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Within Temptation - The Unforgiving

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HakuNoKaemi

lolcubes wrote:

[*]09:49:255 (7,8) - This is not properly stacked. This needs to get fixed because they look incredibly confusing when using the default skin (skin toggle).
There's nothing strange(controlled), the only thing I can do is moving it one grid4 pixel up

256,4,589405,1,0

09:51:805 (1) - The path of the slider is actually going offscreen. You really need to change this somehow. Hardrock it and you will see that a good chunk of the slider track is offscreen, compared to nomod where nearly the whole slidertrack is behind the HPBar which is bad.
had to use some small jumps to preserve the mapping and the symmetry
332,128,591205,1,0
256,40,591355,1,0
180,128,591505,1,4
388,20,591805,6,0,B|451:30|513:82|510:163|476:218,2,259.999995350838
256,108,592555,1,0
124,20,592705,2,0,B|60:30|-1:82|1:163|35:218,1,259.999995350838
132,288,593155,1,0
Ephemeral

Derekku wrote:

Some BPMs *aren't* perfect numbers, though. It makes no sense to use a round value if you have to add extra uninherited sections to fix the offset from being completely off during a section.
some, yes. i sincerely doubt a professionally mastered song such as this has a bpm of 70.04. the BPM for this song -is- 70, there should be no doubt about that.


Derekku wrote:

I disagree with this as well. Adding a new uninherited section per beat is very random and unpredictable. It makes more sense to approximate it as much as possible which is what I did in my timing as opposed to the original (which *did* use new red lines per beat).
then you have every note in that section being approximately wrong as opposed to each note having a chance of being correct. believe me, my experience with bad apple's timing has equated me substantially to what happens when an incorrect bpm is selected. each section of the fadeout is an individual note, which makes this a significantly easier option.

Derekku wrote:

We *never* apply online offsets per-difficulty, and it's not even possible (unless peppy can do it). Either way, like I said in my mod post, the timing should be the same in all difficulties. Also, scores have already been deleted because timing isn't the only issue in this mapset.
looks like we have criteria to address then!
Lybydose
some, yes. i sincerely doubt a professionally mastered song such as this has a bpm of 70.04. the BPM for this song -is- 70, there should be no doubt about that.
tell that to Taylor Swift, aka #1 BPM troll
yeahyeahyeahhh

Lybydose wrote:

some, yes. i sincerely doubt a professionally mastered song such as this has a bpm of 70.04. the BPM for this song -is- 70, there should be no doubt about that.
tell that to Taylor Swift, aka #1 BPM troll
Speak Now
BPM: 118.97

@_@
Derekku

Lybydose wrote:

some, yes. i sincerely doubt a professionally mastered song such as this has a bpm of 70.04. the BPM for this song -is- 70, there should be no doubt about that.
tell that to Taylor Swift, aka #1 BPM troll
Yep. IIRC "You Belong With Me" had 3 uninherited sections and it was just very awkward.

Just because these are professional songs doesn't mean that the timing is perfect. :p
Elfice
some, yes. i sincerely doubt a professionally mastered song such as this has a bpm of 70.04. the BPM for this song -is- 70, there should be no doubt about that.
this is what we call music.
Ephemeral
70bpm definitely works better with less drift in this case, anyhow. try it for yourself and see!
Derekku
[General]
*IMO the hitcircle overlay is fine as-is, but the one provided in this thread should make things even better!
*I assume you're waiting to make the timing in each diff the same once you fix the Marathon diff?
*Many inherited sections are unsnapped, but it doesn't sound like any hitsounds were affected by it (since many are placed before notes [correct] as opposed to placing them on top of notes and then getting messed up by timing changes [incorrect]). You can use AIBat to check this but I think it's all fine.

[Storyboard]
*The logo at the top right of Within-Temptation.jpg is really low quality and noticeably different from the red text you use in the storyboard. It shouldn't be hard to find a higher quality version (even if you have to edit the image yourself).
*Can't you just put the videos in the .osb to avoid having to have them in each .osu? I mean I guess it doesn't matter, and it probably improves performance for difficulties that shouldn't have video, so I guess it's fine the way it is!

[Why Not Me]
Fine!

[Shot in the Dark]
*In addition to the timing from my last post (which also hasn't been changed yet), you can move the first uninherited section back two measures (34572) since that's where the music starts. Otherwise, the timing from the last song is used which isn't correct. (Done)
01:37:111 - I really don't understand why kiai starts here. Sure it's a build up to the chorus, but I feel like it makes the kiai at 01:37:960 much less powerful (plus two fountains in a row is a bit too much). I really suggest removing this first fountain.
02:53:101 - same as above
03:35:686 (2) - I think you're using the wrong sampleset here on the uninherited section.
04:09:648 (3,4,5) - inconsistent spacing; (4,5) currently looks like it's 1/4 or 1/6 apart when it's really 1/2
04:11:912 - could possibly remove this kiai section (since there's already many choruses).
04:30:025 - I'm surprised that you didn't add a kiai section here. o-o
05:24:082 (1) - perhaps make the end of this quieter

[In the Middle of the Night]
08:20:293 - I don't think that this extra kiai fountain is necessary; the other choruses don't have it in the middle...
09:40:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - A 17-note 200-bpm 1/4 stream? This a much more difficult than most other parts of the entire marathon...
09:42:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is also a bit too difficult (it's too spread out)
09:48:043 (4,5,6) - incorrect spacing which makes this section very confusing and disjoint from the other mappers
10:05:893 - Expected the last kiai section to end here.
10:24:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Not as bad as the 17-note stream, but this one is more spread out and might even be more difficult. How about making these notes closer to each other?

[Faster]
*I really wish that the intro of this was mapped. It just feels so incomplete without it. ):
12:00:736 - unnecessary kiai
12:12:236 (1,2) - can't tell which is the slider and which is the note; the sliderticks will really screw up some players. The easiest solution is to change (2) into the new combo.
12:24:736 - kiai should end here, not a tick later
13:44:736 - unn. kiai
14:43:986 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I really suggest spacing these closer
14:44:861 (1) - this didn't fit imo; if you had mapped the outro, then sure; but I think that ending with the previous stream would be better.

[Fire and Ice]
*Just like in "Shot in the Dark", move the first uninherited section back to where the music starts. In this case, 6 measures (912957).
16:33:083 (1,3) - difficult to see which is the note and which is the slider. How about making 16:31:798 (6) a new combo along with 16:33:512 (3) like this: http://puu.sh/QiYj
*I actually expected some kiai in this song O: Perhaps add a section or two?

[Iron]
20:40:009 (6,7,1) - didn't expect these 1/6 notes, and them being in the corner makes them a bit hard to see. I suggest replacing them with a 1/6 slider.
22:50:009 (2,3,4) - I'd spread these out more; they looked like 1/6 notes compared to 1/3 ones like 22:51:222 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12).
23:23:040 (1,2,3,7,8,9) - expected these 1/6 notes spaced closer together (the notes in each stream, that is)
23:50:313 - kiai should start here (at the chorus), not measures before (at the buildup to the chorus).
24:04:858 - could add another fountain here since this last chorus is much more powerful than the previous ones
24:30:312 (5) - I'd make this its own new combo to make it easier to read. The overlapping notes make it kinda hard to see otherwise.
24:32:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe move these down and right a little bit... otherwise the stacking nearly makes them overlap the previous slider
24:33:949 - kiai ending here fits better imo
24:34:100 (1) - perhaps make the ending quieter or do a decrescendo

[Where is the Edge]
*Move the timing section back two measures (1491562)
26:03:250 - unn. kiai fountain
27:05:198 (6) - stacking this with subsequent 1/4 notes is pretty confusing... please change the new combo so it's like this: 27:17:666 (5,1,2,3)
27:11:821 - unn. kiai fountain
27:24:289 - kiai should end here to be consistent with the first chorus
28:10:263 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - yeah this really doesn't flow well and is extremely unexpected; i suggest making them into 1/3 sliders
28:11:042 - expected kiai to start here
28:17:081 (3) - should be a new combo like the above
28:21:951 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - wowwwww this sounds horribly awkward going from random 1/4 to random 1/3. I'm not even sure what to suggest in its place but this definitely needs to be changed.
28:32:958 (1) - shorten by 1/4

[Sinéad]
*Oh my god the purple in this map looks AMAZING. It would be so powerful if you actually DID do colorhax in the marathon... it'd just take FOREVER and isn't really worth it hahaha..ha.. ):
*I expected a spinner for a couple measures in the outro, but otherwise this map is fine!

[Lost]
33:31:968 (3,5) - a bit ambiguous between which is the note and which is the slider
33:37:111 (2,4) - ^
33:49:968 (3,5) - ^
34:33:682 (2,3) - ^
35:53:825 - kiai should end here, not on a random blue tick
36:24:468 (7) - extend 1/4; where you have it now ends on "wicKed", but the white tick would be "wickeD" like it should be.
*The section after the break is a bit confusing... switching between 1/3 and 1/4 streams? It's really not obvious which is which :/
37:49:539 - expected kiai to end here; or perhaps do a new fountain?
37:54:254 (2,3) - a bit ambiguous between which is the note and which is the slider

[Murder]
39:54:962 - expected the kiai to end on a downbeat (like this) [you can manually move the break too for a nice effect: http://puu.sh/Qk94]
41:13:768 - ^ [the break looks like it's been manually moved but it's 1/4 off: http://puu.sh/Qk9q]
41:28:096 - this kiai fountain feels unnecessary
41:42:424 - ^
42:36:156 - end kiai on the downbeat here, not on a random blue tick

[A Demon's Fate]
44:03:985 - expected the kiai to start here, not halfway through the chorus ):
44:14:508 (1) - not sure why this is a new combo by itself
44:32:642 - end kiai here
44:46:971 - expected a note here and on the previous red tick
47:35:329 - kiai should end here, not on a blue tick
47:49:657 - ^
47:57:493 (4,5) - even though the pattern is obvious from the previous measures, these are hard to distinguish from 1/4 notes and are just asking for a combobreak ):
47:58:389 (4,5) - ^

[Stairway to the Skies]
*Where's the kiai in the choruses? D:
51:22:511 (2) - please raise the volume so that the ticks are audible; 5% is too low for something like this
52:35:844 (5,6) - can't tell which is the slider and which is the note
52:38:807 (5,6) - ^
52:50:659 (5,6) - ^
52:57:325 (4) - where's the finish?
Topic Starter
Armin
No, no, no. I still didn't upload it because I was expecting the "big mod" from you, and I wanted to avoid to full-submit everything a lot of times. By the way, it's kinda impossible to hope so nevermind. That's why you can't see the changes, I still have to upload them.
This is a complex marathon, every single thing I change in the single difficulties has to be mirrored in the marathon.

I bugged you two weeks ago just for this:

Derekku wrote:

There's been too many complaints of timing issues and other problems
"with the video being black and white before, having the outer edge of the hitcircles black makes it impossible to see the approach circle hit the outer edge"
"and the beginning of the current song has hitbursts overlapping slidertrails"
And for obvious reasons I cannot fix these "other problems" If none writes or deepens them.
Topic Starter
Armin

Derekku wrote:

[General]
*First of all, since uninherited sections and kiai both affect the main menu, they should be consistent across all difficulties. Actually, extra ones to affect volume/SV/etc. won't hurt anything, so you could really just have ONE set of lines and have them in EVERY difficulty. Would makes things easier AND more consistent! Don't forget to resnap/move back green lines after timing changes (since if they're after notes they won't be correct) God, fixed.
*Also, please correctly capitalize each difficulty's name according to http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/The_Unforg ... ck_listing for proper grammar! Titles in here are capitalized wrong, I have the original booklet with the right capitalization.
*You could also fix the incorrect capitalization in the storyboard text! See above
*I'm not sure why there are 4 duplicate Armin files in the SB folder, but I'll check again once I nazi the SB on my full mod~The reason is fair, since this is a +50 minutes long marathon and I didn't want to keep a SB object active for above 5/10 minutes where it wasn't needed (for example just fading at 0 for 20 minutes). It's just to preserve a fair SB load value and to help things to not get bugged. Makin' 4 files (with different Fade, Scale, and move values too) helped to make things A LOT easier.
*Just make the preview point the same on every difficulty. Previews only change if you leave the Editor. I guess this isn't a bug (since mapsets are expected to use the same preview point one each diff), so yeah. I guess you just need to pick one good song and use that preview everywhere. :/ Honestly, I prefer this way. You can listen "a stairway to the skies" preview which I love when you select the map and you can listen the other previews also when you go back to the menu. It's not an issue I guess.
Derekku

Armin wrote:

No, no, no. I still didn't upload it because I was expecting the "big mod" from you, and I wanted to avoid to full-submit everything a lot of times. By the way, it's kinda impossible to hope so nevermind. That's why you can't see the changes, I still have to upload them.
This is a complex marathon, every single thing I change in the single difficulties has to be mirrored in the marathon.
I never said that there would be a "big" mod, but that I'd do a "full" mod. This mapset is actually pretty solid and there's really only a few issues that I noticed when playtesting.

As for the full submissions: You've already done multiple when adding the videos and storyboard, so what will it hurt to do some more while BATs are trying to get this re-approved? If it's an issue of ISP bandwidth then let us know and we'll understand. :p

As for modifying things between the Marathon and the individual diffs: I'd personally just clear the Marathon and wait to compile it until everything else is ready. I'll be using a text comparison tool to make sure it's exactly the same as the individual diffs, but I suppose that you can just do whatever is easiest for you!

Armin wrote:

I bugged you two weeks ago just for this:

Derekku wrote:

There's been too many complaints of timing issues and other problems
"with the video being black and white before, having the outer edge of the hitcircles black makes it impossible to see the approach circle hit the outer edge"
"and the beginning of the current song has hitbursts overlapping slidertrails"
And for obvious reasons I cannot fix these "other problems" If none writes or deepens them.
Personally, I had no issues with either of these. I'll have to get in contact with the BAT that stated these issues, but neither of them affected me during my multiple testplays.

I apologize for the misunderstandings. I've been wanting you to full submit so that I don't have to recheck the map 3+ times (especially with the timing changes). However, if you're not making any changes to diff names or SB items, then why can't you do a normal submission to update just the .osu files? That would be enough for me to be able to check the timings and such.
Topic Starter
Armin

Derekku wrote:

As for the full submissions: You've already done multiple when adding the videos and storyboard, so what will it hurt to do some more while BATs are trying to get this re-approved? If it's an issue of ISP bandwidth then let us know and we'll understand. :p
It's always a pity to upload a 100Mb beatmap through a Wi-Fi connection with a low signal, when you can avoid it.


Derekku wrote:

I apologize for the misunderstandings. I've been wanting you to full submit so that I don't have to recheck the map 3+ times (especially with the timing changes). However, if you're not making any changes to diff names or SB items, then why can't you do a normal submission to update just the .osu files? That would be enough for me to be able to check the timings and such.
I did it now, all the difficulties except the "marathon" one should be the definitive versions.
HakuNoKaemi
I can fix the skin problem for you



just added a white glow in the borders u.u

edit : light -> glow, I didn't remember how it was called when I posted
laserpollo
http://youtu.be/5MQUr8kFbvs

/me cries in a corner
Arnold0
Haa !! I want to play the marathon but I can't because of this...
09:40:705 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) -
Why 1/4 17 note stream you want to kill players? Please change X.X
Topic Starter
Armin

Derekku wrote:

[General]
*IMO the hitcircle overlay is fine as-is, but the one provided in this thread should make things even better!
*I assume you're waiting to make the timing in each diff the same once you fix the Marathon diff? Yup
*Many inherited sections are unsnapped, but it doesn't sound like any hitsounds were affected by it (since many are placed before notes [correct] as opposed to placing them on top of notes and then getting messed up by timing changes [incorrect]). You can use AIBat to check this but I think it's all fine. I will keep them in this way, since it's fine the way it is.

[Storyboard]
*The logo at the top right of Within-Temptation.jpg is really low quality and noticeably different from the red text you use in the storyboard. It shouldn't be hard to find a higher quality version (even if you have to edit the image yourself). Fiiiiiiixed
*Can't you just put the videos in the .osb to avoid having to have them in each .osu? I mean I guess it doesn't matter, and it probably improves performance for difficulties that shouldn't have video, so I guess it's fine the way it is! I prefered to put the code in the single .osu files because I didn't want to have the video in some single difficulties (for aesthetic reasons)

[Why Not Me]
Fine!

[Shot in the Dark]
*In addition to the timing from my last post (which also hasn't been changed yet), you can move the first uninherited section back two measures (34572) since that's where the music starts. Otherwise, the timing from the last song is used which isn't correct. (Done)
01:37:111 - I really don't understand why kiai starts here. Sure it's a build up to the chorus, but I feel like it makes the kiai at 01:37:960 much less powerful (plus two fountains in a row is a bit too much). I really suggest removing this first fountain. I feel it starts here, sorry. Hoping it isn't a big issue.
02:53:101 - same as above same as above.
03:35:686 (2) - I think you're using the wrong sampleset here on the uninherited section. Right, fixed.
04:09:648 (3,4,5) - inconsistent spacing; (4,5) currently looks like it's 1/4 or 1/6 apart when it's really 1/2 nghhhh fixed
04:11:912 - could possibly remove this kiai section (since there's already many choruses). I feel that a powerful kiai should start here, so no.
04:30:025 - I'm surprised that you didn't add a kiai section here. o-o well ironically it was because I didn't want to add so muck kiai and ironically I felt I could avoid here since there's a spinner that makes its great effect. Btw added.
05:24:082 (1) - perhaps make the end of this quieterHm, nah.

[In the Middle of the Night]
08:20:293 - I don't think that this extra kiai fountain is necessary; the other choruses don't have it in the middle...I felt to add it here because it's the second part of the second chorus, and in my opinion it gives a sprint to complete the hardest part of the marathon
09:40:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - A 17-note 200-bpm 1/4 stream? This a much more difficult than most other parts of the entire marathon... I know, but I still want to keep it. Seeing some players this is the hardest part of the marathon: 10:23:293 (8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5) - . If they cannot hit that stream then the majority of them won't have any change on this pattern
09:42:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is also a bit too difficult (it's too spread out) After the stream this should be quite funny to play, I don't want to change it..
09:48:043 (4,5,6) - incorrect spacing which makes this section very confusing and disjoint from the other mappers For my test-players that played it they didn't found any problem by playing this pattern. This could be a little unexpected for you, but it is still readable.
10:05:893 - Expected the last kiai section to end here. Fixed
10:24:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Not as bad as the 17-note stream, but this one is more spread out and might even be more difficult. How about making these notes closer to each other? No, really. No. That's why that stream has THAT spacing.

[Faster]
*I really wish that the intro of this was mapped. It just feels so incomplete without it. ): Uhm, after the hardest song a little break it' welcome, this is why I didn't map it. But it's a great intro indeed.
12:00:736 - unnecessary kiai This flows well with the slider's shape at the chours. I REALLY like it.
12:12:236 (1,2) - can't tell which is the slider and which is the note; the sliderticks will really screw up some players. The easiest solution is to change (2) into the new combo. This can be easily readable, despite the hitcircle's position: http://puu.sh/QnT1 seriously, players that tested it just didn't find any problems with it. A new combo will just ruin the pattern.
12:24:736 - kiai should end here, not a tick later Okay
13:44:736 - unn. kiai same reasons of "in the middle of the night". It gives a consistent sprint to the map that I like
14:43:986 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I really suggest spacing these closer This is voluntary, but I made them a bit closer.
14:44:861 (1) - this didn't fit imo; if you had mapped the outro, then sure; but I think that ending with the previous stream would be better.Honestly I don't agree with you, it's better in this way for me.

[Fire and Ice]
*Just like in "Shot in the Dark", move the first uninherited section back to where the music starts. In this case, 6 measures (912957). Alright, fixed
16:33:083 (1,3) - difficult to see which is the note and which is the slider. How about making 16:31:798 (6) a new combo along with 16:33:512 (3) like this: http://puu.sh/QiYj hm.. as I wrote for "Faster", it is still readable and it would be a pity to change the pattern when actually the majority of the players can read it.
*I actually expected some kiai in this song O: Perhaps add a section or two? Hmm I don't really like kiai in slow songs

[Iron]
20:40:009 (6,7,1) - didn't expect these 1/6 notes, and them being in the corner makes them a bit hard to see. I suggest replacing them with a 1/6 slider. Hmm the artificial stack should already gives a warn for this little triplette
22:50:009 (2,3,4) - I'd spread these out more; they looked like 1/6 notes compared to 1/3 ones like 22:51:222 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12). the rhythm in here should be intuitive since there's already a little sample of it before: 22:46:373 (1,2,3) - .
23:23:040 (1,2,3,7,8,9) - expected these 1/6 notes spaced closer together (the notes in each stream, that is) I present to you the same reason as above, there' s already a little preview of the rhythm that led players to hit the triplette as 1/6 (23:21:222 (1,2,3,4,5) - )
23:50:313 - kiai should start here (at the chorus), not measures before (at the buildup to the chorus). Oh gawd. No PLEASE.
24:04:858 - could add another fountain here since this last chorus is much more powerful than the previous ones hmm okay
24:30:312 (5) - I'd make this its own new combo to make it easier to read. The overlapping notes make it kinda hard to see otherwise. See "faster" 's issue. My answer is kinda similar
24:32:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe move these down and right a little bit... otherwise the stacking nearly makes them overlap the previous slider sure thing
24:33:949 - kiai ending here fits better imo sure thing
24:34:100 (1) - perhaps make the ending quieter or do a decrescendo feels weird for me

[Where is the Edge]
*Move the timing section back two measures (1491562)
26:03:250 - unn. kiai fountain
27:05:198 (6) - stacking this with subsequent 1/4 notes is pretty confusing... please change the new combo so it's like this: 27:17:666 (5,1,2,3)
27:11:821 - unn. kiai fountain
27:24:289 - kiai should end here to be consistent with the first chorus
28:10:263 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - yeah this really doesn't flow well and is extremely unexpected; i suggest making them into 1/3 sliders
28:11:042 - expected kiai to start here
28:17:081 (3) - should be a new combo like the above
28:21:951 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - wowwwww this sounds horribly awkward going from random 1/4 to random 1/3. I'm not even sure what to suggest in its place but this definitely needs to be changed.
28:32:958 (1) - shorten by 1/4

[Sinéad]
*Oh my god the purple in this map looks AMAZING. It would be so powerful if you actually DID do colorhax in the marathon... it'd just take FOREVER and isn't really worth it hahaha..ha.. ):
*I expected a spinner for a couple measures in the outro, but otherwise this map is fine!

[Lost]
33:31:968 (3,5) - a bit ambiguous between which is the note and which is the slider you know what I think of this.
33:37:111 (2,4) - ^^
33:49:968 (3,5) - ^^
34:33:682 (2,3) - ^^
35:53:825 - kiai should end here, not on a random blue tick Right
36:24:468 (7) - extend 1/4; where you have it now ends on "wicKed", but the white tick would be "wickeD" like it should be.After a quick test I think you're right. Fixed
*The section after the break is a bit confusing... switching between 1/3 and 1/4 streams? It's really not obvious which is which :/ I just had to follow the rhythm.
37:49:539 - expected kiai to end here; or perhaps do a new fountain? Fixed
37:54:254 (2,3) - a bit ambiguous between which is the note and which is the slider You know.

[Murder]
39:54:962 - expected the kiai to end on a downbeat (like this) [you can manually move the break too for a nice effect: http://puu.sh/Qk94] Cool
41:13:768 - ^ [the break looks like it's been manually moved but it's 1/4 off: http://puu.sh/Qk9q]Fixed
41:28:096 - this kiai fountain feels unnecessary Hmmm
41:42:424 - ^
42:36:156 - end kiai on the downbeat here, not on a random blue tickFixed

[A Demon's Fate]
44:03:985 - expected the kiai to start here, not halfway through the chorus ): Added
44:14:508 (1) - not sure why this is a new combo by itselfFixed
44:32:642 - end kiai hereDone
44:46:971 - expected a note here and on the previous red tickhmm I don't feel to add other notes here. Also, it's cool the pre-break time too.
47:35:329 - kiai should end here, not on a blue tick Fixed
47:49:657 - ^ Fixed
47:57:493 (4,5) - even though the pattern is obvious from the previous measures, these are hard to distinguish from 1/4 notes and are just asking for a combobreak ):Believe me this is an easier version of a previous pattern that asked for a sure combobreak. I'll leave as it is now, since I'm kinda sad too.
47:58:389 (4,5) - ^

[Stairway to the Skies]
*Where's the kiai in the choruses? D: I don't want to put them for slow songss ;w; just at the end where it was REALLY needed
51:22:511 (2) - please raise the volume so that the ticks are audible; 5% is too low for something like thisraised up to 10%; the main reason why I keep a low volume is because the slidertick is audible and it gives a BAD effect.
52:35:844 (5,6) - can't tell which is the slider and which is the note This time it's REALLY readable.
52:38:807 (5,6) - ^
52:50:659 (5,6) - ^
52:57:325 (4) - where's the finish?Damn I forgot to add hitsounds to this part. Thanks for noticing it
Arnold0
09:40:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - A 17-note 200-bpm 1/4 stream? This a much more difficult than most other parts of the entire marathon... I know, but I still want to keep it.
And 90+% players will have to use no fail for pass ...

Why all for approval mapper have to put impossible things in there maps *.*
Topic Starter
Armin

Arnold0 wrote:

09:40:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - A 17-note 200-bpm 1/4 stream? This a much more difficult than most other parts of the entire marathon... I know, but I still want to keep it.
And 90+% players will have to use no fail for pass ...

Why all for approval mapper have to put impossible things in there maps *.*


Unghhh I will make the life easier for you, just let me change some settings for that stream.
Roddie

Derekku wrote:

[Where is the Edge]
*Move the timing section back two measures (1491562) Alright.
26:03:250 - unn. kiai fountain Okay, I removed it.
27:05:198 (6) - stacking this with subsequent 1/4 notes is pretty confusing... please change the new combo so it's like this: 27:17:666 (5,1,2,3) Okay.
27:11:821 - unn. kiai fountain Okay.
27:24:289 - kiai should end here to be consistent with the first chorus Alright.
28:10:263 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - yeah this really doesn't flow well and is extremely unexpected; i suggest making them into 1/3 sliders I did try out what you've suggested, but I wasn't satisfied. I'll just bring the spacing on those notes closer then.
28:11:042 - expected kiai to start here Yes, you are right. I don't know why this was removed previously but I adding it back in.
28:17:081 (3) - should be a new combo like the above I'll just add a new combo on this note which is on 28:16:886.
28:21:951 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - wowwwww this sounds horribly awkward going from random 1/4 to random 1/3. I'm not even sure what to suggest in its place but this definitely needs to be changed. This mapping pattern does not sound random; it follows the song. You can remove the objects to hear them in fact. So, I'll leave this as it is.
28:32:958 (1) - shorten by 1/4 Alright.
Katsuri

Berncastell wrote:



sad
xatiado
Derekku
[Why Not Me]


[Shot in the Dark]
04:27:761 - end kiai here
09:51:493 - it's the final chorus, so add an extra fountain! I was just complaining about extra fountains in other songs because they were mostly during the first chorus and thus too early in the song :p

[In the Middle of the Night]
09:51:493 - add an extra fountain for consistency
10:01:093 - and perhaps one here

[Faster]
13:20:736 - add kiai fountain to stay consistent with other diffs
14:28:736 - ^
14:44:736 - end kiai here with an extra fountain like in the second diff

[Fire and Ice]


[Iron]
22:23:040 - fountain
23:50:313 - beginning of chorus; fountain

[Where is the Edge]
25:36:367 (6) - incorrectly snapped; extend
27:05:198 (1) - remove NC
27:05:393 (2) - add NC (thought Roddie fixed this)
27:24:289 - kiai should end here (Roddie said it was fixed but I dunno what happened)
28:12:211 (3,4,5) - spacing
28:16:886 (1) - remove NC
28:17:081 (2) - add NC
28:23:510 - final chorus; add kiai fountain if you'd like

[Sinéad]
32:48:499 - final chorus; fountain

[Lost]
35:53:825 - end kiai here (you must've missed this when fixing)

[Murder]
38:28:991 (1) - unsnapped
41:13:768 - end kiai either here or here: 41:10:186
42:21:827 - last chorus; fountain

[A Demon's Fate]
47:53:239 - i'd actually end kiai here

[Stairway to the Skies]


(don't kd since i've already done two mods before this)

If you haven't noticed, I like to see kiai consistent and powerful. Extra fountains in the first chorus but not in others doesn't make much sense; if you're going to do that, then add them to all of the choruses. However, I feel that layering extra fountains into the FINAL chorus of the song makes it much more powerful and appealing. Or perhaps you have three choruses and the first chorus has one fountain, second has two, and the third has three; that builds up nicely. tl;dr kiai mod and then I can bubble
Arnold0
Please , NOOOOO don't change images filenames don't want to download a 100 MEGABYTE! map after all updates (After update no more BG in game)

EDIT : After checking: Why makes guys redowload the full 100 MB map just for change BG from .jpg to .png ? O_O I'll open and save the BG to .png personnaly, don't have 3G bandwith to loose xD
Topic Starter
Armin

Arnold0 wrote:

Please , NOOOOO don't change images filenames don't want to download a 100 MEGABYTE! map after all updates (After update no more BG in game)

EDIT : After checking: Why makes guys redowload the full 100 MB map just for change BG from .jpg to .png ? O_O I'll open and save the BG to .png personnaly, don't have 3G bandwith to loose xD
have fun: http://uptiki.altervista.org/viewer.php ... 1n6ntb.png
HakuNoKaemi
Puoi aggiungerle le fontane :sisi:
Soul_Of_Heart
this is such an amazing beatmap *Q* i love it ♥
Topic Starter
Armin

Soul_Of_Heart wrote:

this is such an amazing beatmap *Q* i love it ♥
thank you so much :)
Derekku
[General]
*Inconsistent difficulty settings between diffs? I'm really not sure why they're different from [Marathon]. The lower Drain on [Marathon] makes sense, but at least have the other settings consistent between diffs. Here's what they currently are (written as Drain/AR/OD):
377: Marathon
677: Why Not Me, Shot in the Dark, Fire and Ice, Stairway to the Skies (4 diffs)
687: In the Middle of the Night, Faster, Where is the Edge, Sinéad, Murder, A Demon's Fate (6 diffs)
587: Iron (1 diff)
776: Lost (1 diff)
*In my opinion, they should all use 6 Drain, 8 AR, and 7 OD. The marathon should also use 8 AR/7OD with its lowered 3 Drain.

[Where is the Edge]
25:36:367 (6) - differs slightly between [Marathon] and the single diff.
28:12:406 (4) - ^

[Murder]
38:28:992 (1) - ^ although i don't see any visible difference, but comparing the two through text comparison flags it.

EDIT: All good to go! I'm extremely happy to be able to bubble this map~ I love these songs and can't wait to play the marathon once it's approved again! Amazing job, everyone! : )

My iTunes library has been very happy: http://puu.sh/VN49 (PS add those four bonus tracks to the marathon :V)
Topic Starter
Armin
yay, bubbled!

*feels happy*
Malinen
wow, nice!
Roxas
Oddio nella marathon potrebbe andar benissimo anche OD6... Tanto chi te la fa SS? xD
L_P
cant imagine uploading a file this ... huge
Topic Starter
Armin

Roxas wrote:

Oddio nella marathon potrebbe andar benissimo anche OD6... Tanto chi te la fa SS? xD
0D6 è TROPPO bassa.
Snowy Dream
Nice, ready to go :3
Arnold0
BATs go rank this <3

Too bad I'm still unable to pass it withou no fail D:
Topic Starter
Armin
still no moddings... :(

This seems to be a long re-approval.
Klobrille
I´m missing the backgroundpics at:
-Shot in the Dark
-Why not me
- Fire and Ice
-Faster
-Sinead

Would be nice to fix it :D
Topic Starter
Armin
I tested it with some players, that's what we got
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/409566

are you sure you downloaded it properly? try to delete the mapset and to redownload all. or you can replace the bg manually: http://uptiki.altervista.org/viewer.php ... 1n6ntb.png
Mercurial

Armin wrote:

are you sure you downloaded it properly? try to delete the mapset and to redownload all. or you can replace the bg manually: http://uptiki.altervista.org/viewer.php ... 1n6ntb.png
Topic Starter
Armin
http://puu.sh/Xvl4 puush for life
lolcubes
Hm I am getting some really weird stuff...but I'll ignore it for now, seems to work properly on my laptop.

Anyways...The stuff I will point out will be from the [Marathon] diff, will make additional notes if I find something in the individual diffs as well.

[In the middle of the Night]
*A lot of unsnapped timing sections in this diff. Makes certain hitsounds bad. (some are even like 8ms off)
I'll be a little more specific (I know it's a lot of work but yeah should be done if possible): 08:19:693 - Here your timing section doesn't change the hitsounds properly
*06:48:943 (5) - I still wonder why you don't want this to be a default hitnormal. You tried to explain it to me I remember, but I didn't understand it. It's inconsistent to every other occurrence of such rhythm/pattern as they all have it on default hitnormal here.
*10:12:643 (6) - I am going to be nazi here, you should definitely center this properly cause the symmetry is broken here.

[Faster]
*12:02:486 (2) - Not centered properly.
*13:10:236 (1,3) - I recommend to put the new combo on 3 instead. I see you focused on the patterns rather than the music, for the most part, however this way it would fit both the pattern and the music. There is one more better suggestion here if you want to combo the patterns better (according to the music too) and that is to leave the new combo on that 1, but only add it to 3, but such a short combo might be weird. Another thing here is that you should definitely use a new combo on 13:12:736 (5) instead of 13:13:736 (1) because it fits the music and makes the pattern better (you achieve absolute symmetry once you do this, especially if you used the short combo at first, like I suggested. To put it into numbers for you so it's easier to understand, you get: 1-2 1-2-3-4-5-6-7-8-9 1-2(+3+4) 1-2 (in the center) etc, the only problem here is that you create inconsistency with rest of the comboing when it comes to the big slider that starts the next section. I don't know how why you want the slider that starts a section have a combo from a previous one, but in my opinion you should probably change those if possible. You used a new combo here for example: 14:12:486 (1), which fits the music much better, compared to the other parts in the kiai.

[Iron]
*21:31:222 (1) - You still didnt fix the position of the note.
*21:56:222 (2) - You still didn't fix this :\ The ending part of the slider is off the grid almost completely. As regular hitcircles cannot be off the grid, you should fix this. I really see no problem if you fix it like this, it doesn't break any pattern at all.
*24:30:312 (5) - I think a finish instead of a whistle would bring a much bigger impact.

[Lost]
*More unsnapped sections (they are everywhere but they affect this part considerably): 34:31:539., 34:32:825., doesn't change the sound properly.
*35:34:111 (6) - Raise it a bit, a part of the slidertrack is offscreen slightly (yes i know it's couple of pixels, but still <_<). Could raise 5 as well just so you don't destroy your spacing. 1 grid level 4 will do.
*37:09:682 (8) - Not centered properly. Should move down 1 grid too, to preserve spacing, in addition to moving it left.
*37:19:111 (1,2,3,6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - Big no to this spacing. You are using the same spacing for both 1/4 stream and 1/3 stream, in the same combo.

[Murder]
*40:30:335 (7,8,1) - I think you can make this symmetrical with minimal effort, without breaking any patterns. (move the slider)

[A Demon's Fate]
*44:00:851 (1,2,3,1) - I don't get the point of these new combos. Should just remove them.
*45:01:299 (1) - ^
*48:09:359 - Put soft hitsound on the timing section, else the spinner end is very audible and ruins the atmosphere.


The unsnapped timing sections occur in separate diffs as well. I took me a really really really really long time to get through this properly and as I don't have much of it lately, I apologize to have kept you waiting. (took me like 3 hours only for this run orz)
You should definitely polish those "1 grid" changes into your patterns because since the whole mapset focuses on visuals (symmetry, combo colors, etc), such things are just plain wrong.
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