frost-b-spec wrote:

#modreqs

[Hard]
0.31.509(6) - spacing(off grid) - done
0.56.925(4) - delete 2nd waypoint - no

[Normal]
1.23.384(1) - 刻んで音量を下げると尚良いかと思います。 - done

[Easy]
0.21.925(5) - (4),(5)と直線的に並ぶとより綺麗に見えます。and delete 2nd waypoint - done

+star~

Lissette wrote:

hihi~

Remove "Oretachi ni Tsubasa wa Nai" since is already in source, also remove "anime" since will be in genre.

Hard
00:11:397 - useless timing section
00:38:585 (1) - End it 1/4 beat later at 00:39:002 - plays and sounds better
00:51:821 - useless timing section
00:52:029 - same
01:19:418 (2,3,4,5) - If you listen the drums beat, here would fit a stream, just suggesting
01:20:252 - end kiai time here?
01:28:689 - useless timing section

Normal
Re-snap all notes
01:20:252 - end kiai time here?
01:28:689 - useless timing section

Easy
Re-snap all notes
01:13:592 (7) - new combo
01:20:252 - end kiai time here?
01:28:689 - useless timing section

---ALL done---

Star~

Thank you really

Lizbeth wrote:

Try this offset: 5267
Re snap all your notes and kiai timing points after changing offset

Hard
00:14:118 (7) - I suggest to remove this note, doesn't match - done
00:38:596 (1) - this is not snapped. Fix the lenght - done

Your new combo placement could be better in my opinion, don't know what you follow. but I suggest follow the vocals to set new combos for this map.
Example: 00:13:585 - new combo here - done
or 00:15:252 (1) - here
00:16:918 - here too is a good place. - done

With this examples I think you get my point, if not let me know and I'll try to explain better.

bye~~^^

blissfulyoshi wrote:

I'm getting 5261 for the offset, so can you get someone to check it over pls?

Easy:
01:02:766 (1) - Remove the new combo to be consistent with 01:09:433 (4) and 00:56:933 (3)?

Normal:
00:21:100 (4,5) - The overlap with 00:19:433 (2)'s 300 makes this part look messy. I suggest you change it.
00:35:683 (1) - ^(overlap with 00:34:433 (5))

Hard:
At the rate I'm going, I am probably just going to complain how messy this map is, so I highly advise that you play the map again and fix what is needed to make it look neater.

--- ALL Fixed ---

Just curious, what did you change in the map to pop your own bubble?

It is my mistake

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It seems like I only have issues with the messiness of the map. Everything else seems to check out. As a result, call me back later, and I'll remod.

blissfulyoshi wrote:

No need for kds, just trying to point out what I dislike in hard.

Easy and Normal are fine.

Hard: Does not look like much changed, so I am going to list eh overlaps I disliked to make things more clear.
AR(approach rate) seems a little high, you might want to decrease it
00:14:219 (2,1) - overlap
00:17:760 (3,5,3) - overlaps (this section gets feels a little messy)
00:27:761 (8,1) - overlap
00:45:885 (5,2,3) - overlaps
I think you get the idea now. If not I highly advise you get someone to translate this for you.

I corrected it

Sorry to trouble you, but please teach if there is a place still corrected　

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Lets see what you do from here. I'll await your changes.