[General]Thank youWhat's going on with the volume in this thing? It's loud in the beginning and then extremely quiet on other parts. It's all over the place.
Futsuu is too easy compared to muzu, consider pumping it with some more notes. You have no proper bridge into the 1/2 spam and 1/4 in muzu. Futsuu is almost similar to kantan, with added abstract rhythms which makes the sr go up.
I read some of your comments and I guess you are saying, you don't want the map to be repetitive? It doesn't have to be, but it also doesn't need to be randomly mapped. I think, in next few mods you get, take them to heart and just trust them. It's a trap that newer mappers will fall into, and it will make it difficult for you to get your map ranked because 1 : You aren't noticing the flaws because to you it's intentional and 2: We can sometimes fail to see our own issues. I wanna help you get better and so do others
edit: Of course is not option 1. I've say no to many good replies because I did not get it at the time. Thank you for take the time to write this and I'm sorry for not reply to this particular message before
[Kantan]I'm not gonna deal with this diff, just that I agree with others who you disagreed with so it's not worth it for me to mod.
No one modded but ok
[Futsuu]00:32:590 - I get that this is a different sound but it is not different enough to justify with a finisher imo (I guess it comes up in other kiai too later)
00:37:135 - 00:42:954 - these two sections have terribly confusing rhythm for someone new who would be playing this. Consider something more straight forward that follows the music. Even just like 5 1/1 in a row wouldn't be bad, compared to this.
02:10:226 - 02:16:045 - 02:21:863 - Spinners and/or sliders would be fine to eliminate these ugly spaces
03:01:863 - This shouldn't be a finisher.
[Muzukashii]00:16:954 - this makes no sense. You could start it earlier to emulate the "aaaaaaaaaaa" sound, but, you didn't do it earlier either.
00:18:954 - what are these sv? Why did it slow down?
00:46:591 (54,55,56,57) - these should just be removed in favor to a d k d k rhythm.
00:48:045 - please stop using this sv 01:11:317 - It works fine in this instance because you are going from 1.1 back down to 1.0
01:35:317 (114,115,116,117,118) - you had a good rhythm going and this throws it off, it's random. Just go back to d k ddk because it sounds insanely out of place.
01:38:226 (123,124,125,126,127,128,129,130,131,132,133,134,135,136,137,138,139,140,141,142) - I really recommend you change these patterns because they too are extremely out of place. You can do like an opposite of the first rhythm (inverted notes)
02:08:408 - out of place and random. If you're gonna do this, do it for all the notes that sound like that, you don't just go random mode on it.
03:00:954 (23,25) - totally random too.
I'm going to skip oni, but you also do the same SV things as muzu, and it is distracting and bad, so please fix it. I'll give you a more general review for oni.
Add some more 1/4 fills, focus on making a flowing map, rather than following some of the instruments because it's a cluttered map. You try to do too much, with too little, so focus it. Also 01:38:226 - did you forget to map here? Because this is an inappropriate use of spinner.
The sv were a map tip but it's fine, I can remove them if they are annoying. I specifically did not concentrate in the instruments while mapping, I just tried to map in a simple rhythmical way + easy map + fun map I guess but you are right