four dimensions:
00:03:083 - to 00:04:271 - should be mapped - i dont quite understand, that sound is so....... whatever, might map
theres no way you leave that space empty
00:06:647 - to 00:07:835 - same here - same
00:17:340 - why sliderend here? it is the same sound as here 00:17:934 -
00:19:716 - 00:28:924 - why is this unmapped?
00:33:974 (3) - nc
00:34:568 (11) - ^
and so on, i dont want to focus on it
just fix them urself, basically how it works: nc emphasizes any structure/flow/rhythm/melody/interval change.
for streams i would stick to putting an nc on every 9th note.
ill consider doing all this00:45:558 - unmapped beat
ok00:43:182 - ^
hmm maybe?00:43:330 - ^
00:57:737 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - i dont understand this strucutre, it basically doesnt fit to the melody, and i dont really understand which of the soundstracks you were choosing by making that stream
I wasnt totally following piano here, i was following the other... intense sound, piano is followed by kicksliders after01:00:113 (1) - same here, the piano is moving by waves, meanwhile your stream is stuckked to the dull trumpet
01:02:490 (1) - ^
01:14:370 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15,16) - why you divided them by 4?
listen carefuly:
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6309059 basically try to do this and listen what happens
i know theres a tiny sound at 01:14:741 - 01:15:038 - 01:15:335 - etc
but idk, i'd change the way of making that stream
it looks decent tho.
aaa,..... i like it as it is now, triplets dont seem to totally fit, and it think it plays better knowing the context of the map01:18:232 (2) - what the hell? 01:18:306 - you are missing the blue tick for some reason. a.... i tried to followthe other piano rhythm... might change
01:18:529 (3) - dude remap it
01:18:900 - and 01:19:048 - cmon
02:09:024 (1,2,3) - ds seems random - hmmm... i tried to emphasize you know.... but this has been pointed out before... might change
02:18:826 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this shud not be like that, remap.
it simply doesnt fit to the melody.
02:23:282 (1,2) - this shud be remapped as well, just fking listen to the melody, its way different than the rest of the song - i thnk i did something better
02:24:470 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - here you can use your "stairs" pattern - well.... its more intense now, i did it in the other diff i think but..... might do
02:35:310 - here you can use 02:01:599 (13) - this - ok
03:02:489 - unmapped, id suggest to use a kickslider - hmm cant hear it
03:02:786 (3,1) - remap - aaaaa why????
the sound interval starts at 03:03:083 - this sliderend (like wtf, u shud never do something like this)
and - but whyyy... it didnt seem bad on testplays
03:03:182 (1) - this can be sliderkick stream or some shit - ill leave as it is for now
03:04:865 (1,2,3,4) - is it necessary to use overlaps there? that spacing felt weird - not necessary, but also not necessary to change for now
03:09:617 (1,2,3) - spacing dude, same melody, same patterns, wtf. - hmm......its the same spacing....
03:11:994 (1,2,3) - same shit - same shit
03:14:370 (1,2,3,4) - same shit - same shit
03:16:746 (1,2,3,4) - same shit - same shit
03:19:122 (1,2,1) - same shit - aaaa
03:31:895 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - this feels really awkward
03:39:320 (1,2,3,4) - why sliders there? they basically doesnt fit there. - why not?
03:53:578 (1,2,3,4) - ^
03:58:330 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10) - why you changed your patterns here all of the sudden? same melody as before.
but yea, still.
remap it. - nop
04:04:271 (1,2,3,4) - whyyyyyyyyy
04:09:766 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5) - you shud increase the spacing here by following the melody.
Over dimensions:
remap.
00:35:162 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,14,15) - this shudnt be like this, listen to the melody - emm wtf???
00:41:103 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - what the point of this object placement? - ....... what is the point of pointing it out?
00:51:647 (7,8,1,2) - i dont like this transition, it fucks reading. the fk
00:54:618 (4,5,6) - ^ - the fk
i would suggest:
http://puu.sh/rGVlZ/22b62eaf2c.jpg - the fk
01:04:643 (14,15,16,1,2) - just remap it, its really fked up. - its not... testplays where ok on there...... and how is it fked up
01:18:306 - 01:19:048 - this sound different, please remap to the actual melody. - i did it on the actual melody
01:21:648 (3,5) - you should emphasize it somehow. aaaa emphasize what
01:42:885 (14) - nc? its super obvious - forgot to nc before
01:55:658 (7,1,3,5,7) - structure? wtf - emm.... they are getting closer.....
02:06:350 (11,12) - this jumps is way too wide - maybe
02:53:282 (1) - this shud be at 39/230 - ok
02:55:064 (7) - 20/224 - ok
02:55:361 (1) - 26/0 - ok
02:57:737 (1,3,5) - ctrl+g it - now its fked up
02:58:628 (7,8,9,10,11) - this spacing is out of place, lower it. - its really intense. but ok might change -
03:09:024 (1,2) - swap them?
04:02:935 (15,1) - dude spacing, move the (15) sliderend to the right lmao - aa
also i didnt mention NC shit, just find it urself.
dont overpass 8 number in ur combos.
wat......... but why wtf......... uta has fkin 32 combo and it makes sense aaaaaaaaaaaaa
ok thats it.
the map is cool, but you shud remap a big part of it to make it consistent and logical in regards to melody.
its m4m so you shud mod my map, you know which one.
aaaaaaaaaaaaaa
dont know how the hell to answer a mod but w/e