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Lots of IRCing for NecroFanatic and Easy.
Will work on the rest of the difficulties tomorrow.
Will work on the rest of the difficulties tomorrow.
awesome 
Topic Starter
rockleejkooo wrote:
awesome
Satoshi wrote:
I like it. Looking forward to play the ranked version. Star
KyonkoHizara wrote:
:)
Druidianna wrote:
Great beatmap Elly! Keep up the good work ;D
Thank You All ;_;SHARiKiN wrote:
cool.. give star
Uh it kinda isn't classified as hard though.Pereira006 wrote:
my diff is hard
Also why didn't I star this already dammit D:<
[Eternal Wandering]
00:37:596 (1) - Remove new combo
00:41:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - A bit missy in here.
Where is the after...
[Necro Fanatic]
00:29:229 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:48:106 (1) - Follow with 8 like start in 00:47:290
01:06:984 (1) - Remove new combo
01:13:310 (1) - ^ (Useless)
01:20:045 (1) - ^
01:30:249 (1) - ^
[All]
If you didn't need the music after 01:32:290, you should ask some people to help you.
STAR
00:37:596 (1) - Remove new combo
00:41:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - A bit missy in here.
Where is the after...
[Necro Fanatic]
00:29:229 (1) - Remove new combo?
00:48:106 (1) - Follow with 8 like start in 00:47:290
01:06:984 (1) - Remove new combo
01:13:310 (1) - ^ (Useless)
01:20:045 (1) - ^
01:30:249 (1) - ^
[All]
If you didn't need the music after 01:32:290, you should ask some people to help you.
STAR
Topic Starter
KingsAL2 wrote:
[Eternal Wandering]
00:37:596 (1) - Remove new combo Done00:41:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - A bit missy in here.Sorry, I'm not gonna fix this. it looks fine.
Where is the after...
[Necro Fanatic]
00:29:229 (1) - Remove new combo? Done
00:48:106 (1) - Follow with 8 like start in 00:47:290What?
01:06:984 (1) - Remove new combo Done for all of them
01:13:310 (1) - ^ (Useless)
01:20:045 (1) - ^
01:30:249 (1) - ^
[All]
If you didn't need the music after 01:32:290, you should ask some people to help you. Yeah, we need someone to shorten MP3 Now >w<
STAR THANKS<3
[General]
All Diffs are mapped up to ~1:35min but the song is 3:14min. Please shorten the mp3 to an acceptable timing point like 1:45min (5s fadeout)
Combo Color 1 is too dark. You can't see the approaching circles on some of the BGs. Pick something a lot brighter or get rid of this color (use just 3 overall)
[Easy]
00:06:327 (2,3) - spacing
00:10:582 (2) - ummm...whats up with this slider? looks strange...why not use a nicely curved one?
00:13:923 (1,2,3) - Try curving the middle part of these long sliders exactly around (2) as this will look much better. Something like this: http://puu.sh/2BTF
00:19:637 (1) - ugly. Curve better around (3), adjust spacing of following note afterwards
00:32:698 (5) - angle between the points is too small. Make it a bit softer and this slider will not look as if someone kicked it in the nuts.
00:35:963 (3) - curve exactly around (2)
00:56:371 (3,4) - better use a slider instead...
00:57:392 (5) - ...and turn this into 2 circles
01:02:086 (2) - again, don't move the grey sub-point after the starting point so far out. It makes the sliders look weird if it is <90°
01:20:045 (2) - is not straight down
[LRJ's Normal]
00:22:902 (4) - move ending point to 102/274 to fix the spreading gap between the two sliders AND curve (4) more exactly around (3)
Otherwise flawless
[Pereira's Hard]
00:26:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Maybe seperate every stack by adding a new combo (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) to make it more visible
00:33:922 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
00:40:861 (3) - oddly placed slider. Better place and curve it in a way that makes the overall curve of (1,2,3) more even
00:42:902 (X) - why don't you map this? It plays weird and misplaced if you leave out this note...
00:45:351 (6) - move ending point to 291/72 to make a nice curve with the following combo
00:46:576 (4,5) - It fits the song much better if you delete (4) and let the slider start there (keep the endingpoint of this slider on the same red tick it is now)
00:53:718 (1) - can be curved better around (5) and keep starting point + ending point at the exact same level
[Necro Fanatic]
Could use some better object-placement in general. Come up with some interesting notefollow-patterns and try to close most of the huge gaps with sliders. Again: Combo color 1 is WAY too dark. Change it please.
00:18:514 (X,X) - definetely needs 2 more notes here. Place circles at the blue and red tick and form a nice spacing-consistent 5/4 stream. This will map the piano exactly. (3,4) just don't make any sense right now.
00:27:392 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - come on! This pattern is not very creative... Try a dead-end or something else that plays interesting.
00:40:045 (1,2,3) - feels extremely empty. Why don't you use sliders for those parts?
00:45:147 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - be creative!
00:48:106 (1) - start the spinner at 00:47:392 and end it at 00:48:616 to at least match the song
00:49:739 (4) - weird. Why the strange placement? It kinda stands out as it doesn't really fit to the rest of your map. I suggest keeping this in line
00:53:106 (7,8) - again, why don't you use a slider here instead? Those empty spaces kinda ruin it for me
00:56:371 (8,9) - ^
00:59:637 (4) - the "S" can be done much better:
[Eternal Wandering]
I love you Kite!
...fits like a glove. This is beautiful!
1~star for the good mapset, keep it up!
2~stars for the awesome [Eternal Wandering]
All Diffs are mapped up to ~1:35min but the song is 3:14min. Please shorten the mp3 to an acceptable timing point like 1:45min (5s fadeout)
Combo Color 1 is too dark. You can't see the approaching circles on some of the BGs. Pick something a lot brighter or get rid of this color (use just 3 overall)
[Easy]
00:06:327 (2,3) - spacing
00:10:582 (2) - ummm...whats up with this slider? looks strange...why not use a nicely curved one?
00:13:923 (1,2,3) - Try curving the middle part of these long sliders exactly around (2) as this will look much better. Something like this: http://puu.sh/2BTF
00:19:637 (1) - ugly. Curve better around (3), adjust spacing of following note afterwards
00:32:698 (5) - angle between the points is too small. Make it a bit softer and this slider will not look as if someone kicked it in the nuts.
00:35:963 (3) - curve exactly around (2)
00:56:371 (3,4) - better use a slider instead...
00:57:392 (5) - ...and turn this into 2 circles
01:02:086 (2) - again, don't move the grey sub-point after the starting point so far out. It makes the sliders look weird if it is <90°
01:20:045 (2) - is not straight down
[LRJ's Normal]
00:22:902 (4) - move ending point to 102/274 to fix the spreading gap between the two sliders AND curve (4) more exactly around (3)
Otherwise flawless
[Pereira's Hard]
00:26:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Maybe seperate every stack by adding a new combo (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) to make it more visible
00:33:922 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^
00:40:861 (3) - oddly placed slider. Better place and curve it in a way that makes the overall curve of (1,2,3) more even
00:42:902 (X) - why don't you map this? It plays weird and misplaced if you leave out this note...
00:45:351 (6) - move ending point to 291/72 to make a nice curve with the following combo
00:46:576 (4,5) - It fits the song much better if you delete (4) and let the slider start there (keep the endingpoint of this slider on the same red tick it is now)
00:53:718 (1) - can be curved better around (5) and keep starting point + ending point at the exact same level
[Necro Fanatic]
Could use some better object-placement in general. Come up with some interesting notefollow-patterns and try to close most of the huge gaps with sliders. Again: Combo color 1 is WAY too dark. Change it please.
00:18:514 (X,X) - definetely needs 2 more notes here. Place circles at the blue and red tick and form a nice spacing-consistent 5/4 stream. This will map the piano exactly. (3,4) just don't make any sense right now.
00:27:392 (2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - come on! This pattern is not very creative... Try a dead-end or something else that plays interesting.
00:40:045 (1,2,3) - feels extremely empty. Why don't you use sliders for those parts?
00:45:147 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - be creative!
00:48:106 (1) - start the spinner at 00:47:392 and end it at 00:48:616 to at least match the song
00:49:739 (4) - weird. Why the strange placement? It kinda stands out as it doesn't really fit to the rest of your map. I suggest keeping this in line
00:53:106 (7,8) - again, why don't you use a slider here instead? Those empty spaces kinda ruin it for me
00:56:371 (8,9) - ^
00:59:637 (4) - the "S" can be done much better:
282,309,59637,2,0,B|300:355|433:356|481:339|481:257|471:192|371:194|371:194|275:192|263:125|261:57|307:28|439:27|461:78,1,720,0|1001:06:167 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - this is better than before but could still be more interesting
[Eternal Wandering]
I love you Kite!
...fits like a glove. This is beautiful!1~star for the good mapset, keep it up!
2~stars for the awesome [Eternal Wandering]
hello
elly-chan next time who mod my diff just tell me pleasse
that is important so anyawy
Download: ZUN - Night Sakura Of Dead Spirits (Elly-chan) [Pereira's hard].osu
good luck
elly-chan next time who mod my diff just tell me pleasse
that is important so anyawythank looking my diffp3n wrote:
[General]
[Pereira's Hard]
00:26:984 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Maybe seperate every stack by adding a new combo (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) to make it more visibleNO
00:33:922 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - ^NO
00:40:861 (3) - oddly placed slider. Better place and curve it in a way that makes the overall curve of (1,2,3) more evenNO
00:42:902 (X) - why don't you map this? It plays weird and misplaced if you leave out this note...YES
00:45:351 (6) - move ending point to 291/72 to make a nice curve with the following comboYES
00:46:576 (4,5) - It fits the song much better if you delete (4) and let the slider start there (keep the endingpoint of this slider on the same red tick it is now)NO
00:53:718 (1) - can be curved better around (5) and keep starting point + ending point at the exact same levelNO
Download: ZUN - Night Sakura Of Dead Spirits (Elly-chan) [Pereira's hard].osu
good luck
LRJ's Normal
00:29:841 (5) - Make part of the next combo? Also turn grid snap off and move left 1 grid 4 unit. (eh it wouldn't go with your patterns but still one grid unit left)
00:34:739 (4,5) - Nazi Spacing?
01:09:025 - Please add a note here. Maybe it can stay stacked with the addition.
01:10:861 (3,1) - Ugly stack. It's not stacking right.
Pereira's Hard
00:31:269 (2) - Gah I expected another repeat. Eh it may be fine. But shouldn't it follow the 3 repeat slider pattern from before?
00:45:963 (1) - This isn't lined up.
01:02:494 - 25% volume
01:03:106 (10) - How about deleteing this and respacing the notes? I think there should be a gap after a repeat slider like that.
Eternal Wandering
00:41:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Random spacing ???
00:45:351 (9,1) - This is a weird gap. Maybe make this a more average spacing.
Well I was conservative. This should be bubbled soon.
00:29:841 (5) - Make part of the next combo? Also turn grid snap off and move left 1 grid 4 unit. (eh it wouldn't go with your patterns but still one grid unit left)
00:34:739 (4,5) - Nazi Spacing?
01:09:025 - Please add a note here. Maybe it can stay stacked with the addition.
01:10:861 (3,1) - Ugly stack. It's not stacking right.
Pereira's Hard
00:31:269 (2) - Gah I expected another repeat. Eh it may be fine. But shouldn't it follow the 3 repeat slider pattern from before?
00:45:963 (1) - This isn't lined up.
01:02:494 - 25% volume
01:03:106 (10) - How about deleteing this and respacing the notes? I think there should be a gap after a repeat slider like that.
Eternal Wandering
00:41:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Random spacing ???
00:45:351 (9,1) - This is a weird gap. Maybe make this a more average spacing.
Well I was conservative. This should be bubbled soon.
TheVileOne wrote:
LRJ's Normal
00:29:841 (5) - Make part of the next combo? Also turn grid snap off and move left 1 grid 4 unit. (eh it wouldn't go with your patterns but still one grid unit left) I was sure that i have put New Combo there before... O_o Well , okay ~
00:34:739 (4,5) - Nazi Spacing? Moved 1 grid left.
01:09:025 - Please add a note here. Maybe it can stay stacked with the addition. Done , stacked with (1).
01:10:861 (3,1) - Ugly stack. It's not stacking right. It's me or it's correctly stacked?
thank you looking my diff TVO -samaTheVileOne wrote:
Pereira's Hard
00:31:269 (2) - Gah I expected another repeat. Eh it may be fine. But shouldn't it follow the 3 repeat slider pattern from before? hmm i don't konw because i feeling rythm drum but i did change combo and fix i think
00:45:963 (1) - This isn't lined up.YES
01:02:494 - 25% volume YES
01:03:106 (10) - How about deleteing this and respacing the notes? I think there should be a gap after a repeat slider like that. NO
Download: ZUN - Night Sakura Of Dead Spirits (Elly-chan) [Pereira's hard].osu
done
TheVileOne wrote:
Eternal Wandering
00:41:678 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Random spacing ??? Jumps
00:45:351 (9,1) - This is a weird gap. Maybe make this a more average spacing. Increased spacing due to new combo
The Taiko diff uses the whole .mp3 so no shortening kthnx.Elly-chan wrote:
KingsAL2 wrote:
[All]
If you didn't need the music after 01:32:290, you should ask some people to help you. Yeah, we need someone to shorten MP3 Now >w<
STAR THANKS<3
Edit: -eats Elly for shortening the Taiko diff-
You probably should cut your mp3?
Also, maybe resize all wallpapers to either 1024x768 or 800x600
[Eternal Wandering]
Rise hitsound volume during kiai-time to about 50%? Sounds bad when it's so quiet. ;u; Also, this is the only diff with two kiai times?
00:48:412 (7) - Add new combo and delete it from the next note?
01:19:025 (1,2,3) - Maybe move 1 and 2 like this?
[Necro Fanatic]
So quiet hitsounds, more volume to kiai-time at least?
00:23:106 (6) - New combo?
00:34:331 (5) - Sliderspeed-change spacing, blah, just move two grids to right.
00:40:045 (7) - New combo and finnish to beginning?
01:06:167 (1) - Claps starting from this note sound really bad, consider changing them to whistles maybe. >:
01:31:474 (1) - Just no, spinners this short are just horrible. Please do something else. ;_;
[Pereia's Hard]
00:30:657 (4) - New combo and delete it from the next note?
00:58:004 (1) - Horrible short spinner
01:01:678 (7) - Maybe new combo?
[Easy]
00:40:657 (1) - Maybe bit too fast after spinner? I'd just map something over the spinner since it's quite short anyways.
01:11:882 (1) - TAKE IT AWAY PLEASE.
01:31:474 (1) - ^
o/
Also, maybe resize all wallpapers to either 1024x768 or 800x600
[Eternal Wandering]
Rise hitsound volume during kiai-time to about 50%? Sounds bad when it's so quiet. ;u; Also, this is the only diff with two kiai times?
00:48:412 (7) - Add new combo and delete it from the next note?
01:19:025 (1,2,3) - Maybe move 1 and 2 like this?
[Necro Fanatic]
So quiet hitsounds, more volume to kiai-time at least?
00:23:106 (6) - New combo?
00:34:331 (5) - Sliderspeed-change spacing, blah, just move two grids to right.
00:40:045 (7) - New combo and finnish to beginning?
01:06:167 (1) - Claps starting from this note sound really bad, consider changing them to whistles maybe. >:
01:31:474 (1) - Just no, spinners this short are just horrible. Please do something else. ;_;
[Pereia's Hard]
00:30:657 (4) - New combo and delete it from the next note?
00:58:004 (1) - Horrible short spinner
01:01:678 (7) - Maybe new combo?
[Easy]
00:40:657 (1) - Maybe bit too fast after spinner? I'd just map something over the spinner since it's quite short anyways.
01:11:882 (1) - TAKE IT AWAY PLEASE.
01:31:474 (1) - ^
o/
thank you :3Lanttu wrote:
[Pereia's Hard]
00:30:657 (4) - New combo and delete it from the next note? NO
00:58:004 (1) - Horrible short spinnerNO
01:01:678 (7) - Maybe new combo? YES
o/
Download: ZUN - Night Sakura Of Dead Spirits (Elly-chan) [Pereira's hard].osu
Lanttu wrote:
[Eternal Wandering]
Rise hitsound volume during kiai-time to about 50%? Sounds bad when it's so quiet. ;u; Also, this is the only diff with two kiai times? Hm, I guess it depends on the user settings in options... it sounds alright to me and a few other people I asked... I prefer to keep current volume; about the Kiai.. IMO it fits for that part but if it's needed I'll remove ~
00:48:412 (7) - Add new combo and delete it from the next note? Done, thanks!
01:19:025 (1,2,3) - Maybe move 1 and 2 like this? Done, thanks!
Mods are only suggestions.
General:
Folder
Last Yu resolution is 1056x768. Change to 1024x768 <---Unrankable.
Taiko BG change resolution into 4:3 ratio. (800x600, 1024x768 etc)
All other BG are 1 pixel off ._. (1023x767) change it to 1024x768)
Yuyuuu - Is this BG used? I'm not sure. If it isn't used remove it from folder?
Shorten mp3 since map doesn't use whole mp3.
Easy:
Maybe +1 HP Drain?
01:31:474 (1) - Spinner might be too short for easy. Make spinner start at 01:31:065 instead? Or add note 01:31:065 then slider 01:31:474 to 01:32:290?
Normal:
Nothing bothered me really.
Hard:
Map beginning like other people?
00:38:412 - 00:39:841 Add break or map here. You can lose a lot of HP because of high HP drain. Maybe break because not much to map during this time.
Necro
Nothing bothered me much.
00:59:637 (4) - ._. Nice job.
Eternal:
+1 OD +1 HP?
Nothing bothered me much.
Star and good luck!
General:
Folder
Last Yu resolution is 1056x768. Change to 1024x768 <---Unrankable.
Taiko BG change resolution into 4:3 ratio. (800x600, 1024x768 etc)
All other BG are 1 pixel off ._. (1023x767) change it to 1024x768)
Yuyuuu - Is this BG used? I'm not sure. If it isn't used remove it from folder?
Shorten mp3 since map doesn't use whole mp3.
Easy:
Maybe +1 HP Drain?
01:31:474 (1) - Spinner might be too short for easy. Make spinner start at 01:31:065 instead? Or add note 01:31:065 then slider 01:31:474 to 01:32:290?
Normal:
Nothing bothered me really.
Hard:
Map beginning like other people?
00:38:412 - 00:39:841 Add break or map here. You can lose a lot of HP because of high HP drain. Maybe break because not much to map during this time.
Necro
Nothing bothered me much.
00:59:637 (4) - ._. Nice job.
Eternal:
+1 OD +1 HP?
Nothing bothered me much.
Star and good luck!
thank youRaging Bull wrote:
Mods are only suggestions.
Hard:
Map beginning like other people? oki
00:38:412 - 00:39:841 Add break or map here. You can lose a lot of HP because of high HP drain. Maybe break because not much to map during this time.hmmm i didn't add break but yes add note and slider thank you
Download: ZUN - Night Sakura Of Dead Spirits (Elly-chan) [Pereira's hard].osu
mod time
[Necro Fanatic]
01:23:718(4) - move 3 down (grid 3)
01:23:922(5) - move 3 up (grid 3)
star
[Necro Fanatic]
01:23:718(4) - move 3 down (grid 3)
01:23:922(5) - move 3 up (grid 3)
star
Topic Starter
No Witch For You Then QB. :O no I kid. I still have the full taiko and copter-kun's map lol, I'll eventually put them both in the description for download x3Rikers wrote:
The Taiko diff uses the whole .mp3 so no shortening kthnx.
Edit: -eats Elly for shortening the Taiko diff-
hihi >w<
[General]
[General]
- your mp3 file is only 96 kbps , it is unrankble , make it 128-192 kbps plz
- BG size must be 1024x768 or 800x600
- 00:02:923 (2,1) - spacing
- 00:16:371 (2,1) - slider go around circle better plz
- 00:19:637 (1,2) - spacing
- 00:37:596 (4,5) - ^
ok , I ignored spacing issues after this , plz check everywhere - 00:40:657 (1) - make it in the middle of the screen plz
- 01:06:167 (1) - not horizontal ?
- 01:07:596 (2) - this is too short for an Easy , for newbie hard to tell when it end
- 01:29:841 (5) - not horizontal ? make it circle and spinner from 01:30:453 to 01:32:290 is better
- 01:01:269 (2,3,4) - spacing ?
- 01:08:616 (4,5,1) - really confusing
- 00:05:476 (2) - make it look better plz
- 01:24:943 (9,10) - delete (10) , end (9) at 01:25:555 ?
- 00:01:646 (2,3) - this spacing is really confusing
- 00:20:453 (5,6,7) - to slider
- 00:34:127 (4,5) - spacing 1.0x not 0.75x plz
- 00:45:555 (3,4,5,6,7) - make a pentagon ?
- 00:54:739 (1,2) - spacing
- 01:31:474 (1) - start at 01:30:555
- fine
Thanks for mod ~wcx19911123 wrote:
[LRJ's Normal]
- 01:01:269 (2,3,4) - spacing ? Nope , it looks correct ~
- 01:08:616 (4,5,1) - really confusing >< Fixed
Download: ZUN - Night Sakura Of Dead Spirits (Elly-chan) [LRJ's Normal].osu
thank looking my diffwcx19911123 wrote:
hihi >w<
Pereira's hard
- 00:05:476 (2) - make it look better plz YES
- 01:24:943 (9,10) - delete (10) , end (9) at 01:25:555 ?NO
Download: ZUN - Night Sakura Of Dead Spirits (Elly-chan) [Pereira's hard].osu
done :3
Topic Starter
Thanks for mod~wcx19911123 wrote:
[General]So I have to resize them all one pixel taller. *facepalm* Ill fix that with kbps
- your mp3 file is only 96 kbps , it is unrankble , make it 128-192 kbps plz
- BG size must be 1024x768 or 800x600[/color]
[Easy] All done~[Necro Fanatic]
- 00:02:923 (2,1) - spacing
- 00:16:371 (2,1) - slider go around circle better plz
- 00:19:637 (1,2) - spacing
- 00:37:596 (4,5) - ^
ok , I ignored spacing issues after this , plz check everywhere- 00:40:657 (1) - make it in the middle of the screen plz
- 01:06:167 (1) - not horizontal ?
- 01:07:596 (2) - this is too short for an Easy , for newbie hard to tell when it end
- 01:29:841 (5) - not horizontal ? make it circle and spinner from 01:30:453 to 01:32:290 is better
- 00:01:646 (2,3) - this spacing is really confusing No fix
- 00:20:453 (5,6,7) - to slider No, sorry D:
- 00:34:127 (4,5) - spacing 1.0x not 0.75x plz Fixed
- 00:45:555 (3,4,5,6,7) - make a pentagon ? Doesn't look that good but ok
- 00:54:739 (1,2) - spacing mm done
- 01:31:474 (1) - start at 01:30:555 Done!!
mod request in #modreqs
[General]
- mp3 bitrate is less then 128 ~ 192 kb/s which is unrankable
Yuyubacky.jpg image has wrong resoultion, if you want to get this mapset ranked you should keep resolution 4:3 [800 x 600; 1024 x 768]
Yours is 1002 x 768. Also Taiko background has wrong resolution too. If you want send me image via pm i'll make for you taiko background with my font style. Other backfround are 4:3 but has difference in 1 pixel. Well, it's not an issue, but better to keep same resolution 1024 x 768
- don't really like your choice of colors. Replace white color and better to add something else instead of different purple colors.
- remove mark from "Display storyboard in front of combo fire". You don't have SB.
- useless osb. file
- Set Audio lead-in 2000 (2 seconds) in ALL difficulties
- Timing in taiko difficulty is different from others
- use same duration and count of kiai mods in every difficulty (except Taiko)
- remove "Stage1 theme Copter-kun" from tags
- Taiko difficulty has different preview point then others.
[Easy]
Hitsounds are random.
00:13:095 (2,3,1) - keep consistency. Fix spacing between 3 and 1
00:44:739 (5,3,4,5) - ^
00:38:208 (5) - spacing
01:16:780 (4) - ^
Well what can i say, you used so many 1/2 notes, which is difficulty to read for newbie players. I'd highly suggest to use less1/2 notes. And try to adjust them to 1/1. Use sliders, different patterns etc.
[LRJ's Normal]
Suggesting to use tick rate 0.5 or 2, to avoid awkward sliderticks.
Suggesting to increase Approach rate by 1.
01:08:616 (4,5,1) - hard to read for middling players. and 01:09:025 (1,2) - switch new combos.
01:12:494 (1,1) - do not use such stucks please, 01:12:494 (1) - remove new combo.
01:19:025 (1,1) - ^
01:15:555 (4,1) - switch new combo's
Pereira's hard
HP -1
replace h --> H (Pereira's Hard instead of Pereira's hard)
00:01:008 (1) - make it better, more symmetrical. http://puu.sh/2J9N
00:13:923 (1,2,3,4,5) - anti spacing. Not sure, not sure.
00:18:820 (1) - make same shape as next 2 sliders.
00:58:004 (1) - ninja spinner, high suggesting to replace without something else.
[Necro Fanatic]
HP +1
OD -1
00:12:888 00:12:992 00:13:095 00:13:302 00:13:509 00:13:716 - these objects are not snapped. Resnap all notes.
Slider speed speed seems too fast for such calm piano song.
I have no idea why you name this difficulty "Necro Fanatic" it fits more with something related with Yukari Yakumo (Necrofantasia)
00:04:412 (8) - space it correctly or add new combo.
00:14:535 (9) - ^
00:20:759 (6) - spacing is bit too large
00:38:208 - starting from this point better to use some extra beats with main piano beats.
00:40:045 (1) - http://puu.sh/2Jb7
00:55:351 (3) , 00:55:963 (5) - keep consistency in spacing.
00:57:698 (1) - start 1/4 later.
00:59:637 (4) - well i understand good slider shape, but it makes hidden next notes 01:01:474 (1,2,3,4) . So change it please.
01:23:310 (2,3,4,5) - kinda hard to read and looks so odd. Better to make better pattern
01:31:474 (1) - ninja spinner. Better to start it from there 01:30:657
Eternal Wandering
- More then 3 unique slider velocities were used. I don't think that breaking this rule makes this difficulty more funny or better. This is just an unrankable error.
Volume of hitsounds are too low, suggesting to increase them by 20-30%
Better to use tick rate 1
Stacky spacing <_<
OD +1?
00:46:576 (1) - http://puu.sh/2JbX
01:30:521 (1) - start 1/3 later
That's all.
Staring this map.
[General]
- mp3 bitrate is less then 128 ~ 192 kb/s which is unrankable
Yuyubacky.jpg image has wrong resoultion, if you want to get this mapset ranked you should keep resolution 4:3 [800 x 600; 1024 x 768]
Yours is 1002 x 768. Also Taiko background has wrong resolution too. If you want send me image via pm i'll make for you taiko background with my font style. Other backfround are 4:3 but has difference in 1 pixel. Well, it's not an issue, but better to keep same resolution 1024 x 768
- don't really like your choice of colors. Replace white color and better to add something else instead of different purple colors.
- remove mark from "Display storyboard in front of combo fire". You don't have SB.
- useless osb. file
- Set Audio lead-in 2000 (2 seconds) in ALL difficulties
- Timing in taiko difficulty is different from others
- use same duration and count of kiai mods in every difficulty (except Taiko)
- remove "Stage1 theme Copter-kun" from tags
- Taiko difficulty has different preview point then others.
[Easy]
Hitsounds are random.
00:13:095 (2,3,1) - keep consistency. Fix spacing between 3 and 1
00:44:739 (5,3,4,5) - ^
00:38:208 (5) - spacing
01:16:780 (4) - ^
Well what can i say, you used so many 1/2 notes, which is difficulty to read for newbie players. I'd highly suggest to use less1/2 notes. And try to adjust them to 1/1. Use sliders, different patterns etc.
[LRJ's Normal]
Suggesting to use tick rate 0.5 or 2, to avoid awkward sliderticks.
Suggesting to increase Approach rate by 1.
01:08:616 (4,5,1) - hard to read for middling players. and 01:09:025 (1,2) - switch new combos.
01:12:494 (1,1) - do not use such stucks please, 01:12:494 (1) - remove new combo.
01:19:025 (1,1) - ^
01:15:555 (4,1) - switch new combo's
Pereira's hard
HP -1
replace h --> H (Pereira's Hard instead of Pereira's hard)
00:01:008 (1) - make it better, more symmetrical. http://puu.sh/2J9N
48,84,1008,6,0,B|48:152|188:152|188:84|188:16|328:16|328:84,1,35000:05:476 (2) - http://puu.sh/2Ja4
260,268,5476,2,0,B|256:332|317:359|382:354|401:293,1,21000:07:816 (8) - suggesting to remove this note and add one more reapet to previous slider
00:13:923 (1,2,3,4,5) - anti spacing. Not sure, not sure.
00:18:820 (1) - make same shape as next 2 sliders.
00:58:004 (1) - ninja spinner, high suggesting to replace without something else.
[Necro Fanatic]
HP +1
OD -1
00:12:888 00:12:992 00:13:095 00:13:302 00:13:509 00:13:716 - these objects are not snapped. Resnap all notes.
Slider speed speed seems too fast for such calm piano song.
I have no idea why you name this difficulty "Necro Fanatic" it fits more with something related with Yukari Yakumo (Necrofantasia)
00:04:412 (8) - space it correctly or add new combo.
00:14:535 (9) - ^
00:20:759 (6) - spacing is bit too large
00:38:208 - starting from this point better to use some extra beats with main piano beats.
00:40:045 (1) - http://puu.sh/2Jb7
376,192,40045,6,0,B|464:188|496:272|464:356|376:352,1,270,4|0Other stuff do by yourself, it's your map, not mine (i mean adjustements of sliders)
00:55:351 (3) , 00:55:963 (5) - keep consistency in spacing.
00:57:698 (1) - start 1/4 later.
00:59:637 (4) - well i understand good slider shape, but it makes hidden next notes 01:01:474 (1,2,3,4) . So change it please.
01:23:310 (2,3,4,5) - kinda hard to read and looks so odd. Better to make better pattern
01:31:474 (1) - ninja spinner. Better to start it from there 01:30:657
Eternal Wandering
- More then 3 unique slider velocities were used. I don't think that breaking this rule makes this difficulty more funny or better. This is just an unrankable error.
Volume of hitsounds are too low, suggesting to increase them by 20-30%
Better to use tick rate 1
Stacky spacing <_<
OD +1?
00:46:576 (1) - http://puu.sh/2JbX
01:30:521 (1) - start 1/3 later
That's all.
Staring this map.
Topic Starter
Thank you so much for mod ;_;Louis Cyphre wrote:
mod request in #modreqs
[General]
- mp3 bitrate is less then 128 ~ 192 kb/s which is unrankable Ima get somebody to do this for me soon.
Yuyubacky.jpg image has wrong resoultion, if you want to get this mapset ranked you should keep resolution 4:3 [800 x 600; 1024 x 768]
Yours is 1002 x 768. Also Taiko background has wrong resolution too. If you want send me image via pm i'll make for you taiko background with my font style. Other backfround are 4:3 but has difference in 1 pixel. Well, it's not an issue, but better to keep same resolution 1024 x 768 Ill eventually fix them all when guest diffs are fixed by the person
- Timing in taiko difficulty is different from others *Looks at rikash*
- use same duration and count of kiai mods in every difficulty (except Taiko) Asks other mappers*
The Rest I Didn't list here were fixed.
[Easy]
Hitsounds are random. Fixed
00:13:095 (2,3,1) - keep consistency. Fix spacing between 3 and 1 Done
00:44:739 (5,3,4,5) - ^ ^
00:38:208 (5) - spacing ^
01:16:780 (4) - ^^
Well what can i say, you used so many 1/2 notes, which is difficulty to read for newbie players. I'd highly suggest to use less1/2 notes. And try to adjust them to 1/1. Use sliders, different patterns etc. If I get another complaint I might change some. honestly Id dont see how this is hard but ok.
[Necro Fanatic]
HP +1 Done
OD -1 Done
00:12:888 00:12:992 00:13:095 00:13:302 00:13:509 00:13:716 - these objects are not snapped. Resnap all notes. Donedone~
Slider speed speed seems too fast for such calm piano song. More Emotional IMO. If I get another complaint about this I will prolly change.
I have no idea why you name this difficulty "Necro Fanatic" it fits more with something related with Yukari Yakumo (Necrofantasia) Fixed to Secluded Child taken from Yuyuko's wiki page. So its now like She was never around (Hard+), then leads into insane (eternal wandering) because she's gone crazy from being alone so now shes wandering with no reason~ Idk xD but yeah. Thats new name, and I agree Necro Fanatic sounded more like Yukarin. o uo
00:04:412 (8) - space it correctly or add new combo. Added new combo because I didn't want to have to space the rest of my map again.
00:14:535 (9) - ^ New Combo Yet Again.
00:20:759 (6) - spacing is bit too large Changed to 0.9 for this part so that its more between the two notes.
00:38:208 - starting from this point better to use some extra beats with main piano beats. Done the ones that stood out the most.
00:40:045 (1) - http://puu.sh/2Jb7 Done376,192,40045,6,0,B|464:188|496:272|464:356|376:352,1,270,4|0(^)
Other stuff do by yourself, it's your map, not mine (i mean adjustements of sliders) Oki
00:55:351 (3) , 00:55:963 (5) - keep consistency in spacing. done herp?
00:57:698 (1) - start 1/4 later. Done~
00:59:637 (4) - well i understand good slider shape, but it makes hidden next notes 01:01:474 (1,2,3,4) . So change it please. Fixed 1,2, and 3, but it wasn't possible to fix 4 D:
01:23:310 (2,3,4,5) - kinda hard to read and looks so odd. Better to make better pattern no
01:31:474 (1) - ninja spinner. Better to start it from there 01:30:657 Done
thank looking my diffLouis Cyphre wrote:
mod request in #modreqs
Pereira's hard
HP -1YES
replace h --> H (Pereira's Hard instead of Pereira's hard) YES
00:01:008 (1) - make it better, more symmetrical. http://puu.sh/2J9N YES48,84,1008,6,0,B|48:152|188:152|188:84|188:16|328:16|328:84,1,35000:05:476 (2) - http://puu.sh/2Ja4 YES260,268,5476,2,0,B|256:332|317:359|382:354|401:293,1,21000:07:816 (8) - suggesting to remove this note and add one more reapet to previous slider YES
00:13:923 (1,2,3,4,5) - anti spacing. Not sure, not sure.[color=#FF0000]NO[/color]
00:18:820 (1) - make same shape as next 2 sliders.YES
00:58:004 (1) - ninja spinner, high suggesting to replace without something else.okay~~.face
Download: ZUN - Night Sakura Of Dead Spirits (Elly-chan) [Pereira's hard].osu
SORRY double download
diownload 2 second pleasseDownload: ZUN - Night Sakura Of Dead Spirits (Elly-chan) [Pereira's hard].osu
Louis Cyphre wrote:
Volume of hitsounds are too low, suggesting to increase them by 20-30% Increased a bit
Better to use tick rate 1 Need current tickrate for tick hitsounds
00:46:576 (1) - http://puu.sh/2JbX Ok
01:30:521 (1) - start 1/3 later Hm, ok I guess
Yeah I thought it sounded better at firstElly-chan wrote:
Louis Cyphre wrote:
- Timing in taiko difficulty is different from others *Looks at rikash*
but then after awhile, it sounded off xD
Hello.
[Secluded Child]
00:15:759 (2,3,4) - Inconsistent Spacing... Maybe shift 3-8 like this http://i.imgur.com/1rqiQ.png ?
00:27:392 (2) - I think you should stack with 00:28:820 (3)
00:33:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - Weird/Inconsistent Spacing
00:37:596 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Looks like you are trying to do accelerated spacing... I think this should be more noticeable/exaggerated. or just make the spacing equal.
~Star~
[Secluded Child]
00:15:759 (2,3,4) - Inconsistent Spacing... Maybe shift 3-8 like this http://i.imgur.com/1rqiQ.png ?
00:27:392 (2) - I think you should stack with 00:28:820 (3)
00:33:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - Weird/Inconsistent Spacing
00:37:596 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Looks like you are trying to do accelerated spacing... I think this should be more noticeable/exaggerated. or just make the spacing equal.
~Star~
Topic Starter
Fixed some. Thanks~Makar8000 wrote:
Hello.
[Secluded Child]
00:15:759 (2,3,4) - Inconsistent Spacing... Maybe shift 3-8 like this http://i.imgur.com/1rqiQ.png ?
00:27:392 (2) - I think you should stack with 00:28:820 (3)
00:33:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - Weird/Inconsistent Spacing
00:37:596 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Looks like you are trying to do accelerated spacing... I think this should be more noticeable/exaggerated. or just make the spacing equal.
~Star~
Thanks for mod LouisLouis Cyphre wrote:
[LRJ's Normal]
Suggesting to use tick rate 0.5 or 2, to avoid awkward sliderticks. Changed to 2
Suggesting to increase Approach rate by 1. Done + increased Overall Difficulty and HP Drain cause the settings is like a [Easy] diff ~
01:08:616 (4,5,1) - hard to read for middling players. Done and 01:09:025 (1,2) - switch new combos. Nope ~
01:12:494 (1,1) - do not use such stucks please Done, 01:12:494 (1) - remove new combo. Nope ~
01:19:025 (1,1) - ^ Done
01:15:555 (4,1) - switch new combo's Nope ~
Download: ZUN - Night Sakura Of Dead Spirits (Elly-chan) [LRJ's Normal].osu
Star because this song is awesome 
Alright i was asked to mod your map, but first things first,
You need a new mp3 because the quality of yours is blow 128 kbps which is the minimum quality required for ranking I've uploaded a new mp3 i found that was high quality enough.
There are 2 different ways you can install the new mp3 on your map, the first is to just rename it so it has the exact same name as your old one and paste it and overwrite the previous one, the second one is to delete the other one and paste this one in the song folder then change the audio filename on each osu! file:
All timing points with the new mp3 should have -354 ms, the easiest way to do this is to select all timing points and do -354 to them like this:
You should probably reset your preview point on all maps as well.
Now on to the maps themselves.
[General]
Would be nice if in your OP you said which diff is which, instead of using names totally different than the ones in the actual maps, going by SR i assume they are in order tho, so i'll mod based on that.
One of the things i love about this map is that it uses tick rate 2, good choice <3
Yuyuuu.jpg Yuyubacky.png yuyuko lol.jpg <-- unused image files in the folder, please remove them.
You dont need Elly-chan in tags, since you're already the beatmap creator.
[Taikers Oni]
00:12:072 (43) - Unsnapped!
00:12:497 (44) - Unsnapped!
00:12:989 (46) - Unsnapped!
00:13:095 (47) - Unsnapped!
00:13:308 (48) - Unsnapped!
00:13:521 (49) - Unsnapped!
00:13:734 (50) - Unsnapped!
01:10:861 (41) - Unsnapped slider end.
[Eternal Wandering]
White combo color tends to blend with the background, plus thanks to it i missed this slider >border< 00:56:984 (5)
00:53:106 (1,2) - I seriously recommend you change these slider shapes, since you're using symmetry spacing shouldnt be a problem try this?
Also dont apply normal hitsounds meant for hitcircles to sliderticks.
[Secluded Child]
Pretty awkward that this diff has a higher slider velocity than the Insane.
Try to not combine double stacks with singles in middle of a single stream.
00:49:841 (5) - Unintuitive slider i'd recommend you drop a repeat or change it somehow.
01:01:882 (4) - Slider doesnt fit the music.
You're pretty much mapping in a box mapping pattern, and i dont blame you because you're a new mapper and that's what new mappers tend to do, i would prefer if you would at least try to make some cool patterns that would make the map more fun to play.
[Pereira's Hard]
I'd say change the whole color set... all shades of purple are too similar with each other, and pure white hurts the eyes during kiai time.
01:06:167 (1,2) - These repeats are really unintuitive.
01:09:025 (7,8) - ^
I like what you did at 01:25:759 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) more than the previous 2 ones.
[LRJ's Normal]
Probably the best map in the mapset, just wanted to let you know, no errors found.
[Easy]
And here my heart breaks </3 tick rate 2 please D:
Nevertheless good mapset, deserves an SP star, however it still needs some more work before star icon.
After all changes are done since you're removing images from your song folder and adding a different mp3 dont forget to FULL SUBMIT
You need a new mp3 because the quality of yours is blow 128 kbps which is the minimum quality required for ranking I've uploaded a new mp3 i found that was high quality enough.
There are 2 different ways you can install the new mp3 on your map, the first is to just rename it so it has the exact same name as your old one and paste it and overwrite the previous one, the second one is to delete the other one and paste this one in the song folder then change the audio filename on each osu! file:
All timing points with the new mp3 should have -354 ms, the easiest way to do this is to select all timing points and do -354 to them like this:
You should probably reset your preview point on all maps as well.
Now on to the maps themselves.
[General]
Would be nice if in your OP you said which diff is which, instead of using names totally different than the ones in the actual maps, going by SR i assume they are in order tho, so i'll mod based on that.
One of the things i love about this map is that it uses tick rate 2, good choice <3
Yuyuuu.jpg Yuyubacky.png yuyuko lol.jpg <-- unused image files in the folder, please remove them.
You dont need Elly-chan in tags, since you're already the beatmap creator.
[Taikers Oni]
00:12:072 (43) - Unsnapped!
00:12:497 (44) - Unsnapped!
00:12:989 (46) - Unsnapped!
00:13:095 (47) - Unsnapped!
00:13:308 (48) - Unsnapped!
00:13:521 (49) - Unsnapped!
00:13:734 (50) - Unsnapped!
01:10:861 (41) - Unsnapped slider end.
[Eternal Wandering]
White combo color tends to blend with the background, plus thanks to it i missed this slider >border< 00:56:984 (5)
00:53:106 (1,2) - I seriously recommend you change these slider shapes, since you're using symmetry spacing shouldnt be a problem try this?
Also dont apply normal hitsounds meant for hitcircles to sliderticks.
[Secluded Child]
Pretty awkward that this diff has a higher slider velocity than the Insane.
Try to not combine double stacks with singles in middle of a single stream.
00:49:841 (5) - Unintuitive slider i'd recommend you drop a repeat or change it somehow.
01:01:882 (4) - Slider doesnt fit the music.
You're pretty much mapping in a box mapping pattern, and i dont blame you because you're a new mapper and that's what new mappers tend to do, i would prefer if you would at least try to make some cool patterns that would make the map more fun to play.
[Pereira's Hard]
I'd say change the whole color set... all shades of purple are too similar with each other, and pure white hurts the eyes during kiai time.
01:06:167 (1,2) - These repeats are really unintuitive.
01:09:025 (7,8) - ^
I like what you did at 01:25:759 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) more than the previous 2 ones.
[LRJ's Normal]
Probably the best map in the mapset, just wanted to let you know, no errors found.
[Easy]
And here my heart breaks </3 tick rate 2 please D:
Nevertheless good mapset, deserves an SP star, however it still needs some more work before star icon.
After all changes are done since you're removing images from your song folder and adding a different mp3 dont forget to FULL SUBMIT
Download: ZUN - Night Sakura Of Dead Spirits (Elly-chan) [Pereira's hard].osuSakura Hana wrote:
[Pereira's Hard]
I'd say change the whole color set... all shades of purple are too similar with each other, and pure white hurts the eyes during kiai time.fix
01:06:167 (1,2) - These repeats are really unintuitive.fix
01:09:025 (7,8) - ^fix
I like what you did at 01:25:759 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2) more than the previous 2 ones.ok
Thank looking my diff
Topic Starter
Thank you for looking at my map Sakura Hana (_ _)Sakura Hana wrote:
Fixed MP3 and Preview Points
[General]
Would be nice if in your OP you said which diff is which, instead of using names totally different than the ones in the actual maps, going by SR i assume they are in order tho, so i'll mod based on that. Derp.. it says in the description which diffs are which lol
One of the things i love about this map is that it uses tick rate 2, good choice <3 <3
Yuyuuu.jpg Yuyubacky.png yuyuko lol.jpg <-- unused image files in the folder, please remove them. Done
You dont need Elly-chan in tags, since you're already the beatmap creator. Done
[Secluded Child]
Pretty awkward that this diff has a higher slider velocity than the Insane. im gonna fix that.
Try to not combine double stacks with singles in middle of a single stream. Fixed some streams so they are more flowy and no more double stacks
00:49:841 (5) - Unintuitive slider i'd recommend you drop a repeat or change it somehow. Made into a single slider
01:01:882 (4) - Slider doesnt fit the music. Made into two that do
You're pretty much mapping in a box mapping pattern, and i dont blame you because you're a new mapper and that's what new mappers tend to do, i would prefer if you would at least try to make some cool patterns that would make the map more fun to play. I tried to fix the boxes but oh well it is my first map I actually did complete . . . :3
[Easy]
And here my heart breaks </3 tick rate 2 please D: Done, I didnt notice it wasn't XD
Nevertheless good mapset, deserves an SP star, however it still needs some more work before star icon. Im even supprised you starred it thank you<3 ;-;
net45291
Elly's Moe girl <3
SPOILER
:Easy:
Seems good >w<b
:LRJ:
00:48:671 (3,1) - A new player just confuse with this slider , Suggest : Change it to normal note
01:17:038 (4) - New combo
:Pereira:
00:44:385 (5) - New combo
01:07:446 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Suggest : Change it to slider
:Secluded Child:
00:14:181 (1) - Delete new combo
00:55:813 (6) - New combo
00:57:038 (1) - Delete new combo
:Eternal Wandering:
Lovely
:Taiker Oni:
IDK O ~ o
Seems good >w<b
:LRJ:
00:48:671 (3,1) - A new player just confuse with this slider , Suggest : Change it to normal note
01:17:038 (4) - New combo
:Pereira:
00:44:385 (5) - New combo
01:07:446 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Suggest : Change it to slider
:Secluded Child:
00:14:181 (1) - Delete new combo
00:55:813 (6) - New combo
00:57:038 (1) - Delete new combo
:Eternal Wandering:
Lovely
:Taiker Oni:
IDK O ~ o
Well i'll not fix your suggestions. Sorry ~net45291 wrote:
:LRJ:
00:48:671 (3,1) - A new player just confuse with this slider , Suggest : Change it to normal note Nah , it looks goods
01:17:038 (4) - New combo Nope ~
Anyway thanks for mod °°