yo, m4m
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Red: Unrankable
Orange: highly recommended
Blue: Some tips
Green: Nazi stuff
Bold: General
Good luck ^-^
Easy
- 01:05:254 (1) - I'm feeling you're trying to follow the vocal (or at least is what you have done in this diff), and this slider 01:05:254 (1) - does not look like the previous pattern, because in the others moments you finish the slider in 1,5/4 timing (00:41:954 (1,2) - 00:23:313 (1,2) - etc), i know the same exactly moment of the music with this same situation is the spin 00:37:293 (1) -, but this moment have the same guitar song than i show before, so i recommend you finish this slider 01:05:254 (1) - in 01:06:129 - and add a circle in 01:07:003 -for consistency
- 01:17:197 (2) - reverse arrow repeated can be really confuse for beginners, the 1/4 timing isn't enought for a beginner look again the sliderarrow, maybe if you remap from two 1/4 sliders can be better
- 01:31:760 - this is the only moment you have added whistle hitsound in this beat moment in this kiai (others moments of this beat that you dont have added whistle: 01:22:439 - 01:27:100 - 01:41:080 - etc) I know that's the only moment that you start the momend hitting a circle, the others is just end of slider, but for easy difficulty i recommend you add whistle hitsounds in these moments too, looks more consistent and is a good beat for a whistle
- 01:31:760 (5,2) - looks a good moment for a blanket
- 02:10:498 (1) - maybe someone have talked about but this slider is a bit out of the screen, recommend you change the position
Normal
- 00:14:867 (2) - add whistle in the first circle of this slider for consistence
- 00:55:935 (1) - I recommend you add a whistle in ths first circle of this slider and a clap at the end for consistence
- 01:08:459 - whistle for consistence too
- 01:17:197 (1,1,1,1,1) - maybe some qats can disapprove these NC, i recommend you do something like (1,2,1,2,1), looks more rankeable and follow better the beats
pudingkokoro's Hard
- 00:39:624 (3) - Add NC for consistency (you're following the basic 1/1 NC standart)
- 00:54:478 (5) - This slider lacks aesthetics, looks really random and the moment isn't appropriate for this, like is in 00:55:935 (8) -, i recommend you remap for other kind of slider
- 01:00:595 (2) - Add Finish for consistence
- ok you forgot to add yours finish, starting 01:00:595 - and going until 01:14:575 -, You have added Finish hitsound in all 4/1 songs in the first moment of the song, like 00:18:653 - 00:20:983 -00:23:313 - 00:25:643 - etc, and you stop this standart in 01:00:595 (2) -, since there's no why you have done it, i really recommend you repeat your hitsongs in 01:00:595 - until 01:14:575 -
- 01:16:032 (1) - okay we have a problem starting here, your NC consistency was during the beginning the 4/1 repeat, following the basic 1/4 beats of the song, but you have added a new combo here 01:16:032 (1) - because of this star 01:16:032 (1,2,3,4) -, isn't wrong this idea if we think in a map made for experient players, with changes in the song (like extra star dubstep maps), but this christmas song with hard difficulty is quite strange to see this, i recommend you keep the 4/1 combos, for you do that you will need:
01:16:032 (1) - Remove this new combo
01:26:226 (3) - Add new combo here
01:31:469 (2) - Add new combo here
01:44:867 (3) - Add new combo here - 01:27:973 (9) - This circle is too overlap with yourself for a unnecessary moment, I recommend you remap
- The kiai have a such horrible spacing, just looking this we can see that's all high spacing has no standart 01:54:187 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6) -, with some moments in 2,26x jump spacing 01:23:313 (7,1) -, with 2,0x circle jumps 01:37:003 (6,7) -, i know you tried follow the 1,7x spacing, but It has several irregularities, mainly with long pauses, for example here 01:43:410 (2,3) -, this moment have a full 1/1 timing between both objects, but looks like the jumps that have appears before (01:37:003 (6,7) - ), so some players can be confused, since it's just 1,17x spacing in a moment you follow the pattern 1,7x, anyway i recommend you re-check all spacing in the kiai
Just remember, is accetable jumps in Hard difficulty, but you must need be consistent, a 2,92x jump spacing is never recommended 01:55:935 (3,4) -
Red: Unrankable
Orange: highly recommended
Blue: Some tips
Green: Nazi stuff
Bold: General
Good luck ^-^