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This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Sunday, November 06, 2016 at 3:21:21 PM

Artist: gi(a)rlish number
Title: Ima wa Mijikashi Yume Miyo Otome
Source: ガーリッシュ ナンバー
Tags: anime tv size ed ending Senbongi Sayaka 千本木彩花 Hondo Kaede 本渡楓 Ishikawa Yui 石川由依 Suzuki Eri 鈴木絵理 Onishi Saori 大西沙織 Chitose Karasuma 烏丸千歳 Yae Kugayama 久我山八重 Koto Katakura 片倉京 Momoka Sono 苑生百花 Kazuha Shibasaki 柴崎万葉 kawaiwkyik Doormat Karen
BPM: 200
Filesize: 17589kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Doormat's Hard (3.32 stars, 242 notes)
  2. Easy (1.39 stars, 75 notes)
  3. Insane (4.42 stars, 289 notes)
  4. Karen's Insane (3.95 stars, 297 notes)
  5. Normal (1.94 stars, 151 notes)
  6. wkyik's Insane (4.7 stars, 308 notes)


Download: gi(a)rlish number - Ima wa Mijikashi Yume Miyo Otome
Download: gi(a)rlish number - Ima wa Mijikashi Yume Miyo Otome (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Easy - me
Normal - me
Hard - Doormat
Insane - Karen, me, Rizia

video by Doormat, thx!


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3th

time for mods
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你们作图怎么这么快

[G]
有很多奇怪的东西最好关了,比如countdown和widescreen

[wkyik]
od9有点高了
00:40:723 - 这有音啊,我建议改成3个圈+滑条
00:37:723 (2,3) - ctrl+g
01:00:723 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 丧心病狂
01:02:223 (2,3,4,1) - kiai摆的很开,但是这块显得太局促了,建议也放开点摆

[insane]
01:07:423 - 放个圈?转盘错后一个格
怎么说呢,有点乱啊
本来想说点什么后来发现全图都这样,果然还是算了

[Karen]
01:11:323 (2) - 怎么感觉和13不是同一个滑条,好好复制一个啊

以上,gl
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chitose best grill

general
  1. BG should be 1366x768
  2. why there's no tags ? ):
  3. uncheck widescreen support in all diffs


easy
00:25:423 (2) - consistency with 00:20:623 (2) - i guess
00:59:923 (1,2) - I don't really know if this kind of overlap is authorized in easy diffs
[]
you could add more circles, I know that's an easy diff but I think it would be better and fun to play for beginners if there was more circles and not only sliders (just my opinion)

normal
00:29:323 (1,2,3) - suppose that you're trying to follow the vocals rhythm, then I think it would be better if you move 00:29:923 (2) - to 00:29:773 - and (3) to 00:30:073 -
00:50:023 (4) - mmh, there's nothing above imo
01:03:823 (1) - I think this reverse is not a really good choice, since with that it seems you're following vocals while not, it could be confused for beginners imo

karen
00:09:223 (3) - NC because SV change
00:16:823 (2) - overmap i guess try to make a bit as 00:26:023 (3,4,5,6,1) -
01:07:423 (1) - finish is missing
01:11:323 (2,3) - spacing here feels a bit weird, I think we should have a spacing a bit as 01:11:023 (1,2) -

wkyik
00:26:923 (6) - I think you should add a circle or something here to make as you did for 00:22:123 (2) - and 00:17:023 (1) -
01:07:223 (3,1) - we should have a bigger spacing than 01:07:023 (2,3) -
[]
that's all for me good luck!
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/514507
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Hi! M4M from your queue

  1. 00:09:823 (1) - i would make this slider straight
  2. 00:15:823 (2) - i think this slider fits the music better pointing downwards (and then move 3 closer to the center of the map)
  3. 00:20:623 (2) - move the end of this slider up a little bit to improve blanket
  4. 00:25:423 (2) - i think this should end on the white tick
  5. 00:39:823 (3,4) - i think these should be symmetrical to 1,2
  6. 00:45:823 (1) - around 273,228 is a better placement for this note i think
  7. 00:56:023 (4) - 227,336 maybe
  8. 01:08:923 - I would put a reverse slider here (reverse at 01:09:223), it's sad to not click the cute shichau no :c
  1. 00:09:823 (1) - soften the curve to blanket better
  2. 00:24:823 (2,3,4) - curve this pattern a little more so it's prettier
  3. 00:29:923 (2) - this note does not exist in the music, I would put a slider from 29:823 to 30:123 instead
  4. 00:30:823 (3) - if you do the prvious change, this should be NC instead of the next slider
  5. 00:33:223 (6) - NC here instead imo
  6. 00:35:623 (4) - same, NC
  7. 00:45:823 (1,2) - these sliders should end 1/3 earlier
  8. 00:59:923 (2,3) - http://puu.sh/rUOmV.png i think this is a better rhythm
  9. 01:03:223 (4) - NC
  10. 01:08:923 - there really should be a note here, it's sad to note be able to click those vocals :c
  11. 01:26:623 (1,2,3) - http://puu.sh/rUOy3.png maybe this rhythm instead?
  1. I don't have anything to mod for this diff. It's really fun and really polished! gj
  1. 00:04:423 (3) - there's nothing in the music on the slider end, so i would consider extending the slider and removing 4. optional though
  2. 00:19:423 (1,2) - i think the angle on these should be a bit sharper
  3. 00:30:123 (1) - i don't think there should be a slider here, I would consider changing this into just a single note - if you don't do that, then at least extend the slider to the next white tick
  4. 00:32:523 - add note to follow vocals?
  5. 00:32:623 (1) - remove nc
  6. 00:33:123 (2) - add nc
  7. 00:33:723 (5) - nc
  8. 00:34:923 - add note?
  9. 00:35:023 (1) - remove nc
  10. 00:35:523 (2) - nc
  11. 00:38:323 - add slider from here to 00:38:523
  12. 01:00:523 (3,4,5) - there's not a stream here in the music, i would consider changing the rhythm here. maybe like this? http://puu.sh/rUQAj.png
  13. 01:02:323 (7) - nc should be here instead
  14. 01:28:023 (2) - no reason to have a slider here. just place the note on the white tick and extend the previous slider
  1. 00:12:223 (1) - This should just be a single note, not a slider.
  2. 00:33:723 (1) - This would like nicer placed at 385,355
  3. 00:35:523 (2) - i think nc should go here instead
  4. 00:36:823 (3) - 2 notes works better here instead of slider (with NC on the second one)
  5. 00:38:323 - add slider from here to 00:38:523
  6. 00:53:923 (4) - maybe move to 17,223?
  7. 00:59:023 (1,2,1,2) - you should re-think this rhythm, nothing here should be snapped to 1/6 (http://puu.sh/rURa4.png change to this and listen)
  8. 01:19:023 (1) - remove nc
  9. 01:23:923 (4) - this note is too high up compared to the slider end
  10. 01:27:223 (1) - again, nothing should be snapped to 1/6, so you definitely need to change this. consider a rhythm like this instead maybe? http://puu.sh/rURgp.png
  1. This diff is super fun :o make sure you keep the stream at 01:00:723 (1) - it's awesome!
  2. 00:24:523 (3,5) - i think if you moved this a bit so the slider end of 4 isn't touching that would be good
  3. 00:25:423 (1) - end this 1/3 earlier and put a note on the white tick
  4. 00:26:323 (4) - this slider should end at the same spot but without the reverse
  5. 00:31:923 (2) - because of stack leniency this note ends up way too close to 1 when actually playing
  6. 00:34:923 (1) - remove nc, should be on 3 instead
  7. 00:35:523 (3,4,5) - consider this rhythm instead to follow vocal better http://puu.sh/rURCf.png
  8. 00:49:923 (2) - i don't think this note should be on the slider end, the timing isn't intuitive
  9. 00:59:173 (3) - yea, i don't think this should be snapped on 1/6. just start it at 59:223
  10. 01:06:123 (5) - this note isn't in the music (although i don't hate it)
  11. 01:27:223 (3,4,5,6) - the start of 4 isn't mapped to anything in the music and i would consider changing the rhythm here completely. a suggestion: http://puu.sh/rURQS.png


Also, offset might be a bit late. Maybe look into -4 or something? Dunno

That's all for my mod. Hope it's helpful. Nice 1/3 map and catchy song :D
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4m4
[General]
countdown/widescreen lulz

[Normal]
00:57:823 (4) - no need nc here for consistency
01:27:223 - add circle??

[Doormat]
00:04:323 (4,5) - instead of doing this try http://puu.sh/rUUIb.jpg
nice

[Ren]
00:16:423 (3,4,5) - maybe curve this a little like 00:16:723 (1,2,3) - ??
01:17:023 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - maybe curve this slider looks more good since your slider around here all organic shapes http://puu.sh/rUUxQ.jpg
01:21:223 (3) - curve this slider so the pattern is reflect 01:19:423 (1,2,3,4) - ( curve curve straight) ( straight straight curve)

[Insane]
00:00:223 (1) - until 00:04:123 (2) - silence every slider end like wkyik did
00:19:723 (2,1) - ctrl g ( but select 1 slider at a time )
00:21:423 (1,2,1,2) - imo too large spacing compare to near objects consider reduce a little? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6405482 about this distance is nice i think
00:28:123 (1,2,1) - silence sliderend
00:35:523 (2) - x:102y:89
00:38:523 (1,2,1,2) - how about http://puu.sh/rUUep.jpg
01:12:523 (2) - ctrl+h the shape so it have same vibe as 01:11:323 (2,3) -
01:17:323 (2) - i think ctrl g this more consistent with other pattern flow

[wkyik]
00:09:123 - change to auto sample and add clap and 00:09:223 (3,4,5) - set to normal sampleset
00:36:223 (1,2,3) - this is a little confusing..because of 00:35:523 (3,4) -
maybe put the 2 circles somewhere nearby instead of stacking it to the end of slider?
00:59:623 (2,1) - this blanket fix
01:27:223 (3,4) - maybe swap beat more fittting i think http://puu.sh/rUTMS.jpg
nicee e e

nice mappp
posted
Hey there~ m4m from your queue :D

[General]
  1. Remember to fix your tag ya
[wkyik's Insane]

  • Pretty fun and solid map :D Just a few issues.

    General
  1. OD9 is rather harsh on this kind of map :o Better tone down a little to 8.5 - 8.7 ish

    Mapping
  2. 00:09:223 (3) - Maybe add Normal sampleset here
  3. 00:16:723 (5) - Maybe finish here? Sounds nice along with 00:17:023 (1) - . If this is applied, do it the same with similar part later in the song
  4. 00:29:773 (3) - NC here. You might not like "NC spams", but I think this part is really necessary. Really helps to indicate the change in rhythm here. But you don't have to do the same for later parts because the player will be aware of another potential rhythm change after playing this part.
  5. 00:56:023 (3,6) - Finish at these part? Fits with the vocal really well
  6. 01:09:823 (1) - Not really sure about this part onwards. It felt really "weak" compared to the excited that you have built up during the kiai time. Using sliders like the other Insane really suit the song.
[Insane]

  • Really fun map :D

  1. 00:15:823 (2) - This whistle feels out of placed. Suggest to remove it @@
  2. 00:21:423 (1,2) - I think this distance is overdone. Mainly because most of the 1/3 spacing before have been rather small like 00:20:923 (2,3) - . Making this large really confuses me when I was playing, thinking that is a 1/2 rhythm like 00:45:823 (1,2) - 00:46:723 (1,2) -
  3. 00:45:223 (2) - Maybe hitsound this whole slider with Drum whistle or clap? Fits well with the drum in the song
  4. 00:48:223 (1,2) - Not sure, these sliders felt really weak compared to what you have mapped before this. Using circle emphasizing the vocal seems to be a better choice.
  5. 01:06:223 (1,2) - Similar to what I've said. Also, I think use drum hitsound fits the song really well instead of soft whistle
  6. 01:28:723 - Silence the slider-end here?
[Karen's Insane]

  • Solid stuff here xd

  1. 00:14:323 (1) - Finish felt really off here. Change to clap instead. Similar to the rest of the similar parts
  2. 01:28:723 - Silence this slider-end?

    Really not much to comment on this diff, everything plays really well :D

That's all from me~ Good luck!
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Requested from discord w

[General]
Widescreen and Countdown?
Tags ayy

[Doormat's Hard]
00:05:023 (1,2,3) - the pattern is a bit weird because the rhythm is similar to 00:06:223 (1,2,3) - and 00:07:423 (1,2,3) -
00:08:023 (3,1) - the angle here is a bit too sharp here, making the flow a bit awkward smh

00:21:823 (1) - I suggest not to overlap this one, instead make a small jump here would emphasize the strong beat
01:26:023 (3) - why only this one's not curved :O, looks weird.
01:27:223 (3) - I think replacing this with slider + note works better



Good Luck!
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silynn
00:12:223 (1) - there is a long sound (which i dunno how to name it lol)
00:35:523 (2) - downbeat on previous slider
00:36:823 (3) - feels too intensive on the slow part
00:38:323 - it would be a nice idea but unfortunately i dont really think it fits :/
00:53:923 (4) - i prefer it being stacked on the sliderend
00:59:023 (1,2,1,2) - vocals
01:27:223 (1) - vocals

rumi
00:19:723 (2,1) - i dont really like this arrangement :s

scarlet
00:15:823 (2) - seems fine to me @.@
00:21:423 (1,2) - lowered it a bit but im still keeping that jumpy feel
00:48:223 (1,2) - should be fine imo


others fixed incl. vert's suggestion
thx for the mods! will fix the easy and normal once the other diffs come in

edit: easy and normal:

silynn
00:09:823 (1) - i prefer this non-straight
00:15:823 (2) - i dont reli like the look tho
00:39:823 (3,4) - doesnt really matter lol
00:45:823 (1) - i prefer the current placement
00:56:023 (4) - ^
01:08:923 - dont want to :s
MugiwaraSekai
00:29:323 (1,2,3) - i dont really like the rhythm choice so i'll pass unless someone else brings it up
00:50:023 (4) - i hear something tho
01:03:823 (1) - i think it still follows vocals tho
silynn
00:33:223 (6) - downbeat on next
00:35:623 (4) - ^
00:59:923 (2,3) - not my liking
01:03:223 (4) - not quite necessary imo
01:08:923 - i dont like adding something here tho


and again, others fixed and thx!
posted

Rumia- wrote:

[Doormat]
00:04:323 (4,5) - instead of doing this try http://puu.sh/rUUIb.jpg changed to something similar (made the 5 a slider instead of a circle)
nice

-TakoYaki- wrote:

[img]
[Doormat's Hard]
00:05:023 (1,2,3) - the pattern is a bit weird because the rhythm is similar to 00:06:223 (1,2,3) - and 00:07:423 (1,2,3) - they're actually different sounds. notice how the main instrument here places different emphasis on the beats? that's what i'm following here
00:08:023 (3,1) - the angle here is a bit too sharp here, making the flow a bit awkward smh i think it's fine because of the 1/1 beat spacing means that it doesn't feel as sharp when there's more time to move from (3) to (1) but i'll keep an eye out and change this if others bring it up

00:21:823 (1) - I suggest not to overlap this one, instead make a small jump here would emphasize the strong beat this is stacked because i don't want double circles with 1/3 beat spacing to have jumps; makes movement feel too sharp and forced for a Hard imo
01:26:023 (3) - why only this one's not curved :O, looks weird. changed slider shape altogether to be just be a straight slider
01:27:223 (3) - I think replacing this with slider + note works better having 1/2 beat spacing while everything else around it has 1/3 beat spacing might be really confusing for a Hard diff, so i'll keep it as repeat for now and change if others bring this up



Good Luck!
thanks for the mods~ https://puu.sh/rXAlD/c1841d6f70.zip
posted

Silynn wrote:

  1. 00:04:423 (3) - there's nothing in the music on the slider end, so i would consider extending the slider and removing 4. optional though removed the slider
  2. 00:19:423 (1,2) - i think the angle on these should be a bit sharper current shape is ok
  3. 00:32:523 - add note to follow vocals? i don't like following vocals in peaceful parts
  4. 00:34:923 - add note? ^
  5. 00:38:323 - add slider from here to 00:38:523 ^
  6. 01:28:023 (2) - no reason to have a slider here. just place the note on the white tick and extend the previous slider hmm i think it's better to make 01:28:023 - this clickable

Rumia- wrote:

[Ren]
01:17:023 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - maybe curve this slider looks more good since your slider around here all organic shapes http://puu.sh/rUUxQ.jpg not so necessary o.o


all things not replied above have been fixed, thank you modders xdd

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 50623
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 0

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 0.6
BeatDivisor: 6
GridSize: 32
TimelineZoom: 2.699999

[Metadata]
Title:Ima wa Mijikashi Yume Miyo Otome
TitleUnicode:今は短し夢見よ乙女
Artist:gi(a)rlish number
ArtistUnicode:ガーリッシュ ナンバー
Creator:StarrStyx
Version:Karen's Insane
Source:ガーリッシュ ナンバー
Tags:anime tv size ed ending Senbongi Sayaka 千本木彩花 Hondo Kaede 本渡楓 Ishikawa Yui 石川由依 Suzuki Eri 鈴木絵理 Onishi Saori 大西沙織 Chitose Karasuma 烏丸千歳 Yae Kugayama 久我山八重 Koto Katakura 片倉京 Momoka Sono 苑生百花 Kazuha Shibasaki 柴崎万葉 kawaiwkyik Doormat Karen
BeatmapID:1112623
BeatmapSetID:522393

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:6
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:7
ApproachRate:9
SliderMultiplier:1.82
SliderTickRate:1

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posted

Vert wrote:

你们作图怎么这么快


[wkyik]
od9有点高了
00:40:723 - 这有音啊,我建议改成3个圈+滑条
00:37:723 (2,3) - ctrl+g
01:00:723 (1,1,2,3,1,2,3) - 丧心病狂
01:02:223 (2,3,4,1) - kiai摆的很开,但是这块显得太局促了,建议也放开点摆 全改了


以上,gl

MugiwaraSekai wrote:

wkyik
00:26:923 (6) - I think you should add a circle or something here to make as you did for 00:22:123 (2) - and 00:17:023 (1) -
01:07:223 (3,1) - we should have a bigger spacing than 01:07:023 (2,3) - keeping good symmetry
[]

Silynn wrote:

Hi! M4M from your queue

  1. This diff is super fun :o make sure you keep the stream at 01:00:723 (1) - it's awesome! thx
  2. 00:24:523 (3,5) - i think if you moved this a bit so the slider end of 4 isn't touching that would be good its good to me
  3. 00:25:423 (1) - end this 1/3 earlier and put a note on the white tick
  4. 00:26:323 (4) - this slider should end at the same spot but without the reverse
  5. 00:31:923 (2) - because of stack leniency this note ends up way too close to 1 when actually playing
  6. 00:34:923 (1) - remove nc, should be on 3 instead
  7. 00:35:523 (3,4,5) - consider this rhythm instead to follow vocal better http://puu.sh/rURCf.png
  8. 00:49:923 (2) - i don't think this note should be on the slider end, the timing isn't intuitive
  9. 00:59:173 (3) - yea, i don't think this should be snapped on 1/6. just start it at 59:223
  10. 01:06:123 (5) - this note isn't in the music (although i don't hate it)
  11. 01:27:223 (3,4,5,6) - the start of 4 isn't mapped to anything in the music and i would consider changing the rhythm here completely. a suggestion: http://puu.sh/rURQS.png


Also, offset might be a bit late. Maybe look into -4 or something? Dunno

That's all for my mod. Hope it's helpful. Nice 1/3 map and catchy song :D

Rumia- wrote:

[wkyik]
00:09:123 - change to auto sample and add clap and 00:09:223 (3,4,5) - set to normal sampleset
00:36:223 (1,2,3) - this is a little confusing..because of 00:35:523 (3,4) -
maybe put the 2 circles somewhere nearby instead of stacking it to the end of slider? i like this rhythm
00:59:623 (2,1) - this blanket fix
01:27:223 (3,4) - maybe swap beat more fittting i think http://puu.sh/rUTMS.jpg
nicee e e

nice mappp

[ -Scarlet- ] wrote:

Hey there~ m4m from your queue :D

[General]
  1. Remember to fix your tag ya
[wkyik's Insane]

  • Pretty fun and solid map :D Just a few issues.

    General
  1. OD9 is rather harsh on this kind of map :o Better tone down a little to 8.5 - 8.7 ish

    Mapping
  2. 00:09:223 (3) - Maybe add Normal sampleset here
  3. 00:16:723 (5) - Maybe finish here? Sounds nice along with 00:17:023 (1) - . If this is applied, do it the same with similar part later in the song dont have finish sounds
  4. 00:29:773 (3) - NC here. You might not like "NC spams", but I think this part is really necessary. Really helps to indicate the change in rhythm here. But you don't have to do the same for later parts because the player will be aware of another potential rhythm change after playing this part.
  5. 00:56:023 (3,6) - Finish at these part? Fits with the vocal really well
  6. 01:09:823 (1) - Not really sure about this part onwards. It felt really "weak" compared to the excited that you have built up during the kiai time. Using sliders like the other Insane really suit the song.


That's all from me~ Good luck!
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296,240,77623,6,2,L|168:223,1,100,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:1:0:0:
348,156,77923,2,2,L|220:139,1,100,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:1:0:0:
64,28,78223,6,2,P|52:84|104:180,1,119.999996337891,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:1:0:0:
304,128,78523,2,2,P|316:72|264:-24,1,119.999996337891,4|0,1:2|0:0,0:1:0:0:
184,76,78823,1,4,1:0:0:0:
36,292,79023,1,8,0:3:0:0:
36,292,79123,1,0,1:0:0:0:
476,292,79423,6,2,L|372:280,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:1:0:0:
512,216,79723,2,2,L|408:204,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:1:0:0:
508,132,80023,2,2,L|404:120,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:1:0:0:
256,192,80323,1,2,0:0:0:0:
36,292,80623,6,2,L|140:280,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:1:0:0:
0,216,80923,2,2,L|104:204,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:1:0:0:
4,132,81223,2,2,L|108:120,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:1:0:0:
256,192,81523,1,2,0:0:0:0:
144,16,81823,6,2,P|152:68|180:116,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:1:0:0:
368,368,82123,2,2,P|360:316|332:268,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:1:0:0:
108,114,82423,6,2,P|134:147|172:169,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:1:0:0:
403,269,82723,2,2,P|377:236|339:214,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:1:0:0:
112,256,83023,6,2,P|140:266|208:266,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:1:0:0:
400,128,83323,2,2,P|371:117|303:117,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:1:0:0:
256,192,83623,5,8,1:2:0:0:
256,192,83823,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,192,83923,1,0,1:0:0:0:
426,252,84223,5,0,1:0:0:0:
86,131,84523,1,0,1:0:0:0:
312,24,84823,2,0,L|324:112,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,360,85123,2,0,L|188:272,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
86,131,85423,5,0,1:0:0:0:
426,252,85723,1,0,1:0:0:0:
60,232,86023,2,0,L|148:220,1,80,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
452,152,86323,2,0,L|364:164,1,80,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,86623,5,0,1:0:0:0:
368,328,86923,1,0,1:0:0:0:
144,56,87223,1,0,1:0:0:0:
60,232,87423,5,8,0:3:0:0:
136,160,87523,1,4,0:3:0:0:
156,352,87723,6,0,P|148:296|192:228,1,106.666666666667,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,88023,5,0,1:0:0:0:
240,312,88123,1,0,1:0:0:0:
472,204,88323,6,2,P|441:310|360:233,1,266.666666666667,4|0,0:1|0:0,0:1:0:0:
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  • Black is Personal comments.
    Bold Black is Highly recommended to fix.
    Red is Unrankable that you should fix.
[Easy]
  1. Unused inherit (green) timing line (no slider velocity change or no volume change):
  2. 00:02:623 (3) - 00:07:423 (3) - 00:50:023 (3) - 00:54:223 (3) - NC
  3. 01:15:823 (2) - DS遠了
  4. 01:27:723 (1) - 不用NC
[Normal]
  1. 00:24:823 (2) - DS遠了
[Doormat's Hard]
  1. Unused inherit (green) timing line (no slider velocity change or no volume change):
    00:23:923 -
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    00:26:323 -
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    00:48:223 -
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[Karen's Insane]
  1. Nice
[Insane]
  1. Unused inherit (green) timing line (no slider velocity change or no volume change):
    00:01:423 -
    00:02:623 -
[wkyik's Insane]
  1. 01:28:323 (1) - Unsnap滑條,應該snap到01:28:723 - ,順便滑條尾可以靜音一下
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plz help me add a green line with 1.0x sv on 01:28:323 -
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starr can you fix for me thanks xd
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updated and changed literally everything

Thx!
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Bubbled!
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