Hello, interesting song. I have some simple tips for your map.
SPOILER
General: I think in the beginning of the kiai part, it would be better to spread the notes and do not let them to overlap again and again.
00:27:399 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - What about consider increase the volume gradully here?
01:18:727 (4,5,6) - The ryhthm seems strange, what about try a 3/4 beat slider?
01:20:016 (4,5) - This pattern did not indicate the 1/4 beat of (4) clearer, recommand to change.
01:20:602 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - What about take a more frequent flow to make it look nicer.
01:21:540 (1,2,3,4) - This ryhthm sounds weird, what about put note onto all exsiting sound and make 01:22:477 a head of slider?
01:36:071 (3,4) - Too far away.
02:04:079 (5,6) - Recommand to put closer to (4).
03:25:290 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - There exist 1/4 beats inside, recommand to follow.
03:55:758 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think it would be better to follow previous flow and do not overlap.
03:57:868 (3) - Miss the sound here.
04:14:743 (2) - Recommand for a larger distance.
00:27:399 (1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - What about consider increase the volume gradully here?
01:18:727 (4,5,6) - The ryhthm seems strange, what about try a 3/4 beat slider?
01:20:016 (4,5) - This pattern did not indicate the 1/4 beat of (4) clearer, recommand to change.
01:20:602 (1,2,3,4,5,1) - What about take a more frequent flow to make it look nicer.
01:21:540 (1,2,3,4) - This ryhthm sounds weird, what about put note onto all exsiting sound and make 01:22:477 a head of slider?
01:36:071 (3,4) - Too far away.
02:04:079 (5,6) - Recommand to put closer to (4).
03:25:290 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - There exist 1/4 beats inside, recommand to follow.
03:55:758 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - I think it would be better to follow previous flow and do not overlap.
03:57:868 (3) - Miss the sound here.
04:14:743 (2) - Recommand for a larger distance.