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AiRI - Towa ni Saku Hana (short ver.)

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KantanDez
255 posts
Joined February 2015
KantanDez
from my modding queue requested by joker
w

To all
also add the finish hitsound on 00:00:443 to 00:01:390 and 00:02:969 to 00:03:916 [and so on] because it has the same sound and it feels weird when you play with the same sound yet different hitsound

Normal
00:03:916 (3) - a reverse here definitely fits better https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/VlVVkn8.jpg i moved those 4 objects and also adjusted 00:05:495 (1)
(i moved 00:02:969 (1) 's start to the exact same place as the first object of the diff)
00:15:600 (1,2,3,4) - make 1 and 3 the same slider but ctrl j 3 because it has the same sound as 1 and it is visually appealing
00:38:337 (1,2) - make it a 1/1 slider instead
00:39:600 (3) - 2 hit circles feels more fitting on this part (on both vocal and instrumental)

Hard
01:36:443 (1,2,3) - sliders should start on beats because a strong sound that's unclickable ruins the rhythm(game)

01:44:021 - same as above (adjust the slider's position[timing] to the beats [just swap the hit circle and the slider's timing position] w ) dont forget to fix the hit sounds too
02:11:811 (1) - this pattern fits better https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/kB5qwln.png

Insane
00:51:443 (2,3) - make these a 1/1 slider instead
01:38:337 (3,4) - switch positions for better flow
02:02:969 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl z each of them individually this is too confusing for a 3.7 star map [or remap that part]

Eternity
01:00:364 (5) - remove this or maybe remap it to make the distance not so far

good map
good luck on ranking :D
msg me if you want more info w
Toyosaki Aki
337 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Toyosaki Aki

KantanDez wrote:

from my modding queue requested by joker
w

To all
also add the finish hitsound on 00:00:443 to 00:01:390 and 00:02:969 to 00:03:916 [and so on] because it has the same sound and it feels weird when you play with the same sound yet different hitsound I've thought many finishes are noisy a bit but you are right, added on there and 00:05:495 to 00:19:074.

Normal
00:03:916 (3) - a reverse here definitely fits better https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/VlVVkn8.jpg i moved those 4 objects and also adjusted 00:05:495 (1)
(i moved 00:02:969 (1) 's start to the exact same place as the first object of the diff) exactly. fixed
00:15:600 (1,2,3,4) - make 1 and 3 the same slider but ctrl j 3 because it has the same sound as 1 and it is visually appealing fixed
00:38:337 (1,2) - make it a 1/1 slider instead fixed
00:39:600 (3) - 2 hit circles feels more fitting on this part (on both vocal and instrumental) fixed

Eternity
01:00:364 (5) - remove this or maybe remap it to make the distance not so far removed

good map
good luck on ranking :D thanks, I'll try :3
msg me if you want more info w
all fixed w
thanks for modding :)
Chihara Minori
1,235 posts
Joined December 2013
Chihara Minori
sorry out of schedule!
falling asleep while study last nigh
maybe this wont really help since I'm quite sure that my quality of modding has decreased

General

try to check the timing points, theres some issues such unsnapped privew point and unused at normal. try to check all diff instead for the finest

  • Easy

  1. 01:16:232 (1,2) - blanket
  2. 01:17:179 (2) - this shape still can be polished actually by adding a red point at middle and rearang to make perfect wave
  3. 01:31:390 (1,2) - considering you make a gap there this flow actually a bit sharp than its looks like, move around x 324 y 84?
  4. 01:47:653 (3) - make the curve up instead of down to give a click with (4)
    the here actually some blanket that still can be polished, but since its not a big deal ill just say it out
    and then theres another thing that bother me. yes the overlaps. considering its easy diff, theres will be "more" swift if you apply same size ofoverlap since you use lots of it
    for example 00:07:074 (3,1) - this about 2/3, but this one 01:13:074 (3,1) - become more than 2/4

  • Normal

  1. 01:09:758 - you miss vocal here
  2. 01:13:074 (4,2) - hmm
  3. 01:40:232 (1,2) - remake this slider and prolly you can make some creative blanket with (3)
  4. 02:02:653 (3) - move it down abount 4 grid
    still same for the blanket

  • Hard

  1. 00:04:548 (3) - move it up around 5 grid, since the earlier rhytm applyment is come with low transtition between slider
  2. 00:14:495 (2,3) - move down 2~3 grid
  3. 00:21:758 - hard is basically vocal based right? you missed one here, try ctrl+g rhytm (3,4)
  4. 00:25:074 (4,5,1) - this hold is unnes=ccesary since the vocal keep flowing there
  5. 00:31:864 - same as earlier, same suggestion
  6. 00:37:706 - even theres no vocal there it still worth for mapped, why? first its mayor beat, second a bit strong beat
  7. 00:40:074 (4,1) - can this just stacked perfectly?
  8. 00:52:864 (5) - move to left 4 grid
  9. 01:00:127 (4,5) - another unnecesary hold
  10. 01:21:285 (1) - since you make a gap move nc to (2)
  11. 01:22:864 (2,3,4) - dont know how this flow works
  12. 01:27:916 (1) - move nc to (2) as well
  13. 01:59:811 (3) - this part followed by uptone the vocal which will be more reasonable to sparate it instead
    still same for blanket
    and theres some unconsistant ds chance during the important part such of kiai or uptone part, try to testplay this diff by yourself and quite sure youll figure out what i mean

  • Insane

  1. 00:21:758 - same as hard
  2. 00:29:811 (1) - thanks for trap
  3. 00:41:811 (3,2) - ugly overlap
  4. 00:52:548 (2) - delete this circle and move (3) to this current timing point, so there will be a gap after
  5. 00:56:969 (4,3) - overlap again
  6. 01:03:285 (1) - out it at x 116 y 92
  7. 01:12:285 (1,2) - crtl+g for (1) direction and move (2) at the start of previous (1)
  8. 01:20:969 (4) - ctrl+g
  9. 01:23:495 (5,2) - move (5) and stack properly with (2)
  10. 01:23:811 (1,1) - stack as well
  11. 01:25:864 (4,5) - ctrl+g for giving reading that gap, that hold is weird
  12. 01:26:653 (2) - ctrl+g
  13. 01:33:758 (6) - stack this with (1) instead and make sure you readjust (5) so there will be same ds
  14. 01:37:074 (3) - false hold
  15. 01:48:916 (4) - stack it or unstack, please decided
  16. 02:01:548 (7) - stack at start (1)
    tbh this diff have weird hs
best of luck for you
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Eir_DELETED

Ohwow wrote:

joker's Insane
01:29:495 (2) - right now this slider is point a bit below the next circle, you should rotate it counterclockwise a bit so that it points the next circle so it has a better circular flow i dont need to have to fix this point if BN point out one, i'll fix

KantanDez wrote:

Hard
02:11:811 (1) - this pattern fits better https://imgur-archive.ppy.sh/kB5qwln.png i dont need to have to fix this point if BN point out one, i'll fix

Insane
00:51:443 (2,3) - make these a 1/1 slider instead No I'm following on vocal
02:02:969 (1,2,3,4) - ctrl z each of them individually this is too confusing for a 3.7 star map [or remap that part] I REALLY want to use flower's slider art, so the flow is make clearly understandable、I think that need it

Time Capsule wrote:

  • Hard

  1. 00:04:548 (3) - move it up around 5 grid, since the earlier rhytm applyment is come with low transtition between slider ? i dont need to change it
  2. 00:14:495 (2,3) - move down 2~3 grid same
  3. 00:25:074 (4,5,1) - this hold is unnes=ccesary since the vocal keep flowing there I dont know why i shouldnt stack them
  4. 00:40:074 (4,1) - can this just stacked perfectly? I stack them perfectly
  5. 00:52:864 (5) - move to left 4 grid why? i think it's no problem now
  6. 01:00:127 (4,5) - another unnecesary hold No, 01:00:443 (6) - sound should emphasize than 01:00:443 (6) - . No change
  7. 01:21:285 (1) - since you make a gap move nc to (2) wtf NC point is correct
  8. 01:22:864 (2,3,4) - dont know how this flow works I dont know what is problem, just my style
  9. 01:27:916 (1) - move nc to (2) as well same as above about NC point
    and theres some unconsistant ds chance during the important part such of kiai or uptone part, try to testplay this diff by yourself and quite sure youll figure out what i mean お前の名前控えたからな

  • Insane

  1. 00:29:811 (1) - thanks for trap wat? you dont know it put on 00:28:232 (1,2,3) - slider tale's center?
  2. 00:52:548 (2) - delete this circle and move (3) to this current timing point, so there will be a gap after Listen carefully the song, 00:52:706 - strong piano sound in here. I take basically piano sounds on this song
  3. 01:03:285 (1) - out it at x 116 y 92 how come?
  4. 01:12:285 (1,2) - crtl+g for (1) direction and move (2) at the start of previous (1) I think better now than your opinion
  5. 01:20:969 (4) - ctrl+g are you seriously? I shouldnt be more distance on part
  6. 01:25:864 (4,5) - ctrl+g for giving reading that gap, that hold is weird ???
  7. 01:26:653 (2) - ctrl+g no
  8. 01:33:758 (6) - stack this with (1) instead and make sure you readjust (5) so there will be same ds you dont listen strong cymbal sound?
  9. 01:37:074 (3) - false hold ...
  10. 01:48:916 (4) - stack it or unstack, please decided WHY DO I HAVE TO STACK OR UNSTACK PERFECTLY
  11. 02:01:548 (7) - stack at start (1) you dont listen strong cymbal sound?
    tbh this diff have weird hs if you feel so that, why didnt you mod about it? In case you dont have enough time about it, whenever I'm waiting for your opinion
best of luck for you
Except above points fixed
thx for mod all guys

更新よろ
https://puu.sh/sDCCL/f4803ba7d9.osu
https://puu.sh/sDCDW/b490f9b2ed.osu
Toyosaki Aki
337 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Toyosaki Aki

Time Capsule wrote:

sorry out of schedule!
falling asleep while study last nigh Thanks for your time;;
maybe this wont really help since I'm quite sure that my quality of modding has decreased

General

try to check the timing points, theres some issues such unsnapped privew point and unused at normal. try to check all diff instead for the finest you can find that preview point is snapped when you use 1/6 beatsnap

  • Normal

  1. 01:09:758 - you miss vocal here keep. picking vocal up is to be a bit complex. I follwed drum's sounds here
  2. 01:13:074 (4,2) - hmm Is there something wrong?
  3. 01:40:232 (1,2) - remake this slider and prolly you can make some creative blanket with (3) that's good idea I think. but I can't come up with any good blanket...
  4. 02:02:653 (3) - move it down abount 4 grid fixed
    still same for the blanket

best of luck for you
thanks for modding :D
Chihara Minori
1,235 posts
Joined December 2013
Chihara Minori
I hate myself for not being able to be usefull here.
Either I'll ask bn to denied that kds soon or refix the way I mod it
Silky
766 posts
Joined October 2014
Silky
SPOILER
osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 77762
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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[Editor]
DistanceSpacing: 1
BeatDivisor: 2
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 1.1

[Metadata]
Title:Towa ni Saku Hana (short ver.)
TitleUnicode:永遠に咲く花 (short ver.)
Artist:AiRI
ArtistUnicode:AiRI
Creator:Toyosaki Aki
Version:Kanau's Easy
Source:枯れない世界と終わる花
Tags:joker- Mamayu fuyuyu- Karenai Sekai to Owaru Hana SWEET&TEA eroge opening
BeatmapID:1138189
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20,252,69758,2,0,P|29:178|53:93,1,132
123,86,70548,2,0,P|168:98|235:105,1,87.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
289,138,71179,6,0,P|334:125|401:119,1,87.9999999999999,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
458,148,71811,2,0,P|462:115|404:35,2,132,8|8|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
396,210,73074,2,0,P|401:253|416:315,1,87.9999999999999,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
477,354,73706,6,0,P|395:326|308:356,1,176,14|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
231,384,74653,1,0,1:0:0:0:
160,331,74969,2,0,P|165:290|179:234,1,87.9999999999999,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
246,192,75600,2,0,P|241:151|227:95,1,87.9999999999999,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
169,39,76232,6,0,P|105:29|46:55,1,132,14|14,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
122,163,77179,2,0,B|266:207|220:113|389:163,1,264,14|4,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
501,286,78758,6,0,P|421:267|331:326,1,176,12|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
280,373,79706,1,0,0:0:0:0:
192,382,80021,2,0,P|121:352|94:260,1,176,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
139,187,80969,1,8,0:0:0:0:
77,123,81285,6,0,P|108:105|184:109,1,87.9999999999999,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
223,161,81916,2,0,P|248:92|207:27,2,132,0|8|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
139,187,83179,1,0,1:0:0:0:
128,274,83495,1,0,0:0:0:0:
205,315,83811,6,0,P|297:302|381:353,1,176,12|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
472,257,84916,2,0,P|443:196|456:118,1,132,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,46,85706,2,0,P|409:49|349:55,1,87.9999999999999,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
296,87,86337,6,0,P|241:89|190:73,1,87.9999999999999,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,113,86969,2,0,P|61:93|-12:110,2,132,0|12|8,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
195,167,88232,1,0,1:0:0:0:
148,241,88548,1,0,1:0:0:0:
214,298,88864,6,0,P|257:289|300:292,1,87.9999999999999,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
372,241,89495,2,0,P|354:309|360:379,2,132,0|8|0,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
448,196,90758,2,0,P|434:149|429:89,1,87.9999999999999,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
465,30,91390,6,0,P|405:72|333:68,1,132,8|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,51,92179,1,8,0:0:0:0:
181,15,92495,2,0,P|221:84|204:169,1,132,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
175,210,93285,1,0,1:0:0:0:
89,191,93600,1,0,1:0:0:0:
18,243,93916,6,0,P|21:290|33:334,1,87.9999999999999,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
115,355,94548,1,0,1:0:0:0:
236,304,95021,2,0,P|307:296|374:345,1,132,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
435,367,95811,2,0,P|441:318|459:253,1,87.9999999999999,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
394,211,96443,6,0,P|388:162|370:97,1,87.9999999999999,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
337,46,97074,2,0,P|399:39|453:79,2,132,0|12|8,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
281,114,98337,2,0,P|236:108|178:83,1,87.9999999999999,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,41,98969,6,0,P|140:146|89:229,1,176,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,306,100232,2,0,P|297:300|348:299,1,87.9999999999999,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
422,337,100864,2,0,P|428:288|441:220,1,87.9999999999999,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
482,176,101495,6,0,P|382:66|412:200,1,352,12|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
35,100,104021,6,0,L|79:96|145:90,1,87.9999999999999,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
188,155,104653,2,0,P|179:91|230:16,2,132,0|12|8,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,237,105916,2,0,P|231:280|228:323,1,87.9999999999999,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
155,371,106548,6,0,P|106:365|58:347,1,87.9999999999999,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
3,294,107179,1,0,1:0:0:0:
58,174,107653,2,0,P|121:173|203:147,1,132,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
270,126,108443,2,0,P|263:82|253:23,1,87.9999999999999,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
339,10,109074,6,0,P|345:53|356:113,1,87.9999999999999,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
387,178,109706,2,0,P|458:151|524:171,2,132,0|12|8,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
326,241,110969,2,0,P|276:239|219:213,1,87.9999999999999,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
162,185,111600,6,0,P|164:142|173:88,1,87.9999999999999,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
190,11,112232,1,0,1:0:0:0:
58,23,112706,2,0,P|55:96|45:177,1,132,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
0,228,113495,1,0,1:0:0:0:
49,300,113811,1,0,1:0:0:0:
131,269,114127,6,0,P|172:272|231:286,1,87.9999999999999,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
288,228,114758,2,0,P|272:293|266:375,2,132,0|12|8,1:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
353,169,116021,2,0,P|348:126|331:65,1,87.9999999999999,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
262,35,116653,6,0,P|218:43|160:51,1,87.9999999999999,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
87,58,117285,1,0,1:0:0:0:
1,158,117758,2,0,P|62:201|128:188,1,132,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
192,151,118548,1,0,1:0:0:0:
242,223,118864,1,0,1:0:0:0:
328,207,119179,6,0,P|368:200|419:196,1,87.9999999999999,12|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
481,254,119811,2,0,P|505:191|451:117,2,132,0|12|0,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
425,322,121074,2,0,P|384:315|334:311,1,87.9999999999999,0|8,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
276,243,121706,6,0,P|247:301|266:363,2,132,12|12|4,0:0|0:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
357,210,122969,1,12,0:0:0:0:
351,122,123285,1,0,1:0:0:0:
265,102,123600,2,0,B|172:135|190:72|85:102,1,176,8|12,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,124390,12,2,129285,0:0:0:0:
256,192,129443,12,4,134179,0:0:0:0:
Toyosaki Aki
337 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Toyosaki Aki

Time Capsule wrote:

I hate myself for not being able to be usefull here.
Either I'll ask bn to denied that kds soon or refix the way I mod it
denying kds is not necessary I think. at least all mods are good for me and yours is no exception.
thank you anyway :3
Meg
1,617 posts
Joined August 2012
Meg
シバくで
Eternity

  1. 00:06:127 (3,4) - これどう見ても1/2が２つ続いてるようにしか見えないからそれまでの00:01:074 (3,4) - こういう感じに密着させたほうがいい。あと00:06:127 (3) - これの曲げる点が歪になるようになってるから曲げ直そう
  2. 00:09:758 - 多分ここは拾わない方がこのパートの音取り的に合う。拾うにしてもこういう横に広げる配置じゃなくてスライダーのケツになる程度がいい
  3. 00:19:706 (1) - 始点を00:19:548 - にした1/1スライダーにしよう
  4. 00:20:653 (5) - ここのチンって音いらなくない？個人的には00:20:021 (2) - につけてこの(5)には付けないようにしたほうがパートの区切りとして良くなると思う
  5. 00:20:969 - ここからのパート、whistleのつけ方がイマイチ理解できなかったからピアノが鳴ってるところだけに入れてみたら？00:21:600 - 00:23:179 - 00:23:653 - 00:24:127 - 00:25:706 - 00:26:653 - 00:28:232 - 00:28:706 - 00:29:179 - 00:30:758 - 00:31:706 - 00:33:285 - 00:33:758 - 00:34:232 - 00:35:811 - (ここは拾ってないから捨てるしかないかも) 00:36:758 - 00:37:074 - (ここも捨ててますね･･･) 00:37:548 - (ここもっすね･･･) 00:38:021 - 00:38:337 -
  6. 00:35:179 (2,3) - 近いと思う。「かっ"""ぜ"""～に"""ゆ～"""られ～」って感じだしここも00:34:864 (1,2) - と同じくらい離したほうがいいかも
  7. 00:41:811 (1,2) - 音付け逆だな～。ピアノ的には(1)にwhistleが来て(2)には何もつけない。(多分vocalの雰囲気で音付けたんだろうなと思う)
  8. 00:42:600 - 00:42:916 - add whistle
  9. 00:43:074 - remove clap 鳴ってないわよ
  10. 00:43:390 - add clap
  11. 00:43:864 - スネア鳴ってるのでSampleset-Normal, んでピアノもなってるしAdditions-softでwhistleだね
  12. 00:44:337 - add whistle+clap
  13. 00:44:653 - Sampleset-Drumで合うかもしれない
  14. 00:44:969 - ピアンノ鳴ってるしadd whistle
  15. 00:45:285 - Additions-softでwhistle
  16. 00:46:548 - remove whistle
  17. 00:47:495 - 00:47:653 - 00:47:969 - add whistle
  18. 00:48:443 - add finish
  19. 00:48:916 - Sampleset-Normal, Additions-softでwhistle
  20. 00:49:706 - Sampleset-Drum
  21. 00:50:021 - 00:50:179 - 00:50:495 - add whistle
  22. 00:50:653 - Sampleset-Drum, Addtions-softでwhistle
  23. 00:51:600 - remove whistle
  24. 00:51:916 - add whistle
  25. 00:52:706 - ^
  26. 00:53:021 - ^
  27. 00:53:495 - add clap
  28. 00:53:969 - Sampleset-Normal, Additions-softでwhistle
  29. 00:54:443 - add clap
  30. 00:54:758 - Sampleset-Drum
  31. 00:55:074 - add whistle
  32. 00:55:390 - Additions-softでwhistle
  33. 00:55:706 - add whistle
  34. 00:56:021 - ここの音めっちゃ拾いたい。1/2スライダーにしてケツにadd whistle+clapしたい
  35. 00:57:127 - add whistle
  36. 00:57:600 - remove clap, Sampleset-Drum
  37. 00:58:232 - remove clap, Sampleset-Drum
  38. 00:58:548 - add finish
  39. 00:58:864 - Sampleset-Drum
  40. 00:59:021 - add clap
  41. 00:59:653 - ここSampleset-Drumがいい。Additionsいらない
  42. 01:00:127 - add clap
  43. 01:00:443 - 01:00:600 - 01:00:758 - ここ全部Sampleset-Normalでいいかな
  44. 01:04:232 - remove whistle
  45. 01:04:864 - remove clap, add whistle
  46. 01:05:179 - remove clap
  47. 01:05:495 - add whistle
  48. 01:06:600 - ここからのパートもピアノ鳴ってるとこだけにwhistle付けるようにしたらどうかね
  49. 01:07:232 (4,5) - 大して音も強くないのに遠すぎる。見た目重視よりも音に合わせるためになんとか近づけよう
  50. 01:08:337 (7,8,1) - なんか見た目微妙だしちょっと遠いし01:08:337 (7) - を01:08:653 (1) - の頭にスタックさせて01:08:495 (8) - を01:07:232 (4) - のケツにスタックさせる感じとかどう？
    SPOILER
  51. 01:11:179 - add whistle+clap
  52. 01:12:443 - remove whistle
  53. 01:13:074 - ^
  54. 01:15:916 - remove clap
  55. 01:18:127 - どこにシンバルの音が鳴っとんじゃけええええAdditions-Drumのfinishを付けろおおおお(オオガイジ)
  56. 01:30:916 - ここなんとなく音拾わずにこ下図の音取りにしてスタックさせたくない？曲に合うと思う
    SPOILER
  57. 02:00:758 (2,3,4) - う～ん難しいってわけじゃないんだけどここだけ異様に離れてる感じがして好ましくない感。02:00:758 (2) - をCtrl+Gしてみるのもいいかもね
  58. 02:13:390 (7,4) - ちょっとoverlapしててやだ。俺なら02:13:706 (1,2,3) - を正三角形にしてその真ん中に(4)を置くね
  59. NCがヤヴァイからちょっと今度説教するわ

腹減った
Toyosaki Aki
337 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Toyosaki Aki

Meg wrote:

シバくで
Eternity

  1. 00:06:127 (3,4) - これどう見ても1/2が２つ続いてるようにしか見えないからそれまでの00:01:074 (3,4) - こういう感じに密着させたほうがいい。あと00:06:127 (3) - これの曲げる点が歪になるようになってるから曲げ直そう
  2. 00:09:758 - 多分ここは拾わない方がこのパートの音取り的に合う。拾うにしてもこういう横に広げる配置じゃなくてスライダーのケツになる程度がいい
  3. 00:19:706 (1) - 始点を00:19:548 - にした1/1スライダーにしよう
  4. 00:20:653 (5) - ここのチンって音いらなくない？個人的には00:20:021 (2) - につけてこの(5)には付けないようにしたほうがパートの区切りとして良くなると思う
  5. 00:20:969 - ここからのパート、whistleのつけ方がイマイチ理解できなかったからピアノが鳴ってるところだけに入れてみたら？00:21:600 - 00:23:179 - 00:23:653 - 00:24:127 - 00:25:706 - 00:26:653 - 00:28:232 - 00:28:706 - 00:29:179 - 00:30:758 - 00:31:706 - 00:33:285 - 00:33:758 - 00:34:232 - 00:35:811 - (ここは拾ってないから捨てるしかないかも) 00:36:758 - 00:37:074 - (ここも捨ててますね･･･) 00:37:548 - (ここもっすね･･･) 00:38:021 - 00:38:337 -
  6. 00:35:179 (2,3) - 近いと思う。「かっ"""ぜ"""～に"""ゆ～"""られ～」って感じだしここも00:34:864 (1,2) - と同じくらい離したほうがいいかも
  7. 00:41:811 (1,2) - 音付け逆だな～。ピアノ的には(1)にwhistleが来て(2)には何もつけない。(多分vocalの雰囲気で音付けたんだろうなと思う)
  8. 00:42:600 - 00:42:916 - add whistle
  9. 00:43:074 - remove clap 鳴ってないわよ
  10. 00:43:390 - add clap
  11. 00:43:864 - スネア鳴ってるのでSampleset-Normal, んでピアノもなってるしAdditions-softでwhistleだね
  12. 00:44:337 - add whistle+clap
  13. 00:44:653 - Sampleset-Drumで合うかもしれない
  14. 00:44:969 - ピアンノ鳴ってるしadd whistle
  15. 00:45:285 - Additions-softでwhistle
  16. 00:46:548 - remove whistle
  17. 00:47:495 - 00:47:653 - 00:47:969 - add whistle
  18. 00:48:443 - add finish
  19. 00:48:916 - Sampleset-Normal, Additions-softでwhistle
  20. 00:49:706 - Sampleset-Drum
  21. 00:50:021 - 00:50:179 - 00:50:495 - add whistle
  22. 00:50:653 - Sampleset-Drum, Addtions-softでwhistle
  23. 00:51:600 - remove whistle
  24. 00:51:916 - add whistle
  25. 00:52:706 - ^
  26. 00:53:021 - ^
  27. 00:53:495 - add clap
  28. 00:53:969 - Sampleset-Normal, Additions-softでwhistle
  29. 00:54:443 - add clap
  30. 00:54:758 - Sampleset-Drum
  31. 00:55:074 - add whistle
  32. 00:55:390 - Additions-softでwhistle
  33. 00:55:706 - add whistle
  34. 00:56:021 - ここの音めっちゃ拾いたい。1/2スライダーにしてケツにadd whistle+clapしたい
  35. 00:57:127 - add whistle
  36. 00:57:600 - remove clap, Sampleset-Drum
  37. 00:58:232 - remove clap, Sampleset-Drum
  38. 00:58:548 - add finish
  39. 00:58:864 - Sampleset-Drum
  40. 00:59:021 - add clap
  41. 00:59:653 - ここSampleset-Drumがいい。Additionsいらない
  42. 01:00:127 - add clap
  43. 01:00:443 - 01:00:600 - 01:00:758 - ここ全部Sampleset-Normalでいいかな
  44. 01:04:232 - remove whistle
  45. 01:04:864 - remove clap, add whistle
  46. 01:05:179 - remove clap
  47. 01:05:495 - add whistle
  48. 01:06:600 - ここからのパートもピアノ鳴ってるとこだけにwhistle付けるようにしたらどうかね ずっとピアノ鳴りっぱなしな気がするから雰囲気で付け直してみた
  49. 01:07:232 (4,5) - 大して音も強くないのに遠すぎる。見た目重視よりも音に合わせるためになんとか近づけよう
  50. 01:08:337 (7,8,1) - なんか見た目微妙だしちょっと遠いし01:08:337 (7) - を01:08:653 (1) - の頭にスタックさせて01:08:495 (8) - を01:07:232 (4) - のケツにスタックさせる感じとかどう？ 01:07:232 (4,5) -近付けたから01:07:232 (4) - のケツにスタックするとやたら遠くなったからちょっと重ねた
    SPOILER
  51. 01:11:179 - add whistle+clap
  52. 01:12:443 - remove whistle
  53. 01:13:074 - ^
  54. 01:15:916 - remove clap
  55. 01:18:127 - どこにシンバルの音が鳴っとんじゃけええええAdditions-Drumのfinishを付けろおおおお(オオガイジ) ｷｴｴｴｴｴｴｴ
  56. 01:30:916 - ここなんとなく音拾わずにこ下図の音取りにしてスタックさせたくない？曲に合うと思う こういう音取り凄くすき
    SPOILER
  57. 02:00:758 (2,3,4) - う～ん難しいってわけじゃないんだけどここだけ異様に離れてる感じがして好ましくない感。02:00:758 (2) - をCtrl+Gしてみるのもいいかもね ひとまずCtrlGで あとで変えるかも
  58. 02:13:390 (7,4) - ちょっとoverlapしててやだ。俺なら02:13:706 (1,2,3) - を正三角形にしてその真ん中に(4)を置くね いいですね
  59. NCがヤヴァイからちょっと今度説教するわ おねがいします！

腹減った ペヤング食べたい
HSは全部その通りになおしました
配置に関してもほぼその通りに
めちゃくちゃ助かりましたありがとう :)
Meg
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Joined August 2012
Meg
お金とっていい？
Toyosaki Aki
337 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Toyosaki Aki
だめです('ω'乂)
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Time Capsule wrote:

I hate myself for not being able to be usefull here.
Either I'll ask bn to denied that kds soon or refix the way I mod it

I'm sorry, I did it in the heat of the moment. Your mod was useful for me, thank you! :)

Meg wrote:

お金とっていい？
とーんさんがお金払ってくれるらしいです、hitsound一部参考にした。ありがとう！
Akitoshi
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Akitoshi
osu!でお金を儲ける
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modding business
Toyosaki Aki
337 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Toyosaki Aki

Meg wrote:

お金とっていい？

Akitoshi wrote:

osu!でお金を儲ける

-lolist- wrote:

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Plush
60 posts
Joined August 2012
Plush
small mod from me ^^

[Kanau's Easy]
I can't mod this difficulty... sorry

[Normal]
This map flows really well!

[joker's Hard]
  1. I think AR 7.5 would fit better for this map, BPM is quite high at 190. I think circles are too many at AR7
  2. 00:10:864 (2,3) - it's a very different pattern from what is used before, players won't expect the twist. You should probably use the old pattern https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6742553 or create a spacing so that the players can read the circles more properly https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6742574
  3. The spacing between circles in the Kiai at this time 01:18:758 - 01:38:969 is considerably further than other parts of the map (0.8x to 1.0x, a 25% change), I would really suggest lowering the sv multiplier to fit more like other parts of the map at this kiai time, since the difficulty is Hard
[joker's Insane]
This map flows really well!

[Eternity]
  1. 01:38:337 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'm not a fan of this pattern, also the spacing might be hard, please consider using two reverse sliders! https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6742731
  2. 02:01:390 (5,1,2,3) - move 3 somewhere else?

Nah I can't mod a lot from this map, probably because it's mostly fine
Good luck, everyone! :)
Toyosaki Aki
337 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Toyosaki Aki

Garryanderson wrote:

small mod from me ^^
[Eternity]
  1. 01:38:337 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I'm not a fan of this pattern, also the spacing might be hard, please consider using two reverse sliders!
    ttps://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6742731
    I don't want to change this pattern unless a bn says. and I attach importance to appearance as well as readability.
  2. 02:01:390 (5,1,2,3) - move 3 somewhere else? yes, change. this was bad flow
Nah I can't mod a lot from this map, probably because it's mostly fine
Good luck, everyone! :)
thanks for modding :3
Beomsan
1,878 posts
Joined November 2013
Beomsan
from my queue, requested by joker-.
really beautiful song, I want to participate in this map but it seems I'm already late lol
*Unrankable issues (or important) *Highly Recommended *Suggestions
General
  1. There is no video on Kanau's difficulty.
  2. Unused hitsound:
    soft-hitclap10.wav
  3. https://youtu.be/ZRk1eMfqN6o official youtube link here. I have a question, Does the title require "(short ver.)"? I couldn't find the exact information. But kwan will answer. /me runs
Kanau's Easy
  1. 00:31:390 (2) - ok,, I know it's minor thing but blanket is a bit off now.
    10/10
Normal
  1. 00:03:600 (2,3) - this blanket is pretty off. this is a bit noticable so I pointed out.
  2. 00:30:443 - 00:30:600 - add sth here? feels quite empty to me. ofc There are sounds there.
    100/100
joker's Hard
  1. 00:22:864 (6,7,1,1,2) - lol You don't have to consider distance while giving up beauty. http://puu.sh/sJ7l5/8739264895.png
    394,281,23179,6,0,P|337:287|296:257,1,96,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    273,192,23653,2,0,P|296:139|345:118,1,96,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    409,130,24127,2,0,P|442:176|438:232,2,96,2|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  2. 00:33:284 (1,2,3) - ^
  3. 01:04:864 (1) - NC?
  4. The hitsounding of kiai time feels a bit strange imo. This is notable enough. (like 01:23:179 - this clap, 01:24:916 - 01:25:390 - normal sampleset and many more lol) How about copying from Eternity difficulty? Of course, you will need some modifications after that.
  5. 02:04:232 (1) - NC??
    cool
joker's Insane
  1. 00:35:653 (3) - How about not using the stack here? 00:35:653 - since I think this sound is pretty powerful.
  2. 01:11:811 (3) - it's quite noticable. Once this is inconvenient to play. And the transfer of meaning is uncertain. it means like You can make a clearly emphasized jump here. I think that if you want to emphasize this sound, it would be better to find another way.
  3. This shares the same problem as Hard difficulty. (kiai time hitsounding)
  4. 01:41:495 (4) - needs more increase distance here. The reason is very simple. The sound of this place is obviously strong.
  5. 01:40:232 (2) - 01:40:864 (3) - 01:41:495 (4) - NC for emphasis?
    02:04:232 (1) - 10000000000000000/1000000000000
Eternity
  1. I have nothing to say about this map. gj!
I was taking requests from novice mapper, but you guys are so good lol
hope this helped
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rollpan
54 posts
Joined August 2013
rollpan
MOD初心者なので的外れな意見あるかもです　ご容赦ください＞＜
[Kanau's Easy]
何も言えません 素晴らしいです

[Normal]
  1. 01:15:916 (3) - x.321, y.134に移動して 01:14:653 (1,2,3) で三角形を作った方が綺麗に見えると思います
[joker's Hard]
  1. 00:58:074 - ここから1/2スライダーで音拾ってもいいと思います
  2. 00:59:021 - この音取りとかどうでしょう
    img
  3. 01:08:495 (1) - 01:08:653 の音欲しくないですか？この前の単発を1/2スライダーか単発2個にして01:08:653 から1/1スライダー置いてみてはどうでしょう
  4. 01:12:285 (4) - 01:12:443 にスネアが鳴ってるので 単発→1/2スライダーの方がいいと思います
  5. 01:30:127 (1) - 01:30:285 のスネアと01:30:600 の音ガン無視しちゃってるので拾った方がいいと思います
    img
  6. 01:31:864 (2) - 01:32:021 にスネアが鳴ってるので1/2スライダーにするなりで拾った方がいいと思います
  7. 01:33:285 (4) - 01:33:758 ^
[joker's Insane]
  1. 00:46:390 - 音があるので00:46:232 (1) を1/2スライダーにするか赤線まで移動させた方がいいと思います
  2. 00:58:548 (5) - 00:59:021に音があるのでリバースではなく1/1スライダー→単発→1/1スライダーとかで拾った方がいいと思います
  3. 01:08:495 (1) - Hardと同じ 単発→1/1スライダーの方がいいと思います
  4. 01:20:021 (1) - 01:20:179 にスネアが鳴ってるので単発→1/2スライダーでいいと思います
  5. 01:21:600 (3) - 01:21:758 に音があるので1/2スライダーのリバースでいいと思います
  6. 01:24:285 (2,3) - 単発→1/2スライダーの方がやりやすいと思います
  7. 01:28:548 (6) - 01:28:706 にスネアが鳴ってるので1/2スライダー→単発でいいと思います
  8. 01:30:443 (5) - 01:30:600 に音があるので1/2スライダーにして01:30:758 に単発置いてもいいと思います　その場合01:30:916 の単発を消してみてもいいかもしれません
[Eternity]
  1. 00:51:285 (1) - 00:51:443 に音があるので1/2スライダーでいいと思います(見にくかったです)
  2. 01:00:285 - ここから3連打の強い音が鳴ってるので3連打を入れてもいいかもしれません
  3. 01:40:074 - NC?
ぐっどらっく！
KSHR
Global Moderator
1,668 posts
Joined July 2010
KSHR
お約束どおり来ました

[General]
  1. UR@N名義の譜面がrankedにいくつかあるのでUR@Nの方もTagsに追加。

[Kanau’s Easy]
  1. 01:31:390 (1,2) -(2)前後の赤線でドラムの音がなるからか、(1)終わりでボーカルの強音を取っているからか、 ここだけちょっと音取りがぎこちない気がしました。
    (2)を消して(1)を01:32:021 - まで延ばすほうが自分には自然に聴こえるますがどうでしょう。
  2. 01:38:969 (1) - 終点の音が少し目立っている気がするので、問題のない程度に音量を下げてみてもいいかもしれません。
  3. 01:41:495 (1) - こちらも同じく。

[Normal]
  1. 00:04:864 (4) - whistleの付け忘れ？
  2. 00:20:653 (5,1) - メロディーの変わり目を考えるとnc入れ替えの方が合うと思います
  3. 00:20:653 (5) - から00:40:232 (4) - までのヒットサウンドについて、00:23:179 (5) - のようにガッツリとピアノの音をフォローしていたりすると綺麗だと思うんですが、そういうところ以外にも追加してしまうと静かなメロディーの割りにwhistleの量が多くなってうるさく聴こえてしまうので、あえてヒットサウンドを控えめにしておいたほうが曲にあって綺麗でいいと思います。
  4. 00:28:232 (6,7) - (6)のスライダーの終わりの位置からボーカルが伸びていること、(7)のスライダーの始点が特にどの音もフォローしていないこと、この2つのせいで音取りが少し変に聴こえます。
    やや誤魔化した感が出てしまいますが、画像の音取りのように(6)の返しを削除＆長めのスライダー追加の方が違和感がないと思います。
  5. 00:45:916 (1) - 終わりの位置をボーカル重視で次の白線の00:46:548 - まで伸ばしたほうが自分には自然に聴こえました。
  6. 00:59:653 (3,4,5) - (3)の終わりとその後の単発2つからwhistleを削除してドラムを目立たせた方が格好良く聴こえました。
  7. 01:08:337 (4) - この手前の01:08:021 - にあるドラムの音がフォローされていないせいで、01:06:758 (2,3,4) - 全体で見るとまとまりのない音取りになってしまっているのかなと思います。下の画像のように(3)から少し音取りを調整して、ボーカルフォローのついでに01:08:337 (4) - も拾ってあげると自然に聴こえると思うので一度試してみてください。
  8. 01:18:127 (1) - Drum:finishの間違い？
  9. 01:25:706 (4,5) - ドラムの音が三連打っぽく聴こえるので、(5)を削除して(4)に返しを追加する方が良さそうだなと思いました。そうすると01:26:653 (6,7) - も変になっちゃうので画像の音取りを提案します！
  10. 01:35:021 (3,4) - スライダーにまとめた方がボーカルに合うように聴こえました。

他のmodの修正も溜まっていそうなのでひとまずここまでにします。
修正終わったら続きもmodするので声かけてください。
Toyosaki Aki
337 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Toyosaki Aki

Beomsan wrote:

from my queue, requested by joker-.
really beautiful song, I want to participate in this map but it seems I'm already late lol
*Unrankable issues (or important) *Highly Recommended *Suggestions
General
  1. There is no video on Kanau's difficulty. ok
  2. Unused hitsound:
    soft-hitclap10.wav deleted
  3. https://youtu.be/ZRk1eMfqN6o official youtube link here. I have a question, Does the title require "(short ver.)"? I couldn't find the exact information. But kwan will answer. /me runs It (http://puu.sh/sKGpI/f0e82916e5.png) says ''short ver.'' so I changed title. that's a screenshot in game
Normal
  1. 00:03:600 (2,3) - this blanket is pretty off. this is a bit noticable so I pointed out. fixed
  2. 00:30:443 - 00:30:600 - add sth here? feels quite empty to me. ofc There are sounds there. exactly these sounds are a little big. fixed
    100/100
I was taking requests from novice mapper, but you guys are so good lol
hope this helped

Shirasaka Koume wrote:

MOD初心者なので的外れな意見あるかもです　ご容赦ください＞＜
[Normal]
  1. 01:15:916 (3) - x.321, y.134に移動して 01:14:653 (1,2,3) で三角形を作った方が綺麗に見えると思います いいですね　直しました
[Eternity]
  1. 00:51:285 (1) - 00:51:443 に音があるので1/2スライダーでいいと思います(見にくかったです) 正直悩みましたが個人的には見にくいとは思わなかったのでこのままで。もし同じ意見をもらった場合は考えなおしてみます
  2. 01:00:285 - ここから3連打の強い音が鳴ってるので3連打を入れてもいいかもしれません 元々は01:00:364の音を拾っていたんですが01:00:443 (5) - のスライダーの頭を2連打にするとDistanceが不自然に大きくなってしまうのでremoveしました。remapしなかったのは単純にこの流れが気に入ってたので
  3. 01:40:074 - NC? Yes!
ぐっどらっく！

KSHR wrote:

お約束どおり来ました

[General]
  1. UR@N名義の譜面がrankedにいくつかあるのでUR@Nの方もTagsに追加。 原子番号92... 何でもないです入れておきます
[Normal]
  1. 00:04:864 (4) - whistleの付け忘れ？
  2. 00:20:653 (5,1) - メロディーの変わり目を考えるとnc入れ替えの方が合うと思います
  3. 00:20:653 (5) - から00:40:232 (4) - までのヒットサウンドについて、00:23:179 (5) - のようにガッツリとピアノの音をフォローしていたりすると綺麗だと思うんですが、そういうところ以外にも追加してしまうと静かなメロディーの割りにwhistleの量が多くなってうるさく聴こえてしまうので、あえてヒットサウンドを控えめにしておいたほうが曲にあって綺麗でいいと思います。
  4. 00:28:232 (6,7) - (6)のスライダーの終わりの位置からボーカルが伸びていること、(7)のスライダーの始点が特にどの音もフォローしていないこと、この2つのせいで音取りが少し変に聴こえます。
    やや誤魔化した感が出てしまいますが、画像の音取りのように(6)の返しを削除＆長めのスライダー追加の方が違和感がないと思います。
    確かに違和感あったので提案してもらったのとは違いますけど音取り変えました
  5. 00:45:916 (1) - 終わりの位置をボーカル重視で次の白線の00:46:548 - まで伸ばしたほうが自分には自然に聴こえました。 00:45:916 (1,2) - に間が欲しいと思ったのとスライダーの頭はピアノ取ってるので個人的にはこのままでも良いかなと思います
  6. 00:59:653 (3,4,5) - (3)の終わりとその後の単発2つからwhistleを削除してドラムを目立たせた方が格好良く聴こえました。
  7. 01:08:337 (4) - この手前の01:08:021 - にあるドラムの音がフォローされていないせいで、01:06:758 (2,3,4) - 全体で見るとまとまりのない音取りになってしまっているのかなと思います。下の画像のように(3)から少し音取りを調整して、ボーカルフォローのついでに01:08:337 (4) - も拾ってあげると自然に聴こえると思うので一度試してみてください。
  8. 01:18:127 (1) - Drum:finishの間違い？
  9. 01:25:706 (4,5) - ドラムの音が三連打っぽく聴こえるので、(5)を削除して(4)に返しを追加する方が良さそうだなと思いました。そうすると01:26:653 (6,7) - も変になっちゃうので画像の音取りを提案します！
  10. 01:35:021 (3,4) - スライダーにまとめた方がボーカルに合うように聴こえました。 01:32:495 (6,7) - と同じ音取りがしたかったのでkeepです

[Eternity]
  1. 00:09:285 (5,1) - 静かな前奏だってことを考えると、強い音があるにしてもちょっと飛ばしすぎてるような気も
  3. 00:14:337 (5,6,7) - (6)の単発をもうちょっとだけ左に配置して(7)に向かう前に少し逆方向の流れを作ると、(7)までのスペーシングが数値以上に大きく感じられて(7)始点のピアノの音を今より強調できるのかなと思いました
    ついでに(4,5)の終わりと(7)のを等間隔にしておくと見た目が綺麗になるのでオススメです http://puu.sh/sRUFA/b13ae98a5b.jpg
  4. 00:18:443 (2,3,4) - ピアノの音を聴くと流れる感じのメロディーになってるから、等間隔のスペーシングにしておくと曲に合いそうNa（ナトリウム）.. Naるほど・・・いいですNe（ネオン）
    自分は(2,3)の方を広げる修正の方がいいと思います！（スライダーの速度的に34の方を狭くして修正すると急に流れがスローペースになっちゃいそうだなと思うので！）
  5. 00:20:021 (2,3,4,5) - 今の状態だと綺麗に伸びてるピアノの音に対して音を取りすぎてるように聴こえるから、(3)を削除して(2)の終わりを(3)があった位置まで延ばすとピアノによく合って綺麗です！
  6. 00:25:706 (2,3,4) - (3)でジャンプを作る必要が特にないような・・？もし作るのであれば強いボーカルの音がある(4)の方がベター
  7. 00:29:811 (3,4,5) - Insaneに同じく ここだとドラムの音よりはだんだん小さくなっていくピアノの方が印象的でそっちをとりたかったので同じスライダー置きたいですね・・
  8. 00:32:969 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ここちょっとncが変な気がする.. 追加する位置はピアノの強い音があってパターンの開始位置になる00:33:285 (2,2,2) - の方が綺麗じゃないかなあ
  9. 00:39:916 (1,2) - Insaneに同じく
  10. 00:43:074 (4) - ほとんど見た目と好みの問題だけどちょっと曲げたりしてみない？ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6822278
  11. 00:44:969 (4,6) - スライダー真っ直ぐが続くからここで何か曲げ方に工夫ができると面白くていいのかも？例えば(4)を前のスライダー(3)の上下反転（Short ver.）っぽくして、(6)は(5)に軽くブランケットさせてみるとか https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6822337 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6822412
  12. 00:46:864 (3,4,5) - 曲を聴くと(3)の終わりからピアノがリズムよく流れるから、00:47:653 (4,5) - でaimを戻す流れはあんまり合わないのかなあと
    ちょっと調整必要になっちゃうけどこういうイメージで修正してみてはどうでしょう https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6822488
    （スクショは2の単発から配置調整してます、一応参考にコードも貼っときまっす）
    344,204,46548,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    344,204,46864,2,0,P|375:250|470:251,2,140,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    239,228,47653,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    172,144,47811,2,0,L|179:69,1,70,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    308,40,48127,2,0,L|301:109,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  13. 00:52:074 (4,5,6) -個人的な感覚かもしれないんだけど、 (4,5)を見ると(5)が若干右に食い込みすぎてる気がするし、(5,6)は(5)の曲げ方に背いて真下に置いてる印象が強いしで流れが中途半端になってしまってるのかなあと
    (5)を10度ほど回転させてみて、もしそっちの方がいいなって賛同してもらえたら修正してみてください 5でaimをひっかける感じ(伝われ)に変えました
  14. 01:08:337 (7,8,1) - (1)のスライダーを(8)からの流れに合うように曲げて(8,1)でジャンプを作ると綺麗に流れそうだなあと。もっというとそっちの方が(1)の頭にあるピアノの音を強調出来ると思うし！
    多分こんな感じにするのが一番楽な修正かな？ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6822695
  15. 01:16:232 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) -
    01:16:232 (1) - と01:17:179 (1) - では強い音に合わせてジャンプがあるから01:16:706 (1) - にもジャンプを作って強い音を強調してあげると曲に合う配置になるんじゃないかなあと思いました
  16. 01:19:232 (2,3,4) - スペーシングのせいで(3,4)が詰まってるように見えるから(4)を右の方に移動させてスペーシングを広げたほうがいいと思う
  17. 01:25:706 (1,2,3,4) - (1,2)で鳴ってるドラムの音と(3,4)で鳴ってるドラムの音を比べると後者のほうが弱いから、スペーシングをだんだん広げるのは曲に合わないと思います！
  18. 01:59:179 (1,2,3,4) - このあたり直線スライダー続きだからスライダーを曲げる提案です！https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6822889
    186,122,119179,6,0,L|176:25,1,78.7499975967408,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    125,201,119495,2,0,L|105:293,1,78.7499975967408,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    65,142,119811,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    224,206,119969,2,0,L|302:213,1,78.7499975967408

次いつmodにちゃんと時間取れるか分からないからひとまず出来たところまでpost！　完！ 忙しいところありがとうございました( ∩՞ټ՞∩) 赤字青字のところ以外はほぼその通りに直してます！
まとまった時間ないとなかなかmod返信取り掛かれなくて・・・近日中に直します、
Thanks for modding! @KSHR @Shirasaka Koume @Beomsan
Last edited by Toyosaki Aki , edited 7 times in total.
Silky
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Silky

Beomsan wrote:

Kanau's Easy
  1. 00:31:390 (2) - ok,, I know it's minor thing but blanket is a bit off now. fixed
    10/10

KSHR wrote:

[Kanau’s Easy]
  1. 01:31:390 (1,2) -(2)前後の赤線でドラムの音がなるからか、(1)終わりでボーカルの強音を取っているからか、 ここだけちょっと音取りがぎこちない気がしました。
    (2)を消して(1)を01:32:021 - まで延ばすほうが自分には自然に聴こえるますがどうでしょう。 かなり迷ってるんですがピアノの音が自分にはかなり目立って聞こえるのでkeepで
  2. 01:38:969 (1) - 終点の音が少し目立っている気がするので、問題のない程度に音量を下げてみてもいいかもしれません。40%にしました
  3. 01:41:495 (1) - こちらも同じく。＾
thanks for modding
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KSHR
追加と続き、前にもらってるので今回はno kdsで

[Kanau’s Easy]
追加頼まれたので・・・
前modしたときにRankedに支障なし、もしくは個人的な考え入りすぎかもと思って省いた提案たちなので、たしかに・・・と思えなかったものは気兼ねなくスルーしてください
  1. 00:54:443 (2) - 直線気味のスライダーよりもしっかり曲げたスライダーの方がピアノのバーンッ！のフェードアウトに合ってプレイ感がいいような気がする
    実際00:44:337 (2) - 00:49:390 (2) - の曲げ方はフェードアウトにすごく合ってるように見えるし
    https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6799480
  2. 01:24:916 (2) - 前のスライダーからのaimの流れ方を考えると逆に曲げた方が自然で初心者が叩きやすい配置になるかなと http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6799270
    もし「ボーカルに合わせてスライダーの流れをあえて悪くした」っていうことであれば、(1,2)両方とも逆向きに曲げてしまえば統一感も出るし流れの悪さもマシになるので一度お試しあれ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6799537
    ※両スクショでは(3)をCtrl+Jしてスペーシング調整してます
  3. 01:32:179 (2,3) - 提案ってわけではないけど、自分がQATしてたくらいの頃だとこの重ね方ってEasyでは好まれなかったはずだから、軽く修正案を頭の中で考えておくと後々楽できることがあるかもしれない
  4. 01:35:811 (4,1,2) - (4,1)のつなぎ方を見ると、(4)のスライダーの流れとは逆方向に(1)の始点を置いてあるから、(1,2)もそれに倣って、(1)のスライダーとは逆方向に(2)の始点を置く方が配置全体に統一感があって好きです
    もっと感覚的で個人的なこと言っちゃうと01:35:811 (4,1,2) - 全体で見ると左に傾いたビルみたいで左右のバランスがすごく気になってしまった
    分かりにくいと思うのでスクショをば・・ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6799399
    ※スクショでは01:34:548 (2) - の位置を下に下げて01:35:021 (3,4,1) - を左に移動させてスペーシング調整してます


[joker’s Hard]
  1. 00:11:495 (1) - コソ綺麗シリーズ①
    スライダーの形を00:11:021 (3) - の左右反転にするとコソ綺麗
  2. 00:13:074 (1) - コソ綺麗シリーズ②
    00:13:074 (1,3) - で直線が続いて若干単調気味だから(1)を00:11:969 (2) - にブランケットさせるイメージで若干曲げてみるとか、前の配置からのaimにも合うし https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6799921
  3. 00:16:548 (1) - コソ綺麗シリーズ③
    スライダーの形を00:15:600 (1) - の左右反転にすると傾き方に統一感が若干出てコソ綺麗
  4. 00:22:232 (5) - ただ前のスライダーの延長線上に配置するよりも、ちょっとずらして置いた方が面白いかなと思うんだけどどうでしょう https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6800035
    ずらしておく方がボーカルの「し↑ず↓～か↑に↓～」って感じに合ってるような気もする
  5. 00:24:127 (3,4,5) - メロディーが静かめで落ち着いていること、特に強い音のない位置にオブジェクトが置いてあること、この2つが原因でで1/1スパムに聴こえ気味だから、少しだけ今の音取りから音を抜く修正があったほうがいいかも　例えばこういうこと↓
  6. 00:35:811 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - 特に強いピアノの音があるところだけ置く方がスッキリして聴こえてオススメです　例えば、00:35:811 (1,3,1,2) - それぞれの始点だけに置くとか
  7. 00:38:969 (2) - 前の内容に同じくやや1/1スパムに聴こえ気味かも？このスライダーを消して00:38:337 (1) - の終わりを00:38:969 - まで延ばす方が合うと思うんだけどどうだろう
  8. 01:05:179 (2) - コソ綺麗シリーズ④
    もうちょっと角度つけたほうが(1)との見栄えがよろし https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6799769
  9. 01:10:232 (2,3) - ボーカル的には音取り入れ替えの方が合うかな？
  10. 01:55:706 (2,1) - コソ綺麗シリーズ⑤
    左右対称にするといい感じかなあと https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6800150
    それと今の配置だと(2,1)のオブジェクトの感覚が狭くて見栄えが悪いのと、aimの動き方が同じところをなぞるように左右左行っててちょっと汚いかなとも感じた
  11. 02:02:969 (1,2) - ドラムもピアノも激しめだからもう少し音取ってもいいと思う　例えば↓

[joker-’s Insane]
  1. 00:02:021 (6) - ちょっと細かい内容
    ジャンプを作ること自体は難易度的に全く問題ではないんだけど、00:01:074 (3) - と曲の音は特に変わらないから片方だけジャンプさせるっていうのは変なのかもなあと思った
    実際00:03:285 (2,3,5,6) - の方ではジャンプ使ってないみたいだし
  2. 00:05:495 (1) - ちょっと曲げてあげると次のスライダーへの流れもできるし、00:04:548 (6) - に対応させてるみたいでまとまりが出ると思うんだけどどうでしょう https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6809398
  3. 00:05:811 (2) - (3)の位置に強い音があるから、このスライダーを少しだけ左に動かして(1,2)<(2,3)のスペーシングにすると丁寧な配置になるのでぜひ
  4. 00:06:443 (4,5,6) - 細かい上に感覚的な内容
    実際にプレイをしたとき(4,5)での上下のaim幅と(5,6)での上下のaim幅にあんまり大きな変化がないせいで疾走感がうまく出てなくて(6)の強音がうまく強調できてないような気がしたから00:07:074 (6) - をもうちょっと下に移動させる修正とかしてみたらどうだろう
    今の配置よりも(5)の流れに沿って(6)までaimを動かすことになるから流れに勢いが出るし、(6)の後の音取りの空白がその流れを止めるから(6)の位置にある強音をうまく強調してくれるし
    (6)を動かす位置は00:09:285 (5) - の始点にスタックさせる形で大丈夫だと思う
  5. 00:14:021 (4) - 逆に曲げた方が流れ的にはいいんじゃないかな
    00:13:706 (3) - のスタックで一度流れ止まるから前の配置のことはそんなに気にしなくてもいいはず https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6809472
  6. 00:15:916 (2) - ちょっと細かいけど、5~10度ほど回転させてこのスライダーのカーブの延長線上に(3)がくるようにした方が綺麗かな？
  7. 00:24:127 (3,4) - Hardに同じくちょっとスパム気味だなあと
    長いスライダーで誤魔化すか音あるところだけに置いて音取りに空白を作るかした方がいいと思いまっす
  8. 00:29:811 (4,5,6) - (4)はピアノに合うからいいと思うんだけど、(5,6)の方は配置の見た目に気を取られて音取りとして見るとあまり曲には合ってないのかなっていう印象
    もっと詳しく説明すると、(5)では頭でドラムの音をフォローしてるのに(6)では終わりでドラムの音をフォローしてる矛盾があったりとか
    そのドラムの音2つをスライダーの始点か単発でフォローしてあげる方が無難なのかなあと
  9. 00:31:390 (3,4) - このスライダー2つだけで見ると置き方がベチャッ（？）としててあんまり見栄えが良くないから、00:31:864 (4,5,6) - を選択して(4)頭を(3)にブランケットさせるように置いてみるとかどうかな
  10. 00:39:916 (2,3) - 単発とスライダーの音取りの順番を逆にしてドラムのある00:39:916 - 00:40:232 - 00:40:390 - をプレイヤーにクリックさせる方が楽しいのかなあと思ったり思わなかったり
  11. 00:56:653 (3) - 少し右に移動させよう（x: 256 y260くらい？）
    プレイしてみた感じ今の状態だと00:56:337 (2,3,4) - のスペーシングのせいで若干詰まってるように感じた
  12. 00:58:548 (1) - 少し回転させて左側にもっと少し膨らませるような流れを作る方がボーカルの伸びに合うような気も（個人的な感覚だったら申し訳ない） https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6810536
  13. 01:00:127 (2,3,4) - イイネ（イイネ）
  14. 01:05:179 (1,2,3) - (2,3)でやりたいことすごく理解できるし良い配置だと思うんだけど、どうしても(1)だけ(2,3)に対応してない上に直線だから浮いてる感があってちょっともったいない・・
    20分ほど色々考えて一番マシかなと思ったやつをスクショとコード付きで貼っておくけどあまり好みではなかったら申し訳ない（オリジナルのコンセプト通り0.10xずつくらいではあるけどスペーシング広げてあります） https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6810642
    352,220,65179,6,0,P|358:194|370:166,1,52.4999983978272
    472,112,65495,2,0,P|484:151|487:184,1,52.4999983978272,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    480,288,65811,2,0,P|457:321|434:346,1,52.4999983978272,10|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    324,376,66127,5,4,0:0:0:0:
  15. 01:07:232 (4) - 次の(1)のスライダーをコピペして持ってきてあげるとボーカルの一続きになってる感じを表現できて個人的にgood
  16. 01:07:548 (1,2,3) - 配置自体は綺麗だけどスペーシングを狭くする必要は特にないのかなと思った
    もしスペーシングを広げるを修正するとき、01:07:864 (2) - を移動させると始点が01:06:758 (3) - に重なって見にくそうであれば(1,3)で調整しちゃおうー。その方法で修正したら次の01:08:337 (3,1) - の繋ぎがぎこちなくなるはずだからそちらの修正も忘れずに！
    ついでに01:07:548 (1) - のスライダーをコピペ＆180度回転して01:07:232 (4) - に持ってくると、ボーカルの「待ちー焦がーれーたー」の一続きの感じを表現できてgoodかなと https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6810785
  17. 01:09:285 (3) - 前後の配置との兼ね合いを考えると180度回転させておいた方がいいかな？とおもいます
  18. 01:24:285 (2) - 直線置くだけだとなんか寂しいから(1)終わりにブランケットさせる形で軽く曲げてみるとか？
  19. 01:25:390 (2) - (1)からの流れがあまり良く見えないから01:25:390 (2,3,4) - で置きなおしをして流れ改善した方がいいのかも 自分だったらこう直すなあっていう修正の参考のスクショです https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6811033
  20. 01:27:443 (1,2,3) - 上に同じく流れが良く見えないから置きなおしした方がいいと思う こちらも同じく参考にどうぞ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6811076
  21. 01:29:495 (2,3,4) - (2,3)の流れの動かし方が少し中途半端になってるのと、(4)の角度が(3)からの流れに合わないから、01:29:495 (2,3,4) - の見栄えが悪くなっちゃってる
    (4)を少し傾けて(3)からの流れに沿うようにして、残りの配置は軽い位置調整だけで軽く修正できるから修正しちゃってはどうでしょうか https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6811160
  22. 01:44:495 (2,3,4) - (3)のスライダーが曲がってるわりに配置全体は直方体に収まってるから少し不恰好かも？(3)の曲げ方と(2,3,4)の位置を軽く調整して左右に動く流れを作ってあげるといいんじゃないかな https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6811197
  23. 01:45:916 (3) - 若干曲げると配置的に面白いかも https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6811206
  24. 01:48:127 (2) - 前の提案に同じく、5~10度曲げて流れの延長線上に次の配置がくるようにしない？
  25. 01:52:706 (1) - 前の配置からの流れに合わない角度なのが目立ってるから無難に逆向きに曲げて置く方がいいと思う 例の如く修正の参考に https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6811277
  26. 01:57:758 (1,2) - 考えている流れは大丈夫だし個人的に言うとかなり好みなんだけど、(2)が下に沈み込みすぎてるせいで(1)からの動き方がちょっと無理やりになってしまってる印象
    大体これくらい上に持ってくるとマシになるはず https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6811304
    これを修正すると01:58:232 (2,4) - の位置が近づいて窮屈になるはずだから(4)の単発の位置もお好みで動かすのも忘れずに！

[Eternity]
  1. 00:09:285 (5,1) - 静かな前奏だってことを考えると、強い音があるにしてもちょっと飛ばしすぎてるような気も
  3. 00:14:337 (5,6,7) - (6)の単発をもうちょっとだけ左に配置して(7)に向かう前に少し逆方向の流れを作ると、(7)までのスペーシングが数値以上に大きく感じられて(7)始点のピアノの音を今より強調できるのかなと思いました
    ついでに(4,5)の終わりと(7)のを等間隔にしておくと見た目が綺麗になるのでオススメです http://puu.sh/sRUFA/b13ae98a5b.jpg
  4. 00:18:443 (2,3,4) - ピアノの音を聴くと流れる感じのメロディーになってるから、等間隔のスペーシングにしておくと曲に合いそうNa（ナトリウム）..
    自分は(2,3)の方を広げる修正の方がいいと思います！（スライダーの速度的に34の方を狭くして修正すると急に流れがスローペースになっちゃいそうだなと思うので！）
  5. 00:20:021 (2,3,4,5) - 今の状態だと綺麗に伸びてるピアノの音に対して音を取りすぎてるように聴こえるから、(3)を削除して(2)の終わりを(3)があった位置まで延ばすとピアノによく合って綺麗です！
  6. 00:25:706 (2,3,4) - (3)でジャンプを作る必要が特にないような・・？もし作るのであれば強いボーカルの音がある(4)の方がベター
  7. 00:29:811 (3,4,5) - Insaneに同じく
  8. 00:32:969 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - ここちょっとncが変な気がする.. 追加する位置はピアノの強い音があってパターンの開始位置になる00:33:285 (2,2,2) - の方が綺麗じゃないかなあ
  9. 00:39:916 (1,2) - Insaneに同じく
  10. 00:43:074 (4) - ほとんど見た目と好みの問題だけどちょっと曲げたりしてみない？ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6822278
  11. 00:44:969 (4,6) - スライダー真っ直ぐが続くからここで何か曲げ方に工夫ができると面白くていいのかも？例えば(4)を前のスライダー(3)の上下反転（Short ver.）っぽくして、(6)は(5)に軽くブランケットさせてみるとか https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6822337 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6822412
  12. 00:46:864 (3,4,5) - 曲を聴くと(3)の終わりからピアノがリズムよく流れるから、00:47:653 (4,5) - でaimを戻す流れはあんまり合わないのかなあと
    ちょっと調整必要になっちゃうけどこういうイメージで修正してみてはどうでしょう https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6822488
    （スクショは2の単発から配置調整してます、一応参考にコードも貼っときまっす）
    344,204,46548,1,0,0:0:0:0:
    344,204,46864,2,0,P|375:250|470:251,2,140,2|0|10,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    239,228,47653,1,2,0:0:0:0:
    172,144,47811,2,0,L|179:69,1,70,0|2,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    308,40,48127,2,0,L|301:109,1,70,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
  13. 00:52:074 (4,5,6) -個人的な感覚かもしれないんだけど、 (4,5)を見ると(5)が若干右に食い込みすぎてる気がするし、(5,6)は(5)の曲げ方に背いて真下に置いてる印象が強いしで流れが中途半端になってしまってるのかなあと
    (5)を10度ほど回転させてみて、もしそっちの方がいいなって賛同してもらえたら修正してみてください
  14. 01:08:337 (7,8,1) - (1)のスライダーを(8)からの流れに合うように曲げて(8,1)でジャンプを作ると綺麗に流れそうだなあと。もっというとそっちの方が(1)の頭にあるピアノの音を強調出来ると思うし！
    多分こんな感じにするのが一番楽な修正かな？ https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6822695
  15. 01:16:232 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) -
    01:16:232 (1) - と01:17:179 (1) - では強い音に合わせてジャンプがあるから01:16:706 (1) - にもジャンプを作って強い音を強調してあげると曲に合う配置になるんじゃないかなあと思いました
  16. 01:19:232 (2,3,4) - スペーシングのせいで(3,4)が詰まってるように見えるから(4)を右の方に移動させてスペーシングを広げたほうがいいと思う
  17. 01:25:706 (1,2,3,4) - (1,2)で鳴ってるドラムの音と(3,4)で鳴ってるドラムの音を比べると後者のほうが弱いから、スペーシングをだんだん広げるのは曲に合わないと思います！
  18. 01:59:179 (1,2,3,4) - このあたり直線スライダー続きだからスライダーを曲げる提案です！https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6822889
    186,122,119179,6,0,L|176:25,1,78.7499975967408,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    125,201,119495,2,0,L|105:293,1,78.7499975967408,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
    65,142,119811,1,0,1:0:0:0:
    224,206,119969,2,0,L|302:213,1,78.7499975967408

次いつmodにちゃんと時間取れるか分からないからひとまず出来たところまでpost！　完！
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Silky
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Silky
全部直しました
01:32:179 (2,3) - は言われたら最初のmodで言われてたように音取りごと変えます
†神Mod†ありです
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//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
//Storyboard Layer 3 (Foreground)
//Storyboard Sound Samples

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134179,-100,4,2,10,40,0,0


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Combo3 : 173,255,91
Combo4 : 89,255,255

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@KSHR♰神♰
全部直しました～…数多かったので抜けてるかもしれないですけど…

更新よろしこ
https://puu.sh/sTprt/e72622caba.osu
https://puu.sh/sTps7/f1e9844703.osu
とーんさんのが準備できたらりんごよびます
hshs
7 posts
Joined June 2012
hshs
NICE MAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP Foo~~~~~ :#
Toyosaki Aki
337 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Toyosaki Aki

hshs wrote:

NICE MAPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPPP Foo~~~~~ :#
ここは動物園じゃないですよ(´・◡・｀)
Mint
1,607 posts
Joined February 2013
Mint
Normal mod request from joker-

for easy & normal, idk if spinning 10 sec at the end is beginner friendly tho.. seems harsh, would discuss

[Normal]
  1. Same... NCs are waay to inconsistent (ex. 00:34:864 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - ), sometimes they get way too long too (00:28:232 (6,7,8) - ). Would redo all ncs and just place them every 2 measures..
  2. 01:26:811 (7) - Skips over so many important sounds, would just keep 1/1 here.
[joker's Hard]
  1. 00:28:232 (4) - NC should be here instead following your pattern. nc pattern overall is sometimes really weird tho.. you switch a lot between 2 measure and 1 measure pattern (for example: 00:55:074 (1,2,3) - )..
  2. 01:09:758 (1) - no nc here , 01:50:179 (5) - nc here etc.. you can find them yourself im sure c:
  3. 01:03:285 (1,2,1) - Too misleading for a hard difficulty, your insane doesnt have much gimmicks either so wouldnt but something like this here
  4. 01:33:600 (4,5,1,2) - Two different stacks here, but different snap, pretty misleading too
  5. this is really good actually
[joker's Insane]
  1. 00:22:864 (7,8,1) - If you do a jump at 00:32:969 (7,8,1) - , why not here too, would seem consistent? (or no jump)
  2. 00:25:074 (4) - this kills your spacing though rip, maybe this works up to you? http://puu.sh/sYRz5/44dd34266f.jpg
  3. 01:03:600 (2,3) - could still be further away from each other to make this more clear
  4. 01:28:548 (6) - welp you have used 3/4 to emphasize the finish at 01:26:021 (5,1) - , so maybe here too? up to u
  5. 01:32:969 (2,3,4) - this inconsistent spacing doesnt really look good here... i think u can see it lol
  6. sometimes i feel that the slow parts have equal spacing/intensity as the kiai part.. maybe this will help u in future maps
[Eternity]
  1. 00:01:074 (3) - etc. Honestly, I can't really agree with how the low SV is being really deceptive here. Pretty sure players are only 300'ing this, because these are just sliders. Currently your 3/4 sliders have the same length as your 1/2 sliders, with no indication or hint at all. This is pretty impossible to tell, as this could be read as this http://puu.sh/sYQSi/ab81c57456.jpg / would really just do something readable like what you did at 00:10:548 (1,2,3,4) -
  2. 00:25:074 (1,2,3) - The inconsistency in spacing seems worrysome. The gap isn't really that big here and (2) is already fully visible when you play (1). Would either have some form of stack (with nc patterning perhaps) or better usage of DS here. // similar issue at 00:54:443 (3,4) - 01:03:285 (1,2,3,4) -
  3. 01:09:758 (6,1) - 01:35:021 (5,6) - Don't recommend having such a large 1/4 spacing if you never do this elsewhere? Pretty unpredictable now and doesn't really seem to fit considering the rest of the difficulty. Nor do the sounds sound that strong either to be emphasized this way.
  4. hmmm could be structured better, but overall not bad!
fuyuyu's diff look OK to me
good luck!
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appleeaterx wrote:

Normal mod request from joker- thx for accepting mod req~

[joker's Hard]
  1. 00:28:232 (4) - NC should be here instead following your pattern. nc pattern overall is sometimes really weird tho.. you switch a lot between 2 measure and 1 measure pattern (for example: 00:55:074 (1,2,3) - )..
  2. 01:09:758 (1) - no nc here , 01:50:179 (5) - nc here etc.. you can find them yourself im sure c: Exactly, then I changed 2 measure on except kiai time
  3. 01:03:285 (1,2,1) - Too misleading for a hard difficulty, your insane doesnt have much gimmicks either so wouldnt but something like this here gain distance a bit
  4. 01:33:600 (4,5,1,2) - Two different stacks here, but different snap, pretty misleading too oops, fixed!
  5. this is really good actually thxx!!
[joker's Insane]
  1. 00:22:864 (7,8,1) - If you do a jump at 00:32:969 (7,8,1) - , why not here too, would seem consistent? (or no jump) i chose a jump in here
  2. 00:25:074 (4) - this kills your spacing though rip, maybe this works up to you? http://puu.sh/sYRz5/44dd34266f.jpg okay applied like image
  3. 01:03:600 (2,3) - could still be further away from each other to make this more clear okay
  4. 01:28:548 (6) - welp you have used 3/4 to emphasize the finish at 01:26:021 (5,1) - , so maybe here too? up to u umm...I'll fix it if someone point out one
  5. 01:32:969 (2,3,4) - this inconsistent spacing doesnt really look good here... i think u can see it lol ya fixed
  6. sometimes i feel that the slow parts have equal spacing/intensity as the kiai part.. maybe this will help u in future maps I'll try to do best~
fuyuyu's diff look OK to me
good luck!
WIP on reply

thank you apple!!!
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Toyosaki Aki
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Topic Starter
Toyosaki Aki

appleeaterx wrote:

Normal mod request from joker-

for easy & normal, idk if spinning 10 sec at the end is beginner friendly tho.. seems harsh, would discuss

[Normal]
  1. Same... NCs are waay to inconsistent (ex. 00:34:864 (1,2,1,2,3,1) - ), sometimes they get way too long too (00:28:232 (6,7,8) - ). Would redo all ncs and just place them every 2 measures.. fixed
  2. 01:26:811 (7) - Skips over so many important sounds, would just keep 1/1 here. fixed


[Eternity]
  1. 00:01:074 (3) - etc. Honestly, I can't really agree with how the low SV is being really deceptive here. Pretty sure players are only 300'ing this, because these are just sliders. Currently your 3/4 sliders have the same length as your 1/2 sliders, with no indication or hint at all. This is pretty impossible to tell, as this could be read as this http://puu.sh/sYQSi/ab81c57456.jpg / would really just do something readable like what you did at 00:10:548 (1,2,3,4) - exactly. deleted SV change
  2. 00:25:074 (1,2,3) - The inconsistency in spacing seems worrysome. The gap isn't really that big here and (2) is already fully visible when you play (1). Would either have some form of stack (with nc patterning perhaps) or better usage of DS here. // similar issue at 00:54:443 (3,4) - 01:03:285 (1,2,3,4) - ok
  3. 01:09:758 (6,1) - 01:35:021 (5,6) - Don't recommend having such a large 1/4 spacing if you never do this elsewhere? Pretty unpredictable now and doesn't really seem to fit considering the rest of the difficulty. Nor do the sounds sound that strong either to be emphasized this way. former is fixed. I felt this is not so large and latter one is my fav part, so did not change
  4. hmmm could be structured better, but overall not bad!
thanks for modding!
I'll fix them after　almost all fixed!
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aramaking
210 posts
Joined August 2014
aramaking
FF内からmod失礼するゾ～()

00:14:969 (7) - 00:15:285　からﾌｵｫﾝって音聞こえるからそれに合わせて赤い節置いたらどうか
　
これは俺が良いなって思った形　参考までに

00:26:653 (5,1) - blanketにしてはちょい近すぎない？

00:29:811 (3,4,5) - ピアノの音程下がっていくのに合わせてスライダーの位置もどんどん下げていくのはどうだろう

00:45:916 (1) - 赤い節ここにするのはどうだろう。これ裏でサー(迫真)ってシンバルの音鳴ってて00:46:232で音途切れてるから

00:58:548 (1) - これちょっと左すぎね？

01:07:864 (6) - x:252 y:127に移動すると綺麗になりそう

01:37:232 (8,1,2) - 01:37:074 (7) - これ中心にした三角形にするとかっこつかない？

01:38:337 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ここ( 01:33:285 (4,5,6,7,1) - )で右回りだからここは左回りにすれば良いんじゃないか

01:38:969 (1) - 　slidertickと赤い節がズレてる

01:55:706 (2,3,4) - こうしたらどう？

02:02:653 (6) - ここスライダー0.7xとかにして02:02:969 (1,2,3) - これ正三角形にすると良くない？結構位置変わるだろうからそれに合わせて02:04:232 (5) - も移動すると良いと思う

02:13:074 (5,6,7) - distance統一しない？

02:13:706 (1,2,3,4) - これは綺麗にしないと　②離れすぎてない？


小姑みたいなmodになっちまった(◞‸◟)　検討してくれよな！
Toyosaki Aki
337 posts
Joined February 2014
Topic Starter
Toyosaki Aki

aramaking wrote:

FF内からmod失礼するゾ～()

00:14:969 (7) - 00:15:285　からﾌｵｫﾝって音聞こえるからそれに合わせて赤い節置いたらどうか
　
これは俺が良いなって思った形　参考までに いいね そのまま使わせてもらいます！

00:26:653 (5,1) - blanketにしてはちょい近すぎない？ blanketって感じで置いてないからkeepで

00:29:811 (3,4,5) - ピアノの音程下がっていくのに合わせてスライダーの位置もどんどん下げていくのはどうだろう 4のケツより高い位置に5の頭が来ないと多分aimに違和感があるんじゃないかなあと

00:45:916 (1) - 赤い節ここにするのはどうだろう。これ裏でサー(迫真)ってシンバルの音鳴ってて00:46:232で音途切れてるから なるほどいいですね

00:58:548 (1) - これちょっと左すぎね？ そんなことはなさそう 00:58:232 (5,1) - は1/1空いてるからDSも2倍になってる

01:07:864 (6) - x:252 y:127に移動すると綺麗になりそう ここ気になってたから配置まるごと変えました

01:37:232 (8,1,2) - 01:37:074 (7) - これ中心にした三角形にするとかっこつかない？01:37:074 (3,5,1) - で三角形になｔてる

01:38:337 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ここ( 01:33:285 (4,5,6,7,1) - )で右回りだからここは左回りにすれば良いんじゃないか ここ1/6で置いてて難易度上がってるから流れ逆にしちゃうのはやりすぎな感じがするなあ

01:38:969 (1) - 　slidertickと赤い節がズレてる 直した

01:55:706 (2,3,4) - こうしたらどう？ ん～4と次の単発が離れすぎちゃう感じもしたけど一応直した

02:02:653 (6) - ここスライダー0.7xとかにして02:02:969 (1,2,3) - これ正三角形にすると良くない？結構位置変わるだろうからそれに合わせて02:04:232 (5) - も移動すると良いと思う ここでSVを下げちゃうと1/1と3/4を区別できないからkeepで スライダーは4つあるのに最初の3つで正三角形にするのは違和感isある

02:13:074 (5,6,7) - distance統一しない？百里ある

02:13:706 (1,2,3,4) - これは綺麗にしないと　②離れすぎてない？ 直した


小姑みたいなmodになっちまった(◞‸◟)　検討してくれよな！
気付かないとこ結構直せてよかった・・・
modありがとう！助かりました！
Karen
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Karen

Eternity
  1. what's the meaning of this diffname
  2. 00:48:443 (1,2) - spacing should be larger, it's too closed comparing with the previous spacing you made like 00:46:864 (3,4) -
  3. 00:51:443 - don't ignore this beat, you can make 00:51:285 (2) - this a 1/2 slider to cover it
  4. 00:56:337 (4) - move this to left a bit for a better visual looking, 00:56:337 (4,6) - this looks too closed
  5. 00:57:127 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - flow is kinda boring in this part, it's like drawing a circle, especially 00:59:653 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this part, and 01:00:364 - this can be mapped, my subjective suggestion: http://puu.sh/te2US/cf00d5230f.jpg
  6. 01:16:232 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - these jumps don't fit the music here, try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/te30n/f4dedcbb18.jpg
  7. 01:32:969 (2,3) - this is confusing because 01:33:443 (5,6,7) - you used that same spacing ;~; make them closer or increase 01:33:285 (4,5,6,7) - this spacing
  8. 01:38:337 (3) - NC for 1/3
joker's Insane
  1. 00:35:811 - whistle? (same for Hard)
  2. 00:37:074 - ^
  3. 01:35:021 (4) - a 1/1 slider works better here, nothing on 01:35:179 - needs to be emphasized
  4. 01:38:337 (3) - NC for 1/3
joker's Hard
  1. 00:29:811 (4,5) - blanket or not blanket
  2. 00:46:390 - 00:58:074 - add circle?
  3. 01:02:969 - ^ this too, i think piano is more important than vocals
  4. 01:38:969 (1) - please no overlap with the head and tail ;~;
Normal
  1. AR-1? the gap with Easy is too big
  2. 00:30:758 - whistle
  3. 00:46:548 - can add circle here because of piano sound
Kanau's Easy
  1. kawaii
k good enough for first rank, call me for bub
(´・◡・｀)
Meg
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Meg

Karen wrote:

Kanau's Easy
  1. kawaii
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Karen wrote:


joker's Insane
  1. 00:35:811 - whistle? (same for Hard) k
  2. 00:37:074 - ^ k
  3. 01:35:021 (4) - a 1/1 slider works better here, nothing on 01:35:179 - needs to be emphasized ya fixed
  4. 01:38:337 (3) - NC for 1/3 applied
joker's Hard
  1. 00:29:811 (4,5) - blanket or not blanket not blanket
  2. 00:46:390 - 00:58:074 - add circle? okay they was same as my insane
  3. 01:02:969 - ^ this too, i think piano is more important than vocals Oh i see, fixed like that and remove break time cuz of when i added circle on here, i feel dont need to insert break time
  4. 01:38:969 (1) - please no overlap with the head and tail ;~; Yes
Thank you Karen (´・◡・｀)

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Toyosaki Aki
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Topic Starter
Toyosaki Aki

Karen wrote:

my hero Karen

Eternity
  1. what's the meaning of this diffname In brief, just as title of this song. '永遠' is eternity in English. In addition, a heroine of this game says things like that I wish the day like this goes on. that's an impressive scene so I chose this diffname. I can explain this precisely only in Japanese ;;
  2. 00:48:443 (1,2) - spacing should be larger, it's too closed comparing with the previous spacing you made like 00:46:864 (3,4) - ok
  3. 00:51:443 - don't ignore this beat, you can make 00:51:285 (2) - this a 1/2 slider to cover it true. I remaped there
  4. 00:56:337 (4) - move this to left a bit for a better visual looking, 00:56:337 (4,6) - this looks too closed ok
  5. 00:57:127 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - flow is kinda boring in this part, it's like drawing a circle, especially 00:59:653 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - this part, and 01:00:364 - this can be mapped, my subjective suggestion: http://puu.sh/te2US/cf00d5230f.jpg thanks for good example I used as is.
  6. 01:16:232 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - these jumps don't fit the music here, try this rhythm: http://puu.sh/te30n/f4dedcbb18.jpg changed
  7. 01:32:969 (2,3) - this is confusing because 01:33:443 (5,6,7) - you used that same spacing ;~; make them closer or increase 01:33:285 (4,5,6,7) - this spacing made closer
  8. 01:38:337 (3) - NC for 1/3 ok
Normal
  1. AR-1? the gap with Easy is too big ok
  2. 00:30:758 - whistle ok
  3. 00:46:548 - can add circle here because of piano sound added
k good enough for first rank, call me for bub
(´・◡・｀)
thanks Karen (´・◡・｀)
Karen
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Joined August 2013
Karen
Zzz no kd

Eternity
  1. 00:28:706 (2,1) - if the overlap is not on purpose please stack them like 00:28:232 (2,1) -
  2. 00:02:021 (6) - move this to left a bit because http://puu.sh/tgiTC/ed8bc97d30.png
  3. 00:10:232 (4,1) - increase spacing because 00:10:074 (3,4,1) - this is confusing orz
  4. 00:18:443 (2,3,4) - try to move to left, make 00:18:127 (1,3) - this blanket http://puu.sh/tgj1b/867687c857.jpg
  5. 00:51:916 (4,5) - stack error ฅ(´・ω・｀)ฅ
  6. 02:02:179 (4) - 1/2 slider is better here since you add finish orz
joker's Insane
  1. 00:06:127 (3,4) - stack stack stack
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Karen wrote:

Zzz no kd
joker's Insane
  1. 00:06:127 (3,4) - stack stack stack ok ok ok
thx thx thx
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