[General]
Maybe Oni should be OD/HP 5.5? To differentiate more from muzu. I feel it has some complex parts, which could lead to miss/mash or whatever.
[No Regret]
00:26:210 - 00:27:600 - These SV were misleading, and lead me to miss a few times. I think they should be done away with or replaced with a flat SV, because it looks like its ddK, when it is coming at you during game.
00:45:909 - 00:48:002 - The random parts throughout here seems so arbitrary, you should again probably keep this to something simple rather than random.
01:02:479 - This area has similar problems.
01:18:382 - I think this should just accelerate slowly, no deceleration. It looks more difficult than it is.
02:01:130 - This stream should be similar to the one before because it is the same sound and rather, it still unique because it has an extended length. So like kdkkdd.
02:06:727 - I kinda like if you do like d dkk kkd dkk kkd kkd, instead of what is there currently. It allows you too to add the sv to the first note of 3, rather than in an awkward place.
02:08:645 - This could be more linear, and fit the music a little better. kk(dddk)dkd(kkkd), I believe plays a little better and fits the music as well.
[Oni]
00:26:210 - 00:28:294 - Similar to No Regret, I feel like this misleads and makes it look like dK.
01:52:758 - 02:02:525 - I think these should all be inverse of each other, so like, ddkkd, kkddk, kkkkd, ddddk. It certainly sounds less harsh and isnt quite as hard.
[Muzukashii]
00:38:758 - This sound is a bit different than the ones before, so consider just normal d? or D.
00:42:944 - D kkk, D kkk, D kkk k d? I'm not sure about this 00:45:037 - part tho. I think it'd be ok to alternate, so in 01:02:479 - it does it as well, but not in 00:51:316 -
00:46:607 (168,173) - Remove? I think they feel a little too much.
01:19:270 - This whole kiai feels like it is missing a lot but has too much 1/4 in unnecessary places, such as 01:21:711 - 01:24:502 - 01:27:990 - 01:30:083 -
I think you should fill it with more 1/2, instead of 1/4. This is at your discretion, because simply I would ruin your whole kiai if I give my full mod on it.
I quite liked Oni.
Maybe Oni should be OD/HP 5.5? To differentiate more from muzu. I feel it has some complex parts, which could lead to miss/mash or whatever.
[No Regret]
00:26:210 - 00:27:600 - These SV were misleading, and lead me to miss a few times. I think they should be done away with or replaced with a flat SV, because it looks like its ddK, when it is coming at you during game.
00:45:909 - 00:48:002 - The random parts throughout here seems so arbitrary, you should again probably keep this to something simple rather than random.
01:02:479 - This area has similar problems.
01:18:382 - I think this should just accelerate slowly, no deceleration. It looks more difficult than it is.
02:01:130 - This stream should be similar to the one before because it is the same sound and rather, it still unique because it has an extended length. So like kdkkdd.
02:06:727 - I kinda like if you do like d dkk kkd dkk kkd kkd, instead of what is there currently. It allows you too to add the sv to the first note of 3, rather than in an awkward place.
02:08:645 - This could be more linear, and fit the music a little better. kk(dddk)dkd(kkkd), I believe plays a little better and fits the music as well.
[Oni]
00:26:210 - 00:28:294 - Similar to No Regret, I feel like this misleads and makes it look like dK.
01:52:758 - 02:02:525 - I think these should all be inverse of each other, so like, ddkkd, kkddk, kkkkd, ddddk. It certainly sounds less harsh and isnt quite as hard.
[Muzukashii]
00:38:758 - This sound is a bit different than the ones before, so consider just normal d? or D.
00:42:944 - D kkk, D kkk, D kkk k d? I'm not sure about this 00:45:037 - part tho. I think it'd be ok to alternate, so in 01:02:479 - it does it as well, but not in 00:51:316 -
00:46:607 (168,173) - Remove? I think they feel a little too much.
01:19:270 - This whole kiai feels like it is missing a lot but has too much 1/4 in unnecessary places, such as 01:21:711 - 01:24:502 - 01:27:990 - 01:30:083 -
I think you should fill it with more 1/2, instead of 1/4. This is at your discretion, because simply I would ruin your whole kiai if I give my full mod on it.
I quite liked Oni.