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Jennifer Lopez ft. Pitbull - On The Floor

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HOF
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HOF
Hola...

te dejo un mod... espero te sirva...

HARD

SPOILER
00:16:514 (6) - deberias borrar esta nota... creo que esta sobrando con el ritmo que estas siguiendo.
00:18:591 (6) - agrega un finish a esta nota...
00:23:899 (6) - esta otra tambien deberias de borrarla...
00:29:899 (1) - quiza si terminas este slider en 30:014... puedes agregar una nota en 30:245... se oiria un poco mejor no...
00:31:053 (1) - retrocede esta nota al 30:822
00:32:899 (1) - retrocede esta al 32:668
00:41:899 (5,6) - borra estas dos notas... no siguen ni la musica ni la cancion...
00:48:822 - agrega una nota aqui...
00:49:284 (1) - borra esta nota...
00:50:438 (1) - retrocede esta nota al 50:322
01:11:668 (4) - retrocede esta al 01:11:553
01:22:745 (6) - agrega un clap al inicio del slider
01:27:361 (4) - agrega un clap
02:13:514 (3) - ^

creo que eso es todo por la hard diff... como te dijeron antes no deberias usar tanto copypaste... crea diferentes patrones...


RELAXING
SPOILER
00:16:745 (1) - agregale un finish
00:24:130 (1) - ^
00:28:514 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - en esta parte creo que deberias seguir el sonido del piano para acomodar las notas
00:41:207 (2) - agrega un clap... de aqui en adelante puedes agregar un clap por cada dos beats blancos... creo suena bien asi...

al igual que la otra... no copies tanto... se vuelve un poco aburrido siempre lo mismo...

MANCUSO´s EASY
SPOILER
00:16:284 (3) - agrega un whistle
00:17:207 (2) - ^
00:18:130 (4) - ^
01:00:591 (2) - clap
01:06:591 (1) - ^
01:14:438 (1) - finish
al final de cada spinner le puedes agregar un finish...

es todo de mi parte... espero te sirva...

por cierto hice una diff... le puse insane pero creo que queda mas bien en hard... checala y si te parece la agregas...

suerte...

Download: Jennifer Lopez ft. Pitbull - On The Floor (ezek) [HOF´s Insane].osu
ZekeyHache
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ZekeyHache
DONE! (I did not do all things..)
ZekeyHache
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ZekeyHache

HOF wrote:

por cierto hice una diff... le puse insane pero creo que queda mas bien en hard... checala y si te parece la agregas...

suerte...
Si mejoras algo esos sliders puede que la acepte... (es un talvez) no suena mal. (osea que me sonaron bien los hitsounds)
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mancuso_JM_
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HOF wrote:

MANCUSO´s EASY
SPOILER
00:16:284 (3) - agrega un whistle No, prefiero no agregar whistles
00:17:207 (2) - ^ ^^
00:18:130 (4) - ^ ^^
01:00:591 (2) - clap Ok
01:06:591 (1) - ^ No pero agregue un clap en 01:06:130 al final del slider
01:14:438 (1) - finish No aca no me gusta como suena
al final de cada spinner le puedes agregar un finish... En algunos spinners los agregue pero en otros no me gusta como queda

es todo de mi parte... espero te sirva...

por cierto hice una diff... le puse insane pero creo que queda mas bien en hard... checala y si te parece la agregas...

suerte...
Gracias por el Mod ;)
Bueno te dejo la diff con unos cambios cambie de 1/4 a 1/2 de beat snap divisor

Download: Jennifer Lopez ft. Pitbull - On The Floor (ezek) [Mancuso's Easy].osu
pianiac
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pianiac
hi, mod4mod
only suggestion for good map~those in blue color are strong suggestion
00:14:437 (1) - move to 00:14:899 and add a note at 00:14:437 (suggestion, because the "da~dadadada"starts there)
00:18:591 (6) - here put a slow slider which ends on the next white tick
00:48:130 (5) - i really like to balance this
00:57:822 (7) - end in red tick?
00:58:745 (1,2,3,4) - suddenly too loud on the volume...may be from soft to loud here?
01:01:745 (5,6) - make a curve slider?
01:11:553 (4) - add a note
01:39:822 (1,2,3) - make a slider with one repeat rather than this....cause the notes are not on beat
01:53:437 (1,2,3,4,5) - make some jumping here
02:02:668 (2) - add a note at the slider head
02:19:861 add a note

normal
01:03:130 (1,2) - http://img522.imageshack.us/img522/1938/aaaby.jpg
02:06:822 (2) - first repeat add clap?
02:48:130 (2) - whistle
02:48:591 (4) - last place whistle
02:51:591 (3) - ^same

done~
ZekeyHache
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ZekeyHache
Done! but I did not made all....
YTYuyu
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YTYuyu
Yo modding ur map because of mancusojuanmattos request :)

Mancuso's Easy:
00:17:668(3) - Aline this to (1)
00:18:130(4) - ^ (2)
00:43:976(4) - 2 grids up
00:52:976(1) - move 1 tick right
01:13:053(4) - x:304 y:352 for the 2nd point and x:240 y:312 for the end point
01:31:514(5) - x:388 y:184 for the 2nd point and x:504 y:248 for the end point
01:39:361(4) - Aline this to (2)
01:39:822(5) - Aline this to (3)
02:22:976(2,3) - 1 grid down for both
02:37:976(3,1) - Spacing
03:12:130(1) - Make the slider like this http://puu.sh/7gJY

Relaxing:
00:44:438(8) - Stack it on the end of (6) at 00:43:053
00:46:284(3) - Aline it to (4)
00:48:130(6) - NC
01:09:822(7) - ^
01:34:284(4) - ^
01:50:899(6) - ^
02:19:745(7) -end the slider at 02:20:091
02:26:668(4,5) - bad blanket

Hard:
00:41:899(5) - NC
00:45:822(5) - ^
00:51:245(6,7) - remove (7) and move (6) 1 tick up. it should look like this http://puu.sh/7gNO
01:08:784(8) - End the slider at 01:09:130
01:22:053(3,4,5) - Aline them all to (2)
01:58:284(5) - x:118 y:203(without distance snap and grid snap or close to these numbers)
02:03:822(5) - NC
03:06:591(4) - ^
03:33:822(3) - x:296 y:344
03:39:822(4) - NC


This is the best i can do. GL :D
mancuso_JM_
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Byakugan249 wrote:

Yo modding ur map because of mancusojuanmattos request :) :P

Mancuso's Easy:
00:17:668(3) - Aline this to (1) Ok
00:18:130(4) - ^ (2) ^^
00:43:976(4) - 2 grids up Ok
00:52:976(1) - move 1 tick right Nah
01:13:053(4) - x:304 y:352 for the 2nd point and x:240 y:312 for the end point No, This is too nazi xD
01:31:514(5) - x:388 y:184 for the 2nd point and x:504 y:248 for the end point This is nazi too, but I changed :P
01:39:361(4) - Aline this to (2) Fix'd
01:39:822(5) - Aline this to (3)^^
02:22:976(2,3) - 1 grid down for both Ok
02:37:976(3,1) - Spacing Fixed
03:12:130(1) - Make the slider like this http://puu.sh/7gJY Ok
Thanks a lot for mod

Download: Jennifer Lopez ft. Pitbull - On The Floor (ezek) [Mancuso's Easy].osu
ZekeyHache
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ZekeyHache
Done! :)
HakuNoKaemi
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HakuNoKaemi
[General]
Guest mapper names should be inserted in the Tags, so people can find difficulties mapped by their favourite mappers

[Skin]
the hitburst circles could be made transparent, to impare readability less and be more cool.
The hitsburst0 is however, really low quality, so i guess you can do it as it result less blurred.
The spinner-circle could case really much confusion to eyes during spinning. Make the difference in colours less seeable (white to pink REALLY break eyes used like this, add a circle in the centre. And that REALLY matter.

[Mancuso's Easy]
Rhythmn
(Rhythmn-linked suggestions, mostly music-based)
00:14:437 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Yay for starting like this

With this graphic
00:27:591 (1,1) - Hard to take for an Easy, as they AREN'T following music, neither a simple rhythmn

00:31:745 (x) - Add it because of 00:30:130 (1,2) - rhythmn continuity
00:35:668 (1) - Move at - 1/4 (blue tick), 00:35:553
00:36:130 (2) - Move at - 1/2 (red tick), 00:35:899
00:42:591 (x) - Add Note, so it follow more voice-on-beat
00:43:514 (x) - ^
00:45:361 (5) - Remove Note, same reason ^
00:47:207 (x) - Add Note, Same reason ^
00:51:361 (3) - ^
Graphic
(Graphic Suggestion, could contain nazi)
00:33:822 (1) - A wigglish appearence would do the trick better
00:58:745 (1,1,2,3) - Started a diamond? complete it... (Move 01:01:514 (3) - ) .-., remember to correct others as well ... ( a rotated diamond here 02:09:361 (1,2,3,4) - = and so
01:01:976 (4) - do a Blanket Slider, look good in place like 01:01:976 (4,1) -
01:02:899 (1,2,3,4) - Flat diamonds should do it better? (do it when you have this pattern Image example
01:11:668 (3) - More parallel to 01:09:822 (1) -
01:36:130 (1,2,1,2,3,4) - An Hex? This
01:44:438 (2,3,4) - Things like this, look better like this
01:49:514 (2) - nazi, First Point, one grid 4 up, Last two Delete, the Now last shoud go one grid 4 up
01:54:591 (1,2,3) - Triangle, you arleady did it to some similiar pattern
Hitsounds
(Yeah, i do that too O.O)
Sopme Soft Whistle during Soft Part...

Some have validity during all the map, and I don't doubled because of this...

Continuing by 2 days...
HakuNoKaemi
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Joined October 2009
HakuNoKaemi
[Relaxing]
Gameplay
(Gameplay related ideas)
00:33:707 (7) - Map the break after that
Rhythmn
(Rhythmn-linked suggestions, mostly music-based)
00:28:976 (2) - Add Note(following voice...)
00:50:438 (4,1,2) - Add notes in 00:50:668 (x) and 00:51:130 (x)
00:55:514 (1) - Map it, this spinner rhythmically don't make much sense
02:42:361 (1) - Make it longer so it end in the big white tick ( when Pitbull say "Da"
03:01:053 (1) - End at 03:04:745 (1) - (delete that note too)
03:34:745 (1) - I suggest to map this spinner like this

03:49:976 (1) - Make this start in 03:49:745 (1) - (End at the point it's ending now)
03:52:284 (x) - why no note here?
Graphic
(Graphic Suggestion, could contain nazi)
00:14:437 (1,2) - Curvier patterns, better
SPOILER
00:21:822 (1,2) - ^ That but mirrored
I will say a general phrase, just... maybe the graphic is too squary? the diff could beneft some curves....
Hitsounds
(Yeah, i do that too O.O)
Some Soft Whistle during Soft Parts.
The volume's so high it's fastidious in some parts...
Combo
(Ya'll think i don't d this ever?)
00:43:976 (7) - New Combo
00:45:361 (1) - Move New Combo to 00:45:822 (2) -
In general, control New Combos better....

[Hard]
[Graphic
(Graphic Suggestion, could contain nazi)
Recontrl massively the graphical part, as there are many ugly overlaps. I suggest you to manually stack long streams. It feel somwhat linear and squary on some parts.
Hitsounds
(Yeah, i do that too O.O)
Control the volume and the set of hitsounds: some part needs lower volume and/or different sets(Normal or Soft)
Last edited by HakuNoKaemi , edited 4 times in total.
ZekeyHache
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ZekeyHache
I will check this on saturday.
mancuso_JM_
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mancuso_JM_
Done! but I didn't make all.
Thanks for mod HakuNoKaemi ;)

Download: Jennifer Lopez ft. Pitbull - On The Floor (ezek) [Mancuso's Easy].osu
ZekeyHache
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ZekeyHache
I have connection problems...so I will see this the next saturday.
ZekeyHache
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ZekeyHache
Done! (I do not made some things)
jerry the man
jerry the man
i have not much to say the map are too perfect so i find no wrongs in the beatmap so good luck with the map and it are very good ;)
-Baby Strawberry-
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-Baby Strawberry-
❤Hihi~！ M4M~！
❤Nice song, i've heard that but never can tell the name, :P
❤start modding~! here we go~!

❤General
SPOILER
❤Nice skin,but the spinner really makes me dizzy :P
❤PLZ DO fill in the tag and sourcehttp://puu.sh/8T7I
❤Basically, OD is always 1 or 2 less than HR.
❤Also, if u use a light colored notes, the background color should be dark, which is always black. Because some of the players always delete the beat map background to make them feel better when playing, and a light color really hurt their eyes especially during the kiai time.
❤For all the diffs, when the rhythm is kind of the same, Do use the same hitsound, or it will be weird.
❤【Hard】diff
SPOILER
this is my suggest setuphttp://puu.sh/8T8a
00:15:361 add a note here
00:19:053change the break into a spinner since u got so many little breaks during the first part.
00:22:745add a note here
00:26:438also a spinner here
00:51:822 (8,9) - better?
01:04:514 (2) - Clap at the end
01:21:591note here?
01:26:437 (6,1) - spacing
01:26:899 (2,3,4,5) - why thses are not on the same level? not beautiful
01:28:284 (6,1) - spacing
01:36:822 (2,4) - place them on a same level by moving 01:37:053 (3) left?
01:44:207 (2,3,4) - same prob ^
01:59:668 (4) - clap at the beginning?
02:04:514add a note
03:12:591add a note
03:39:361 (3) - down 1 grid
03:45:826add a note
03:49:284 (1) - how about this?http://puu.sh/8TaE
03:53:899 (4) - clap at the end
03:54:822 (2) - ^
03:54:822 (2) - clap
03:56:899 (1) - How about this?http://puu.sh/8TaW

❤【Relaxing】diff
SPOILER
suggest setuphttp://puu.sh/8Tb7
00:19:630add some notes here or make it a break
00:31:514add note
also follow a fixed rhythm, same as the music or the lyrics, u can't change from the music to the lyrics in 1 sentence
00:30:014 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - so better remap this part.
02:17:207 (1) - move the clap to 02:18:130 (3)
02:48:591 (4) - plz don't use this kind of slider here, its not beautiful and also hard to tell when its gonna finish
03:01:053 (1) - move the end till 03:04:284
03:54:591 (2,3,4,5,6) - this is a bit hard for a normal, i think better change 03:54:822 (3,4) into a slider.also the spacing between 03:55:284 (5,6)
❤【Mancuso's Easy】diff
SPOILER
suggest setuphttp://puu.sh/8TdP
the hit sound is not good.change the hitsound , keep the same with other diffs.
01:44:438 (2,3) - spacing
02:42:583 i dont think a break is suitable for here, add some thing
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Also, check the time lines to see if there are some useless ones. place the kiai time on the white lines and make them in the same way for the 3 diffs .
Good Luck~! ;)
I am a new modder, all the moddings are ONLY PERSONAL SUGGESTIONS.
mancuso_JM_
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-Baby Strawberry- wrote:

❤Hihi~！ M4M~！
❤Nice song, i've heard that but never can tell the name, :P
❤start modding~! here we go~!

❤【Mancuso's Easy】diff
SPOILER
suggest setuphttp://puu.sh/8TdP Something like that
the hit sound is not good.change the hitsound , keep the same with other diffs.
01:44:438 (2,3) - spacing Fixed
02:42:583 i dont think a break is suitable for here, add some thing Do you really think that? Because in first part I make something like that and you didn't mention nothing. Sorry, don't change
Download: Jennifer Lopez ft. Pitbull - On The Floor (ezek) [Mancuso's Easy].osu
mjw5150
500 posts
Joined February 2010
mjw5150
mod req by Mancuso :)

[General]
the spinner makes me dizzy,too @@

[Mancuso's Easy]
00:40:514 (1) - move this slider to 00:40:745 and add a note at 00:40:284?it sounds better imo
00:53:207 (1) - move this slider to 00:53:207 and end at 00:54:130
01:46:745 - add a note here?
02:22:514 (1,2) - using a slider instead of these 2 notes?it's a little hard for new players to start click a note on red line
03:51:822 (3) - add a note here?

[Relaxing]
00:28:514 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - this part sounds odd and hard to play in a Normal diff,i don't know how to help you improve them,maybe you need another rhythm set :(
03:55:514 (6) - down a grid

[Hard]
since this is the hardest diff,i suggest using some jump to make it more challenging and fun
00:32:438 - add a note?
00:57:822 (7) - this slider doesn't follow the rap well,end it at 00:58:053?
01:26:437 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - make this part like this?
SPOILER
^ there are many minor errors across the whole map like this,although i could pass it easily but it looks not so prefect,i suggest you should use grid level 4 to fix them and your map will be better

that's all
star~
ZekeyHache
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ZekeyHache
Spinner changed and other little things...
Kei
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Kei
Hola~
Personalmente, no me gusta la canción, pero aun así acepté el request de Mancuso.

[Hard]

Creo que deberías usar mas hitsounds en esta dificultad. Te voy a dejar sugerencias de hitsounds junto con las demás~


00:14:437 (1) - HitWhistle al comienzo del slider.
00:15:591 (2) - Hitwhistle.
00:16:053 (4) - Hitwhistle.
00:16:284 (5) - Hitwhistle
00:16:745 (1) - Hitwhistle en el comienzo y en la repetición ubicada en el tick blanco solamente.
00:17:668 (2) - Hitwhistle.
00:18:130 (4) - Hitwhistle.
00:18:591 (6) - Y hitwhistle otra vez.
00:21:822 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - Denuevo agrega hitwhistles como te indiqué en el comienzo.
00:39:361 - Mueve el break aqui.
00:48:130 (5) - Creo que deberías arreglar la forma de este slider de manera que el final de éste quede en el mismo lugar que estaba la nota anterior 00:45:822 (1).
00:54:591 (6) - Y si mueves la nota de manera que quede en el mismo lugar que estaba la anterior 00:52:745 (10) ?
01:00:361 (1) - Creo que quedaría mejor si mueves este circulo y el circulo (2) de manera que no toquen los bordes del slider.
01:00:822 (3) - Claps al final?
01:01:976 (6) - Claps?
01:04:053 (4) - Lo mismo que arriba en 01:00:361 (1).
01:05:668 (5) - Claps?
01:06:822 (1) - Ah y aqui tambien como arriba, sólo que esta vez me gustó menos :c trata de no superponer notas.
01:21:822 (2) - New combo.
01:18:130 (2) - New Combo?
01:29:437 (1) - Y si mueves esta nota en vez de tocando el slider anterior (1), la mueves a la derecha, de modo que quede ensima de éste, pero sin tocarlo, y en el medio? Eso sería aproximadamente en las coordenadas x:56 y:152.
01:32:207 (x) - En vez de dejar este break podrías poner un spinner con duración hasta el minuto 01:35:668 o mappear esta parte. Creo que con un break se siente muy vacío.
01:36:822 (2,3,4) - Intenta ubicar las notas así: http://puu.sh/8W96.
01:40:168 (2) - Mueve esta nota a x:384 y:88, y para así mover 01:40:514 (3) al mismo lugar donde estaba 01:38:437 (2) (Coordenadas x:296 y:176).
01:44:207 (2,3,4) - Intenta el mismo patrón que te indiqué en 01:36:822 (2,3,4).
01:47:553 (2) - Lo mismo que en 01:40:168 (2).
01:48:822 (5,6,7) - Mueve estos círculos a otra parte, creo que no se ven bien ahi. Por ejemplo podrías moverlos a x:280 y:64 y luego arreglar la ubicación de las siguientes notas.
01:50:207 (3) - Mueve esta nota a x:368 y:208 para que así quede en el mismo lugar que estaba 01:48:361 (4).
02:02:668 (2,3,4) - Recomendaría que no hagas este tipo de cosas ya que son confusas.
02:04:514 (x) - Nota?
02:05:437 (5) - Mueve este slider de manera que no quede tapado por la nota anterior 02:04:284 (2).
02:14:668 (8) - Este slider creo que no queda bien, ademas no entiendo por qué tiene tantos puntos de articulación. Por qué en vez de esto, haces uno recto y listo? De esta manera el cuerpo del slider no quedaria tapado por las notas anteriores y podría stackearse el final de este slider con la nota anterior 02:13:514 (3), como ví que quisiste hacer.
02:15:245 (1) - También mueve esta nota para que no se tape por las anteriores.
02:36:130 (4) - Otra vez, mueve esta nota a la izquierda para que no quede algo bajo la anterior 02:34:745 (1).
02:52:168 (7) - De nuevo, muevelo por la misma razón.
03:41:438 (5) - Y otra vez.
03:46:514 (3) - También de nuevo. Muévelo a la izquierda para que quede separado del anterior.
03:48:822 (8,9) - ^
03:53:899 (4) - ^
03:54:822 (2) - Esto es un poco fastidioso que te lo marque (siento si te molesta que te haga arreglar algo tan tonto) pero, creo que quedaría mejor si mueves este slider un poquito a la izquierda, para que quede centrado.

[Relaxing]

No estoy segura de cómo moddearte esta dificultad, por el nombre, claro. No sé si es una normal, o una normal +. No tengo idea, así que no diré nada sobre esta, solo que cuides los mismos problemas de ubicación como en la Hard, y que uses mas samples.

[Mancuso's Easy]

00:30:130 (1) - No sé si debas hacer sliders con repeat en una dificultad Easy.
01:02:899 (1) - (Otro tonto detalle como en la Hard xD) Creo que quedaría mejor si mueves este círculo a x:268 y:204.
01:06:591 (1) - Y si intentas lo mismo que te dije arriba?

Bueno solo eso, que intentes patrones así como te dije. Creo que esta dificultad es difícil para ser una Easy. Se siente como una Normal. Deberías usar mas sliders y tratar de evitar muchas notas seguidas, repeats, etc, y aprovechar que es una Easy a hacer más patrones con las notas.


____________

Eso es todo~ suerte :3
ZekeyHache
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ZekeyHache
No hice todo pero supongo que son cambios notables.
mancuso_JM_
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mancuso_JM_
Well!! :D

mjw5150 wrote:

mod req by Mancuso :)

[Mancuso's Easy]
00:40:514 (1) - move this slider to 00:40:745 and add a note at 00:40:284?it sounds better imo Yes, changed
00:53:207 (1) - move this slider to 00:53:207 and end at 00:54:130 ^
01:46:745 - add a note here? mmm... Ok
02:22:514 (1,2) - using a slider instead of these 2 notes?it's a little hard for new players to start click a note on red line You have reason
03:51:822 (3) - add a note here? No :P

Kei wrote:

Hola~
Personalmente, no me gusta la canción, pero aun así acepté el request de Mancuso.

[Mancuso's Easy]

00:30:130 (1) - No sé si debas hacer sliders con repeat en una dificultad Easy. No creo que sea tan dificil un slider de estos con una repeticion, creo que con mas si es exagerado
01:02:899 (1) - (Otro tonto detalle como en la Hard xD) Creo que quedaría mejor si mueves este círculo a x:268 y:204. NAZI :D, pero si, esta bien
01:06:591 (1) - Y si intentas lo mismo que te dije arriba? ^

Bueno solo eso, que intentes patrones así como te dije. Creo que esta dificultad es difícil para ser una Easy. Se siente como una Normal. Deberías usar mas sliders y tratar de evitar muchas notas seguidas, repeats, etc, y aprovechar que es una Easy a hacer más patrones con las notas. Si, tenes razon Kate :P, por ahora lo dejo asi despues veo lo que puedo hacer ;)
Eso es todo~ suerte :3
Thanks a lot guys!! ;)

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Takos
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Takos
General
Please don't use "Default" for Preferred Skin. Switch it to "User's Preference," it's more user friendly imo

Hard
00:44:899 (3,4) - 1 grid left
01:04:053 (4) - Move down so it doesn't touch the previous slider?
01:26:668 (1) - Remove NC
01:26:899 (2) - NC
01:53:437 (1,2,3,4,5) - Make a pentagon?
03:13:284 (3) - Move down so it doesn't touch the previous slider?

Relaxing
00:58:745 (1) - Make this slider end at 00:59:207 - ?
01:55:053 (1) - Remove NC
02:01:976 (1) - ^
03:12:130 (1) - ^
03:45:361 (1) - ^

Mancuso's Easy
Looks good~

NiceBG song~
ZekeyHache
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Topic Starter
ZekeyHache
Done! :)

Except this:
Relaxing
00:58:745 (1) - Make this slider end at 00:59:207 - ?
For me sounds good
Roddie
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Roddie
Requested by mancusojuanmattos to mod your map.

Also, Hi.

General
  1. Add "mancusojuanmattos" in the tags.
  2. You need an "approachcircle" png file
  3. Whoa... The cursor is blending with the spinner background. I wasn't able to spin properly because of it. I strongly suggest you do something about that.

Mancuso's Easy
  1. 00:42:591 (1)-I'd strongly advise you to use the distance snap on this note.
  2. 00:45:822 (1)-^
  3. 01:40:976-Perhaps add a break here?
  4. 02:18:437 (2)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.
  5. 02:28:284 (1)-Move this more to the center. It will give newbies a better time to react after going through a spinner.
  6. 02:38:899 (1)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.

Relaxing
    1. 00:18:707-Add a break here?

Hard
  1. 01:11:668 (4)-Move this to 01:11:553. It sounds better that way. And don't forget to use the distance snap on it.
  2. 02:59:668 (7)-You forgot to add a clap here.

And that's it.

Good luck.
mancuso_JM_
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Roddie wrote:

Requested by mancusojuanmattos to mod your map.

Also, Hi.

Mancuso's Easy
[list][*]00:42:591 (1)-I'd strongly advise you to use the distance snap on this note.
[*]00:45:822 (1)-^
[*]01:40:976-Perhaps add a break here?
[*]02:18:437 (2)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.
[*]02:28:284 (1)-Move this more to the center. It will give newbies a better time to react after going through a spinner.
[*]02:38:899 (1)-Fix the spacing on this by using the distance snap.[list]

And that's it.

Good luck.
Hey Roodie, thanks for mod, all fixed ;)

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Snepif
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Snepif
Hi~~ Only mod mancuso's diff as requested.

00:28:514 (4,1): Distance snap.
00:32:207 (1): Quizás puedes hacer que este slider quede centrado? Tendrías que mover el comienzo a x:364 y:96, el tick del medio a x:256 y:8 y el final a x:144 y:96. Solo una sugerencia nazi :)
00:37:976 (2): Lo mismo acá.. podrías mover el tick del medio a la línea media de la grid y el final alineado con el comienzo. Acordate de arreglar las notas que le siguen con el distance snap si cambias esto :3
1:09:822 (3,1): Distance snap
1:58:745 (3,4): ^
3:30:130 (5,4): ^ (nazi)

Bueno para redondear: Lo que veo en tu map es que deberías usar mas patterns lindos, al ser una easy que se presta para eso. En todo el map creo que vi un solo slider simétrico... los demás parecen todos puestos en lugares al azar y con formas al azar- al igual que la mayoría de las notas. No te voy a decir que remappees pero para la próxima ten en cuenta los pattern y al menos un poco donde pones las notas :). Eso es todo~ suerte!
Pereira006
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Pereira006
hello~~

I mod this because the mancusojuanmattos going mod my map Mod4mod

IMO -> My opinions

Some suggestions
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Mancuso's Easy

00:14:437 - try increassing volume at 60~?
00:14:899 (2) - add whistle too end slider
00:16:284 (3) - remove whistle
00:16:745 (4) - add whistle too end slider
00:18:130 (5) - remove clap

^ to make conscienty hitsound ÎMO

00:27:591 (4) - the drums is change then put new combo and at 00:28:514 (1) - remove new combo
00:40:284 (1) - this is slider is not fit try this http://puu.sh/9BiX and why I do this ? easy 00:40:745 the drums aswome start here that why I put red point then this slider is fit more you can use my slider or try you owm slider also if you fix this carefully spacing
02:01:976 (4,5) - bored play this slider kick try this http://puu.sh/9Bll fit more IMO or try remap you owm
02:12:130 (4,5) - i can see is little incosiente spacing
03:55:976 (4,5) - grid 1 left or still intentional?
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Relaxing

01:29:437 (1) - remove new NC pleasse and 01:30:591 (1) - Remove new NC too
01:32:438 (1) - change it because i not like 01:30:591 (1) - is overlaps with this just get another place

nothing wrong i guess but the the some note are blue tick my opinion the slider on blue tick is easy than note if you diff call "normal"
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Hard

nothing wrong
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that all i think
and good luck
mancuso_JM_
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ezek remapee bastantes partes de mi dificultad que no me gustaban y que no estaban muy bien como menciono Snepif.
Ahora creo que es mucho mas jugable que la version anterior

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Mismagius
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Mismagius
Add "Kaoma" "Chorando Se Foi" to tags since it's the original music this comes from.

No kds.
jossieP
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jossieP

Blue Dragon wrote:

Add "Kaoma" "Chorando Se Foi" to tags since it's the original music this comes from.

No kds.
the original song is "Llorando se fue" and original artist is "Los Kjarkas" a folklore bolivian music group :p kaoma's version is the 1st cover stole maked, obviously no one notice this ._.

Edit: dont need add to tags

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LtEM-FhZ3hs
Mismagius
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Mismagius

ikari_kyon wrote:

Blue Dragon wrote:

Add "Kaoma" "Chorando Se Foi" to tags since it's the original music this comes from.

No kds.
the original song is "Llorando se fue" and original artist is "Los Kjarkas" a folklore bolivian music group :p kaoma's version is the 1st cover stole maked, obviously no one notice this ._.

Edit: dont need add to tags

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=LtEM-FhZ3hs
My childhood is gone with this post.

Brb, gonna kill myself.
merchat7
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merchat7
As requested, sorry late.

[General]

- Hard is missing SkinPreference:Default (song setup > storyboard > skinning > choose default skin or edit via notepad).
- Mancuso's Easy is missing the tags mancusojuanmattos

That's all, just keep in mind, not too fond of this type of song, and I can't mod this type of song too well as well.

[Easy]

00:35:668 (1,2) - Slider feel better to me, since I can hear something at 00:35:899, I feel like I needed to hit (2) earlier so it felt weird. Place like this maybe, http://puu.sh/9N6t
01:09:822 (1,3) - Curving these two sliders so that it look a bit shorter.Doesn't look that good straight since it look so long. Something symmetrical maybe? Like this http://puu.sh/9N7m
01:37:976 (1,2,3) - 5 hit circles in a row for the calm part feel unintuitive, I think to emphasize the fact that this part is calmer, a repeating slider for these circles is better. Wave slider maybe http://puu.sh/9N7L?
02:19:976 (1) - Again, don't think straight slider like this look good with this circle size. Curve or other slider shape please.

Pretty nice map, I like your use of the slider tick hitsound and all the kick sliders play nicely :)

[Relaxing]

- Consider renaming to Normal for more consistent names, a little odd that Normal is the only difficulty with a different name from the default.

00:16:745 (1) - Lower the volume for this spinner, too loud for this part.
00:24:130 (1) - ^
00:32:207 (5) - Lower the volume for the end of this slider? I don't really like how it sounds.
00:33:707 (7) - For the Normal diff, I feel you should keep most note on white and red ticks unless necessary. Here I think the white tick (00:33:822) plays nicer.
01:00:591 (3,4) - I would stack them to represent the pause in the music
01:04:745 (1,2) - *
01:32:438 (1) - Can you move this somewhere else (rotate 90 degree clockwise and adjust pattern)? Dislike how it overlap with the previous note and make it confusing to see the repeats on the kick slider.
01:36:130 (1) - Curving this give a nicer flow to this part of the music. This part of the music doesn't feel it should be straight imo, but more like this shape http://puu.sh/9Nbs
01:39:822 (6) - ^ curve it.

I don't really like how you put notes / repeats on blue tick, don't sound too good imo. I also don't like these kick sliders like at 01:30:591 (1), too many repeats, try to change if possible. Other than that, solid map.

[Hard]

00:41:899 (1,2,3,4,5) - Doing compressed stream here (use lower distant snapping) is better. With current spacing, it look like you want to emphasize this part and I don't think you wanted to do this.

Hm, I don't really see any problem, just one thing that annoy me, box/straight patterns like at 02:08:899. If you can try placing patterns like this in a nicer way, this difficulty would be really good.

No real problem, rhythm is good in general, but beat placement could be slightly better (try to not have box and straight patterns).

So star, good luck!
lovhin456
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lovhin456
hi, requested mod so i'm here

general;
- placement of breaks is awful, and really for a song this long you should add probably another long break

skin;
- personal opinions;
* just, what. what is this ?! pink everywhere, is disgusting and no, i don't hate pink but i'm starting too. really, the mix of elements is awful. the font you used looks so plain and doesn't fit the song's theme at all. elements look to simple way too simple. and the pink everywhere doesn't help. i would suggest to delete all elements except for the hitcircle set maybe, the others can go away.
- setting skin preference to default is dumb

- problems;
* spinner-approachcircle >> blends way too much with the spinner-circle

mancuso's easy;
- 00:16:745 >> new combo
- 00:24:130 >> new combo
- 00:34:284 >> should be more symmetrical
- 00:45:822 (1,3) >> ^
- 00:49:514 >> ^
- 00:58:745 >> finish
- 01:07:053 >> new combo
- 01:11:668 >> ^
- 01:17:207 >> finish
- 01:35:438 >> remove whistle
- 01:36:130 >> finish
- 01:40:745 (5,1) >> spacing
- 01:53:668 >> change to soft sample
- 01:54:591 >> add finish and remove clap
- 02:06:591 >> new combo
- 02:46:284 >> finish
- 02:53:668 >> more symmetrical
- 03:04:745 >> finish
- 03:05:668 >> more symmetrical
- 03:10:745 >> ^
- 03:37:975 >> finish
- 03:38:898 >> more symmetrical

relaxing;
- 00:25:976 >> replace finish with whistle
- 00:30:130 (1) >> move (1) here
- 00:31:514 >> move (4) here and add a repeat
- 00:32:207 >> make a slider that goes from here to 00:32:668
- 00:33:591 >> move (7) here
- 00:33:822 >> horrible place for a break
- 00:51:822 >> start the new combo here instead
- 00:58:284 >> finish
- 00:58:976 >> ^
- 01:20:899 >> remove new combo
- 01:36:130 >> finish
- 01:41:899 >> move (3) here and end the slider at 01:42:361
- 01:49:284 >> basically the same you did with ^
- 01:54:591 >> finish
- 01:56:438 >> new combo
- 02:03:822 >> ^
- 02:27:361 >> add finish
- 02:57:822 >> new combo
- 03:04:284 >> end the spinner here
- 03:04:745 >> finish
- 03:12:130 >> ^
- 03:13:976 >> new combo
- 03:37:976 >> finish
- 03:47:207 >> finish

hard;
- 00:16:514 >> delete
- 00:23:899 >> ^
- 00:26:438 >> insert break
- 00:51:361 >> new combo
- 01:05:438 (4,5) >> stack
- 01:36:130 >> finish
- 01:36:130 >> you could use 0.5x sections for parts like this
- 02:34:745 >> remove new combo
- 02:53:668 >> add a note
- 03:04:284 >> end the spinner here
- 03:31:053 >> why suddenly start using less notes ?
- 03:52:284 >> from this part on no hitsounds, why ?

* no star, this needs lots of some more work
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mancuso_JM_
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lovhin456 wrote:

mancuso's easy;
- 00:16:745 >> new combo
- 00:24:130 >> new combo
- 00:34:284 >> should be more symmetrical
- 00:45:822 (1,3) >> ^
- 00:49:514 >> ^
- 00:58:745 >> finish
- 01:07:053 >> new combo
- 01:11:668 >> ^
- 01:17:207 >> finish
- 01:35:438 >> remove whistle
- 01:36:130 >> finish
- 01:40:745 (5,1) >> spacing
- 01:53:668 >> change to soft sample
- 01:54:591 >> add finish and remove clap
- 02:06:591 >> new combo
- 02:46:284 >> finish
- 02:53:668 >> more symmetrical
- 03:04:745 >> finish
- 03:05:668 >> more symmetrical
- 03:10:745 >> ^
- 03:37:975 >> finish
- 03:38:898 >> more symmetrical
Antes que nada Gracias por aceptar la request que te hice ;)
Bueno hice la mayoria de las cosas, principalmente lo de simetria
P.S: Para ser sincero no creo que necesite mucho mas trabajo el map en general

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ZekeyHache
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Listo.
Si otra persona me vuelve a decir que mi skin esta fea la elimino.
(la skin no la persona)
:?
mancuso_JM_
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Por que no Kudos a Merchat7??
lovhin456
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lovhin456

ezek wrote:

Listo.
Si otra persona me vuelve a decir que mi skin esta fea la elimino.
(la skin no la persona)
:?
No es que este 'fea', pero el sobreuso de rosado me desanima a usarla al jugar, tal vez si mezclaras mas colores seria mejor. Por ejemplo el rosado en mi opinion no es un color que pueda ir con una cancion asi, seria mejor usar un dorado o plateado, se veria como mas 'glam' me sugiere mas a un tema de j-lo a mas aun ya que combina con el video mas que el rosado.
Y si quieres quedarte con el rosado seria bueno, no hacer todos los elementos con el mismo color, tal vez los numeros podrian ser simple blanco asi hay mas variedad y no se ve muy sobrecargado.
No me elimines por favor
wmfchris
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00:39:361 - start the break uniquely.

[Hard]
beginning ~ 0:18 - I think it should be softer (S 30%)
00:18:361 (5,6) - http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/194254
-quite a long empty section, I prefer a break as you've done afterwards
00:25:743 (5,6) - make similar settings like ^
00:46:976 (6,1,2) - left 1 grid
00:48:130 (5) - right 1 grid
01:19:053 (7,8,9) - right 1 grid
01:24:591 (9) - finish
01:27:591 (4) - right 1 grid
...~

want to talk more on some general issues

- spacing can be improved quite a lot even by grid level 3, like [Hard] 01:45:822 the spacing difference among (2,3,4) is visible and can be improved easily.
- Some notes are like placed quite randomly like 01:27:361 (3,4). When most of your pattern relies on square/right angle turning, it's quite important for you to produce some symmetricities in the map.
- Yes I agree that pink combo colour's not very good at all, especially with a white BG.

Try to fix it a bit and find more mods >~<
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