JBHyperion wrote:
Nelly's Cup
Hitsounds seem a bit loud, especially in the intro. Try using the volume settings found in Salad kDidn't look at spacing or flow on account of the rhythm needing a fair bit of work, but it's not a lost cause, so don't give up! Worked on it dont worry (:
- 00:05:684 (1,2) - Why did you switch rhythm here when it's the same as the previous parts? I quite liked how you emphasised 00:00:230 (1,2,3) - but then you went with a pair of super generic sliders that cover noticeable beats and end on a downbeat, which feels very bland. Keep the rhythm you used before hyere, just mix up the flow a little please Hell I dont know how did I came up with that idea but in the intro I changed the flow, I guess
- 00:20:684 (2) - I'd shorten this to a 2/1 slider and map the last white ticks as two circles. The sounds here are much stronger, and you even end on a finish, so more spacing would feel good here k
- 00:23:525 - Any reason why your break is dragged back but snapped to nothing in particular? If you want it to come up early, snap it to 00:23:411 - but otherwise the default works best You gave me an excellent idea
- 00:24:775 (1,2) - Another generic slider covering important sounds and following nothing in particular. Additionally, (2)'s tail lands on a downbeat, which feels awkward to play with this note not being emphasised. Try something like this instead: http://puu.sh/tIAKH/f2d965ede9.jpg k
- 00:29:207 - Strong beat unmapped, I'd make a repeat slider here instead of two circles to better follow the vocal k
- 00:30:230 (1,2) - Same as 00:24:775 (1,2) - k
- 00:35:003 (3) - Making this a 1/2 slider follows vocal nicely, that pitch change is very noticeable when left unmapped k
- 00:35:684 (1,1,1,1) - I'd shorten each of these to the previous white tick and add a circle on the downbeat. The vocal on each is equallys as strong as the next circle, so it makes sense to map them in the same way k
- 00:46:593 (1) - Strong vocal on downbeat is left unmapped, try 3/1 + 1/1 slider instead, or at least make it consistent with 00:50:684 (1,2) - k
- 00:48:639 (2) - Same as 00:35:684 (1,1,1,1) - would make it consistent with 00:52:730 (3,4) - and provide better emphasis on the drums k
- 00:50:684 (1,2) - Same as 00:46:593 (1) - unless you changed that to be the same as this already k
- 00:58:866 (1,2) - Makes more sense as two 1/1 sliders and a circle to cover the vocal properly k
- 01:07:048 (1,2) - ^ As above k
- 01:11:139 (1,2) - These are mapping the same held vocal sound, makes more sense to combine them together into a single slider k
- 01:16:593 (1,2) - ^ As above k
- 01:19:320 (1) - Feels a bit repetitive, I'd make these two differently spaced 2/1 sliders. You can add a circle at 01:21:707 - also to catch the piano and provide some variety k
- 01:22:048 (1) - 3/1 slider + circle for following vocal please k
- 01:26:139 (1) - Feels weird ending the slider on the strongest note, try splitting into 2/1 slider and circle instead k
- 01:34:320 (2) - 3/2 repeat slider following vocal would be cool here, and consistent with 01:45:230 (2) - k
- 01:39:775 (2) - ^ As above k
- 01:41:139 (1) - These repeats aren't following anything noticeable, simplifying to a 2/1 slider would be more fitting k
- 01:52:048 (3) - Consider NC since this combo covers a whole measure k
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