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Hotaru Murasaki - Re:TrymenT

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Erisan
375 posts
Joined August 2011
Topic Starter
Erisan

Sinnoh wrote:

mapset filesize is 31.7mb, I'm pretty sure it wouldn't be to hard to compress one or two backgrounds to keep it under the 30mb threshold?
This is fine, but is it no good :? ?

I'm sorry if it was a rude sentence because I am using translation :o
-Atri-
3,047 posts
Joined March 2013
-Atri-
Lets hope we don't get popped again (@@;)
Satellite
3,683 posts
Joined June 2012
Satellite
pop soon
Friedii
Friedii
This is a Good map <3
_handholding
3,109 posts
Joined April 2014
_handholding
Top
  1. 00:07:363 (4,1) - decrease spacing like other 1/4 beats. like 00:09:890 (1,2)
  2. 01:32:942 - If you make this beat clickable it would play better
  4. 01:33:574 (5) - NC this to give more hp for spinner
Alyce
  1. 00:45:258 (3,1) - Hard to read this 1/4 slider because the spacing is so high
  2. 01:32:311 (2) - wave slider? It would look prettier imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9713598
Rizia
  1. hp 6
Momoka
  1. 01:36:100 (1) - delete finish and add whistle
Vellya
  1. 00:56:942 (1) - delete finish
Light Insane
  1. 00:56:784 (1) - extend slider to 00:57:574 . Then delete 00:57:574 (1) -
  2. 01:07:679 (4) - 2 circles would fit the rhythm better here
Wring
  1. 00:16:758 (2) - add normal sampleset
  2. 01:05:784 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Make this easier
  3. 01:33:574 (5) - NC this to give more hp for spinner
Normal
  1. 01:12:574 - A circle here would play nicely
  2. 01:33:574 (3) - NC
Easy
  1. 00:05:153 (1) - Add reverse
  2. 00:55:679 (1,2) - delete these. Add spinner from 00:55:679 to 00:56:784 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9713736
  3. 01:07:679 (2) - don't have the tail so close to 01:05:784 (1) . Hard to read for beginners
  4. 01:15:890 (1,2) - use this rhythm, much better for an easy https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9713750
  5. 01:23:469 (1) - Extend to 01:24:100
  6. 01:31:048 (1) - I recommend using this rhythm https://i.imgur.com/Efyz2a6.png
Do all that and I rank
martyur
173 posts
Joined January 2017
martyur

Kisses wrote:

Top
  1. 00:07:363 (4,1) - decrease spacing like other 1/4 beats. like 00:09:890 (1,2)
  2. 01:32:942 - If you make this beat clickable it would play better
  4. 01:33:574 (5) - NC this to give more hp for spinner
Alyce
  1. 00:45:258 (3,1) - Hard to read this 1/4 slider because the spacing is so high
  2. 01:32:311 (2) - wave slider? It would look prettier imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9713598
Rizia
  1. hp 6
Momoka
  1. 01:36:100 (1) - delete finish and add whistle
Vellya
  1. 00:56:942 (1) - delete finish
Light Insane
  1. 00:56:784 (1) - extend slider to 00:57:574 . Then delete 00:57:574 (1) -
  2. 01:07:679 (4) - 2 circles would fit the rhythm better here
Wring
  1. 00:16:758 (2) - add normal sampleset
  2. 01:05:784 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Make this easier
  3. 01:33:574 (5) - NC this to give more hp for spinner
Normal
  1. 01:12:574 - A circle here would play nicely
  2. 01:33:574 (3) - NC
Easy
  1. 00:05:153 (1) - Add reverse
  2. 00:55:679 (1,2) - delete these. Add spinner from 00:55:679 to 00:56:784 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9713736
  3. 01:07:679 (2) - don't have the tail so close to 01:05:784 (1) . Hard to read for beginners
  4. 01:15:890 (1,2) - use this rhythm, much better for an easy https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9713750
  5. 01:23:469 (1) - Extend to 01:24:100
  6. 01:31:048 (1) - I recommend using this rhythm https://i.imgur.com/Efyz2a6.png
Do all that and I rank
Child says will rank finna sonic blast for that rank aMIRITE
Homura-
271 posts
Joined September 2010
Homura-

Kisses wrote:

Normal
  1. 01:12:574 - A circle here would play nicely
    :arrow: follow vocals
  2. 01:33:574 (3) - NC
    :arrow: fix
Do all that and I rank
thanks Kisses
http://puu.sh/yBTS2.osu
wring
596 posts
Joined February 2010
wring

Kisses wrote:

Wring
  1. 00:16:758 (2) - add normal sampleset
  2. 01:05:784 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - Make this easier
  3. 01:33:574 (5) - NC this to give more hp for spinner
k,thanks mod
osu file format v14

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TitleUnicode:Re:TrymenT
Artist:Hotaru Murasaki
ArtistUnicode:紫咲ほたる
Creator:eLy
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Source:Re:LieF〜親愛なるあなたへ〜
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414,208,49363,6,0,L|339:221,1,70,0|0,3:0|3:0,0:0:0:0:
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104,289,56469,1,2,0:0:0:0:
174,334,56627,1,2,0:0:0:0:
237,279,56784,1,2,3:2:0:0:
237,279,56863,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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497,161,61363,2,0,P|498:200|489:245,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
426,282,61679,1,8,0:0:0:0:
349,247,61837,2,0,P|278:237|210:283,1,140
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292,328,64205,1,8,0:0:0:0:
292,328,64363,1,0,0:0:0:0:
371,299,64521,6,0,P|357:264|359:227,1,70
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309,161,65153,2,0,P|280:180|234:179,1,70,0|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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241,80,65784,5,4,0:0:0:0:
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245,182,66258,5,2,0:0:0:0:
313,242,66416,2,0,L|381:227,1,70,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
159,210,66732,6,0,L|138:277,1,70,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
261,92,67048,2,0,L|215:41,2,70,4|2|0,0:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
245,182,67521,5,0,0:0:0:0:
245,182,67679,2,0,P|310:173|352:113,1,140,2|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
104,104,68311,6,0,P|70:161|91:242,1,140,4|8,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
137,294,68784,1,2,0:0:0:0:
215,263,68942,2,0,P|284:256|345:292,1,140,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
403,350,69416,1,2,0:0:0:0:
476,309,69574,6,0,L|485:227,1,70,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
405,123,69890,2,0,L|414:205,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,176,70205,2,0,P|252:191|176:150,1,140,0|8,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
126,220,70679,1,2,0:0:0:0:
107,137,70837,6,0,P|129:100|167:80,1,70,4|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
272,26,71153,2,0,P|259:56|261:107,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
320,176,71469,2,0,L|328:255,1,70,0|2,3:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
235,322,71784,2,0,L|243:243,1,70,8|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
183,191,72100,6,0,B|140:169|140:169|39:190,1,140,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
86,73,72574,1,2,0:0:0:0:
205,72,72732,2,0,B|248:94|248:94|349:73,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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438,230,73837,1,2,0:0:0:0:
438,230,73995,2,0,L|515:258,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
508,338,74311,1,0,1:0:0:0:
428,366,74469,1,2,0:0:0:0:
380,296,74627,6,0,P|314:285|253:337,1,140,4|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
197,267,75100,1,2,0:0:0:0:
197,267,75258,2,0,P|160:251|137:223,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
67,187,75574,2,0,P|54:152|54:113,1,70,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
145,62,75890,5,4,0:0:0:0:
145,62,76048,2,0,L|136:139,1,70,2|0,0:1|1:0,0:0:0:0:
217,185,76363,2,0,L|226:108,1,70,2|0,0:1|1:0,0:0:0:0:
298,213,76679,2,0,P|278:249|249:267,1,70,2|0,0:1|1:0,0:0:0:0:
225,115,76995,6,0,P|286:89|359:104,1,140,4|2,0:0|0:1,0:0:0:0:
394,193,77469,1,2,0:0:0:0:
486,161,77627,1,0,0:0:0:0:
485,258,77784,2,0,L|484:310,3,35,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
446,312,78100,2,0,L|416:362,3,35,2|0|0|0,0:0|0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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183,301,78890,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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244,266,79679,6,0,P|279:214|266:133,1,140,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
219,72,80153,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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30,135,80784,1,2,0:0:0:0:
112,149,80942,6,0,L|94:304,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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247,304,81890,1,2,0:0:0:0:
225,222,82048,1,2,0:0:0:0:
296,178,82205,6,0,P|332:121|321:50,2,140,2|2|2,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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127,158,83469,6,0,P|195:147|258:177,1,140,2|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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DeRandom Otaku
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I am late ig
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DeRandom Otaku wrote:

I am late ig
ooh sorry DeRandom Otaku T^T
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Kisses wrote:

Top
  1. 00:07:363 (4,1) - decrease spacing like other 1/4 beats. like 00:09:890 (1,2)
    :arrow: fix
  2. 01:32:942 - If you make this beat clickable it would play better
    :arrow: this slider is 「e」, not change
  4. 01:33:574 (5) - NC this to give more hp for spinner
    :arrow: fix
Alyce
  1. 00:45:258 (3,1) - Hard to read this 1/4 slider because the spacing is so high
    :arrow: It does not change, because it matches the strength of the song
  2. 01:32:311 (2) - wave slider? It would look prettier imo https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9713598
    :arrow: i don't think so
Rizia
  1. hp 6
    :arrow: fix
Momoka
  1. 01:36:100 (1) - delete finish and add whistle
    :arrow: fix
Vellya
  1. 00:56:942 (1) - delete finish
    :arrow: deleted finish → add clap (piano sound)
Light Insane
  1. 00:56:784 (1) - extend slider to 00:57:574 . Then delete 00:57:574 (1) -
    :arrow: fix
  2. 01:07:679 (4) - 2 circles would fit the rhythm better here
    :arrow: fix
Easy
  1. 00:05:153 (1) - Add reverse
    :arrow: fix
  2. 00:55:679 (1,2) - delete these. Add spinner from 00:55:679 to 00:56:784 https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9713736
    :arrow: 00:55:679 - to 00:57:574 - changed
  3. 01:07:679 (2) - don't have the tail so close to 01:05:784 (1) . Hard to read for beginners
    :arrow: 01:05:784 (1,2,3,4) - change rhythm
  4. 01:15:890 (1,2) - use this rhythm, much better for an easy https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/9713750
    :arrow: fix
  5. 01:23:469 (1) - Extend to 01:24:100
    :arrow: fix
  6. 01:31:048 (1) - I recommend using this rhythm https://i.imgur.com/Efyz2a6.png
    :arrow: fix
Do all that and I rank
updated, thank you Kisses !!
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ikaNyai wrote:

：ｐR　aｙ：
なりそう！！！！！
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Kisses wrote:

Do all that and I rank
daaaaaaamn
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kisses is the saviour
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Easy
00:55:679 (1) - Unrankable, not enough recovery time. End spinner at 00:56:784

Call me when fix
Erisan
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Kisses wrote:

Easy
00:55:679 (1) - Unrankable, not enough recovery time. End spinner at 00:56:784
:arrow: FIX
Call me when fix
thank you recheck Kisses :)
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ReTrying bubble
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OwO

actually i have some concer-

nah jk lol, good luck this time
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top diff: are you sure with 01:11:469 (3,4,5,6,1) - movement here? flow seems a bit weird to play

rest are ok
Erisan
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Garden wrote:

top diff: are you sure with 01:11:469 (3,4,5,6,1) - movement here? flow seems a bit weird to play
:arrow: I do not think so, but I want to change it if it is better to change
FIX
rest are ok
thank you garden :3
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Grats!!
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NANI?!
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YES !!! FINALLY ITS HAPPENING , CONGRATS ELY !!!! :cry: :cry: :cry:
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thank you all, I hope not to DQ LOL
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grats!
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hope it finally goes through zz, gratz
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Finally, Congratulations! :3
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yay finally, grats!
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