(yell)rat-ta-ta-tat
nice breaks bro
(is AR10 meme?)
01:41:280 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - and so on became playable for me at around 9,5 until i got used to it after like 5 tries.
01:41:280 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - let's talk about those. They are pretty spicey but kinda freed from the song imo. If i remove the objects, said part doesnt stand out to me in the same way you presented it (and thats fine).
01:39:530 - When you hit this you accelerate and feel in sync with the intensity of the chorus. High spaced high sv sliders are well fitting the screams and the stronger instrumentals and thus i am expecting the euphoria to continue till the song decides to stop (i.e. 01:42:530 - ). The loud vocals last till 01:41:780 - so i was expecting this part to follow the intensity.
its spicey but maybe these will inspire a middle ground.
Stack them in a different manner or just dont stack them cause they aint giving feedback to similar/identical notes imo
some ideas:
https://puu.sh/u1APs/5cd66d93b0.png (120° green flip) Like this, it stays readable and spicey.
https://puu.sh/u2MOu/1b8b7f433f.png or just overlap them less. (*)
01:44:280 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - regarding (*) you could make it visually more diverse keeping every second one witht he old overlapping (or smth). (But the huge spacing increase realtive to 01:41:280 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - was quite a surprise, concidering how 01:41:280 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - is in a more intense part of the chorus aswell)
its pretty cool how it plays once you get it down, but ya
01:36:530 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - you could create some more contrast to hihglight the insanity which will occur here 01:38:030 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,5,1) - . My suggestiong would be to change the part so 01:37:280 (4) - isnt that highly spasced spaced regarding 01:37:155 (3,5) - . (and is totaly fits in this blanket
https://puu.sh/u2NmE/48691a495c.png , :thinking: )
03:05:030 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - could make like an epilepsy thing here. put a non-kiai inherited point on the tails. (but maybe not on 03:06:405 - cause the guitar note kinda blends in to the next part)
(eh, can come back once you have more diffs and stuff)
for real doe, nice breaks bro
yea.BOIIIIIIIi
make worse maps so i can rant k?thx,bye!