batman98 wrote:

Beautifull Song , Beautifull Hit Sounds..... i'm crying :')

Mod

Easy:
01:33:297 (1) - delete and up the spiner　NO CHANGE

Dear Rue:

00:23:034 (2) - please fx this , an idea https://gyazo.com/1782bfdfa8ef6f5c3e670d9ab3b3a41f　NO CHANGE
01:02:823 (8,1) - plase fx this, so longer distance　NO CHANGE

Cookiezi's Insane:

00:04:876 (6) - NC　CHANGE
00:52:086 (6) - NC?　CHANGE
00:56:034 (7) - NC　CHANGE
00:56:034 (7,8,9,10,11) - lol stream fx this please　NO CHANGE
01:09:297 (7) - NC　CHANGE
01:18:060 (11) - NC　10 add NC

Good Luck

thank you for modding

Rizia wrote:

done!
https://puu.sh/s1S3b/437d350a49.zip
hope you like it

Short_Sentences wrote:

Re:TraumenD

01:03:771 (7,8,9) - I see no reason to space these as all the triples before it are stacked　CHANGE
01:11:350 (4,5,6) - ^ although i can see as to why you would spaced these　CHANGE
01:30:771 (1) - Maybe end this on the redtick instead of the blue due to not much indication of this being only a 1/4th gap　現状でも別に問題ないと思うのでNO CHANGE

Insane

01:12:455 (3) - you could get away with this being a 4 burst into the other kick slider　簡単なInsane目的で作っているので必要ありません、NO CHANGE


Im getting tired bec its getting late , im sorry i didnt mod the full spread.
This is my first mod tho so i might be wrong in a lot of these so sorry if i wasted your time.
Great map wish the best for it!

KuranteMelodii wrote:

As promised

わたしの日本語が下手なのでごめんなさい。まだ勉強中です

[General]

1. ????????
2. 
3. Please add those into tags:
   "Shin'ainaru Anata e" - Romaji of the game name
   "Kawaiwkyik" - Rizia's old username

全て改善しました。ありがとうございます。

[DeaR YoU]

1. 
   change
2. 00:11:192 (5) - ここでNC
   change
3. 00:11:192 (5,6) - ここcopy and pasteがいいぞ
   分かりにくいですがRe:LieFのロゴに合わせている''つもり''なので保留
4. 00:17:507 (1) - ここが強い音があるので、個人的にもっと飛ばしてもいいと思います、 x:447 y:216 と x:446 y:155 がどう？
   change
5. 00:20:665 (5,6,7,8) - ここのflowsがなんかおかしい。。。特別に4-5が近い過ぎると思う
   
   :::

   
   配置は違いますが変えました
6. 00:20:665 (5) - NC?
   change
7. 00:35:192 (5,1) - Swap NC
   change
8. 00:39:928 (4,5) - ここのボーカルを強調すると思いますので1/2スライダー
   change
9. 00:55:560 (2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Nazi、ここはシンメトリーぱパターンができると思う。
   
   :::

   
   00:55:402 (1) - x:300 y:212
   00:55:718 (3) - x:426 y:102
   00:55:876 (4,5,6) - x:256 y:288
   00:56:507 (9) - x:212 y:212
   とてもいい案ですが少し保留にさせてください、少し考えてみます。Nice modです！
   
10. 01:32:034 (2) - 重なりすぎる
    
    :::

    
    ここも保留で。

If possible, Please tell me which problem i have in my Japanese skills

ぐっとらっく～

態々日本語でのmodありがとうございました ！

KuranteMelodii wrote:

As promised

わたしの日本語が下手なのでごめんなさい。まだ勉強中です

[しげとら]

1. 
2. 00:07:086 (1,2) - NCを取り替え
3. 00:09:928 (2,3) - ここcopy and pasteがいいよ
   
   :::

   
4. 00:12:139 (1,5) - NCを取り替え
5. 00:14:113 (2) - なにも聞いてないのでovermapした
6. 00:14:665 (5,6,7) - ^
7. 00:17:350 (8,1) - blanket
8. 00:17:507 (1) - ここのスタートでfinish
9. 00:19:481 (7) - おばーまっぷ～
10. 00:20:034 (1,4) - Finish
11. 00:21:297 (7) - NC
12. 00:23:823 (5) - 00:23:902 - はovermap
13. 00:25:007 (10) - おばーまっぷ～
14. 00:32:981 (2,3,4) - ^
15. 00:35:350 (2) - ^ , 00:36:455 (7,1) - Swap NC
16. 00:36:534 (8) - ^
17. 00:38:981 (5) - NC
18. 00:41:428 (5) - overmap
19. 00:41:507 (6,1) - NCを取り替え
20. 00:45:297 (4) - Finish & NC
21. 00:45:376 (5) - overmap
22. 00:46:007 (9) - ^
23. 00:47:823 (1) - スタートでfinish
24. 00:47:823 (1,2) - Blanket
25. 00:49:086 (5) - overmap (1/2 slider) & NC
26. 00:49:718 (1) - remove NC
27. 00:49:797 (2,5) - overmap??? Although it maps the music transition perfectly....
28. 00:51:613 (5,1) - Swap NC
29. 00:53:271 (4) - remove note
30. 00:54:534 (5) - ^
31. 00:55:086 (1,2) - NC
32. 00:55:481 (3) - remove
33. 00:56:113 (2,4) - remove? IDK
34. 00:56:507 (6) - もっと綺麗にできるよ～ さらにNC
    
    :::

    
35. 00:57:928 (2) - スタートでFinish, さらにNC
36. 01:00:771 (3) - 1/2 slider
37. 01:05:507 (1,5) - finish
38. 01:06:771 (1) - finish
39. 01:08:034 (1) - スタートでFinish
40. 01:09:297 (1) - Finish
41. 01:11:507 (3) - NC for consistancy of 01:10:560 (1,2,1,2) -
42. 01:13:086 (1) - ここが強い音があるので、個人的にもっと飛ばしてもいいと思います、さらにFinish
43. 01:17:981 (1,3) - Swap NC
44. 01:18:613 (4,5) - ぶらんけっと～
45. I know I wanted to mod this mapset in Japanese (Except for Rizia, He don't speak Japanese wwww) , But i wanted to speak this in English so i can understand what i am saying for now (My Japanese skills is bad lol)
    I don't want to be too harsh, but i'll point out some main problems in this diff
    In calm parts, the rhythm is pretty random and strange
    While 00:26:350 (5) - and 00:26:981 (7) - is acceptable since both slider head and end shares the equal strangth on vocals, on the latter part, 00:28:244 (3,4) - is trying to map the vocals, but strangely 00:28:876 (5,6,7,8) - is more like mapping the drums at the background, and i have no idea what 00:30:771 (6) - is mapping
46. The random triplets is also one of the serious issues in this diff, too. such as 00:32:981 (2,3,4) - ,00:36:455 (7,8,9) - , Although it makes kinda sense since it sound more mapping those music transitions, it kinda sounds too much for me... IDK, Maybe since you're an old mapper, i may forgive you since you maybe still applying 2013 rhythm styles, so i'll let you to desire....
47. As for the NCs...... It's kinda inconsistent... Usually it NCs for every big white ticks (or downbeats) , or maybe 2 in calmer parts (or easier diffs) , Sometimes there might have some complecated NC methods such as 01:10:560 (1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4) - , which empasizes the sound every 2 notes (if you apply NC on 01:11:507 (3) - , but i think you might not for the square pattern)
48. The Hitsounds.... I am no hitsounding master, but it's below the standards, there's so many missing finish on strong notes or snares, And there's even no Clap thoughout the entire map, I recommend you to add clap on 2nd and 4th white ticks, or maybe copy the hitsounds from eLy's diff, that was awesome
49. But don't be sad that i have said so many bad things on this map, Everyone struggles this kind of mods, even myself on my old maps, try to get few more mods and learn some basics, then someday you might be the next skystar in the osu mapping community
    GG top right corner

If possible, Please tell me which problem i have in my Japanese skills

ぐっとらっく～

Short_Sentences wrote:

Wkyik's Extra

00:32:350 (5,6) - I'd swap 5 and 6 for reading purposes i did like to move away 00:31:876 (3) - from 00:31:402 (1) - , but 4,5,6 i will use a similar way to keep it
00:42:455 (4,5,6,7) - Maybe something similar to 00:44:981 (4,5,6,7) - keep because imo its not fit here
01:00:928 (3,4,5) - Stack? i want this triple can make a smooth flow for 01:00:771 (2) - to 01:01:244 (6,7) -
01:17:665 (1,2,3,1) - make the last one be apart of the combo cant understandxd
01:18:455 (2) - Nc keep, it hard to affect reading

KuranteMelodii wrote:

[柚子]

1. 00:57:613 (1,2) - 呢度用兩個單打就得了，嗰啲聲都唔算係幾重 但係剩係1/2會有D單調
2. 01:33:218 (3) - 兩個單打嚟做三連，然後嚮最嬲尾加NC，而家咁樣將slider尾壓住重音唔係幾好 可以
   
   :::

   
   Pro la,不如你教我點樣飛我啲圖 有機會既話

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360,368,40244,5,2,0:0:0:0:
304,148,40560,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,192,40718,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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216,92,41350,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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116,244,42613,1,0,0:0:0:0:
116,244,42692,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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296,40,43481,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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216,136,44192,1,8,0:3:0:0:
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340,139,45218,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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200,368,46876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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264,280,60297,1,0,2:0:0:0:
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320,204,60928,1,2,2:0:0:0:
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320,352,61402,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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272,56,61876,1,0,2:0:0:0:
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220,352,63928,1,10,0:0:0:0:
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232,177,64560,1,10,0:0:0:0:
464,248,64718,1,0,2:0:0:0:
288,292,64876,2,0,P|290:336|295:381,1,90,2|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
192,112,65192,1,10,0:0:0:0:
288,292,65350,1,0,2:0:0:0:
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252,213,68192,1,2,2:0:0:0:
432,288,68350,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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280,320,68665,2,0,P|235:317|191:306,1,90,2|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
124,144,68981,1,8,0:0:0:0:
252,213,69139,1,2,0:2:0:0:
252,213,69218,1,0,0:0:0:0:
252,213,69297,6,0,P|296:210|340:199,1,90,6|2,0:2|2:0,0:0:0:0:
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340,199,69771,1,2,2:0:0:0:
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208,72,70086,1,2,2:0:0:0:
284,356,70244,1,10,0:0:0:0:
284,356,70402,1,2,2:0:0:0:
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283,356,70876,2,0,P|286:311|270:269,1,90,10|2,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
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340,199,71350,1,2,2:0:0:0:
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340,88,75139,1,0,2:0:0:0:
344,372,75297,2,0,P|292:368|240:360,1,90,10|0,0:0|2:0,0:0:0:0:
108,112,75613,5,6,0:0:0:0:
180,308,75771,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,156,75928,1,8,0:0:0:0:
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232,376,77192,1,8,0:0:0:0:
256,256,77350,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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348,352,78455,1,0,2:0:0:0:
348,352,78613,2,0,P|368:288|356:208,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
236,160,79086,1,2,0:0:0:0:
193,263,79244,2,0,L|256:256,2,62.9999980773926
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280,72,80034,2,0,P|321:104|331:134,1,62.9999980773926,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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236,160,80507,1,0,0:0:0:0:
304,312,80665,6,0,P|348:304|440:292,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
193,263,81139,2,0,P|149:255|57:243,1,125.999996154785,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
264,176,81613,1,0,0:0:0:0:
204,368,81771,1,2,0:0:0:0:
204,368,81928,6,0,L|197:305,1,62.9999980773926
360,160,82244,2,0,L|353:222,1,62.9999980773926,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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28,280,83665,1,2,0:0:0:0:
252,216,83981,5,0,0:0:0:0:
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416,228,85876,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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320,296,86192,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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300,36,87613,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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YoungsterMario wrote:

Easy

1. 00:04:876 (1) - の後　00:05:823 -　にサークルを一つ追加したら良く流れると思います。　サークルは必要ないと感じました no change
2. 00:40:244 (1) - と00:39:613 (3) -　を入れ替えたら良く流れると思います。 入れ替えた方が流れ悪くなりませんか？ no change
3. 01:25:718 (1) - を01:24:455 (2) - から01:26:981 (2) - へまっすぐ行くスライダーにした方が良いと思います。 このままで。何故良いのかが分かりませんでした。

Insane

1. 00:08:665 (1,1,1,1) - 新しいコンボを毎回始める必要無いと思います。　入れてはいけない明確な理由も無さそうですのでno change
2. 00:59:192 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4) - 連続でジャンプしすぎ。 連続でジャンプの意味が全く分からないのでno change
3. 01:21:928 (1,1,1,1) - ここも。 上記同様明確な理由も無さそうですのでno change

ReTraumenD

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  00:08:665 (1,1,1) - 毎回新しいコンボを始める必要ないと思います。 Insane記載同様。no change
  01:13:086 (1,2,1,1,2,1,1,2,1,2) - 四に一回コンボを始めたら良いと思います。 2の方がいいと思います。4ですと見にくくなる印象を受けました。4にする理由もないのでno change
  01:27:139 (6,1,2,3,4,5) - Not sure if best spacing idea 特に問題もないと思うのでno change
  01:30:771 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - これとても良いと思います。とても面白い！(ˆ_ˆ) ありがとうございます。

YoungsterMario wrote:

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litoluna's Insane
00:07:086 (1) - 新しいコンボを始める必要ありますか？
->nc挟んではいけない理由もなさそうなのでnochange
00:20:034 (1,2,3,4) - 全て2.3xにした方がいいと思います
->確かにそうですが0.01ぐらいなら影響ないのでこのままで
00:20:665 (1,2,3,4) - ここは1.79x
->同上
00:28:876 (4) - Maybe add a beat after this
->voに合わせてるからいらないかなって。
Will prob edit later

Short_Sentences wrote:

Litoluna's Insane

00:31:086 (2) - maybe lower this slider a bit for the more noticeable 1/4th gap
->little changed

Looked great to me nothing else i saw

YoungsterMario wrote:

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hmr's Normal

1. 00:15:455 (2,3,4) - を少し下向きにして　00:15:455 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - を少しだけ広げた方が読みやすいです。
2. 00:43:876 (4,5) - の間と00:44:981 (7,1) - の間を1.00xにしたらどうですか。
3. 01:16:402 (3) - PrevとNextを両方1.00xˆ

Will prob edit later

sorry, all no change

Insane
00:51:297 (4,5) - 01:26:823 (2,3) - 挑戦的　直し忘れ！change
01:00:139 (4) - 1/2 sliderとcircleにしたほうがいい　change

Satellite wrote:

hmr's Normal
00:33:455 (3) - これ始点が、00:32:981 (2) - こっちの音で終点が、00:33:928 (4) - こっちの音？だからcircle + circleのほうがよくね？ってなる
別に
01:20:507 - add noteしたい
これで
01:23:192 (1) - repeatけしたほうがよくね？
いい

Re:TraumenD
01:01:718 (1,1) - ここのncの入れ方はこのましくない　変なところに入ってた・・・　change
01:09:297 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - ここの流れだけきになったので参考程度に http://puu.sh/sgFFV/ec63ba9961.jpg　ちょっと他の案もあったけどひとまず採用で。また変えるかも　change
01:15:297 (3) - ncほしくない？　change

overall
tagが全diff統一しないといけないからaimodでチェックしてみて　hmr's normal の tag 揃えました change
oszが31mbだから30mb以内に収めれるなら収めたほうがいい。。。　画像の画質を落とすか不要なmp3再確認します。
normal-hitwhistle11.wavって使ってますか？　確認中

overall
normal-hitwhistle11.wavって使ってますか？

Left wrote:

Add 'retryment' to tag pls
can't search this one with 're:tryment', I always search 'cookiezi's insane'. rip


[Cookiezi's insane]
00:11:469 (5) - 고조되는 부분인 만큼, 뉴콤을 넣어줄 수 있지 않을까 생각합니다.　change
00:21:574 (1) - suggestion http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6644451　提案されたものでは有りませんが変更しました。
00:30:258 (3) - 2쪽에 붙여서 4의 보컬을 강조해주거나, 4쪽 가까이에 붙여서 현재 의도되는 효과를 부각시키거나 해줄 수 있지 않을까 생각합니다. 아니면 아예 스페이싱을 일정하게 맞춰주는 쪽이 시각적으로 좋을 것 같습니다.　change
00:33:258 (2,3,4) - 개인적으로 고조되지 않은 부분에서 이런 1/4사용은 좀 아쉽다고 생각합니다. 음이 확실한 것도 아니고..맵 전반적으로 불필요한 1/4이 가장 걱정됩니다.　Insaneも難しくあるべきだし、ディスタンスを広げるだけじゃつまらない、仮にも音ゲームですのでタイミングに工夫を施して当然だと思います。よってno change
00:41:942 (2,3,4,5) - 스페이싱을 좀 늘려서 강조해보려는 의도가 보였던 것 같은데 앞쪽과 스페이싱을 좀더 차이나게 해주면 좋지 싶습니다. スタックを避ける為に少しずらしました。
01:15:890 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 분명한 강조가 필요한 부분인데, 스페이싱이 미적지근하네요.　必要ないと感じました。

short mod

• [General]

1. Widescreens support is on for: wkyik's Extra, Cookiezi's Insane, litoluna's Insane, Lecana's Insane, Light Insane, wring's Hard and Easy
   
2. Keysounds are missing on: vellya's Extra, wkyik's Extra, Momokos Extra, Lecana's Insane, wring's Hard. Idk if this was the intention for some but, it's a bit weird to have them be inconsistent like that.

• [Re:TraumenD]

1. 00:02:627 (1,2,3,4) - More emphasis should go on 00:03:100 (4) - in my opinion because it's such a strong note, having it like this will bring out that sound more.
   
2. 00:20:311 (1) - Move this to x:240 y:209 to keep the same spacing
   
3. 00:39:100 (4) - The middle red anchor isn't needed
   
4. 01:32:311 (2) - I don't think this is rankable ): as nice as this is the slider body needs to be fully visable.
   
   I love this difficulty, very fun

• [vellya's Extra]

1. 00:30:890 (3,5) - For structure i would overlap the tail of 3 with 5.
   
2. 01:02:311 (5,1) - Nazi overlap

• [momoko's Extra]

1. 00:20:311 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Uhh, are you sure about this? This seems a bit, over the top for such a quiet part :-/
   
2. 00:20:942 (1,1,1) - I think the spacing on 00:20:942 (1) - should be closer to 00:21:100 (1) - to show that the sound is descending more.
   
3. 01:33:574 (1) - I think having this shape be something a little more... Artsy would fit the ending~ (fine as it is, just a suggestion)

• [Cookiezi's Insane]
  :O cookiezi best mapper 2016

1. 00:21:574 (1) - I know this has been brought up but satellite, but this makes this slider shape a lot cleaner.
   
2. 00:46:837 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - This could be, better. Linear jumps aren't too fun to play, something along the lines of 1 2
   
3. 00:53:153 (1,2) - Moving 2 over to 00:52:363 (2) - would play better because the jump there now is a little to big
   
   Fun difficulty I hope to see you map more in the future shige \o/

FoxyGrandpa wrote:

• [General]

1. Keysounds are missing on: vellya's Extra, wkyik's Extra, Momokos Extra, Lecana's Insane, wring's Hard. Idk if this was the intention for some but, it's a bit weird to have them be inconsistent like that.

FoxyGrandpa wrote:

• [vellya's Extra]

1. 00:30:890 (3,5) - For structure i would overlap the tail of 3 with 5.　no change, 00:31:679 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1) - cuz I like this form, I want to keep it.
   
2. 01:02:311 (5,1) - Nazi overlap Honestly i don't think so.

FoxyGrandpa wrote:

Hi eLy! sorry for the late reply ): ive been on holiday

• [General]

1. Widescreens support is on for: wkyik's Extra, Cookiezi's Insane, litoluna's Insane, Lecana's Insane, Light Insane, wring's Hard and Easy　ALL ON
   
2. Keysounds are missing on: vellya's Extra, wkyik's Extra, Momokos Extra, Lecana's Insane, wring's Hard. Idk if this was the intention for some but, it's a bit weird to have them be inconsistent like that.　ヒットサウンドの統一化は必要だと思いますが、ゲストdiffなのでここは変更しません。

• [Re:TraumenD]

1. 00:02:627 (1,2,3,4) - More emphasis should go on 00:03:100 (4) - in my opinion because it's such a strong note, having it like this will bring out that sound more. 　順番を入れ替えました。
   
2. 00:20:311 (1) - Move this to x:240 y:209 to keep the same spacing 　change
   
3. 00:39:100 (4) - The middle red anchor isn't needed deleted
   
4. 01:32:311 (2) - I don't think this is rankable ): as nice as this is the slider body needs to be fully visable. 「Re:」崩したくないので保留
   
   I love this difficulty, very fun

Great song and fun set, good luck eLy \:D/

1. 00:08:942 (1,1,1) - I understand why you NC all of them but I still think they are better if not.
2. 00:53:469 (2,3,4) and 00:53:469 (2,3,4) - They both end with two 1/4 piano. Consider making them look the same?
3. 01:07:205 (2,3) - How about (2) horizontal and (3) vertical?
4. 01:07:205 (2,3) and 01:08:784 (4,5,6) and 01:09:416 (9) - Stack them?
5. 01:12:890 (4) - ctrl+g?
6. 01:14:627 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - They won't be symmetrical anyway, consider making them parallel?
7. Do you think it's too rigid? But it looks better imo

   

1. Should be named as extra
2. 00:08:942 (5,6) - Pack them closer?
3. 00:23:469 (3,4) - Curve them a little bit?
4. 00:32:627 (3,4) - ctrl+g?
5. 00:37:679 (7) - Can be closer to the slider end
6. 00:40:363 (4,2) - You stack jumps pretty often except this one
7. 00:43:048 (1,2) - Again they can be either closer or fully stacked?
8. 01:10:837 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - They are from left to right up to bottom in a clockwise direction but then 01:11:784 (1,2) another way round.
9. 01:33:574 (1) - Place it in the centre?

1. 00:04:048 (2,3) - Same ds with wkyik's Extra, though 0.07 not really making any difference
2. 00:16:048 (3,3) - Maybe don't stack? You didn't stack 00:18:732 (5)
3. 00:20:311 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1) - Oh you stack all subsequent jumps so nvm then
4. 00:47:311 (5) - NC here or simply don't NC the square
5. 01:02:311 (3) - Two 1/4 sliders?
   I'm so used to your maps. It seems most of my mods are just trivial details, but I do hope it helps

Nostalgic wrote:

M4M from #moqreqs, but feel free not to mod my map if u feel like my mods aren't that useful.

My map: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/533098

Just randomly picking 3 maps:

[Re:TraumenD]

1. 00:08:942 (1,1,1) - I understand why you NC all of them but I still think they are better if not.　付けてはいけない明確な理由も記載されていないのでno change
2. 00:53:469 (2,3,4) and 00:53:469 (2,3,4) - They both end with two 1/4 piano. Consider making them look the same?　良く分からないのでno change
3. 01:07:205 (2,3) - How about (2) horizontal and (3) vertical?　垂直では有りませんが多少ずらしました、スライダーは直線にしません。
4. 01:07:205 (2,3) and 01:08:784 (4,5,6) and 01:09:416 (9) - Stack them?　スタックさせる利点が分からないのでno change
5. 01:12:890 (4) - ctrl+g? 見えにくいので却下 no change
6. 01:14:627 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - They won't be symmetrical anyway, consider making them parallel?　このままで。no change
7. Do you think it's too rigid? But it looks better imo

   
   ダサいので変えません、no change

1. 00:03:100 (4,5) - spacing should be larger to emphasize 00:03:574 (5) - this i think
2. 00:11:469 (1,2) - why are they different x.x
3. 00:13:679 (5,1) - the 3/4 rhythm is fine but spacing looks a bit overdone, it's even bigger than normal 1/2 spacing like 00:13:521 (4,5) - , i suggest to decrease it
4. 00:17:153 (6) - new combo? seems like it's a new jump pattern
5. 00:21:574 (1,2) - 00:22:205 (4,1) - the spacing difference confuses players too, how about making 00:22:205 (4,1) - this one easier?
6. 00:27:890 (1,2,3,4,5) - flow is a little bad, try another way? not a big problem xd
7. 00:56:232 (5) - this is overmapped, if you want to keep this please add clap here
8. 00:58:205 (2) - NC for huge speed change
9. 01:05:784 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - hmm not sure if it's fine but i don't think overmapped 1/4s fit here o-o

1. increase ar a bit? 9 seems kinda low
2. 00:31:916 (3) - remove this circle? feels weird o.o
3. 01:06:732 (3) - why not 1/2 slider like 01:06:100 (3,3) -
4. 01:36:100 - i don't know where the hitsound is from but the finish feels bad, whistle is enough (same for other diffs which use the same hitsounds)

1. why ar9
2. 00:03:889 (1,2) - 应该00:03:574 (5,1) - 这里是跳吧
3. 00:56:784 (1,2) - 换nc？
4. 01:16:363 (1,2) - 01:16:837 (1,2) - ^ 为啥这样nc啊 看不懂
5. 01:33:100 - 漏掉有些违和

1. 00:56:784 (1) - hmm this feels better if it starts 00:56:942 - here instead o-o
2. 01:11:153 (1,1,1,1) - NCs are not necessary
3. wow i love this map, gj 桃子

1. 00:08:942 (5,6,7) - why spacing change here? it's not needed in my opinion
2. 00:17:627 (8,1) - this jump should be bigger than 00:17:469 (7,8) -
3. 00:17:784 (1,4) - stack if off shhhh
4. 00:19:758 (7) - wow you guys really love overmapping, this one is too obvious and strange
5. 00:42:732 (6,1) - this should be a jump!
6. 00:55:679 (1,2,3) - triples start on a white line are not good to play i suggest to remove 00:55:758 (2) - this
7. 00:56:311 (1,2,3,4,5) - i don't know how to understand your overmapping but i think even 1/4 sliders are better xd
8. 01:24:100 (3) - this circle should be placed 01:24:258 - here
9. reply with english please

1. 01:17:784 (4,5,1) - make the spacing consistent
2. 01:10:837 (1,2) - this somehow feels weird, i know you want to follow the vocals only but that reserve slider made it bad

1. 00:09:258 (1,1,1) - they are easy to read so remove the new combos
2. 01:22:521 (1,1,1) - ^
3. 01:27:258 (2,3) - enlarge the spacing ;w; the spacing change with 01:26:942 (1,2) - isn't good to read

1. tick rate 1 please. 2 sounds bad with the simple rhythms

FoxyGrandpa wrote:

• [momoko's Extra]

1. 00:20:311 (1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1,1) - Uhh, are you sure about this? This seems a bit, over the top for such a quiet part :-/ i'm pretty sure tho lol, i just represented the tone down of the piano here by decreasing distance, and NCNCNCNC for design Cx
   
2. 00:20:942 (1,1,1) - I think the spacing on 00:20:942 (1) - should be closer to 00:21:100 (1) - to show that the sound is descending more. adjusted some notes
   
3. 01:33:574 (1) - I think having this shape be something a little more... Artsy would fit the ending~ (fine as it is, just a suggestion) hmm it's fine enough for me

Karen wrote:

momoko's Extra

1. 00:56:784 (1) - hmm this feels better if it starts 00:56:942 - here instead o-o done
2. 01:11:153 (1,1,1,1) - NCs are not necessary done
3. wow i love this map, gj 桃子 thanks!