#modreqs c:
This song reminds me of take on me lol
[General]
what is blackbg.png lol
[Normal]
00:00:105 (1,1) - Normals need at least 2 beats of recovery and this is only 1.5. I'd recommend just deleting the spinner as it's pretty short.
00:08:928 (2) - You can get a more even shape by placing the red nodes inside of the slider ticks.
00:26:575 (4,5) - This is the first 1/2 in the diff and it forces the player into a rather weird rhythm, that is putting a clickable red tick. I would just continue to the 1/1 rhythm for this part as this plays kinda weird. Alternatively, introduce 1/2 rhythm earlier but in a less complicated place to get the player used to it.
00:34:340 (3) - I think this is better as a 1/1 reverse slider instead of a 2/1 slider; I think it captures the music better.
00:47:752 (2,3,4) - Based on this intensity, I'd expect a circle on 00:51:105 -
00:52:693 (1) - ctrl+j + rotating it to the right a bit for better flow? so like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6459305
00:56:752 - As before, this is similar to 00:53:399 (2,3,4) - so I would expect a circle here.
[Meep's Hard]
00:11:399 (3,4,5) - 4 deserves more spacing. I know that you've been using 3/4 gaps this entire time so the player should still expect this to be 3/4, but the spacing is smaller than the one at 00:08:575 (3,4,5) - so it could fool the player into thinking its a 1/2 gap instead.
00:23:664 - circle perhaps? There is a sound here after all.
00:24:458 - Well since it's a hard I'd expect an SV increase for the kiai time, but I suppose it's fine to not have one.
00:39:987 (1,2) - This is the only extended slider in the entire kiai; I do think it fits so maybe you can find another place to put one to mix the rhythm up. I don't really see anything wrong with this kiai part in general other than the pretty repetitive rhythm. Use extended sliders like these for variety!
00:45:987 (1) - I don't really see the point of this NC
00:51:105 (6) - NC
Ugh this entire closing part has really weird rhythm due to the swapping of 3/4 gaps and 1/2 gaps, it's better to just use sliders imo. Makes it much more readable, and I don't really think it should be having those problems because it's only a Hard map.
[Insane]
00:16:164 - Since this red tick isn't important, but 00:16:252 - has a notable sound, maybe make 00:15:987 (1) - a 3/4 slider instead and make 00:16:340 - a hit circle.
00:23:487 (6,7,8) - Perhaps differentiate these from the rest of the stream in some way? NCing 00:23:487 (6) - would be the minimum but perhaps you could change the direction of the stream.
It would look very nice if you made an equilateral triangle out of 00:27:281 (1)'s tail, 00:27:634 (2)'s head, and 00:27:987 (3)'s head. This would require moving 00:27:987 (3) -
00:46:692 (5) - As before, doing something here to differentiate this from the rest of the stream would be cool.
Nice diff.
[Logic Agent]
hey
00:02:929 (5) - After some mathetmatics, ive deduced this should be on x:329 y:145 to continue the pattern of the previous sliders.
00:04:605 - Putting a circle here would be fantastic in helping the player keep rhythm. You could say "its an extra the player should be expected to predict the 3/4 gap" which is totally fair and justifiable, but putting a circle here just adds to the playability so much.
00:06:105 - circle please, at least this time it's not overmap lol
00:10:252 - circle for keep rhythm, as above. Just to be clear, this is entirely optional.
00:23:664 - You forgot to map this sound it seems like. Just adding onto the pattern of 00:23:399 (1,2,3) - should be fine.
00:28:517 (4,1) - cross screen jump wtf lol
00:29:928 (6) - Not really feeling the huge jump here. This sound isn't very meaningful so it doesn't deserve it.
Rest looks fine. Fun map. Maybe consider adding playability circles to the ending part whenever applicable as discussed in the opener.
Good luck with the set. The song's pretty nice.
This song reminds me of take on me lol
[General]
what is blackbg.png lol
[Normal]
00:00:105 (1,1) - Normals need at least 2 beats of recovery and this is only 1.5. I'd recommend just deleting the spinner as it's pretty short.
00:08:928 (2) - You can get a more even shape by placing the red nodes inside of the slider ticks.
00:26:575 (4,5) - This is the first 1/2 in the diff and it forces the player into a rather weird rhythm, that is putting a clickable red tick. I would just continue to the 1/1 rhythm for this part as this plays kinda weird. Alternatively, introduce 1/2 rhythm earlier but in a less complicated place to get the player used to it.
00:34:340 (3) - I think this is better as a 1/1 reverse slider instead of a 2/1 slider; I think it captures the music better.
00:47:752 (2,3,4) - Based on this intensity, I'd expect a circle on 00:51:105 -
00:52:693 (1) - ctrl+j + rotating it to the right a bit for better flow? so like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6459305
00:56:752 - As before, this is similar to 00:53:399 (2,3,4) - so I would expect a circle here.
[Meep's Hard]
00:11:399 (3,4,5) - 4 deserves more spacing. I know that you've been using 3/4 gaps this entire time so the player should still expect this to be 3/4, but the spacing is smaller than the one at 00:08:575 (3,4,5) - so it could fool the player into thinking its a 1/2 gap instead.
00:23:664 - circle perhaps? There is a sound here after all.
00:24:458 - Well since it's a hard I'd expect an SV increase for the kiai time, but I suppose it's fine to not have one.
00:39:987 (1,2) - This is the only extended slider in the entire kiai; I do think it fits so maybe you can find another place to put one to mix the rhythm up. I don't really see anything wrong with this kiai part in general other than the pretty repetitive rhythm. Use extended sliders like these for variety!
00:45:987 (1) - I don't really see the point of this NC
00:51:105 (6) - NC
Ugh this entire closing part has really weird rhythm due to the swapping of 3/4 gaps and 1/2 gaps, it's better to just use sliders imo. Makes it much more readable, and I don't really think it should be having those problems because it's only a Hard map.
[Insane]
00:16:164 - Since this red tick isn't important, but 00:16:252 - has a notable sound, maybe make 00:15:987 (1) - a 3/4 slider instead and make 00:16:340 - a hit circle.
00:23:487 (6,7,8) - Perhaps differentiate these from the rest of the stream in some way? NCing 00:23:487 (6) - would be the minimum but perhaps you could change the direction of the stream.
It would look very nice if you made an equilateral triangle out of 00:27:281 (1)'s tail, 00:27:634 (2)'s head, and 00:27:987 (3)'s head. This would require moving 00:27:987 (3) -
00:46:692 (5) - As before, doing something here to differentiate this from the rest of the stream would be cool.
Nice diff.
[Logic Agent]
hey
00:02:929 (5) - After some mathetmatics, ive deduced this should be on x:329 y:145 to continue the pattern of the previous sliders.
00:04:605 - Putting a circle here would be fantastic in helping the player keep rhythm. You could say "its an extra the player should be expected to predict the 3/4 gap" which is totally fair and justifiable, but putting a circle here just adds to the playability so much.
00:06:105 - circle please, at least this time it's not overmap lol
00:10:252 - circle for keep rhythm, as above. Just to be clear, this is entirely optional.
00:23:664 - You forgot to map this sound it seems like. Just adding onto the pattern of 00:23:399 (1,2,3) - should be fine.
00:28:517 (4,1) - cross screen jump wtf lol
00:29:928 (6) - Not really feeling the huge jump here. This sound isn't very meaningful so it doesn't deserve it.
Rest looks fine. Fun map. Maybe consider adding playability circles to the ending part whenever applicable as discussed in the opener.
Good luck with the set. The song's pretty nice.
If you want to go for spaced streams and jumpstreams, you need to be consistent with it, not just do one of each and then call it quits. Do more spaced streams, do more jumpstreams. The deathstream section is just unjustified and nothing even remotely suggests a stream here. It goes against the ranking criteria.
