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Valetine_old
Gute Map Broetchen :D
Soryboard musste aber noch ändern^^
Star^^
Tenshi-nyan
Ich schätze ma ihr habt das Storyboard einfach von der bereits ranked Danzai map geklaut?
Erm... das geht so aber nicht... habter wenigstens um Erlaubnis gefragt?
Zekira
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Topic Starter
Jenny

Tenshi-nyan wrote:

Ich schätze ma ihr habt das Storyboard einfach von der bereits ranked Danzai map geklaut?
Erm... das geht so aber nicht... habter wenigstens um Erlaubnis gefragt?
German statement: Das ganze ist nur als Übergangslösung für uns gewesen um das Mappen zu erleichtern, weil ohne undso... naja - Video wird auf jeden Fall noch mit reingebracht und das Storyboard entfernt, muss mich da nur einarbeiten^^
Und ja, auch die Tags hab ich teilweise übernommen, aber das sollte noch verständlich sein denk' ich :)

English statement: I took the original Storyboard for mapping and i'll remove it soon - just got to embed the video, should be done in near future. Yes, i also took the original tags, but that should be okay because the song is the same.
Don't worry Zekira, you're not bothered by anything xD
Zekira
Remove Touhou from tags since it's in the source
Topic Starter
Jenny

Zekira wrote:

Remove Touhou from tags since it's in the source
Should be done with the next update, added english song title to tags though.
Got a problem with the video at the moment: It's too large...30mb (and only has 480x360-resolution...) - anyone knows how to fix? [it's an .avi-file] - FIXED!
0SuperNova0
witzige map xD sternchen
Topic Starter
Jenny
Waiting for feedback and for Anonymus getting the normal-diff finished... want this to get done^^
Topic Starter
Jenny
[Hard]:

~2:15 "fixed" - has now more space

Added normal-diff!
Pereira006
hello~

Remove TAG !

Tag is just only who make diff for you

[Easy]

The offset is wrong Use this 11510 like same Normal and hard because this is perfect
And Slider Tick Rate is 1
If change Offset so Go to Timing > Resnapp All note that will better change bit pleasse use this
Go to File>Open Aimod look Spacing

On Easy you cannot lot Inconsistent spacing
Pleasse FIX all note and slider DON´T ignore Inconsistent spacing
Plasse fix this

Ho also use this


Because this is easy

[Normal]

00:11:167 (1) - Remove Slider and put note at 00:11:509 and 00:11:852
You cannot Put slider and note Behind BPM Never
Use this

This is same lot Inconsistent spacing like same Easy
Fix this Inconsistent spacing all note and slider



[Hard]

00:11:167 (1) - Remove note
Again lot Inconsistent spacing Fix pleasse

That all
don´t ignore lot Inconsistent spacing Pleasse you must fix this


good luck
Anonymus_old
I'll fix the spacing, but the slider at the beginning won't be removed. It depends on her vocals. Not on the drums. ^^
Railgunz_old
rlly sry for that bad easy map
noob was on work ^^"

anyway
changed offset
changed song setup
fixed all innocent spaces

aaand a bit more
Topic Starter
Jenny
- Fixed hard diff's spacing -
- Fixed easy diff's spacing [Railgunz] -
- Fixed normal diff's spacing [Anonymus] -
Hamuko
[General]
Tags: Kaeidzuka Phantasmagoria of Flower View Convictor Yamaxanadu Shikieiki Anonymus Railgunz Fate of Sixty Years
Add Teta when i post my diff ofc if i end up posting it :U No Judgement diff for you~

[Easy]
Fix BPM in the Easy diff~
BPM: 175

[Danzai]
00:12:881 (4) - Make it end in the white tick
00:16:995 (1) - ^
01:47:510 (1) - way too fast

Ugly diff imho :< Lacks lots of beats~

[Hard]
Slider speed is too low imo
Try to make some patterns
01:07:224 (3) - dat slider only fits Cirno's part :<
01:12:710 (3) - ^
01:24:024 (1) - Map this part instead of a long spinner?
01:41:681 - add a beat
01:58:652 (1) - Make it end at 01:59:852 -
02:00:881 - Add a beat
02:11:852 - ^
02:22:824 - ^
02:24:538 (1) - same as 01:07:224 (3) - ^
marshallracer
Hard :
irc mod (one slider fix, one spinner fix, one suggestion about circle)

Danzai :
- what Teta said
- 00:19:738 (4,5,6) - fix the spacing
- 02:01:910 (4,1) - ^
- 02:42:881 (1,2,3) - move them all two ticks earlier
- 03:04:310 (1) - too fast

Easy :
- what Teta said
- add spinner from 01:58:432 till 01:59:803
Mok
Map's isnt that bad, just try to keep it better. And aboslutely avoid that crappy overlaps in easy difficulty.
Topic Starter
Jenny
Looking for nice background, anyone haz an idea?
OnosakiHito
@Broetchen8441:
Darf ich bitte eine Taiko diff. für dich erstellen? :3
marshallracer

OnosakiHito wrote:

@Broetchen8441:
Darf ich bitte eine Taiko diff. für dich erstellen? :3
Sag ja, sag JA!!!
Ono's maps ... *sabber*
Topic Starter
Jenny
Hab' ich absolut nichts gegen, erhöht ja schließlich nur die Zielgruppe - kannst du gern machen :)

-> Taiko-diff announced
-> Insane-diff announced
ShanaTan
OnosakiHito
lol @ marshall_racer

Well, finished now the Taiko guest diff. Thank you for accepting it~ :)




Download: IOSYS - Danzai Yamaxanadu (Broetchen8441) [Ono's Taiko Oni].osu
Topic Starter
Jenny
Full submission - done

Me in the future (29.7.2011) says: You've got much to learn, young guy.
DarkDunskin
Baaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhh TT-TT
Ich biin zu späääääääääääääääääääääääääääääääääääääät, ich wollte auch ne taiko diff maaaacheeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeen :((
Dann tu mir den gefallen und adde OnosakiHito wenigstens in den Tags.
Ich liebe Shikieiki *star*
marshallracer

OnosakiHito wrote:

lol @ marshall_racer

Well, finished now the Taiko guest diff. Thank you for accepting it~ :)
so Oni <3
OzzyOzrock
If you don't mind... can you add my taiko diff too please? ><

Download: IOSYS - Danzai Yamaxanadu (Broetchen8441) [Ozzy's Taiko].osu
(holy crap, it has the same amount of notes as Ono... this was NOT done on purpose.. wow ;_;)

I made a BG for it too~


but if you don't add it, I understand ><

BrokenArrow
Nice one!
Both taiko-diffs are awesome *-*
star~
Hamuko

OzzyOzrock wrote:

If you don't mind... can you add my taiko diff too please? ><
Just because i'm mapping the same song and was going to ask you to map a taiko diff orz i think i should've submitted it already :<
Loctav
Loving both Taiko diffs.
~Star
OzzyOzrock
Since I'm making an Inner, please re-name mine to Ozzy's Oni
Terrornudel
Nekoo´s Conviction:
00:43:224 (6) - really nessesary?
00:46:652 (5,6) - imo dont fit to music
02:40:995 (2) - isn't really in a row
02:43:738 (2) - -- " --
02:47:510 (1,2) - -- " --


all in all: STARED!!
Topic Starter
Jenny
I finally chaged the BG-image, though i couldn't find a better one.
Cyril Scarlet
Danzai Danzai ~
Demmou
I think its well done. Don't like the anonymous one. But the others seems to be fine. Didn't found anymore mistakes. One star from me (=
Elly-chan
(GENERAL)
For the first few tags, PLEASE just use 'Shikieiki'.

Anonymus' Danzai -

Why Isn't it mapped at her very last vocal? I will fix - w-
Fixed combos and some note timings, Will supply my fixes saved as a different diff and the original so you can compare. Made patterns more even and playable while still sticking with Anonymus' Danzai original patterns. If you don't like a part you can fix.

Taikos -
Good. :3 I cant mod taikos LOL but they are good ;3

Easy -
Add appropriate kiai times that go with the other maps. I dont think it is rankable if it all is different, but im not sure. It just has none - w- Otherwise it's ok.

Other modes -
Look Fine To Me. :3

StarStar~

Download: IOSYS - Danzai Yamaxanadu (Broetchen8441) [Elly's Fixes].osu
BloodyDeath_old
wuah ha ha ha ha geile map ey superrrrrrrr ha ha ha :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted: :twisted:
p3n
[General]
Timing sounds OK to me but offset is definetely wrong (Big tick 1/1 too early). Change offset to 10138 for the sake of the metronome ;)

[Railgunz' Easy]
You should (!) use 0,80 as slider velocity. Otherwise everthing looks cluttered like hell and your notes overlap even in 1/2. This is NOT ok for an easy diff. You'll have to rearrange the whole map and check all the sliders as they will be too short after the change.

00:27:966 (X) - add note
00:31:395 (4) - end 1/1 earlier, add circle @00:33:452
00:36:195 (X) - add note
00:38:938 (X) - ^
00:39:966 (3) - end 1/1 earlier, add circle @00:41:680
00:49:909 (6,7) - come on that is just lazy. Why not follow the lyrics here? (easy-appropriate)
00:55:052 (1,2,1,2) - not placed properly (read: ugly), also replace 00:56:080 (2) with short 1x repeating slider to match lyrics
00:55:738 (1) - delete new combo
00:58:480 (X) - add note
00:58:823 (2) - I like that *cough* ;)
01:02:252 (2) - delete, use short 1x repeat slider from 01:01:909 - 01:02:252 and normal slider from 01:02:595 - 01:02:938
01:03:623 (3) - delete, use short 1x repeat slider from 01:03:623 - 01:03:623
01:27:966 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,1,1) - this part is pretty good but don't combo-spam it. It should look more like (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2)

The list would go on and on. Most of the objects don't follow anything. Map what you hear and emphasise important parts of the lyrics/melody and rhythm with your patterns. As long as you stay <three star in this difficulty you'll be fine. Try to make it enjoyable and less repetitive. Some things you shouldn't do in easy:
01:06:023 (1,2,3) - 1/2 sliders are ok. Never switch between 1x repeat and multi-repeat in this way. This is way too confusing for beginners.
01:50:595 (1) - snail-sliders are ok as long as they don't overlap anything. The beginning here is completely overlapping itself. Be sure to make the border of the slider visible. The 0,80 slider velocity I suggested will help to make up for the increased length of the slider.
01:58:480 (8) - don't use long 1/4 repeating sliders. Better don't use 1/4 at all in easy diffs. If it is completely unavoidable it might be OK but in this case a 1/2 slider is practicable.

[Anonymus' Danzai]
Pretty boring map as you often just circle-spam 1/1 beats. Spice it up a bit and follow what you actually hear in the song to make it more interesting and less repetitive. Also increase circle-size to at least match the [Hard].
00:16:995 (1,2) - spacing (there should definetely be no anti-jump here)
00:18:023 (2,3,4,5,6,1) - I like the switch between 0,8x and 1,0x spacing. BUT you should map everything before this point (and all the parts that sound this way) in 0,8x as well to make sense. If not fix the 0,8x to 1,0x as it would be a clear spacing error.
00:42:195 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - Never switch between following beat and melody inside one combo. It is confusing as hell - especially for a normal. Better follow the melody only here or follow the melody AND the beat (maybe too much for a normal) but don't ignore the melody if you map it 2 notes later in the same combo :o
00:36:880 (1) - clean up this slider. It doesn't need 12(!) sub-points. (02:29:680 (1) - didn't need 14 points...)
00:46:480 (6) - lazy. Better map the lyrics here.
00:59:166 (4,5) - delete, use short slider from 00:59:166 - 00:59:338 (white tick to red tick) and repeat 4x to match the song
01:33:452 (1) - spinner is way too short. Not 300-able with <375 /min. Needs to be at least double in lenght or you'll have to reduce Overall Difficulty by 3-4. Same at 02:50:252 (1).
01:47:166 (1) - start at 01:47:509 end at 01:48:709, add circle at 01:47:166
01:58:138 - useless timing section, delete
02:08:423 (5,6) - slider endging and circle on the same tick! orz
02:08:424 - delete timing section
02:08:766 - ^
02:31:395 (1) - too much overlap
02:38:595 (2) - ^
02:56:080 (1) - lazy
03:04:309 (1) - at least let it end at 03:05:509
03:27:280 (1) - doesn't fit at all here
03:37:223 (1,1,1,1,1,1) - don't combo spam, use one combo until the end. Also: weird beat mapping but maybe ok.

Just some examples. Map still needs a lot of work imo.

[Hard]
Use a higher slider velocity (1,2-1,4 maybe) and rearranged everything with 0,8x - 1,0x spacing. Use 1,3x - 1,5x for jumps where they fit to spice things up a bit. Check slider endings afterwards.
00:27:452 (X) - why do you leave out this sound here but map it before and after this? I suggest adding a circle.
00:32:938 (X) - ^
00:38:424 (X) - ^
00:52:310 (1,2,3,4,5) - I don't like the implementation of those 2x repeat sliders. Would be better to use 1x repeats and something else to keep the exact rhythm pattern.
00:55:052 (X) - add note
01:01:909 (X) - feels empty (add note)
01:02:081 (X) - ^ (maybe delete following (1) and use repeating slider for those three ticks)
01:11:509 (X) - add note
01:24:024 (1) - start at 01:25:224, end at 01:27:624. Map the free space.
01:33:795 - delete timing section (unused)
01:34:138 - delete timing section (unused)
01:57:795 (3) - split this and use a 1/4 repeating slider from 01:58:481 on. Either use a 1/2 repeating slider before or just map different.
02:02:595 (1) - not stacked properly (maybe don't stack at all)
02:10:310 (8) - not stacked properly
02:13:052 (1) - face this upwards as it looks ugly by half-overlapping 02:13:738 (2)
02:29:510 (3) - lazy :P come up with something interesting (alternating circle pattern?)
02:31:395 (1) - doesn't fit imo. Better map this properly.
02:33:795 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,1,2,1,2,3,1,2) - such an interesting part of the song and the mapping doesn't even come close. Maybe map the lyrics from singer and "chorus" equally but place them against each other, seperated by (reasonable) jumps.
02:51:281 - delete timing section (unused)
02:58:652 (X) - add note
03:04:310 (1) - end on big white tick and add note here
03:14:081 (1) - end on 03:18:024
03:20:081 (8) - use slider to match the song? (and fill the weird empty space)
03:23:167 (1) - ^
03:23:853 (1) - delete new combo
03:28:481 (X) - add note
03:28:995 (X) - this can be used!
03:35:853 (5) - not stacked properly
03:37:052 (X) - add note to match the beat-follow in the 03:37:224 (1,2,3,4)-combo, also take this note into the following combo (delete new combo at 03:37:224 (1))
03:39:024 (X) - add 1/4 slider with 3x repeat to match the beat pattern
03:39:452 (X) - add slider from red tick to big white tick to match the beat pattern

Some patterns could be done with more precision and overall more beautifully. Solid framework so far.

[Nekoo's Conviction]
00:33:795 (1) - picky. Slider has not the same angle as (2)
00:56:767 (4,5,6,7) - ugly spacing mess. place without gridsnap and consistent distance-spacing (0,2x?).
01:07:738 (5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16,17) - ^ (hold [Ctrl] to snap each note in plane every 45°)
01:26:938 - insert break time
01:29:338 (1,2,1) - not in line
01:32:081 (1,2) - what a massive jump :)
02:29:767 (2,3,4,5,6) - looks ugly and plays weird (change in speed). Maybe use 1x repeat sliders in row
02:31:652 (2) - not stacked properly (looks much worse than any stacking bug)
02:32:167 (4) - ^
02:32:338 (5,6,7) - same as 02:29:767
02:47:510 (1,2,1) - not in line
03:35:852 (3,4,5) - not stacked properly
03:37:567 (2,3) - ^

Definetely the most polished map in the set. I suggest shortening some of the longer streams by using 1/4 repeating sliders to reduce overall score or this map might not be rankable (depending on the mood of MAT/BATs). Try keeping it <14m


I can't mod Taiko :cry:


Still needs alot of work but I can see where this is going: ~star
Kyonko Hizara
:)
ziin
http://up.ppy.sh/files/danz.zip

Is this what you wanted?
Topic Starter
Jenny

ziin wrote:

http://up.ppy.sh/files/danz.zip

Is this what you wanted?
Mh... it's cut-off :/
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