katacheh wrote:

No Regret

00:28:315 (224) - 換成k感覺比較好 Changed :3!

00:46:333 (381,382,383,384,385,386,387) - ddk ddkd 換成 ddkdk kd (藍色那顆有高音) Changed :3! 幹猛欸 這都聽得出來www

┌00:48:998 - 加d
└00:49:170 - 加d ←聲音在這個點上 (或是換成別的樣式) Unchanged ;w;... 我這兩串的長度想要跟之前的一樣

┌01:00:131 (497,498,499) - ddk
└01:00:813 (501,502,503) - dkk Unchanged ;w;... 因為全都d的可以凸顯K 還有後面的三連也都是ddd

01:30:766 (779,780,781,782,783,784,785) - 換成kkdkddk Changed :3! 聽感讚

┌01:39:255 (856,857,858) - 也許從這邊開始dkk
├01:40:278 (865,866,867) - 換成kkk
└01:41:301 (874,875,876) - 換成dkk All Changed :3! 讚欸 我都沒發現XD

┌02:04:372 (1105,1106) - 換成kd
└02:04:886 (1111,1112) - ^ Changed :3!

02:30:200 (1384,1385) - 換成K K 因為02:30:885 (1388) - 比較低音Unchanged ;w;... 為了要凸顯最後的K, 前面都放D比較好

┌03:19:800 (300,301,302) - ddk (跟上面一樣的)
└03:20:486 (304,305,306) - dkk Unchanged ;w;... 同上

Inner oni

00:46:333 (336,337,338,339,340,341,342,343,344) - ddk dkd ddk 換成 ddkdk kd dk (同no regret) Changed :3!

┌00:48:998 - 加d (同no regret)
└00:49:170 - 加d Unchanged ;w;... 同上

┌01:00:131 (448,449,450) - ddk (同no regret)
└01:00:813 (452,453,454) - dkk Unchanged ;w;... 同上

┌01:27:166 (668) - 換成k 感覺比較高音
└01:28:537 (678) - 換成k ^ Changed :3!

┌01:39:255 (856,857,858) - 換成dkk (同no regret)
├01:40:278 (865,866,867) - 換成kkk
└01:41:301 (874,875,876) - 換成dkk Changed :3!

01:44:626 (821) - 換成d (讓這串和前面稍微不一樣?) Unchanged ;w;... 可是聽感一樣www

02:30:200 (1250,1251) - K K (同no regret) Unchanged ;w;... 同上

┌02:58:981 (107,108,109,110,111,112,113) - 反轉Ctrl+G
├02:59:670 (114,115,116,117,118,119,120) - ddkkddk
└03:00:360 (121,122,123,124,125,126,127) - 也反轉 Unchanged ;w;... 重音是擺在白線上喔 所以k放白線

03:11:432 - 加d Changed :3! 被你抓到了XD

┌03:19:800 (300,301,302) - ddk (同no regret)
└03:20:486 (304,305,306) - dkk Unchanged ;w;... 同上

Oni

┌01:27:166 (668) - 換成k (同Inner oni)
└01:28:537 (678) - 換成k Changed :3!

02:30:200 (1250,1251) - K K (同no regret) Unchanged ;w;... 同上

03:48:955 (2) - 換成d嗎;3 和inner oni一樣 Changed :3! 幹 我白癡XD

Muzu

02:17:836 (659,660,661,662) - ddd d (也許)
02:18:522 (663,664,665,666) - kkk k
02:20:579 (675,676,677,678) - ddd d
02:21:265 (679,680,681,682) - kkk k
02:23:322 (692,693,694,695) - ddd d
02:24:007 (696,697,698,699) - kkk k
02:24:693 (700,701,702,703) - ddd d
02:25:379 (704,705,706,707) - kkk k Unchanged ;w;... 這些沒差啦www

02:30:200 (730,731) - K K Unchanged ;w;... 同之前

Futsuu

02:30:200 (398,399,400,401) - K K D D Changed :3! 這個可以換 因為前面的難度真的沒什麼差

widescreen記得關一下 Nwolf說不用關喔w
聽到想睡了...XD 祝rank個

Backfire wrote:

[General]
I got tired of listening to this song so I'll just mod the other stuff later. I honestly will just assume the lower diffs have problems but I wouldn't notice them earlier. You can give me KD if you want, or wait until I check the rest lol Ayyy lmao XD ty <3

[Inner Oni]
02:08:229 - Ah, I just noticed this, if you read No Regret, you can see what I have to say about the kkkddd patterns. (I go backwards, sorry lol) lmao I started applying from no regrets as well Changed :3! Still applied anyway <3
02:42:364 - Discussed this in No Regret as well. Unchanged ;w;... Explained in no regret
I feel bad about not finding much but, I can't find much in either hard diff. Inner is not much different from No Regret, and that bothers me a little bit, but that's all. I was trying to avoid error in mapping consistency ;w;...

[No Ragretz]
00:18:886 - I think you could extend the stream, putting kats in the spaces you left open. Sounds good to me. Unchanged ;w;... I do realize that there are sounds in between, but I think this better emphasizes the violin o3o
01:05:515 (534,535) - flip these two, the sound it makes will become clear why I have suggested this Changed :3! Amazing suggestion, it sounds better af <3!
01:08:258 (566,567) - same Changed :3! Same
01:11:009 (598,599) - ^ Changed :3! ^
I see it in a lot of places, where you do the kkkddd in your stream, so if you do apply it, make sure to apply it there too.(02:06:857 - for example) Changed :3! ^
02:42:364 - There is like a drum sound here in the background, so kat? Unchanged ;w;... I think the 1/1 sounds better and emphasizes violin better as well, the sound at 02:40:993 was an improvise flow
That looks like all there is to me tbh. I could be more picky about some streams but no need to.

Fantazy wrote:

來自不明的M4M (?

由於

而

所以我就來摸了 去你媽的




((大誤 (╯‵□′)╯︵┴─┴

由於我不知道是小提琴還是中提琴 所以就當做提琴 >__________>

No Regret

00:05:341 (16,17,18) - 00:06:713 (24,25,26) - 來個下降play kkd . kdd 這樣 沒改;w;... 這邊全k是為了凸顯中間的D

00:46:849 - 這裡 重音放提琴是 kd kd kdk 或許改成 kddkddk _k 中間要不要空格或+d 就看你了DX 建議其他不糞的這個地方也改成這樣 已改ㄌ:3! 超讚

00:47:881 - 建議還是跟提琴吧 k_kdd_dkkdkdk__d__k_kkddk (對應ka之言 這裡跟之前的一樣我重復聽得覺得很不搭) 已改:3!

01:01:051 (504) - 這顆是故意距離遠一點的嗎? 從這裡開始被紅線搞昏頭 這是真的喔, 1/3

01:30:851 (781) - 這顆怎麼放k? :3 難倒是kata的旨意!!!!!!? 已改:3! 耳殘放錯

01:35:658 - 不知道怎麼會把這串放成這樣 但是ddkkddkk dkdkdkdkd dkkkdkkkd 這樣比較搭音 除非你是想爆星數DDX 沒改;w;...並沒有 我只是覺得一直狂用ddkkddk很無聊 而要是你把它放成50%來聽的話其實頗順的w

01:38:403 - 這裡開始kdd kdd kdd 後面依續階梯 感覺聽起來比較順 ((不要怪我DDX 01:42:068 (882,886) - 這兩科就delete 沒改;w;... 因為這樣才能凸顯每個3連的音差

01:41:812 - 既然前面都來個上階梯了這邊也來? 已改 :3! 好啦好啦 這邊我繼續樓梯
01:42:494 (887,888,889,890,891,892,893,894,895,896,897,898) - kdddkdddkddd
01:43:517 (899,900,901,902,903,904,905,906,907,908,909,910) - kkddkkddkkdd
01:44:540 (911,912,913,914,915,916,917,918,919,920,921,922) - kkkdkkkdkkkd 沒改;w;... 太重複的組合就不好玩了w 照樣可以開到50%去聽 其實頗有層次感
看起來真的會比較漂亮!!
01:45:580 - kkkkddk 沒改;w;... 要跟鼓聲跟拚單音的效果

01:53:143 (982,983,984,985,986) - kkkdk or kkdkk
01:53:829 (988,989,990,991,992) - kkddk 不換也好>_> 沒改;w;... 都不要www 我要跟鼓聲啦

02:25:379 - kdkkdkk or kdkdkkk 已改:3! 聽感不錯

02:30:200 (1386,1387,1388,1389,1390) - 其實最後K之前的兩科D已經滿凸顯的了ˊ 又是ka之言 不要咧~~~~~~

03:01:308 (128) - delete 03:01:049 - k k d d k 沒改;w;... 這樣感覺太空 有時候overmap打起來比較順


03:11:346 - 這裡對啥啥音來著????? 鼓+小提琴 >:3 再來一點overmap比竟是要換段落了

03:01:739 - to 03:19:400 - 該怎麼說.. 感覺有點不對調呢 :33 弄得比Inner Oni 難一點吧 EX:多點連擊 DX 我覺得還好qwq

Inner Oni

01:37:040 - 這串改個 沒改;w;...同No Regret
01:38:403 - 之後too 跟No Regret一樣~ 已改:3! 好啦 稍微修了一下

01:50:814 (869) - 01:51:337 (874) - k>d 講中文wwww

01:53:143 (888,889,890,891,892) - 01:53:829 (894,895,896,897,898) - 這個too 怎麼都跟no regret長一樣D: 跟鼓聲無誤

Oni

00:04:484 - 00:05:856 - 00:07:227 - 別空著? 沒改;w;... 是為了difficulty spread, 難度要稍微有區別

00:46:162 - 這裡的旋律後面都是3 3 3 3這樣 只有這裡就 2 2 ?? 轉折點啊 音明顯的不一樣

01:42:835 (658,659,660,661,662) - kdddk
01:43:858 (666,667,668,669,670) - kdkdk
01:45:060 (676,677,678,679,680) - kdkkd 沒改;w;... 我這三串都故意弄同色的就是為了讓Oni比較簡單化

03:50:101 - 這邊放個 kkkk(dxN個) 吧沒改;w;... 因為放了後面就一定要放1/4, 這樣子感覺對Oni結構太複雜

怎麼TM一堆紅線阿屎 超甲的!! 小犯犯表示想全部剪掉 ((誤

祝RK阿斯

Nepuri wrote:

M4M!

*Not all that important suggestion

No Regret

00:03:970 (8,9,10,11) - 1/3? It just sound much better than 1/4 kkk D, repeat for repetitions Changed :3! Can't believe that I didn't notice it XD
01:23:636 - i can definitely hear sound here, add a k? (sounds the same as 01:23:551 (689,690) - Unchanged ;w;... Since I'm trying to follow the drum there, and it flows better this way
Apart from that, the rest fits just fine, and plays just fine
Solid diff overall^^

Inner Oni

00:03:970 (7,8,9,10) - 1/3? Same as No Regret, repeat for repetitions Changed :3! As well
00:14:257 (84,85,86,87,88,89,90,91,92) - *** - I dont know why, but i dont feel this stream fitting with the rest, the k at 00:14:686 (89) - sounds quite off maybe make 89 d and 90 k? sounds better for me atleast :/ Unchanged ;w;... Since it's the same sound as 00:09:115
00:21:457 (144) - I can hear a cymbal crash here, make it a finisher? Unchanged ;w;... Because there are many other spots which also have the same sound, but I'm not able to add finisher due to some rules, and this is the only spot that is feasible, but since it is the only one, it would look weird
00:57:859 (430,431,432,433,434,435,436,437) - Same musical structure as 00:42:379 (306,307,308,309,310,311,312,313,314,315) - Violin sounds still pretty dominant at that spot for me, emphasize it there again? Changed :3!

Oni

00:03:970 (7,8,9,10) - blah blah 1/3 :3, repeat for repetitions Changed :3!
01:03:989 - to 01:14:957 - uuuuuu I just removed all the d's you put to see how the k's look like on their own, they dont seem to fit the violin all that much and it sounds kinda disconnected, i suggest a lil remap of that section? Changed :3! The first part seem fine since it was following the guitar sound in the background, the second part was one 1/4 off, so I fixed it

Muzukashii

._. It fits all pretty well, nothing much to say :dissapointinmoddingskill: ayyy lmao

Futsuu

Seems all fine to me, but i think some combos are a bit too long for example 01:34:287 (235,236,237,238,239,240,241,242,243,244,245,246,247,248,249,250,251,252,253,254,255,256,257,258,259,260,261,262,263,264,265,266,267,268,269,270,271,272,273,274,275,276,277,278,279) - its way too long for even a futsuu this hard, it could exhaust the player with such a large combo, please consider breaking this up Changed :3!

Kantan

Simple enough, i dont think nitpicking a single note will make a difference.
My general impression of this that you use a LOT of finishers that actually lead to the fact that 30% of the map might be finishers lol.
I suggest you just reconsider the finishers because they are way too much in proportion to other notes Changed :3! Greatly reduced the amount of finishers

Very solid map, very short mod (Im sorry ;w;)

Have a Star! Good luck ranking this! :3

1. 00:09:800 - you can add kat here for closer gap to futsuu and this looks good flows (00:09:115 - has triple 1/1 and 00:11:857 - this single note for "little break" then 00:13:229 - present kinda hard pattern for this and 00:15:972 - back to the "little break")
2. 00:18:029 - add d for closer gap as above
3. 00:30:715 - same as the first, add k here
4. 00:35:172 - same as the second
5. 00:52:171 - personally i prefer to follow the drum instead of melody, maybe you can move it to 00:52:340 - ? to easier to hit as well
6. 01:03:346 - add big kat here ? same as main reason of the first
7. 01:34:972 - add d here ? this looks too blank not like futsuu which is kinda dense
8. 01:37:380 - same as above
9. starting from 02:26:074 - to 02:33:950 - i think you should make more dense since futsuu has many motes here
10. 02:46:821 - i think it's kinda hard for beginner (just personal opinion @_@), and to differentiate with futsuu
11. 02:49:050 - add a don here ? for gap i guess
12. 03:01:394 - add a kat here ? same as above
13. 03:22:657 - same as 01:03:346
14. from 03:23:714 - to 03:41:527 - should be more dense as 02:26:074 - to 02:33:950
15. 03:50:101 - make a slider to 03:51:129 - instead of blank ?

Nishizumi wrote:

Hi sand o/ m4m here

[General]

uncheck widescreen support to all diffs ??? NO >:3
the bg must be 1366 x 768 Changed :3! Ayyy lmao, nice catch
02:37:239 - wtf this volume change, here is still sounds loud bruh. delete this pls
why 25% volume to the end spinner ? the violin sounds clearly too loud Changed :3! >w>
01:38:403 - this kiai should be with redline, 176bpm and 3/4 metronome and then add 173bpm redline 4/4 metronome at 01:45:927 - by checking omit barline Changed :3! Nice catch, GG

[Kantan]

i think this OD could be 3.5 for well structured (decreased by 0.5 from no regret) Changed :3! Though, might change it back later due to how inconsistent the rhythm is

1. 00:09:800 - you can add kat here for closer gap to futsuu and this looks good flows (00:09:115 - has triple 1/1 and 00:11:857 - this single note for "little break" then 00:13:229 - present kinda hard pattern for this and 00:15:972 - back to the "little break") Changed :3! Great idea again.
2. 00:18:029 - add d for closer gap as above Changed :3! Might change it back later if it becomes too hard
3. 00:30:715 - same as the first, add k here Changed :3! This seems fine to me
4. 00:35:172 - same as the second Unchanged ;w;... I don't think there's a clear sound there
5. 00:52:171 - personally i prefer to follow the drum instead of melody, maybe you can move it to 00:52:340 - ? to easier to hit as well Unchanged ;w;... I really think this emphasizes the sounds much better
6. 01:03:346 - add big kat here ? same as main reason of the first Changed :3!
7. 01:34:972 - add d here ? this looks too blank not like futsuu which is kinda dense Unchanged ;w;... I wanted a lil break before the build up
8. 01:37:380 - same as above Changed :3! With a bit of my own twist
9. starting from 02:26:074 - to 02:33:950 - i think you should make more dense since futsuu has many motes here Unchanged ;w;... I think the best a kantan can do in this part is by following the emphasis on the piano sounds
10. 02:46:821 - i think it's kinda hard for beginner (just personal opinion @_@), and to differentiate with futsuu Unchanged ;w;... I think it's fine, since irregular rhythms unavoidably has to occur sometimes
11. 02:49:050 - add a don here ? for gap i guess Unchanged ;w;... Not a clear sound here
12. 03:01:394 - add a kat here ? same as above Changed :3!
13. 03:22:657 - same as 01:03:346 Unchanged ;w;... If I put that note there, I would need to put many other notes to make it seem complete, which would make it too hard
14. from 03:23:714 - to 03:41:527 - should be more dense as 02:26:074 - to 02:33:950 Changed :3! Not much tho, because it is getting close to 2star lol
15. 03:50:101 - make a slider to 03:51:129 - instead of blank ? Changed :3! Nice suggestion

[Futsuu]

i think this OD could be 4 for well structured (decreased by 0.5 from no regret) Changed :3!

will continue this tomorrow (maybe) since i'm busy with my rl okay gl qwq...

cdhsausageboy wrote:

This song is making my ears pregnant, help ;w; Ikr ;w;w;w;w;w;w;
Just modding the lower diffs since you mentioned in pm that those diffs are more problematic (baka ;w;)
Almost everything is just suggestions/nitpicking since most of the patterns feel really natural to play for me :3 most ayyy lmao

General

1. BAKA USE AIMOD NEXT TIME. There are a lot of metadata inconsistencies which will be pointed in the respective diffs CHANGED QWQ
2. your bg is 1 px off (1365x768) *runs* Changed :3! in Nishi's mod

Kantan

1. You didn't use the Unicode title here D: qwqqqqqqq
   
   baka

   
2. 00:25:572 - Change this to a don since the pitch here is lower than the previous notes? I mean you have a don at 00:28:315 whose pitch is even higher than this note so why not owo Changed :3! owo
3. 00:45:474 (48,49,50) - dkd fits the violin more imo. Also in this way the final don and the next kat will fit the rising pitch :3
4. 00:56:486 (70,71,72) - ^
5. 00:48:225 (53,54,55) - Also pitch. This should probably be dkd or dkk ;w;
6. 00:59:218 (75,76,77) - ^
7. 01:32:140 (126,127,128) - ^
8. 03:07:910 (43,44,45) - ^ Changed all :3! All pitch related things are changed <3!
9. 01:10:838 (90,91,92,93) - Maybe delete 01:11:352 and move 01:11:866 to 01:11:523? The violin uses a different rhythm than the patterns before so having something different in the patterns too to show that? Changed :3! Very nice suggestion
10. 02:37:066 - The big don doesn't really sound good here D: Try removing it and start the spinner here instead? Changed :3!
11. 03:43:244 (98) - imo changing this to a small kat will emphasize the "all small kats then all big kats" pattern that you're going for here Changed :3! Nice idea
12. 03:31:573 (83,84) - dk for consistency with 01:22:865 (109,110) since they're literally the same lol Changed :3! But the latter due to SR issue
    
    That's all I guess. This map does a really, really good job of simplifying the really intense violin into a Kantan, it's just that the music itself is really irregular and doesn't really call for a Kantan :< :<.... ikr

Futsuu

1. You have an extra red line at 02:31:597 which isn't in any other diff, you might wanna delete it? Changed :3! baka wwww
2. 00:25:229 - For some reason deleting this note sounds better to me :3 Changed :3! Nice suggestion
3. 00:31:915 - ayyyyy I know you're leaving this note blank on purpose but it's inconsistent with 00:37:400 and 00:40:145 etc. which have it mapped :< Changed :3! Fixed it in a different way
4. 00:45:818 (105,106,107) - Consider changing this to dkd? The violin doesn't really go the same way as the previous ddk so having some variations to reflect it would be really cool! Unchanged ;w;... I think this sounds fine as it is
5. 00:56:829 (138,139,140) - ^ ^
6. 00:57:516 (141,142,143,144,145,146) - ayyyyyyyyyyyyy why does this have completely different color arrangment with 00:46:505 (108,109,110,111,112,113) ? rip consistency ;w; Changed :3! Well spotted wwww
7. 01:05:344 (161,162,163) - Same as the issue mentioned in Kantan at 01:10:838 Changed :3!
8. 01:05:858 (162,163) - ^ ^
9. 01:05:858 (162,163) - ^, but I'd just move 01:11:180 to 01:11:523 Changed :3! Great suggestion
10. 01:34:287 - Changing this to a kat sounds better for some reason ;w; Changed :3!
11. 02:00:686 - The music isn't really in 3/2 so the notes are actually offbeat to the music :< Try deleting 02:01:029 and move 02:00:514 to 02:00:686 ? Changed :3!
12. 02:37:066 - Same as Kantan Changed :3!
13. 02:44:764 - owo Delete this note? The music is in a calmer part so the background drums doesn't really need to be mapped @@ (also pls this is just a futsuu ;w;) Changed :3!
14. 03:23:714 to 03:42:917 - This whole part feels a little sloppy while playing tbh, the large number of large notes (heh) just seems a little unnatural to the whole map :< I liked the way you mapped 01:14:957 to 01:25:966 (notice the lack of mods in that part? ) so yeah maybe try having something similar to it instead of the big notes+1/2 difficulty spike you have here ;w; Changed :3! I never realized this XD
15. 03:43:244 - Same as Kantan Changed :3! Still a great suggestion
16. 03:50:101 - You don't have this note in Kantan, Muzu and Oni and inconsistency sucks, change pls (runs) Changed :3! [/color]
    
    idk if this is the norm in current Futsuus but doesn't this Futsuu have too much 1/2s? ;w; Kantan only has a couple of 1/1s and the difficulty spike simply felt too big for me. Well they do play fine but yeah, just pointing out the uneven spread here
    

Muzukashii

• 
  Some notes that can be deleted to provide enough rest between 1/4 patterns! ...just some minor suggestions feel free to ignore lol
  00:19:229 00:29:429 Changed :3! Baka formatting tho XD

1. 00:10:486 - I know you're following the cymbal clash but the big note here feels really random here while playing lol (since the cymbal will be covered by the loud hitsound anyway), maybe have a small kat here? 00:13:229 feels fine though since it indicates a change in pattern
2. 00:15:972 - ^ Changed :3! Removed all finishers in that section
3. 00:20:943 - Having this filler note here seems to weaken the impact of the following violin (which imo isn't a good thing), maybe delete this note? Unchanged ;w;... Had to stay consistent with later patterns
4. 00:36:372 and 00:36:457 - After so many mods to tell you to reduce notes, a kat feels nice in these two spots owo Changed :3! owo
5. 01:06:372 - Move this note to 01:06:286 since its the same as 01:09:029 ? ;w; Changed :3! Well spotted
6. 01:37:210 - This part doesn't really needed to be left blank imo, if players can handle the 1/4 I guess this part won't bother them too lol
7. 01:48:732 (519,520,521,522) - ...This pattern feels kinda weird while playing due to the sudden BPM change lol Maybe delete the kats in the middle to make it less confusing for beginners? Changed :3! Very true
8. 02:37:066 - Same as Kantan and Futsuu Changed :3!
9. 02:50:078 (41,42,43,44,45) - Hmmmmm try following the melody instead by having 1/3 kkkk at 02:50:078 (delete that extra note ;w;) Since you used 1/3 in some parts before, I don't really see the reason for ignoring them here now =w= Changed :3! Nice suggestion
10. 03:45:814 (19,20,21,22,23,24,25,1,2,3,4) - What happened to the cool big notes in Kantan and Futsuu QAQ Changed :3! wwwww
    
    Seriously though, despite the points mentioned above, this Muzu is really fun to play! While some parts might use some tweaking, I really liked some parts (the main chorus kiai for example) 给个赞=w=b <3333

don
sorry for the wait ;w; Good luck ranking this awesome song and map!

1. 00:20:686 - i think you should delete this since it looks similar as oni (but only different color)
2. 00:22:066 - same as above
3. 00:23:429 (88,93) - same thing ^
4. 00:26:172 - ^ ;w;
5. 00:32:343 - i think this include like above
6. 00:42:036 - forgot to add finish ? i think it's similar as 00:40:661 (170,171,172,173) - and lower diffs did the same
7. i think you should delete all triplets (change to 1/2) in 2nd and 3rd kiai, like the first point. except 00:47:365 - 00:49:600 - 00:58:362 - since they're more powerful than other triples as you did
8. 00:51:319 - move to 00:50:975 - follow the violin very well
9. 00:53:058 - add finish if you do the same at 00:42:036
10. 00:57:687 - add a kat here ? even futsuu has a note here
11. 01:10:574 - it's unnecessary to improved a note here. delete pls ;w; even oni didn't do 1/4 here
12. 01:13:323 - same thing ^
13. 01:16:007 - 01:17:457 - 01:21:579 - 01:22:951 - 01:24:494 - same issue as the first
14. for the 4th and 5th kiai, same as the 2nd and 3nd, delete all triplets (change to 1/2) except 01:31:280 - 01:42:834 - 01:43:857 - 01:44:886 - reason same
15. 01:30:594 - add a kat ? same as 00:57:687 -
16. 01:49:800 - delete this and 01:50:302 - ? for more variation (since it looks like 1/2 1/2 1/4 1/4)
17. 01:57:257 - forgot to add finish ? for more emphasize like futsuu
18. 02:00:000 - same as above
19. 02:05:486 (594,595,596,597,598,599) - would better if change to D-d-d---K-k-k instead of triplets imo
20. 02:08:299 - and 02:08:914 - same as above and the next two like this
21. 02:37:239 - unused greenline, delete pls bakasand
22. 02:46:135 - would be better if you delete this so here is even circle from 02:45:193 - to 02:47:335
23. 02:48:021 (27,32) - big recommended for me to change these to small kat, the snares sounds stronger than other sound. also, variation color is easier to hit instead of one color continuously imo
24. 02:50:598 - delete this ? 1/3 in muzu was a bit weird i guess. maybe delete this for easier 1/3. 02:50:776 - is more emphasizing if you delete here too
25. 03:01:910 - lel delete this plz, even oni didn't have a note here
26. 03:03:281 - same as above
27. 03:04:653 - ^
28. 03:07:396 - same ^
29. 03:10:398 - move to 03:10:570 - keep the consistency. many patterns had a single note before hitting a triplet
30. delete all triplet (change to 1/2) in all 8th kiai except 03:06:881 - 03:09:281 - 03:10:311
31. 03:19:800 (187,188,190,191) - change to small don ? like you did in oni XD
32. 03:27:549 (20,24) - delete these ? these triplets sounds similar as oni but different color
33. 03:38:525 (73,77) - same as above
34. highly recommended to add a don at 03:46:157 - 03:46:672 - 03:47:357 - 03:47:872 - and a big kat at 03:48:214 - to make more dense than 03:43:244 -
35. 03:50:101 - add slider instead of blank ? baka ;w;

Nishizumi wrote:

Hi again sand o/ here is 2nd mod with only futsuu (i'm not sure i can mod muzukashii, since it looks too hard (and hard to mod for me) and beside it, i'm still busy with my rl )

ok here we go (no kd)

[General]

01:55:886 - unused greenline ? delete pls to all diffs ;_; Changed :3! All deleted ;w;...
02:37:239 - why the volume still 25% you baka ;w; i think reduced by 5-10% is much better (e.g. start from 02:37:066 - still 80%, 02:37:759 - 70% volume, 02:38:453 - this redline 60% volume and the last one at 02:39:123 - 50% volume. 02:39:793 - can be back to 80% or maybe 70% if you still want 02:45:278 - this green line stay here since this greenline is unused (again as above you baka ;w;) if you do 175bpm redline with 80% volume lol) Changed :3! XD Everything is 80% now, that greenline was used for resetting 0.75x into normal speed for higher diffs

[Futsuu]

00:09:800 (11,13) - can be delete for easier futsuu, for better gap to kantan and muzu as well
00:12:543 (17,19) - same as above
00:15:286 (23,25) - ^ Changed all :3!
00:17:857 - delete this ? looks similar as muzu Changed :3! Deleted some other stuffs as well
00:23:515 (45,47) - same as the first Changed :3!
00:29:686 - why is this one only have a big note ? while muzu or kantan haven't Changed :3!
00:40:317 - add a kat here ? to emphasize the violin Unchanged ;w;... I think a break better emphasizes the up coming finishers
02:00:686 - did you forget to add finish here ? Changed :3!
02:03:943 - maybe you can add kat here or add don at 02:03:257 - (this looks similar like futsuu with 1/1 quintuplet) Unchanged ;w;... I think it looks better atm
02:06:686 - delete this ? even muzu doesn't have a note here and kantan is too blank, maybe for minimize gap between kantan
02:09:429 - same as above
02:12:172 - ^
02:14:914 - same ^ Changed :3! All applied, nice catch
02:42:193 - delete this pls ;w; i think in slow part should be improved only at 02:41:164 (3,4) even muzu doesn't have a note here Changed :3!
02:50:598 - i think here must be separated before going to kiai, i mean only triplet with 1/2 (02:50:078 (25,26,27) - ) and delete 02:50:598 Changed :3! With a bit of my own variation
02:52:809 - add kat here ? to differentiate with kantan Changed :3!
02:56:238 (41,42,43,44,45,46,47,48) - change these to D d d d k k k k for better structure and flows ? Changed :3! Nice suggestion
03:45:814 - delete this for consistent with 03:43:080 - ? Changed :3!
starting from 03:45:986 - to 03:48:043 - i think it's not ethic for futsuu player to hit big kats with 1/2 2 plets. just personal opinion it's too hard, highly recommend to remove all finisher @_@ Changed :3! Removed all of the d before it

as i said above, i don't know i can mod your muzu or not okay ;w; still looking forward to it tho
fucking bpm change, it's confusingjk good luck sand XD

iloveyou4ever wrote:

Hi
Sorry for late mod ><

[General]

Please disable widescreen support :3
STOP SAYING THIS, I"M NOT GONNA DO IT

[Kantan]
02:04:629 - change to d Unchanged ;w;... Inconsistent, and sounds weird, also the original ver was fine

02:06:172 - add k here because of the guitar sound? Unchanged ;w;... I left gaps on purpose in all of those spots for break, this is kantan

03:26:100 - change to k to consistent with 01:17:370 - Changed :3!

03:37:067 - ^ Changed :3!

[Futsuu]
00:26:772 - I think better remove this...1/2 here is a bit weird Unchanged ;w;... Doesn't seem like a valid reason, nor does it sound REALLY weird

01:54:172 - remove this to emphasis the next five finisher Unchanged ;w;... Might be too hard for beginners to read

02:02:743 - 轉做d,因為d由01:55:886 - 一直在貫穿每個小節的第一拍 Changed :3! 抓得不錯

02:43:907 - change like this? http://puu.sh/rZkBW.jpg Unchanged ;w;... Because you can hear the drum sound starts at 02:44:593

[Muzukashii]
00:17:857 - change to k? Unchanged ;w;... Inconsistent with 00:18:543

00:21:457 - I think no heavy main beat here,maybe remove finisher Unchanged ;w;... Clearly following the cymbal clash in the background

00:27:200 - change this and next note to finisher,seems that 00:26:943 - 00:27:457 these three notes emphasis the music. Unchanged ;w;... Usually I wouldn't have put any finisher at any of those 3 notes, but I put it at the first note as a section marker

00:38:772 - add d here...I think it's empty here Unchanged ;w;... Without it, it better emphasizes the ddd following

00:50:975 - add d here and remove the next note Unchanged ;w;.... If you break it down, d k and k d is to follow the drum sound in the background, then later I follow the violin sound

00:58:704 - remove this note...好像太密了;w; Unchanged ;w;... 還好;w;

02:40:993 - can't listen music here,and it looks weird,remove it Unchanged ;w;... Improvised mapping, remember, taiko is a drum which is a percussion

02:47:507 - ^ Changed :3! 不錯

03:09:624 - change to d to emphasis next note Unchanged ;w;... The pitch is going up tho

[Oni]
00:21:457 - like Muzukashii Unchanged ;w;... Like Muzukashii

00:36:457 - remove this Unchanged ;w;... This note better emphasizes the note following k

00:40:403 - violin sound is quite significant here,add k here Unchanged ;w;... I think having two triplets here seem a lil confusing, or just not aesthetically pleasing

00:48:225 - low pitch,change to d Changed :3!

00:59:218 - ^ Changed :3!

01:26:051 - no drum sound here,remove this Unchanged ;w;.... Violin pls

02:18:522 - change to kkdkk according to the pitch

02:21:265,02:24:007,02:25:379 - ^ Unchanged ;w;... I think this plays and sound better

02:28:988 - 有鼓聲o.o Unchanged ;w;... 可是我想要有固定的break o.o

03:24:481 - change to k seems better? Unchanged ;w;... I feel like emphasizing certain k's makes this part sound better

[Inner Oni]
00:27:115 - this has the same pitch as 00:27:372 - ,change to d seems better Unchanged ;w;... I think this gives it more variation, and it's also more aesthetically pleasing

00:40:403 - add a note here Unchanged ;w;... Because if that one has a note, and 00:40:575 doesn't have one (finisher issue) then it would seem very odd

00:49:170 - change to kd(1/4) Changed :3! Nice

01:19:265 - 這裡突然轉做kkd很怪...我覺得維持d k ddk這種pattern比較好 Unchanged ;w;... 我覺得聽起來還不錯 而且有變化比較好

01:26:823 -, 01:28:194 - 這些地方有鼓聲,加一個音會不會比較好? Unchanged ;w;... 要凸顯小提琴的單音

01:49:717 - 01:50:217 - 這2個轉做kkkkd
可以突出跟01:50:727 - 這裡音高的差別 Changed :3! 不錯

02:31:571 - 不轉做D?維持著d k ddk這個pattern Unchanged ;w;... 小提琴高音 還有為什麼都變中文了www

03:37:410 - 我認為可以多一點變化(例如第三個把 d kdddk轉成第二種pattern) Unchanged ;w;... 無傷大雅 而且打起來很順

03:46:586 - remove this and add k at 03:46:757 - Changed :3!

譜面很有趣,很多不同類型的pattern
而且consistency也做得不錯,只是有一點小問題而已
給1粒kudos <3
祝rank

Alepat wrote:

[General]
· An excellent mapset! I love your map Tyvm <3!
· I noticed a error in the timing, you can ignore me as it can only be mine okay .w.

[Futsuu]
00:31:400 (53) - Why this is not d? Because it is quite a high pitch :3
00:46:505 (92,93,94,95,96,97) - I think this pattern can work better: d k d (spacing) d d K
00:57:516 (125,126,127,128,129,130) - ^^ Applied both :3! Sounds nice
01:45:233 (253) - Change this to d Unchanged ;w;... Following the drum sound, and this sounds fine


[Oni]
00:31:400 (186) - and 00:31:743 (187) - Change both notes to d Changed :3! Applied the second one, not the first one due to the same reason as Futsuu


[Inner Oni]
00:31:400 (222) - Change this to d Unchanged ;w;.... You know why

[No Regret]
00:31:400 (254) - Change this to d Unchanged ;w;.... You know why

Good luck #Sandism!

Arrival wrote:

Hello

[Kantan]

00:35:172 - Feels very empty without a note here It is because the notes in this section are mainly to follow the violin sounds, which there isn't any there .w.
01:59:143 - 02:00:514 - 02:01:886 - Add notes at these spots maybe ? Unchanged ;w;... This would cause inconsistency with previous patterns those are similar, and I think this might be too dense for kantan
03:45:643 - Add a d here imo Unchanged ;w;... It is to help emphasize the finishers better as well to reduce density

[Futsuu]

00:11:857 (15,21) - I really think you should change these two in dons, a bit of diversity would be better, and it would fit well Changed :3! Nice suggestion
00:38:257 (72) - Add a d here ? Unchanged ;w;... It's quite a high pitch
01:08:772 (152) - Move this to 01:08:601 - and add a note at 01:09:115 - ? And maybe do the same after ? Unchanged ;w;... This is fitting atm, it would also make it too dense if I add those
02:43:907 (8,9,10,11) - Instead of this, what about this Unchanged ;w;... This seem like an overmap and doesn't emphasize each sound well enough

[Muzukashii]

02:43:735 (10,11,12,13) - What about ^
03:51:358 (3) - Imo this is very weird but you can let it Changed :3! lmao fine, it does look weird

[Oni]

00:10:657 (39,40,41) - I would change it, it doesnt fit well with the other kkd that come after this one. For exemple what you did after is good with ddd Unchanged ;w;... Because it's higher pitch than the ddd, and this helps to show the differences
01:09:029 (424,425) - What about a kddk quadruplet or a dkddk (starting from 01:08:944 - ) here ? Would be pretty good imo to emphasize this part. Changed :3!
01:19:779 (500,501,502,503) - Instead of ddd k try ddk d Unchanged ;w;... The pitch or sound didn't differ from the previous ddd k
02:00:943 (791) - Same here,what about a kddk or a dkddk starting from here 02:00:857 - Changed :3! As well

[Inner Oni]

01:03:989 (467,480,493,506,519,532,545) - I understand that you maybe dont want to confuse players in lower diffs but these really need finishers imo Changed :3! Can't believe I missed that XD
01:58:629 (939) - ^ Same for this part Changed :3! Same XD

[No Regret]


Im sorry but I dont have anything to say on this diff xD Very well mapped ! Ayyy nice <3

Good luck

Aldwych wrote:

Hi S a n d
As promised my mod.
Also as said, i'll mod 3 diffs in order to be as fair as possible (i'll also do testplay for Oni and Inner)

[General]

ok

[Katan]

00:09:115 (9,10,11) - i think we have some problems here compared to 00:13:229 (13,14,15,16) - both could be ok but i think even if the second one is harder to follow, it is also the most accurate one to use. So i recommend you to do kk . k . k for 00:09:115 aswell Unchanged ;w;... Because the sound for the pattern in 00:13:229 is more distinct in comparison

00:50:803 (62) - I don't think it is the most accurate place compared to 00:50:975 - which also have guitar background sound. Changed :3! though was originally following the drum sounds

00:52:679 (66) - May be odd but i would add k to keep fair spacing for 3/2 (even if the bpm changes make the fair not really fair in the end). I don't get it .w.

01:03:989 (87,88,89,90) - 01:09:458 (92,93,94,95,96,97,98,99,100) - Why do you use different rythm patterns when it is the same melody? Consistency D:
Unchanged ;w;.... Variation in background....
03:05:167 (39,40,41) - 03:07:910 (44,45,46) - I'm actually curious why you didn't went for dkd which sounds more accurate tbh.Unchanged ;w;... They sound and play fine anyway =w=

03:11:346 (51,52,53,54) - A bit yolo but i would go for finishers here for more impact. Unchanged ;w;.... Some might be concerned about too hard for beginners to read

Really impressive, normally i don't really like when kantan goes for tricky rythm, but it goes well with the song. On the other hand i thnk (and this is a good example) we (as mappers) don't use enough sliders for intense drumrolls and they are not punitive to the new players plus they gave them some burst moments. At some points we could also have sliders around 01:03:989 (87) - or even 00:34:486 - and 00:39:286 Ty <3! I just think that sliders are trash on osu XD If it's the same slider as Taiko no Tatsujin one, I would definitely use them a lot more

[Futsuu]

For the amount of notes, i think you can raise the HP by one. Changed :3! Why not

00:26:600 (40,41) - Wat? at 00:24:543 - and 00:25:229 - i would understand, but not here. Changed :3! Not sure why I left that there XD

01:20:636 - Add d? Seems ok for the battery. Unchanged ;w;... Didn't seem necessary imo

02:08:229 (308) - 02:10:972 (317) - etc... How about triple d to be on the same page as the violons represented by the triple k just after? Unchanged ;w;... This was done on purpose to decrease the density and add more breaks

03:25:418 (130,143) - & 03:36:382 - & 03:41:013 - I would add k to follow more the violin. Unchanged ;w;... Again, worried about density issues

Nice one. Overall it's pretty solid and consistent, But i think you'll have to buff becase the gap with muzu look at first sight really far. Ty again <3! There's a lil gap, but I think it'll pass >wO

[Muzukashii]

00:29:686 (114,115,116,117,118,119,120,121,122,123,124,125) - This pattern look a bit long and messy, i would split it (00:30:543 (119) - ?). Changed :3! Helps to pull the gap as well

00:35:429 (144,146) - Change to d for some contrasts? The music tends to a bit. Unchanged ;w;... Did this on purpose, didn't want the patterns to get too complex

02:16:807 (633,634,635,636,637,638) - 02:19:207 (647,648,649,650,651,652,653,654) - 02:21:950 (663,664,665,666,667,668,669,670,671) - Some unconsistencies visible by the triples are present, tbh you should uniformize your triples as the same place as 02:21:950 which sounds the best of 3. Changed :3!

03:43:586 (9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - 03:45:986 (20,21,22,23,24,25,26,27,1,2,3) - why is it so different? Just a cooler emphasized ending .w.

Noice. Thonk you

[Oni / Inner]

These will be just feedbacks from my tesplay



First try Oni

I really liked it, the fails are on some complex patterns i'm not used to (eg 01:25:608 (538,539,540,541,542,543,544) - 00:38:600 (235,236,237,238,239,240,241) - ), the triples were passed without troubles even tho they might not be adapted for an Oni but w/e. Cool :3c



First try Inner

Hopefully, the end wasn't hard which gave me wy enough point to pass it (i was uncertain i admit haha). Nothing much to say, i enjoyed it. Maybe some complex pattern i didn't understand (eg 01:14:266 (564,565,566,567,568,569,570,571,572) - where 01:14:783 (570) - deserves a d). I think the pattern sounds fine without the d, and also helps to emphasize the drum kdkdk before it :3c

01:34:287 (719,720,721,722,723,724,725,726,727,728,729,730,731,732,733,734,735,736,737,738,739,740,741,742,743,744,745,746,747,748,749,750,751,752,753,754,755,756,757,758,759,760,761,762) - ;_; the 1/4 brokes me (especially the first one). 01:36:356 (739) - not d? Because 01:35:658 is also k :3

01:42:494 (797,798,799,800,801,802,803,804,805,806,807) - 01:43:517 (808,809,810,811,812,813,814,815,816,817,818) - 01:44:540 (819,820,821,822,823,824,825,826,827,828,829,830,831) - why these one are mapped differently (i mean 3k and 2k at the start, why not the same)? Variation, else it's boring .w.

Overall that's an impressive music to map. Gl hf for rank well deserved some stars.

zigizigiefe wrote:

No Regret

00:11:772 (63,64) - That two note makes me distracted.Those are different part but two don note.Seems weird or I am noob xD I don't really see a problem, nor is there are convincing reasoning :3c
00:14:515 (95,96) - Same above ^
00:17:343 (128) - Why that's don?It's not even bass voice. Following drum sound in this section clearly as you could see in the kkd and dkkkd following by
00:27:115 (211,212,213,214) - dk dk better Changed :3!
00:36:029 (290,291) - Ctrl + g Doesn't flow well
00:42:551 (349) - Again..Why that's don?It's not even bass voice. Used to emphasize the k in dd"k"d better
00:54:601 (445,446) - Ctrl + g Unchanged ;w;... Been using k d k in every other parts, don't see a problem
01:19:522 (674,675) - Same above Changed :3!
01:22:094 - why you ignore this note? Because there isn't a drum sound there01:22:008 (695,696,697,698) - those can be kd dk doublets xD Following drum sound there though...

tbh i can't see problem on your map.but i am sick.my mod can be lacking,sorry

Chromoxx wrote:

ok one thing to point out before i go any further in this, inner oni and No Regret diff are too similar at many parts, please change something about this.

Chromoxx wrote:

Inner Oni is still too similar to the No Regret diff. It basically just feels like a simplified version, using mostly the same rythms and in some parts still even the exact same pattern constellations.

basically a quick thing that felt weird in the No Regret diff tho
00:18:543 - here you basically have a full stream in the music but you aren't mapping it. i'd suggest at least adding notes at 00:18:972 - and 00:19:657 - but i'd prefer it if you mapped the stream out properly Unchanged ;w;... I'm following the drum in the background for that part

Chromoxx wrote:

just getting this done with

[No Regret]
seems fime thenks

[Inner Oni]
01:09:629 - why are you leaving breaks on these hits here as opposed to the ones before this, seems weird to me Unchanged ;w;.... On purposely left it like that to emphasize the change in violin in the background.

[Oni]
01:34:287 - stuff like this is too difficult rythmical and pattern wise compared to the rest of the map and not really stepped down enough compared to the inner oni. i'd suggest deleting 01:34:858 (601) - and 01:34:515 (598) - change to k
02:56:238 - same. 02:56:695 (82,88) - delete, 02:58:066 (93,99) - delete Changed :3! To my own accord

[Muzukashii]
00:20:429 - overuse of kdddk Changed, despite that I don't think it's a problem

Not entirely sure about the excessive usage of 1/4 in this diff Slightly reduced the 1/4, but the song itself is complicated, so there isn't much choice.

[Futsuu]
00:09:115 - this part is relatively long without any 2/1 breaks and constantly utilizing somewhat difficult spacing Unchanged ;w;... There isn't really much of a choice there. Unless I make the stream handicap which would look extremely ugly and weird. Besides, the utilizing isn't a big deal since it's just k d k
00:42:723 - you seem to love using 1.5/1 spacing in the earlier parts yet where it's very clear and there are enough breaks you aren't using it (counts for all similar parts too) Unchanged ;w;... I don't quite get what you mean by this, the density in here is higher than before is because it's kiai/climax, I don't see why not.
01:46:620 - this is a pretty long chain out of 1.5/1 beats, 1/1 beats and then 1.5/1 stuff again without any 2/1 breaks Changed :3!
02:26:074 - kinda too long too Changed :3!
03:01:222 (59) - delete, a 5plet after all this is a bit too extreme Unchanged ;w;... It fits very nicely, and it doesn't seem too extreme tbh

[Kantan]
00:03:627 - same as futsuu Unchanged ;w;... There isn't much of an option is there

many patterns seem to be too long and there's too much 1.5/1 for my liking Simply following the song

This set still needs improving before it's ready to go for ranked in my opinion. The suggestions here are stuff i came up with by mainly skimming through the diffs but there are deeper lying problems and stuff that needs sorting.

Oni diffs seem kind of a bit too similar density and pattern wise on some parts of the map Would be helpful if you had pointed out where.
Use of 1/4 in the muzukashii is slightly questioning to me and the density distribution in the lower diffs in general is a bit weird imo. Would be helpful if you had pointed out where. Besides, I'm taking spread in as consideration
Futsuu is using many patterns that are too long and comparing the density to music ratio in some parts seemed weird too. Changed
Kantan has some patterns that are too long and some places seem pretty empty. Would be helpful if you had pointed out where.

Do not call me back until you have a bubble from another BN. This set has already taken more time than half the stuff i have iconed up until now and i simply don't have the time at the moment to go into in depth checks on maps like these. I use the limited time i have to check maps that are basically ready for rank, since it is a more effective use of my time. This map isn't ready yet imo.