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Demetori - Alice Maestra ~ Flow My Tears, the Said

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Spicy Salsa
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on Donnerstag, 12. Januar 2017 at 15:37:49

Artist: Demetori
Title: Alice Maestra ~ Flow My Tears, the Said
Tags: collaboration Lazyboy007
BPM: 188
Filesize: 20948kb
Play Time: 05:10
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  1. Lazy Salsa's Lachrimae (5,94 stars, 1463 notes)
Download: Demetori - Alice Maestra ~ Flow My Tears, the Said
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(ノ◕ヮ◕)ノ*:・゚✧ DEMETORI ✧゚・: *ヽ(◕ヮ◕ヽ)

In collaboration with Lazyboy007, who mapped the parts between kiai and hitsounded the entirety of this map. Thank you for putting that much work into it ^_^
Flare-kun
Osu can never have enough demetori <3 great map so far!
onislaughter
some tags: 東方Project th4 lotus land story kijin shokuaku 愧人贖悪 evil people as the true object of salvation c88 metal instrumental zun team shanghai alice

[Lachrimae]
00:21:702 (1,2) - swap it?
00:26:808 (1,2) - ^
00:28:085 (1,2) - ^ and etc, i think you got it
00:28:245 (2,1) - maybe stack?
00:32:393 (5,6) - maybe like this?
00:33:670 (4,5) - ctrl+g, i think
00:47:234 (1,2,1,2) - swap it too (or ctrl+g)
00:52:819 - triple here?
01:14:042 (1,2,3) - this may be too confusing after the stream... (and i advise you to stack (2) with the slider)
01:31:755 (1,2) - fix stack
01:38:776 (6,7) - player might missunderstand that stack. try to make a jump here
01:39:414 (1,2) - fix stack
01:54:494 (4,4) - you can try to stack it
02:48:351 (3,4) - you know what to do
03:29:361 (1,2) - don't look nice imo. try to fix it like this
03:57:606 (2,3,4,5,6) - a little bit too hard to read
04:51:063 (1) - 20sec spinners are painful as hell. you can try to make a beautiful sliderart here

good luck!
lazygirl

onislaughter wrote:

some tags: 東方Project th4 lotus land story kijin shokuaku 愧人贖悪 evil people as the true object of salvation c88 metal instrumental zun team shanghai alice

[Lachrimae]
00:21:702 (1,2) - swap it? Nah prefer this tbh, I know spicy's part is different on this
00:26:808 (1,2) - ^
00:28:085 (1,2) - ^ and etc, i think you got it
00:28:245 (2,1) - maybe stack? Don't think that's readable enough and I like this pattern
00:32:393 (5,6) - maybe like this? Sure :3
00:33:670 (4,5) - ctrl+g, i think Seems good
00:47:234 (1,2,1,2) - swap it too (or ctrl+g) Nah that one's fine imo
00:52:819 - triple here? Hmm I don't hear any sound suggesting a triple there tbh
01:14:042 (1,2,3) - this may be too confusing after the stream... (and i advise you to stack (2) with the slider) Made it hard to read on purpose, but idk if this pattern is really acceptable, I think it is since I made it consistent and all, but if too many mods complain about it I will change it probably

-Spicy-

03:29:361 (1,2) - don't look nice imo. try to fix it like this Yea my slider design sucks I know xD Should be better I think

-Spicy-

04:51:063 (1) - 20sec spinners are painful as hell. you can try to make a beautiful sliderart here I friggin told spicy that was too long lol

good luck!
Thanks a lot :D
ObeseManatee
Hey. m4m for lazyboy (:

Source should probably be 東方Project
I think ar 9.5 or 9.4 would be better since it has a lot of overlap.

00:15:319 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - I think this pattern 00:16:595 (1,2) - fits better here instead of triangles since you used it before.
00:24:255 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - ^
00:23:138 (2,2) - Blanket
00:30:957 (2,3,4,1) - Spacing here should be the same as 00:35:744 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1) - or vice versa
00:37:819 (2,4) - On these circles there's a sound that's the same as earlier but earlier you mapped it with sliders 00:32:553 (6,7) - so I think it's better to put 2 similar sliders here.
00:40:851 (1) - I think sv here should be higher, probably around 1,2x. Fits the song better and also the spacing of the jumps.
01:18:111 (2,3) - Spacing here should be the same as 01:17:473 (2,3) - (This one and the others.)
02:29:601 (2,3) - ^
01:45:000 (1,2) - You should increase the spacing here. At least as far as the jumps in the kiai section. (Same on the other ones.)
02:02:713 (2,3,2,3) - Switch 2 and 3 around.
02:09:095 (2,2) - Switch slider head and tail around.
04:09:893 (11) - Move this closer to 04:09:734 (10) - so it blankets 04:10:053 (1) -
04:15:159 (1) - Would like better as a regular curve like 04:14:840 (4) -
04:43:085 (4,5) - This is a little far imo.

Nice map, one of my favorite Demetori songs. Good luck.
Arutsuki
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