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I think its well done. Don't like the anonymous one. But the others seems to be fine. Didn't found anymore mistakes. One star from me (=
(GENERAL)
For the first few tags, PLEASE just use 'Shikieiki'.
Anonymus' Danzai -
Why Isn't it mapped at her very last vocal? I will fix - w-
Fixed combos and some note timings, Will supply my fixes saved as a different diff and the original so you can compare. Made patterns more even and playable while still sticking with Anonymus' Danzai original patterns. If you don't like a part you can fix.
Taikos -
Good. :3 I cant mod taikos LOL but they are good ;3
Easy -
Add appropriate kiai times that go with the other maps. I dont think it is rankable if it all is different, but im not sure. It just has none - w- Otherwise it's ok.
Other modes -
Look Fine To Me. :3
StarStar~
Download: IOSYS - Danzai Yamaxanadu (Broetchen8441) [Elly's Fixes].osu
For the first few tags, PLEASE just use 'Shikieiki'.
Anonymus' Danzai -
Why Isn't it mapped at her very last vocal? I will fix - w-
Fixed combos and some note timings, Will supply my fixes saved as a different diff and the original so you can compare. Made patterns more even and playable while still sticking with Anonymus' Danzai original patterns. If you don't like a part you can fix.
Taikos -
Good. :3 I cant mod taikos LOL but they are good ;3
Easy -
Add appropriate kiai times that go with the other maps. I dont think it is rankable if it all is different, but im not sure. It just has none - w- Otherwise it's ok.
Other modes -
Look Fine To Me. :3
StarStar~
Download: IOSYS - Danzai Yamaxanadu (Broetchen8441) [Elly's Fixes].osu
[General]
Timing sounds OK to me but offset is definetely wrong (Big tick 1/1 too early). Change offset to 10138 for the sake of the metronome
[Railgunz' Easy]
You should (!) use 0,80 as slider velocity. Otherwise everthing looks cluttered like hell and your notes overlap even in 1/2. This is NOT ok for an easy diff. You'll have to rearrange the whole map and check all the sliders as they will be too short after the change.
00:27:966 (X) - add note
00:31:395 (4) - end 1/1 earlier, add circle @00:33:452
00:36:195 (X) - add note
00:38:938 (X) - ^
00:39:966 (3) - end 1/1 earlier, add circle @00:41:680
00:49:909 (6,7) - come on that is just lazy. Why not follow the lyrics here? (easy-appropriate)
00:55:052 (1,2,1,2) - not placed properly (read: ugly), also replace 00:56:080 (2) with short 1x repeating slider to match lyrics
00:55:738 (1) - delete new combo
00:58:480 (X) - add note
00:58:823 (2) - I like that *cough*
01:02:252 (2) - delete, use short 1x repeat slider from 01:01:909 - 01:02:252 and normal slider from 01:02:595 - 01:02:938
01:03:623 (3) - delete, use short 1x repeat slider from 01:03:623 - 01:03:623
01:27:966 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,1) - this part is pretty good but don't combo-spam it. It should look more like (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2)
The list would go on and on. Most of the objects don't follow anything. Map what you hear and emphasise important parts of the lyrics/melody and rhythm with your patterns. As long as you stay <three star in this difficulty you'll be fine. Try to make it enjoyable and less repetitive. Some things you shouldn't do in easy:
01:06:023 (1,2,3) - 1/2 sliders are ok. Never switch between 1x repeat and multi-repeat in this way. This is way too confusing for beginners.
01:50:595 (1) - snail-sliders are ok as long as they don't overlap anything. The beginning here is completely overlapping itself. Be sure to make the border of the slider visible. The 0,80 slider velocity I suggested will help to make up for the increased length of the slider.
01:58:480 (8) - don't use long 1/4 repeating sliders. Better don't use 1/4 at all in easy diffs. If it is completely unavoidable it might be OK but in this case a 1/2 slider is practicable.
[Anonymus' Danzai]
Pretty boring map as you often just circle-spam 1/1 beats. Spice it up a bit and follow what you actually hear in the song to make it more interesting and less repetitive. Also increase circle-size to at least match the [Hard].
00:16:995 (1,2) - spacing (there should definetely be no anti-jump here)
00:18:023 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - I like the switch between 0,8x and 1,0x spacing. BUT you should map everything before this point (and all the parts that sound this way) in 0,8x as well to make sense. If not fix the 0,8x to 1,0x as it would be a clear spacing error.
00:42:195 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Never switch between following beat and melody inside one combo. It is confusing as hell - especially for a normal. Better follow the melody only here or follow the melody AND the beat (maybe too much for a normal) but don't ignore the melody if you map it 2 notes later in the same combo
00:36:880 (1) - clean up this slider. It doesn't need 12(!) sub-points. (02:29:680 (1) - didn't need 14 points...)
00:46:480 (6) - lazy. Better map the lyrics here.
00:59:166 (4,5) - delete, use short slider from 00:59:166 - 00:59:338 (white tick to red tick) and repeat 4x to match the song
01:33:452 (1) - spinner is way too short. Not 300-able with <375 /min. Needs to be at least double in lenght or you'll have to reduce Overall Difficulty by 3-4. Same at 02:50:252 (1).
01:47:166 (1) - start at 01:47:509 end at 01:48:709, add circle at 01:47:166
01:58:138 - useless timing section, delete
02:08:423 (5,6) - slider endging and circle on the same tick! orz
02:08:424 - delete timing section
02:08:766 - ^
02:31:395 (1) - too much overlap
02:38:595 (2) - ^
02:56:080 (1) - lazy
03:04:309 (1) - at least let it end at 03:05:509
03:27:280 (1) - doesn't fit at all here
03:37:223 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - don't combo spam, use one combo until the end. Also: weird beat mapping but maybe ok.
Just some examples. Map still needs a lot of work imo.
[Hard]
Use a higher slider velocity (1,2-1,4 maybe) and rearranged everything with 0,8x - 1,0x spacing. Use 1,3x - 1,5x for jumps where they fit to spice things up a bit. Check slider endings afterwards.
00:27:452 (X) - why do you leave out this sound here but map it before and after this? I suggest adding a circle.
00:32:938 (X) - ^
00:38:424 (X) - ^
00:52:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't like the implementation of those 2x repeat sliders. Would be better to use 1x repeats and something else to keep the exact rhythm pattern.
00:55:052 (X) - add note
01:01:909 (X) - feels empty (add note)
01:02:081 (X) - ^ (maybe delete following (1) and use repeating slider for those three ticks)
01:11:509 (X) - add note
01:24:024 (1) - start at 01:25:224, end at 01:27:624. Map the free space.
01:33:795 - delete timing section (unused)
01:34:138 - delete timing section (unused)
01:57:795 (3) - split this and use a 1/4 repeating slider from 01:58:481 on. Either use a 1/2 repeating slider before or just map different.
02:02:595 (1) - not stacked properly (maybe don't stack at all)
02:10:310 (8) - not stacked properly
02:13:052 (1) - face this upwards as it looks ugly by half-overlapping 02:13:738 (2)
02:29:510 (3) - lazy
come up with something interesting (alternating circle pattern?)
02:31:395 (1) - doesn't fit imo. Better map this properly.
02:33:795 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - such an interesting part of the song and the mapping doesn't even come close. Maybe map the lyrics from singer and "chorus" equally but place them against each other, seperated by (reasonable) jumps.
02:51:281 - delete timing section (unused)
02:58:652 (X) - add note
03:04:310 (1) - end on big white tick and add note here
03:14:081 (1) - end on 03:18:024
03:20:081 (8) - use slider to match the song? (and fill the weird empty space)
03:23:167 (1) - ^
03:23:853 (1) - delete new combo
03:28:481 (X) - add note
03:28:995 (X) - this can be used!
03:35:853 (5) - not stacked properly
03:37:052 (X) - add note to match the beat-follow in the 03:37:224 (1,2,3,4)-combo, also take this note into the following combo (delete new combo at 03:37:224 (1))
03:39:024 (X) - add 1/4 slider with 3x repeat to match the beat pattern
03:39:452 (X) - add slider from red tick to big white tick to match the beat pattern
Some patterns could be done with more precision and overall more beautifully. Solid framework so far.
[Nekoo's Conviction]
00:33:795 (1) - picky. Slider has not the same angle as (2)
00:56:767 (4,5,6,7) - ugly spacing mess. place without gridsnap and consistent distance-spacing (0,2x?).
01:07:738 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - ^ (hold [Ctrl] to snap each note in plane every 45°)
01:26:938 - insert break time
01:29:338 (1,2,1) - not in line
01:32:081 (1,2) - what a massive jump
02:29:767 (2,3,4,5,6) - looks ugly and plays weird (change in speed). Maybe use 1x repeat sliders in row
02:31:652 (2) - not stacked properly (looks much worse than any stacking bug)
02:32:167 (4) - ^
02:32:338 (5,6,7) - same as 02:29:767
02:47:510 (1,2,1) - not in line
03:35:852 (3,4,5) - not stacked properly
03:37:567 (2,3) - ^
Definetely the most polished map in the set. I suggest shortening some of the longer streams by using 1/4 repeating sliders to reduce overall score or this map might not be rankable (depending on the mood of MAT/BATs). Try keeping it <14m
I can't mod Taiko
Still needs alot of work but I can see where this is going: ~star
Timing sounds OK to me but offset is definetely wrong (Big tick 1/1 too early). Change offset to 10138 for the sake of the metronome
[Railgunz' Easy]
You should (!) use 0,80 as slider velocity. Otherwise everthing looks cluttered like hell and your notes overlap even in 1/2. This is NOT ok for an easy diff. You'll have to rearrange the whole map and check all the sliders as they will be too short after the change.
00:27:966 (X) - add note
00:31:395 (4) - end 1/1 earlier, add circle @00:33:452
00:36:195 (X) - add note
00:38:938 (X) - ^
00:39:966 (3) - end 1/1 earlier, add circle @00:41:680
00:49:909 (6,7) - come on that is just lazy. Why not follow the lyrics here? (easy-appropriate)
00:55:052 (1,2,1,2) - not placed properly (read: ugly), also replace 00:56:080 (2) with short 1x repeating slider to match lyrics
00:55:738 (1) - delete new combo
00:58:480 (X) - add note
00:58:823 (2) - I like that *cough*
01:02:252 (2) - delete, use short 1x repeat slider from 01:01:909 - 01:02:252 and normal slider from 01:02:595 - 01:02:938
01:03:623 (3) - delete, use short 1x repeat slider from 01:03:623 - 01:03:623
01:27:966 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,1) - this part is pretty good but don't combo-spam it. It should look more like (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2)
The list would go on and on. Most of the objects don't follow anything. Map what you hear and emphasise important parts of the lyrics/melody and rhythm with your patterns. As long as you stay <three star in this difficulty you'll be fine. Try to make it enjoyable and less repetitive. Some things you shouldn't do in easy:
01:06:023 (1,2,3) - 1/2 sliders are ok. Never switch between 1x repeat and multi-repeat in this way. This is way too confusing for beginners.
01:50:595 (1) - snail-sliders are ok as long as they don't overlap anything. The beginning here is completely overlapping itself. Be sure to make the border of the slider visible. The 0,80 slider velocity I suggested will help to make up for the increased length of the slider.
01:58:480 (8) - don't use long 1/4 repeating sliders. Better don't use 1/4 at all in easy diffs. If it is completely unavoidable it might be OK but in this case a 1/2 slider is practicable.
[Anonymus' Danzai]
Pretty boring map as you often just circle-spam 1/1 beats. Spice it up a bit and follow what you actually hear in the song to make it more interesting and less repetitive. Also increase circle-size to at least match the [Hard].
00:16:995 (1,2) - spacing (there should definetely be no anti-jump here)
00:18:023 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - I like the switch between 0,8x and 1,0x spacing. BUT you should map everything before this point (and all the parts that sound this way) in 0,8x as well to make sense. If not fix the 0,8x to 1,0x as it would be a clear spacing error.
00:42:195 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Never switch between following beat and melody inside one combo. It is confusing as hell - especially for a normal. Better follow the melody only here or follow the melody AND the beat (maybe too much for a normal) but don't ignore the melody if you map it 2 notes later in the same combo
00:36:880 (1) - clean up this slider. It doesn't need 12(!) sub-points. (02:29:680 (1) - didn't need 14 points...)
00:46:480 (6) - lazy. Better map the lyrics here.
00:59:166 (4,5) - delete, use short slider from 00:59:166 - 00:59:338 (white tick to red tick) and repeat 4x to match the song
01:33:452 (1) - spinner is way too short. Not 300-able with <375 /min. Needs to be at least double in lenght or you'll have to reduce Overall Difficulty by 3-4. Same at 02:50:252 (1).
01:47:166 (1) - start at 01:47:509 end at 01:48:709, add circle at 01:47:166
01:58:138 - useless timing section, delete
02:08:423 (5,6) - slider endging and circle on the same tick! orz
02:08:424 - delete timing section
02:08:766 - ^
02:31:395 (1) - too much overlap
02:38:595 (2) - ^
02:56:080 (1) - lazy
03:04:309 (1) - at least let it end at 03:05:509
03:27:280 (1) - doesn't fit at all here
03:37:223 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - don't combo spam, use one combo until the end. Also: weird beat mapping but maybe ok.
Just some examples. Map still needs a lot of work imo.
[Hard]
Use a higher slider velocity (1,2-1,4 maybe) and rearranged everything with 0,8x - 1,0x spacing. Use 1,3x - 1,5x for jumps where they fit to spice things up a bit. Check slider endings afterwards.
00:27:452 (X) - why do you leave out this sound here but map it before and after this? I suggest adding a circle.
00:32:938 (X) - ^
00:38:424 (X) - ^
00:52:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't like the implementation of those 2x repeat sliders. Would be better to use 1x repeats and something else to keep the exact rhythm pattern.
00:55:052 (X) - add note
01:01:909 (X) - feels empty (add note)
01:02:081 (X) - ^ (maybe delete following (1) and use repeating slider for those three ticks)
01:11:509 (X) - add note
01:24:024 (1) - start at 01:25:224, end at 01:27:624. Map the free space.
01:33:795 - delete timing section (unused)
01:34:138 - delete timing section (unused)
01:57:795 (3) - split this and use a 1/4 repeating slider from 01:58:481 on. Either use a 1/2 repeating slider before or just map different.
02:02:595 (1) - not stacked properly (maybe don't stack at all)
02:10:310 (8) - not stacked properly
02:13:052 (1) - face this upwards as it looks ugly by half-overlapping 02:13:738 (2)
02:29:510 (3) - lazy
come up with something interesting (alternating circle pattern?)02:31:395 (1) - doesn't fit imo. Better map this properly.
02:33:795 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - such an interesting part of the song and the mapping doesn't even come close. Maybe map the lyrics from singer and "chorus" equally but place them against each other, seperated by (reasonable) jumps.
02:51:281 - delete timing section (unused)
02:58:652 (X) - add note
03:04:310 (1) - end on big white tick and add note here
03:14:081 (1) - end on 03:18:024
03:20:081 (8) - use slider to match the song? (and fill the weird empty space)
03:23:167 (1) - ^
03:23:853 (1) - delete new combo
03:28:481 (X) - add note
03:28:995 (X) - this can be used!
03:35:853 (5) - not stacked properly
03:37:052 (X) - add note to match the beat-follow in the 03:37:224 (1,2,3,4)-combo, also take this note into the following combo (delete new combo at 03:37:224 (1))
03:39:024 (X) - add 1/4 slider with 3x repeat to match the beat pattern
03:39:452 (X) - add slider from red tick to big white tick to match the beat pattern
Some patterns could be done with more precision and overall more beautifully. Solid framework so far.
[Nekoo's Conviction]
00:33:795 (1) - picky. Slider has not the same angle as (2)
00:56:767 (4,5,6,7) - ugly spacing mess. place without gridsnap and consistent distance-spacing (0,2x?).
01:07:738 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - ^ (hold [Ctrl] to snap each note in plane every 45°)
01:26:938 - insert break time
01:29:338 (1,2,1) - not in line
01:32:081 (1,2) - what a massive jump
02:29:767 (2,3,4,5,6) - looks ugly and plays weird (change in speed). Maybe use 1x repeat sliders in row
02:31:652 (2) - not stacked properly (looks much worse than any stacking bug)
02:32:167 (4) - ^
02:32:338 (5,6,7) - same as 02:29:767
02:47:510 (1,2,1) - not in line
03:35:852 (3,4,5) - not stacked properly
03:37:567 (2,3) - ^
Definetely the most polished map in the set. I suggest shortening some of the longer streams by using 1/4 repeating sliders to reduce overall score or this map might not be rankable (depending on the mood of MAT/BATs). Try keeping it <14m
I can't mod Taiko
Still needs alot of work but I can see where this is going: ~star
Topic Starter
Mh... it's cut-off :/ziin wrote:
http://up.ppy.sh/files/danz.zip
Is this what you wanted?
Please add Ozzy and me into the TAG's.
I have allready forgot about this map because I didn't see it in my pending list. orz
I have allready forgot about this map because I didn't see it in my pending list. orz
Topic Starter
Going to do that on the next update in which i'm planning to replace the hard-diff with a new one.OnosakiHito wrote:
Please add Ozzy and me into the TAG's.
I have allready forgot about this map because I didn't see it in my pending list. orz
btw. i'm away from: 27.6.-1.7., so please be patient q.q
star
I didn't like this song that much...but nekoo's diff made me love it. Fun as hell, hope it gets ranked soon. ><
Topic Starter
Well since i got to do a full remake... this can take a while.LoveYouStar wrote:
I didn't like this song that much...but nekoo's diff made me love it. Fun as hell, hope it gets ranked soon. ><
Yeah i didn't like Danzai too, at first - well now i kinda like it, but mapping it is little exhausting a some parts
Star nom
I lieks Ozz's taiko more as it is more fun and just sounds better~ :3
Also, uh..
where's the video?
Nowhere to be found in the song folder lol
I lieks Ozz's taiko more as it is more fun and just sounds better~ :3
Also, uh..
where's the video?
Nowhere to be found in the song folder lol
Topic Starter
Removed since it was low-quality and too big... need someone for that.Rikers wrote:
Star nom
I lieks Ozz's taiko more as it is more fun and just sounds better~ :3
Also, uh..
where's the video?
Nowhere to be found in the song folder lol
Für das Rumgenerve wegen den Tags bekommst du als Trost ein Sternchen~~
Topic Starter
Moe moe kyun~eviLinco wrote:
Für das Rumgenerve wegen den Tags bekommst du als Trost ein Sternchen~~
http://www.mediafire.com/?tv97gqoyrsep3bn Try this? Not really sure if this is too low quality or too big. Look fines to me while testing. Uploaded to mediafire since you don't have to register to upload.Broetchen8441 wrote:
Removed since it was low-quality and too big... need someone for that.Rikers wrote:
Star nom
I lieks Ozz's taiko more as it is more fun and just sounds better~ :3
Also, uh..
where's the video?
Nowhere to be found in the song folder lol
Video offset, i'd say -80ms. Test around this area. About the mapping, seems solid for the ones that are done so a star from me.
Topic Starter
Thanks, added that one.merchat7 wrote:
http://www.mediafire.com/?tv97gqoyrsep3bn Try this? Not really sure if this is too low quality or too big. Look fines to me while testing. Uploaded to mediafire since you don't have to register to upload.
Video offset, i'd say -80ms. Test around this area. About the mapping, seems solid for the ones that are done so a star from me.
Meh seems like posting too short messages aren't allowed =p
Stuff stuff . . .stuff
Download: IOSYS - Danzai Yamaxanadu (Broetchen8441) [Nekoo's Conviction].osu
Stuff stuff . . .stuff
Download: IOSYS - Danzai Yamaxanadu (Broetchen8441) [Nekoo's Conviction].osu