[General]
*IMO the hitcircle overlay is fine as-is, but the one provided in this thread should make things even better!
*I assume you're waiting to make the timing in each diff the same once you fix the Marathon diff?
*Many inherited sections are unsnapped, but it doesn't sound like any hitsounds were affected by it (since many are placed before notes [correct] as opposed to placing them on top of notes and then getting messed up by timing changes [incorrect]). You can use AIBat to check this but I think it's all fine.
[Storyboard]
*The logo at the top right of Within-Temptation.jpg is really low quality and noticeably different from the red text you use in the storyboard. It shouldn't be hard to find a higher quality version (even if you have to edit the image yourself).
*Can't you just put the videos in the .osb to avoid having to have them in each .osu? I mean I guess it doesn't matter, and it probably improves performance for difficulties that shouldn't have video, so I guess it's fine the way it is!
[Why Not Me]
Fine!
[Shot in the Dark]
*In addition to the timing from my last post (which also hasn't been changed yet), you can move the first uninherited section back two measures (34572) since that's where the music starts. Otherwise, the timing from the last song is used which isn't correct. (Done)
01:37:111 - I really don't understand why kiai starts here. Sure it's a build up to the chorus, but I feel like it makes the kiai at 01:37:960 much less powerful (plus two fountains in a row is a bit too much). I really suggest removing this first fountain.
02:53:101 - same as above
03:35:686 (2) - I think you're using the wrong sampleset here on the uninherited section.
04:09:648 (3,4,5) - inconsistent spacing; (4,5) currently looks like it's 1/4 or 1/6 apart when it's really 1/2
04:11:912 - could possibly remove this kiai section (since there's already many choruses).
04:30:025 - I'm surprised that you didn't add a kiai section here. o-o
05:24:082 (1) - perhaps make the end of this quieter
[In the Middle of the Night]
08:20:293 - I don't think that this extra kiai fountain is necessary; the other choruses don't have it in the middle...
09:40:693 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - A 17-note 200-bpm 1/4 stream? This a much more difficult than most other parts of the entire marathon...
09:42:043 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - this is also a bit too difficult (it's too spread out)
09:48:043 (4,5,6) - incorrect spacing which makes this section very confusing and disjoint from the other mappers
10:05:893 - Expected the last kiai section to end here.
10:24:493 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Not as bad as the 17-note stream, but this one is more spread out and might even be more difficult. How about making these notes closer to each other?
[Faster]
*I really wish that the intro of this was mapped. It just feels so incomplete without it. ):
12:00:736 - unnecessary kiai
12:12:236 (1,2) - can't tell which is the slider and which is the note; the sliderticks will really screw up some players. The easiest solution is to change (2) into the new combo.
12:24:736 - kiai should end here, not a tick later
13:44:736 - unn. kiai
14:43:986 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12) - I really suggest spacing these closer
14:44:861 (1) - this didn't fit imo; if you had mapped the outro, then sure; but I think that ending with the previous stream would be better.
[Fire and Ice]
*Just like in "Shot in the Dark", move the first uninherited section back to where the music starts. In this case, 6 measures (912957).
16:33:083 (1,3) - difficult to see which is the note and which is the slider. How about making 16:31:798 (6) a new combo along with 16:33:512 (3) like this:
http://puu.sh/QiYj*I actually expected some kiai in this song O: Perhaps add a section or two?
[Iron]
20:40:009 (6,7,1) - didn't expect these 1/6 notes, and them being in the corner makes them a bit hard to see. I suggest replacing them with a 1/6 slider.
22:50:009 (2,3,4) - I'd spread these out more; they looked like 1/6 notes compared to 1/3 ones like 22:51:222 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12).
23:23:040 (1,2,3,7,8,9) - expected these 1/6 notes spaced closer together (the notes in each stream, that is)
23:50:313 - kiai should start here (at the chorus), not measures before (at the buildup to the chorus).
24:04:858 - could add another fountain here since this last chorus is much more powerful than the previous ones
24:30:312 (5) - I'd make this its own new combo to make it easier to read. The overlapping notes make it kinda hard to see otherwise.
24:32:282 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - maybe move these down and right a little bit... otherwise the stacking nearly makes them overlap the previous slider
24:33:949 - kiai ending here fits better imo
24:34:100 (1) - perhaps make the ending quieter or do a decrescendo
[Where is the Edge]
*Move the timing section back two measures (1491562)
26:03:250 - unn. kiai fountain
27:05:198 (6) - stacking this with subsequent 1/4 notes is pretty confusing... please change the new combo so it's like this: 27:17:666 (5,1,2,3)
27:11:821 - unn. kiai fountain
27:24:289 - kiai should end here to be consistent with the first chorus
28:10:263 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - yeah this really doesn't flow well and is extremely unexpected; i suggest making them into 1/3 sliders
28:11:042 - expected kiai to start here
28:17:081 (3) - should be a new combo like the above
28:21:951 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - wowwwww this sounds horribly awkward going from random 1/4 to random 1/3. I'm not even sure what to suggest in its place but this definitely needs to be changed.
28:32:958 (1) - shorten by 1/4
[Sinéad]
*Oh my god the purple in this map looks AMAZING. It would be so powerful if you actually DID do colorhax in the marathon... it'd just take FOREVER and isn't really worth it hahaha..ha.. ):
*I expected a spinner for a couple measures in the outro, but otherwise this map is fine!
[Lost]
33:31:968 (3,5) - a bit ambiguous between which is the note and which is the slider
33:37:111 (2,4) - ^
33:49:968 (3,5) - ^
34:33:682 (2,3) - ^
35:53:825 - kiai should end here, not on a random blue tick
36:24:468 (7) - extend 1/4; where you have it now ends on "wic
Ked", but the white tick would be "wicke
D" like it should be.
*The section after the break is a bit confusing... switching between 1/3 and 1/4 streams? It's really not obvious which is which :/
37:49:539 - expected kiai to end here; or perhaps do a new fountain?
37:54:254 (2,3) - a bit ambiguous between which is the note and which is the slider
[Murder]
39:54:962 - expected the kiai to end on a downbeat (like this) [you can manually move the break too for a nice effect:
http://puu.sh/Qk94]
41:13:768 - ^ [the break looks like it's been manually moved but it's 1/4 off:
http://puu.sh/Qk9q]
41:28:096 - this kiai fountain feels unnecessary
41:42:424 - ^
42:36:156 - end kiai on the downbeat here, not on a random blue tick
[A Demon's Fate]
44:03:985 - expected the kiai to start here, not halfway through the chorus ):
44:14:508 (1) - not sure why this is a new combo by itself
44:32:642 - end kiai here
44:46:971 - expected a note here and on the previous red tick
47:35:329 - kiai should end here, not on a blue tick
47:49:657 - ^
47:57:493 (4,5) - even though the pattern is obvious from the previous measures, these are hard to distinguish from 1/4 notes and are just asking for a combobreak ):
47:58:389 (4,5) - ^
[Stairway to the Skies]
*Where's the kiai in the choruses? D:
51:22:511 (2) - please raise the volume so that the ticks are audible; 5% is too low for something like this
52:35:844 (5,6) - can't tell which is the slider and which is the note
52:38:807 (5,6) - ^
52:50:659 (5,6) - ^
52:57:325 (4) - where's the finish?