1. Catharsis (6.63 stars, 1628 notes)

Pending on October 11, 2016
Bubbled on June 11, 2017 by Monstrata
Bubble Popped on June 11, 2017 by ZiRoX

Catharsis : By Ascendance and -wwwww
Hitsounds : By Naitoshi

Cawub wrote:

QwQ such a nice song

[Catharsis]
How some things sound
00:06:172 - Add a note here, it would sound cleaner. sure :3
01:33:284 - Putting this stream at 01:32:939 - sounds better to me. I think this is okay the way it is! It fits the clap formation I'm going for here.
05:20:871 - I think it sounds better with no note here. The beat you are following stops at 05:20:784 - not my part but its supposed to emphasize the bloops i think
Gameplay
04:42:250 (1) - This note is sorta awkward to hit try x:208 fixed!

This is a nice map it goes nicely with the song, good job both of you short mods feel wrong :c

[Colours]
Combo1 : 159,207,255
Combo2 : 102,102,255
Combo3 : 255,148,40
Combo4 : 70,163,255
Combo5 : 143,143,143

RoseusJaeger wrote:

NM since I like the song and map even if I suck at playing it.

General

I feel the AR should be a little higher for readability on some of the more complex patterns, that have examples below. I feel it should be more around 9.5 or 9.6 because some of the dense hyper patterns are very, well, condensed than they should be. It may be just due to my own inexperience though. Agreed, bumped it to 9.6

I don't think the kiai fountains are needed until around 00:56:043 since the fountain spam makes sense there musically. The ones before that time stamp and actually a bit distracting and will cause missing on what should be easy patterns. I want to leave a few for the bububu but I removed a few

Maybe add combo colors? I'd suggest this palette or something similar to play up the aesthetic. Thank you!!

[Colours]
Combo1 : 159,207,255
Combo2 : 102,102,255
Combo3 : 255,148,40
Combo4 : 70,163,255
Combo5 : 143,143,143

Catharsis

00:06:172 (5,6) – This looks weird to me and kinda messes the aesthetic for me personally. I think it would be better if either slider (6) was vertical or to do a simple C-curve stream instead to match the smoothness of the piano here. did it

01:36:043 (1,2,3,4) – In this section, the lower AR really made the distances of the hypers a bit disorienting. It might be due to my inexperience, but the sudden change in hyper distance at (1,2) compared to the distance you used under 5.00x spacing was the main issue here. I adjusted the distances now, should be better!

01:49:836 to 02:00:871 - This section is what I'm referring to in example for the AR issue in general. The high density of 1/8th patterns here feel a bit distorted to feel more snappy when it's more of a gradual build up (meaning flow is preferred) to the “bub” sounds which make sense to be snappy, if that makes sense. Should be fixed with the new AR


Other than that, I don't feel confident enough to judge anymore of the patterns so good luck.

Cawub wrote:

QwQ such a nice song

[Catharsis]
Gameplay
01:41:776 (2,3,4,5) - This doesn't feel like it flows well with the map, every other one requires a bit of movement but this doesn't feel like it needs any at all. Something to keep in mind might want to change it if others mention it. fix
05:20:871 - Kiai for the last note seems pretty odd. ok to me

This is a nice map it goes nicely with the song, good job both of you short mods feel wrong :c

RoseusJaeger wrote:

Catharsis
01:06:733 (3) – I get what you're doing here by increasing the slider velocity to almost force a dash through the slider, but I feel the initial dash is a little large and it could help balance it out by tilting the slider just a bit more vertical. Specifically what I did was Ctrl+Shift+R and rotated the slider by -13 degrees, clockwise by the selection centre. fix

01:36:043 (1,2,3,4) – In this section, the lower AR really made the distances of the hypers a bit disorienting. It might be due to my inexperience, but the sudden change in hyper distance at (1,2) compared to the distance you used under 5.00x spacing was the main issue here.

01:46:560 (1) – I don't get why this is anti-flow rhythmically. It would make more sense for this to just follow the flow of the song and Ctrl+H it and then just put it back at X=152. ok

01:49:836 to 02:00:871 - This section is what I'm referring to in example for the AR issue in general. The high density of 1/8th patterns here feel a bit distorted to feel more snappy when it's more of a gradual build up (meaning flow is preferred) to the “bub” sounds which make sense to be snappy, if that makes sense.


Other than that, I don't feel confident enough to judge anymore of the patterns so good luck.

1. Personally I think 9.6 is a bit much to add, especially since its only 174bpm, maybe bump it down to 9.5?

1. 00:15:871 (1,2,3,4,5) - curve this pattern more outwards since the horizantal sliders have sharp turns and the curve just stops it
2. 00:24:146 (1) - ctrl+g?
3. 00:29:491 (4,1,2,3,4) - space these notes out a bit more for players to dash into due to buildup
4. 00:39:319 (5) - move over to x64, still reads as a dash but a bit more comfortable to play
5. 00:38:112 (1) - antiflow is weird here coming from a hyperdash, rotate the slider -15 (centre) might play a bit better imo
6. 01:06:043 (1,2) - minor suggestion but ctrl+g these two notes (separate) so the slidertails would be pointing towards the right, it might give a better indication to the player where to go
7. 01:25:526 (2,3,4) - move this pattern over to x152 , the lack of dash feels weird
8. 01:52:091 (1) - ctrl+g and rotate 180 (centre), the pause and sudden movement to the right kinda confuses me honestly, pattern might be more readable this way
9. 01:52:609 (2) - (if applying prev mod) move the kickslider over to x104 to make the reverse slider a hyperdash again

Monstrata wrote:

General

Unused hitsounds:
normal-slidertick.wav
normal-slidertick2.wav
soft-hitclap2.wav Removed them all!

Maybe Combo 4 is too light. Blends in too well with the BG and is above luminosity 220. I changed it to a yellow-y color, hopefully it's a bit better now.

Catharsis

00:15:885 (1,2,3,4,5) - You could probably add more of a curve here, the movement is very low. Yeah, I spaced these out a bit to create some additional movement
00:18:126 (3,4) - A bit far, 00:18:298 (4) - try something like 376? Did x384 instead, but yeah, I reduced it.
01:36:747 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Kinda a weird stream shape with not much movement here, something similar to the S-Shape done before would be nice. I added an L-Shape at the end of it so it's not repeating exactly the S-Shape as before but yeah, adjusted it.
01:47:479 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Easy to miss here imo. Maybe spacing the individual notes out to give more leniency would be nicer here. I've already changed this pattern a lot (with Fii) and I think because of the stranger sounds that a bit of a harsher pattern wouldn't be bad here.
01:48:471 (1) - A bit more curve on this slider would be great, plays too much like a standstill the way it's aligned now Yeah, I've made it horizontal now.
03:34:678 (1,2,3) - Probably a bit too spaced for such a calm section. Reducing it to a small walk instead of a dash would probably be better here. Whoops, seems like it was a mistake, fixed.
03:36:574 (6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1) - Pretty messy stream shape xd Could use a rework in flow My old mapping style T_T Fixed it!
03:42:091 (3,4,5,6,7) - 03:43:471 (3,4,5,6,7) - These stream shapes facing towards the wall create awkward flow where the song doesn't really call for it. Flipping them both is more intuitive Agreed
03:55:367 (1,2,3) - Both rhythmically and structurally, this pattern poses a problem. Not only is 03:55:367 (1) - the only time you've made a double hyper chain like this, but 03:55:453 (2) - skips a very important beat on the red tick that should not be underemphasized. I kept the hyperchain, but decided to change the other pattern to a 1/4 pattern.
04:05:195 - Pretty strong beat being skipped here. Added
04:05:712 (1,2,3,4) - Add a bit more curve here? Plays too much like a standstill in such an intense section. Done
04:09:160 (1) - Inconsistent with previous representations of the same sound 1/4'd it
04:13:988 (1,1,1,1) - Why not make this 4 hyper like you did earlier? Did it!
04:22:263 (6,7) - Could be hyperdashed to, you've done it before and such a pitch increase deserves to be it's own structure, not attached to a weaker one. Agreed

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Should be all~

1. AR9.6 feels a bit too much for the song. I tried AR9.4 (in fact, that's what I used to test the map) and it didn't feel unreadable at all.
2. 00:15:885 (1,2,3,4) - Why are these at 5% volume, they provide no feedback at all. For similar sounds you've used a higher volume.
3. 00:17:436 (1,2,3) - These also provide no audible feedback at all
4. 00:42:264 (1,2) - Sounds are really weak here, so I don't get why you add an 1/4 HDash between these. You didn't for way stronger sounds at 00:21:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -, so it strikes odd.
5. 00:50:195 (4) - Vocal clearly ends on the 1/2, so I'd shorten the slider, for consistency with other similar parts.
6. 00:53:384 (2) - This note in particular is overmapped. There are 1/4 notes before and after, but not on this one.
7. 01:10:367 (2,3,4) - (3) isn't nearly as strong as (4), so I don't think the double HDash is fitting at all, not to mention that it's overly unexpected and can lead to annoying misses. One option to fix this and not have to rework the following patterns is to Ctrl+H 01:11:747 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - .
8. 01:23:126 (3,4,5) - I wouldn't put HDashes between these, since there isn't any noticeable increase in the song intensity, so it's inconsistent with previous patterns.
9. 01:28:643 (3,4,5) - ^
10. 01:38:298 (6,1) - Why isn't this an HDash? For consistency, I'd put one here.
11. 01:39:850 (2) - This slider is extended to nothing. At most, you can hear the cymbal crash ending on the blue tick.
12. 01:41:790 (2) - This note in particular is overmapped.
13. 01:42:953 (1) - This slider should end on the red tick, that's where a singular sound can be heard.
14. 01:43:513 (7) - This note in particular is overmapped. Note how you didn't to 7-plets for the same sound at 01:44:678 (2,3,4,5,6) - and 01:46:229 (3,4,5,6,7) -
15. 01:45:712 (1) - Should end on the red tick instead, same reason as mentioned before.
16. 01:47:565 (4,5) - I don't think this HDash should be as strong as 01:47:392 (9,1) - , the sounds are clearly different in strenght. I think you can move 01:47:609 (5,6,7,8) - to the left a bit, to reduce the HDash intensity a bit.
17. 01:48:471 (3) - Should end on the red tick.
18. 01:49:850 (1) - Should end on the red tick.
19. 01:50:367 (6) - Should end on the red tick. Also, I'd curve it a bit more since it's a bit easy to overshoot after the strong 1/4 HDash.
20. 01:51:229 (1) - Red tick.
21. 01:54:117 (2) - Overmapped. Take 01:52:609 (2,3) - as reference.
22. 01:55:367 (1) - Red tick.
23. 01:57:091 (1) - Red tick.
24. 01:58:126 (1) - Red tick.
25. 01:58:643 (1) - Should end on the white tick instead.
26. 02:03:040 (5) - This is overmapped. Note how you didn't do it on 02:14:074 -
27. 02:05:022 (1) - Red tick.
28. 02:06:402 (1) - Red tick.
29. 02:07:436 (5) - Should be a circle instead (or a 1/2 slider together with 02:07:264 (4,5) - ), as there's no distinctive sound on the blue tick.
30. 02:07:781 (1) - Red tick.
31. 02:10:540 (1) - Red tick.
32. 02:14:678 (1) - Red tick.
33. 02:15:195 (3) - Red tick.
34. 02:16:057 (1) - Red tick.
35. 02:17:436 (1) - Red tick.
36. 02:17:953 (3) - Red tick.
37. 02:18:816 (1) - Red tick.
38. 02:20:540 (3) - Should be a circle instead, there's nothing in the blue tick.
39. 02:21:057 (1,2,3) - Shouldn't the HDash be between (1,2) instead of (2,3)? (2) is way stronger than (3).
40. 02:21:574 (1) - Red tick.
41. 02:23:039 (2,4) - Overmapped.
42. 02:23:988 (3,4,5,6) - There are 6 audible sounds here (like a violin or something), so they should be 1/6.
43. 02:24:333 (1) - Red tick.
44. 02:27:091 (1) - Red tick.
45. 02:29:850 (1) - Red tick.
46. 02:32:609 (1) - Could shorten to 1/2, to not skip the beat there, and add a circle.
47. 02:35:022 (5,6) - These are wrongly snapped, should be a 1/3 slider + a 1/6 one.
48. 02:35:885 (3) - This should be a circle instead, there's nothing on the blue tick.
49. 02:37:220 (5) - Overmapped.
50. 02:38:816 (1,2,3,4,5) - I can count 4 beats between (1) and (5)'s head, including them, so they should be snapped to 1/6s instead.
51. 02:39:505 (1) - Red tick.
52. 02:40:022 (3) - Could shorten it to not skip the beat and add a circle.
53. 02:43:643 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These should be triplets, (4) and (8) are overmapped.
54. 02:44:850 (4,1,2) - I found the 1/2 after the strong 1/4 HDash easy to miss. Maybe you can move (1,2) a bit to the left to reduce the HDash strenght?
55. 02:55:927 (5) - This note is overmapped.
56. 02:57:264 (4) - I'd move this a bit to the left, without taking out the HDash, as the little dash it has can strike as surprisive in a really calm part.
57. 03:03:471 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - I'd reduce the distance within each pair/triplet, as this is still a calm part. Same stuff for 03:06:230 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) -
58. 03:07:781 (4,1) - I'd take this HDash out, we're still within a calm part and it's quite unexpected to be honest.
59. 03:29:505 (3) - Red tick.
60. 03:31:487 (4) - Overmapped. If there's something on a blue tick, it's 03:31:660 - .
61. 03:32:436 (6,1) - I'd reduce the strenght of this HDash a bit, the section is still calm.
62. 03:34:678 (1,2) - The 1/4s here are overmapped.
63. 03:36:833 (1,2,3) - I think the first slider should be a repeat one, and have two 1/4s at 03:37:091 - and 03:37:264 - instead, as it follows the music better.
64. 03:40:540 (3) - This is such a flowbreaker, and the sound at the blue tick isn't even that strong to require a repeat. I'd keep the trend of the 1/4 streams instead.
65. 03:49:074 (5,1,2,3) - Really underwhelming considering the strenght and pitch of the synth. Yes, I can also suggest adding HDashes when I deem fit
66. 03:51:229 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - To me the HDashes pair should be (1,2), (4,5) and (7,8), based on pitch and strenght of the synth.
67. 03:54:505 (4) - Should be split into a 1/4 slider. Currently you're missing a HDash opportunity to the high pitch at 03:54:678 - .
68. 03:54:505 (4,5,6,7) - We already talked about this in PM.
69. 03:57:609 (4) - I think this one would be much more comfortable to play with an HDash to it.
70. 03:58:471 (3,4) - The antiflow in this makes it a bit uncomfortable to play for me. Maybe making (4) go to the left instead is better?
71. 03:59:505 (1,2) - I don't think the sound at (2) is that strong to require this antiflow movement. Maybe you can put (2) to the right of (1) instead?
72. 04:03:643 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'd make the stream curve a bit more, mainly to get (8) a bit closer to the next circle and reduce the HDash strenght a bit, which is a bit too much.
73. 04:06:660 (2) - There isn't a sound there. If anything, this should be on the red tick right before this.
74. 04:09:505 (5,6,7,8) - Wew lad, already talked about this.
75. 04:10:885 (3,4,5,6) - WEEEW
76. 04:11:487 (4,5,6) - Could have an HDash here?
77. 04:14:678 - The Kiais starting here conflict me. I get that the patterns and HDashes are mostly following the synth in the back, but personally I think the vocals are the strongest sound here, so I expected something like the 1st or 2nd Kiai instead.
78. The section starting on 04:36:747 - is way harder than the Kiai, having more 1/4 HDashes with antiflow, hyperchains like 04:36:747 (1,2) - and 04:43:988 (1,2) -, the infamous wiggles. And since you said this was from a time when you didn't care for aesthetics and stuff, maybe you agree to tone done and improve this section a bit.

ZiRoX wrote:

Popping the bubble because there's a lot of overmapping, overdone pattern and a couple hitsound issues. It's my style

1. AR9.6 feels a bit too much for the song. I tried AR9.4 (in fact, that's what I used to test the map) and it didn't feel unreadable at all. I think it might be too slow, so I tried 9.5. Hopefully it's a bit better now to you.
2. 00:15:885 (1,2,3,4) - Why are these at 5% volume, they provide no feedback at all. For similar sounds you've used a higher volume. Fixed to 25%.
3. 00:17:436 (1,2,3) - These also provide no audible feedback at all Also 25%
4. 00:42:264 (1,2) - Sounds are really weak here, so I don't get why you add an 1/4 HDash between these. You didn't for way stronger sounds at 00:21:574 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) -, so it strikes odd. Kaitlin sucks tbh
5. 00:50:195 (4) - Vocal clearly ends on the 1/2, so I'd shorten the slider, for consistency with other similar parts. Shortened
6. 00:53:384 (2) - This note in particular is overmapped. There are 1/4 notes before and after, but not on this one. Not my part, but I think I'm going to keep this. The boop boop sounds in the background provide enough feedback to create a stream here, combined with the emphasis on the vocal within the 5plet makes it an acceptable overmap in my opinion. I don't think it detracts from the map in any way by leaving it here.
7. 01:10:367 (2,3,4) - (3) isn't nearly as strong as (4), so I don't think the double HDash is fitting at all, not to mention that it's overly unexpected and can lead to annoying misses. One option to fix this and not have to rework the following patterns is to Ctrl+H 01:11:747 (3,4,5,1,2,3,1,2,3,1) - . Fair enough, fixed it.
8. 01:23:126 (3,4,5) - I wouldn't put HDashes between these, since there isn't any noticeable increase in the song intensity, so it's inconsistent with previous patterns. Made a Z-Pattern with it
9. 01:28:643 (3,4,5) - ^ Hopefully you don't mind but I'm gonna keep this one. I feel like it's a nice buildup as the song starts to ramp up in the next measure.
10. 01:38:298 (6,1) - Why isn't this an HDash? For consistency, I'd put one here. Yep, reworked this pattern a bit.
11. 01:39:850 (2) - This slider is extended to nothing. At most, you can hear the cymbal crash ending on the blue tick. I shortened the slider but I set the slidertail to 5% since it's no longer acting as an extension.
12. 01:41:790 (2) - This note in particular is overmapped. The 1/8 buzzes in this section are really what identifies this map as what it is.
    Since the 1/8 sound starts on the tick at 01:41:747 - , I guess it's not really overmapped either.
13. 01:42:953 (1) - This slider should end on the red tick, that's where a singular sound can be heard. Gonna keep this one for the extended sound that leads into the 1/8 buzz here. If you would rather though, I'm okay with making it a 1/2 slider + 1/4 circle.
14. 01:43:513 (7) - This note in particular is overmapped. Note how you didn't to 7-plets for the same sound at 01:44:678 (2,3,4,5,6) - and 01:46:229 (3,4,5,6,7) - Mmm fixed
15. 01:45:712 (1) - Should end on the red tick instead, same reason as mentioned before. Did 1/2 + 1/4 here
16. 01:47:565 (4,5) - I don't think this HDash should be as strong as 01:47:392 (9,1) - , the sounds are clearly different in strenght. I think you can move 01:47:609 (5,6,7,8) - to the left a bit, to reduce the HDash intensity a bit. Fixed.
17. 01:48:471 (3) - Should end on the red tick. Fixed
18. 01:49:850 (1) - Should end on the red tick. This is one of the extended sliders with real uses. The 1/8 buzz here at 01:50:195 (2,3,4,5) - works really well with the extended sliders like these because they gain more emphasis. As they are strange and unique sounds, we decided we wanted to amplify them in this section, which is why I decided to keep the ones with real purpose (like this). Notice how the above one that I changed didn't lead into a 1/8 buzz, but instead into just a 1/2 slider.
19. 01:50:367 (6) - Should end on the red tick. Also, I'd curve it a bit more since it's a bit easy to overshoot after the strong 1/4 HDash. No curve, but I tilted it a bit so it's easier to catch. Also reduced it and did the 1/4 fix.
20. 01:51:229 (1) - Red tick. Intended
21. 01:54:117 (2) - Overmapped. Take 01:52:609 (2,3) - as reference. Deleted.
22. 01:55:367 (1) - Red tick. Intended w/ 1/8
23. 01:57:091 (1) - Red tick. Intended
24. 01:58:126 (1) - Red tick.
25. 01:58:643 (1) - Should end on the white tick instead. Yup, fixed this one with the 1/4
26. 02:03:040 (5) - This is overmapped. Note how you didn't do it on 02:14:074 - This is my part and that was kaitlin's but I'll fix it for consistency's sake.
27. 02:05:022 (1) - Red tick. Just so I can stop typing "fixed" note that anything that wasn't extended slider -> 1/8 was fixed with the 1/2 + 1/4 combo we discussed on discord.
28. 02:06:402 (1) - Red tick.
29. 02:07:436 (5) - Should be a circle instead (or a 1/2 slider together with 02:07:264 (4,5) - ), as there's no distinctive sound on the blue tick. I think this is fine enough to be represented with 1/4. Low pitched "oo" starts on 02:07:436 (6) - high pitched on 02:07:609 (7) - .
30. 02:07:781 (1) - Red tick.
31. 02:10:540 (1) - Red tick. Actually keeping this one for the drawn out sigh kind of sound she makes, I think it fits nicely here.
32. 02:14:678 (1) - Red tick.
33. 02:15:195 (3) - Red tick.
34. 02:16:057 (1) - Red tick.
35. 02:17:436 (1) - Red tick.
36. 02:17:953 (3) - Red tick.
37. 02:18:816 (1) - Red tick.
38. 02:20:540 (3) - Should be a circle instead, there's nothing in the blue tick. Same as the earlier reply, except the voice is just softer this time.
39. 02:21:057 (1,2,3) - Shouldn't the HDash be between (1,2) instead of (2,3)? (2) is way stronger than (3). Seems like a mistake, fixed!
40. 02:21:574 (1) - Red tick. Sigh sound, as above.
41. 02:23:039 (2,4) - Overmapped. I would actually really like to keep this, I hope you don't mind :< I think the extended percussion sounds really nice here.
42. 02:23:988 (3,4,5,6) - There are 6 audible sounds here (like a violin or something), so they should be 1/6. Nice catch, fixed.
43. 02:24:333 (1) - Red tick.
44. 02:27:091 (1) - Red tick.
45. 02:29:850 (1) - Red tick.
46. 02:32:609 (1) - Could shorten to 1/2, to not skip the beat there, and add a circle. Yeet
47. 02:35:022 (5,6) - These are wrongly snapped, should be a 1/3 slider + a 1/6 one. Just made it a full 1/6 stream instead.
48. 02:35:885 (3) - This should be a circle instead, there's nothing on the blue tick. You know I love my 5plets :<
49. 02:37:220 (5) - Overmapped. uhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh gonna extend the 1/8 so... keep.
50. 02:38:816 (1,2,3,4,5) - I can count 4 beats between (1) and (5)'s head, including them, so they should be snapped to 1/6s instead. It's not exactly following the percussion though, it's following the buzzing noise that we've represented as 1/8 the whole time.
51. 02:39:505 (1) - Red tick. Back to replying to these
52. 02:40:022 (3) - Could shorten it to not skip the beat and add a circle. Sure.
53. 02:43:643 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - These should be triplets, (4) and (8) are overmapped. Sad
54. 02:44:850 (4,1,2) - I found the 1/2 after the strong 1/4 HDash easy to miss. Maybe you can move (1,2) a bit to the left to reduce the HDash strenght? Did something a bit different here.
55. 02:55:927 (5) - This note is overmapped. You're overmapped.
56. 02:57:264 (4) - I'd move this a bit to the left, without taking out the HDash, as the little dash it has can strike as surprisive in a really calm part. Ok sure, thanks mbomb
57. 03:03:471 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - I'd reduce the distance within each pair/triplet, as this is still a calm part. Same stuff for 03:06:230 (2,3,4,5,1,2,3) - Reduced it to be walkable
58. 03:07:781 (4,1) - I'd take this HDash out, we're still within a calm part and it's quite unexpected to be honest. Okay
59. 03:29:505 (3) - Red tick. Anime
60. 03:31:487 (4) - Overmapped. If there's something on a blue tick, it's 03:31:660 - . 5plet mapper
61. 03:32:436 (6,1) - I'd reduce the strenght of this HDash a bit, the section is still calm. Yes
62. 03:34:678 (1,2) - The 1/4s here are overmapped. Not sure, I think they play nice and the background supports them at least a little so I'd like to keep them. They're just a normal walk anyways, not like hypers or something.
63. 03:36:833 (1,2,3) - I think the first slider should be a repeat one, and have two 1/4s at 03:37:091 - and 03:37:264 - instead, as it follows the music better. Sure
64. 03:40:540 (3) - This is such a flowbreaker, and the sound at the blue tick isn't even that strong to require a repeat. I'd keep the trend of the 1/4 streams instead. I don't find it very flowbreaking. I've also been following that sound here so I think it's rhythmically intact as well.
65. 03:49:074 (5,1,2,3) - Really underwhelming considering the strenght and pitch of the synth. Yes, I can also suggest adding HDashes when I deem fit I fix
66. 03:51:229 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - To me the HDashes pair should be (1,2), (4,5) and (7,8), based on pitch and strenght of the synth. I MADE IT BIG FUCKING PP
67. 03:54:505 (4) - Should be split into a 1/4 slider. Currently you're missing a HDash opportunity to the high pitch at 03:54:678 - . pp
68. 03:54:505 (4,5,6,7) - We already talked about this in PM. where is my bubble
69. 03:57:609 (4) - I think this one would be much more comfortable to play with an HDash to it. Yes
70. 03:58:471 (3,4) - The antiflow in this makes it a bit uncomfortable to play for me. Maybe making (4) go to the left instead is better? I wanted to keep the antiflow so I reduced distances to make it a bit less jarring.
71. 03:59:505 (1,2) - I don't think the sound at (2) is that strong to require this antiflow movement. Maybe you can put (2) to the right of (1) instead? I made it a bit more clean to play, but I'd like to keep the pattern if possible.
72. 04:03:643 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I'd make the stream curve a bit more, mainly to get (8) a bit closer to the next circle and reduce the HDash strenght a bit, which is a bit too much. Fixed
73. 04:06:660 (2) - There isn't a sound there. If anything, this should be on the red tick right before this. EVERYTHING IS A NOTE NOW
74. 04:09:505 (5,6,7,8) - Wew lad, already talked about this. PP
75. 04:10:885 (3,4,5,6) - WEEEW Even bigger PP
76. 04:11:487 (4,5,6) - Could have an HDash here? Yes
77. 04:14:678 - The Kiais starting here conflict me. I get that the patterns and HDashes are mostly following the synth in the back, but personally I think the vocals are the strongest sound here, so I expected something like the 1st or 2nd Kiai instead.
78. The section starting on 04:36:747 - is way harder than the Kiai, having more 1/4 HDashes with antiflow, hyperchains like 04:36:747 (1,2) - and 04:43:988 (1,2) -, the infamous wiggles. And since you said this was from a time when you didn't care for aesthetics and stuff, maybe you agree to tone done and improve this section a bit.