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thx!

Thx!　star

Normal mode seems to have too many of the same quick back-and-forth sliders, and the spinners throughout the song seem to last too long. The spinners feel like they could be a bit shorter and have extra notes added instead... And the sliders in Normal need a little more variety.
However, the spinner at the end of the song seems too short.

Pichu0102 wrote:

Normal mode seems to have too many of the same quick back-and-forth sliders, and the spinners throughout the song seem to last too long. The spinners feel like they could be a bit shorter and have extra notes added instead... And the sliders in Normal need a little more variety.
However, the spinner at the end of the song seems too short.

Thank you for the variable advice
Im still thinking

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[General]
- Fix all your green timing points so they are placed exactly on note.
- Add kiai time maybe because song is pretty long, except in easy diff(if you want)
- In Easy and Hard you have 1/8 which you didn't used for notes, but instead you used them on timing points which is unnecessary if you fix your timing points.
- I would also love to see some cosmetic sliders. not just straight line or rainbow
- Your source song is very loud. I suggest to decrease few dBs if you know how to work in audio editors

[Easy]
Maybe +1 AR? It feels kinda slow for song with high BPM, especially since you have very easy map because of ignoring set of notes

[Normal]
00:04:706 (2) - End slider on 00:04:979 (sound better imo)
00:05:433 (3) - Put it 2 ticks back and increase for 2 ticks more and then re-distance that combo (sound better imo)
00:16:342 (2) - Same process as first 2 comments. Decrease 3 ticks in (2) and put back (3) on 2 ticks and increased it for 2 ticks, then re-distance
02:03:797 (2) - Lol, already my suggested slider pattern, then why not to do so in the beginning?

[Hard]
00:25:979 (7,8,9,10,1) - This is a tricky part because of reverse. Maybe fix a stack a little?
00:46:160 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - Instant fail moment unless you know what's coming. Jumping + stacking is some serious trap.
01:03:160 (3,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - This is reasonable for hard. I like it :3
01:33:797 (2) - Maybe reverse selection?

And now I feel you kinda overmapped Hard difficulty, seems you want people to fail on SS/S
02:22:888 (1) - slider followed by almost hidden reverse slider 02:23:615 (1) with stacked notes, followed by jumps? em...lol. Can you do something to these sliders?
02:25:070 (1) - I really don't like this random 1 note combo jump which is hidden also :<
02:42:433 (2,3,4,5,6) - nice combo :3

[Lunatic]
I am not Insane mapper yet so I can't mod it

~ Star for Cheeeeeeeeeeeeeeen :3
I will be checking for updates on this map, so don't graveyard it please.

Kiai mod
01:10:888 - kiai fontan should start here
02:32:342 - ^

Easy
01:05:069 (1,2) - maybe dont stack them?
01:29:797 (3) - 2 grid left and 1 down
01:30:888 (4) - 1 left and 2 down

Normal
Fine~

Hard
Fine~

Lunatic
00:05:433 (3) - remove and 00:05:524 (1) - start at 00:05:433 IMO look better

Thank you for MOD 　TorNis & Hellzero

manten <3

star~☆

nice map~star!

Konnichiwa

General
* You MP3 is over ampliflying too much, you should lower a bit http://puu.sh/2p0e
* Also, your MP3 bit rate is 320kbps. You need to re-encode the MP3 to 128kbps ~ 192kbps
* All BG seems has a low quality of the map. Try this BG : http://puu.sh/2p0z
* Tags : COOL CREATE perfect cheery blossom chen yakumo stage 2 boss
* Rarely stack leniency is unrankable, raise 2 or 3 tick for stack leniency in song setup

Note : If you can't fix the MP3, feel free to ask MAT/BAT to fix the MP3

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Easy
* You need to full mapped of this. It doesn't matter if you full mapped on easy diff, unless if you do something boring pattern.....

00:15:615 (1) - I really don't like this object was overlapped by 00:13:433 (2)
00:36:706 (1) - Since this music is kinda fast, put this object closer to the spinner, to make novice player easy to click this while gameplay
00:43:797 (4) - New combo for different ticks to let novice player easy to notice (this slider was place in red ticks, and previous slider was place in white ticks)
01:11:615 (1) - Again, put this object closer to the spinner, since this song is little bit fast
01:19:615 (1) - Extend it to 01:20:706?

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Normal
* Approach Rate +1?

01:03:615 (3) - New combo? Also, stack with tail slider to make noobs easy to play?
01:07:251 (2) - Overlapped by previous slider is bad
01:21:070 (1,2,3,4,1) - I am pretty not sure that back and forth is really tricky for noobs, since the 01:21:797 (3,1) is overlapped by hitburst...... But, just suggestion, though
01:50:160 (3,4,5) - Move 1 grid down? (Nazi)
02:01:797 (3) - Stack with tail slider to make noobs easy to play?
02:25:070 (1,2,3,4) - Same issue as 01:21:070 (1,2,3,4,1)
02:38:160 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - 9 combos is kinda long for normal diff

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Hard
00:46:888 (1) - I almost can't see the repeating arrow, change something?
01:02:160 (1) - Ugly slider (Nazi)
01:04:706 (6) - Unstack this? I think doesn't make sense if previous note in red tick and this note in white tick are stack
01:05:069 (1) - Extend it to heavy white tick (the white line with long line)? I'm just point these out because I click 01:06:706 (1,2,3) early
02:25:433 (1,2,3) - Make a diamond pattern? (Nazi)
02:26:524 (1) - Same issue as 01:05:069 (1)
02:43:615 (6) - The tail slider is almost offscreen

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Lunatic
00:33:888 (2,3) - This object are hidden because it's overlapped by hitbursts
00:38:797 (1,2) - Not stack perfectly with tail slider
01:16:524 (6) - This object is almost offscreen
01:25:797 (1) - Remove new combo
02:42:524 (3) - The tail slider is almost offscreen

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あなたは誰性交ですか？！

Leorda wrote:

Konnichiwa

Kon nichi wa :3

Thx! many Mod Leorda
and Thx new BG.　I use this

Many were corrected

Leorda wrote:

あなたは誰性交ですか？！

nicemap

General:

Tags: cheery -> cherry

Easy: Fine

Normal:

00:18:888 (2) - Too close to (1)

Hard:

02:01:797 (7) - New combo

Lunatic: I love this

Nice map ( ﾟωﾟ)ノ☆

yeah!
Thx for Mod and Star pieguy

Ayeen's mod via #modreqs:

General:
The Mp3 is not rankable. It already mentioned by Leorda.
New Mp3 at 192kbps New offset will be 1080
Use the mp3 above and do a full submit again
Stack leniency shouldn't be disabled. It is not rankable. At least make it at setting 5
viewtopic.php?f=56&t=55037
Color:

I think above color is more appropriate with the BG. You can copy it into .osu file under "color" section

Easy:
Considering the score spreadsheet, I think you should map until end of song ( Where 150k jump to 1.3M score)

Normal:
Quite good normal

Hard:
HP drain changed to 5, So this will fit more to 4.89 (5.7M) star difficultly rather than 4.97 (5.7M), thus comparing the score for lunatic is 9M. This should be more logical.
00:46:888 (1,2,3,4) I don't really like the pattern here, kinda confusing. Maybe something like this:
Some patterns is kinda random jumps placed at random places in the map ~

Lunatic:
Same as hard comment, some patterns is so randomly placing notes.
01:33:433 (1,2,3,4,5) Not really in straight line. Hold "shift" key while placing the notes. That should fix it
01:55:251 (5,6,7,8,9) Look kinda ugly pattern

You can make more beautiful map than this, for now the notes placing is kinda random.

~Star

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