Uchida Maaya - Gimme! Revolution · forum

lolia

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lolia 2016-10-23T14:55:18+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2017. 2. 13 월 at 오후 8:31:15

Artist: Uchida Maaya
Title: Gimme! Revolution
Source: 俺、ツインテールになります。
Tags: Ore Twintail ni Narimasu opening Neoskylove TV Size
BPM: 180
Filesize: 21120kb
Play Time: 01:27
Difficulties Available:

Expert (4.89 stars, 368 notes)
Growing Up, Next Phase (5.74 stars, 411 notes)
Hard (2.67 stars, 237 notes)
Light Insane (3.69 stars, 296 notes)
NeoSL's Insane (4.42 stars, 334 notes)
Normal (1.75 stars, 122 notes)

Download: Uchida Maaya - Gimme! Revolution
Download: Uchida Maaya - Gimme! Revolution (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Normal - me
Hard - me
Light Insane - me
Insane - Neoskylove
Expert - me
Growing Up, Next Phase - me

Last edited by lolia 2017-02-13T11:31:43+00:00, edited 45 times in total.

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Title:Gimme! Revolution
TitleUnicode:ギミー！レボリューション
Artist:Uchida Maaya
ArtistUnicode:内田真礼
Creator:Karia
Version:NeoSL's Insane
Source:俺、ツインテールになります。
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337,237,63833,6,0,L|417:243,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
314,146,64166,1,2,0:0:0:0:
179,277,64333,5,8,0:0:0:0:
160,272,64666,1,8,0:0:0:0:
140,267,64999,1,8,0:0:0:0:
67,178,65166,6,0,P|131:159|129:92,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
69,52,65499,2,0,L|212:39,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
271,80,65833,2,0,P|325:39|384:73,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
433,127,66166,5,8,0:0:0:0:
433,127,66249,1,0,0:0:0:0:
433,127,66333,2,0,P|432:146|434:166,1,40,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
455,299,66499,6,0,P|384:328|324:281,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
299,173,66999,1,8,0:0:0:0:
139,273,67166,1,2,0:0:0:0:
158,89,67333,1,2,0:0:0:0:
177,95,67416,1,0,0:0:0:0:
191,108,67500,1,2,0:0:0:0:
199,126,67583,1,0,0:0:0:0:
198,146,67666,1,2,0:0:0:0:
189,164,67750,1,0,0:0:0:0:
173,176,67833,1,2,0:0:0:0:
154,180,67916,1,0,0:0:0:0:
107,169,67999,5,8,0:0:0:0:
107,169,68833,1,8,0:0:0:0:
299,173,68999,1,8,0:0:0:0:
299,173,69333,6,0,L|286:308,1,136.000002593994,4|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
384,149,69833,1,2,0:0:0:0:
382,132,69916,1,2,0:0:0:0:
381,115,69999,1,2,0:0:0:0:
268,156,70166,1,2,0:0:0:0:
288,37,70333,1,4,0:3:0:0:
267,156,70499,6,0,P|207:180|151:146,1,136.000002593994,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
90,82,70999,1,4,0:3:0:0:
64,263,71166,1,0,0:0:0:0:
253,312,71333,6,0,L|286:308,1,34.0000006484985,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
301,159,71499,2,0,L|267:155,1,34.0000006484985,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,239,71666,2,0,L|195:235,1,34.0000006484985,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
361,232,71833,6,0,P|395:163|368:90,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,155,72333,1,8,0:0:0:0:
91,68,72499,6,0,P|156:28|219:71,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,155,72999,1,8,0:0:0:0:
83,225,73166,6,0,P|73:146|90:68,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,235,73666,1,8,0:0:0:0:
43,324,73833,1,2,0:0:0:0:
195,235,73999,6,0,B|221:220|246:218|278:234|278:234|293:217|291:205,1,120,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
286,175,74333,6,0,P|279:141|288:106,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
316,67,74666,6,0,L|196:64,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,44,74999,2,0,L|157:123,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
114,273,75333,1,2,0:0:0:0:
24,305,75499,2,0,L|29:225,1,80,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,235,75833,6,0,P|239:296|313:283,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
385,218,76333,1,8,0:0:0:0:
384,59,76499,2,0,P|373:139|385:218,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
469,41,76999,1,8,0:0:0:0:
297,136,77166,6,0,P|230:173|163:136,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,59,77666,1,8,0:0:0:0:
42,169,77833,6,0,L|63:327,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
140,269,78333,1,8,0:0:0:0:
208,352,78499,6,0,P|282:374|349:335,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
395,234,78999,1,8,0:0:0:0:
233,222,79166,1,0,0:0:0:0:
409,152,79333,1,8,0:0:0:0:
247,140,79500,1,2,0:0:0:0:
423,70,79666,1,8,0:0:0:0:
260,58,79833,6,0,L|101:57,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
36,154,80333,1,8,0:0:0:0:
101,304,80499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
137,146,80666,1,2,0:0:0:0:
13,252,80833,1,2,0:0:0:0:
177,238,81000,1,8,0:0:0:0:
291,235,81166,6,0,P|340:284|409:276,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
454,220,81499,2,0,L|454:71,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
393,33,81833,2,0,P|325:16|259:43,1,143.999995605469,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
224,106,82166,1,2,0:0:0:0:
83,73,82333,1,8,0:0:0:0:
224,106,82499,6,0,P|239:180|183:232,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
87,151,82999,2,0,P|78:112|82:72,1,80,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,232,83333,2,0,P|187:271|178:310,1,80,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
91,342,83666,1,8,0:0:0:0:
280,288,83833,6,0,P|347:323|412:282,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
381,192,84333,1,8,0:0:0:0:
412,101,84499,2,0,P|347:60|280:95,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,189,84999,1,8,0:0:0:0:
146,30,85166,6,0,P|196:87|164:155,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
255,189,85666,1,8,0:0:0:0:
272,313,85833,2,0,P|222:256|255:189,1,160,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,276,86333,1,8,0:0:0:0:
163,155,86499,6,0,P|88:158|68:87,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
198,42,86999,1,8,0:0:0:0:
371,93,87166,2,0,L|367:172,1,80,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
359,276,87499,1,2,0:0:0:0:
188,245,87666,1,8,0:0:0:0:
359,276,87833,6,0,B|334:273|334:273|309:277|309:277|272:268|272:268|237:275|237:275|209:269|209:269|170:277|170:277|143:262|167:226|195:250,1,256,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:

힜사는 카리아님 최상위맵에서 복사했습니다.

Ujimatsu Chiya

2,480 posts

Joined December 2013

Ujimatsu Chiya 2016-10-31T13:42:39+00:00

수컷이든 암컷이든 맛만 좋으면 그만이라죠?

Sonnyc

7,753 posts

Joined June 2008

Sonnyc 2016-10-31T20:30:58+00:00

갓맵이네요.

카리아님 난이도들에서 01:26:249 여기 있는 노트는 조금 오버매핑성이 강해보입니다.

근데 이 곡은 ㄹㅇ 한국인 매핑 대회라도 한겁니까
이러다가 저도 매핑해버릴듯

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2016-11-01T01:23:14+00:00

eINess wrote:
수컷이든 암컷이든 맛만 좋으면 그만이라죠?

넹?? 그래도 가릴건 가립니다(?) ㅋㅋ

Sonnyc wrote:
갓맵이네요.

카리아님 난이도들에서 01:26:249 여기 있는 노트는 조금 오버매핑성이 강해보입니다. Fixed

근데 이 곡은 ㄹㅇ 한국인 매핑 대회라도 한겁니까
이러다가 저도 매핑해버릴듯 ㅋㅋㅋ 곡 잡고 보니 한국분들이 잔뜩..

Updated Neoskylove's diff.

Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2016-11-04T07:28:20+00:00

eINess wrote:
수컷이든 암컷이든 맛만 좋으면 그만이라죠?

역시 변태네스

Sonnyc wrote:
갓맵이네요.

제난이도 빼고...

Azure

771 posts

Joined November 2010

Azure 2016-11-06T04:05:46+00:00

Hello, from popner's modding team

[Normal]

00:35:333 move the note to 00:35:166 ? follow the vocal is better to read (I think)
00:36:333 make a 1/2 slider and remove the note? (same meaning as ^)
00:37:166 remove NC, +NC in the next slider

[Hard]

00:05:833 remove NC, +NC in the next slider
00:31:999 (1) make the slider like a "U"? the tone is same as 00:33:166 (1)
01:08:999 +whistle
01:14:333 add a slider and end in 01:14:583 ?

[Light Insane]

01:08:999 +whistle?
01:13:999 not follow the vocal? maybe like x1.2 and x0.8?

[NeoSL's Insane]

00:56:166 (2,3) ctrl+G ?
good diff!

[Expert]

00:14:166 (5) stack with 00:14:499 (1) 's head? make 00:13:666 (2,3,4,5) be a thunder?
00:18:333 (5) move to x284 y172 or stack 00:19:333 (4)? to follow the vocal
00:23:499 (4,5,6,7,8,9) not stack them, make a circle with little DS like (same as your highest diff)
00:29:166 (7) move to x360 y56?
00:38:333 (3) stack with (1) is better

[Growing Up, Next Phase]

00:18:166 (5) x461 y0
00:19:666 (6) stack with (2)
(^ the tone of vocal is different, so I think do not stack the next 1/4 notes is better)
00:23:499 is quite ugly, maybe make a circle is better
00:34:999 (3,4) +whistle with S:C2, it's little empty with no sound here
00:36:333、00:37:666 ^

that's all~ it's good enough I think haha

I like your mapset, GL!

missa1912

512 posts

Joined July 2015

missa1912 2016-11-06T04:34:21+00:00

Hi! from my queue :3

[Normal]

00:34:666 (1,2,3,4) - what about something like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6503001 will fit better on vocal that way
00:46:833 (3,4) - like this(?: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6503075 cuz that slider is uncomfortable to play tbh, and also make 00:47:333 - seems a good option
01:08:833 (4,1) - are you sure about having such a big jump like this?

[Hard]

00:47:666 (3) - i keep missreading this... (probably cuz i suk) is stacked like any other double, what about this?: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6503128 the nc is an option, also 00:47:999 - clickeable
00:53:666 (1) - make this just a circle, plays better imo
01:07:999 (5) - stack on 01:06:999 (2) - head instead of tail(?

short mod sorry, cant test highest diff and both insanes seem solid so far, pretty cool map <3

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2016-11-06T07:25:01+00:00

Azure wrote:
Hello, from popner's modding team

[Hard]
00:05:833 remove NC, +NC in the next slider I want to keep cuz the NC follows a vocal now
00:31:999 (1) make the slider like a "U"? the tone is same as 00:33:166 (1) Enough in 1/2 slider imo
01:08:999 +whistle Added clap instead
01:14:333 add a slider and end in 01:14:583 ? I didn't want it in lower diff :p
[Light Insane]
01:08:999 +whistle? Added clap instead w
01:13:999 not follow the vocal? maybe like x1.2 and x0.8? Same as Hard. I wanted it only the highest diff.
[Expert]
00:14:166 (5) stack with 00:14:499 (1) 's head? make 00:13:666 (2,3,4,5) be a thunder? The stack follows vocal, so fine imo
00:18:333 (5) move to x284 y172 or stack 00:19:333 (4)? to follow the vocal Spacing isn't fit imo
00:29:166 (7) move to x360 y56? Current jump is better to me
00:38:333 (3) stack with (1) is better This stack follows drum sound
[Growing Up, Next Phase]
00:18:166 (5) x461 y0 I prefer mine
00:19:666 (6) stack with (2) This follows vocal
(^ the tone of vocal is different, so I think do not stack the next 1/4 notes is better)
00:23:499 is quite ugly, maybe make a circle is better It's pretty to me ;w;
00:34:999 (3,4) +whistle with S:C2, it's little empty with no sound here
00:36:333、00:37:666 ^ Keep for now. I'll consider it later
that's all~ it's good enough I think haha
I like your mapset, GL!

missa1912 wrote:
Hi! from my queue :3

[Normal]
00:34:666 (1,2,3,4) - what about something like: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6503001 will fit better on vocal that way Applied Azure's instead
[Hard]
00:47:666 (3) - i keep missreading this... (probably cuz i suk) is stacked like any other double, what about this?: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6503128 the nc is an option, also 00:47:999 - clickeable Changed to other way
00:53:666 (1) - make this just a circle, plays better imo Slider is better for now imo
01:07:999 (5) - stack on 01:06:999 (2) - head instead of tail(? Maybe on tail is better flow
short mod sorry, cant test highest diff and both insanes seem solid so far, pretty cool map <3

Deleted = Fixed
Thanks for moddings!

Shmiklak

Elite Storyboarder

3,218 posts

Joined January 2015

Shmiklak 2016-11-07T06:45:42+00:00

From my queue ♥
Choosed you because mapset has BN star

[General]

Since you have red and pink combo colours I suggest to place them on hard moments like SV changes or full screen jumps.

[Growing Up, Next Phase]

I thnk this 01:27:833 (1) - should end at 01:28:333 - because here starts the guitar ending sound, which is different from sound which was distinguished by slider.

[Expert]

I really do not see any reason to name this diff "Expert", I think "Insane" would be much better.
Since here starts new sound I suggest to change rythm here with this way http://shmiklak.s-ul.eu/wLaB4Ah2 to make it more interesting
00:23:166 (3) - I think drum whistle would distinguish it better
I thnk this 01:27:833 (1) - should end at 01:28:333 - because here starts the guitar ending sound, which is different from sound which was distinguished by slider.

[Neoskylove]

00:37:999 (2) - I think NC here would be better
I thnk this 01:27:833 (1) - should end at 01:28:333 - because here starts the guitar ending sound, which is different from sound which was distinguished by slider.

[Light Insane]

You haven't distinguished vocals on this part 00:34:666 - even in Expert diff, but you've distinguished them in light insane. seriously? :v pls distinguish them in other diffs too.
01:27:833 (1) - you know what to do with this

Really nice set :3
Best of luck!

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2016-11-07T14:22:39+00:00

M a r v o l l o wrote:
From my queue ♥
Choosed you because mapset has BN star

[General]
Since you have red and pink combo colours I suggest to place them on hard moments like SV changes or full screen jumps. I thought it before mapping this, but it was ambiguous to express the music by using combo-color.

[Growing Up, Next Phase]
I thnk this 01:27:833 (1) - should end at 01:28:333 - because here starts the guitar ending sound, which is different from sound which was distinguished by slider.

[Expert]
I really do not see any reason to name this diff "Expert", I think "Insane" would be much better. Imo, the diff is harder than Insane but easier than Extra. So this diff is Expert :p
Since here starts new sound I suggest to change rythm here with this way http://shmiklak.s-ul.eu/wLaB4Ah2 to make it more interesting B-but isn't 00:07:833 - here any special beat for supporting 1/4 slider..?
I thnk this 01:27:833 (1) - should end at 01:28:333 - because here starts the guitar ending sound, which is different from sound which was distinguished by slider.

[Light Insane]
You haven't distinguished vocals on this part 00:34:666 - even in Expert diff, but you've distinguished them in light insane. seriously? :v pls distinguish them in other diffs too. It's fine cuz the rhythms in higher diffs for expressing the music.
01:27:833 (1) - you know what to do with this

About the last suggestions, they follows a strong guitar sound. That's why they ended at 1/4 tick.
Really nice set :3
Best of luck!

Deleted = Fixed
Thanks for modding!

pkhg

2,507 posts

Joined May 2010

pkhg 2016-11-08T04:50:21+00:00

[Normal]

00:37:166 (5,1) - you stopped following vocals here and thats unexpected and might be confusing for newer players. try http://puu.sh/sakL7/81efcdaaa4.jpg
01:02:499 (3,4) - i dont understand what youre following here. since youre mainly following vocals this should work better http://puu.sh/sakY5/6f1592d650.jpg

[Light Insane]

00:00:666 (1,2,3,4,5) - thats almost inaudible. tune up the volume a bit or/and add some hitsounds (default whistles maybe?) so players can actually have some feedback
00:47:666 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - enable stacking on editor to check this

[NeoSL's Insane]

00:06:999 (4,5,1) - for a proper emphasis the spacing should be larger from 5 to 1 instead
01:14:007 - this greenline is unsnapped. the previous slider is at 1x sv. check if thats intended (probably not lol)

higher diffs are cute

Garden

Nomination Assessment Team

1,343 posts

Joined June 2013

Garden 2016-11-08T09:13:20+00:00

i got some works to do so light mod random diffs, sry for that

Growing Up, Next Phase:
00:18:333 (6,1) - seems not intended but considering ur slider curve and spacing between them i think a blanket would look better
00:26:666 (1) - did u miss a whistle here? sounds same as 00:15:999 (1) -
01:28:583 - happen to notice theres a whistle here at the expert/light insane diff, add in this diff too? (also hard/normal)

really fun to play!

Light Insane:
01:23:666 (4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - in this section u give a jump each nc except 01:26:333 (4,1) - this one, consider unstack for consistency in patterns here

Hard:
01:27:833 (1) - end time conflict with your other diffs

Normal:
00:48:833 - consider adding sth here, u follow all similar vocal in kiai part except here

Olegase

45 posts

Joined August 2015

Olegase 2016-11-08T13:47:05+00:00

Hello!

[Normal]

00:24:666 (2) - turn slider.
00:25:833 (3) - ^ to avoid overlap.
00:26:666 (1,2) - replace slider and note. https://puu.sh/saBQy/125cef62b9.png
00:29:333 (1) - overlap.
00:33:166 (2,3) - lost rhythm. https://puu.sh/saC6a/06d5f8a980.png
00:34:666 (1,2) - ^. https://puu.sh/saCga/83542108c3.png
00:36:333 (3) - lengthen slider. You can't change.
00:37:166 (5,1,2,3) - lost rhythm. https://puu.sh/saCx2/bdbec255ef.png
00:45:333 (1) - overlap.
00:45:999 (2,3,4) - lost rhythm. https://puu.sh/saCFu/b3ef30db4d.png
00:48:333 (1) - lengthen slider.
01:16:666 (3) - turn slider.
01:20:666 (2) - turn slider.
01:24:833 - add note.
01:26:166 - ^.
01:27:499 - ^.
01:27:833 (1) - lengthen slider to white tick.

[Hard]

00:01:999 (3) - lengthen slider.
00:12:999 - add note or slider.
00:15:666 (4) - replace double note. You can't change.
00:16:833 (4) - overlap.
00:17:999 (3,4,1) - here the raising of flow. Example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6520334
00:24:666 (3) - overlap.
00:27:499 (4) - ^.
00:27:833 (1,2) - lengthen slider and replace slider on note. https://puu.sh/saDZ1/ab72b12d43.png
00:28:666 (3,4,1) - here the raising of flow.
00:36:333 (2,3) - repeat 00:35:333 (4).
00:42:166 (4) - overlap.
00:47:999 (3,1) - replace. https://puu.sh/saEfQ/c16c414ca2.png
00:52:999 (4) - replace. https://puu.sh/saEjB/ef603b36ac.png
00:55:499 (4) - replace. You can't change. https://puu.sh/saEo0/65f12d1038.png
01:21:166 (1) - lengthen slider.

[NeoSL's Insane]

00:34:999 - add note. You can't change.
00:47:666 (4,5,6,7) - raise stack.
01:14:666 (1) - turn slider.

[Expert]

00:31:916 (9) - move note.
00:34:666 (1) - lengthen slider. You can't change.
00:34:666 (1) - add slider. You can't change.
00:42:666 (1,2,3,4) - lost nice pattern. You can't change.
00:47:333 (4) - replace note on slider.

Good luck with rank!

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2016-11-09T02:29:55+00:00

pkhg wrote:
[Normal]
01:02:499 (3,4) - i dont understand what youre following here. since youre mainly following vocals this should work better http://puu.sh/sakY5/6f1592d650.jpg
it's fine cuz 01:01:166 (1,2) - these also follow instrument sounds, not vocal
[Light Insane]
00:47:666 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - enable stacking on editor to check this This works perfect as I intended :p
higher diffs are cute

Garden wrote:
i got some works to do so light mod random diffs, sry for that

Growing Up, Next Phase:
01:28:583 - happen to notice theres a whistle here at the expert/light insane diff, add in this diff too? (also hard/normal) Oh, I deleted the whistles. I don't know why whistles are there ww

really fun to play! =w=

Olegase wrote:
Hello!

[Normal]
00:24:666 (2) - turn slider.
01:16:666 (3) - turn slider.
01:20:666 (2) - turn slider.
// it's fine with current slider
00:25:833 (3) - ^ to avoid overlap.
00:29:333 (1) - overlap.
00:45:333 (1) - overlap.
// overlap is not an issue
00:26:666 (1,2) - replace slider and note. https://puu.sh/saBQy/125cef62b9.png
// I followed strong sounds
00:33:166 (2,3) - lost rhythm. https://puu.sh/saC6a/06d5f8a980.png
00:34:666 (1,2) - ^. https://puu.sh/saCga/83542108c3.png
00:37:166 (5,1,2,3) - lost rhythm. https://puu.sh/saCx2/bdbec255ef.png
00:45:999 (2,3,4) - lost rhythm. https://puu.sh/saCFu/b3ef30db4d.png
// it's intention for the lowest diff.
00:36:333 (3) - lengthen slider. You can't change.
// I followed vocals
01:24:833 - add note.
01:26:166 - ^.
01:27:499 - ^.
// There are not strong beats.
01:27:833 (1) - lengthen slider to white tick.
// I ended this following guitar

[Hard]
00:01:999 (3) - lengthen slider.
// I followed vocals.
00:12:999 - add note or slider.
// It's hard to read imo
00:15:666 (4) - replace double note. You can't change.
00:55:499 (4) - replace. You can't change. https://puu.sh/saEo0/65f12d1038.png
// Current rhythm is better for a difficulty
00:16:833 (4) - overlap.
00:24:666 (3) - overlap.
00:27:499 (4) - ^.
00:42:166 (4) - overlap.
// overlap isn't an issue
00:17:999 (3,4,1) - here the raising of flow. Example: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6520334
00:28:666 (3,4,1) - here the raising of flow.
// I should remap then
00:27:833 (1,2) - lengthen slider and replace slider on note. https://puu.sh/saDZ1/ab72b12d43.png
// That is an unexpected rhythm.
00:36:333 (2,3) - repeat 00:35:333 (4).
// Vocals are not same.
00:47:999 (3,1) - replace. https://puu.sh/saEfQ/c16c414ca2.png
// It's same rhythm as mine.
00:52:999 (4) - replace. https://puu.sh/saEjB/ef603b36ac.png
// The music stopped at 00:53:333 -
01:21:166 (1) - lengthen slider.
// Same as Normal.

[Expert]
00:31:916 (9) - move note. Current placement is also fine
00:34:666 (1) - lengthen slider. You can't change.
00:34:666 (1) - add slider. You can't change.
// I followed only strong beats.
00:42:666 (1,2,3,4) - lost nice pattern. You can't change. I can't understand this..
00:47:333 (4) - replace note on slider. I want to keep current overlap

Good luck with rank!

Deleted = Fixed
Thanks for moddings!!

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Affirmation 2016-11-11T11:13:32+00:00

@ Marvollo
I thnk this 01:27:833 (1) - should end at 01:28:333 - because here starts the guitar ending sound, which is different from sound which was distinguished by slider.-No.
@Azure,pkhg all fixed
@Olegase
00:34:999 - add note. You can't change.No drums, No need to add.
00:47:666 (4,5,6,7) - raise stack.intended 0.25x stream
01:14:666 (1) - turn slider.?No.

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Irohas

1,353 posts

Joined May 2014

Irohas 2016-11-11T16:34:22+00:00

tell me why

hard
good

light insane
01:11:333 (3,1) - what about avoiding this overlap, it doesn't look good as much

neoSL
try to have same kiai parts/points as expert, I think it'll fit better
00:12:166 (1) - Is it really necessary to overmap in calm part ?
00:12:999 (6) - 00:37:999 (2) - NC because SV change
01:27:833 (1) - extend your slider until the blue tick as in others diffs to end the song at the same time

expert
00:09:833 (3) - finish on its head maybe
01:19:333 (4,5) - increase the spacing maybe? as 01:19:499 (5,6) - or 01:18:999 (2,3) -
00:58:499 (7,8) - spacing inconsistent try to keep 0.80x
really good
[]
short mod no kds if no change, good luck!

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2016-11-11T17:16:25+00:00

MugiwaraSekai wrote:
tell me why why

hard
good

expert
00:09:833 (3) - finish on its head maybe I want to keep this
really good
[]
short mod no kds if no change, good luck!

Deleted = Fixed
Thanks for modding!

Updated Neo's.

Gaia

2,808 posts

Joined May 2013

Gaia 2016-11-11T17:45:31+00:00

omg
amazing mapu x....x

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2016-11-11T17:52:04+00:00

Gaia wrote:
omg
amazing mapu x....x

thanks ww

Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2016-11-12T12:50:34+00:00

MugiwaraSekai wrote:
tell me why

hard
good

light insane
01:11:333 (3,1) - what about avoiding this overlap, it doesn't look good as much

neoSL
try to have same kiai parts/points as expert, I think it'll fit better
00:12:166 (1) - Is it really necessary to overmap in calm part ?No. It has beat
00:12:999 (6) - 00:37:999 (2) - NC because SV change
01:27:833 (1) - extend your slider until the blue tick as in others diffs to end the song at the same time

expert
00:09:833 (3) - finish on its head maybe
01:19:333 (4,5) - increase the spacing maybe? as 01:19:499 (5,6) - or 01:18:999 (2,3) -
00:58:499 (7,8) - spacing inconsistent try to keep 0.80x
really good
[]
short mod no kds if no change, good luck!

Thanks for mod
Nocomment=fixed

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lolia

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Topic Starter

lolia 2016-11-12T12:53:39+00:00

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Reillia

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Reillia 2016-11-16T13:59:03+00:00

[Normal]
00:38:499 - 여기가 클릭이 되었으면 하는 아쉬움이 드네요
00:45:333 (1,2) - 꼬리끼리 오버랩 안되게 하는게 더 좋을것같아욤
00:48:333 (1,2) - 꼬리랑 몸통이랑 좀 과하게 붙어있다는 생각이드는데 떨어뜨려보시는건?

[Light Insane]
00:24:499 (2,4) - 조금 애매하게 겹쳐있다고 생각되는데 00:24:499 (2) - 를 00:24:833 (4,1) - 의 사이로 옮기는건 어떨까요?
00:53:666 (1,3) - 스택때문에 플레이시 1번 슬라가 00:52:999 (4,5,6,7,8,1) - 모양에 맞지않게 조금 왼쪽위로 올라가는데 따로 수정하는게 좋을거같다고 생각합니다.

[NeoSL's Insane]
연타의 맨 마지막노트 디스턴스를 넓게하는 의도를 모르는건 아니지만 인세인에서 나올 모양새는 아니라고 생각합니다.
00:11:333 (3,4,5) - 앞전에 나왔던 흐름에 비해 점프가 조금 작게느껴졌습니다 거리좀 벌려보시는건?
00:15:166 (3,4) - 4에 드럼소리가 있음에도 불구하고 마땅한 이유없이 안티점프가 사용됬다고 생각합니다.
01:21:000 (6,1) - 흐름이 너무 깨진다고 생각합니다 flow도 부자연스럽고요. 다른 동선생각하시거나 거리를 벌리는게 좋다고 생각합니다.

전반적으로 평균적인 난이도분포가 너무 안맞는다고 생각됩니다..

[Expert]
00:21:333 (1,2) - 스택말고 2번을 다른위치에 둬서 점프를 만들어보는건 어떨까요? 스택을하기엔 음이 너무 분명하다고 생각됩니다.

[Growing Up, Next Phase]
갓맵...

lolia

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lolia 2016-11-18T03:21:38+00:00

[C u r i] wrote:
[Normal]
00:38:499 - 여기가 클릭이 되었으면 하는 아쉬움이 드네요 00:39:166 - 이 음때문에 어쩔수 없이 버려지게 됐네요
00:45:333 (1,2) - 꼬리끼리 오버랩 안되게 하는게 더 좋을것같아욤 이건 모양 내려다보니 겹쳐진건데 전 이대로도 마음에 들어서..

[Light Insane]
00:24:499 (2,4) - 조금 애매하게 겹쳐있다고 생각되는데 00:24:499 (2) - 를 00:24:833 (4,1) - 의 사이로 옮기는건 어떨까요? 음.. 이게 에디터에선 눈에 거슬릴지도 모르겠는데 실제 플레이시에는 별로 거슬리진 않아서.. 일단 큰 문제가 없는 한 이대로 두고 싶습니다

[Expert]
00:21:333 (1,2) - 스택말고 2번을 다른위치에 둬서 점프를 만들어보는건 어떨까요? 스택을하기엔 음이 너무 분명하다고 생각됩니다. 심벌때문에 악기소리의 차이는 좀 나지만 보컬만 보면 스택도 괜찮을꺼라 생각했습니다.

[Growing Up, Next Phase]
갓맵... =w=

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Affirmation

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Affirmation 2016-11-20T00:55:18+00:00

[C u r i] wrote:
[NeoSL's Insane]
연타의 맨 마지막노트 디스턴스를 넓게하는 의도를 모르는건 아니지만 인세인에서 나올 모양새는 아니라고 생각합니다.
00:11:333 (3,4,5) - 앞전에 나왔던 흐름에 비해 점프가 조금 작게느껴졌습니다 거리좀 벌려보시는건?앞부분을 줄일게요
00:15:166 (3,4) - 4에 드럼소리가 있음에도 불구하고 마땅한 이유없이 안티점프가 사용됬다고 생각합니다.이거는 큐리님이 만지작 거리다가 노트 지운것 같은데요. 아무 문제 없어요.
01:21:000 (6,1) - 흐름이 너무 깨진다고 생각합니다 flow도 부자연스럽고요. 다른 동선생각하시거나 거리를 벌리는게 좋다고 생각합니다.

전반적으로 평균적인 난이도분포가 너무 안맞는다고 생각됩니다..

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lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2016-11-20T04:27:28+00:00

Updated~

Janpai

1,288 posts

Joined March 2015

Janpai 2016-12-25T07:34:29+00:00

I was supposed to mod this but I can't find anything. Map is really good =w= so have a star goodluck!

Feb

1,027 posts

Joined June 2014

Feb 2017-01-07T10:23:47+00:00

heeeeyy from my q from somepoint last year.
first of all cool ideas for that last diff! a bit many kicksliders, but thats still bearable.

[general]

The timing is not quite right, try at least -7 or -8 listen closely to 00:52:159 (2,3) - this part both claps are completely off to what they are mapped to.

[that map with blue girl]
00:34:992 (3,4) - they are much weaker than the ones with the claps, but have more spacing uhh same on these 00:36:326 (3,4) - 00:37:492 (2,3) - why im saying this is because it is not really fitting to have these 00:37:992 (1,2,3) - instruments have about the same emphasize like weak vocals.
00:44:499 (2) - missing whistle.
00:51:499 (2,3,4) - uh shouldn't this pattern be ctrl+g following the handmovement here? You already have edgy movement already on 00:50:492 (1,4,1) - these hm
01:04:666 (1,1) - really minor thing, but 01:05:166 (1) - is more curved than the other shorter slider. No clue if its intended to look like this, but to me it looked like a try on an partly burai sldier.
01:20:666 (1) - not properly stacked.

[expert]

cud need more ar like +1 or raise stack leniency to 6 as all of th eoverlap patterns are kinda hard to read.

00:47:659 (1,2,3,4,5) - doing that movement with no active movement before is really hard to I never hit this accordingly, but hit the one in the highest diff because of it. Having the stream go in the opposite direction would help a bit to make the movement here not as hard.
01:06:159 (2) - any reason why you nc here?

[gdinsane]

00:12:166 (1) - theres no sound on the 1/4 uh just use simple circles instead? maybe confusing for players to see as you map 00:12:833 (4) - this with an 1/4 reverse as well where an actual sound is on the blue tick
01:06:166 (4,5,6) - move this stack a bit to the right WITH enabled stacking this is overlappin not nice https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6995795

00:23:166 (3) - stack properly
00:40:833 (2) - ^
00:49:166 (1) - ^
00:50:499 (1) - ^
01:08:999 (3) - ^
01:13:166 (1) - ^
01:16:333 (2) - ^

^all of these happen cuz you disabled stacking lel and i prolly missed sum

[Linsane]

00:38:999 (2) - can u not stack a snare under a sliderstail? emphasize and so on snare usually deserves more spacing as it plays much more natural this way :s
00:50:916 (2,3) - any reason why these are not stacked as the others?

Hard and Normal looked fine to me!

Hope I could help you a bit pushing this forward :>

GL

lolia

1,356 posts

Joined May 2012

Topic Starter

lolia 2017-01-07T16:46:40+00:00

Janpai wrote:
I was supposed to mod this but I can't find anything. Map is really good =w= so have a star goodluck! lol ok, thanks xD

Feb wrote:
heeeeyy from my q from somepoint last year.
first of all cool ideas for that last diff! a bit many kicksliders, but thats still bearable. xD

[general]
The timing is not quite right, try at least -7 or -8 listen closely to 00:52:159 (2,3) - this part both claps are completely off to what they are mapped to. Surely, 00:52:166 (2,3) - here and 00:52:833 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - this sounds are off, but other strong beats are fine. I'll get timing-check later orz

[expert]
00:47:659 (1,2,3,4,5) - doing that movement with no active movement before is really hard to I never hit this accordingly, but hit the one in the highest diff because of it. Having the stream go in the opposite direction would help a bit to make the movement here not as hard. I'm agree that this isn't easy to play, but I want to keep this flow for now. As I did on the highest diff, the spacing and flow of stream are emphasizing music. Also I believe this stream fits for diff cuz this diff is an Expert not an Insane
01:06:159 (2) - any reason why you nc here? This is for a differentiation of pattern. I didn't want to put this in 01:05:166 (1,1,1) - this slider pattern.

[Linsane]

00:50:916 (2,3) - any reason why these are not stacked as the others? Just for a shape of triplet

Hard and Normal looked fine to me!

Hope I could help you a bit pushing this forward :>

GL

Deleted = Fixed
Thanks for modding!

Affirmation

2,543 posts

Joined March 2015

Affirmation 2017-01-25T04:30:28+00:00

SPOILER

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333,224,41999,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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352,139,42333,1,8,0:0:0:0:
397,282,42499,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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353,186,44999,5,8,0:0:0:0:
132,138,45166,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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378,286,45833,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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299,127,48749,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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273,234,59666,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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433,127,66249,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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189,164,67750,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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107,169,67999,5,8,0:0:0:0:
107,169,68833,1,8,0:0:0:0:
299,173,68999,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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361,232,71833,6,0,P|395:163|368:90,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,155,72333,1,8,0:0:0:0:
91,68,72499,6,0,P|156:28|219:71,1,160,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
267,155,72999,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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195,235,73999,6,0,P|236:217|280:212,1,90.0000034332277,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
315,181,74333,6,0,P|324:146|317:111,1,71.9999978027344
316,67,74666,6,0,L|196:64,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
152,44,74999,2,0,L|157:123,1,80,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,235,75333,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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385,218,76333,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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469,41,76999,1,8,0:0:0:0:
297,136,77166,6,0,P|230:173|163:136,1,160,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
105,59,77666,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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lolia

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lolia 2017-01-25T04:36:12+00:00

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F D Flourite

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F D Flourite 2017-01-25T16:10:17+00:00

Mark for coming mod.

Wait why is this map starred by Sonnyc already? Is he gonna nominate this map?

[General]

Fine

[Normal]

00:07:333 (3) - This slider feels kinda weird because you suddenly switch the track here. There is a triple consecutive 1/2 beat at 00:06:999 - 00:07:166 - 00:07:333 - on the track you are following previously. But then you suddenly switch track here and make the skipped rhythm at 00:07:166 - feels very weird. I suggest you change the rhythm here like this
00:25:833 (3) - Make the same rhythm as 00:15:333 (3) -
00:59:833 (3) - Also skipped a beat that you previously mapped at 01:00:333 - . (Previously: 00:49:166 (2,3) - )
01:07:333 (2) - prefer a clap instead of a whistle on slider tail because the pitch on slider tail is quite high. Using a low-pitch whistle doesn't fit the feeling there.
01:16:666 (3,1) - switching track here is really confusing. You skipped the instrument on 01:16:499 - while mapped all similar others later on.
01:19:166 (4) - replace whistle on slider head with finish? the emotion and pitch here is even higher than 01:18:499 (3) - .

[Hard]

00:09:833 (3) - whistle on slider head
00:36:999 (4,1) - it'd better be unstacked. Because it feels better when there is movement on heavy beat as 00:35:833 (1) - .
00:45:999 (3) - easy to be misread as 4hit-reverse slider. better be a double tap+4hit-reverse slider, like 00:45:999 (3,4,5) - in light insane
00:53:999 (2,3,1) - jump at the wrong point. jump should be on 00:54:499 (1) - instead of 00:54:333 (3) -
01:21:833 (2,3,1) - ^. It seems that you've done a lot of this pattern later on. But imo, if you want to use 1.4x DS as a jump distance, then use it at the real notes needing a jump, instead of the previous notes.
Regardless, decent Hard.

[Light Insane]

00:26:333 (4) - more downward to gain a larger space between 00:26:333 (4,1) - and a smaller space between 00:25:833 (3,4) -

[NeoSL's Insane]

00:01:332 (1) - no hitsound on this circle?
00:20:999 (4) - better move it to 401,287. the current jump distance is too large compared to the rest of your difficulty
00:34:666 (1,2) - distance should be larger than 00:34:166 (6,7) -
01:10:999 (2,3,1) - the linear flow with such variation of distance is really awkward to play. you can move 01:11:333 (1) - too 212,107 and rearrange the shape of 01:11:333 (1,2,3) - .
01:18:333 (2,1) - larger distance. change the slidershape of 01:17:833 (1) - if needed.

[Expert]

00:27:833 (1) - move it farther from 00:27:499 (5) - OR change the slidershape of 00:27:499 (5) - . Otherwise the distance arrangement in this part 00:26:999 (3,4,5,1) - would be really weird.
00:33:166 (1) - move it more right? same reason as above

[Growing Up, Next Phase]

00:23:500 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - worse than the version in Expert diff. That one looks more regular and beautiful. But this one does not.
00:28:333 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - the distance should be gradually increasing according to the vocal here. Because beats here don't really have a significant difference. So I think vocal here may matter.
01:23:666 (6) - move to 446,221 to stack on the slidertail of 01:22:499 (1) -

~~Not a fan of tons of muted 1/4 slidertails. Nothing to say from my side. Good luck.~~
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lolia

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lolia 2017-01-26T00:04:51+00:00

F D Flourite wrote:
Mark for coming mod.

Wait why is this map starred by Sonnyc already? Is he gonna nominate this map?

[General]
Fine
[Normal]
00:07:333 (3) - This slider feels kinda weird because you suddenly switch the track here. There is a triple consecutive 1/2 beat at 00:06:999 - 00:07:166 - 00:07:333 - on the track you are following previously. But then you suddenly switch track here and make the skipped rhythm at 00:07:166 - feels very weird. I suggest you change the rhythm here like this I felt that following streams is better than vocal.
00:25:833 (3) - Make the same rhythm as 00:15:333 (3) - Keep cuz piano sounds are not same.
00:59:833 (3) - Also skipped a beat that you previously mapped at 01:00:333 - . (Previously: 00:49:166 (2,3) - ) Because previous rhythms are not same.
01:07:333 (2) - prefer a clap instead of a whistle on slider tail because the pitch on slider tail is quite high. Using a low-pitch whistle doesn't fit the feeling there. 01:07:999 (3) - this is the highest tone. It's enough imo to use clap only that circle.
01:19:166 (4) - replace whistle on slider head with finish? the emotion and pitch here is even higher than 01:18:499 (3) - . Generally I don't like to use whistle and finish at the same time.
[Hard]
00:45:999 (3) - easy to be misread as 4hit-reverse slider. better be a double tap+4hit-reverse slider, like 00:45:999 (3,4,5) - in light insane Reduced one arrow instead.
00:53:999 (2,3,1) - jump at the wrong point. jump should be on 00:54:499 (1) - instead of 00:54:333 (3) -
01:21:833 (2,3,1) - ^. It seems that you've done a lot of this pattern later on. But imo, if you want to use 1.4x DS as a jump distance, then use it at the real notes needing a jump, instead of the previous notes. It's just my style. In lower diff, I like to stack a circle on the next slider which should have a jump.
Regardless, decent Hard.
[Expert]
00:27:833 (1) - move it farther from 00:27:499 (5) - OR change the slidershape of 00:27:499 (5) - . Otherwise the distance arrangement in this part 00:26:999 (3,4,5,1) - would be really weird. Current pattern also fine imo. Also spacing isn't a issue in playing.
00:33:166 (1) - move it more right? same reason as above Moved previous note instead
[Growing Up, Next Phase]
00:23:500 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - worse than the version in Expert diff. That one looks more regular and beautiful. But this one does not. I like this one too.
01:23:666 (6) - move to 446,221 to stack on the slidertail of 01:22:499 (1) - Current pattern is also fine imo
Not a fan of tons of muted 1/4 slidertails. Nothing to say from my side. Good luck.

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