Kytoxid wrote:

[General]

I don't know if it's a good idea to map the 130 BPM section; by the time you get used to it, it's already changed. Oh well.

[Normal]

00:15:250 (4) - Make this not partially cover the next 1?fixed

Good points: A gentle upward difficulty slope from start to finish, plays very smoothly and well.
Points of consideration: What I said abovel, and other little messy things occur throughout. Another common one is that hitbursts will frequently cover or partially cover notes that come after, because the notes bend back on themselves, such as01:30:820 (4,5,6,1,2,3). Also doesn't look as good.should be better now I guess..


[Insane]

00:54:933 (7,8,9,10,11,12,1) - I didn't think this stream fit very well.
01:23:794 (7) - This slider repeat is covered for a bit long, it doesn't appear until the note almost starts. With such fast sliders, I'd avoid this.fixed

Pretty good map.

Kytoxid wrote:

[Shiki's Hard]

I'd recommend following Insane's example for the opening if you map it; use plenty of sliders to make the timing windows a bit more lenient. ok (:

01:16:769 (3) - Partially covered by the hitburst of 7, so it doesn't look too good. Maybe you can flip it to the other side? done
01:27:022 (4) - How about continuing the previous pattern? End this on the white tick so that there's a beat there, and add a note where the current endpoint is. ok

A bunch of unused timing sections you could delete if you felt like it, or maybe they had some purpose but weren't configured properly:
00:58:541 -
01:04:712 -
01:26:832 - deleted

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Garven wrote:

[All difficulties]
01:34:997 (1) - Should fade this spinner out. It's really loud.done

[Normal]
Apply this to the first hitobject in your .osu. This will snap the spinner to the correct beat.fixed

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00:34:617 (2) - Sticking to the offbeats during the kiai plays incredibly awkwardly. I really recommend you try a different rhythm here. You have some really good choices in the music that I really don't have to suggest anything, I hope.should be better now I guess
In general it felt like you were relying on the offbeats waaay too much on this difficulty.


[Insane]
00:27:971 (11,2,3) - The overlap here is kinda eh especially considering you have fairly large spacing.
And since I'm here, 00:26:452 (6,11) - are aligned fairly poorly.should be better now I guess
01:18:478 (5) - This rhythm was kind of unexpected. Might play better as a stack instead of a slider.done
In general, the design of the patterns felt a little poor. The high spacing and fast slider speed aren't helping for sure, but if you try to take a little more care in how you present your map it will up the quality by ten-fold.

Garven wrote:

[Shiki's Hard]
00:02:012 (1,2,3,4) - strange that you have such wider spacing compared to the rest of the map during a minutely slower part. If anything, smaller spacing -> larger spacing would make more sense with a BPM increase. Fixed spacing
00:38:414 (1,3) - This overlap is pretty ugly. D: I think now is better.
00:51:706 (4,5,6) - The larger spacing here didn't feel very smooth Done
00:57:022 (2) - Extend to 00:57:782 - and add a finish. OK
The way you use your sliders combined with your hitsounding leaves big gaping holes where I'm expecting a custom clap or a finish and all I get is the hiss of the slider slide. :<

Garven wrote:

I'm getting -14 ms on offset. Apply that (or if you can find a better one) to both offsets on all difficulties and resnap.

Alace wrote:

<Taiko>
01:04:413 and 01:04:793 useless timing lines deleted

<Normal>
00:04:888 (1) - add a new combo done

<Insane>
00:55:347 00:58:432 01:21:312 01:22:356 useless timing lines deleted

有鄉民表示vid畫質爛到掉渣
我們等等看有沒有高品質點的

http://puu.sh/4OfU vid offset應該是1850+- 一些 要記得fullsub歐 1850有点后了 1660感觉更好