Hotaru Murasaki - Re:TrymenT

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Hi NM inc

Bandi:Extra diff

  • 00:14:367 (1) - Put this one on x:208 Y:212 for perfect blanket
    I think kiai mod should start on this one 01:09:946 (1)
    01:11:051 (2) - Stack this one with 01:10:419 (3)
    01:27:788 (2,3,4,5) - I don't understand why u ignored white ticks between these because u can hear the music on white ticks

    General what i think about the diff is the i think you should stack more because u have a lot of overlaps that are hard to read and I have a lot of problem playing this diff (i mean with reading it)I might be bad but still it shouldn't be that hard


Kibbleru:Extra diff

  • 00:22:893 (3,3) - Maybe put these 2 on x:424 y:344 just so its a straight line with this one 00:22:419 (2)
    01:13:893 (2) - Maybe stack that one with 01:14:682 (5)
    01:21:314 (1) - Idk if you wanted to blanket it with 01:21:472 (2) - but you do its not perfect (i think) maybe put it on x:312 y:164 and since u stacked it with 01:22:577 (1) - Maybe move that one too (just my opinion)

    General map is really nice, best diff in map set and the flow is amazing


Garden:Insane diff

  • 00:21:314 (3) - Idk why u stacked this one with 00:20:682 (1) - its not the same melody maybe put it on x:296 y:8
    00:32:525 (4,4) - These 2 are weird maybe try to move them a little bit so they don t overlap

    Nothing else LOL

    General map is really nice the flow is ok


Arika:Insane

  • 00:15:314 (4,1) - Maybe move these 2 on x:412 y:60 so 00:14:840 (3) - points directly into them
    00:32:051 (1) - Maybe put a circle instead of spinner and then start the spinner on red tick its better like that
    00:44:682 (1,2) - Maybe stack these with 00:44:209 (4)
    01:44:051 (1) - Maybe put this one on x:480 y:268 so you have perfect blanket

    General diff is really nice flow is awesome nothing much to say


Re:Hard

  • 01:09:630 (1,2,1) - Put these on x:380 y:222 looks better :P

    Nothing else Its a nice diff


GL with the map I tried my best to give u good mod, hopefully it will be somewhat helpfull :)
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Daoski

Invertable wrote:

Hi NM inc

Re:Hard

  • 01:09:630 (1,2,1) - Put these on x:380 y:222 looks better :Pfixed

    Nothing else Its a nice diff ty :)


GL with the map I tried my best to give u good mod, hopefully it will be somewhat helpfull :)thanks! :D
Lampshade

Invertable wrote:

Hi NM inc

Arika:Insane

  • 00:15:314 (4,1) - Maybe move these 2 on x:412 y:60 so 00:14:840 (3) - points directly into them
    00:32:051 (1) - Maybe put a circle instead of spinner and then start the spinner on red tick its better like that
    00:44:682 (1,2) - Maybe stack these with 00:44:209 (4) I keep like that
    01:44:051 (1) - Maybe put this one on x:480 y:268 so you have perfect blanket

    General diff is really nice flow is awesome nothing much to say


GL with the map I tried my best to give u good mod, hopefully it will be somewhat helpfull :)
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Pandize

Left wrote:

short mod

[Xtra]
00:15:156 (1) - is this NC really needed? Not necesarilly...
00:18:630 (1) - ^ It helps show the change in pattern. A spaced red tick generally implies a NC in my maps :)
00:24:314 (1) - ^ There's separate sounds that I'm following here. The triple is the bass, the one before is the piano. Also I like making triples and streams NCs to help people prepare for it :)
00:28:419 (1) - ^ ^
00:37:419 (1) - ^ The NC helps indicate to newer players that there is a space here instead of a constant 1/2.
00:24:472 (1,2,1,2,3) - you used this kind of rhythm only here, feels empty. Fixed it up, let me know what you think :)
00:29:525 (1,2,3,4) - it has more complex melody and drumbeat, you can express it, not just four 1/2s. I think it flows nicely now. Haven't mapped in a while, so maybe a few touch ups may be needed. Otherwise it's pretty great now!
00:31:577 (1,2,3) - DS seems quite low. you'd better emphasize that melody by using more spacing I would, but I have a difficulty requirement and raising the DS here would bring the stars too high. I did make it slightly bigger though :)

ugh i have no time
good luck
Thank you for the mod Left! :)
Ooizumi
may be it too easy?Kibbleru:EX and Garde:InsanE.Thanks for your beatmaps~ :)
CPUnit
A mod.
I bet you were waiting for one of these.

Arika:InsanE
00:30:788 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - Uncomfortable movement is here. I suggest you should follow circular flow instead of going off in another direction.

00:41:209 (1,2,3,4,5) - You made the slider tail go in the opposite direction of the flow that the circles were following. Use circular flow to fix this.

00:43:419 (1,2,3) - ^

00:44:525 (6,1) - Slider 1 is uncomfortable to follow after circle 6. I get you're trying to blanket but that leads to the next mistake.

00:45:156 (2,3) - Jumping from circle 2 to slider 3 feels uncomfortable since the slider is going in the opposite direction. I suggest that you face the direction of the reverse arrow towards circle 4. If that doesn't work, try moving the blanket, or do something else if you can.

00:48:314 (4,1,2) - If you want to abuse slider leniency this way, I suggest placing sliders 1 and 2 like this so it's easier to move from circle 4:


00:56:525 (3,4,5,6,7,8) - Players won't expect to jump back after a triple. Either continue the jump in the direction of where circle 6 was going, or put circle's 6, 7, and 8 in a triangle.

00:59:840 (1,2,3) - The flow is weird here. Slider 3 is supposed to lead to 4 but it's on the bottom. Switch the places of sliders 1 and 3, and the flow will be better.

01:02:051 (3,4) - Switch places with circle 3 and 4, and face it to the right.

The rest of the map is good.

Good luck with your other maps! ;)
Shunao

Hi! I want to mod one diff~
  • [General]
  1. No video?
  • [Sinn:EasY]
  1. Open AiMod (Distance Snap)
  2. 00:14:367 (1,1) - Bad overlap.. make like you did at 00:14:367 (1,2) -.
  3. 00:28:104 (2) - A beginner will completely follow the slider and the circle thus the flow isn't so good. Ofc it can be intentional but it doesn't seem like it.
  4. 00:46:577 - Add a note, there is a strong sound of the piano here, it's should be better.
  5. 00:49:104 - ^
  6. 01:09:314 - Add a note, you don't hear the strong sound???
  7. 01:11:525 (2,3,1) -. 01:14:051 (2,3,4,1) -. 01:16:577 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - There are to much overlaps, I think it's intentional but not good in easy...


For the Easy, I suggest to remap it you need to use 1/2 beat mapping sparingly. Keep most of the mapping to 1/1. Only use 1/2 when it's 100% clear. Longer sliders, reverse sliders, 1-2 beat breaks now and again are beneficial for this difficulty level. (I recommend 2 since the BPM is high http://puu.sh/t7OPA/bc67ae2852.jpg )

I just want to mod Easy diff..

GL!
Topic Starter
Daoski

ShogunMoon wrote:


Hi! I want to mod one diff~
  • [General]
  1. No video?
fixed

  • [Sinn:EasY]
  1. Open AiMod (Distance Snap)
  2. 00:14:367 (1,1) - Bad overlap.. make like you did at 00:14:367 (1,2) -.
  3. 00:28:104 (2) - A beginner will completely follow the slider and the circle thus the flow isn't so good. Ofc it can be intentional but it doesn't seem like it.
  4. 00:46:577 - Add a note, there is a strong sound of the piano here, it's should be better.
  5. 00:49:104 - ^
  6. 01:09:314 - Add a note, you don't hear the strong sound???
  7. 01:11:525 (2,3,1) -. 01:14:051 (2,3,4,1) -. 01:16:577 (2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,1) - There are to much overlaps, I think it's intentional but not good in easy...


For the Easy, I suggest to remap it you need to use 1/2 beat mapping sparingly. Keep most of the mapping to 1/1. Only use 1/2 when it's 100% clear. Longer sliders, reverse sliders, 1-2 beat breaks now and again are beneficial for this difficulty level. (I recommend 2 since the BPM is high http://puu.sh/t7OPA/bc67ae2852.jpg )

all fixes taken note of and remapping incoming -sinn

I just want to mod Easy diff..

GL!

thanks o^o
SoullessTM
About the Bandi:Extra

00:36:166 (3,4,5) - Maybe improve the spacing between the 3 sliders?
Same for 00:50:061 (1,2,3) - 00:54:798 (1,2,3) - 01:11:535 (1,2,3) - 01:14:061 (1,2,3) - 01:36:798 (1,2,3) - try to copy and paste the first 2 and then move the 1st one to snap on to the 2nd slider's position and then move the timing. It would make it perfectly aligned.

I pointed these out because i see that the mapper is trying to make jumps with symmetry but some parts are just not aligned :V

*Might be useless but whatever, just minor things*

*I also prefer star jumps using polygons created using the "Compose polygon" thingy*
[A L P H A]
in bandi's extra, why the heck is kiai starting at 01:08:692 instead of 01:09:956? i cant see any high rythm, just his voice, but instrumental stills ok

also on normal, 01:09:640 doesnt have any high rythm
m3gB3g
just some feedback.

Bandi extra
00:37:114 (1) - long sound of Piano=circle 00:42:166 (1) - and Piano is now slider. Plz choose one object(Slider maybe?).
00:58:587 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - here we have little intense up but object spacing is not changing..Maybe jumps?
01:07:587 (4,5,6) - vocal intense grown. Spacing not. Maybe jumps with uping spacing?
01:08:061 (1,2,3,4) - bcz here intense grown. Jump spacing grown too.
Maybe update in future
rank when Daoski?
Topic Starter
Daoski

[A L P H A] wrote:

in bandi's extra, why the heck is kiai starting at 01:08:692 instead of 01:09:956? i cant see any high rythm, just his voice, but instrumental stills ok

woops I made a mistake moving green points because I had to change offset way back lolz thanks for check :)

also on normal, 01:09:640 doesnt have any high rythm

ok thanks :)
JeZag
mod cuz xd

EASY
00:46:587 (2,1) - I was raised n taught that easy should have no overlap but i bet this plays fine prob no one gives
00:49:745 (1,1) - you have a long space after, so you can make not overlap plz ;w;
00:52:271 (1,1) - because there is a long space, keep in mind you dont need DS for these two
01:19:429 (2) - consider making this just a single hit circle. makes it contrast more with 01:20:061 (1) and after.
01:27:640 (1,2) - tiny polarity issue (maybe.) easy fix: make 01:27:640 (1) - just a bit longer

NORMIE
00:27:008 (4,5) - this doesn't feel dense enough because 00:24:482 (1,2) - set up a nice groove. try this instead:

00:32:061 (3) - no need to make this 3/2 slider anymore cuz rhythm. 2/1 slider with repeat feels nice and cozy, so try that maybe
00:41:219 (2) - i would say dont make this like previous otherwise easy to misinterpret cuz of long spacing. try this instead:
00:51:324 (2) - to fit the mood of the previous two, consider making this 3 hit circles
00:56:219 (3,4) - may be polarity issue, try making 00:56:219 (3) - a 1/2 slider
00:58:745 (3) - same here
01:02:377 (1,3) - me no like this overlap me smash

HARD
00:19:903 (4) - make this 1/1 instead, cuz the middle tick feels off right now
01:08:535 (1,1) - stack makes blanket look wack
01:10:429 (3) - this slider is just a bit weird

INSANE (arika)
pretty diff :>
00:33:798 (1) - consider lower SV for this quiet triple
01:28:271 (5,6) - hohh this feels too far. even tho 01:28:587 (7,8) has same DS, the first feels like it shouldnt be as big as the final.
also, 01:27:640 (1,2,3,4,5) - all have similar DS, which makes the jump all the more surprising in context
01:31:745 (1,2,3,4) - i think the rhythm here would play better as 4 1/2 sliders
01:40:271 (1,2,3) - i feel like 01:41:061 (2,3) - shouldnt be there (among the 3 beats that this spans, only 01:41:377 has actual meaning)
and that 01:40:271 (1) - should be longer.

OTHER INSANE (garden)
this is ok. not much to say
00:19:429 (1,2) - can you make this close together, so that 00:23:219 (1,2) has more emphasis with its DS?

EXTRA (kibbleru)
uhhh idk. its good. pretty good

OTHER EXTRA (bandi)
nothing obviously wrong, but some stuff could be redone to better capture the song.
00:58:587 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - could you find a better pattern that also better captures the song here? right now its a bit meh

FinaL EXTRA
00:35:850 (1,2) - this feels better to me if both reversed directions
01:44:061 (1) - personally i would ctrl + G this one, cuz tbh DS don't matter and it makes the blankets a lot more obv to appreciate when playing


good luck all!
Kondou-Shinichi
my fucking god how long you're working on this
alright, time for a reward : a very detailed mod (i haven't mod in like 3-4 months)
Full ver of box title: Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re:Re map (Please Dear, how long have you been remapping???)
00:21:324 (4) - ctrl+g ctrl +h do some adjustment for better flow
00:32:061 (1,2,3,4) - increase a bit spacing
00:33:877 (2) - pls no sound here
00:37:745 (3) - angle bit too sharp for flow? (compared to other parts of these)
00:43:745 (1,2) - lower spacing: yes yes compared with 00:44:061 (1,2) - still lower spacing but the difference isnt really visible
00:48:166 (1,2) - whats the big spacing doing here
00:55:903 (1,2) - perhaps lower the spacing to show the difference from 00:56:219 (3,4) - (I doubt the sound being the same)
00:57:798 (2,3) - should've reversed tbh. since 00:57:324 (1) - has the flow like http://i.imgur.com/E2MuOPq.png and it just doesnt fit
00:58:429 (1,2,3) - lower spacing: sound isn't that high compared to what from 00:59:219 (1,2,1,2) - yet similar spacing
00:59:535 (1,2) - could've done some increase spacing thing to emphasize the sound compared to 00:59:219 (1,2) -
01:01:745 (1,2,1,2) - increase bit more spacing
01:07:114 (4) - why not make this a bit different since the vocal get louder here
01:07:745 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - the crescendo spacing could've been done more clearly lmao, it isnt that clear
01:08:535 (2,1) - i know the song is like that but it looks so weird here lmao, like the slider is mapped to a weak sound (maybe do a hitsound here?)
01:09:640 (1,2) - larger spacing
01:09:956 (1) - i'd perfer having a circle on the end instead of using sliderend to map this sound (vocal is loud) (applies to all other slider of this kind later on)
01:16:587 (2,3,4,5,6) - would've picked having triples 01:16:587 - and 01:17:061 - / or just use 4 note jump
01:17:219 (1) - why not 2 tick (landing on red) slider instead of 3 (landing on blue) ???
01:17:535 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - omfg, you should've gone with high >>> low spacing here xdddd the vocal is going from high to low
01:21:798 (2,3,4) - would've used a 2 note jump
01:24:324 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - whats with the sudden high spacing? atleast go from low to high! youre not mazzerin there isnt even a sudden increase in intensity in the song
01:25:113 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - make the spacing lower / 01:26:377 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - make spacing higher: the later one has higher pitch (instrument) , so it should have higher contrast
01:28:114 (4,5) - go with 4 note jump instead
01:29:219 (3,4,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - full kickslider / full stream please, there isn't a reason to put slider here
01:33:956 (1,1,1,1) - don't make un-nesscessary sv changes here please, the song itself has low intensity so theres no reason to have high sv changes and new combos. Go with just 4 slider with increasing spacing instead. also the hitsounds are a bit loud on these sliders 'w'
01:35:140 (2) - mapping to nothing again I see
01:36:166 (5,6) - lower spacing to differ from 01:35:219 (1,2,3) - (no using a pentagon pattern here isn't wise: it makes the flow of 01:35:692 (4,5,6) - a bit tough (or whatever adjective thats more appropriate)
01:41:535 (2,3,4) - sudden fast sv, I don't approve ==
01:42:798 (1,1,1) - should've gone with making a flower slider art similar to 00:23:219 (1,1,1) - (or that wasn't a flower on 23? my creativity is too high
The slow parts aren't that slow (Important) (Maybe I should've played tablet)
Jumps like 01:07:745 (1,2,1,2,1,2) - and 01:25:113 (1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2,1,2) - is a bit sudden
flow is ok
it has been like, half a year since you started this map.
i've seen every version
you improved very quickly
but some parts are still a bit uncomfortable to play.
lots of improvement room, but you did very good nevertheless (did I joke too less on this mod?????????????)
Good luck for rank...! I'll look forward for that day to come!
Penguiness
Rip. Daoski gave up on this map. :(
CutEddie
;-;
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