Maria Naganawa & Ryoko Maekawa - Yonaka Jikaru · forum

- Pika

160 posts

Joined March 2017

- Pika 2017-06-27T20:57:29+00:00

Couldn't find anything wrong :v Good Luck!

Toumoko

Toumoko 2017-07-02T08:29:43+00:00

hi, combo colour plz
[maki's Insane]

would be nice this 00:16:447 (5) - stacked on 00:17:254 (1) -
00:20:480 (3,6) - stacked properly or purposely ?
00:18:867 (1) - so far
spacing at here 00:24:512 (2,3) - is not same with 00:29:673 (2,3) - and 01:21:286 (2,3) -
can make this more neatly ? 01:05:963 (3,4) -
i would prefer this 01:15:318 (1,2) - have a same rhythm with 00:28:867 (1,2,3) -

[Fruity's Insane]

good flow 00:38:544 (4,5) - stacked each other like 00:43:705 (6,7) - and , can stacked properly ?
01:19:834 (1) - different shape with 00:07:576 (1) -

[Insane]

00:05:480 (4,3) - overlap
00:32:092 (4) - can make this more spacing ? loud at there
00:39:028 (3) - remove ?
kind a different with the same sound 01:01:770 (7,8) - and 00:56:609 (1,2,3) -

Good luck with the set .

blobdash

912 posts

Joined April 2016

blobdash 2017-07-02T08:42:20+00:00

both fixed

update

osu file format v14

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Title:Yonaka Jikaru
TitleUnicode:ヨナカジカル
Artist:Maria Naganawa & Ryoko Maekawa
ArtistUnicode:長縄マリア & 前川亮子
Creator:CucumberCuc
Version:Fruity's Insane
Source:ステラのまほう
Tags:Stella no Mahou Ending Anime ED FruityEnLoops makisokk victorfernando
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CucumberCuc

1,316 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

CucumberCuc 2017-07-02T10:43:56+00:00

Toumoko wrote:
hi, combo colour plz
[Insane]
00:05:480 (4,3) - overlap don't know what you have there is skin, but there is no overlap
00:32:092 (4) - can make this more spacing ? loud at there fixed
00:39:028 (3) - remove ? why? if I have the following times with the same sound set circles
kind a different with the same sound 01:01:770 (7,8) - and 00:56:609 (1,2,3) - there is a little difference between them and I wasn't trying to do "copy-paste"
Good luck with the set . thx~

makisokk

928 posts

Joined August 2013

makisokk 2017-07-02T16:52:58+00:00

Toumoko wrote:
hi, combo colour plz
[maki's Insane]
would be nice this 00:16:447 (5) - stacked on 00:17:254 (1) - Do stack
00:20:480 (3,6) - stacked properly or purposely ? purposely
00:18:867 (1) - so far I do not agree, because there is time to bring the cursor to this place
spacing at here 00:24:512 (2,3) - is not same with 00:29:673 (2,3) - and 01:21:286 (2,3) - Increased in the first case
can make this more neatly ? 01:05:963 (3,4) - Fix
i would prefer this 01:15:318 (1,2) - have a same rhythm with 00:28:867 (1,2,3) - In the second case, the sound is sharper, so I made such a slider
Good luck with the set .

Thanks for the mod
Попробуй эти цвета:

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GD

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
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Countdown: 0
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LetterboxInBreaks: 0
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Title:Yonaka Jikaru
TitleUnicode:ヨナカジカル
Artist:Maria Naganawa & Ryoko Maekawa
ArtistUnicode:長縄マリア & 前川亮子
Creator:CucumberCuc
Version:maki's Insane
Source:ステラのまほう
Tags:Stella no Mahou Ending Anime ED FruityEnLoops makisokk victorfernando
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CucumberCuc

1,316 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

CucumberCuc 2017-07-02T18:06:35+00:00

makisokk wrote:
Попробуй эти цвета:
[Colours]
Combo1 : 213,81,76
Combo2 : 255,167,157
Combo3 : 81,80,111
Combo4 : 115,75,83
Combo5 : 173,111,122

Мне кажется что эти цвета не очень

Einja

652 posts

Joined February 2015

Einja 2017-07-02T21:23:42+00:00

m4m (you only asked for mods on the last 2 gds)
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/629277

[general]
enable widescreen support for all diffs, you have a video

[fruity]
for the kiai section, you really seem to break flow in a lot of random places, especially at the 1/2 sliders. a good example is at 00:54:673 (1,2,3) - where notes 1 and 2 are going in a counter clockwise flow, but then it suddenly breaks at slider 3 for no good reason

another example is here 00:56:286 (4,1) - where it flow breaks from going in a counterclock wise motion to a sudden clockwise motion with circles 1 and 2.

fix your flow stuff in the kiai, the rest of the flow seems okay to me.

00:21:931 (1,2) - nazi blanket

01:10:157 (1) - you normally nc notes about 4 1/4 ticks before a downbeat. why did you nc here?

[maki]
oh man od9 is high

00:04:673 (4) - this is still very close to 00:04:350 (3) - and can be easily mistaken for a 1/4 jump. i would've stacked both of the notes, since you really can't space the notes away anymore since you'll just go off the screen lol

00:06:125 (2,3) - nice overlap

00:14:028 (3,4,6) - please fix your overlaps and blanketing here!

00:16:286 (4,6) - these are so close to each other that it doesn't look nice

00:18:221 (2,3) - another weird blanket

00:43:705 (4,5) - with the current beats/notes you are following, this isn't needed.

00:57:254 (1,1,1) - why did you nc these notes? it looks cool, but there's no song change. so no need for a weird pattern like this ;a;

01:00:963 (3,4,5) - this jump is really flow breaking, and not in a good way since 01:00:480 (1,2,3,4) - are going clockwise, yet 01:00:963 (3,4,5) - just suddenly turns into an anticlockwise movement for no reason at all.

01:01:770 (7,8) - these are so close to each other, it doesn't look nice

01:04:996 (1,1) - remove unnecessary nc's you didn't do them here 01:05:641 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -

01:08:221 (3,4,5) - any reason why these are an increase in sv

01:25:157 (3,4) - i'd stack these if i were you, but that's not a big deal so don't change if you don't want to.

gonna do a rough overlook over a few other diffs
[insane]
00:04:350 (1,2,3) - the spacing here could be easily mistaken for a 1/4 jump, stack these or space them away a little more

00:56:286 (8,1) - overlap looks ugly lol

[normal]
00:06:931 (3) - slider end here should be clickable
00:12:092 (2) - ^
00:13:705 (2) - ^

00:52:576 (3) - 1/4 snap = unrankable (maybe rankable since bpm is low but idk)

ok that's all from me

gl!

blobdash

912 posts

Joined April 2016

blobdash 2017-07-02T22:09:34+00:00

fixed your two suggestions but not kiai flow
basicly there's changes in pitches for the flow changement, so i won't change it

update

osu file format v14

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AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 54673
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.7
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

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DistanceSpacing: 1.7
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 32
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Title:Yonaka Jikaru
TitleUnicode:ヨナカジカル
Artist:Maria Naganawa & Ryoko Maekawa
ArtistUnicode:長縄マリア & 前川亮子
Creator:CucumberCuc
Version:Fruity's Insane
Source:ステラのまほう
Tags:Stella no Mahou Ending Anime ED FruityEnLoops makisokk victorfernando
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CucumberCuc

1,316 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

CucumberCuc 2017-07-03T11:45:37+00:00

Einja wrote:
m4m (you only asked for mods on the last 2 gds)
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/629277

[general]
enable widescreen support for all diffs, you have a video I thought I included, what the...

[normal]
00:06:931 (3) - slider end here should be clickable
00:12:092 (2) - ^ I think i leave this sliders with reverse, as if to change them - is not a good idea to do so
00:13:705 (2) - ^ it seems to me that everything is normal, as for example, the next slider at the end also has clickable sound

00:52:576 (3) - 1/4 snap = unrankable (maybe rankable since bpm is low but idk) here I followed the sounds, so I think everything is fine

ok that's all from me

gl!

makisokk

928 posts

Joined August 2013

makisokk 2017-07-03T21:52:33+00:00

Einja wrote:
m4m (you only asked for mods on the last 2 gds)
my map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/629277

[maki]
oh man od9 is high do 8 od

00:04:673 (4) - this is still very close to 00:04:350 (3) - and can be easily mistaken for a 1/4 jump. i would've stacked both of the notes, since you really can't space the notes away anymore since you'll just go off the screen lol Do stack

00:06:125 (2,3) - nice overlap Lol what you mean?

00:14:028 (3,4,6) - please fix your overlaps and blanketing here! Fix

00:16:286 (4,6) - these are so close to each other that it doesn't look nice try fix it

00:18:221 (2,3) - another weird blanket Do overlap with direct slider

00:43:705 (4,5) - with the current beats/notes you are following, this isn't needed. okay

00:57:254 (1,1,1) - why did you nc these notes? it looks cool, but there's no song change. so no need for a weird pattern like this ;a; fix nc

01:00:963 (3,4,5) - this jump is really flow breaking, and not in a good way since 01:00:480 (1,2,3,4) - are going clockwise, yet 01:00:963 (3,4,5) - just suddenly turns into an anticlockwise movement for no reason at all. Try fix it

01:01:770 (7,8) - these are so close to each other, it doesn't look nice ^

01:04:996 (1,1) - remove unnecessary nc's you didn't do them here 01:05:641 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Fix

01:08:221 (3,4,5) - any reason why these are an increase in sv Fix

01:25:157 (3,4) - i'd stack these if i were you, but that's not a big deal so don't change if you don't want to. Do so

gonna do a rough overlook over a few other diffs

ok that's all from me

gl!

Thanks for the mod

GD

osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:ヨナカジカル
Artist:Maria Naganawa & Ryoko Maekawa
ArtistUnicode:長縄マリア & 前川亮子
Creator:CucumberCuc
Version:maki's Insane
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Mentai

472 posts

Joined June 2016

Mentai 2017-07-12T04:44:55+00:00

hi

Easy

this is what your playfield looks like https://puu.sh/wHlBB.jpg. this is not a good thing, you're essentially making the player move in circles in the center of the field for over a minute. not very fun ;\

00:12:092 (5,2) - rhythm and flow in this section is fine, but if you're going to be using multiple curves of the same kind, why not just use the same slider shapes you've used to create better slider polarity?

00:23:705 (1,2) - same here, you could just take the 1 slider and ctrl shift s it down to the length you need it. the curves being different makes it look weird

00:51:447 (2) - this could probably function better as 2 circles

00:54:673 (1,2) - the kiai is definitely the most musically intense part of this song, but you chose to map the really quiet part with more circles and objects than you did here. this seems backwards

Normal

same play area problem https://puu.sh/wHqFu.jpg

00:03:705 (1,2,3,1,2) - is there a reason why this section is so empty compared to the next combos? its literally just circles

00:14:673 (4,1) - more slider polarity. some could use some symmetry here or a blanket if you're not gonna use the same slider

00:16:931 (2,3) - this is the wrong rhythm

00:26:286 (1,2) - this string of circles seems meh to me, could be better as a 1/2 slider

01:02:415 (1) - for some reason you like to keep looping around the middle of the center of the screen in these diffs, this wouldve been a great time to have just gone straight up or something

01:17:899 (2,3,4) - why so sparse again? you could at least have made some sliders, its just so empty and engaging

01:24:512 (1,2) - this would probably work better as a 1/1 slider

Victor's Hard

00:06:447 (4) - ctrl + g

00:10:802 (2) - NC should be here instead

00:13:383 (2) - same here, all ur NCs are p random, ina hard they should basically be 1 every big white tick or every other big white tick (fix all of these i dont wanna point out ever single one)

00:14:512 (2,3) - this blanket is off

00:15:157 (3,1) - these should be the same angle

00:18:221 (6,1) - ds 3.0x?? this is pretty nuts, hards should try to still be relatively tame in ds, only hovering a bit off from the base ds you choose (normally 1.5x is good for hards)

00:18:544 (1,3) - these should be the same slider shape, slider polarity etc

00:26:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - yeah this is just unacceptable for a hard, you're breaking too much ds to be able to call this a hard, stuff like this belongs in an insane

seems you're pretty new to mapping, so try and remember that you should be using ds in diffs lower than insane pretty much all the time, with slight variations in hard, and NO variations in easy and normal. try and keep this in mind when you remap this diff!

that's all, gl!

CucumberCuc

1,316 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

CucumberCuc 2017-07-12T15:08:38+00:00

tiffany yu tyu wrote:
HI from my queue!!!!
Victor's Hard
00:15:963 (2,3,4,5) - a bit weird for me, suggested to stack them fixed

00:15:963 (2,3,4,5) - a bit weird for me, suggested to stack them ^
00:47:092 (1,2) - idk how to say... but flip the starting point?? the distance between (7)and (1) are too far i hope fixed
01:07:899 (4,5,6) - adjust them to be the same distance between them fixed
rip only a bit

I am very sorry that I forgot about you, but Victor will not be able to fix it, so he gave it to me

Mentai wrote:
hi

Easy

this is what your playfield looks like https://puu.sh/wHlBB.jpg. this is not a good thing, you're essentially making the player move in circles in the center of the field for over a minute. not very fun ;\

00:12:092 (5,2) - rhythm and flow in this section is fine, but if you're going to be using multiple curves of the same kind, why not just use the same slider shapes you've used to create better slider polarity? I'm not sure that's a good idea, as for me, will look not so beautiful

00:23:705 (1,2) - same here, you could just take the 1 slider and ctrl shift s it down to the length you need it. the curves being different makes it look weird like I said above - it's a bad idea, as it will not play as good as you might think

00:51:447 (2) - this could probably function better as 2 circles fixed

00:54:673 (1,2) - the kiai is definitely the most musically intense part of this song, but you chose to map the really quiet part with more circles and objects than you did here. this seems backwards i hope it's be better

Normal

same play area problem https://puu.sh/wHqFu.jpg

00:03:705 (1,2,3,1,2) - is there a reason why this section is so empty compared to the next combos? its literally just circles 1,2,3 first I fixed and added a slider, and the second is 1.2 I think no need to add something if you listen to that moment

00:14:673 (4,1) - more slider polarity. some could use some symmetry here or a blanket if you're not gonna use the same slider fixed

00:16:931 (2,3) - this is the wrong rhythm okay, fixed

00:26:286 (1,2) - this string of circles seems meh to me, could be better as a 1/2 slider okay, fixed

01:02:415 (1) - for some reason you like to keep looping around the middle of the center of the screen in these diffs, this wouldve been a great time to have just gone straight up or something Uuh...will have another time to learn to do properly...

01:17:899 (2,3,4) - why so sparse again? you could at least have made some sliders, its just so empty and engaging okay, fixed

01:24:512 (1,2) - this would probably work better as a 1/1 slider I think I'll leave as is

Victor's Hard

00:06:447 (4) - ctrl + g I'm not sure that's a good idea

00:10:802 (2) - NC should be here instead fixed

00:13:383 (2) - same here, all ur NCs are p random, ina hard they should basically be 1 every big white tick or every other big white tick (fix all of these i dont wanna point out ever single one) Here begins the new sounds, so I think it is not necessary to change

00:14:512 (2,3) - this blanket is off i think it's okay

00:15:157 (3,1) - these should be the same angle fixed

00:18:221 (6,1) - ds 3.0x?? this is pretty nuts, hards should try to still be relatively tame in ds, only hovering a bit off from the base ds you choose (normally 1.5x is good for hards) slightly fixed

00:18:544 (1,3) - these should be the same slider shape, slider polarity etc I'm not sure that this is necessary

00:26:286 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - yeah this is just unacceptable for a hard, you're breaking too much ds to be able to call this a hard, stuff like this belongs in an insane i hope it be better

seems you're pretty new to mapping, so try and remember that you should be using ds in diffs lower than insane pretty much all the time, with slight variations in hard, and NO variations in easy and normal. try and keep this in mind when you remap this diff!

that's all, gl! thx ^^

Enkrypton

217 posts

Joined November 2014

Enkrypton 2017-07-12T23:30:00+00:00

From my queue, sorry for being like 2 weeks late my laptop broke

Easy

00:23:705 (1,1) - use copy paste to make these the same. imo the second slider looks better. its mapping same rhythm, not need to be different sliders shapes
00:39:189 (1) - move red anchor to the left to blanket better with 00:38:544 (4) -
00:46:286 (2,3) - blanket this better pls, make the curve for 00:46:931 (3) - more wide
01:10:157 (1) - i would probably angle this upwards since the design look really weird flowing from 01:08:867 (4) -
01:23:060 (2) - move this down a little to blanket with 01:20:480 (1) -

I highly recommend copy pasting sliders for lower SR diffs instead of and creating them.

Normal

00:10:802 (1,2) - placement looks weird, i think it looks better if u flip 00:12:092 (2) - with ctrl h and reposition
00:28:544 (1,2) - blanket this, the current placement looks weird

GENERALLY: I think this would be mapped really well if you reused sliders instead of hand creating them every time

Victor's Hard

00:09:834 (6,7,8) - angle these as equilateral triangle
00:23:705 (1,2) - these 2 would look great together if they where both curved. remove red anchors on 00:23:705 (1) -
00:41:770 (3,4) - placement is a little random. try this? http://puu.sh/wI4eD/8cf289fc24.jpg
01:01:125 (2,3) - adjust the anchors a little on 01:01:125 (2) - . its not well blanketed rn: http://puu.sh/wI4j1/bc0ce5fc24.jpg

Insane

00:08:221 (1,2,3,4,5) - this flows really awkwardly while playtesting
00:23:705 (1) - move to the right a little so it blankets 00:22:899 (4) -
00:39:512 - add a stacked circle here, sounds better and relates to previous designs
01:06:931 (7,1) - id make these 2 have same locations

You should really watch your slider to slider flow here, looks visually awkward

Fruity's Insane

00:06:609 (1,1) - not sure if this is rankable, get a T1 BN to help you on this
use this design: 00:15:318 (2,1,2,1) - here: 00:14:834 (1,2,1) -
00:28:221 (1) - see first mod
00:31:125 (2,3) - blanket
for your Kiai time, it would be amazing if you can stack overlap slider tails and heads on your slider spam parts. This is a very common and heavily accepted mapping design
01:19:834 (1) - first mod

Maki's Insane

I'm not the best at spotting stuff in higher SR diffs. sorry for lack of mods here lol

00:14:028 (3) - rotate CW just a tiny bit to make better blanket
00:14:996 (6) - i would reuse position of 00:14:028 (3) - for this
00:25:802 (5) - try to place this in center of 00:24:673 (3) - 's curve
00:41:770 (1,2,3) - have a small curve on this too like all your other circle-circle-circle design

Good luck with set!

makisokk

928 posts

Joined August 2013

makisokk 2017-07-13T03:00:54+00:00

Enkrypton wrote:
From my queue, sorry for being like 2 weeks late my laptop broke
Maki's Insane
I'm not the best at spotting stuff in higher SR diffs. sorry for lack of mods here lol

00:14:028 (3) - rotate CW just a tiny bit to make better blanket Fix
00:14:996 (6) - i would reuse position of 00:14:028 (3) - for this I think that there is no need for this, the flow will break down
00:25:802 (5) - try to place this in center of 00:24:673 (3) - 's curve Do so
00:41:770 (1,2,3) - have a small curve on this too like all your other circle-circle-circle design Try fix it

Good luck with set!

Thanks for the mod

GD

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blobdash

912 posts

Joined April 2016

blobdash 2017-07-13T16:01:55+00:00

Enkrypton wrote:
From my queue, sorry for being like 2 weeks late my laptop broke

Fruity's Insane
00:06:609 (1,1) - not sure if this is rankable, get a T1 BN to help you on this it's fine, it emphasize the dubstep growl
use this design: 00:15:318 (2,1,2,1) - here: 00:14:834 (1,2,1) - mmmm what
00:28:221 (1) - see first mod see first answer lul
00:31:125 (2,3) - blanket
for your Kiai time, it would be amazing if you can stack overlap slider tails and heads on your slider spam parts. This is a very common and heavily accepted mapping design mmmm what, there's no real "slider spam", cuz the whole kiai is full of sliders xd
01:19:834 (1) - first mod see first answer lul

Good luck with set!

thanks...
though
i think you were modding the non remapped version
i pm'd you, pm me back if i got something wrong
no problem if you were modding the old version, no need to re mod

CucumberCuc

1,316 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

CucumberCuc 2017-07-13T16:21:14+00:00

Enkrypton wrote:
From my queue, sorry for being like 2 weeks late my laptop broke
Easy
00:23:705 (1,1) - use copy paste to make these the same. imo the second slider looks better. its mapping same rhythm, not need to be different sliders shapes fixed
00:39:189 (1) - move red anchor to the left to blanket better with 00:38:544 (4) - fixed
00:46:286 (2,3) - blanket this better pls, make the curve for 00:46:931 (3) - more wide fixed
01:10:157 (1) - i would probably angle this upwards since the design look really weird flowing from 01:08:867 (4) - i hope it's be better
01:23:060 (2) - move this down a little to blanket with 01:20:480 (1) - fixed

I highly recommend copy pasting sliders for lower SR diffs instead of and creating them.

Normal
00:10:802 (1,2) - placement looks weird, i think it looks better if u flip 00:12:092 (2) - with ctrl h and reposition fixed
00:28:544 (1,2) - blanket this, the current placement looks weird fixed

GENERALLY: I think this would be mapped really well if you reused sliders instead of hand creating them every time I sometimes feel more comfortable to make new sliders, but will consider)

Victor's Hard
00:09:834 (6,7,8) - angle these as equilateral triangle fixed
00:23:705 (1,2) - these 2 would look great together if they where both curved. remove red anchors on 00:23:705 (1) - not good idea
00:41:770 (3,4) - placement is a little random. try this? http://puu.sh/wI4eD/8cf289fc24.jpg fixed
01:01:125 (2,3) - adjust the anchors a little on 01:01:125 (2) - . its not well blanketed rn: http://puu.sh/wI4j1/bc0ce5fc24.jpg fixed

Insane
00:08:221 (1,2,3,4,5) - this flows really awkwardly while playtesting it will be difficult to fix it... but it seems to me that while it is playable
00:23:705 (1) - move to the right a little so it blankets 00:22:899 (4) - fixed
00:39:512 - add a stacked circle here, sounds better and relates to previous designs added
01:06:931 (7,1) - id make these 2 have same locations fixed

You should really watch your slider to slider flow here, looks visually awkward

Good luck with set! thx you ^^

blobdash

912 posts

Joined April 2016

blobdash 2017-07-14T08:51:19+00:00

Cleared out things with Enkrypton in PM, here's the update!

update

osu file format v14

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Title:Yonaka Jikaru
TitleUnicode:ヨナカジカル
Artist:Maria Naganawa & Ryoko Maekawa
ArtistUnicode:長縄マリア & 前川亮子
Creator:CucumberCuc
Version:Fruity's Insane
Source:ステラのまほう
Tags:Stella no Mahou Ending Anime ED FruityEnLoops makisokk victorfernando
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josh1024

232 posts

Joined October 2014

josh1024 2017-07-28T12:10:36+00:00

From your M4M:

Easy
00:46:286 (2,3) shape of 2 3 looks a bit off when after 1. I would prefer 1 pointing perfectly at 2...
00:46:931 (3,4) ...like this.
01:15:318 (1,2,3) 2 could blanket 1 better, like 3 blanketing 2.

Normal
00:03:060 (2) maybe nc here.
00:53:705 (4) feels like this slider is kinda unnecessary. maybe start it 1/2 beat after slider 3...
00:51:447 (1,2) ...or maybe make 1's head a circle and everything starting from 2 a spinner.
01:00:802 (2,3,4) maybe move 2 up a bit so that it can point straight at 3.
01:09:834 (4,1) maybe move 4 down a bit and 1 a bit to the right. just preferance.
01:15:318 (1) maybe make it evenly curved.

Victor's Hard
00:05:963 (3,4,5) the similar gap sizes makes it hard to read time. make 4 closer to 3.
00:16:447 (5,1,2) ^ make 2 further from 1.
00:23:705 (1,2) 1 could be better blanketed by 2.
00:33:060 (3,4,1) I would put 4 closer to 3 since 1 is stronger (it's a nc).
00:55:802 (1,2,3,4) feels like gap increase between 3 4 is unnecessary.
01:24:673 (2) this doesn't match the music. consider deleting this.

CucumberCuc

1,316 posts

Joined January 2016

Topic Starter

CucumberCuc 2017-07-28T18:19:41+00:00

josh1024 wrote:
From your M4M:

Easy
00:46:286 (2,3) shape of 2 3 looks a bit off when after 1. I would prefer 1 pointing perfectly at 2...
00:46:931 (3,4) ...like this. okay, fixed
01:15:318 (1,2,3) 2 could blanket 1 better, like 3 blanketing 2. hope it's be better

Normal
00:03:060 (2) maybe nc here. nope
00:53:705 (4) feels like this slider is kinda unnecessary. maybe start it 1/2 beat after slider 3... okay, fixed
00:51:447 (1,2) ...or maybe make 1's head a circle and everything starting from 2 a spinner. I don't want to put the spinner, so i change the above
01:00:802 (2,3,4) maybe move 2 up a bit so that it can point straight at 3. it was intended to do to the end of the slider didn't look at the circle
01:09:834 (4,1) maybe move 4 down a bit and 1 a bit to the right. just preferance. I think it's better if I leave a weak arc of circles
01:15:318 (1) maybe make it evenly curved. hope it's be better

Victor's Hard
00:05:963 (3,4,5) the similar gap sizes makes it hard to read time. make 4 closer to 3. fixed
00:16:447 (5,1,2) ^ make 2 further from 1. not good idea
00:23:705 (1,2) 1 could be better blanketed by 2. slightly changed
00:33:060 (3,4,1) I would put 4 closer to 3 since 1 is stronger (it's a nc). fixed
00:55:802 (1,2,3,4) feels like gap increase between 3 4 is unnecessary. fixed
01:24:673 (2) this doesn't match the music. consider deleting this. it seems to me that with the removing circle there will not sound as good if be he was standing there initially (even if it's a quiet sound when playing you can not hear)

Arphimigon

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Arphimigon 2017-08-14T11:08:06+00:00

Lab Aesthetics Mod!

Results given in [x, y] formats

[Easy]
Nothing Detected!
[Fruity's Insane]
Nothing Detected!
[Insane]
Object at 01:13:221 - should be placed at: [215, 180] currently at: [212, 184] to blanket slider body at time 01:13:705 -
Object at 01:13:544 - should be placed at: [215, 180] currently at: [212, 184] to blanket slider body at time 01:13:705 -

[maki's Insane]
Object at 00:14:028 - should be placed at: [420, 202] currently at: [414, 204] to blanket slider body at time 00:14:350 -
Object at 01:03:867 - should be placed at: [147, 303] currently at: [148, 304] to move in line with slider at time 01:04:028 -

[Normal]
Nothing Detected!
[Victor's Hard]
Object at 00:51:286 - should be placed at: [94, 92] currently at: [96, 96] to blanket slider body at time 00:50:802 -

I hope I didn't malfunction!

EijiKuinbii

331 posts

Joined April 2015

EijiKuinbii 2017-08-14T13:16:14+00:00

проверь аимод в каждой диффе
maki's Insane
01:09:189 (6,7) -
не давай кудосу

CucumberCuc

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CucumberCuc 2017-08-14T16:28:51+00:00

Arphimigon wrote:
[Lab Aesthetics Mod!]Results given in [x, y] formats

[Insane]
Object at 01:13:221 - should be placed at: [215, 180] currently at: [212, 184] to blanket slider body at time 01:13:705 -
Object at 01:13:544 - should be placed at: [215, 180] currently at: [212, 184] to blanket slider body at time 01:13:705 - don't think it's necessary to change

[Victor's Hard]
Object at 00:51:286 - should be placed at: [94, 92] currently at: [96, 96] to blanket slider body at time 00:50:802 - slightly fixed

I hope I didn't malfunction! thx <3

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