Camellia - Ultimate Ascension [CatchTheBeat] · forum

i feel like doing another ctb bn test

General :
- only in guideline tho but you can make your ending time same for all of your diffs. that would be make more sense to me (I got the last slider from the lower difficulties changed from another previous mod, but I'd rather wait for more opinions on this concern)

Cup :
- 00:04:961 (2) - imo 1/1 slider or 2 circles on whiteticks would be nice here. the redtick one only have a weak piano while blue ticks beside the redtick have the strong sound ones (1/1 slider will be)
- 00:14:711 (3) - maybe x:308 to use very low spacing like you did for 00:12:311 (3) - (Done)
- 00:25:361 (3,4,5,6) - i think we can use simplier rhythm. 5 notes of 1/2 for a high bpm is a bit overdone for me. how about remove 00:25:511 (4) - so 1/2 is more focusing for emphasis drum? (You're right. Removed)
- 00:29:111 (3) - this note can be removed as well. imo redtick has a weaker sound than 00:29:186 - (Yap)
- 00:32:861 - should be a drum finish here? (Added)
- 00:36:761 (1) - for this time you can use 1/2 slider repeat if you want to more focus on following drum (Added)
- 00:39:161 (1) - instead of having same rhythm with salad. imo this can be simplier too with 3/2 slider repeat but its up to you since 3/2 wont emphasis all sounds you follow here lol (I'll try your suggestion)
- 00:42:611 - just suggestion you can add a circle here. that drum is so strong (Adding an additional note because of the drum would mean that I have to finish the previous slider on the blue tick to be consistent with the sounds I follow, but that's just meh)
- 00:47:561 (1) - instead of clap, use finish here? since the sound is cymbal (Added)
- 01:11:411 (3) - you can keep use 1,1x spacing here for consistency with 01:06:611 (3) - (Okay)
- 01:21:086 (1) - just my taste but try reduce it x:256? since we have to move from this slider to catch next slider's head. i think since the snapping is a bit confusing for newbies, it would be better to make less movement so newbie wouldnt forced to move with fast to catch (2) (Done)
- 01:29:111 (3) - similar with above, try make reduce the spacing a bit for consistency (Done)
- 01:44:111 (1) - maybe move this circle to 01:44:561 - instead, that redtick's sound is so weak i even cant hear when testplay while that whitetick's sound is stronger than redtick (I went for the easiest option instead and added a spinner to avoid placing odd beats)
- 01:47:561 - maybe add finish as well
- 01:58:961 (4) - same here, maybe make less movement to catch this w/o need to move the ryuuta for redtick (Hope I did it right)

Salad :
- 00:07:361 (3) - reduce a bit or make it clearly for dash? since for newbie this distance is like needs dash but can be catch w/o dash too (I think this pattern came up in a previous mod, so I'll keep the current distance. As you said, it's still possible to be walked but I doubt new players would try to take that risk since the current distance is almost a dash)
- 00:10:061 (5) - reduce a bit like x:176? current position like newbie is forced for dash (since their reflect arent good) when they have to dash again for next slider. if you agree this then move (1) a bit to right to keep the dash (Done)
- 00:15:161 (1) - make the spacing more clear to do dash or not? as i tried i could catch this w/o dash but in edge qwq (Reduced it instead)
- 00:28:736 - miss clap i guess? (Nice catch)
- 00:37:961 (1,2) - could catch (1) w/o dash but nope for (2), how about x:288 for here so it would be clear to use dash here? (Done)
- 00:40:211 (2) - there are 2 options here. first remove soft clap here since the sound is so weak i dont think need a hitsound here. second is remove this and make dash 1/1 for 00:40:361 (1) - to emphasis cymbal because redtick has weak sound (and ur rhythms are complex aaa) (Restructured this section to avoid the double dash)
- 00:45:161 (1) - still catchable w/o dash, make it more clear ><(Alright)
- 00:46:961 (3) - also this looks like doesnt need dash but i have to press lol. maybe try x:480 to make it clear (You do need to press dash here, but increased as you suggested)
- 01:09:311 (1,2) - still catchable w/o dash. also imo better to not dash here since that would be hard for newbie imo, also the music (not the sound) is on calm part so player's mind would be "oh time for relax a bit) (Since I wasn't that happy with the antiflow pattern anyway, changed it to something else. Probably more evil than before www)
- 01:17:561 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - maybe reduce their spacing like 1,4x instead because i tried i caught all in edge and have to dash for 01:19:961 (1) - ;_; (1,5x works fine here and I don't see it necessary to get it reduced. If you're also tough enough you can also walk all of them. It's possible)
- 01:29:561 (1) - same as before, make it more clear at this time we have to dash or not >< (Did the same as before)
- 01:44:111 (1) - same reason like in Cup. maybe remove it and 01:44:036 - 1/1 slider at here or aaa.. too hard for me, find ur own solution DX (Blame Camellia and the old snaps. I'll go for your suggestion)

Platter :
- i think AR 8 is too slow here and 8,3 fits better (I'm not a hugh fan of speedy Platters, but I see why you suggested it. The difficulties of the spread are more difficult than the average, so I'm okay to increase the AR to 8,2 at most)
- 00:16:361 (1) - maybe make the spacing a bit larger to make dash here? i think it fits for doing that and ur current place is catchable w/o dash (Alright)
- 00:17:561 (1,2) - i think this can be harder since your rain at this part contains of 1/4 hdashes, i think having dashes for them would be great here to keep the spread also the rhythm can be harder if you want like using triplets http://puu.sh/tdV3b/ca6e8efcb1.jpg (Using triplets on this section would also unbalance it with the Salad, which used 1/1s only. Increased the distance between the kicksliders though)
- 00:30:161 (3) - make the spacing more clear for dash or not? this is still catchable in edge w/o dash D: (Both done)
- 00:42:761 (1) - ^
- 00:32:861 - remove finish for consistency with 00:42:461 - ? (Done)
- 00:46:961 (4) - use 1/4 instead for follow the piano? since with 1/2 i dont know what you exactly follow here. there are no 1/2 drums (The only purpose of the 1/2s was to keep the spread more balanced, like said in a previous example, since there's plainly nothing on Salad and just 1/4s on Rain. I'll try to gather more opinions about it though)
- 00:53:861 (2) - x:236? dash for 00:54:161 (3) - feels better for me due higher pitch on the music (Balanced the distances instead)
- 01:30:761 (1) - same with prev (Yeah)
- 01:31:961 (1,2) - same with prev too (Done too)
- 01:16:361 (1) - finish (Done)
- 01:38:336 (3) - feel a bit weird with this slider since bluetick on slider's head time isnt loud and redtick 01:38:411 - is louder than it. maybe just use 1/4 slider here (Tried something similar as you suggested on both cases)
- 01:47:936 (3) - ^
- 01:43:436 (6) - same with above but for this time i think 1/4 slider repeat can work (It works perfectly!)
- 01:51:086 (4) - btw why soft finish here? (Removed)
- 01:54:161 (2) - similar like 00:46:961 (4) - but i think this can be seperate to 2 of 1/4 slider repeats start from 01:54:161 - then second one 01:54:461 - (mkay)
- i think you can add more hdashes in kiai like 2-3 for kiai to make more interesting since somehow they feel a bit plain for me because kiai is most interest part that hdashes should appear more. possible to add hdashes are : 01:03:161 - 01:12:761 - / 01:04:961 - 01:14:561 - / 00:58:961 - 01:03:761 - (if you want to kill your triangles pattern in editor) (I'm not a friend of overcharging Platters with so many hypers. Tried to use only the necessary at the highest pitches)

Rain :
- 00:12:161 (3) - reduce like x:240? so the spacing will show that no need dash here. since current spacing shows like you need dash and dash more to (4) which the dash snap is different between 1/2 and 1/4 and make easily to miss (for me only i guess) (Done)
- 00:23:261 (4) - maybe reduce a bit /make dash since i could catch in edge w/o dash again? D: (Done)
- 00:29:561 (1) - make this to caught with hdash since the music supports it? if you agree you can move x:192 with the streams as well (Created a hyper)
- 00:38:786 (4) - i prefer like you use 1,4x spacing here. after those many dashes, i think when players see a triplet they would think "oh a relax part time to unpress my shift button" when your 1/4 here somehow looks catchable w/o dash too but thats wrong D: (Ouch)
- 00:47:561 (1) - why not hdash too for this like 00:45:161 (1) - 00:57:161 (1) - ? this time has cymbal too uwu (Created a hyper)
- 00:54:761 (1,2) - just my taste but i think drums at 00:55:661 - 00:55:061 - are strong too which need to map as well. since this is rain diff. why not map both music at bluetick ones and drums as well example http://puu.sh/tdYrC/5b220b660a.jpg ? (Sounds fine)
- 01:02:336 - 01:11:936 - that would be so bad to skip them when you mapped them in Cup Salad Platter and Phantom Q_Q (Ugh... Probably missed this one, but changed the structure to make it fit better with the music)
- 01:08:786 (4) - maybe reduce like x:144. first the music is calm so no need a harsh dash to catch this. also somehow idk why but its very often to miss for me. maybe due after those kiai (deadly) part, players reflect would be slower because a calm break part (Only moved it until x:128 instead. It'd be a pity if the intensity gets reduced because this little section has not so many beats)
- 01:24:461 (6) - hmm maybe make 1/4 slider repeat here? because slider's head in here is a drum which we can hear clear 1/4 triplet of drum (I already overcharged this difficulty way too much for my style. I'll try to avoid adding even more beats if possible)
- 01:51:161 (1) - maybe make a hdash here since music change part (Hope it's not too difficult)

Phantom :
- i ended my 2h to see this diff and i cant even read fruits here so what i've done only check snapping (its fine) and flow here but they seem too hard for me (for the anti flow ones) i know they are intentional for top pro players. i saw a bit messy on your nc but not a big issue to readability so let me know if you want to fix them and i will mention. last i just gonna say sorry i cant mod it lol

edit : asked shurelia's testplay and he mentioned 2 stuff
01:54:161 (4,5,6,7) - make them more horizontal for emphasis more to the music (Done, but not way that much to avoid random misses)
01:12:461 (4,5,6,7) - should be more curvy since it ruined the flow. should be same with 01:02:861 (4,5,6,7) - (Hope it plays better)

just find more mods for overdose (since i think it still can be better outside from my mod) and phantom diff (since nobody in this thread can mod this lol). we will see after them okay?

senpai you killed me. feed me choco onegai

I must admit I delayed applying this mod because I felt kinda astonished about its length, but I'm happy it's already applied after testing out every suggestion you made. Thank you very much and... it's alive again!

Ponchiwi

229 posts

Joined September 2011

Ponchiwi 2017-03-03T20:09:26+00:00

Phantom

00:00:761 (1,2,3,4) - Siento que quedaría mejor con este patron de slider, asi los movimientos iniciales del ryuta se siente mejor Click Here
00:07:361 (4,5,6) - No sería mejor darle otros tipo de patron a esa secuencia? porque veo que es la misma que aqui pero a la derecha 00:02:561 (4,5,6) - . Un map de este estilo siento que necesita mucha diversidad de patrones
00:09:836 (8) - Tal vez mover a x208 y 00:09:911 (9) - x144?
00:10:061 (11) - Podrías hacer que el slider sea algo asi Click Here porque el sonido disminuye y hay como una pausa total del sonido y luego se reanuda, entonces quedaría bien un slider medio vertical/curveado
00:22:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Me gustaria que aqui siguieras con estos movimientos de streams separados como intentar acomodarlos asi, para que no solo sean streas de 4 y estar parado, Click Here
00:47:561 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Siento muy floja esta parte al jugarla, porque no aprovechas esta parte de aumento de intensidad con patrones asi Click Here 1,2,3 Click Here 4,5,6 Asi aprovechas al máximo el audio y das el feeling adecuado, de dar los movimientos de slider que se alejan cada vez mas y vas mas rápido.
01:51:086 (6,7,8) - Estas notas siento como que te frenan al momento de ir ya en la recta final con los hdashes en todo momento, me gustaria que le dieras otra forma a ese triple.

En lo personal, siempre me han gustado tus streams, asi que realmente no tengo ningun comentario que decir al respecto, solo que en verdad dejas fluir tu creatividad con las formas que les das. Muy buen map

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Topic Starter

Deif 2017-03-24T09:34:33+00:00

Ponchiwi

Phantom

00:00:761 (1,2,3,4) - Siento que quedaría mejor con este patron de slider, asi los movimientos iniciales del ryuta se siente mejor Click Here (Así se crearía un hyper con la siguiente nota, que es lo que quería evitar. He probado otras opciones pero no son tan buenas)
00:07:361 (4,5,6) - No sería mejor darle otros tipo de patron a esa secuencia? porque veo que es la misma que aqui pero a la derecha 00:02:561 (4,5,6) - . Un map de este estilo siento que necesita mucha diversidad de patrones (Regla nº1 de mis mapas: Me encanta el copypasta (: )
00:09:836 (8) - Tal vez mover a x208 y 00:09:911 (9) - x144? (Hecho)
00:10:061 (11) - Podrías hacer que el slider sea algo asi Click Here porque el sonido disminuye y hay como una pausa total del sonido y luego se reanuda, entonces quedaría bien un slider medio vertical/curveado (Hecho)
00:22:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - Me gustaria que aqui siguieras con estos movimientos de streams separados como intentar acomodarlos asi, para que no solo sean streas de 4 y estar parado, Click Here (Intenté hacerlos de esa forma para que haya más variación en el stream. Si lo hago así, habría unos 6 patrones iguales consecutivos)
00:47:561 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Siento muy floja esta parte al jugarla, porque no aprovechas esta parte de aumento de intensidad con patrones asi Click Here 1,2,3 Click Here 4,5,6 Asi aprovechas al máximo el audio y das el feeling adecuado, de dar los movimientos de slider que se alejan cada vez mas y vas mas rápido. (Prefiero que esta parte se quede algo más calmada para que acompañe a la música. Los patrones siguientes se van complicando a medida que el volumen aumenta)
01:51:086 (6,7,8) - Estas notas siento como que te frenan al momento de ir ya en la recta final con los hdashes en todo momento, me gustaria que le dieras otra forma a ese triple. (He estado probando alternativas diferentes pero ninguna me convence por ahora. Si se sigue el movimiento del triplet no debería haber problemas para jugar el resto)

En lo personal, siempre me han gustado tus streams, asi que realmente no tengo ningun comentario que decir al respecto, solo que en verdad dejas fluir tu creatividad con las formas que les das. Muy buen map

¡Muchas gracias por tu ayuda!

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2017-04-12T15:19:48+00:00

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General]

Difficulty Spread : All Overdoses are CS4? :< Maybe a little diversity?
Background Size : okay!
Unsnapped objects : okay!
Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : okay!
Metadata Issues : okay!
Timeline Issues : okay!
Combo Colors : the gray color is really kinda weird, I'd make it a bit darker so it doesn't mesh so well with the bg
Unused Hitsounds : okay!
Hitsounds Issues : okay!
Unused Files / Other : okay!

[

Cup]

General

00:02:561 (2) - more movement? :<
00:07:361 (2) - round 2
00:12:161 (2,3,4) - kinda weird, almost antiflow pattern because you're coming back to the left out of going right. I'd just make it a repeat slider shape on the opposite side like 00:14:561 (2,3,4) -
00:39:161 (1) - I say this in every map i see them in but this is the ugliest repeat slider ever because the droplet formation makes me so sad. Can you remove the curve from it and make it more horizontal?
01:06:911 (1) - right facing instead for better noob player flow?
01:10:211 - even though there's a sound here, I think leaving it out in the cup would be much better. It's not very pronounced and creates a bit of extra density that we can chop off

[

Salad]

General

Okay the biggest thing I notice in this diff is how dense it is compared to the Cup. Really, I think you should still maintain 1/1 at this BPM and use 1/2 sparingly. For now, I'll mod it with the density in mind, but please take it into account!
00:02:561 (3) - you could probably give a little more room to notes like these so they are more clear dashes, like x128. This goes for the rest of them too I think
00:22:961 (3,1) - pretty far distance for a walk and doesn't really deserve a dash, i missed it by walking T_T reduce?
00:40:211 (2,1) - finish but no dash D:
00:46:361 (1,2) - again, high walking distance and I don't think it's really enough for a dash here. I'd consider reducing this.
00:51:761 (3,3) - wanna flip both of the angles so they flow more naturally?
00:54:161 (3,1) - dash? seems like a good buildup to kiaiii
01:00:161 (2,1) - walkable distance but I think it's intended to be a dash here?
same goes for 01:04:961 (2,1) - etc etc, you know what to do
yeah I don't think the diff is bad, I just think cutting down some extra notes would be helpful

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Platter]

General

00:49:811 (4,1) - seems pretty antiflow-y to me!
wow some of the movements were a bit intense but this was the best platter i've seen you make

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Rain]

General

00:25:886 (16,1) - I know there's that weird sound, but are you sure it's enough to warrant an hdash? I think just a normal dash in between the stream would work here.
00:30:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - uhhhhh 1/16 in a rain seems way too dense and maybe even outside of the RC. I'd really just reduce this to 1/8 for playability and density reasons at this level.
01:23:261 (5) - ctrl+h and move back to original? this is one of the only spots where these doublets are facing the opposite way of the next note
01:43:811 (1,2,3,4) - visual spacing here, these notes are all differently snapped but all seem to have the same distance, making it confusing to the player. I'd rearrange this in a way that properly reflects the snapping of the notes.
01:46:361 (1,2,3,4) - These are pretty boring and don't really reflect the music that much imo. Why not try something like this?
01:49:961 (1,2,3,4,5) - something more unique could be done here as well, maybe similar to the above?
01:51:161 (1,2,3,4,5) - same also. These notes have really unique sounds but the movement is so one dimensional that it doesn't really reflect that!

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Tenshichan's Overdose]

General

The beginning distances feel really high to me for some reason, like these 00:00:761 (1,2,3,4) - . I think some of them could really be reduced by 2-3 grids
Oh yeah, all the spinners in your difficulty need to be 1/2 to and from the notes. All of them are 1/4 distance so be sure to fix that!
00:04:061 (4) - such a steep slope on the slider makes the catcher have to stop too early, I'd make the slope similar to 00:03:761 (3) - for a more comfortable movement
00:16:211 (8,1) - missing hdash makes this hard :<
01:20:561 (3,4) - You've been doing 1/2 this whole time instead of the background, but here you decide to follow the background suddenly. I'd switch this to 1/2 to maintain your consistency!
01:20:561 (3,4) - same point with the background noises, consistency!

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Phantom]

General

I'd do HP6 just because with HP7 on a streamy map like this, missing anything is an instafail so yeah
01:01:811 (1,2) - this pattern is really harsh come out of the previous because it's so linear and sharp. I'd consider angling them a bit more for leniency or maybe even doing a shape like this for some added movement.
01:20:636 (4) - change angle? the distance already makes this hard enough, but having to slightly move backwards makes this a really tricky double to catch
01:22:586 (2) - x:208? reeeally far distance right now
I'd do similar reduction things for the doublets around these sections, some of them seem really far but it could just be me.

Really well done set. The top diffs are fantastic, but the bottom ones could use a little polishing. Sorry I'm so late. GL!

Razor Sharp

1,151 posts

Joined October 2013

Razor Sharp 2017-05-09T10:10:50+00:00

Ok lets do this

Phantom

GENERAL
Alot of places i feel you should add NC, especially for the streamy parts. Mentioned some NC changes in my mod.

GAMEPLAY

00:15:161 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - The way you placed these hypers makes it feel very unatural and weird going into the next slider after each one. Feels weird, and makes the repeat sliders a taddy hard to catch imo. While i find this pattern fine, i would recommend to tilt the sliders a little more upright to make it feel better to play.
00:17:561 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - NC on 00:17:861 (5,9,13) - please, to make it more comfortable to both see and watch the catcher.
Also, the patterning here is awesome, but due to the harsh movement of 00:17:411 (5,1) , i do find it hard to actually do this pattern propperly.
00:21:161 (1) - 00:29:411 (6) - Would suggest NC on every 4 note (nc to the beat), but for 00:28:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - just add NC on (4).
00:46:511 (2,3,4,5) - Increase the distance between these slightly maybe?
01:17:561 (1,2) - Reduce the distance here by 2-4 grids please. Makes this much more comfortable.
01:31:961 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - NC on 01:32:261 (5,9,13) - as i mention on the previos part like this. 01:31:811 (5,1) - same goes for this as i mentioned on the other part.
01:33:761 (7) - NC

Rest of the map seems fine for my case.

Tenshichan's Overdose

GENERAL
Alot of places i feel you should add NC, especially for the streamy parts.

GAMEPLAY

00:17:711 (2,2,2,2) - While these are ok, why dont you make the 1/8s into curved streams instead? Plays the same, just looks alot nicer. Example*
00:21:161 (1) - 00:22:886 (8) - This part is very annoying to play due to the movement key tap spam that you got going on here. Either shorten the distance of each note in each stream, or remap this to add propper movement too it.
00:54:761 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Ok this was really tricky to hit after a left right stream, the first on atlease. Make these curved instead?
01:17:561 (1) - 01:23:261 (4) - Why not make something alas like deif did in his diff? Not using the "peep" things as the rythm here makes the map feel pretty empty than it should. Especially when you could have used alternate rhythm here.
01:32:111 (2,2,2,2) - Same as i mentioned for the first point.

Other than that i feel the map is very clean. Good job.

Rain

GENERAL
Very fun to play, but still NC problems like in the other diffs.

GAMEPLAY

00:59:411 (7,1) - At 200 bpm i really dont see this as fit for rain. The pattern is allready pretty cramped, and this just makes it alot harder imo.
01:04:211 (7,1) - ^
01:13:811 (7,1) - ^
01:18:461 (5) - ctrl+g and move it more to the right? Having this antiflow here might confuse lower-tier players, as this isnt the most usual patterning for a rain. And it also gives a smoother transition to the next pattern!
01:23:261 (5) - Same for this, just move it to the left instead of the right.
01:51:086 (6,1) - This jump might ruin the play for alot of lower-tier players i think. pretty harsh antiflow unless you hit this part completely flawless.

Thats all for the rain. Good diff this too!

Platter

GENERAL
Pretty clean. Just some minor NC changes should be made.

GAMEPLAY

00:25:811 (7,1) - Why not have a hyper here, to empathize the halfway point downbeat?
01:35:561 (1,2) - Several places i notice you use these types of slider combination. Are you sure about this for platter?

Else than that i think the platter is fine.

I dont have time to mod the rest of the 2 diffs, as i got to go soon. But if you want me to look at them later, i can.
Good luck!

Last edited by Razor Sharp 2017-05-10T11:59:09+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Topic Starter

Deif 2017-05-09T13:23:50+00:00

Ascendance

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General]

Difficulty Spread : All Overdoses are CS4? :< Maybe a little diversity? (For fast streamy maps I prefer to use a standard CS ot make it less confusing. It shouldn't be a problem to keep the current one since the difficulty difference between both Overdoses is obvious)
Background Size : okay!
Unsnapped objects : okay!
Audio bitrate over 192 kbps : okay!
Metadata Issues : okay!
Timeline Issues : okay!
Combo Colors : the gray color is really kinda weird, I'd make it a bit darker so it doesn't mesh so well with the bg (Changed it to 128,128,128 to make it a bit darker)
Unused Hitsounds : okay!
Hitsounds Issues : okay!
Unused Files / Other : okay!

[

Cup]

General

00:02:561 (2) - more movement? :< (Both done)
00:07:361 (2) - round 2
00:12:161 (2,3,4) - kinda weird, almost antiflow pattern because you're coming back to the left out of going right. I'd just make it a repeat slider shape on the opposite side like 00:14:561 (2,3,4) - (I'll give it a try)
00:39:161 (1) - I say this in every map i see them in but this is the ugliest repeat slider ever because the droplet formation makes me so sad. Can you remove the curve from it and make it more horizontal? (Softened that curve)
01:06:911 (1) - right facing instead for better noob player flow? (Ooops!)
01:10:211 - even though there's a sound here, I think leaving it out in the cup would be much better. It's not very pronounced and creates a bit of extra density that we can chop off (Removed the repetition)

[

Salad]

General

Okay the biggest thing I notice in this diff is how dense it is compared to the Cup. Really, I think you should still maintain 1/1 at this BPM and use 1/2 sparingly. For now, I'll mod it with the density in mind, but please take it into account! (Blame Camellia for placing beats in such odd snaps. Cup would also be rather dense compared to the average difficulties of that kind you can find, but otherwise these difficulties would be somehow underwhelming)
00:02:561 (3) - you could probably give a little more room to notes like these so they are more clear dashes, like x128. This goes for the rest of them too I think (The distance was reduced twice I believe with other mods. The point was that the distance you suggest is somehow too "dashy" for this part as it's only the beginning. I'd rather keep the current one so the transitions aren't that complicated for not-so-experienced players)
00:22:961 (3,1) - pretty far distance for a walk and doesn't really deserve a dash, i missed it by walking T_T reduce? (You can walk it easier now)
00:40:211 (2,1) - finish but no dash D: (Moved (2) a bit more to the left to increase the dashy feeling)
00:46:361 (1,2) - again, high walking distance and I don't think it's really enough for a dash here. I'd consider reducing this. (I hope it's better now. I'd like to keep the dash with the next note but there's almost no place for it!)
00:51:761 (3,3) - wanna flip both of the angles so they flow more naturally? (Alright)
00:54:161 (3,1) - dash? seems like a good buildup to kiaiii (Added)
01:00:161 (2,1) - walkable distance but I think it's intended to be a dash here? (Wut, I needed a few tries to walk that one. I tried not to overcharge too much the distances between the 1/2s so if possible I'd like to keep them like that for the kiai)
same goes for 01:04:961 (2,1) - etc etc, you know what to do
yeah I don't think the diff is bad, I just think cutting down some extra notes would be helpful

[

Platter]

General

00:49:811 (4,1) - seems pretty antiflow-y to me! (You're right. Curved the slider a bit more so it flows better with the hyper)
wow some of the movements were a bit intense but this was the best platter i've seen you make

[

Rain]

General

00:25:886 (16,1) - I know there's that weird sound, but are you sure it's enough to warrant an hdash? I think just a normal dash in between the stream would work here. (Reverted it to dash, hope it works as well)
00:30:180 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - uhhhhh 1/16 in a rain seems way too dense and maybe even outside of the RC. I'd really just reduce this to 1/8 for playability and density reasons at this level. (Done)
01:23:261 (5) - ctrl+h and move back to original? this is one of the only spots where these doublets are facing the opposite way of the next note (You have it on 01:18:461 (5) - too)
01:43:811 (1,2,3,4) - visual spacing here, these notes are all differently snapped but all seem to have the same distance, making it confusing to the player. I'd rearrange this in a way that properly reflects the snapping of the notes. (Rearranged the last 3 notes as a slider with repetition, so players can follow it easier)
01:46:361 (1,2,3,4) - These are pretty boring and don't really reflect the music that much imo. Why not try something like this? (The drums are rather monotone on this section. I'd rather keep repetitive movements as its result)
01:49:961 (1,2,3,4,5) - something more unique could be done here as well, maybe similar to the above? (On the other hand, I diversified the movements on this pattern and the next one)
01:51:161 (1,2,3,4,5) - same also. These notes have really unique sounds but the movement is so one dimensional that it doesn't really reflect that!

[

Phantom]

General

I'd do HP6 just because with HP7 on a streamy map like this, missing anything is an instafail so yeah (Oh boy, you're crushing my dream of having my Overdoses with high HP)
01:01:811 (1,2) - this pattern is really harsh come out of the previous because it's so linear and sharp. I'd consider angling them a bit more for leniency or maybe even doing a shape like this for some added movement.
01:20:636 (4) - change angle? the distance already makes this hard enough, but having to slightly move backwards makes this a really tricky double to catch (Not sure if you'd like the resulting pattern, but changed)
01:22:586 (2) - x:208? reeeally far distance right now (It's a far distance, but it's also consistent with the next doubles. Apart of the obvious streams, I'd like to have this pattern as a central angle of the beatmap)
I'd do similar reduction things for the doublets around these sections, some of them seem really far but it could just be me. (Sure they're far away, but with the right movements even the hardest dashes are possible. I think the edge distance would be 1.90-1.95 whereas those doubles use 1.75)

Really well done set. The top diffs are fantastic, but the bottom ones could use a little polishing. Sorry I'm so late. GL!

Late answer from my side, but I appreciate you took a look at the beatmap. Thanks for your mod!

CLSW

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2,182 posts

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CLSW 2017-05-09T18:09:45+00:00

SPOILER

Just need to placehold this to get ready for m4m. and finally I got this with S rank so why not?

[General]
Preview point at 00:58:211 - seems better in my taste, it has like similar issue on my genryuu kaiko that the very beginning of part has been almost muted and unnatural. Better consider about this change.

[Phantom]
00:28:511 (2) - Having a potential with anti flow here, like this shape is able to use imo.

SPOILER

00:37:511 (6) - Just a small suggestion, how about to make vertical hyperjump here like I did on most of difficult maps?

SPOILER

00:58:361 (1,2,3,4) and 00:58:661 (5,6,7,8) - could be curved more or bigger scale to get more movements to make the actual intensity of this part, I mean I wanna see bigger movements for here
00:59:861 (1) - In this slider you can make closer to the next object to get rid of inertia issue.
00:52:511 (2,3) - ^
00:53:186 (7,9) - ^
00:53:861 (3,5,7) - ^
01:04:661 (1) - ^
01:06:611 (1) - ^
01:14:261 (1) - ^
01:19:436 (4) - I know you've tried to use semi-edge dashes on this part but I recommend to make HDash on its end to make an actual difference with the others like its background music. Also you already used HDashes on 01:21:086 (1,2,3,4,5) - so this seems inconsistency.
01:52:361 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You already used too much repetitive left-right motions. At least I wanna see some different, excessive and giddy flow here, like this example :

SPOILER

00:15:161 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - lul this pattern is so similar as sdvx one

SPOILER

[Overdose]
00:25:286 (8) - Missing HDash? I think it's doable, like placing this on around x 304
01:43:061 (5,6,7,8) - This part has a potential to be different as 01:42:761 (1,2,3,4) - , you can hear the sound difference. Try something as you can like slider hyperjump.
01:52:361 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Too much repetitive movement here, it's not good for the players' feeling, at least I'd like to recommend to change its flow direction for 01:53:486 (2,3,4) - .
01:56:411 (3) - Missing HDash?
01:58:661 (2) - ^
00:02:261 (2) - ^
00:04:661 (3) - ^, also 1/3 rhythm will fit here
00:07:061 (2) - Missing HDash?

[Rain]
00:52:961 (9,10,11,12) - I think it's not a good idea to make a flow like this, at least make a bit more bigger scale for 00:52:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and increase the distance between 00:52:961 (9,10) - as 00:52:886 (8,9) - . Also try to move 00:53:411 (11,12) - on the center to make HDash on (12).
01:23:561 (1) - Temporary stop movement on here and sudden large-spaced triplet on 01:23:786 (2) - will make the usual intermediate players break imo, it's pretty hard to control. Try to nerf or something friendly to catch. It's because the distance between 01:23:261 (5,1) - is too low so players need to take total 3 step : move to the next fruit's position - stop - move again, and it has no gameplaying difference as 1/4 vertical hyperslider jump.

I don't mod lower difficulties so I'd say that's all

Last edited by CLSW 2017-05-12T16:22:48+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Tenshichan

595 posts

Joined September 2011

Tenshichan 2017-05-11T22:10:51+00:00

Ascendance

Ascendance wrote:
[ Tenshichan's Overdose]

General

The beginning distances feel really high to me for some reason, like these 00:00:761 (1,2,3,4) - . I think some of them could really be reduced by 2-3 grids fixed
Oh yeah, all the spinners in your difficulty need to be 1/2 to and from the notes. All of them are 1/4 distance so be sure to fix that! fixed
00:04:061 (4) - such a steep slope on the slider makes the catcher have to stop too early, I'd make the slope similar to 00:03:761 (3) - for a more comfortable movement not exactly like 3 but made it more steep anyway
00:16:211 (8,1) - missing hdash makes this hard :<never noticed that LUL fixed
01:20:561 (3,4) - You've been doing 1/2 this whole time instead of the background, but here you decide to follow the background suddenly. I'd switch this to 1/2 to maintain your consistency! fixed it but did it the other way around meaning I follow the background now
01:20:561 (3,4) - same point with the background noises, consistency! wrong timestamp? well, fixed same as above anyway

Razor Sharp

Razor Sharp wrote:
Tenshichan's Overdose

GENERAL
Alot of places i feel you should add NC, especially for the streamy parts. I just scrolled through the whole diff and couldn't really make out parts which desperately need a NC. For the slider stacks I want to avoid too much NC because that would be overdone imo.

GAMEPLAY
00:17:711 (2,2,2,2) - While these are ok, why dont you make the 1/8s into curved streams instead? Plays the same, just looks alot nicer. Example* Prefer to keep it like this for now, because there is indeed no noticeable difference while playing and replacing them with single fruits boosts the star rating by a big margin (even past Phantom diff)
00:21:161 (1) - 00:22:886 (8) - This part is very annoying to play due to the movement key tap spam that you got going on here. Either shorten the distance of each note in each stream, or remap this to add propper movement too it. alright
00:54:761 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Ok this was really tricky to hit after a left right stream, the first on atlease. Make these curved instead? curved all of them and plays way better now. Really nice suggestion!
01:17:561 (1) - 01:23:261 (4) - Why not make something alas like deif did in his diff? Not using the "peep" things as the rythm here makes the map feel pretty empty than it should. Especially when you could have used alternate rhythm here. Already taken care of with the previous mod's changes
01:32:111 (2,2,2,2) - Same as i mentioned for the first point. Same reason

Other than that i feel the map is very clean. Good job. Thanks!

CLSW

CLSW wrote:
[Overdose]
00:25:286 (8) - Missing HDash? I think it's doable, like placing this on around x 304 true, good catch
01:43:061 (5,6,7,8) - This part has a potential to be different as 01:42:761 (1,2,3,4) - , you can hear the sound difference. Try something as you can like slider hyperjump. Good catch! I remapped this part a bit rhythm-wise and it plays way better now imo
01:52:361 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - Too much repetitive movement here, it's not good for the players' feeling, at least I'd like to recommend to change its flow direction for 01:53:486 (2,3,4) - . I did try something like that when I mapped it but for some reason didn't apply it. Added the direction change now.
Plays nice.
01:56:411 (3) - Missing HDash?
01:58:661 (2) - ^
00:02:261 (2) - ^
00:04:661 (3) - ^, also 1/3 rhythm will fit here fixed all
00:07:061 (2) - Missing HDash? fixed
good mod CLSW

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240,208,101261,2,0,L|128:264,1,100,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
128,312,101486,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,128,101561,6,0,L|400:128,1,100,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,128,101786,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,128,101861,2,0,L|56:128,1,100,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,128,102086,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,128,102161,6,0,L|400:128,1,100,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
344,128,102386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,128,102461,2,0,L|56:128,1,100,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
112,128,102686,1,0,0:0:0:0:
320,200,102761,5,4,3:1:0:0:
376,200,102836,1,0,3:0:0:0:
320,200,102911,1,0,3:0:0:0:
264,200,102986,1,0,3:0:0:0:
416,112,103061,2,8,L|480:112,1,50
232,112,103211,5,12,3:0:0:0:
184,112,103286,1,0,3:0:0:0:
232,112,103361,1,0,3:0:0:0:
392,272,103436,1,12,3:0:0:0:
440,272,103511,1,0,3:0:0:0:
392,272,103586,1,0,3:0:0:0:
136,272,103661,1,8,3:0:0:0:
80,272,103736,1,0,3:0:0:0:
136,272,103811,6,0,L|280:272,1,100,4|0,3:1|3:0,0:0:0:0:
392,184,104036,2,0,L|456:184,1,50,4|0,3:1|3:0,0:0:0:0:
256,184,104186,2,0,L|128:184,1,100,4|4,3:1|3:1,0:0:0:0:
312,96,104411,2,0,L|424:96,1,100,8|12,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
264,96,104711,1,0,3:0:0:0:
136,96,104861,1,8,3:0:0:0:
72,96,104936,1,12,3:0:0:0:
72,96,105011,1,8,3:0:0:0:
136,96,105086,1,0,3:0:0:0:
304,96,105161,6,0,L|424:96,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,192,105461,2,0,L|368:240,1,100,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,264,105761,2,0,L|296:352,1,100,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
432,264,106061,2,0,L|344:176,1,100,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
216,128,106361,6,0,L|80:128,1,100,8|0,0:3|2:0,0:0:0:0:
296,128,106586,2,0,L|432:128,1,100,8|0,0:3|2:0,0:0:0:0:
192,128,106811,2,0,L|80:128,1,100,8|0,0:3|2:0,0:0:0:0:
320,128,107036,2,0,L|432:128,1,100,8|0,0:3|2:0,0:0:0:0:
200,64,107261,2,0,L|128:64,1,50,8|0,0:3|3:0,0:0:0:0:
312,64,107411,2,0,L|376:64,1,50,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
200,64,107561,6,0,L|72:64,1,100,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,107861,2,0,L|384:192,1,100,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,64,108161,2,0,L|96:64,1,100,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,108461,2,0,L|368:192,1,100,8|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
80,240,108761,6,0,L|192:240,1,100,12|0,0:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
416,272,109061,2,0,L|304:272,1,100,0|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
176,264,109361,1,12,0:3:0:0:
320,192,109511,2,0,L|392:192,1,50,0|8,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
224,112,109661,2,0,L|160:112,1,50,2|12,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
320,112,109811,1,8,0:3:0:0:
424,64,109961,5,4,0:0:0:0:
80,64,110186,1,4,0:0:0:0:
424,64,110411,1,4,0:0:0:0:
80,64,110636,1,4,0:0:0:0:
424,64,110861,1,4,0:0:0:0:
288,64,111011,1,0,3:0:0:0:
152,64,111161,5,0,0:0:0:0:
472,64,111386,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,64,111611,1,0,0:0:0:0:
472,64,111836,1,0,0:0:0:0:
152,64,112061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
288,64,112211,1,4,2:0:0:0:
424,64,112361,6,0,L|488:152,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
288,144,112586,2,0,L|176:200,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
376,208,112811,2,0,L|472:264,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
248,256,113036,2,0,L|128:280,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
452,184,113261,6,0,L|352:184,1,100
116,184,113486,2,0,L|216:184,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
420,120,113711,2,0,L|320:120,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
92,80,113936,2,0,L|192:80,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
344,64,114161,6,0,L|400:64,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
200,160,114311,2,0,L|144:160,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
328,112,114461,2,0,L|384:112,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
176,208,114611,2,0,L|104:208,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
312,248,114761,6,0,L|432:248,1,100,6|2,0:0|1:3,0:0:0:0:
360,160,115061,1,0,2:0:0:0:
448,160,115211,1,2,1:3:0:0:
296,64,115361,2,0,L|176:64,1,100,0|2,0:0|1:3,0:0:0:0:
248,136,115661,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,136,115811,1,2,1:3:0:0:
344,136,115961,6,0,L|392:240,1,100,0|2,0:0|1:3,0:0:0:0:
264,224,116261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,224,116411,1,2,1:3:0:0:
360,200,116561,2,0,L|480:200,1,100,4|0,1:3|2:0,0:0:0:0:
304,256,116786,2,0,L|184:256,1,100,4|0,1:3|2:0,0:0:0:0:
368,288,117011,2,0,L|432:288,1,50,4|0,1:3|2:0,0:0:0:0:
208,144,117161,6,0,L|72:144,1,100,4|2,0:0|1:3,0:0:0:0:
256,64,117461,1,0,2:0:0:0:
160,64,117611,1,2,1:3:0:0:
312,136,117761,2,0,L|432:136,1,100,0|2,0:0|1:3,0:0:0:0:
304,232,118061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,232,118211,1,2,1:3:0:0:
192,144,118361,6,0,L|72:144,1,100,0|2,0:0|1:3,0:0:0:0:
328,64,118661,2,0,L|432:64,1,100
160,192,118961,2,0,P|112:224|120:336,1,133.333333333333,4|0,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
368,304,119261,2,0,P|408:240|392:168,1,133.333333333333,4|0,1:3|2:0,0:0:0:0:
136,96,119561,1,4,0:0:0:0:

Last edited by Tenshichan 2017-05-19T17:52:42+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Bunnrei

1,044 posts

Joined May 2011

Bunnrei 2017-05-11T23:51:05+00:00

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=iGg9eU0jMzE seems to be a better quality mp3 but then it sounds quite different from the current map mp3, up to u to change

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Topic Starter

Deif 2017-06-16T13:43:04+00:00

Razor Sharp

Ok lets do this

Phantom

GENERAL
Alot of places i feel you should add NC, especially for the streamy parts. Mentioned some NC changes in my mod.

GAMEPLAY

00:15:161 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - The way you placed these hypers makes it feel very unatural and weird going into the next slider after each one. Feels weird, and makes the repeat sliders a taddy hard to catch imo. While i find this pattern fine, i would recommend to tilt the sliders a little more upright to make it feel better to play. (Done)
00:17:561 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - NC on 00:17:861 (5,9,13) - please, to make it more comfortable to both see and watch the catcher.
Also, the patterning here is awesome, but due to the harsh movement of 00:17:411 (5,1) , i do find it hard to actually do this pattern propperly. (Applied the NCs as you suggested, since it was done as well for similar sections with heavy 1/8 usage)
00:21:161 (1) - 00:29:411 (6) - Would suggest NC on every 4 note (nc to the beat), but for 00:28:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - just add NC on (4). (No need to add more NCs than necessary on the streamy part. 16 is still acceptable)
00:46:511 (2,3,4,5) - Increase the distance between these slightly maybe? (They have the same distance as the previous sliders due to the melody having the same beats in here too. Moreover, increasing the distance between them more would cause an odd flow in this part. You can currently perform them by pressing down the left arrow and not using dash at all)
01:[/color]17:561 [/color](1,2) - Reduce the distance here by 2-4 grids please. Makes this much more comfortable. (The original intention of the doubles section was precisely to make it rather challenging with some timing jumps)
01:31:961 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - NC on 01:32:261 (5,9,13) - as i mention on the previos part like this. 01:31:811 (5,1) - same goes for this as i mentioned on the other part.
01:33:761 (7) - NC (Not necessary. Having 1/4 beats continuously would only requite to NC every stanza or 16 objects)

Rest of the map seems fine for my case.

Rain

GENERAL
Very fun to play, but still NC problems like in the other diffs.

GAMEPLAY

00:59:411 (7,1) - At 200 bpm i really dont see this as fit for rain. The pattern is allready pretty cramped, and this just makes it alot harder imo. (Fixed them all)
01:04:211 (7,1) - ^
01:13:811 (7,1) - ^
01:18:461 (5) - ctrl+g and move it more to the right? Having this antiflow here might confuse lower-tier players, as this isnt the most usual patterning for a rain. And it also gives a smoother transition to the next pattern! (The transition is already smooth enough. The whole pattern can be played without dashing and the current distance with the next slider is the same as the one used with the previous slider. Same goes with the next pattern you mentioned)
01:23:261 (5) - Same for this, just move it to the left instead of the right.
01:51:086 (6,1) - This jump might ruin the play for alot of lower-tier players i think. pretty harsh antiflow unless you hit this part completely flawless. (Changed the orientation of the slider (1) so it flows better)

Thats all for the rain. Good diff this too!

Platter

GENERAL
Pretty clean. Just some minor NC changes should be made.

GAMEPLAY

00:25:811 (7,1) - Why not have a hyper here, to empathize the halfway point downbeat? (The beat isn't that important to remark imo)
01:35:561 (1,2) - Several places i notice you use these types of slider combination. Are you sure about this for platter? (If the distances are rather short, sure. Blame Camellia for using odd snaps)

Else than that i think the platter is fine.

I dont have time to mod the rest of the 2 diffs, as i got to go soon. But if you want me to look at them later, i can.
Good luck!

Minato Yukina

[General]
Preview point at 00:58:211 - seems better in my taste, it has like similar issue on my genryuu kaiko that the very beginning of part has been almost muted and unnatural. Better consider about this change. (Applied)

[Phantom]
00:28:511 (2) - Having a potential with anti flow here, like this shape is able to use imo. (Made something similar to what you suggested)
00:37:511 (6) - Just a small suggestion, how about to make vertical hyperjump here like I did on most of difficult maps? (Thought about it when I started mapping it, but I prefer to keep a huge jump where the "whooo" sounds)
00:58:361 (1,2,3,4) and 00:58:661 (5,6,7,8) - could be curved more or bigger scale to get more movements to make the actual intensity of this part, I mean I wanna see bigger movements for here
00:59:861 (1) - In this slider you can make closer to the next object to get rid of inertia issue. (Fixed them alled until...)
00:52:511 (2,3) - ^
00:53:186 (7,9) - ^
00:53:861 (3,5,7) - ^
01:04:661 (1) - ^ (...here. The distances should be short enough in the next sliders you mentioned to avoid extra dashing on the transitions.)
01:06:611 (1) - ^
01:14:261 (1) - ^
01:19:436 (4) - I know you've tried to use semi-edge dashes on this part but I recommend to make HDash on its end to make an actual difference with the others like its background music. Also you already used HDashes on 01:21:086 (1,2,3,4,5) - so this seems inconsistency. (Created a hyper)
01:52:361 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - You already used too much repetitive left-right motions. At least I wanna see some different, excessive and giddy flow here, like this example : (Did something different, but achieved the contrast you wanted to express with your suggestion)

00:15:161 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - lul this pattern is so similar as sdvx one

[Rain]
00:52:961 (9,10,11,12) - I think it's not a good idea to make a flow like this, at least make a bit more bigger scale for 00:52:361 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - and increase the distance between 00:52:961 (9,10) - as 00:52:886 (8,9) - . Also try to move 00:53:411 (11,12) - on the center to make HDash on (12). (Tried to make those kicksliders more visible and with a more marked timing. Disagreed on generating a hyper on the spot you suggested)
01:23:561 (1) - Temporary stop movement on here and sudden large-spaced triplet on 01:23:786 (2) - will make the usual intermediate players break imo, it's pretty hard to control. Try to nerf or something friendly to catch. It's because the distance between 01:23:261 (5,1) - is too low so players need to take total 3 step : move to the next fruit's position - stop - move again, and it has no gameplaying difference as 1/4 vertical hyperslider jump. (Made it more flow-friendly)
I don't mod lower difficulties so I'd say that's all

@Chara YouTube ripoffs don't have as much quality as expected. The current mp3 was taken from the ranked version and I don't hear any problems with it tbh.

Alright, time to get this updated!

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

3,922 posts

Joined September 2014

JBHyperion 2017-08-15T11:06:19+00:00

Illusionary mod or something - requested in my Interesting Queue

General

Given the high BPM, would you consider Tick Rate 1 on at least the Cup and perhaps Salad? You essentially have a deal where you either SS or don't FC, which is quite an unreasonable accuracy demand for newer players. You're not mapping a lot of the background synth/drum sounds in the lower difficulties anyway so I believe it won't detract from the mapping

Cup

01:17:561 (1,1,1) - 01:22:361 (1) - Synth is quite a bit stronger than drums here, so I'd prefer if these were 3/2 repeat sliders. This avoids the rhythm switch on 01:21:086 (1,2) - making these easier to follow as well
01:23:561 (1,2) - Since intensity is building again here, I find it weird that (1) offers no movement. Perhaps Crtl+H to give a back and forth pattern here?

Quire high density as you'd expect, but no major complaints

Salad

00:14:561 (2,3,4) - Would reduce the spacing here slightly, since it being significantly higher than 00:12:161 (2,3,4) - looks a bit weird to me given the intensity is not that different. Same applies to 01:28:961 (2,3,4) - later on
00:27:761 (3) - Comparing this to 00:28:511 (2) - the 3/4 rhythm is really hard to make out here. I'd stick to 1/1 + 1/2 for this part. Also you make a really weird switch back to the weaker 1/2 drums at 00:29:111 (3,4) - when 00:29:186 - is a continuation of the prior synth sound and is much stronger so maybe add another repeat to (2) and remove these
00:40:211 (2,1) - Quite high for a walkable spacing considering the previous pattern 00:39:161 (1) - offered lots of movement. Consider reducing this slightly
00:54:161 (3,1) - Intended dash? Seems a bit ambiguous atm and can be walked without too much trouble, so perhaps increase the distance a little here
01:00:161 (2,1,2) - Walkable with good timing, but otherwise deceptively high spacing, if these are not intended dashes, I'd reduce them slightly. Can also be applied to similar such as 01:04:961 (2,1,2) - 01:14:561 (2,1,2) - etc.
01:01:811 (4,1) - 01:06:611 (3,1) - As above, the 1/1 spacing makes these harder than they appear. These could probably be better emphasised with dash, so maybe you want more distance here instead
01:17:561 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - More ambiguous spacings, since this a is a calming down part after the kiai, you can afford to reduce these a bit imo, along with emphasising 01:21:086 (1,2) - more for the higher pitch

Platter

00:01:961 (1) - Spacing on 00:01:361 (3,4,1) - coupled with SV makes this a challenge to walk, as would be expected in the calm opening section, so try making this a bit more vertical and or reducing the distances mentioned. Can also be applied to 00:03:761 (3,4,1) - 00:06:161 (3,4,1) - 00:08:561 (3,4,1) -
00:15:161 (1,2) - 00:15:761 (5,6) - dashing back to these is not expected at all given how the first note in each pair is the only strong vocal sound. I'd make these walkable like you did for 00:16:361 (1,2) - instead for easier following
01:01:061 (2,3) - 1/4 jumps at this BPM are a real pain for a Platter difficulty, I'd swap (2) out for circles and make the spacing equal for better flow and appearance like you did for 01:04:961 (3,4,1) - Same applies for 01:10:661 (2,3) -
01:17:561 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Lots of borderline spacings where walking is too short and dashing is too easy to overshoot. Given how this is a calmer section after the kiai, I'd reduce most of the spacings slightly save for the important ones like 01:18:236 (4,5) - which could be emphasised better with a clearer dash and more distance
01:29:561 (1,2) - 01:30:161 (5,6) - Same as 00:15:161 (1,2) - 00:15:761 (5,6) -
01:49:361 (2,3,4) - Yikes this is one ugly curve, (3) to the right at around x-304 would look much nicer. 01:52:136 (3,4,5) - suffers a similar fate so you might wanna put that one in order too

Rain

00:14:411 (2) - Much less intense than 00:14:561 (3,4) - so a more vertical slider would be appropriate. Also dampens a difficulty spike in this relatively calm part. Same applies to 01:28:811 (2) - later on
00:16:961 (3,4) - Dash here is very unexpected, especially since there's no direction change. I'd keep this walkable as you did with 00:15:761 (3,4) - . Same applies to 01:31:361 (3,4) - later in the map
00:19:661 (11,12) - Very hard to walk by this point since you're increasing spacing with each slider, but not large enough to telegraph a dash. If the spacing increase between sliders was slightly less overall, you could avoid this. Again, apply the same thing at 01:33:761 (9,10,11,12) -
01:09:311 (1,2,3,4) - Rather sharp considering the variation in snap here, I find this easy to miss. Try a slightly lower distance for more leniency in the mid-kiai section
01:53:936 (3,4) - This snappy hyper into antiflow is quite unexpected after the previous tap dashing section, consider reducing the hyper strength to make this more lenient

Playing skill has deteriorated significantly during my break so I can't provide anything worthwhile on the top two diffs right now. Hope these suggestions help though.

Good luck! (:

Spectator

Elite Mapper: Aspirant

1,780 posts

Joined February 2011

Spectator 2017-11-18T03:18:20+00:00

Secret santa here o/

General

Take a look as some spinners, because not having a break of 1/2 between notes and spinners are no more rankable

Platter

01:47:336 (2,3) - I don't think this part deserve a 1/4 triplet. Consider removing (2)
01:49:361 (2,3,4,5,6) - I know it's an emphasizing but this is still a bit harsh to the players, maybe nerf it a bit?

Rain

00:46:661 (3,4,5) - The flow here is a bit awkward. Woulnd't it be better if you move (3)~(5) to around x:80?
00:57:236 (1) - As I remember this is unrankable because there should be an appropriate gap between spinner and notes. Make sure to have at least 1/2 of break between them
01:09:311 (1,2) - hyper here?

Tenshichan's Overdose

00:21:161 (1,2,3,4) - The flow here can still be improved. Consider making it the same as 00:21:761 (1,2,3,4) -
00:32:561 (4,5,6,7) - Inconsistent with 00:31:361 (3,4,5) -
00:33:611 (4,5,6,7) - Same issue as above with 00:36:311 (1,2,3) -
00:37:361 (1,2) - Pretty strong sound here. The HDash between them is deserved. Also it'd be good if you split the first reversed slider into two 1/4 sliders
01:10:211 (6,1) - definitely deserve some HDash here. if you're going to add it don't forget to shorten the 1/8 slider to have a 1/4 break otherwise it'll be unrankable
01:17:561 - This part has a bit awkward timeline overall. Wouldn't it be better if you arrange the timeline? Taking a look at deif's diff will be helpful for sure
01:25:811 (7,1) - HDash is welcomed here. Consider moving (7) to the right side of (6)

Phantom

00:33:986 (4,5,6) - I expect this to be similar as 00:34:736 (2,3,4) - or 00:31:136 (2,3) - so how about moving 00:34:061 (5) - to around x:218?
00:37:361 (5,6) - Vocals pretty strong here, wouldn't it be better if you make them Hypers? Try something like http://puu.sh/ymiCx/9b3dbd1833.jpg
01:15:611 (1,2,3) - Would be nicer if you reverse (1) and (3) in position for the better flow
01:16:211 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this can still be better. Try to move (4)~(6) to x:409
01:22:211 (6,1,2) - This part is pretty harsh because the jumps are coming right after the strong 1/4 HDash. Consider reducing the distance between (1) and (2)
00:57:161 (1,1) - There should be at least 1/2 break between them, otherwise it's unrankable <_<

As JBH focused on lower diffs and the mod hasn't applied yet, I've foced more on higher diffs which I have more knowledge of

Good luck!

Razor Sharp

1,151 posts

Joined October 2013

Razor Sharp 2017-11-25T19:13:06+00:00

secret santa!!! time to mod this again

Phantom

00:04:961 (4,5) - Just something i would like to see here instead of a plain pattern. Since it is a wub sound, i would prefferably like to see some movement here instead of the current one. Removing (5) and extending (4) as a repeat slider, placing the slider end on x480 or so compliments the wub sound alot more than the current pattern. I personally feel like this should be done, not only because of that, but it is also the hardest diff. (it actually removes 0.01 star rating xd)

00:37:511 (6) - Move this to x372? Makes this part a little easier to handle i think. Not really needed tho, Just a suggestion since it is a little tight.

Thats all for this diff! Still as amazing as it first was!

Tenshichan's Overdose

00:30:161 (1) - Maybe make this into a bended/banana pattern? To compliment the sound a little better than not to have any movement at all?

01:09:161 (1,2) - Why no hyper here? I feel like it really deserves it here. Most of the bass/finish sounds at this part deserves it, but i can understand that not eveyone have it. But having it between these 2 sliders i think would be good.

01:10:211 (6,1,2) - Also, remove 1 fruit from (6), then ctrl+g (1) and move it right ontop of (2)(x136) to compliment the transition. Fits very well imo.

Still as good as when i first played!

Rain

01:54:686 (11,1) - Im not such a huge fan for this on a rain. I think it would be better to have (1) go with the flow instead of against it.

Still amazing!

Thats all i can mod for this set! Hope too see this ranked soon! GOOD LUCK!

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

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Topic Starter

Deif 2018-05-14T16:23:56+00:00

#itshappening

JBHyperion

Illusionary mod or something - requested in my Interesting Queue

General

Given the high BPM, would you consider Tick Rate 1 on at least the Cup and perhaps Salad? You essentially have a deal where you either SS or don't FC, which is quite an unreasonable accuracy demand for newer players. You're not mapping a lot of the background synth/drum sounds in the lower difficulties anyway so I believe it won't detract from the mapping (TR1 applied for Cup, Salad and Platter so the density spread still makes sense)

Cup

01:17:561 (1,1,1) - 01:22:361 (1) - Synth is quite a bit stronger than drums here, so I'd prefer if these were 3/2 repeat sliders. This avoids the rhythm switch on 01:21:086 (1,2) - making these easier to follow as well (Alright, made them 3/2 instead of 1/1, and with that fixed the next point since the placement of the notes in that section needed to be adjusted)
01:23:561 (1,2) - Since intensity is building again here, I find it weird that (1) offers no movement. Perhaps Crtl+H to give a back and forth pattern here?

Quire high density as you'd expect, but no major complaints

Salad

00:14:561 (2,3,4) - Would reduce the spacing here slightly, since it being significantly higher than 00:12:161 (2,3,4) - looks a bit weird to me given the intensity is not that different. Same applies to 01:28:961 (2,3,4) - later on (I don't think it's necessary. The distance got increased due to the high-pitched voice and are still walkable without much problems)
00:27:761 (3) - Comparing this to 00:28:511 (2) - the 3/4 rhythm is really hard to make out here. I'd stick to 1/1 + 1/2 for this part. Also you make a really weird switch back to the weaker 1/2 drums at 00:29:111 (3,4) - when 00:29:186 - is a continuation of the prior synth sound and is much stronger so maybe add another repeat to (2) and remove these (Rearranged that part to fit the melody better, had to remove the spinner though)
00:40:211 (2,1) - Quite high for a walkable spacing considering the previous pattern 00:39:161 (1) - offered lots of movement. Consider reducing this slightly (Increased it instead to make the dash more noticeable)
00:54:161 (3,1) - Intended dash? Seems a bit ambiguous atm and can be walked without too much trouble, so perhaps increase the distance a little here (Can't recall why I added a dash on there. Removed it instead)
01:00:161 (2,1,2) - Walkable with good timing, but otherwise deceptively high spacing, if these are not intended dashes, I'd reduce them slightly. Can also be applied to similar such as 01:04:961 (2,1,2) - 01:14:561 (2,1,2) - etc. (All adjusted)
01:01:811 (4,1) - 01:06:611 (3,1) - As above, the 1/1 spacing makes these harder than they appear. These could probably be better emphasised with dash, so maybe you want more distance here instead (Increased the distance slightly in there)
01:17:561 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - More ambiguous spacings, since this a is a calming down part after the kiai, you can afford to reduce these a bit imo, along with emphasising 01:21:086 (1,2) - more for the higher pitch (Okay)

Platter

00:01:961 (1) - Spacing on 00:01:361 (3,4,1) - coupled with SV makes this a challenge to walk, as would be expected in the calm opening section, so try making this a bit more vertical and or reducing the distances mentioned. Can also be applied to 00:03:761 (3,4,1) - 00:06:161 (3,4,1) - 00:08:561 (3,4,1) - (Changed on the reverse sliders, the others where just a single slider follows are easier to walk)
00:15:161 (1,2) - 00:15:761 (5,6) - dashing back to these is not expected at all given how the first note in each pair is the only strong vocal sound. I'd make these walkable like you did for 00:16:361 (1,2) - instead for easier following (I find it a nice change of pace of the typical flow-friendly patterns on Platters, plus they make a difference with the following ones)
01:01:061 (2,3) - 1/4 jumps at this BPM are a real pain for a Platter difficulty, I'd swap (2) out for circles and make the spacing equal for better flow and appearance like you did for 01:04:961 (3,4,1) - Same applies for 01:10:661 (2,3) - (Done)
01:17:561 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5) - Lots of borderline spacings where walking is too short and dashing is too easy to overshoot. Given how this is a calmer section after the kiai, I'd reduce most of the spacings slightly save for the important ones like 01:18:236 (4,5) - which could be emphasised better with a clearer dash and more distance (Tried my best in here)
01:29:561 (1,2) - 01:30:161 (5,6) - Same as 00:15:161 (1,2) - 00:15:761 (5,6) -
01:49:361 (2,3,4) - Yikes this is one ugly curve, (3) to the right at around x-304 would look much nicer. 01:52:136 (3,4,5) - suffers a similar fate so you might wanna put that one in order too (Used to be uglier before. Softened it more though)

Rain

00:14:411 (2) - Much less intense than 00:14:561 (3,4) - so a more vertical slider would be appropriate. Also dampens a difficulty spike in this relatively calm part. Same applies to 01:28:811 (2) - later on (Done)
00:16:961 (3,4) - Dash here is very unexpected, especially since there's no direction change. I'd keep this walkable as you did with 00:15:761 (3,4) - . Same applies to 01:31:361 (3,4) - later in the map (Yeah)
00:19:661 (11,12) - Very hard to walk by this point since you're increasing spacing with each slider, but not large enough to telegraph a dash. If the spacing increase between sliders was slightly less overall, you could avoid this. Again, apply the same thing at 01:33:761 (9,10,11,12) - (Should be fixed)
01:09:311 (1,2,3,4) - Rather sharp considering the variation in snap here, I find this easy to miss. Try a slightly lower distance for more leniency in the mid-kiai section (Intentional to keep a harder distance on that bridge between both kiais, still accessible for players used to these kind of difficulties)
01:53:936 (3,4) - This snappy hyper into antiflow is quite unexpected after the previous tap dashing section, consider reducing the hyper strength to make this more lenient (Fair enough)

Playing skill has deteriorated significantly during my break so I can't provide anything worthwhile on the top two diffs right now. Hope these suggestions help though.

Good luck! (:

Spectator

Secret santa here o/

General

Take a look as some spinners, because not having a break of 1/2 between notes and spinners are no more rankable

Platter

01:47:336 (2,3) - I don't think this part deserve a 1/4 triplet. Consider removing (2) (Done)
01:49:361 (2,3,4,5,6) - I know it's an emphasizing but this is still a bit harsh to the players, maybe nerf it a bit? (Changed with the previous mod)

Rain

00:46:661 (3,4,5) - The flow here is a bit awkward. Woulnd't it be better if you move (3)~(5) to around x:80? (Alright)
00:57:236 (1) - As I remember this is unrankable because there should be an appropriate gap between spinner and notes. Make sure to have at least 1/2 of break between them (Nice catch!)
01:09:311 (1,2) - hyper here? (I'd like to keep that section dash-only)

Tenshichan's Overdose

00:21:161 (1,2,3,4) - The flow here can still be improved. Consider making it the same as 00:21:761 (1,2,3,4) - (Changed the position of some circles)
00:32:561 (4,5,6,7) - Inconsistent with 00:31:361 (3,4,5) - (Both options should be valid imo, same as below)
00:33:611 (4,5,6,7) - Same issue as above with 00:36:311 (1,2,3) -
00:37:361 (1,2) - Pretty strong sound here. The HDash between them is deserved. Also it'd be good if you split the first reversed slider into two 1/4 sliders (Applied)
01:10:211 (6,1) - definitely deserve some HDash here. if you're going to add it don't forget to shorten the 1/8 slider to have a 1/4 break otherwise it'll be unrankable (It could work as a 1/8 burst. Hyper could be prescindable)
01:17:561 - This part has a bit awkward timeline overall. Wouldn't it be better if you arrange the timeline? Taking a look at deif's diff will be helpful for sure (It's awkward indeed. Rearranged those notes and kept the original dashy intentions)
01:25:811 (7,1) - HDash is welcomed here. Consider moving (7) to the right side of (6) (Sure)

Phantom

00:33:986 (4,5,6) - I expect this to be similar as 00:34:736 (2,3,4) - or 00:31:136 (2,3) - so how about moving 00:34:061 (5) - to around x:218? (The melody wasn't that prominent on this one, increased the distance but not as much as you suggested)
00:37:361 (5,6) - Vocals pretty strong here, wouldn't it be better if you make them Hypers? Try something like http://puu.sh/ymiCx/9b3dbd1833.jpg (I wanted to avoid such pattern precisely, since the most prominent beat occurs on 00:37:661 - and should have a stronger hyper. I've changed the position of the second slider though to improve the flow in there)
01:15:611 (1,2,3) - Would be nicer if you reverse (1) and (3) in position for the better flow (Yes)
01:16:211 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - I think this can still be better. Try to move (4)~(6) to x:409 (The current position looks more intuitive to play, plus I'd like to keep the current strenght the upcoming hyperdash has)
01:22:211 (6,1,2) - This part is pretty harsh because the jumps are coming right after the strong 1/4 HDash. Consider reducing the distance between (1) and (2) (This section has been nerfed enough already. I won't go easy with top players)
00:57:161 (1,1) - There should be at least 1/2 break between them, otherwise it's unrankable <_< (Not for this kind of difficulties. 1/4 between note-spinner at this BPM is allowed)

As JBH focused on lower diffs and the mod hasn't applied yet, I've foced more on higher diffs which I have more knowledge of

Good luck!

Razor Sharp

secret santa!!! time to mod this again

Phantom

00:04:961 (4,5) - Just something i would like to see here instead of a plain pattern. Since it is a wub sound, i would prefferably like to see some movement here instead of the current one. Removing (5) and extending (4) as a repeat slider, placing the slider end on x480 or so compliments the wub sound alot more than the current pattern. I personally feel like this should be done, not only because of that, but it is also the hardest diff. (it actually removes 0.01 star rating xd) (I like the current flow it has. The original intentions were not to overload it with antiflows since the previous slider would make it not so pleasurable to play)

00:37:511 (6) - Move this to x372? Makes this part a little easier to handle i think. Not really needed tho, Just a suggestion since it is a little tight. (Modified with a previous mod)

Thats all for this diff! Still as amazing as it first was!

Tenshichan's Overdose

00:30:161 (1) - Maybe make this into a bended/banana pattern? To compliment the sound a little better than not to have any movement at all? (The current kick-slider works too)

01:09:161 (1,2) - Why no hyper here? I feel like it really deserves it here. Most of the bass/finish sounds at this part deserves it, but i can understand that not eveyone have it. But having it between these 2 sliders i think would be good. (Alright, added)

01:10:211 (6,1,2) - Also, remove 1 fruit from (6), then ctrl+g (1) and move it right ontop of (2)(x136) to compliment the transition. Fits very well imo. (See previous mod)

Still as good as when i first played!

Rain

01:54:686 (11,1) - Im not such a huge fan for this on a rain. I think it would be better to have (1) go with the flow instead of against it. (The melody carries a high pitch. It's okay to have a slight antiflow with the upcoming slider)

Still amazing!

Thats all i can mod for this set! Hope too see this ranked soon! GOOD LUCK!

Mods older than 6 months can't get a kudosu awarded. You can make a dummy post in the thread if you still wish to get it!

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

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Ascendance 2018-05-14T19:21:02+00:00

checky check check

Platter:

00:01:961 (1,2,3) - Antiflow hdash
00:06:761 (1,2,3) - antiflow hdash
01:48:761 (1,2) - antiflow hdash
01:55:961 (1,2,3) - antiflow hdash

Phantom:

00:42:161 (5,6,7) - pretty uncomfortable movement here, since 6 breaks the flow with a slight backwards movement. something like this would be nice
the part i really really REALLY want you to fix is 01:17:561 - (the entire doubles section). The notes feel abnormally far apart to me, dropping them to 1.45x felt so so much better.
another big thing with this part is things like 01:18:236 (4,5) - , where 4 is tilted right but the flow is moving left. a catcher at high speed could miss the 2nd part of that slider, and if you decide to make the slight right shift, you lose a ton of momentum.
tl;dr for the non-hyper doubles, please reduce the distance to around 1.4x to make this section a lot less frustrating.

you can call me!

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

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Topic Starter

Deif 2018-05-14T21:23:39+00:00

Ascendance wrote:
checky check check

Platter:

00:01:961 (1,2,3) - Antiflow hdash
00:06:761 (1,2,3) - antiflow hdash
01:48:761 (1,2) - antiflow hdash
01:55:961 (1,2,3) - antiflow hdash (All of them fixed)
Phantom:

00:42:161 (5,6,7) - pretty uncomfortable movement here, since 6 breaks the flow with a slight backwards movement. something like this would be nice (I already had the same idea on the first version, though it had to be discarted since its flow wasn't the best. I've tried fixing it on my own with some more lenient stop&goes)
the part i really really REALLY want you to fix is 01:17:561 - (the entire doubles section). The notes feel abnormally far apart to me, dropping them to 1.45x felt so so much better.
another big thing with this part is things like 01:18:236 (4,5) - , where 4 is tilted right but the flow is moving left. a catcher at high speed could miss the 2nd part of that slider, and if you decide to make the slight right shift, you lose a ton of momentum.
tl;dr for the non-hyper doubles, please reduce the distance to around 1.4x to make this section a lot less frustrating. (See below)
you can call me!

I hope this can answer the concerns about the whole doubles section: The original version had them mapped quite close to the trigger distance at 1.91x to make it a rather frustrating pattern to play, plus having doubles with dashes instead of constant streams with some hypers felt a good change of pace. With some mods the distances were reduced to 1.83x until the current 1.75x, which seemed a fair compromise to keep a good challenge with a little less of frustration level. The current almost-vertical inclination of most of the sliders (not the ones that carry a high-pitched sound like eg 01:18:461 (5) - ) can be considered just as a visual trick. As I assume, most players will try to follow the inclination of the sliders while playing them, which could lead to easy misses since the distances are still pretty big. However, they should be played as totally normal vertical sliders and just some sharp movements will be needed.

All and all, I wouldn't nerf it further. It's one of those patterns where people would recognise this beatmap for, and making it milder than it is would be a pity.

Additionally fixed the section at 01:51:311 - which had their jumps placed a 1/2 beat off.

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

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Ascendance 2018-05-14T21:31:15+00:00

Ultimate Ascendance

Xinely

5,014 posts

Joined April 2012

Xinely 2018-05-17T12:42:18+00:00

i would qualify this if i was a bn, good quality mappu when i modded this, bn pls rank and gl for getting 2nd bn deifu

JierYagtama

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JierYagtama 2018-05-20T13:31:41+00:00

I got u Nely owo

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

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Ascendance 2018-05-20T19:49:20+00:00

I would have liked a... you know... actual second BN check... It's a 7* map it could have used a second opinion :/

I also highly doubt that there was nothing wrong or nothing that I missed when checking it the first time..

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

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Deif 2018-05-20T20:49:07+00:00

I highly doubt Jeir just yolo-nominated the beatmap, so let's try not to make assumptions in here. The fact that there are doubts if something was missed on the first place makes me think that the first nomination could've been delayed as well *shrug*

I'm more than welcome if new feedback arrives. That's why the qualified section is for!

Ascendance

Elite Mapper

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Ascendance 2018-05-20T20:57:39+00:00

Deif wrote:
I highly doubt Jeir just yolo-nominated the beatmap, so let's try not to make assumptions in here. The fact that there are doubts if something was missed on the first place makes me think that the first nomination could've been delayed as well *shrug*

I'm more than welcome if new feedback arrives. That's why the qualified section is for!

Yeah, dw I wasn't accusing him of yolo nominating, I just wish there was an active effort to show an opinion. The second thing was aimed at the fact that all modders are humans. I'm not a perfect being and I can't catch every mistake, there's obviously things that could have slipped by me, that's why the second nominator is there and that's why there's a 7 day qualified period.

The map has a high SR and I felt like that warranted some sort of opinion about it, especially since the other diffs are all harder than normal anyways.

As you said though, guess we'll just wait through qualified.

celerih

617 posts

Joined July 2014

celerih 2018-05-22T12:09:29+00:00

Hey Deif! Rest of the set looks good, but there's one issue in the highest difficulty

Phantom:

00:05:261 (6) - shouldn't this extended slider be snapped to 1/3 since the structure of the song right before it 00:04:961 (4,5) - is 1/3 and there's a sound on the 1/3 beat here 00:05:361 - . This implies at that point the song still follows 1/3 and so extended slider snapping should follow suit. The same issue is present here 01:59:261 (6) - Check Tenshichan's diff as it has correct snapping here

If the set ends up getting DQ'ed I'll leave it up to the original BNs to renominate since this is very much above my judging level
Good luck!

Last edited by celerih 2018-05-22T12:19:11+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Xinnoh

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Xinnoh 2018-05-22T12:18:42+00:00

00:04:661 (3,4) - this is 3/8 snap

JBHyperion

osu!catch Paragon

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JBHyperion 2018-05-22T12:40:02+00:00

DQed to sort out those intro/outro snaps in a consistent fashion.

I'm with Sinnoh that 3/8 rhythm fits the drum and synth sounds at 00:04:661 (3,4,5) - and 01:58:661 (3,4,5) - better than 1/3. Would require changing in Platter diffs and above.

If that's the case, then 3/4 is the more logical snap for 00:05:261 (6) - and 01:59:261 (6) - only requires changing in Tenshichan's diff.

I will check for any other things worth pointing out after work tonight if you'd like - let me know either way.

Deif

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Deif 2018-05-22T14:58:41+00:00

Sinnoh's right with the 3/8s, so fixed them for all affected difficulties.

However, I'm unsure if the following objects should still be snapped into 1/3s or rather follow the 3/8 structure as well, since the synth does an odd reverb that can be interpreted both ways. I'll go for the 3/8s in the following objects too for the sake of consistency, which gives me the chance to use either a 1/2 or 1/4 snap for that slider end.

I hope it's a viable solution.

Zyzyx

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Zyzyx 2018-05-22T18:43:32+00:00

Hi please update last diff in here 01:58:961 - because there was missing part.also isn't this part will much better sound if you put 8/8 or 6/6 note in here instead ? 01:55:661 (4,5,6) -

Deif

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Deif 2018-05-22T19:12:20+00:00

Zyzyx wrote:
Hi please update last diff in here 01:58:961 - because there was missing part.also isn't this part will much better sound if you put 8/8 or 6/6 note in here instead ? 01:55:661 (4,5,6) -

The first one was totally on me, though I wouldn't add a 1/6 burst in the spot you mentioned. The map is following the stronger beats and the fact that one of those is in the middle of that buzz makes it hard to interprete properly.

Thanks for checking though!

Ascendance

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Ascendance 2018-05-22T19:14:12+00:00

Call me when you need me again!

Ascendance

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Ascendance 2018-05-23T02:51:54+00:00

Talked with celerih, the set should be fine to move forward from here. The snapping fixes look okay to me!

celerih

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celerih 2018-05-23T08:39:22+00:00

Tenshichan's Overdose:

01:58:661 (2) - This should be a 3/8 reverse, there's nothing on 01:58:811 - and you should be consistent with 00:04:661 (3,4,5) -

Apart from that the other snaps look fine

Tenshichan

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Tenshichan 2018-05-23T10:29:46+00:00

Fixed!

Also took the chance to nerf a few of the distances in this pattern, felt a little too edge-dash 01:17:561 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) -

update

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320,112,109811,1,8,0:3:0:0:
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288,64,112211,1,4,2:0:0:0:
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452,184,113261,6,0,L|352:184,1,100
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92,80,113936,2,0,L|192:80,1,100,4|0,0:0|0:3,0:0:0:0:
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328,112,114461,2,0,L|384:112,1,50,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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312,248,114761,6,0,L|432:248,1,100,6|2,0:0|1:3,0:0:0:0:
360,160,115061,1,0,2:0:0:0:
448,160,115211,1,2,1:3:0:0:
296,64,115361,2,0,L|176:64,1,100,0|2,0:0|1:3,0:0:0:0:
248,136,115661,1,0,0:0:0:0:
104,136,115811,1,2,1:3:0:0:
344,136,115961,6,0,L|392:240,1,100,0|2,0:0|1:3,0:0:0:0:
264,224,116261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
144,224,116411,1,2,1:3:0:0:
360,200,116561,2,0,L|480:200,1,100,4|0,1:3|2:0,0:0:0:0:
304,256,116786,2,0,L|184:256,1,100,4|0,1:3|2:0,0:0:0:0:
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208,144,117161,6,0,L|72:144,1,100,4|2,0:0|1:3,0:0:0:0:
256,64,117461,1,0,2:0:0:0:
160,64,117611,1,2,1:3:0:0:
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304,232,118061,1,0,0:0:0:0:
432,232,118211,1,2,1:3:0:0:
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328,56,118661,1,0,0:0:0:0:
416,56,118773,1,0,0:0:0:0:
464,120,118886,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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Ascendance

Elite Mapper

4,225 posts

Joined July 2013

Ascendance 2018-05-23T13:25:31+00:00

Renominated!

JierYagtama

716 posts

Joined November 2015

JierYagtama 2018-05-31T06:52:10+00:00

Hi Mike I checked the map for real!!!

Anyways I want to point out a few more concerns here before we push this set forward

Salad
00:04:811 (2,3) - Dont you think the walk here is a stretching it a bit I almost had to dash here and if you can reduce the ds here it should be more fine than it is
00:09:611 (2,3,4,5) - I get that this pattern is for emphasis but I think its a bit much but reducing them a little bit more would be much more tolerable for players to play at this level
00:09:911 (4,5) - Can you try to reduce the ds here so the walk is more clearer?
00:40:211 (2,1) - Can you try to increase ds here a bit more so the dash more clear here?
01:00:761 (1,2) - Even tho this is the kiai the walk here is a bit too strong dont you think Id reduce a bit here for the sake of the player
01:02:861 (3,1) - Is this supposed to be a dash? If so increase if not reduce
01:09:761 (3,1) - Dont you think this is a bit underemphasized that this is not given a dash when its the first sound of the 2nd kiai?
01:15:161 (1,2) - Same as 01:00:761 (1,2) - about walks being too strong
01:17:261 (3,1) - Is this supposed to be a dash? If so increase if not reduce (2)
01:58:811 (2,3,4,5) - Same as 00:04:811 (2,3) - about the walk stretching it

Platter
00:30:611 (9,1) - Hdash here is bit too strong. Can you please reduce since this will easily overshoot other players
00:45:011 (7,1) - Here also but just a little bit if its ok with you
01:10:361 (1,2,3,4) - I think the triple here is a bit too linear dont you think Id reduce the spacing a bit so its not too hard to dash on especially its the next pattern after a hdash here 01:10:211 (5,1) -
01:29:261 (5,1) - Distance here is a bit too far here imo wouldnt hurt to reduce it a bit
00:14:861 (5,1) - also this one
01:39:761 (2,3,4) - Gathered some opinion about this and majority said to nerf the ds here a bit so its more tolerable to play

Once applied Ill do one last recheck and rebub

Liyac

138 posts

Joined October 2014

Liyac 2018-05-31T19:31:22+00:00

if ill be honest, im a little worried that the spread goes from 4.87 -> 6.87

I get that sr shouldn't be taken into account too much as gameplay might be easier than listed or its the structure of the song, but idk if this has been addressed before or not

Tenshichan

595 posts

Joined September 2011

Tenshichan 2018-05-31T23:33:50+00:00

This is really just an instance of failed SR due to a lot of the snaps used. It is significantly easier than Phantom diff and should maybe be around 5.6~6.0* in "true" star rating

Deif

Elite Mapper / osu!catch Paragon

3,564 posts

Joined April 2010

Topic Starter

Deif 2018-06-13T12:11:11+00:00

JeirYagtama

Hi Mike I checked the map for real!!!

Anyways I want to point out a few more concerns here before we push this set forward

Salad
00:04:811 (2,3) - Dont you think the walk here is a stretching it a bit I almost had to dash here and if you can reduce the ds here it should be more fine than it is (Fair enough, reduced the distance)
00:09:611 (2,3,4,5) - I get that this pattern is for emphasis but I think its a bit much but reducing them a little bit more would be much more tolerable for players to play at this level (Done)
00:09:911 (4,5) - Can you try to reduce the ds here so the walk is more clearer? (Fixed already)
00:40:211 (2,1) - Can you try to increase ds here a bit more so the dash more clear here? (Done)
01:00:761 (1,2) - Even tho this is the kiai the walk here is a bit too strong dont you think Id reduce a bit here for the sake of the player (Done)
01:02:861 (3,1) - Is this supposed to be a dash? If so increase if not reduce (Reduced instead)
01:09:761 (3,1) - Dont you think this is a bit underemphasized that this is not given a dash when its the first sound of the 2nd kiai? (The distance should be enough, since the transition sound to the 2nd kiai is rather soft compared to the sounds of the previous brigde between kiais)
01:15:161 (1,2) - Same as 01:00:761 (1,2) - about walks being too strong (Yeah)
01:17:261 (3,1) - Is this supposed to be a dash? If so increase if not reduce (2) (Dash-ified)
01:58:811 (2,3,4,5) - Same as 00:04:811 (2,3) - about the walk stretching it (Yeah)

Platter
00:30:611 (9,1) - Hdash here is bit too strong. Can you please reduce since this will easily overshoot other players (Reduced)
00:45:011 (7,1) - Here also but just a little bit if its ok with you (It wasn't stronger than any similar hdash)
01:10:361 (1,2,3,4) - I think the triple here is a bit too linear dont you think Id reduce the spacing a bit so its not too hard to dash on especially its the next pattern after a hdash here 01:10:211 (5,1) - (Done)
01:29:261 (5,1) - Distance here is a bit too far here imo wouldnt hurt to reduce it a bit (This one was higher than the previous similar one. It got reduced with a previous mod, but seems like I kept the old distance for this one :S)
00:14:861 (5,1) - also this one (Nah, those have been reduced at least twice. It's still manageable)
01:39:761 (2,3,4) - Gathered some opinion about this and majority said to nerf the ds here a bit so its more tolerable to play (Done)

Once applied Ill do one last recheck and rebub

Thanks for giving another check on this!

@cyanine: What Tenshichan said is correct. The Rain difficulty was tuned up in the past, so the spread doesn't feel so unbalanced. We're managing a quite tricky 200 BPM song with lots of streams and odd snaps, so expect the SR to rocket in the last difficulties (Phantom doesn't feel like a 7* difficulty either fwiw)

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