "Where's Eddy?" :D :D

Well theen cyaaa
Davin Fortune
little check timing
00:56:033 - change the preview point at here, since the singer start sing at here, i just make the offset become 1,560 to make it more better look number?

01:22:086 - this should be closing kiai since the singer stop sing at here

Column : 1-2-3-4

EZ
Since it's easy diff, i recommend to delete these : 00:02:745 (2745|3) - 00:03:732 (3732|0,4126|3,4521|0) - 00:05:903 (5903|0) -
00:36:100 (36100|2) - move to 4, just like 00:39:060 (39060|0,39455|1,39653|2,39850|1) -
00:42:416 (42416|2) - ^
00:39:455 (39455|1) - make it LR_tom hat 2 also pls
00:47:745 (47745|3,48139|2,48337|1,48534|3) - make it balance
00:56:034 - to 00:56:824 - LN. long guitar sound
00:58:403 (58403|1,58403|2) - conflict with 00:56:824 (56824|0,56824|2,57218|1) -
01:09:060 (69060|2) - delete this, maybe just focus on the vocal so just add a note at the beginning of that LN
01:11:034 (71034|3,71034|0) - also conflict with 01:09:455 (69455|0,69455|1,69850|3) -
01:20:705 - Just suggestion

NM
00:12:613 - http://puu.sh/sj3TE/2606bb6768.jpg or compare with 01:20:705 (80705|0,80705|1,80903|2,80903|3,81100|0,81100|1,81297|3,81297|2,81495|1,81495|0,81692|2,81692|3) -
00:33:139 - why not 2?
00:38:666 (38666|2,38666|3,39060|0,39258|2) - make like 00:35:508 (35508|0,35508|3,36100|2) -
00:51:199 - add a note (consistency matter)
01:02:942 (62942|1,63041|2,63139|3) - hitsound conflict with 01:15:574 (75574|2,75672|1,75771|0) - , cymbal sound prob
Unlucky_w
Well hello again XD
from mod queue

EZ
first of all, 00:01:561 (1561|2) - i prefer that this move to 1 (better for a beginning)
if you agreed to ^, move then 00:03:139 (3139|1) - to 1 (as the sound is different, also better pattern), then 00:03:732 (3732|0) - to 2.
00:36:100 (36100|2) - Move to 4
00:42:416 (42416|2) - ^ ('cuz it's not the same sound as these notes, 00:42:613 (42613|1,42810|2,43008|1); also, 00:41:824 (41824|3,42416|3) - between these two notes, it feels like there's a slider, but there's actually none, so it's more convincing to me.)

NM
00:11:626 (11626|0) - Move to 2
00:12:810 (12810|3) - Move to 3
and 00:13:008 (13008|0) - Move to 2
00:13:995 - Add a note here at second column. (follow vocal voice too)
00:37:482 (37482|0) - Move to 2

HD
00:36:297 - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6578759
00:39:653 (39653|2,39653|0) - ^ just move these two notes one column to the right.
00:42:810 (42810|1) - Move to left , 00:42:810 (42810|2) - and move to right
^ reason: 00:33:139 (33139|3,33139|2,33337|0,33337|1,33534|3,33534|2).
01:05:607 (65607|0,65705|1) - Ctrl+G

MX
00:13:008 (13008|1) - 00:13:403 (13403|1) - Move them to 2. To make a different kind of common pattern, and not just repetitive.
00:39:455 - Add note at 4
00:39:653 - Add note at 4
00:39:850 - Add note at 2
^ sound is different from 00:42:613 and 00:36:297 (double notes) but similar (louder) as 00:33:139 (triple).
And speaking of that, move 00:33:337 (33337|2) - to 2, to make it unrepetitive ;)
not sure if there's still anything wrong in the kiai, but that's all.

No easy update this time, amiright? XD anyways good luck~
Topic Starter
- Ly0572 -

JooF12 wrote:

Davin Fortune wrote:

FastYoshi wrote:

No easy update this time, amiright? XD anyways good luck~
XD

THANKS GUYS~
EZ NM and HD UPDATED
dunno where to response now but i applied most of the suggestions~
EFP

JooF12 wrote:

Haarooooo(lol) punta here to prioritize ly0-senseii maps. . .
nuu more irc, i crie meni :roll: :roll: :roll:


NO KDS pag di nakatulong(translated: if it doesn't help at all
Ed's MX
SPOILER
00:02:350 - 00:05:508 - do you consider mapping vocals? if you then add note? erm or did i miss the right sound? no i don't
00:32:350 (32350|3) - make LN?
00:34:521 - to 00:35:113 - you can make LN in this like you map int this part 00:35:508 (35508|1,35705|2,35903|3) - different sounds there
00:37:679 - to 00:38:271 - ^ ^
00:46:955 - 00:47:745 - 00:50:113 - 00:51:692 - add note? okey
01:15:672 - missing sound? uh yes
01:25:245 - to 01:29:982 - consider map here? but still depends on da creator, lol still fiigure out how, lol

Just a joke comment. . . "Where's Eddy?" :D :D lmao

Well theen cyaaa
thanks Joo~

FastYoshi wrote:

Well hello again XD
from mod queue

MX
00:13:008 (13008|1) - 00:13:403 (13403|1) - Move them to 2. To make a different kind of common pattern, and not just repetitive. not sure about that
00:39:455 - Add note at 4
00:39:653 - Add note at 4
00:39:850 - Add note at 2
^ sound is different from 00:42:613 and 00:36:297 (double notes) but similar (louder) as 00:33:139 (triple). still consider that part
And speaking of that, move 00:33:337 (33337|2) - to 2, to make it unrepetitive ;) looks good
not sure if there's still anything wrong in the kiai, but that's all.

No easy update this time, amiright? XD anyways good luck~
and thankyou Yoshi~

Davin Fortune wrote:

little check timing
00:56:033 - change the preview point at here, since the singer start sing at here, i just make the offset become 1,560 to make it more better look number?

01:22:086 - this should be closing kiai since the singer stop sing at here
^i submit this matter to Ly~


and Ly, denied my kudosu for p/5603621 lol
Topic Starter
- Ly0572 -

EFP wrote:

and Ly, denied my kudosu for p/5603621 lol
Ayy I accidentally clicked that I'm so sorry.. Halp ^^

-- Ty absolute zero
-SoraGami-
Hi LyO and EFP~

m4m :3
feel free to reject if you're not satisfied with my suggestion :3
modding this while effect volume is turned off btw (to not interfere by the hitsounds while modding)
Column Format:
4K = |1|2|3|4|
[EZ]
- 00:06:297 (6297|1,6692|2) - i suggest to mirror the pattern here (ctrl + h), there is a difference between 00:04:718 and 00:06:297 which will be better if you accent the pitch here to become more flowy~

- 00:11:034 - pretty sure this should be double note? since there was a impact like 00:09:455 *if you accepted this, mirror these 00:10:245 (10245|0,10442|1,10639|2) to be more fitting and balance

- 00:14:982 (14982|0) - column 2 seems empty for a moment, try move to 2

- 00:37:087 (37087|0,37482|3) - ctrl + h, feels more convenient to play if these notes 00:36:692 (36692|1,37087|0) are played in alternate hand to accent more the impact of guitar to drum

- starting from 00:38:271 to 00:41:824 - there is a noticeable lack of notes in column 4, which makes the left side more denser, try this:
  1. 00:39:258 (39258|2) - move this to 4, so it will not blend with the flow of the guitar here 00:39:455 (39455|1,39653|2,39850|1) since 00:39:258 (39258|2) is a snaredrum
  2. 00:40:245 (40245|0) - move to 4 also for balance, and also same reason with the alternate flow here 00:39:850 (39850|1,40245|0)
- 00:43:403 (43403|0) - move to 4, same reason

- 00:52:876 (52876|3) - why LN? feels to inconsistent, should be 1/2 like 00:51:297

- 00:54:060 (54060|1) - move to 3 more balance, and also 00:53:863 (53863|0,54060|1,54258|3) feels different with 00:54:455 (54455|0,54653|1,54850|3)
[NM]
- 00:09:850 (9850|1) - move to 1 then 00:10:245 (10245|0,10442|1,10639|2) - mirror, more fitting and for better balance

- 00:16:955 (16955|0,17350|3) - how about move to 4 and 3? the flow here 00:16:462 (16462|0,16560|2,16659|1,16955|0) kinda feels off, would be better if played by alternate hand

- 00:17:745 and 00:19:324 - should be double note for the snare drum to be consistent with 00:14:587 and 00:16:166 (since you doubled them in every first snare in every measure)

- 00:33:139 - feels spiky here, if you compare it with HD diff you can notice https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6587771 maybe you should make 00:33:337 (33337|2,33337|3,33534|0,33534|1) like this instead http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6587784

- 00:36:297 - 00:39:455 - 00:42:613 - ^ and as for this one 00:44:192 - same like above to but you can keep the jack like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6587791

- 00:44:982 - add LN until 00:45:376 to be consistent with the ones like 00:41:824 they are the same

- 00:51:692 (51692|0,51988|3,52087|1) - move to 4,2,3? same like before for the alternate hand flow for 00:51:495 (51495|1,51692|0) and for better balance

- 01:08:666 - should be single only to be consistent, you only follow every 2nd snare drum in every measure like 01:05:903 etc.. so the double should be in 01:09:060 but pwedeng wag mo na lagyan kase mahirap for NM xD

- 01:13:403 - 01:19:718 - ^
[HD]
- 00:06:297 and 00:11:034 - maybe these should be triple, it has same impact sound like the others

- 00:07:876 - add note for cymbals

- 00:14:982 (14982|2,15080|0,15080|3) - umm.. idk but maybe the double should be in the white line, since 00:14:982 has a loud guitar drum or what sound sound it is xD and true that 00:15:080 is also loud but to maintain the 1/1 rhythm of the doubles is better i think, ummm.. it's your choice

- 00:14:192 - add note? for cymbals

- 00:33:337 (33337|1,33534|2) - like i said on NM diff, this should be harder, and make them all double note like 00:36:297 etc... since it will become a huge spike if you double it, to reduce it, better to nerf this 00:32:745 (32745|3,32745|2,32843|0,32843|1,32942|3,32942|2,33041|1,33041|0,33139|2,33139|3) because it feels too sudden, it is the only jumptrill in the entire diff, how about something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6587859

- 00:44:982 - try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6587866 for a more different structure and more harder than NM diff

- 00:46:166 (46166|2,46363|1) - move to 2 and 4 for balance, 00:46:363 (46363|1,46560|1,46758|1) feels inconvenient

- 00:47:547 (47547|0,47745|3) - move to 4 and 3, too much pressure here in the left side 00:47:153 (47153|1,47251|0,47350|1,47547|0) and unnecessary jack 00:47:745 (47745|3,47942|3)

- 01:14:587 - you missed a note here, should be double

- 01:15:771 - add note for cymbals same like 01:03:139

really love this diff~

:3
Goodluck~
Topic Starter
- Ly0572 -

-SoraGami- wrote:

Hi LyO and EFP~

m4m :3
feel free to reject if you're not satisfied with my suggestion :3
modding this while effect volume is turned off btw (to not interfere by the hitsounds while modding)
Column Format:
4K = |1|2|3|4|
[EZ]
- 00:06:297 (6297|1,6692|2) - i suggest to mirror the pattern here (ctrl + h), there is a difference between 00:04:718 and 00:06:297 which will be better if you accent the pitch here to become more flowy~

- 00:11:034 - pretty sure this should be double note? since there was a impact like 00:09:455 *if you accepted this, mirror these 00:10:245 (10245|0,10442|1,10639|2) to be more fitting and balance

- 00:14:982 (14982|0) - column 2 seems empty for a moment, try move to 2

- 00:37:087 (37087|0,37482|3) - ctrl + h, feels more convenient to play if these notes 00:36:692 (36692|1,37087|0) are played in alternate hand to accent more the impact of guitar to drum

- starting from 00:38:271 to 00:41:824 - there is a noticeable lack of notes in column 4, which makes the left side more denser, try this:
  1. 00:39:258 (39258|2) - move this to 4, so it will not blend with the flow of the guitar here 00:39:455 (39455|1,39653|2,39850|1) since 00:39:258 (39258|2) is a snaredrum
  2. 00:40:245 (40245|0) - move to 4 also for balance, and also same reason with the alternate flow here 00:39:850 (39850|1,40245|0)
- 00:43:403 (43403|0) - move to 4, same reason

- 00:52:876 (52876|3) - why LN? feels to inconsistent, should be 1/2 like 00:51:297

- 00:54:060 (54060|1) - move to 3 more balance, and also 00:53:863 (53863|0,54060|1,54258|3) feels different with 00:54:455 (54455|0,54653|1,54850|3)
[NM]
- 00:09:850 (9850|1) - move to 1 then 00:10:245 (10245|0,10442|1,10639|2) - mirror, more fitting and for better balance

- 00:16:955 (16955|0,17350|3) - how about move to 4 and 3? the flow here 00:16:462 (16462|0,16560|2,16659|1,16955|0) kinda feels off, would be better if played by alternate hand

- 00:17:745 and 00:19:324 - should be double note for the snare drum to be consistent with 00:14:587 and 00:16:166 (since you doubled them in every first snare in every measure)

- 00:33:139 - feels spiky here, if you compare it with HD diff you can notice https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6587771 maybe you should make 00:33:337 (33337|2,33337|3,33534|0,33534|1) like this instead http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6587784

- 00:36:297 - 00:39:455 - 00:42:613 - ^ and as for this one 00:44:192 - same like above to but you can keep the jack like http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6587791

- 00:44:982 - add LN until 00:45:376 to be consistent with the ones like 00:41:824 they are the same

- 00:51:692 (51692|0,51988|3,52087|1) - move to 4,2,3? same like before for the alternate hand flow for 00:51:495 (51495|1,51692|0) and for better balance

- 01:08:666 - should be single only to be consistent, you only follow every 2nd snare drum in every measure like 01:05:903 etc.. so the double should be in 01:09:060 but pwedeng wag mo na lagyan kase mahirap for NM xD

- 01:13:403 - 01:19:718 - ^
[HD]
- 00:06:297 and 00:11:034 - maybe these should be triple, it has same impact sound like the others

- 00:07:876 - add note for cymbals

- 00:14:982 (14982|2,15080|0,15080|3) - umm.. idk but maybe the double should be in the white line, since 00:14:982 has a loud guitar drum or what sound sound it is xD and true that 00:15:080 is also loud but to maintain the 1/1 rhythm of the doubles is better i think, ummm.. it's your choice

- 00:14:192 - add note? for cymbals

- 00:33:337 (33337|1,33534|2) - like i said on NM diff, this should be harder, and make them all double note like 00:36:297 etc... since it will become a huge spike if you double it, to reduce it, better to nerf this 00:32:745 (32745|3,32745|2,32843|0,32843|1,32942|3,32942|2,33041|1,33041|0,33139|2,33139|3) because it feels too sudden, it is the only jumptrill in the entire diff, how about something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6587859

- 00:44:982 - try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6587866 for a more different structure and more harder than NM diff

- 00:46:166 (46166|2,46363|1) - move to 2 and 4 for balance, 00:46:363 (46363|1,46560|1,46758|1) feels inconvenient

- 00:47:547 (47547|0,47745|3) - move to 4 and 3, too much pressure here in the left side 00:47:153 (47153|1,47251|0,47350|1,47547|0) and unnecessary jack 00:47:745 (47745|3,47942|3)

- 01:14:587 - you missed a note here, should be double

- 01:15:771 - add note for cymbals same like 01:03:139

really love this diff~

:3
Goodluck~
ooooh applied most of your mod thanks sora~ :)
Valentrixe
hi
from my modding queue


Mod Inside
etc. mean there are similar issue in further. you should check them yourself
[Ed's MX]
  1. 00:20:310 (20310|0) - double? since it have the same sound as 00:19:718 (19718|1,19718|0,19817|1,19817|0,20014|2,20014|1,20113|1,20113|2)
  2. 00:22:087 (22087|2,22087|3,22087|1) - why triple? it's only kick, there's no snare unlike the other triplets around it, same issue with 00:23:666 (23666|3,23666|1,23666|0) - , 00:25:245 (25245|3,25245|1,25245|0) - , and so on. there's no noticeable sound to use triple in there
  3. 00:35:508 (35508|3,35508|1) - missing note
  4. 00:36:100 - you can add note if you want, to be more consistent, same apply to 00:39:258 (39258|3,39258|2) - , etc.
  5. 00:47:942 (47942|1,48139|1,48337|1,48534|1) - 4 notes anchor in here and 4 notes anchor in 00:49:718 (49718|0,49916|0,50113|0,50310|0) - can be little exhausting for left hand since you need to pressing jack twice with the same hand, consider to rearrange this to be more balanced
  6. 01:08:666 - suggestion : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6604279 , to avoid anchor on left index

that's all
it's pretty solid already

good luck
go for rank! ^^
Meiju
Good morning, i don't like Naruto
EZ
00:58:403 - 1/1 LN
01:11:034 - ^
NM
00:15:376 - 00:16:955 - 00:18:534 - 00:19:324 - 00:33:929 - 00:37:087 - and etc. doubles
HD
00:07:876 (7876|3,9455|0) - these LNs should be with same lenght
00:14:784 - 00:16:363 - 00:17:153 - 00:17:942 - 00:19:916 - i recommend you to put here notes, because without them its confusing to play :?
MX
00:08:501 (8501|2) - 00:54:291 (54291|1) - remove please
00:55:245 - http://puu.sh/spAb1/97d20b0954.jpg
Cool map, good luck
Raveille
pilla palla pilla BOOM BANG WOOSH WISH

sorry

|1|2|3|4|

EZ
00:16:560 (16560|2) - move this to 4 so it is symmetrical to the previous pattern (or at least mirrored)
00:23:468 (23468|0,23666|2) - ctrl+g this so it follows the same pattern going down
00:26:232 (26232|2) - to 4 and 00:26:824 (26824|3) - to 3 so that it has a mirrored pattern from previous part: 00:24:455 (24455|3,24653|0,25047|2,25245|1) -
00:29:192 (29192|3,29389|1,29784|2,29982|0) - same with this part, mirror 00:27:613 (27613|1,27810|2,28205|3,28403|0) -
00:56:824 (56824|2) - is this drum or vocal? if it's vocal, stay consistent and add it for every strong white line beat

NM
00:26:232 (26232|1) - move to 4 so that there is a mirrored pattern (00:24:455 (24455|3,24653|0,25047|1,25245|1) - )
00:44:389 (44389|2,44389|3,44587|0) - would suggest ctrl+h to fit the same pattern of 12 34 or 34 12
00:46:462 - why does this part not have this pattern: 00:48:041 (48041|0,48139|2,48238|3,48337|2) - , would suggest adding that pattern
00:56:133 (56133|2,56232|1,56528|2,56626|1) - I feel like ctrl+h is better but this is just a meh opinion here
01:02:745 - double here
01:09:060 - double here
01:15:376 - double here

HD
00:46:955 (46955|2,46955|0,46955|3) - in my opinion, this shouldn't be a triple, it should be a double placed at a different place for pitch relevancy. this is up to you.
00:50:705 (50705|0,50903|0,51100|0,51495|0,51692|0,51889|0,52087|0) - NANI?!?! change this around
=w= can't find much...

MX
00:07:482 (7482|3,7482|1) - this shouldn't be a double as it sounds the same as the single notes
00:17:350 (17350|2) - can this be shifted to 00:17:251 - at 3 so that theres a drum beat at 00:17:251 -
00:36:297 (36297|2,36297|3,36495|1,36495|3,36692|3,36692|0) - would suggest: this and OMG RIUNOSK NO WHY ARE YOU INSIDE FUCK
00:39:455 (39455|1,39455|0,39653|0,39653|2,39850|3,39850|0) - same pattern but mirrored
00:42:613 (42613|0,42613|1,42810|1,42810|2,43008|2,43008|3) - DUDE YOU DID THIS CORRECTLY WHY DIDN'T YOU DO IT FOR THE OTHERS JHASGSDJGASJHAGJHAD ok I'll stop, nothing wrong for this btw just pointing it out lol.
00:53:271 - would add a note at 2
00:55:245 (55245|0,55245|3,55245|1,55245|2,55442|0,55639|1,55837|2) - HOLY FUCK WHAT IS THIS?? *cough* ok, uhm... this is a really brave move, BUT I SUGGEST YOU DO THIS.
01:03:139 - cymbal crash so add a note at 1? unless you feel its uncomfortable then don't put
01:14:192 - why a triple here, then 01:14:982 - double here and 01:15:771 - here? they all sound the same

that's all =w= good luck!

Edit:

Raveille wrote:

00:55:245 (55245|0,55245|3,55245|1,55245|2,55442|0,55639|1,55837|2) - HOLY FUCK WHAT IS THIS?? *cough* ok, uhm... this is a really brave move, BUT I SUGGEST YOU DO THIS.
LOL APPARENTLY MAGE ALSO SAID THE SAME THING XDDDD
Topic Starter
- Ly0572 -

Mage wrote:

Good morning, i don't like Naruto oh xD
EZ
00:58:403 - 1/1 LN
01:11:034 - ^
NM
00:15:376 - 00:16:955 - 00:18:534 - 00:19:324 - 00:33:929 - 00:37:087 - and etc. doubles
HD
00:07:876 (7876|3,9455|0) - these LNs should be with same lenght
00:14:784 - 00:16:363 - 00:17:153 - 00:17:942 - 00:19:916 - i recommend you to put here notes, because without them its confusing to play :?

Cool map, good luck thanks mage~ most of them is applied

Raveille wrote:

pilla palla pilla BOOM BANG WOOSH WISH

sorry lol :D

|1|2|3|4|

EZ
00:16:560 (16560|2) - move this to 4 so it is symmetrical to the previous pattern (or at least mirrored)
00:23:468 (23468|0,23666|2) - ctrl+g this so it follows the same pattern going down
00:26:232 (26232|2) - to 4 and 00:26:824 (26824|3) - to 3 so that it has a mirrored pattern from previous part: 00:24:455 (24455|3,24653|0,25047|2,25245|1) -
00:29:192 (29192|3,29389|1,29784|2,29982|0) - same with this part, mirror 00:27:613 (27613|1,27810|2,28205|3,28403|0) -
00:56:824 (56824|2) - is this drum or vocal? if it's vocal, stay consistent and add it for every strong white line beat

NM
00:26:232 (26232|1) - move to 4 so that there is a mirrored pattern (00:24:455 (24455|3,24653|0,25047|1,25245|1) - )
00:44:389 (44389|2,44389|3,44587|0) - would suggest ctrl+h to fit the same pattern of 12 34 or 34 12
00:46:462 - why does this part not have this pattern: 00:48:041 (48041|0,48139|2,48238|3,48337|2) - , would suggest adding that pattern
00:56:133 (56133|2,56232|1,56528|2,56626|1) - I feel like ctrl+h is better but this is just a meh opinion here
01:02:745 - double here
01:09:060 - double here
01:15:376 - double here

HD
00:46:955 (46955|2,46955|0,46955|3) - in my opinion, this shouldn't be a triple, it should be a double placed at a different place for pitch relevancy. this is up to you. its originally doubles but i got confused by the previous mods so yeah changed hihi
00:50:705 (50705|0,50903|0,51100|0,51495|0,51692|0,51889|0,52087|0) - NANI?!?! change this around
=w= can't find much...


that's all =w= good luck! thanks raveille and gl to u too~ :)
EFP

Valentrixe wrote:

hi
from my modding queue


Mod Inside
etc. mean there are similar issue in further. you should check them yourself
[Ed's MX]
  1. 00:20:310 (20310|0) - double? since it have the same sound as 00:19:718 (19718|1,19718|0,19817|1,19817|0,20014|2,20014|1,20113|1,20113|2)
  2. 00:22:087 (22087|2,22087|3,22087|1) - why triple? it's only kick, there's no snare unlike the other triplets around it, same issue with 00:23:666 (23666|3,23666|1,23666|0) - , 00:25:245 (25245|3,25245|1,25245|0) - , and so on. there's no noticeable sound to use triple in there
  3. 00:35:508 (35508|3,35508|1) - missing note
  4. 00:36:100 - you can add note if you want, to be more consistent, same apply to 00:39:258 (39258|3,39258|2) - , etc.
  5. 00:47:942 (47942|1,48139|1,48337|1,48534|1) - 4 notes anchor in here and 4 notes anchor in 00:49:718 (49718|0,49916|0,50113|0,50310|0) - can be little exhausting for left hand since you need to pressing jack twice with the same hand, consider to rearrange this to be more balanced
  6. 01:08:666 - suggestion : https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6604279 , to avoid anchor on left index

that's all
it's pretty solid already

good luck
go for rank! ^^

i accepted all your mod, thanks!

Mage wrote:

Good morning, i don't like Naruto
MX
00:08:501 (8501|2) - 00:54:291 (54291|1) - remove please
00:55:245 - http://puu.sh/spAb1/97d20b0954.jpg nice!
Cool map, good luck

thanks for mod Mage~

Raveille wrote:

pilla palla pilla BOOM BANG WOOSH WISH

sorry

|1|2|3|4|

MX
00:07:482 (7482|3,7482|1) - this shouldn't be a double as it sounds the same as the single notes ma bad
00:17:350 (17350|2) - can this be shifted to 00:17:251 - at 3 so that theres a drum beat at 00:17:251 -
00:36:297 (36297|2,36297|3,36495|1,36495|3,36692|3,36692|0) - would suggest: this and OMG RIUNOSK NO WHY ARE YOU INSIDE FUCK oh, fuk then
00:39:455 (39455|1,39455|0,39653|0,39653|2,39850|3,39850|0) - same pattern but mirrored
00:42:613 (42613|0,42613|1,42810|1,42810|2,43008|2,43008|3) - DUDE YOU DID THIS CORRECTLY WHY DIDN'T YOU DO IT FOR THE OTHERS JHASGSDJGASJHAGJHAD ok I'll stop, nothing wrong for this btw just pointing it out lol. LOL ma bad
00:53:271 - would add a note at 2
00:55:245 (55245|0,55245|3,55245|1,55245|2,55442|0,55639|1,55837|2) - HOLY FUCK WHAT IS THIS?? *cough* ok, uhm... this is a really brave move, BUT I SUGGEST YOU DO THIS. YEP, just like what Moge said
01:03:139 - cymbal crash so add a note at 1? unless you feel its uncomfortable then don't put yes its uncomfortable
01:14:192 - why a triple here, then 01:14:982 - double here and 01:15:771 - here? they all sound the same still consider about this one 01:15:771 - and its uncomfortable

that's all =w= good luck!

Edit:

Raveille wrote:

00:55:245 (55245|0,55245|3,55245|1,55245|2,55442|0,55639|1,55837|2) - HOLY FUCK WHAT IS THIS?? *cough* ok, uhm... this is a really brave move, BUT I SUGGEST YOU DO THIS.
LOL APPARENTLY MAGE ALSO SAID THE SAME THING XDDDD LOL IT IS

thanks Raveille~!
updated
http://puu.sh/sqFrJ/de983101c5.osu
Topic Starter
- Ly0572 -
alright~ :D updated~
Niks


  • Halo~
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    [Ed's MX]
  2. 00:54:883 -
    add one note (00:54:258 (54258|0,54258|2,54258|3,54291|1) - same)
  3. 00:59:883 -
    add one note (a little strong drum sound)
  4. 00:59:982 -
    add one note (crash)
  5. 01:03:041 -
    add one note (a little strong drum sound)
  6. 01:17:350 (77350|2) -
    remove (look that 01:15:771 (75771|3,76166|2,76166|3,76560|3,76955|1,76955|3,77350|3,77745|0,77745|3) - )

    good luck. bye~
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