Thank you very much for your mod! I really appreciate it (:Itasha_S13 wrote:
Hi from my QWoah I liked this map a lot / nice streams omg thank you so much for 2 stars <333
- Unbound by Fate
00:27:259 (3,4,3,4) - change these to a single circles? or at least these two 00:28:788 (3,4) - ? the sounds change on these, playing these sliders is kinda boring i really like the pattern and furthermore i think sliders are good to introduce the player to the (fairly more rare seen) slow bpm. i keep it in consideration tho
00:34:138 (1,2) - should make these two more like http://prntscr.com/cyc3v0 why everyone dislikes that, i find it pretty as hell lol
00:38:342 (2,3) - should add huge spacing in these , the music here gets inteeeense but the spacing its really short.. you don't feel the intesity of the song with that spacing :l tru
00:50:189 (1,2,3,4) - this looks a bit messed up, maybe move the sliders like.. https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6400372 changed
00:58:119 (4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - raise the volume of hitsounds here, I cant hear anything :T raised by 10%
01:01:909 (2) - lolz snaps this to the blue tick xDD <and add more spacing, like you did 00:57:068 (1,2) - >fixed
01:13:119 (4) - suggestion> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6400401 looks more organized imo think i organized it better now
01:16:941 (1) - something similar here > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6400409 notice that I stacked 01:16:941 (1,1) - in the pic, but its on you to chnage or not, dont really need to change but I just point it out because it looks a bit weird/akward for me :< changed
01:31:750 (6,7,8,9,10) - this part should be space a bit more (like 01:29:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ) or even more since I feel like this part 01:31:750 (6,7,8,9,10) - sounds more "intense" than the other before yes
01:38:056 (2,3,4,1) - move these a bit down to stack 01:37:769 (3,2) - ? too hard to read imo if i stack them
01:38:915 (4) - vocals start here, and starting streams in blue ticks like 01:38:820 (3) - is kinda confusing since the vocals starts on the red one, its on you to change or not :p (I mean, to make something like you did 01:48:278 (4,5) - ) urghh... i'd have to change it in all kiais. i keep it in mind if someone points the same thing out since i didnt map the vocals there just the simple drums
01:39:297 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - suggestion for streams hape > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6400465 (of course, using the properly spacing) good suggestion
01:40:157 (2) - hmm why you make such a flow break here? think its better now
01:52:100 (1) - move this a bit to the left, like 215/102 oki
01:55:157 (1,2) - suggestion for this part (sliders)> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6400504 found a different pattern, was kinda random
01:57:450 (2,3) - add more spacing here! fixed
02:12:164 (2,3,4) - suggestion: Ok, I like the way you put these 3 sliders, 02:12:164 (2,3,4) - they fit perfectly, but they don't fit with 02:11:972 (1) - so..
> https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6400536 (notice that the 3 is just a copy paste + ctrl+h + ctrl + g of 1) i think they fit more in one pattern now so 02:12:547 (4) - falls not apart? pretty sure now
02:34:425 (4) - move this around 83/24 :p ok
02:50:380 (3,4) - should add more spacing here (more like 02:50:762 (6,7) - ) yes
02:59:361 (1) - rase the volume of this stream to 60 at least :/ changed
03:18:947 (3,4,5,1) - space this a bit more, like this 01:29:934 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - ok
03:43:979 (4,1,2) - the change of direction here its too edgy imo, maybe rotate this a bit 03:43:692 (1,2,3,4) - like -11° and move to the right
also I think you should make a change of direction here too 03:44:457 (5,6,7) - like https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6400590 (but the change of direction should be place on the 1, but You get what I mean right?) the concept of having 03:43:692 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - as a 4-circle-part at the beginning and at the end with 03:44:074 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - as the middle part seems good to me and not too overdone i changed the rotation thing tho
04:33:374 (4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4) - hmm for some reason I see this... very bad like this stream can be a lot better, the others streams are 10/10 but this one its.. 2/10 imo. I don't want to be useless af so I give a suggestion > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6400655 the flow in your pic i strongly disagree since it just plays really weird (ik i have that at some spots tho but juzst because i couldnt find a better solution). the overlapping thing i do like because its the concept of the map and it flows better. But as i rate it difficult to read i will consider your note for other modder's opinions
04:54:679 (2) - move this a bit to the left/down i want to keep 04:54:584 (1,2,3) - as a straight triple unique since its emphasized in the music (also note how i make the hitsound there so it should be clear)
04:55:062 (6,7) - fix spcing here also move the 7 a bit to the left too ( Before > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6400683 After > https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6400675 ) fixed the spacing, other thing same as above
Edit:
01:38:915 (4) - vocals start here, and starting streams in blue ticks like 01:38:820 (3) - is kinda confusing since the vocals starts on the red one, its on you to change or not :p (I mean, to make something like you did 01:48:278 (4,5) - ) i reconsidered it and remapped that part for all appropriate spots. So a 1/4 slider starts at 01:38:915 - and at 01:39:106 - followed by the "intense" stream to fit the vocals in the song.
Thank you for that advice, feels way better now!