gi(a)rlish number - Bloom

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Shapy

xNyamx wrote:

_kotachi_ wrote:

01:13 _kotachi_: 00:01:908 (1,2,3) - ここ1/2スライダーでよくないですか 
01:14 _kotachi_: 00:02:403 (2) - をコピーする感じで たしかに
01:18 _kotachi_: 00:28:117 (5) - x152 y80辺りだとより自然と思う ほんとだ! ありがとうございます!
01:20 _kotachi_: 00:30:919 (1) - これ、00:29:930 (2) - スライダーエンドに重ねたほうがいいと思う 修正しましたー
01:23 _kotachi_: 00:34:546 (4,5) - ここ前のパターンではジャンプじゃ無かったから統一すべきだと思う [https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6709542 こんな感じで]
この部分の曲調は同じだけど、そのあとに軽く盛り上がるのでこういう配置にしてましたー。
ただ、往復jumpは配置的に似合わないと思ったので、配置を変更しました。

01:26 _kotachi_: 00:52:348 (2) - ここ分かりにくいと思うから前に1個サークル入れたらマシになると思った 1/1間隔でclickさせているのでkeepで。
01:27 _kotachi_: 00:54:985 (3,4) - これ流石にInsaneにしては遠くないかな ちょっとだけ弄りましたー
01:29 _kotachi_: 00:57:952 (1) - [http://puu.sh/sBPhE/b87fe8590e.jpg こんな風な音取りがいいと思う]
01:31 _kotachi_: 01:00:425 (3,4) - 1/2スライダー感ある ここを変更してしまうと、次の1/1reverseと合わせて音取りがhard diffのようになるように思えた。でも、この音取りもいいなって思ったので、次指摘もらったら変更します! 一旦保留。 
01:31 _kotachi_: 01:10:974 (3,4) - ^ ^
01:33 _kotachi_: 01:15:095 (3,1) - ここも少し遠いと思うんだよね ちょっとだけ弄りましたー
01:34 _kotachi_: 01:24:985 (6) - ここは(3)にstackするくらいがいいと思う ok^^
01:34 _kotachi_: こんなものですかね…
01:35 _kotachi_: カスmodでほんとごめん…

Good Luck!! :)
超助かりました!! ありがとうございます!( *´艸`)

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Update gonna sleep now :3
Underdogs
I'm so so sorry I forgot to mod some of the map in my queue

Let's get to the point shall we?

00:12:458 (4,1) - Not blanket :(

00:19:051 (1,2) - Slightly, JUST SLIGHTLY off the flow

00:23:996 (4) - imo this can be moved to x:28 y:136 to make it look flow-ish

00:32:238 (1) - i think dropping this so that it won't overlap with 00:29:600 (1) - would be good, just in my point of view

00:34:875 (1) - could be straight slider so that players can adapt to the movement imo

00:36:853 (4,1) - too close, 0.98 is the DS shown

00:41:469 (1) - remove NC, NC at 00:42:787 (2) - instead

00:46:084 (3) - even when there is no DS error here, I'd highly recommend moving this note so that it's not distanced 0.99x

00:52:677 (3) - Making this reverse might be better because the 1/3 vocal gives you the opportunity to do so

00:59:930 (3,1) - I think this is bad in an aesthetic sense. But I'm not saying to change it tho

01:03:886 (4) - Could be NC

01:03:886 (4,1) - These could be mirror imo, just suggesting xd

01:06:194 (2,3) - Blanket please xd
Hitsounds could be done better. Here's the tip : Hear the music and put hitsounds accordingly. Standard hitsound procedure is that the second/fourth tick after the big white tick (00:11:469 , 00:12:128 , 00:13:447 ,00:14:765 and etc.) is where claps blend in. Well, it varies from song to song. Anyway, hitsounds could be better imo. Fixing it and your map will be good for rank.
While playing, I noticed some of the beat are a bit unexpected so I'll point it out
00:05:370 (3) - Starting this at 00:05:535 is better because I don't hear a strong,reasonable sound at 00:05:370. Instead 00:05:535 is better as you can start at white tick because vocal xd

00:13:776 (1,3) - How you put this is (blanket+spacing between mentioned note) is different compared to 00:12:458 (4,6) - . Just in my mind but changing it could be better

00:27:952 (3) - If you're following vocal, I don't think this slider justifies it. But if it's emphasizing 00:28:282 (4) - then i won't mind

00:28:776 (5,6) - ctrl+g is better

00:32:238 (1,2) - Just pointing things out, but making this the same sa 00:21:688 (1,2) - is recommended (consistent beat)

00:52:677 (6) - Since it's Normal, It wouldn;t hurt to use 1/3 here. I think

01:07:842 (4,5) - If you want to mirror these, then you're doing it wrong

01:13:117 (1,2) - This buildup is kind of weird i think

01:22:348 (1) - end slider missed a clap, no wait, the outro requires 1/1 claps to be more precise (01:23:337 (3) - , and 01:24:985 (1,3) - missed their claps as well)
00:18:392 (2) - Making this beat a standalone between 00:17:732 (1,1) - is actually a bad idea if you ask me. Putting beat in between aforementioned note is better

00:23:996 (6,1) - weird buildup imo

00:31:908 (4) - You can actually extend this to the blue tick because ending it 1/2 is actually weird when you actually can do 1/4 slider

00:33:227 (3) - Drag this a bit to the bottom and the overlap would be so much better

00:47:732 (4) - rather than 1/4 slider, 2 circle stack is better. The 1/4 would be overmapping

00:57:293 (1) - remove NC and put it at 00:57:622 (2) - is better to comply with the vocal

00:58:611 (5) - NC


the higher diffs are good.

good luck and I'm soooo sorry that I took so much time to actually notice your map :^(
Topic Starter
Shapy

Underdogs wrote:

I'm so so sorry I forgot to mod some of the map in my queue It's Ok :')

Let's get to the point shall we?

00:12:458 (4,1) - Not blanket :(Don't think it's necessary to make a blanket here (and i blanket this btw: Screen)

00:19:051 (1,2) - Slightly, JUST SLIGHTLY off the flow You're right my bad here fix

00:23:996 (4) - imo this can be moved to x:28 y:136 to make it look flow-ish Ok but i just moved at x:28 y:127 was better

00:32:238 (1) - i think dropping this so that it won't overlap with 00:29:600 (1) - would be good, just in my point of view Ok

00:34:875 (1) - could be straight slider so that players can adapt to the movement imo Ok

00:36:853 (4,1) - too close, 0.98 is the DS shown Fix

00:41:469 (1) - remove NC, NC at 00:42:787 (2) - instead Ok

00:46:084 (3) - even when there is no DS error here, I'd highly recommend moving this note so that it's not distanced 0.99x I moved it a bit

00:52:677 (3) - Making this reverse might be better because the 1/3 vocal gives you the opportunity to do so I don't think i'ts a good idea too put 1/3 for a easy not really sure about that

00:59:930 (3,1) - I think this is bad in an aesthetic sense. But I'm not saying to change it tho I'm bad for aesthetic :c

01:03:886 (4) - Could be NC Ok

01:03:886 (4,1) - These could be mirror imo, just suggesting xd I didn't understand :')

01:06:194 (2,3) - Blanket please xd
Hitsounds could be done better. Here's the tip : Hear the music and put hitsounds accordingly. Standard hitsound procedure is that the second/fourth tick after the big white tick (00:11:469 , 00:12:128 , 00:13:447 ,00:14:765 and etc.) is where claps blend in. Well, it varies from song to song. Anyway, hitsounds could be better imo. Fixing it and your map will be good for rank. Gonna check all of my hitsound later
While playing, I noticed some of the beat are a bit unexpected so I'll point it out
00:05:370 (3) - Starting this at 00:05:535 is better because I don't hear a strong,reasonable sound at 00:05:370. Instead 00:05:535 is better as you can start at white tick because vocal xd Fix

00:13:776 (1,3) - How you put this is (blanket+spacing between mentioned note) is different compared to 00:12:458 (4,6) - . Just in my mind but changing it could be better Ok

00:27:952 (3) - If you're following vocal, I don't think this slider justifies it. But if it's emphasizing 00:28:282 (4) - then i won't mind I didn't following vocal here

00:28:776 (5,6) - ctrl+g is better I take it

00:32:238 (1,2) - Just pointing things out, but making this the same sa 00:21:688 (1,2) - is recommended (consistent beat) Fix

00:52:677 (6) - Since it's Normal, It wouldn;t hurt to use 1/3 here. I think I don't like too put 1/3 i don't really like it :/ (and it's 1/4 not 1/3)

01:07:842 (4,5) - If you want to mirror these, then you're doing it wrong Gonna make something for this later

01:13:117 (1,2) - This buildup is kind of weird i think ^

01:22:348 (1) - end slider missed a clap, no wait, the outro requires 1/1 claps to be more precise (01:23:337 (3) - , and 01:24:985 (1,3) - missed their claps as well)I really need too check all of my hitsound >.<
00:18:392 (2) - Making this beat a standalone between 00:17:732 (1,1) - is actually a bad idea if you ask me. Putting beat in between aforementioned note is better Mapped this part

00:23:996 (6,1) - weird buildup imo is good for me

00:31:908 (4) - You can actually extend this to the blue tick because ending it 1/2 is actually weird when you actually can do 1/4 slider Ok

00:33:227 (3) - Drag this a bit to the bottom and the overlap would be so much better Ok

00:47:732 (4) - rather than 1/4 slider, 2 circle stack is better. The 1/4 would be overmapping Ok

00:57:293 (1) - remove NC and put it at 00:57:622 (2) - is better to comply with the vocal Fix

00:58:611 (5) - NC Fix


the higher diffs are good.

good luck and I'm soooo sorry that I took so much time to actually notice your map :^( It's ok :')
Thanks for you're mod :D
Scaltinof
[xNyamx's Insane]

00:00:590 (1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - 曲側できれいな鈴?っぽい音がなっているのでそれに合わせて音付けしてはどうでしょう。


00:05:535 (1,2,3) - ①
00:06:194 (1,2,3) - ② 
00:06:853 (1,2,3) - ③
00:07:513 (1,2,3) - ④
00:08:172 (1,2,3) - ⑤
①と③と⑤,②と④が同じような配置をしているのでコピー機能を使ってもよいかと思います。もしくは角度を変えてみるとか。あとディスタンスが均一になっていないのが気になりました。

00:09:820 (1) - スライダーの赤い節が始点と近すぎな気がしましたもっと右に寄せると良いと思います。


00:57:293 (2) - 曲の盛り上がりの箇所なのでここをフォローポイント一つ分だけ離すとよいかと。
01:17:568 (1,2,3,4,5) - ここ1を重心とした台形みたいな形をしていますからもう少し形を整えればいい感じになると思います。ディスタンスも統一した方がいいと思います。



こんくらいしか書けなかった、、、 

参考になれば幸いです。
xNyamx

aramaking wrote:

[xNyamx's Insane]

00:00:590 (1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - 曲側できれいな鈴?っぽい音がなっているのでそれに合わせて音付けしてはどうでしょう。
それのみを取ってしまうと Hard diffと差がなくなってしまうのでkeep

00:05:535 (1,2,3) - ①
00:06:194 (1,2,3) - ② 
00:06:853 (1,2,3) - ③
00:07:513 (1,2,3) - ④
00:08:172 (1,2,3) - ⑤
①と③と⑤,②と④が同じような配置をしているのでコピー機能を使ってもよいかと思います。もしくは角度を変えてみるとか。あとディスタンスが均一になっていないのが気になりました。 DS整えました。 配置は叩きやすくするためにスライダーの角度を変えずに配置してるんですが、やはり面白みに欠けますかね。。。
次指摘もらったら変更します。 いったん保留で。


00:09:820 (1) - スライダーの赤い節が始点と近すぎな気がしましたもっと右に寄せると良いと思います。
前(8)からスムーズにaimができる流れを作ろうとしてこの位置に赤点を置いています。
スライダーの形が悪かったので、それを修正しましたー!

00:57:293 (2) - 曲の盛り上がりの箇所なのでここをフォローポイント一つ分だけ離すとよいかと。
 ok
01:17:568 (1,2,3,4,5) - ここ1を重心とした台形みたいな形をしていますからもう少し形を整えればいい感じになると思います。ディスタンスも統一した方がいいと思います。自分なりに少し変えてみました。 DSは軽く整えましたが、統一はさせてません。



こんくらいしか書けなかった、、、 

参考になれば幸いです。
ほんとに助かりました!! ありがとうございます~!!^^

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Topic Starter
Shapy

xNyamx wrote:

aramaking wrote:

[xNyamx's Insane]

00:00:590 (1,2,1,2,3,1,1,2,3) - 曲側できれいな鈴?っぽい音がなっているのでそれに合わせて音付けしてはどうでしょう。
それのみを取ってしまうと Hard diffと差がなくなってしまうのでkeep

00:05:535 (1,2,3) - ①
00:06:194 (1,2,3) - ② 
00:06:853 (1,2,3) - ③
00:07:513 (1,2,3) - ④
00:08:172 (1,2,3) - ⑤
①と③と⑤,②と④が同じような配置をしているのでコピー機能を使ってもよいかと思います。もしくは角度を変えてみるとか。あとディスタンスが均一になっていないのが気になりました。 DS整えました。 配置は叩きやすくするためにスライダーの角度を変えずに配置してるんですが、やはり面白みに欠けますかね。。。
次指摘もらったら変更します。 いったん保留で。


00:09:820 (1) - スライダーの赤い節が始点と近すぎな気がしましたもっと右に寄せると良いと思います。
前(8)からスムーズにaimができる流れを作ろうとしてこの位置に赤点を置いています。
スライダーの形が悪かったので、それを修正しましたー!

00:57:293 (2) - 曲の盛り上がりの箇所なのでここをフォローポイント一つ分だけ離すとよいかと。
 ok
01:17:568 (1,2,3,4,5) - ここ1を重心とした台形みたいな形をしていますからもう少し形を整えればいい感じになると思います。ディスタンスも統一した方がいいと思います。自分なりに少し変えてみました。 DSは軽く整えましたが、統一はさせてません。



こんくらいしか書けなかった、、、 

参考になれば幸いです。
ほんとに助かりました!! ありがとうございます~!!^^

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Update Nyam Diff and fixed my hitsound (delete the soft-hitwhistle2 tho)
ikorza
from modreqs hope the rhythm suggestions help.

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00:02:403 (3) - increase spacing for emphasis
00:03:227 (1) - not enough spacing when the sound is strong. visual spacing also looks awkward compared to previously place objects so increase the spacing.
00:04:875 (1,4,5) - crt g rhythm
00:05:782 (6) - overmap is fine for emphasis if thats what you want to do though do it here aswell 00:07:100 -
00:05:864 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:07:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - rhythm should be the same
00:10:480 - slider here to emphasis vocal and that 00:10:644 (2) - a slider end is over this instead.
00:13:776 (1,2,3) - white ticks should be emphasised so just do 1/2 sliders
00:16:414 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - rhythm here doesnt work well as white ticks should be emphasised again and its not consistant with previous rhythms like 00:11:139 (1,2,3) - or 00:12:458 (1,2,3,4,5) -
00:18:721 (7) - 1/2 slider since 00:18:886 (8) - is weak and takes away emphasis from the following jumps
00:23:007 - rhythm in this measure should be identical to the previous with the exception of the triple at 00:23:666 - as you should be consistant with your rhythm ideas/concepts.
00:25:974 (3,4) - spacing should be noticeably higher then the last two circles.
00:26:963 (1) - 5 point wave sliders look nicer with a red point in the center.
00:26:304 (1) - change to two circles and stack on 00:26:469 (2) - to emphasis the first 3 1/4s differently.
00:26:963 (1) - extended slider usage here so that you can place a 1/2 on 00:27:293 - instead of giving 00:27:458 (2) - more emphasis when its clearly weaker.
00:28:776 (3,4,5) - crt g rhythm then fix the composition as the triple at 00:28:941 - should be emphasised basically backwards version of 00:26:304 -
00:44:106 (1,2) - visually spacing too close
00:59:271 (3,4,5) - crt g rhythm
01:00:425 (3,4) - ^ and 1/2 slider at 01:00:919 - then the rhytm will emphasis the vocals instead of nothing.
01:05:452 (2) - basically an overmap also 01:05:864 - 1/2 slider here.
01:14:765 (2,3) - NC
Topic Starter
Shapy

ikorza wrote:

from modreqs hope the rhythm suggestions help.

Extra

00:02:403 (3) - increase spacing for emphasis Ok
00:03:227 (1) - not enough spacing when the sound is strong. visual spacing also looks awkward compared to previously place objects so increase the spacing. Want too keep this blancket but you're right change it
00:04:875 (1,4,5) - crt g rhythm Change that
00:05:782 (6) - overmap is fine for emphasis if thats what you want to do though do it here aswell 00:07:100 - Delete the triple here so i don't apply this change
00:05:864 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:07:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - rhythm should be the same idk i don't want too just copy past this rhytm here is boring to play in my sense
00:10:480 - slider here to emphasis vocal and that 00:10:644 (2) - a slider end is over this instead. Ok
00:13:776 (1,2,3) - white ticks should be emphasised so just do 1/2 sliders Ok
00:16:414 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - rhythm here doesnt work well as white ticks should be emphasised again and its not consistant with previous rhythms like 00:11:139 (1,2,3) - or 00:12:458 (1,2,3,4,5) - Like i said just copy past a same thing is boring
00:18:721 (7) - 1/2 slider since 00:18:886 (8) - is weak and takes away emphasis from the following jumps Ok
00:23:007 - rhythm in this measure should be identical to the previous with the exception of the triple at 00:23:666 - as you should be consistant with your rhythm ideas/concepts. Make mistake here gonna change this part later (yeah i'm lazy)
00:25:974 (3,4) - spacing should be noticeably higher then the last two circles. Ok
00:26:963 (1) - 5 point wave sliders look nicer with a red point in the center. Ok
00:26:304 (1) - change to two circles and stack on 00:26:469 (2) - to emphasis the first 3 1/4s differently. Change that
00:26:963 (1) - extended slider usage here so that you can place a 1/2 on 00:27:293 - instead of giving 00:27:458 (2) - more emphasis when its clearly weaker. Ok
00:28:776 (3,4,5) - crt g rhythm then fix the composition as the triple at 00:28:941 - should be emphasised basically backwards version of 00:26:304 - Ok
00:44:106 (1,2) - visually spacing too close Don't think so
00:59:271 (3,4,5) - crt g rhythm Ok
01:00:425 (3,4) - ^ and 1/2 slider at 01:00:919 - then the rhytm will emphasis the vocals instead of nothing. Not a big fan of that
01:05:452 (2) - basically an overmap also 01:05:864 - 1/2 slider here. delete this note and add 1/2 sliders
01:14:765 (2,3) - NC Ok
Thanks for your mod !
polka


[General:]
  • SVs were a tad fast.


[Easy:]
  • 00:17:073 (2,3) - blanket
    [list:1337]01:06:194 (2,3) -
    01:23:007 (2,3) -

00:19:051 (1) - This plays better. (3) is optional.
00:42:787 - Remove SV change, as beginners can't read them.
00:50:699 (1) - flip so curve is upside down to improve flow.
00:59:930 (3) - This slider has showed up a few times and rally serves no purpose, as it doesn't highlight anything in the music and nothing is ever blanketed by it. I strongly suggest you simplify the shape to help beginners out.

[Normal:]

  • 00:20:040 (1) - Waves for these kind of sliders look better and make more sense in terms of the song.
    00:21:029 (2) - Put a circle after because the gap is awkward and hard to read, additionally, it'll capture the vocal.
    00:42:128 (6) - 1/2 repeat slider does better.
    [list:1337]01:13:941 (3,4) -

00:42:787 - Again with SV changes in early difficulties.
00:45:095 (4,1) - Blanket
00:52:183 (1,2) - Tough pattern for normal players. use repeat slider.
01:10:480 (1,2,3) - These patterns are really hard to play for normal players, plus the circle after, this is overkill. Make 01:10:974 (2,3) - A 1/1 slider to match vocals.
  • 01:11:798 (1,2,3,4) -
    01:23:996 (5,6,7,1) - Make 01:23:666 (4) - a 1/1 slider and 01:24:326 - .

[Hard:]

  • 00:16:414 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved.
    00:24:326 (1) - Kind of unsightly. A simple wave would work.
    00:49:216 (4) - Sound in song this is mapping is so minor, this pattern is awkward to play. I would just delete this.
    00:50:699 (1,2) - These bow sliders dont work if the tail is covered. Remap.
    00:52:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is mapped very strangely and really didnt fit. Felt forced. Perhaps stick to the music here and not the vocals?
    01:01:908 (3,4,5,1) - Confusing. Remove these overlaps.
    01:07:183 (3,4) - More space between these would look better.
    [list:1337]01:18:721 (3,4) -

01:17:073 (1,2,3) - Fix spacing.
01:21:029 (1,2) - Stack like youve done with every other pause.
01:26:304 (1) - Simplify to wave, as this shape doesn't look very good.

[Afteword:]

  • smol. Gl gl!~
Topic Starter
Shapy

PolkaMocha wrote:



[General:]
  • SVs were a tad fast. For this bpm is not that fast in my sense


[Easy:]
  • 00:17:073 (2,3) - blanket euh... it's already blanket
    [list:1337]01:06:194 (2,3) - Not going to blanket that
    01:23:007 (2,3) - Ok for this one

00:19:051 (1) - [img]blob:http://imgur.com/14661b9d-0824-45d5-b535-dd790bd8e762[/img] This plays better. (3) is optional. Your screen link dosen't work so idk what you want me too change :c
00:42:787 - Remove SV change, as beginners can't read them. This not the first time i saw those slider with low SV in this type of diff and for me it's perfectly readable (if some people ask me too change it again i reconsider it)
00:50:699 (1) - flip so curve is upside down to improve flow. Ok
00:59:930 (3) - This slider has showed up a few times and rally serves no purpose, as it doesn't highlight anything in the music and nothing is ever blanketed by it. I strongly suggest you simplify the shape to help beginners out. I simplify this slider but i'm not going to blanket it (and i follow the song here in case you didn't pay attention)

[Normal:]

  • 00:20:040 (1) - Waves for these kind of sliders look better and make more sense in terms of the song. Make it better
    00:21:029 (2) - Put a circle after because the gap is awkward and hard to read, additionally, it'll capture the vocal. Ok
    00:42:128 (6) - 1/2 repeat slider does better. Can't repeat 1/2 slider here
    [list:1337]01:13:941 (3,4) - For here i just don't like it

00:42:787 - Again with SV changes in early difficulties. Same as i explain earlier and this time for a normal it's perfectly fine
00:45:095 (4,1) - Blanket Blanket better here
00:52:183 (1,2) - Tough pattern for normal players. use repeat slider. Ok
01:10:480 (1,2,3) - These patterns are really hard to play for normal players, plus the circle after, this is overkill. Make 01:10:974 (2,3) - A 1/1 slider to match vocals.
  • 01:11:798 (1,2,3,4) -
    01:23:996 (5,6,7,1) - Make 01:23:666 (4) - a 1/1 slider and 01:24:326 - . Change all of this paterne

[Hard:]

  • 00:16:414 (1,2) - Blanket can be improved. A bit nazi but ok :')
    00:24:326 (1) - Kind of unsightly. A simple wave would work. Ok
    00:49:216 (4) - Sound in song this is mapping is so minor, this pattern is awkward to play. I would just delete this. This beat here is not that minor than that
    00:50:699 (1,2) - These bow sliders dont work if the tail is covered. Remap. Ok
    00:52:183 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - This is mapped very strangely and really didnt fit. Felt forced. Perhaps stick to the music here and not the vocals?
    01:01:908 (3,4,5,1) - Confusing. Remove these overlaps. Fix
    01:07:183 (3,4) - More space between these would look better. Ok
    [list:1337]01:18:721 (3,4) - Ok

01:17:073 (1,2,3) - Fix spacing. Fix
01:21:029 (1,2) - Stack like youve done with every other pause. Want too keep this blanket
01:26:304 (1) - Simplify to wave, as this shape doesn't look very good. Ok

[Afteword:]

  • smol. Gl gl!~
Thanks for your mod o/
polka
Image that didnt work: http://imgur.com/6g2LgsD

Sorry @-@
Topic Starter
Shapy

PolkaMocha wrote:

Image that didnt work: http://imgur.com/6g2LgsD

Sorry @-@
Apply this change so thank you :3
Kyuukai
wsh la famille

Easy
00:52:348 (2,3,4) - J'aurais CTRL+J car 00:50:699 (1) - pointe vers le bas, ça permettrait une meilleure transition pour le pattern

Normal
00:21:359 (3) - J'aurais plutôt delete cette note étant donné que tu mappe l'instrumental et non la voix sur la part d'après
00:38:502 (4,1) - tu peux blanket ici stuve
01:03:227 (5) - Je pense que tu devrais le décale plus vers la droite, la transition entre 01:02:568 (4,5) - fait vraiment "droit" comparé a ce que tu as fait avant

Mochi's Insane
00:37:182 (7,8,1) - The transition between the stream into the 8-1 jump feels uncomfortable to play because of the angle
00:39:491 (4,1) - RIP blanket
00:40:150 (1,3) - ^
01:06:524 (1,3,5) - ^
01:23:666 (1,4,1) - nazi overlap
01:27:375 (4,5,6) - !?????????????????
Topic Starter
Shapy

yaleufeu wrote:

wsh la famille

Easy
00:52:348 (2,3,4) - J'aurais CTRL+J car 00:50:699 (1) - pointe vers le bas, ça permettrait une meilleure transition pour le pattern
Ah oui en effet je prend du coup

Normal
00:21:359 (3) - J'aurais plutôt delete cette note étant donné que tu mappe l'instrumental et non la voix sur la part d'après Delete note
00:38:502 (4,1) - tu peux blanket ici stuve Je pensait que c'était déja blanket ptn j'suis aveugle x)
01:03:227 (5) - Je pense que tu devrais le décale plus vers la droite, la transition entre 01:02:568 (4,5) - fait vraiment "droit" comparé a ce que tu as fait avant Fix
Thanks pour le mod de qualité LIDL Kappa
xyrus HTT
CAN YOU MAKE THIS A RANKED BEATMAP PLZ :D:idea:
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