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The Black Mages - Maybe I'm A Lion (Short Ver.)

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Fight69
1,639 posts
Joined January 2010
Fight69

Wiinter wrote:

Hey ^-^

Fight69's Hard
00:07:719 (6) - new combo? Okay
02:04:557 - remove the unnecessary timing section here It's not really unnecessary, I can have a soft finish with it

Niice job here, have a star <3
Thanks for your mod ! :)

Ayeen wrote:

Fight69 hard:
00:57:043 (5,6,7) unpleasant anti jump. Where the previous was fast, then suddenly at the anti jump it become slow abruptly. Fixed
01:23:946 (1,2,3,4,5,6,) Spacing seem too close here. Quite hard to read (plus white combo color in kiai time), add a bit more DS I've a bit changed it
Might follow Kite's ending time 02:24:557 instead of 02:19:609 Nope, it's better for me like that

That all from me ~ Star
Thanks ! :)

Download: The Black Mages - Maybe I'm A Lion (Short Ver.) (Kite) [Fight69's Hard].osu
theMikeAG
308 posts
Joined September 2010
theMikeAG
Let the rock commence.

~lolcube's Easy~
01:00:444 (5) - Maybe remove note? Have spinner start here?
01:04:464 (3) - Place a clap on front end of slider? 01:06:938 (4), 01:09:412 (3),

~Normal~
I didn't see any problems.

~Fight 69's Hard~
00:07:255 (5) - Move this in line with (4)?
01:23:946 (1,2,3) - Stack these under01:22:709 (1,2,3).

~Insane~
00:08:028 (3) - Scoot this two spaces to the left.
00:51:476 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Try to make this hexagon look better?
01:52:396 (1,1,1) - Ack! These spinners sound bad. Remap this.
01:54:870 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ...Uematsu would be proud of you!!!!! :)

Very good map! I personally enjoyed Final Fantasy 8, and you've done it justice.
Star!
eg91022a71w
202 posts
Joined March 2010
eg91022a71w
GooD!


---My Pending map---
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/30882 - ULTRA-PRISM with Shiratama Soft Tennis Club - Rule Book wo Wasurechae
http://osu.ppy.sh/s/30007 - Sugita Tomokazu - Mousou Senshi Miyamae Kanako
Saten
Global Moderator
3,863 posts
Joined August 2010
Saten
General
I'm not sure about the timing on this map (at least not in the beginning~)
00:13:440 - listen to this with playback rate 25% maybe it's just me~

Normal
02:16:517 (1,1) - something like this?
SPOILER

Fight69's Hard
00:24:263 (3) - Stack properly (Distance spacing 0,0x and disable grid snapping)
00:26:737 (5) - ^
00:27:974 (8,9) - ^
00:46:065 (7,8) - ^
01:09:103 (1,2,3,4) - 1 grid up
01:23:946 (1,2,3) - stack with previous replica
01:47:139 (7,8) - Stack properly
02:11:105 (5) - ^
02:11:260 (6) - ^

Insane
Longer streams fits better if the circles are closer to each-other~


love The Black Mages
Star~
Hanyuu
2,223 posts
Joined February 2009
Hanyuu
Nice Song and Map ;) Star~
regenz
1,277 posts
Joined November 2009
regenz
stream killer :o
mymod

General
can you change combocolor with light blue and abit darker blue it's look same i want just see more different between color

Easy < this one is easy compare to normal but star rating can't determine i think it's ok.
00:40:653 (1) - isn't too short for easy ?

Normal
+1 circle size for increase gap with easy ?

00:11:739 (5) - newcombo
01:55:489 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this set is a bit hard for normal can you make some of them stack ?

Hard

00:25:655 (2) - delete this ?
00:35:125 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - not snap D:
01:53:633 (3) - new combo ?

Insane
00:52:249 (4) - newcombo here there are mini jump afterwards
01:45:902 (3) - newcombo here it's a bit confuse (01:45:593 (1,2,3,4) - )

Crazy stream :cry:
Kite
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1,372 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
Kite

regenz wrote:

General
can you change combocolor with light blue and abit darker blue it's look same i want just see more different between color
Done

Normal
+1 circle size for increase gap with easy
Nah I like it the way it is atm

00:11:739 (5) - newcombo Done
01:55:489 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - this set is a bit hard for normal can you make some of them stack ? Done

Insane
00:52:249 (4) - newcombo here there are mini jump afterwards Done
01:45:902 (3) - newcombo here it's a bit confuse (01:45:593 (1,2,3,4) - ) Feels fine for me
Thanks for the mods~
Fight69
1,639 posts
Joined January 2010
Fight69

Saten-san wrote:

Fight69's Hard
00:24:263 (3) - Stack properly (Distance spacing 0,0x and disable grid snapping) Fixed
00:26:737 (5) - ^ ^
00:27:974 (8,9) - ^ ^
00:46:065 (7,8) - ^ ^
01:09:103 (1,2,3,4) - 1 grid up I did it on purpose, so I won't change that
01:23:946 (1,2,3) - stack with previous replica ^
01:47:139 (7,8) - Stack properly Fixed
02:11:105 (5) - ^ ^
02:11:260 (6) - ^ ^
Thanks for your mod ! :)

regenz wrote:

Hard

00:25:655 (2) - delete this ? Nope
00:35:125 (9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - not snap D: It's snapped in 1/8
01:53:633 (3) - new combo ? Nope
Thanks ! :)

Download: The Black Mages - Maybe I'm A Lion (Short Ver.) (Kite) [Fight69's Hard].osu
HeatKai
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined April 2010
HeatKai
[General]

Mp3 Bitrate : 192 kbps ( okay )

Video ( frame size ) : none ( okay )

Skin : none ( okay ) ;p

Background : 1024x768 ( okay )

Kiai time : all same ( okay )

Snapping : Doesn't have ( okay )

Preview Point : all the same ( okay )

Diffs : 1 easy , 1 normal , 1 hard , 1 insane ( okay )

Audio Lead-in : 0 ( :3 )

Artist : The Black Mages ( okay )

Title : Maybe I'm A Lion ( okay )

source : Final Fantasy VIII ( okay )

Tags : all fine ( okay ) :3



[lolcube's easy]
seems like normal :\

00:18:388 (1,2,3,4,1) - make shapes , well if you make shapes its more fun to play :D because its will look nicer :P:3
00:38:179 (1,2,1) - delete this , just let the spinner starts from here.the current you're making kinda make own rhythm :3 the spinner should end at 00:41:581 with finish :P
00:57:043 (2) - shorten it by a 1/2 tick :D Its sounds better IMO
01:00:444 (5) - delete ~ let the spinner start from here ~~
02:19:300 (6) - let the spinner starts from here ?

[normal]
Well some of the long repeat slider , can change by circle ~

00:06:018 (1,2,1) - this three might be confusing XD
01:02:918 (1,2) - change it to some simple 1/2 circle :o " http://puu.sh/2uKf " well , its simple yet okay :o for normal ;p
01:07:866 (1,2) - ^
02:09:714 (3) - remove clap at the starting , put clap at the repeat. sounds better IMO :p
02:19:145 (3,4,5) - delete ? and let the spinner start from 02:19:300 ?

[fight69's hard]
01:02:918 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - can't you make like this 01:07:866 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) ? Its kinda Insane , repeat + jump :p with far DS . Dx
01:42:501 (8) - delete ~ let the spinner spin from here ~ :3
01:54:870 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - not confirm about this thing :o long stream for hard @_@
02:11:260 (6) - stack it carefully :o

[insane]
@_@

00:38:218 (4) - just delete this , let the spinner start from here XD
01:00:754 (5) - ^


its fine I think , or my eyes burning because of epic streams XD

[overall]
go go Kite ~
Sorry coz delay ;p

hi hi Star !!!
Kite
osu! Alumni
1,372 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
Kite

HeatKai wrote:

[normal]
00:06:018 (1,2,1) - this three might be confusing XD Yeah I thought so too, but it's spaced normally so it should be ok
01:02:918 (1,2) - change it to some simple 1/2 circle :o " http://puu.sh/2uKf " well , its simple yet okay :o for normal ;p I don't think a 7x 1/2 stack would be nice to play for a normal diff on 194 bpm =/
01:07:866 (1,2) - ^ ^
02:09:714 (3) - remove clap at the starting , put clap at the repeat. sounds better IMO :p Yeah, done
02:19:145 (3,4,5) - delete ? and let the spinner start from 02:19:300 ? Okay, done

[insane]
@_@

00:38:218 (4) - just delete this , let the spinner start from here XD Yeah works better, done
01:00:754 (5) - ^ Nah works better with it being there imo
Thanks for the mod :P
lolcubes
osu! Alumni
4,437 posts
Joined November 2010
lolcubes

theMikeAG wrote:

~lolcube's Easy~
01:00:444 (5) - Maybe remove note? Have spinner start here? Nah, I like to emphasize this with that note, besides the spinner isn't short or anything.
01:04:464 (3) - Place a clap on front end of slider? 01:06:938 (4), 01:09:412 (3)This is intentional, however I did add some more claps later on, for variety, thanks.

regenz wrote:

Easy < this one is easy compare to normal but star rating can't determine i think it's ok.
00:40:653 (1) - isn't too short for easy ?I see Kite already fixed it, thanks Kite. I don't think it's too short, but since it's easy I guess making it longer won't hurt.
Download: The Black Mages - Maybe I'm A Lion (Short Ver.) (Kite) [lolcubes's Easy].osu
HeatKai
osu! Alumni
2,801 posts
Joined April 2010
HeatKai
Hi there.


Well , I ask many players already.

Thanks MMzz , RockeDon , OzzyOzrock , Zekira , KanaRin , Arien666 , samiljul ,TTTL , Backfire and Kanopu. ( I think that's all ) ==''

Well , some of them I ask for suggestion , I guess all I ask ~_~''

Well , still waiting for Lepidon's checking but here.
I guess he still can check here.



Thanks Kite.

Download: The Black Mages - Maybe I'm A Lion (Short Ver.) (Kite) [Heat's Fantasy Taiko].osu

Kite
osu! Alumni
1,372 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
Kite
Thanks for the taiko diff~
Lybydose
osu! Alumni
2,024 posts
Joined January 2009
Lybydose
Timing:

SPOILER
[TimingPoints]
3549,309.228937643985,4,1,1,100,1,0
7598,309.228937643985,4,1,1,100,1,0
8510,309.228937643985,4,1,1,100,1,0
11578,309.228937643985,4,1,1,100,1,0
12519,309.228937643985,4,1,1,100,1,0
13434,309.228937643985,4,1,1,100,1,0
17164,309.228937643985,4,1,1,100,1,0
19625,309.228937643985,4,1,1,100,1,0
25524,309.228937643985,4,1,1,100,1,0
25834,309.228937643985,4,1,1,100,1,0
28298,309.228937643985,4,1,1,100,1,0
31669,309.228937643985,4,1,1,100,1,0
31978,309.228937643985,4,1,1,100,1,0
33226,309.228937643985,4,1,1,100,1,0
34496,309.228937643985,4,1,1,100,1,0
43133,309.228937643985,4,1,1,100,1,0
46857,309.228937643985,4,1,1,100,1,0
46857,309.228937643985,4,1,1,100,1,0
61699,337.078651685393,4,1,1,100,1,0
61978,324.324324324324,4,1,1,100,1,0
62336,309.228937643985,4,1,1,100,1,0
62923,309.228937643985,4,1,1,100,1,0
76542,309.228937643985,4,1,1,100,1,0
77782,309.228937643985,4,1,1,100,1,0
83944,309.228937643985,4,1,1,100,1,0
86465,309.228937643985,4,1,1,100,1,0
88920,308.959835221421,4,1,1,100,1,0
95097,309.228350515464,4,1,1,100,1,0
107141,309.228350515464,4,1,1,100,1,0
108703,309.228350515464,4,1,1,100,1,0
126667,309.228350515464,4,1,1,100,1,0
128482,309.228350515464,4,1,1,100,1,0
132175,309.228350515464,4,1,1,100,1,0
135285,314.13612565445,4,1,1,100,1,0
136541,294.117647058824,4,1,1,100,1,0
137717,294.117647058824,4,1,1,100,1,0

A lot of the streams that you don't already have set to 1/3 should actually be 1/3. Example: 01:28:276 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) -

Starting at 02:15:285, the guitar does not have the same timing as the drums/cymbals. The timing sections I gave only work for the guitar.
Starting at 02:17:717, the timing becomes a complete mess and I can't figure it out, don't map anything there or put a spinner.
HeatKai
osu! Alumni
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Joined April 2010
HeatKai
Thanks lyby because not rejecting my request !
Kite
osu! Alumni
1,372 posts
Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
Kite
I tried it out with the sections you gave me, seemed somewhat weird to me at some parts (as you said it only follows guitar).
It should be fine to just leave it with the first section for drums... people can play it fine with 99% acc..

I am sure you spent quite some time on that timing and I apologize for not using all of it, well I will have to use it eventually when other people tell me to.

Also remapped those 1/4 into 1/3
Lybydose
osu! Alumni
2,024 posts
Joined January 2009
Lybydose
No, 99% of it follows the drums exclusively. The only exception is the last section because the guitar and the drums become out of sync with each other.

Just because people can hit it, doesn't mean it's right. People can hit http://osu.ppy.sh/s/2443 just fine (the 100's are impossible to 300 spinners), also http://osu.ppy.sh/s/23363,http://osu.ppy.sh/s/48, http://osu.ppy.sh/s/10435, and http://osu.ppy.sh/s/1391 (ok maybe not that one lol), but that doesn't mean the timing is right. Especially because you have it set to OD7, which gives you a +/- 38ms hit window, which is huge.
Ash Cat
65 posts
Joined August 2010
Ash Cat
Meow
mike666234
31 posts
Joined May 2011
mike666234
i think there are a few too many spinners in [Normal].
other than that, awesome map.
Kite
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Joined July 2009
Topic Starter
Kite
Oh my... guess I'll be adding them all then when I find the time
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