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Ceryuia wrote:
Hihi~ From my Queue
01:23:115 (289,290) - Remove these finishers, they are unnecessary
01:35:661 (338,339) - ^
Thank you for the mod wuuuuuuuuuu!! I hope you like the 1/1 notes ideaSmallwu wrote:
Hello, mod from my queue
[General]
I think Offset is wrong, it's too fast. Try 8050 or 8052 Better ✓
Make sure your Slider Velocity is "1.40" (AiMod)
Open your .osu file with txt, Ctrl+F "SliderMultiplier"
1.399999.... --> 1.4 Done ✓
Remove tags "english and japanese" Yeah, I wrote that because in the left sings Japanese and in the right english. Removed ✓
[Oni]
I only mod Oni because you said that >3<
00:16:934 (34) - Move to 00:16:752 - Because 00:16:389 (32,33) You follow vocal, that's strange, before that you only follow music. Do this will be more fit I think I'm not following nothing there, sometimes you can ignore and create. I like it how it is
00:28:388 (79,80,81,82,83,84,85,86,87) - k d d d d d d d k Maybe you want to do like 00:57:479 but here no loud drum I think it's more fun alternate colors
00:37:479 - 00:41:297 - Although this is Oni, it's still too long. Remove 00:38:752 (121) and 00:40:206 (128) and 00:40:570 (129) . Then Ctrl+G 00:41:115 (131,132) Move 00:41:297 (132) to 00:41:479 Done Sure but I found another way to cut it click
00:42:206 - 00:47:115 - Still too long, but I have no idea at this part @w@ Try to remove some notes! Done ✓ click
00:47:297 - Add d That's not the idea
01:10:570 - Add k Because here has... guitar? This one 01:10:959 (237) - needs to be alone there
01:13:661 (252,253) - Move to 01:13:479 I have no idea how to say :3 If you need reason pls tell meYou gave me an ideaclick
01:19:479 (272,273) - Move to 01:19:297 ^ I feel like that part don't need to rush notes, like as if it were more relaxed. Your way it's fine but I like the way I did it
01:23:479 (289) - Remove this to highlight the K The next d it's locked for me. I mean, it's a K no need to highlight, at least there
01:25:297 (293,294) - Move to 01:25:115 I have no idea how to say :3 If you need reason pls tell meSame idea repeated here
01:31:115 (313,314) - Move to 01:30:934 ^ This stays too
01:32:388 - 01:36:752 - Change to them pls They also follow music, but can give player some breaks Cool ✓
01:35:661 and 01:35:934 - Remove green lines, I don't know why you use them :3 Before those notes were D, so I remove them to d and increase the volume
01:43:934 - This green line move to 01:44:025 Done ✓
02:14:206 (127) - Change to D to keep consistency( Like 02:07:297 (100) and 02:08:388 (104) )I like it ✓
02:20:388 (150) - Change to k ^ It's a k
03:04:115 - Green line move to 03:04:025 ? Sure ✓
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Good Luck >w<
I was so wrong aaa sorry REMOVED ✓Smallwu wrote:
01:23:479 (289) - Remove this to highlight the K The next d it's locked for me. I mean, it's a K no need to highlight, at least there
Of course it helps!! thank u for check the Oni too Vulkin even if you have not found anything!! se hablaban en ingles jajaVulkin wrote:
Welp dual voice map, dual childhood intensifies >:D
Hope i help :3
-Futsuu-
00:18:959 (16) - Why finisher? you didnt put it on the first one O-o
The only difference between them it's the background chord. Below I will try to explain it a little better
00:35:504 (10) - Put finisher in this one, since it has same guitar noise as 00:32:595 (4) - Cool ✓
00:44:232 (24) - Move to 00:44:413 - Sure but why move that one and not this one 00:38:413 (15) -
00:47:686 (28,29) - Remove finisher
Not all the "teen titans!" (vocal) are the same, those are higher. If you ask why here 00:18:595 (15,16) - there is one finish and here 00:47:686 (28,29) - are two it's because the second kiai it's longer basically. Surely it's more solid in your way but I don't know, I like finishers I guess
01:04:595 (10) - Put finisher
No because the voice determinates where they go. Basically that note it's not strong enough, it's more like that help to the others finishers to appear. Can be ok with it but this is how I see it
01:07:504 (14) - ^ because 01:01:686 (4) - is same sound and note has finisher Nice ✓
01:14:959 - and 01:15:504 - could add a d and k respectively Done ✓
01:26:595 (44) - Remove finisher Qué wea ese D hermano.. ✓
01:27:140 - put a k here Great ✓
01:31:140 (49) - make it d, has lower pitch than the previous & next note You are right but all those notes are d, I want to break the patron
02:58:050 (123) - Put finisher? Same reason with 01:04:595 (10) -
-Muzukashii-
00:13:322 (19) - Make this a k and remove 00:13:504 (20) - Better ✓
00:16:777 (30) - remove Yes ✓
00:44:413 - put a k here to follow the voice (the left voice at least lol) It's weird to play I think
00:59:686 (3) - remove finisher Agree ✓
01:35:686 (115) - ^ Done ✓
01:44:959 (146) - move to 01:45:686 -
01:46:050 (150) - move to 01:46:231 -
01:50:777 (166) - move to 01:51:504 -
01:51:868 (170) - move to 01:52:050 -
All of these are fine, but I did it that so they would not have the same beginning as the part that follows
01:57:140 - missing note? or its break?, if its missing note, consider adding d on that and here 01:57:322 - It's intended
01:58:050 - add a d I'll keep the "intended part" as it is
02:02:959 - Missing note or break?, if its missing note, then add d on that and 02:03:140 - Same here
02:03:868 - add a d And here
02:09:322 (225,226) - Ctrl+G? I like k d c:
-Oni-
I cant find anything owo n.n
Hope it helps :3
I agreed but there are 3 of them (00:30:594 (3) - 00:59:686 (3) - 02:53:140 (3) - ) that are the same. I just want to clarify that I'm going to remove the finishers in the 3 c:Vulkin wrote:
00:59:686 (3) - remove finisher Agree ✓
Thank youVyiuri wrote:
davidminh0111 wrote:
Mod:
k is Katan means blue one
d is don means red one.
Oni:
General:
-This beatmap is too easy same as Muzusakii.
-00:13:772: Add d.Prefer noedit: Added
-00:14:863: Add k About this ones I feel like this diff has a couple of key-streams (that one included up) and does not need more I think. Or no more so close to each other
-00:23:590: Add d ^
-00:26:499: Add d ^
-00:30:226 to 00:30:954: Add something here.The Muzu already has something there, and I do not like repetition so much. Besides that, it's weird that you tell me to add notes there and not in the others same rhythmical places like 00:59:317 - and 02:52:772 - because they are the same, with an slightly vocal tone difference but irrelevant at the time to decide add notes I think. An idea is that the last empty part does not need any notes because that give an emotional suspense I guess, in that case I agree but why nothing in the middle part? Anyway, I'll keep the breaksedit: Added
This should be more than 3.75 stars to be an Oni beatmapI know, Oni is the name of the difficulty (?edit: I changed to Muzukashii
Good luck, I enjoyed your mao Thank you aaa
Thank youBackfire wrote:
[General]What's going on with the volume in this thing? It's loud in the beginning and then extremely quiet on other parts. It's all over the place.
Futsuu is too easy compared to muzu, consider pumping it with some more notes. You have no proper bridge into the 1/2 spam and 1/4 in muzu. Futsuu is almost similar to kantan, with added abstract rhythms which makes the sr go up.
I read some of your comments and I guess you are saying, you don't want the map to be repetitive? It doesn't have to be, but it also doesn't need to be randomly mapped. I think, in next few mods you get, take them to heart and just trust them. It's a trap that newer mappers will fall into, and it will make it difficult for you to get your map ranked because 1 : You aren't noticing the flaws because to you it's intentional and 2: We can sometimes fail to see our own issues. I wanna help you get better and so do others
edit: Of course is not option 1. I've say no to many good replies because I did not get it at the time. Thank you for take the time to write this and I'm sorry for not reply to this particular message before
[Kantan]I'm not gonna deal with this diff, just that I agree with others who you disagreed with so it's not worth it for me to mod.
No one modded but ok
[Futsuu]00:32:590 - I get that this is a different sound but it is not different enough to justify with a finisher imo (I guess it comes up in other kiai too later)
00:37:135 - 00:42:954 - these two sections have terribly confusing rhythm for someone new who would be playing this. Consider something more straight forward that follows the music. Even just like 5 1/1 in a row wouldn't be bad, compared to this.
02:10:226 - 02:16:045 - 02:21:863 - Spinners and/or sliders would be fine to eliminate these ugly spaces
03:01:863 - This shouldn't be a finisher.
Done ✓
[Muzukashii]00:16:954 - this makes no sense. You could start it earlier to emulate the "aaaaaaaaaaa" sound, but, you didn't do it earlier either.
00:18:954 - what are these sv? Why did it slow down?
00:46:591 (54,55,56,57) - these should just be removed in favor to a d k d k rhythm.
00:48:045 - please stop using this sv 01:11:317 - It works fine in this instance because you are going from 1.1 back down to 1.0
01:35:317 (114,115,116,117,118) - you had a good rhythm going and this throws it off, it's random. Just go back to d k ddk because it sounds insanely out of place.
01:38:226 (123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142) - I really recommend you change these patterns because they too are extremely out of place. You can do like an opposite of the first rhythm (inverted notes)
02:08:408 - out of place and random. If you're gonna do this, do it for all the notes that sound like that, you don't just go random mode on it.
03:00:954 (23,25) - totally random too.
Noticed
I'm going to skip oni, but you also do the same SV things as muzu, and it is distracting and bad, so please fix it. I'll give you a more general review for oni.
Add some more 1/4 fills, focus on making a flowing map, rather than following some of the instruments because it's a cluttered map. You try to do too much, with too little, so focus it. Also 01:38:226 - did you forget to map here? Because this is an inappropriate use of spinner.
The sv were a map tip but it's fine, I can remove them if they are annoying. I specifically did not concentrate in the instruments while mapping, I just tried to map in a simple rhythmical way + easy map + fun map I guess but you are right
Thank you for modding Toara!toara_fict wrote:
Taiko Mod request from My Queue.
[ General]- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
- Okay. Yey
[ Kantan]- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
- 00:45:135 - add d here Done
- 01:04:045 - add d here. ( it's kiai lart Done
- 01:44:045 (73) - ~ 02:10:226 (96) - Although it is not kiai, the density is the highest.
Let's shave a little and increase kiai's notes Sure
Difficulty is too low
Add some more notes is better. ( About 30~50 notes ) Alright
[ Futsuu]- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
- fine. Yey again
[ Muzukashii]- - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - - -
- 00:22:408 (54) - delete. ( 00:08:045 (1) - ~ Density does not change with Oni. ) Done
- 00:41:317 (37) - Change d & move 00:41:135 (37) - / 00:41:681 (38) - move 00:41:499 (38) - ( follow simple drum sound ) Done
- 00:47:136 (57) - move 00:47:317 (57) - & change d. ( Some ^ ) Done
- 00:51:498 (74) - 00:54:407 (85) - delete. ( It's not a place where density is required ) Deleted
- 01:23:317 (75,76) - swap finish. ( 01:23:317 - not large sound, ) Swapped
- 02:34:045 (298) - move 02:34:590 - & 02:35:135 - add d here ? ( you style. ) Sure
[ Oni]Yeah, everybody tell me that. I think I will replace the Oni with the Muzu and do a new Oni
- 01:23:317 (291,292) - swap Finish is better. ( 01:23:317 (291) - not large sound, ) Swapped
- 01:55:499 (416) - change kat. ( 01:55:317 (415,416) - some sounds. ) I didn't notice. Done
This diff is Muzukashii ? I think it's too easy.
It's different from a simple style Oni
Add some more notes is better. ( About 100~150 notes )
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THANK YOU PTARptar124 wrote:
ey im here now yehGeneral
- Pay attention to your Kiais, some are really short and we tend to want to avoid that when possible. Try to put it on the long highlights, if it's just a short burst you may want to remove those Fixed, thx
- Timing seems fine I think so
- You sure you don't want an Oni for this thing? I know you removed it, but the song really does have potential for an Oni. Overmapping will be required for an Oni to work, but if you're good/experienced enough it should be fine. I can't do one but yeah, maybe
Kantan
00:12:772 (4,5) - these are alright, but do be aware that this could throw beginners off. In Kantan we usually place quite little 1/1 notes. We usually go for 2/1 and 4/1. Fixed, 2/1 now
]01:12:045 (57,58,59,60) - these are also quite the challenge for beginners. Alternatively, you can move 58 to one beat later so that it lines up perfectly on the downbeats. You are right, nice
01:31:681 (74,75,76) - from here, there are lots of kats, you might want to change some to dons Done
Really good so far, although, I will not point out the same things in other places. If there are other places with the same issues I mentioned, you will have to find them yourself (or this will be a really long mod post). Of course, I fix them tooFutsuu
Not really anything need fixing, it's fine where it is. Although, this isn't quite the map style I like. Still, I won't destroy your map style because of just personal preferences. Just keep it, see what the QA says. Happens :')Muzukashii
00:16:954 (35,36,37,38,39,40,41,42) - The whole thing doesn't fit very well. 00:17:681 (39) in particular, really should not be a kat. Agree, fixed
00:19:317 (46,47,48) - be careful with going multicolor triplets in Muzukashii. Unless you're working with slower bpms, I would advise you don't. It's boring otherwise and there is no Oni. I'll put a warning (?
00:20:408 (51,52,53,54,55,56,57,58,59,60,61,62,63,64,65,66,67,68,69,70,71,72,73,74,75) - this part could be denser. Don't be afraid of using 1/2s in Muzu, just put it down wherever. (other similar parts too) I'm afraid
00:29:863 (88) - finish? (also applies to others like this) Love this one, nice
00:36:590 (113,114,115) - multicolor
00:48:226 (164,165,166) - ^ (find the rest yourself, I won't do it for you)
again, not a fan of this map style but I won't stop you. ptar remapping offline (?)
In overall, you seem be doing well with no critical errors. The rest are just how the notes sound, which can be subjective depending on who you talk to. I do recommend going back and play them yourself a few times until you're satisfied with the outcome.