1. Guilt (5.07 stars, 1789 notes)

Vulkin wrote:

1/8 Sensei!! >///<
(Got some help from Ulqui to mod some parts, and he wanted to say "your map is pretty good c:")

00:50:744 (157) - turn into d ok
00:56:781 (185) - turn into k vocal pitch is the same as the d before it, so no change
01:22:206 - could be kkddk? compared to the section after it it's lower pitch here so no change
01:23:670 - Could be dkddk? made into dkkdk
01:26:323 (398) - turn into d? synth pitch is going up here and i think it would play better as it is so no change
01:34:097 (479) - turn into d the k here includes the piano so no change
01:38:762 (525,526) - Ctrl+G? ok
01:39:037 (528) - turn into k ok
01:39:951 (537) - turn into d same reasoning as 01:34:097 (479)
02:26:232 (821,823,825,827,829,831) - delete? seems its a bit too much it's for buildup and synth does hit 1/2 so no change
02:28:793 (831) - move to 02:28:883 - ok
02:46:628 (1006) - turn into k ok
02:48:000 (1020) - turn into k synth pitch is still generally low here so no change
03:05:561 (1206) - turn into k pitch is higher and more pronounced here so no change
03:26:232 (1392,1393,1394,1395,1396,1397) - Ctrl+G so it ends up ddk ddd to follow the voice made 03:26:781 and 03:26:963 k's instead for piano and voice
04:16:902 (32) - turn into d piano hits a high note here so no change
04:17:268 (35) - delete ok

04:55:318 - i literally cant hear anything beyond here
Good mappu!

1. The streams here are mapped beautifully in my opinion.
2. I'm not quite sure if this will qualify as an approval map because I have a similar situation on one of my maps.

Taikocracy wrote:

this took WAY too long to me to get around too ;-;

[General Comments]

1. The streams here are mapped beautifully in my opinion.
2. I'm not quite sure if this will qualify as an approval map because I have a similar situation on one of my maps.

[Oni]
Looks like it'll be small sporadic stuff.

00:09:951 - The 3 dons that come after this note are lower in pitch compared to the first, and I propose that this should be a kat. (Especially because that's what you did at 00:21:658, where the same congruent pattern comes around.) changed, and made 00:22:024 a k as i want to reflect a higher pitch in that note than the section before
(1st kiai is mapped very well)
01:54:402 (635, 636, 637, 638, 639) - What pattern are you mapping here that starts on the and of 2 and carries on an entire beat? I don't hear anything, so I'd suggest remapping to something more simple. not sure what you're talking about here, but the monocolor 5-stream is here for the stretched 'grow' so no change
02:24:402 - There's simply no reason to place a triple kat here, unless I'm missing some rhythm in the background. In this light section there isn't a need for triplets at all, but this one in particular doesn't serve any accuracy or purpose in my opinion. ok
04:23:671 (50) - This note (or note 49) doesn't seem to serve much purpose because I believe it's note 50 that's just sustaining the vocal hold-out here. If that were the case there'd have to be a lot more kat here, and even then, I'd advise that you remove it completely, or if you're interested in keeping the sustained vocal, to replace it with a spinner. spinner would be really ugly as the gap between notes here isn't long enough to consider one and the kats are mapped to how the singer says eyes as "e-aa-iiiiiiii" in a sense, so no change
04:28:976 - This note feels very out of place due to your placement of the note before it. I recommend that you move this note to the time stamp 04:29:159 instead. don't want to change placement of this note as then it would be mapped to nothing so no change
04:37:757 - Remember the first comment of this mod? Yeah that applied here too. changed the same as first comment
The last spinner of this map continues WELL into silence, but I know why you did it, so it's fine I guess lol.

Hope this helped, and I'm sorry that this took so long

1. 04:08:507 - 82BPM section starts at 04:05:580 -

1. 00:31:557 (72) - There is different sound.So kat would be better.
2. 01:34:118 (479,480) - CTRL+G,because the first note is lower than second one.And the song gives that feel ;w; But 01:35:398 (491,492,493,494,495) - keep here for variety
3. 01:53:598 - Oh god..So many triplets,at least add a kat to make a 5plet lel
4. 01:55:337 (662,663,664,665,666) - Tbh patterns like dddkk might confuse players.Try it with dddkd imo
5. 02:11:800 - If you add a note,it would be better emphasis,why not?But it's just suggestion..
6. 02:20:214 - It's more intense part,you could use harder patterns..like 1/4 xd

zigizigiefe wrote:

I'm bored lelel
[General]

1. 04:08:507 - 82BPM section starts at 04:05:580 - made a new timing section for this because if i move the second timing section for the 82 bpm part the map just completely dies so

[Oni]

1. 00:31:557 (72) - There is different sound.So kat would be better. ok
2. 01:34:118 (479,480) - CTRL+G,because the first note is lower than second one.And the song gives that feel ;w; But 01:35:398 (491,492,493,494,495) - keep here for variety the 3 kats are there to represent the added piano notes, so no change
3. 01:53:598 - Oh god..So many triplets,at least add a kat to make a 5plet lel i feel that adding a kat there would be mapping to nothing, so no change
4. 01:55:337 (662,663,664,665,666) - Tbh patterns like dddkk might confuse players.Try it with dddkd imo i really don't see how it would confuse players, and it's mapped for the rising synth pitch, so no change
5. 02:11:800 - If you add a note,it would be better emphasis,why not?But it's just suggestion.. the -ck sound is too quiet here to add a note to, so no change
6. 02:20:214 - It's more intense part,you could use harder patterns..like 1/4 xd i want it to be sort of a short, gradual buildup to the kiai so no changes

Well,I tried to not interfere to your mapping style...God,that song is epic *starts crying*

Backfire wrote:

[General]

Your notes aren't snapped. Click snap all. fuckshit
HP 5 is probably fine on a map like this ok

[Oni]

00:56:435 (183,184) - Swap these around, because the second to last note should be a kat to emphasis the pitch going lower. ok
00:58:263 - Why is this a don and all the other notes are kat? The vocals are really no excuse cuz it still sounds like she is finishing her last word so uhh like the ending can make that sound. Idk. just change it to kat or die :gun: it's a don here for the piano notes that build up to the finish, so no change
00:59:726 - A lot of this section before the kiai feels extremely overmapped/cluttered, I think you can take some notes out and make it feel more clean like around 01:01:373 - 01:04:309 - 01:05:031 - 01:05:397 - 01:07:226 - etc, you can make these changes yourself because it's not responsible modding to make you change all that somewhat objective stuff. deleted most of the notes that were mentioned here
01:45:092 - Finisher? Or do you not like finishers at the end of the stream? sometimes they look ugly but it'd be fine here don't think it would be comfortable to hit after a long stream section, so no change
02:35:763 (900,906) - these two can be kats, I don't really like the pattern you have for the stream now since its kind of bland for a part that can have variations. ok
02:47:104 - same with this stream changed most of the streams quite a bit
03:31:922 - Kat? low vocal pitch here, so no change
04:17:929 - Move your note here (it's on 1/8) ok
04:18:752 (36,37,38,39) - this part is cancer to map but I think if you mess around with it in 1/12 and 1/16 you'll see where to put them. Play it at like 50%.
I think there's not much of a solution to make these not sound bad. yeah i really don't want to create cancer rhythms here, so i'm leaving it at 1/2
05:03:387 - end the spinner here ok