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Hotaru Murasaki - Re:TrymenT [Osu|CatchTheBeat]

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Topic Starter
_Meep_
why do i keep giving sinnoh kds well knowing he shouldnt be having kds :thonkang:
i have inhumane reactions
Kyuukai

_Meep_ wrote:

why do i keep giving sinnoh kds well knowing he shouldnt be having kds :thonkang:
i have inhumane reactions
Topic Starter
_Meep_

Sinnoh wrote:

no kudosu

Not a BN's BN check

Hard
00:05:728 (2) - Rip aesthetics Fixed
You used antiflow at 00:26:570 (6,1) - but not 00:36:675 (7,1) -, should/could change so they're similar or just change so 6 flows somewhere other than top left corner I never really thought about this lol,I just went with what I thought felt natural,I'll see if it needs changes
00:40:781 (2,3,1) - Unsure if this is readable Unstacked.
00:52:781 (2) - Yeah these finish spams don't work wut finishes theres only whistles ._.
01:00:044 (1,2) - Doesn't flow, can't check cause using trackpad doesn't exactly need to flow well imo, she emphasises her voice quite a lot here and the sudden change in direction/placement of cursor should be able to clearly emphasize her bootiful voice
01:25:307 (1) - Rip aesthetics but this ones fine ;w;
01:30:360 (1) - Just add a white slider point before the red ones so it's curved meh >_>
01:35:412 (1) - You can remove a green line here if you apply sampleset-normal to the spinner. Applies to Insane. (Also spinner sound is inconsistent with other diffs cause some have hitnormal some don't) Fixed

Insane
00:06:991 (1) - Rotate by 5-10 degrees Fixed
00:19:307 (5) - Kind of ignoring an important sound on red tick, change to a slider? Fixed
00:21:360 (2) - imo should be 4x like my diff, optional meh .-.
00:57:202 (1) - The violin follows 1/4, why is this 1/6 tbh we dont give a damn anymore, neither do I, I feel like this fits the intensity of the buildup so I leave it as 1/6,unless someone actually can hear 1/4 and 1/6 separately in a 1 second timeframe whilist playing oss, i dont think it matters.
01:00:517 (3,4,5) - Doesn't reallly emphasise vocals because 3,4 is larger than 4,5 I don't exactly get you here, she says 'mo' at 4, and its because she upped her pitch a bit on saying that,thats why I place it further.
01:25:939 (3,4) - This flow has mild cancer, not sure why slider flow breaks here. Doesn't always need to flow well,I went with what felt natural here, and its a slow part,so i dont think anyone would care XD
01:30:360 (1) - Still has better circular flow if you ctrl-g NU DONT TOUCH MY FLOWER ;w; well i dont think it needs circular flow in the first place ._.

http://pastebin.com/u6LZN7kM

I already did Ascendance's diff in the last post.
_handholding

Nowa
  1. 00:15:833 (1) - There is a drum kick here but not a piano note so it feels a bit odd that to have this note here as it seems the entire pattern from 00:13:307 (1) to 00:20:886 (1) is following the piano. I really do think a turning 00:15:675 (7) into a half slider would follow it better. If you really didn't want to do that at least have a change of flow from 00:15:833 (1) -
  2. 00:33:044 (4) - you've mapped this vocal sound with a held note (slider) for the rest of the section. Feels a bit weird rhythmically to have this as a circle at this specific spot
  3. 00:34:781 (1,2) - doesn't look too appealing aesthetically, in fact looks somewhat random and out of place. Recommend to just stack like 00:24:675 (1,2) for a more cleaner and polished look
  4. 01:02:254 (1,1) - because of the SV change these look like 2 1/2 sliders visually. As a result it throws you off whilst playing, do something to make the 1/4 gap more obvious

Insane
  1. 00:30:675 (3,4) - I'm not really sure about stacking the circle on the slider head like for the readability and the flow of the pattern as well as the emphasis given to the downbeat. After some thought I'm starting to think this may be subjective but I'm gonna say it anyways because reasons
[]GL!
Nowaie
Holy it has been a long time since i touched this

Sinnoh wrote:

Flower
00:42:044 (1) - Imo would be better if it was a little lower, but minor. I'll try a different kind of slider
01:07:623 (1) - 01:12:675 (1) - Unused timing points Removed first one, pumped the second one to like 75% volume
Hitsounds in the kiai are significantly weaker than the rest of the song, use more of the normal-hitormal Will be making some changes
01:32:254 (1) - I like the more interesting take on the final part here :) ^_^

Kisses wrote:

Nowa
  1. 00:15:833 (1) - There is a drum kick here but not a piano note so it feels a bit odd that to have this note here as it seems the entire pattern from 00:13:307 (1) to 00:20:886 (1) is following the piano. I really do think a turning 00:15:675 (7) into a half slider would follow it better. If you really didn't want to do that at least have a change of flow from 00:15:833 (1) - I guess i was kinda dumb back when i mapped this... changed stuff around and it should be better
  2. 00:33:044 (4) - you've mapped this vocal sound with a held note (slider) for the rest of the section. Feels a bit weird rhythmically to have this as a circle at this specific spot Fixed
  3. 00:34:781 (1,2) - doesn't look too appealing aesthetically, in fact looks somewhat random and out of place. Recommend to just stack like 00:24:675 (1,2) for a more cleaner and polished look I agree 100%
  4. 01:02:254 (1,1) - because of the SV change these look like 2 1/2 sliders visually. As a result it throws you off whilst playing, do something to make the 1/4 gap more obvious The NCs should warn enough, also why would i use that small spacing for 1/2 sliders in the kiai anyway
upd tomorrow, kinda sad this won't like ever get nominated
Topic Starter
_Meep_
Im loving this set, I dont see it going anywhere and I think I cant work on it anymore
sad i cant get bns
sorry guys.
I'll wait for nowa to do some changes on his hitsounds,then we love it
then again
im sorry.
Nowaie

_Meep_ wrote:

Im loving this set, I dont see it going anywhere and I think I cant work on it anymore
sad i cant get bns
sorry guys.
I'll wait for nowa to do some changes on his hitsounds,then we love it
then again
im sorry.
Sometimes something like this happens, sadly. What is with BNs not wanting to nominate stuff from new mappers that look promising, promoting their mapping and making them want to improve and continue their mapping career

Not straight up begin friends with nominators should not be a reason to not get something nominated
Kyuukai

_Meep_ wrote:

Im loving this set, I dont see it going anywhere and I think I cant work on it anymore
sad i cant get bns
sorry guys.
I'll wait for nowa to do some changes on his hitsounds,then we love it
then again
im sorry.
Pentori checked ur map, but he didn't nominate ur stuff, so what's the problem ? I think it's pretty obvious, the mapset is not ready yet.

It's not that the mapset is not going anywhere, it's just that the map can be improved, and I think that this map can get ranked if you work on it a little more. You can rank it, it might take a while, but you can. If you choose to make it Loved, well I'm fine with it, but it has the potential to get ranked and it would be sad seeing it Loved instead of ranked.

I know it's a pain to look for BNs tho, every ranked or qualified map are made by the same mappers and new ones are left behind.
Riari
ctb is bad thats why
Xinnoh

Riari wrote:

ctb is bad thats why rejected, it's my style
no changes
Net0
"it's just that the map can be improved"
Considering the stuff that get pass qualify this criteria is really subjective. The fact is that BNs didn't nominate simply because they didn't want to. That's how it goes.

Btw Meep, any news of this getting loved, I'm also tired of the wait o.o
Topic Starter
_Meep_

Net0 wrote:

"it's just that the map can be improved"
Considering the stuff that get pass qualify this criteria is really subjective. The fact is that BNs didn't nominate simply because they didn't want to. That's how it goes.

Btw Meep, any news of this getting loved, I'm also tired of the wait o.o
nop lol
Topic Starter
_Meep_
loved d
Ascendance
Really dislike people who give up on ranking things and push it to loved lol

Super disappointing really :/
619
O gratz Meep!
sorry i forgot remap my diff xd
Monstrata
I almost wanted to pass on the map, but then I saw your slider art on Insane decided it was worth trying :D.

Insane

00:10:465 (3,1) - This doesn't flow that nicely imo. Try Ctrl+G'ing 1, and also Ctrl+G'ing 2. I think the flow still works really well, and now accounts for slider 3 too.
00:14:886 (2,4) - just stack 4 with 2? The overlap doesn't look nice when there isn't another similar overlap to create a visual pattern with.
00:16:781 (6,7,1) - Emphasis is a bit misplaced between 6>7>1. Put more on 7>1 and less on 6>7 imo
00:19:623 (1,2,3,4) - Take 1+3 and copy/paste to get a better coordinate for 4.
00:20:254 (5) - I think two 1/2 sliders will work better.. don't neglect 00:20:728 -

00:22:781 (3,2) - the overlap looks pretty bad imo... You have a lot of room at the bottom of the screen to work with., use that area instead of an overlap? It keeps the map less congested.
00:30:675 (3,4) - It was quite hard to see this circle. I would just position it somewhere easy to see since you use overlaps later already so the full overlap here seems a bit unnecessary. The position of 4 is fine, maybe move slider 3 elsewhere to avoid the overlap instead of trying to move 4.

Wait im dumb i just realized this is Loved. okay whatever cya looool ;w; at least i only spent 2 minutes writing this
Xinnoh
there's nothing stopping you from helping it get ranked
Topic Starter
_Meep_
f
upon advice from triangle god, i will keep this in loved and move on c:
-Kazuto
Maru is my waifu
PatZar

it's better you to play the VN too
momo's route is masterpieces
unko
how is this even loved? i tought u needed 100sp
Xinnoh
every mod gives +1 or +2 sp, they add up
Topic Starter
_Meep_
3 days later
im booting this out of loved
lets go for rank bois
JierYagtama
:eyes:
Asherz007
Unloved as requested.

minichat
2018-03-24 22:40 _Meep_: asherz
2018-03-24 22:40 _Meep_: o/
2018-03-24 22:40 _Meep_: can u unlove sets?
2018-03-24 22:41 Asherz007: uh, I can I guess, why
2018-03-24 22:41 _Meep_: ACTION is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1101073 Hotaru Murasaki - Re:TrymenT]
2018-03-24 22:41 _Meep_: please ;3c
2018-03-24 22:42 Asherz007: you wanna try and rank it or something I guess?
2018-03-24 22:42 _Meep_: yep
2018-03-24 22:42 Asherz007: aight then

Good luck on ranking this!

This is how I do this right
Ascendance
oh hello
BoberOfDarkness
respect for unloved
Kyuukai
yo wtf Yaleufeu's EasY
Joe Castle
YO YOU ACTUALLY GOING FOR RANK?
intiaz
YYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYYY
You can do it _Meep_! I believed in you then and I still do now! :D
Topic Starter
_Meep_
i am going for rank
im just taking fucking ages to remap my insane
- Ed -
This better get ranked, I just lost a #1 and I want it back :eyes:
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