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Puffy Ami Yumi - Teen Titans Theme [Taiko]

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DeletedUser_4212641
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Ceryuia
Hihi~ From my Queue

[Childhood]
In this diff, I feel as though there are too many <1 second kiai parts, I understand you want to emphasise the strong notes, but I think just having a finisher on these is fine
00:10:934 (11) - Move this to 00:10:752 as this focuses more on the vocals
If done above, add a don at 00:11:115 to make it flow better
00:13:116 (18) - Add a finisher here to emphasise the 'Teen Titans' part
00:18:934 (41,42) - Ctr+G and add a finisher on the kat
00:21:479 (52,53) - Ctrl+G, the pitch rises so having d k suits this part
00:24:388 (63,64) - ^
00:36:206 - Add a don here as you're following the background music
00:37:297 - Remove this don, there's no sound here
01:00:388 (208) - Add a finisher here, there is a strong sound on this note
01:23:115 (289,290) - Remove these finishers, they are unnecessary
01:26:206 (299) - ^
01:32:024 (319) - ^
01:35:661 (338,339) - ^
01:43:479 (3,4,5) - ^
Change 02:25:843 + 02:26:206 and 02:26:934 to kats for consistency
Remove the finisher on 02:26:752 and add one to 02:26:934
02:27:661 (181) - Change to a kat, the pitch rises here
02:53:843 (284) - Add a finisher here as there is a strong sound here
02:56:025 - Add a don here, as you can here a strong-ish sound in the background
The part from 03:02:570 to 03:04:025 has a lot of unnecessary finishers, as the only one I would keep here is the one at 03:04:025

That is all from me ~! Good Luck ~!
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_4212641

Ceryuia wrote:

Hihi~ From my Queue

01:23:115 (289,290) - Remove these finishers, they are unnecessary
01:35:661 (338,339) - ^
I think that the instrumental is quite clear that emphasizes those notes and I think it sounds pretty good. I'm not gonna change it.
Everything else is done! ✓
Thank you

Edit: You were right. Besides that, they are annoying to play and that is not what I want. Thanks
Non-centered notes are the new updates

Edit 2: "Childhood" has changed to "Oni"

Edit 3: I edited this because was a mess, I did not know how to do it >.<
Smallwu
Hello, mod from my queue
[General]
I think Offset is wrong, it's too fast. Try 8050 or 8052

Make sure your Slider Velocity is "1.40" (AiMod)
Open your .osu file with txt, Ctrl+F "SliderMultiplier"
1.399999.... --> 1.4

Remove tags "english and japanese"
I think they're useless :3
[Oni]
I only mod Oni because you said that >3<

00:16:934 (34) - Move to 00:16:752 - Because 00:16:389 (32,33) You follow vocal, that's strange, before that you only follow music. Do this will be more fit I think

00:28:388 (79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87) - k d d d d d d d k Maybe you want to do like 00:57:479 but here no loud drum

00:37:479 - 00:41:297 - Although this is Oni, it's still too long. Remove 00:38:752 (121) and 00:40:206 (128) and 00:40:570 (129) . Then Ctrl+G 00:41:115 (131,132) Move 00:41:297 (132) to 00:41:479 Done

00:42:206 - 00:47:115 - Still too long, but I have no idea at this part @w@ Try to remove some notes!

00:47:297 - Add d

01:10:570 - Add k Because here has... guitar?

01:13:661 (252,253) - Move to 01:13:479 I have no idea how to say :3 If you need reason pls tell me

01:19:479 (272,273) - Move to 01:19:297 ^

01:23:479 (289) - Remove this to highlight the K

01:25:297 (293,294) - Move to 01:25:115 I have no idea how to say :3 If you need reason pls tell me

01:31:115 (313,314) - Move to 01:30:934 ^

01:32:388 - 01:36:752 - Change to them pls They also follow music, but can give player some breaks

01:35:661 and 01:35:934 - Remove green lines, I don't know why you use them :3

01:43:934 - This green line move to 01:44:025

02:14:206 (127) - Change to D to keep consistency( Like 02:07:297 (100) and 02:08:388 (104) )

02:20:388 (150) - Change to k ^

03:04:115 - Green line move to 03:04:025 ?

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Good Luck >w<
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_4212641

Smallwu wrote:

Hello, mod from my queue
[General]
I think Offset is wrong, it's too fast. Try 8050 or 8052 Better ✓

Make sure your Slider Velocity is "1.40" (AiMod)
Open your .osu file with txt, Ctrl+F "SliderMultiplier"
1.399999.... --> 1.4 Done ✓

Remove tags "english and japanese" Yeah, I wrote that because in the left sings Japanese and in the right english. Removed ✓
[Oni]
I only mod Oni because you said that >3<

00:16:934 (34) - Move to 00:16:752 - Because 00:16:389 (32,33) You follow vocal, that's strange, before that you only follow music. Do this will be more fit I think I'm not following nothing there, sometimes you can ignore and create. I like it how it is

00:28:388 (79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87) - k d d d d d d d k Maybe you want to do like 00:57:479 but here no loud drum I think it's more fun alternate colors

00:37:479 - 00:41:297 - Although this is Oni, it's still too long. Remove 00:38:752 (121) and 00:40:206 (128) and 00:40:570 (129) . Then Ctrl+G 00:41:115 (131,132) Move 00:41:297 (132) to 00:41:479 Done Sure but I found another way to cut it click

00:42:206 - 00:47:115 - Still too long, but I have no idea at this part @w@ Try to remove some notes! Done ✓ click

00:47:297 - Add d That's not the idea

01:10:570 - Add k Because here has... guitar? This one 01:10:959 (237) - needs to be alone there

01:13:661 (252,253) - Move to 01:13:479 I have no idea how to say :3 If you need reason pls tell me You gave me an idea click

01:19:479 (272,273) - Move to 01:19:297 ^ I feel like that part don't need to rush notes, like as if it were more relaxed. Your way it's fine but I like the way I did it

01:23:479 (289) - Remove this to highlight the K The next d it's locked for me. I mean, it's a K no need to highlight, at least there

01:25:297 (293,294) - Move to 01:25:115 I have no idea how to say :3 If you need reason pls tell me Same idea repeated here

01:31:115 (313,314) - Move to 01:30:934 ^ This stays too

01:32:388 - 01:36:752 - Change to them pls They also follow music, but can give player some breaks Cool ✓

01:35:661 and 01:35:934 - Remove green lines, I don't know why you use them :3 Before those notes were D, so I remove them to d and increase the volume

01:43:934 - This green line move to 01:44:025 Done ✓

02:14:206 (127) - Change to D to keep consistency( Like 02:07:297 (100) and 02:08:388 (104) )I like it ✓

02:20:388 (150) - Change to k ^ It's a k

03:04:115 - Green line move to 03:04:025 ? Sure ✓

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Good Luck >w<
Thank you for the mod wuuuuuuuuuu!! I hope you like the 1/1 notes idea

edit: the idea is gone. I striked it

edit 2:

Smallwu wrote:

01:23:479 (289) - Remove this to highlight the K The next d it's locked for me. I mean, it's a K no need to highlight, at least there
I was so wrong aaa sorry REMOVED ✓
Vulkin
Welp dual voice map, dual childhood intensifies
Hope i help :3

-Futsuu-
00:18:959 (16) - Why finisher? you didnt put it on the first one O-o
00:35:504 (10) - Put finisher in this one, since it has same guitar noise as 00:32:595 (4) -
00:44:232 (24) - Move to 00:44:413 -
00:47:686 (28,29) - Remove finisher
01:04:595 (10) - Put finisher
01:07:504 (14) - ^ because 01:01:686 (4) - is same sound and note has finisher
01:14:959 - and 01:15:504 - could add a d and k respectively
01:26:595 (44) - Remove finisher
01:27:140 - put a k here
01:31:140 (49) - make it d, has lower pitch than the previous & next note
02:58:050 (123) - Put finisher?

-Muzukashii-
00:13:322 (19) - Make this a k and remove 00:13:504 (20) -
00:16:777 (30) - remove
00:44:413 - put a k here to follow the voice (the left voice at least lol)
00:59:686 (3) - remove finisher
01:35:686 (115) - ^
01:44:959 (146) - move to 01:45:686 -
01:46:050 (150) - move to 01:46:231 -
01:50:777 (166) - move to 01:51:504 -
01:51:868 (170) - move to 01:52:050 -
01:57:140 - missing note? or its break?, if its missing note, consider adding d on that and here 01:57:322 -
01:58:050 - add a d
02:02:959 - Missing note or break?, if its missing note, then add d on that and 02:03:140 -
02:03:868 - add a d
02:09:322 (225,226) - Ctrl+G?

-Oni-
I cant find anything owo

Hope it helps :3
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_4212641

Vulkin wrote:

Welp dual voice map, dual childhood intensifies >:D
Hope i help :3

-Futsuu-
00:18:959 (16) - Why finisher? you didnt put it on the first one O-o
The only difference between them it's the background chord. Below I will try to explain it a little better
00:35:504 (10) - Put finisher in this one, since it has same guitar noise as 00:32:595 (4) - Cool ✓
00:44:232 (24) - Move to 00:44:413 - Sure but why move that one and not this one 00:38:413 (15) -

00:47:686 (28,29) - Remove finisher
Not all the "teen titans!" (vocal) are the same, those are higher. If you ask why here 00:18:595 (15,16) - there is one finish and here 00:47:686 (28,29) - are two it's because the second kiai it's longer basically. Surely it's more solid in your way but I don't know, I like finishers I guess

01:04:595 (10) - Put finisher
No because the voice determinates where they go. Basically that note it's not strong enough, it's more like that help to the others finishers to appear. Can be ok with it but this is how I see it

01:07:504 (14) - ^ because 01:01:686 (4) - is same sound and note has finisher Nice ✓
01:14:959 - and 01:15:504 - could add a d and k respectively Done ✓
01:26:595 (44) - Remove finisher Qué wea ese D hermano.. ✓
01:27:140 - put a k here Great ✓
01:31:140 (49) - make it d, has lower pitch than the previous & next note You are right but all those notes are d, I want to break the patron
02:58:050 (123) - Put finisher? Same reason with 01:04:595 (10) -

-Muzukashii-
00:13:322 (19) - Make this a k and remove 00:13:504 (20) - Better ✓
00:16:777 (30) - remove Yes ✓
00:44:413 - put a k here to follow the voice (the left voice at least lol) It's weird to play I think
00:59:686 (3) - remove finisher Agree ✓
01:35:686 (115) - ^ Done ✓

01:44:959 (146) - move to 01:45:686 -
01:46:050 (150) - move to 01:46:231 -
01:50:777 (166) - move to 01:51:504 -
01:51:868 (170) - move to 01:52:050 -
All of these are fine, but I did it that so they would not have the same beginning as the part that follows

01:57:140 - missing note? or its break?, if its missing note, consider adding d on that and here 01:57:322 - It's intended
01:58:050 - add a d I'll keep the "intended part" as it is
02:02:959 - Missing note or break?, if its missing note, then add d on that and 02:03:140 - Same here
02:03:868 - add a d And here
02:09:322 (225,226) - Ctrl+G? I like k d c:

-Oni-
I cant find anything owo n.n

Hope it helps :3
Of course it helps!! thank u for check the Oni too Vulkin even if you have not found anything!! se hablaban en ingles jaja

edit:

Vulkin wrote:

00:59:686 (3) - remove finisher Agree ✓
I agreed but there are 3 of them (00:30:594 (3) - 00:59:686 (3) - 02:53:140 (3) - ) that are the same. I just want to clarify that I'm going to remove the finishers in the 3 c:
davidminh0111
Mod:
k is Katan means blue one
d is don means red one.
Oni:
General:
-This beatmap is too easy same as Muzusakii.

-00:13:772: Add d.
-00:14:863: Add k
-00:23:590: Add d
-00:26:499: Add d
-00:30:226 to 00:30:954: Add something here.

This should be more than 3.75 stars to be an Oni beatmap
Good luck, I enjoyed your mao
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_4212641

Vyiuri wrote:

davidminh0111 wrote:

Mod:
k is Katan means blue one
d is don means red one.
Oni:
General:
-This beatmap is too easy same as Muzusakii.

-00:13:772: Add d. Prefer no edit: Added
-00:14:863: Add k About this ones I feel like this diff has a couple of key-streams (that one included up) and does not need more I think. Or no more so close to each other
-00:23:590: Add d ^
-00:26:499: Add d ^
-00:30:226 to 00:30:954: Add something here. The Muzu already has something there, and I do not like repetition so much. Besides that, it's weird that you tell me to add notes there and not in the others same rhythmical places like 00:59:317 - and 02:52:772 - because they are the same, with an slightly vocal tone difference but irrelevant at the time to decide add notes I think. An idea is that the last empty part does not need any notes because that give an emotional suspense I guess, in that case I agree but why nothing in the middle part? Anyway, I'll keep the breaks edit: Added

This should be more than 3.75 stars to be an Oni beatmap I know, Oni is the name of the difficulty (? edit: I changed to Muzukashii
Good luck, I enjoyed your mao Thank you aaa
Thank you
Backfire
[General]
What's going on with the volume in this thing? It's loud in the beginning and then extremely quiet on other parts. It's all over the place.
Futsuu is too easy compared to muzu, consider pumping it with some more notes. You have no proper bridge into the 1/2 spam and 1/4 in muzu. Futsuu is almost similar to kantan, with added abstract rhythms which makes the sr go up.
I read some of your comments and I guess you are saying, you don't want the map to be repetitive? It doesn't have to be, but it also doesn't need to be randomly mapped. I think, in next few mods you get, take them to heart and just trust them. It's a trap that newer mappers will fall into, and it will make it difficult for you to get your map ranked because 1 : You aren't noticing the flaws because to you it's intentional and 2: We can sometimes fail to see our own issues. I wanna help you get better and so do others :)

[Kantan]
I'm not gonna deal with this diff, just that I agree with others who you disagreed with so it's not worth it for me to mod.

[Futsuu]
00:32:590 - I get that this is a different sound but it is not different enough to justify with a finisher imo (I guess it comes up in other kiai too later)
00:37:135 - 00:42:954 - these two sections have terribly confusing rhythm for someone new who would be playing this. Consider something more straight forward that follows the music. Even just like 5 1/1 in a row wouldn't be bad, compared to this.
02:10:226 - 02:16:045 - 02:21:863 - Spinners and/or sliders would be fine to eliminate these ugly spaces
03:01:863 - This shouldn't be a finisher.

[Muzukashii]
00:16:954 - this makes no sense. You could start it earlier to emulate the "aaaaaaaaaaa" sound, but, you didn't do it earlier either.
00:18:954 - what are these sv? Why did it slow down?
00:46:591 (54,55,56,57) - these should just be removed in favor to a d k d k rhythm.
00:48:045 - please stop using this sv 01:11:317 - It works fine in this instance because you are going from 1.1 back down to 1.0
01:35:317 (114,115,116,117,118) - you had a good rhythm going and this throws it off, it's random. Just go back to d k ddk because it sounds insanely out of place.
01:38:226 (123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142) - I really recommend you change these patterns because they too are extremely out of place. You can do like an opposite of the first rhythm (inverted notes)
02:08:408 - out of place and random. If you're gonna do this, do it for all the notes that sound like that, you don't just go random mode on it.
03:00:954 (23,25) - totally random too.

I'm going to skip oni, but you also do the same SV things as muzu, and it is distracting and bad, so please fix it. I'll give you a more general review for oni.
Add some more 1/4 fills, focus on making a flowing map, rather than following some of the instruments because it's a cluttered map. You try to do too much, with too little, so focus it. Also 01:38:226 - did you forget to map here? Because this is an inappropriate use of spinner.
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_4212641

Backfire wrote:

[General]
What's going on with the volume in this thing? It's loud in the beginning and then extremely quiet on other parts. It's all over the place.
Futsuu is too easy compared to muzu, consider pumping it with some more notes. You have no proper bridge into the 1/2 spam and 1/4 in muzu. Futsuu is almost similar to kantan, with added abstract rhythms which makes the sr go up.
I read some of your comments and I guess you are saying, you don't want the map to be repetitive? It doesn't have to be, but it also doesn't need to be randomly mapped. I think, in next few mods you get, take them to heart and just trust them. It's a trap that newer mappers will fall into, and it will make it difficult for you to get your map ranked because 1 : You aren't noticing the flaws because to you it's intentional and 2: We can sometimes fail to see our own issues. I wanna help you get better and so do others :)
edit: Of course is not option 1. I've say no to many good replies because I did not get it at the time. Thank you for take the time to write this and I'm sorry for not reply to this particular message before

[Kantan]
I'm not gonna deal with this diff, just that I agree with others who you disagreed with so it's not worth it for me to mod.
No one modded but ok

[Futsuu]
00:32:590 - I get that this is a different sound but it is not different enough to justify with a finisher imo (I guess it comes up in other kiai too later)
00:37:135 - 00:42:954 - these two sections have terribly confusing rhythm for someone new who would be playing this. Consider something more straight forward that follows the music. Even just like 5 1/1 in a row wouldn't be bad, compared to this.
02:10:226 - 02:16:045 - 02:21:863 - Spinners and/or sliders would be fine to eliminate these ugly spaces
03:01:863 - This shouldn't be a finisher.
Done ✓

[Muzukashii]
00:16:954 - this makes no sense. You could start it earlier to emulate the "aaaaaaaaaaa" sound, but, you didn't do it earlier either.
00:18:954 - what are these sv? Why did it slow down?
00:46:591 (54,55,56,57) - these should just be removed in favor to a d k d k rhythm.
00:48:045 - please stop using this sv 01:11:317 - It works fine in this instance because you are going from 1.1 back down to 1.0
01:35:317 (114,115,116,117,118) - you had a good rhythm going and this throws it off, it's random. Just go back to d k ddk because it sounds insanely out of place.
01:38:226 (123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142) - I really recommend you change these patterns because they too are extremely out of place. You can do like an opposite of the first rhythm (inverted notes)
02:08:408 - out of place and random. If you're gonna do this, do it for all the notes that sound like that, you don't just go random mode on it.
03:00:954 (23,25) - totally random too.
Noticed

I'm going to skip oni, but you also do the same SV things as muzu, and it is distracting and bad, so please fix it. I'll give you a more general review for oni.
Add some more 1/4 fills, focus on making a flowing map, rather than following some of the instruments because it's a cluttered map. You try to do too much, with too little, so focus it. Also 01:38:226 - did you forget to map here? Because this is an inappropriate use of spinner.
The sv were a map tip but it's fine, I can remove them if they are annoying. I specifically did not concentrate in the instruments while mapping, I just tried to map in a simple rhythmical way + easy map + fun map I guess but you are right
Thank you
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_4212641
I want to say that It was not intentional the disagree responses, I just don't realise things. I should have listened and trust you guys to make this a better map, sorry!
Besides that, almost everyone of you are a top player and know how the game works so killmepls
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_4212641

Backfire wrote:

[General]
What's going on with the volume in this thing? It's loud in the beginning and then extremely quiet on other parts. It's all over the place.
Fixed love <3 (but I didn't update yet)

before
after
edit

What do you think? if it's bad I need help ;#:
ptar124
Ahhh my childhood. Get to you soon
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_4212641

ptar124 wrote:

Ahhh my childhood. Get to you soon
Asd thanks C:
toara_fict


Taiko Mod request from My Queue.


[ General]
  1. Okay.
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[ Kantan]
  1. 00:45:135 - add d here

  2. 01:04:045 - add d here. ( it's kiai lart

  3. 01:44:045 (73) - ~ 02:10:226 (96) - Although it is not kiai, the density is the highest.
    Let's shave a little and increase kiai's notes




    Difficulty is too low
    Add some more notes is better. ( About 30~50 notes )
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[ Futsuu]
  1. fine.
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[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:22:408 (54) - delete. ( 00:08:045 (1) - ~ Density does not change with Oni. )

  2. 00:41:317 (37) - Change d & move 00:41:135 (37) - / 00:41:681 (38) - move 00:41:499 (38) - ( follow simple drum sound )

  3. 00:47:136 (57) - move 00:47:317 (57) - & change d. ( Some ^ )

  4. 00:51:498 (74) - 00:54:407 (85) - delete. ( It's not a place where density is required )

  5. 01:23:317 (75,76) - swap finish. ( 01:23:317 - not large sound, )

  6. 02:34:045 (298) - move 02:34:590 - & 02:35:135 - add d here ? ( you style. )
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[ Oni]
  1. 01:23:317 (291,292) - swap Finish is better. ( 01:23:317 (291) - not large sound, )

  2. 01:55:499 (416) - change kat. ( 01:55:317 (415,416) - some sounds. )



    This diff is Muzukashii ? I think it's too easy.
    It's different from a simple style Oni

    Add some more notes is better. ( About 100~150 notes )
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Topic Starter
DeletedUser_4212641

toara_fict wrote:



Taiko Mod request from My Queue.


[ General]
  1. Okay. Yey
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[ Kantan]
  1. 00:45:135 - add d here Done

  2. 01:04:045 - add d here. ( it's kiai lart Done

  3. 01:44:045 (73) - ~ 02:10:226 (96) - Although it is not kiai, the density is the highest.
    Let's shave a little and increase kiai's notes Sure




    Difficulty is too low
    Add some more notes is better. ( About 30~50 notes ) Alright
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[ Futsuu]
  1. fine. Yey again
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[ Muzukashii]
  1. 00:22:408 (54) - delete. ( 00:08:045 (1) - ~ Density does not change with Oni. ) Done

  2. 00:41:317 (37) - Change d & move 00:41:135 (37) - / 00:41:681 (38) - move 00:41:499 (38) - ( follow simple drum sound ) Done

  3. 00:47:136 (57) - move 00:47:317 (57) - & change d. ( Some ^ ) Done

  4. 00:51:498 (74) - 00:54:407 (85) - delete. ( It's not a place where density is required ) Deleted

  5. 01:23:317 (75,76) - swap finish. ( 01:23:317 - not large sound, ) Swapped

  6. 02:34:045 (298) - move 02:34:590 - & 02:35:135 - add d here ? ( you style. ) Sure
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[ Oni]
  1. 01:23:317 (291,292) - swap Finish is better. ( 01:23:317 (291) - not large sound, ) Swapped

  2. 01:55:499 (416) - change kat. ( 01:55:317 (415,416) - some sounds. ) I didn't notice. Done



    This diff is Muzukashii ? I think it's too easy.
    It's different from a simple style Oni

    Add some more notes is better. ( About 100~150 notes )
Yeah, everybody tell me that. I think I will replace the Oni with the Muzu and do a new Oni

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Thank you for modding Toara!
Topic Starter
DeletedUser_4212641
I deleted all notes in the Muzukashii and I putted the Oni notes there, then I deleted the Oni diff because I can't do a proper Oni with this song, sorry!

May 7, 2017
ptar124
ey im here now yeh

General

  1. Pay attention to your Kiais, some are really short and we tend to want to avoid that when possible. Try to put it on the long highlights, if it's just a short burst you may want to remove those
  2. Timing seems fine
  3. You sure you don't want an Oni for this thing? I know you removed it, but the song really does have potential for an Oni. Overmapping will be required for an Oni to work, but if you're good/experienced enough it should be fine.

Kantan

00:12:772 (4,5) - these are alright, but do be aware that this could throw beginners off. In Kantan we usually place quite little 1/1 notes. We usually go for 2/1 and 4/1.

]01:12:045 (57,58,59,60) - these are also quite the challenge for beginners. Alternatively, you can move 58 to one beat later so that it lines up perfectly on the downbeats.

01:31:681 (74,75,76) - from here, there are lots of kats, you might want to change some to dons

Really good so far, although, I will not point out the same things in other places. If there are other places with the same issues I mentioned, you will have to find them yourself (or this will be a really long mod post).

Futsuu

Not really anything need fixing, it's fine where it is. Although, this isn't quite the map style I like. Still, I won't destroy your map style because of just personal preferences. Just keep it, see what the QA says.

Muzukashii

00:16:954 (35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42) - The whole thing doesn't fit very well. 00:17:681 (39) in particular, really should not be a kat.

00:19:317 (46,47,48) - be careful with going multicolor triplets in Muzukashii. Unless you're working with slower bpms, I would advise you don't.

00:20:408 (51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75) - this part could be denser. Don't be afraid of using 1/2s in Muzu, just put it down wherever. (other similar parts too)

00:29:863 (88) - finish? (also applies to others like this)

00:36:590 (113,114,115) - multicolor

00:48:226 (164,165,166) - ^ (find the rest yourself, I won't do it for you)

again, not a fan of this map style but I won't stop you.

In overall, you seem be doing well with no critical errors. The rest are just how the notes sound, which can be subjective depending on who you talk to. I do recommend going back and play them yourself a few times until you're satisfied with the outcome.
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ptar124 wrote:

ey im here now yeh

General

  1. Pay attention to your Kiais, some are really short and we tend to want to avoid that when possible. Try to put it on the long highlights, if it's just a short burst you may want to remove those Fixed, thx
  2. Timing seems fine I think so
  3. You sure you don't want an Oni for this thing? I know you removed it, but the song really does have potential for an Oni. Overmapping will be required for an Oni to work, but if you're good/experienced enough it should be fine. I can't do one but yeah, maybe

Kantan

00:12:772 (4,5) - these are alright, but do be aware that this could throw beginners off. In Kantan we usually place quite little 1/1 notes. We usually go for 2/1 and 4/1. Fixed, 2/1 now

]01:12:045 (57,58,59,60) - these are also quite the challenge for beginners. Alternatively, you can move 58 to one beat later so that it lines up perfectly on the downbeats. You are right, nice

01:31:681 (74,75,76) - from here, there are lots of kats, you might want to change some to dons Done

Really good so far, although, I will not point out the same things in other places. If there are other places with the same issues I mentioned, you will have to find them yourself (or this will be a really long mod post). Of course, I fix them too

Futsuu

Not really anything need fixing, it's fine where it is. Although, this isn't quite the map style I like. Still, I won't destroy your map style because of just personal preferences. Just keep it, see what the QA says. Happens :')

Muzukashii

00:16:954 (35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42) - The whole thing doesn't fit very well. 00:17:681 (39) in particular, really should not be a kat. Agree, fixed

00:19:317 (46,47,48) - be careful with going multicolor triplets in Muzukashii. Unless you're working with slower bpms, I would advise you don't. It's boring otherwise and there is no Oni. I'll put a warning (?

00:20:408 (51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75) - this part could be denser. Don't be afraid of using 1/2s in Muzu, just put it down wherever. (other similar parts too) I'm afraid

00:29:863 (88) - finish? (also applies to others like this) Love this one, nice

00:36:590 (113,114,115) - multicolor

00:48:226 (164,165,166) - ^ (find the rest yourself, I won't do it for you)

again, not a fan of this map style but I won't stop you. ptar remapping offline (?)

In overall, you seem be doing well with no critical errors. The rest are just how the notes sound, which can be subjective depending on who you talk to. I do recommend going back and play them yourself a few times until you're satisfied with the outcome.
THANK YOU PTAR
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