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Chitose Haru & Kumagai Eri - Perfect Free

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[ Kuro Usagi ]
68 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
[ Kuro Usagi ]
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016년 10월 21일 금요일 at 오전 4:09:06

Artist: Chitose Haru & Kumagai Eri
Title: Perfect Free
BPM: 178
Filesize: 9642kb
Play Time: 05:43
Difficulties Available:
  1. Ultra (5.39 stars, 1507 notes)
Download: Chitose Haru & Kumagai Eri - Perfect Free
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처음 내는 어프곡 도전합니다
Last edited by [ Kuro Usagi ] , edited 3 times in total.
Euny
2,274 posts
Joined January 2014
Euny
몯잉하러 올게 힛싸박으렴
Lully
1,270 posts
Joined September 2013
Lully
m4mq
Ultra
00:11:937 (1) - flow weird imo, place this to x:152 y:334 or just stack it with 00:12:106 (2) -
00:16:993 (4,5) - http://puu.sh/rPMl1.jpg ?
00:29:128 (3) - perfect triangle x:480 y:108
00:33:510 (1) - http://puu.sh/rPMvk.jpg would look much better
00:42:780 (1) - should have a more creative shape ~
00:46:319 (6,7) - http://puu.sh/rPMBc.jpg
00:53:735 (1) - blanket those if u want to ignore the overlap
01:06:544 (3,4) - would prefer a normal stream pattern here because why not
01:21:965 - feels weird when there's no beat
01:39:409 (1) - better flow http://puu.sh/rPMVN.jpg
01:51:712 (1) - should be symmetric.
03:07:892 - a pattern like this would be cooler http://puu.sh/rPNb1.jpg
03:36:882 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - why arent they stacked like 03:34:184 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - ? the stacked thing looks much better
04:41:600 (1) - fix stack
04:40:757 (1) - http://puu.sh/rPNqK.jpg ~ fits more to the vocal.

Also, AIMod things.


Man, this map is really cool. ~
Gj!
Vovan
547 posts
Joined March 2014
Vovan
Hi, my mod for Euny's queue :3

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Ultra
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00:14:128 (3,4) - These sliders are touching and that's not really cool to see D:

00:18:173 (5,6,1,2) - Here the flow is really strange ._.

00:43:791 (2) - Maybe changing this slider to an horizontal one can look better~

00:55:589 (2,3) - Improve/fix blanket

00:58:454 (3,4) - Why not curving (3) ? Or make (4) straight ? It can creates symmetry

01:00:476 (1) - You don't really need that kind of slider here 'cuz you can't do a blanket with the end

01:11:263 (1,2,3,4) - A double blanket can look better

02:33:679 (2) - Why this slider ?

02:40:252 (1,2) - Make a smaller jump : The sliders like (1) isn't really cool for this pattern because it's always hard to find where will be the end, and this jump will cause so much sliderbreaks/misses

03:22:049 (1,2) - Make/Improve blanket

03:27:780 - We need to here something here, a reverse/circle can be cool~

Just a suggestion : you can end your spinner here : 03:33:847 -

03:35:701 (1,2) - Make a bigger jump to follow the consistency that you created before : 03:34:184 (1,2,1,2,1,2) -

03:41:937 (2,2) - Improve blanket

03:49:690 (3) - NC

04:07:892 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spacing problem

And, for the end, I saw that your streams, or the spacing of your streams is really inconsistent, An example. here the last circle haven't the same spacing than the other ones.
Irohas
1,353 posts
Joined May 2014
Irohas
M4M

ultra
you should decrease a bit the volume 100% is too loud
00:16:993 (4,5,1) - flow is weird imo what about changing (5) to a copypaste-slider of 00:16:993 (4) - ?
00:21:038 (5,6) - spacing should be bigger than 00:20:870 (4,5) - a bit as 00:28:791 (1,2,3,4) -
00:22:555 (4) - overmap i guess
01:43:117 (8,9) - 01:47:162 (8,9) - spacing inconsistent 01:40:420 (8,9) - 01:41:768 (8,9) -
02:04:690 (4,5) - you should increase the spacing here, I think it forced to make an awkward movment
02:10:252 (7,8) - ^
02:17:162 (10,1) - what about remove (10) and moved (1) to 02:17:162 - to correctly fit the wub sound? since it seems that's what you wanted to follow
02:17:752 (2) - overmap
02:18:004 (5) - NC cause SV change
03:15:139 (4,1) - increase the spacing ?
04:06:207 (1) - NC here is not really necessary imo
04:12:611 (1) - ^
04:13:622 (1) - ^
04:40:757 (1,1) - stack ?
05:00:982 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - improve the star pattern, it'll be better aesthetically
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that's all for me, good luck !
[ Kuro Usagi ]
68 posts
Joined July 2011
Topic Starter
[ Kuro Usagi ]
nyu -

00:11:937 (1) - flow weird imo, place this to x:152 y:334 or just stack it with 00:12:106 (2) - fix!

00:16:993 (4,5) - sorry

00:29:128 (3) - fix!

00:33:510 (1) - fix!

00:42:780 (1) - i think current one is enough

01:06:544 (3,4) - thanks for recommend but i love current one

01:39:409 (1) - fix!

03:36:882 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - i dont think they must same stack if fine to play



Lexis

00:14:128 (3,4) - fix!

00:18:173 (5,6,1,2) - tell me what is problem i think its nice to play

00:43:791 (2) - i think current one is enough

00:55:589 (2,3) - it looks fine for me!

00:58:454 (3,4) - i dont like symmetry much sorry!

01:00:476 (1) - that slider not for blanket with some object.

01:11:263 (1,2,3,4) - I want keep it

02:33:679 (2) - fix!

02:40:252 (1,2) - when play, its fine with it

03:22:049 (1,2) - fix!

03:27:780 - the vocal sounds end of 03:28:117 - here. so its fine to keep i guess

03:35:701 (1,2) - not really need in my opinion

03:41:937 (2,2) - fix!

03:49:690 (3) - dont need to spam for there.

04:07:892 (1,2,3,4,5) - it's fine for play


MugiwaraSekai

00:16:993 (4,5,1) - that flow for next object( 00:17:330 (1) -). so i think its fine to keep

00:22:555 (4) - there is rhythm. its not overmapped

01:43:117 (8,9) - but its comfortable to play. also flow is fine with that spacing

02:04:690 (4,5) - fix!

02:10:252 (7,8) - i want to keep

02:17:162 (10,1) - i love current one because better for play

02:17:752 (2) - fix!

03:15:139 (4,1) - I want keep!

04:06:207 (1) - fix!

04:12:611 (1) - I want keep!

04:13:622 (1) - I want keep!

05:00:982 (4,5,1,2,3,4) - fix!


Thanks ~ all for me!
[ Zzz ]
1,296 posts
Joined June 2011
[ Zzz ]
ㅎㅇㅎㅇ~ ( 여기서 내가 하는 모딩은 전부다 제안이야 )

00:07:049 (1) - ~ 00:11:853 - 여기까지 스피너 추가해보는건 어떻게 생각해?

00:33:510 (1) - 이거 여기 슬라이더 부분만 0.75배 하고 00:34:016 (2) - 여기에서부턴 1.00배로 다시 돌려보는건 어때? 은근 0.75배 괜찮던데

00:44:971 (6) - 앞에 휘슬 제거해줘
00:49:353 (9) - 앞에 휘슬을 클랩으로 바꿔줘
01:03:173 (1,1) - 뉴콤 두개라는게 조금 .. ( 서클이 스택되는상태라서 넣은거같지만 그래도 01:03:510 (1) - 뉴콤 풀어줘 ) 나중에 혹시 모딩오면 고치더라도
01:38:229 - 쓰지 않는 녹색선이라면 삭제해줘
01:51:544 (1) -
사진처럼 한 박자가 더 좋을꺼같아, 지금으로서는 보컬을 무시하는게 많아서,색은 녹색으로 표현했엉
01:50:364 (1) - 01:55:757 (1) - 01:53:061 (1) - 방금전꺼 참고해서 여기도 바꿔줘 ( 05:32:836 (1) - 여기랑 같은박자야 )
02:02:499 (1) - 맵에 점프가 많아서 이정도는 뉴콤없어도 괜찮지 않을까 생각..
03:27:443 (1) - 여기 리듬 03:22:049 (1) - 여기서부터 다시 읽어보면 달라 2:1 비율로 ( 2:1 이라는건 단타 3박자가 2개가 있고 지금 긴 슬라이더가 1개가 있어서 2대1 이라고 표현했엉 )
03:29:465 (1) - 스피너 하나로 때우긴 좀 세세한 리듬이 있는데
사진처럼은 어떨까? 내가 보고있는 시점은 9번이며 서클 2개씩 나올때 점프넣으면 재밌을꺼같은데
03:34:184 (1) - 이건 모딩아니야 ( 방금 전에 했던 모딩박자가 지금 03:34:184 (1) - 이거랑 같은박자라서 스피너 하나넣기엔 많이 아까운것같아서 : ) ..

컨트롤 쉬프트 a 눌러서 ai 모드 확인하고 고치고
무엇보다 지금 필요한건 힛사모딩인것같아
중간중간에 5연타같은거 힛사가 아에 없으며 좀 신나게 힛사를 넣고 모딩받으면 좋을꺼같앙
지금 맵자체엔 별 문제가 없는데 힛사가 조금 허전해서 ㅠㅠ... 굿럭! 별 받으면 스타쏠겡~
HabiHolic
5,416 posts
Joined October 2012
HabiHolic
초반부분 휘슬 불필요한거 빼라. 초반부분 느낌잔잔한데 왜 셈플셋썼는지 이해불가능
00:11:937 (1) - 00:13:117 (5) - 00:14:634 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - 00:17:330 (1) - 00:17:836 (4) - 00:18:173 (5,6) - 요것들 전부 휘슬 빼버리길

00:22:724 ~ 00:33:510 - 노래에 비해 히트사운드 크면 BN들이 지적할수있음 맵핑할때 볼륨조절도 같이 해줬으면 좋겠음 저기 구간은 50정도가 딱 좋을듯
00:41:600 (1,2,3) - 플로잉 너무 이상함. 곡선 다음 직선 넘어가기 좀 부드럽게 가는 느낌이 아니라서 나라면 곡선통일했을텐데. 고려해서 다시 배치하던가 알아서. 똑같이 안해도되지만 예시 패턴 첨부함
SPOILER

00:43:791 (2,3) - 간격 조절필요. 터무니 없이 이렇게 넓으면 플레이하기 불편하겠지? 3번은 2번 끄트머리에 가까히만 조절해 그래야 4번가기 훨씬 쉬워짐
00:49:690 (1) - 모양 내는건 좋은데 흐름이 많이 깨지는 부분이었음. 모양 내면서 디스턴스 줄이는 쪽으로 가보길
00:54:577 (1) - 여기 뉴콤주기 길게빼도 될거같음. 시각적으로도 안좋아보이고. 뉴콤 빼배려
01:05:195 (3,4) - 변속이 사용된 구간이니까 여긴 NC
01:12:443 (7,1) - 여긴 아얘 뉴콤 주기를 틀려버리셨네요 용덕씨. 7에 뉴콤넣어라. 원래 있던 1은 빼고
01:14:465 (3) - 이거 2번 해드부분에 가까히하는게 좋을듯 사진 첨부하겠음. 바꿔놓으면 4번 가기도 쉬워지고 모양도 좋아지고
SPOILER
http://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6464886

01:17:330 (4) - 여기 슬라속도 줄여서 강조하는게 더 나을듯 보컬이 워낙 크게들리는데다가 뒤에 음도 아무것도 없으니까
01:20:364 (2) - 겹침 너무 보기 안좋아보이는데 나라면 블랭킷 형태로 만들어버릴거같은데.
SPOILER

01:20:701 (1,2,3) - 이거 이럴빠에 보컬 강조해서 4/3 슬라 하나랑 노트 하나 추가하는게 더 자연스럽고 리듬상도 내가 제안한게 맞는거같은데
SPOILER

01:24:240 (6) - 배치 옳겨보길 밑쪽가기 엄청 불편할거같음
01:24:746 (1,2,3) - 이거 연타 너무 안어울리는 부분임 연타 빼버리거나 4/3 하거나 해
01:38:061 (4) - 클랩은 너무 강조가 약함 여기 임펙트주려면 피니쉬가 더 잘어울림 클랩 같이쓰지말고 피니쉬만 추가
01:39:409 (1) - 애매한 부분인데. 1번 변속 빼버리고 그 다음 속도를 맞춰가는게 좋을듯 01:39:577 (1) - 얘랑 뉴콤주기 맞추는것도 그렇고 해서.

안끝남 ㄱㄷ
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