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Hiroki Takahashi - Excuse Me, I am Sorry

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Beuchi
Revived!!

Good luck with getting this map ranked LuPiiTa! :)
HellDawn
Normal
03:09:636- Spacing

Hard
Overal Difficulty -1

Cant find aything wrong
Star <3
Vergence

Hello~

Normal
Maybe you need an Easy cause this is too hard for beginners...
02:56:658 (2) - Make this note just out a bit from the slider so it looks easier to read
02:58:360 (2) - ^

Hard
00:58:572 (1) - Too near to (4). One grid up
01:00:672 (5) - One grid down
01:04:955 (3,4) - Too near to (2) so ^
01:34:317 (1) - Too near from the previous note. Fix it.
03:10:275 (4) - Far from (3) Near to (1)

Mint
01:27:509 (1,2,3,4....) - Why not put it in the middle-bottom of the map instead of that?
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That's all~
Mint Bunny

DragonSparta wrote:

Mint
01:27:509 (1,2,3,4....) - Why not put it in the middle-bottom of the map instead of that?
mhmmm
Download: Hiroki Takahashi - Excuse Me, I am Sorry (LuPiiTa) [Mint].osu
Topic Starter
LuPiiTa
SPOILER

HellDawn wrote:

Normal
03:09:636- Spacing

Hard
Overal Difficulty -1

Cant find aything wrong
Star <3

DragonSparta wrote:


Hello~

Normal
Maybe you need an Easy cause this is too hard for beginners...
02:56:658 (2) - Make this note just out a bit from the slider so it looks easier to read
02:58:360 (2) - ^

Hard
00:58:572 (1) - Too near to (4). One grid up
01:00:672 (5) - One grid down
01:04:955 (3,4) - Too near to (2) so ^
01:34:317 (1) - Too near from the previous note. Fix it.
03:10:275 (4) - Far from (3) Near to (1)

Mint
01:27:509 (1,2,3,4....) - Why not put it in the middle-bottom of the map instead of that?
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That's all~
Thanks to both for modding~ :3
And now i'm working on an easy difficulty ;D
mochi
[Easy] : modding easy since it's new
02:53:041 - delete timing section
03:19:849 - delete timing section
03:19:849 - delete timing section

[Hard]
fine.

[Mint]
01:10:487 - delete timing section
mercury2004
Mod.

Red: Means.You are breaking beatmapping rules. You should change it immediately.
Orange: Means. My Suggestion. It is okay whether you change it or not
Purple:Means. Highly Recommend you to change it.

General
You don't need to put "Song" in the tag.
Nicely done. Star

Easy Difficulty
01:09:211 (2) - 1 Repeat is enough
01:21:551 (4) - Can you make this looks perfectly curve

Normal Difficulty
Fine~

Hard Difficulty
00:36:658 (2,3) - These slider don't fit into the song well
00:38:572 (2,3) - ^


Mint Difficulty
00:34:743 (3,4) - Use 3 shape same as 4
01:08:147 (1,2,3,4) - Make it more symmetrical
01:12:615 (2) - Is slider tail supposed to have whistle?
01:14:317 (2,3) - - Remove whistle and add whistle here 01:14:743 (4) -
01:25:381 (1) - NC here
01:26:658 (7) - NC here
01:55:594 (3) - Move one grid at up (tiny size gird)
02:45:381 (9) - Add Whistle
02:56:870 (2) - This is confusing in the first play
02:57:722 (5) - ^



Don't kudos If you find this not helpful
Topic Starter
LuPiiTa

qilliam wrote:

[Easy] : modding easy since it's new
02:53:041 - delete timing section
03:19:849 - delete timing section
03:19:849 - delete timing section

[Hard]
fine.

[Mint]
01:10:487 - delete timing section
Done :D

mercury2004 wrote:

Mod.

Red: Means.You are breaking beatmapping rules. You should change it immediately.
Orange: Means. My Suggestion. It is okay whether you change it or not
Purple:Means. Highly Recommend you to change it.

General
You don't need to put "Song" in the tag.
Nicely done. Star

Easy Difficulty
01:09:211 (2) - 1 Repeat is enough
01:21:551 (4) - Can you make this looks perfectly curve

Normal Difficulty
Fine~

Hard Difficulty
00:36:658 (2,3) - These slider don't fit into the song well
00:38:572 (2,3) - ^


Mint Difficulty
00:34:743 (3,4) - Use 3 shape same as 4
01:08:147 (1,2,3,4) - Make it more symmetrical
01:12:615 (2) - Is slider tail supposed to have whistle?
01:14:317 (2,3) - - Remove whistle and add whistle here 01:14:743 (4) -
01:25:381 (1) - NC here
01:26:658 (7) - NC here
01:55:594 (3) - Move one grid at up (tiny size gird)
02:45:381 (9) - Add Whistle
02:56:870 (2) - This is confusing in the first play
02:57:722 (5) - ^



Don't kudos If you find this not helpful
Done somethings except Mint because i don't know if he/she wants to do it D:

Thanks to both for modding~ :3
Mint Bunny
Topic Starter
LuPiiTa

Mint Bunny wrote:

gah i'm so sorry D':
No problem~ :3

So... done! :)
Yasora
hi~ sorry, I'm late ><

Easy
don't forget to check the spacing with distance snap :3 (because Easy must need consistent spacing~)
00:39:849 (1) add long the slider into 00:40:381? (and don't forget about spacing ; ) )
00:42:615 (3) spacing
00:45:807 (2) ^
00:47:509 (3) 1 grid up
00:51:764 (2,3,4) spacing
00:58:572 (3) 1 grid left
01:21:977 (4) more little neat again :3 [url][http://puu.sh/7evr/url] (point in the up ball)
02:03:253 (2) 1 grid right
02:09:211 (2) spacing
02:11:339 (2,3) spacing
02:45:807 (1) more little neat again like this? http://puu.sh/7ewk
02:48:360 (2,3) spacing
02:57:722 (4,5) ^
03:01:977 (3) ^
03:15:594 (2) ^
03:20:700 (3) like this? http://puu.sh/7ewB
03:32:615 (3) spacing

Normal
In here, you use 0.8x and 1.0x spacing? : o [just ask :3]
00:59:424 (1) del NC
01:00:275 (7) NC
01:02:402 (1) del NC
01:03:466 (5) NC
01:04:104 (1) del NC
01:05:168 (4) NC
01:05:807 (1) del NC
01:07:083 (5) NC
02:20:700 (1) del NC
02:29:636 (2) 1 grid down
02:35:168 (1) del NC

Hard
00:38:147 (6) NC
00:38:360 (1) del NC
01:15:168 (1) ^
01:16:445 (1) ^
01:17:083 (10) NC
01:17:721 (1) del NC
01:18:998 (1) ^

okay~ that's all :3 sorry if my mod is bad >.<
Good luck~ star~ o/
Gamu
hi- :)

sorry. late...

[General]

  1. fine~
All suggestions

[Easy]

  1. 03:20:700 (3) - Spacing
  2. AR+1
  3. 02:24:956 (x) - circle add (On the 02:25:381)
  4. 02:39:849 (1,2,3) - 1 grid right (all)... Please adjust the spacing of the subsequent :D
[Normal]

  1. That the spacing is uniform, please check
  2. 02:08:360 (1,2) - Move (x:264 y:184)
  3. 02:47:509 (2,3,4) - Triangulate
[Hard]

  1. 00:43:253 (1) - Cleanly (click here)
  2. 00:44:955 (3) - ^
  3. 00:46:658 (5) - ^
  4. 00:58:572 (1) - ^
  5. 02:42:402 (1) - Move (x:424 y:184)
[Mint]

  1. 00:51:764 (5) - new combo add
  2. 01:26:658 (4) - ^
  3. 01:41:126 (1) - finish add (soft → normal)
Good map!!!!!!
Mint Bunny
YTYuyu
yo modding this song because of ur request :)

Easy:
00:47:509(1) - NC and 1 grid up
02:36:445(3) - x:120 y:320
02:56:870(1,2) - NC for (1) and spacing between (1,2)

Normal:
change the slider tick rate to 1. having a slider tick rate of .5 is unrankable.
00:29:627(1) - x:240 y:64 for the 3rd point
00:42:615(2,1) - Spacing
01:09:211(2) - 1 grid up

Hard:
02:00:913(2) - 1 grid left

Mint:
02:03:253(5) - NC
02:14:104(4) - 1 grid down and 1 grid left
02:26:658(6) - NC
02:33:679(6) - ^
02:40:700(6) - ^
03:11:977(1) - the top of the slider looks like its touching the draining bar
03:32:828(5) - NC

This is the best i can do. GL :D
Mint Bunny
imRitaka
Mod request. (Sorry for the slight delay. ;-;)

[Easy]
03:20:700 > Space (3) properly from (2) so beginners don't get confused with the space change.

[Normal]
00:49:636 > Remove this new combo.
00:50:062 > Add a note here if you did ^.

[Hard]
01:00:062 > (5) isn't spaced correctly from (4). Move it up 1 point.
03:24:530 > Move (3) 1 point to the left?

[Mint]
00:41:977 > Space (3) properly from (2) using 1.0x Distance spacing.
00:43:253 > I suggest removing (1), moving (2) to where (1) was, and extending (2) 1/2 beat.
00:43:253 > If you did ^, you'll see you need to add a new combo.
Pereira006
hello~~

sorry very very later because i kindy busy for school -.-

anyway

Some Suggestions
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Easy

AR +1 more read IMO

01:08:147 (1,2) - I can see still incosiente spacing just one grid dowm
01:20:700 (3,4) - i can see 0.64x then is incosiente spacing try out more space if you fix this try fix at 01:24:104 (1,2,3)

bored play but everthing look good
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Normal

01:03:679 (3,1) - the (1) note is kindy ugly overlaps with slider on normal try this http://puu.sh/83US or remap you owm because need clean hitburst with (1) IMO
01:18:998 (3) - Grid 1 dowm or is still intentional ?
02:24:956 (4,1) - IMO the (1) the hitburst is almost hidden with slider repeat try out more space
02:37:083 (3,4) - i can see this isn't still blanket try better blanket
03:10:488 (1,2) - I very worried this because the Stack with bpm weak is hard play i think unstack is better gameplay IMO
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Hard

i did test play but the HP i not like pleasse HP -1

00:59:849 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/83Xl this still intentional try better symentrical
01:24:743 (2,3) - Incosiente spacing
01:25:381 (1) - remove new combo pleasse
03:02:402 (1,4) - bad intentional try this http://puu.sh/83Ys the 2 slider are same symentrical imo if you fix this carefully spacing at 03:04:105 (5,6,1)
03:21:764 (7,8,9,10,1,2,3,4,5,1) - try this combo http://puu.sh/83YY is better IMO
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Mint

00:45:807 (3,4,1) - ugly overlaps with slider try this http://puu.sh/83Zt to clean hitburst IMO
00:48:360 (3) - lol this is still no look slider try this code http://puu.sh/840e if you like also if you fix this carefully spacing at 00:50:062 (1,2,3,4)
280,232,48360,2,0,B|240:200|200:168|158:177|172:235|219:271|244:236|231:187|219:138,1,240.000000894069,0|2
02:20:275 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - sorry this is not make sense this song and is overmapped
02:26:445 (5) - this is ugly overlaps with slider 02:26:658 (6,7)i suggest you clean hitburst IMO
03:11:977 (1) - this is almost hidden with HP drain try grid dowm
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that all i think
Good luck and STAR !
Mint Bunny
Topic Starter
LuPiiTa
Ok, so lets see:

Yasora-chan wrote:

hi~ sorry, I'm late ><

Easy
don't forget to check the spacing with distance snap :3 (because Easy must need consistent spacing~)
00:39:849 (1) add long the slider into 00:40:381? (and don't forget about spacing ; ) ) No. Sorry :(
01:21:977 (4) more little neat again :3 [url][http://puu.sh/7evr/url] (point in the up ball) Not done u.u
02:45:807 (1) more little neat again like this? http://puu.sh/7ewk I can't see the image D:
03:20:700 (3) like this? http://puu.sh/7ewB Same ^ o.o

Normal
In here, you use 0.8x and 1.0x spacing? : o [just ask :3] Yes, i think :O

Good luck~ star~ o/
Thanks for your mod Yasora-chan >w<

-Gamu- wrote:

hi- :)

sorry. late...

[Easy]

[list]
[*]02:24:956 (x) - circle add (On the 02:25:381) I didnt add the circle but instead of that i made the spinner more longer :3
Thank you for modding~ :D

Byakugan249 wrote:

yo modding this song because of ur request :)
Normal:
change the slider tick rate to 1. having a slider tick rate of .5 is unrankable. Done!
Yay~ Thanks for your mod! ^^

Ritaka wrote:

Mod request. (Sorry for the slight delay. ;-;)

[Normal]
00:49:636 > Remove this new combo. Not done
00:50:062 > Add a note here if you did ^. Not done
Thank you very much Ritaka~ :3

Pereira006 wrote:

hello~~

sorry very very later because i kindy busy for school -.-

anyway


Normal

03:10:488 (1,2) - I very worried this because the Stack with bpm weak is hard play i think unstack is better gameplay IMO Ok, i tried to make it more easy :3
Thanks for modding!! :D

And everything else is done~~!
R801
He estado checándolo en CTB y me gustó xD. Te quedó muy lindo :3
Topic Starter
LuPiiTa

R801 wrote:

He estado checándolo en CTB y me gustó xD. Te quedó muy lindo :3
No me había dado cuenta de tu comentario, disculpa x.x
Muchísimas gracias~ :'D me alegra que te haya gustado.
TEKON_old
Can you refresh this map, this map is great and should be ranked... :oops:
10crystalmask01

TEKON wrote:

Can you refresh this map, this map is great and should be ranked... :oops:
This map still has lots of potential to getting ranked.
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