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Shimoji Shino - God Save The Girls

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No_Gu
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Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu
This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on 2016年11月2日 at 22:21:27

Artist: Shimoji Shino
Title: God Save The Girls
Source: ステラのまほう
Tags: Stella no Mahou kz livetune Magic Azure Momochikun
BPM: 170
Filesize: 17308kb
Play Time: 01:28
Difficulties Available:
  1. Azure's Hard (3.55 stars, 277 notes)
  2. Easy (1.79 stars, 110 notes)
  3. Insane (4.15 stars, 362 notes)
  4. Mochi's Hard (3.38 stars, 249 notes)
  5. Normal (2.31 stars, 160 notes)
Download: Shimoji Shino - God Save The Girls
Download: Shimoji Shino - God Save The Girls (no video)
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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#87

kzkzkz

Hard - Azure/Momochikun

BG & MP3 from Azure
Video from Shad0w1and
Last edited by No_Gu , edited 6 times in total.
Kanye
159 posts
Joined November 2013
Kanye
Hi! M4M from your queue

[General]
  • Easy audio preview conflicts with rest of the diffs
    Untick widescreen support since there's no sb
[Easy]
  • As I said in general, preview time conflicts with the others
    Consider lowering CS to 2.5?
    00:15:556 (2) - Blanket this better with 00:15:203 (1) - and stack the head of 00:16:968 (4) - on 00:15:203 (1) -
    00:49:085 (1,2) - Blanket?
    00:51:909 (1,2) - ^
    00:57:556 (1,2,3,4) - ^
    01:18:732 (3,4) - ^
    01:21:909 (3,1) - Fix this blanket
[Normal]
  • 00:01:615 (2,3) - Blanket these
    00:07:968 (4,5) - Fix blanket
    00:47:496 (3,4) - Blanket these?
    00:49:084 (1,2) - ^
    00:53:320 (4,5) - Fix blanket
[Mochi's Hard]
  • 00:00:732 (3,1) - Blanket so there's no overlap?
    00:07:084 (2,3) - Fix blanket
    00:08:673 (3) - I would extend this by 1/1 and remove the reverse
    00:12:026 (5,1) - Blanket these? Or stack head on tail, so that the tail of (1) also stacks on 00:11:849 (4) -
    00:28:614 (6,7) - Blanket?
    01:02:496 (2,1) - Stack better
    01:07:967 (3,4) - imo these sliders don't fit here, since there is no downbeat on the red ticks, I did this
    01:15:202 (2,1) - Blanket?
    01:16:261 (2,3) - ^
[Azure's Hard]
  • Why not make this AR8? It would make some of the patterns easier to read and reduce some of the stacking that occurs. Also going AR8 -> 7 with a higher star diff seems strange. Just my opinion though :D
    00:08:496 (6) - NC
    00:17:143 (3,4) - You could blanket these
    00:18:908 (3,4) - Stack tail of (3) on head of (4) so it's less confusing to read
    00:21:379 (2,3,4,5) - I think this is too confusing to read as a hard, and there's not really any beat on (3) or (5)'s head and tail, so just remove (3) and (5)
    00:51:908 (1,2) - Fix the stacking
[Insane]
  • All seems good! Good to see a 4 star insane, rather than a 5-6 star overmapped pp map xD
Well that's all from me, not a lot of things apart from "Blanket?" which probably annoyed you guys did you just assume my gender??!? but I hope this helps some way. I'll post on your queue with my map, but if you don't see it here's my map Alex Mercer Mashups - Spicetrousle. Good luck with the set, seems like it's pretty much ready already! :D
__Hatsune_Miku
598 posts
Joined July 2014
__Hatsune_Miku
M4M
[*] Check Aimod 1 more Time + Trun off Widescreen Support

[Easy]
  1. 00:09:556 (1) - looks like Verry Short Spinner in Easy Diif. Change slider?
  2. 00:18:379 (2) - blanket 00:16:968 (4) -
[Normal]
  1. 00:11:673 (1) - remove slider (Easy ~ normal need 3 tick of spinner End)
  2. 00:23:497 (7) - Remoe note
  3. 01:06:555 (2,5) - Remove note and move 01:07:261 (4) - here 01:07:437 (4) (same placement fornt)
[Mochi's Hard]
  1. 00:44:320 (3,1) - more DS ?
  2. 00:45:555 (3) - Change Sampleset to Auto and add clap
Irohas
1,353 posts
Joined May 2014
Irohas
m4m

general
uncheck widescreen support on azure, normal and easy diff
what about BG in .jpg for weight?

insane
00:03:908 (1,2) - mmh i guess we should have a movment a bit as 00:00:909 (5,1) - ? it feel the player unconfortable imo
00:51:026 (2,3,4) - I think stack is better to avoid misreadings a bit as 00:57:026 (3,4,5,6,1) -
00:52:879 (4,5) - ^
00:54:026 (4,5,6) - ^
00:58:614 (4,1) - spacing should increase not decrease, I understand why you use this kind of pattern but here we have a loud downbeat to emphasize imo

azure
00:12:379 (2,3,4) - I think it doesn't really need to have a big spacing as this
00:13:790 (1,2,3) - ^
00:18:555 (2,3) - a bit overmapped
00:19:084 (4) - (4) should start at 00:19:261- it feels a bit weird
00:39:026 (1,1) - i guess it's too hard, I think the SV change makes enough the difficulty you don't really need to make a big spacing
00:41:849 (1,1) - ^
01:10:790 (2) - overmap?

momochi
01:02:849 (1) - what about making this differently to not skip the drums sounds ?
01:08:320 (4) - maybe change this slider to 2 circles to emphasize these kind of whistles sounds ?
01:20:673 (5,1,2) - arf don't really like to check that but blanket is ugly ):

normal
01:06:026 (1,2,3) - consistency with 01:03:202 (1,2) - and 01:17:320 (1,2) - ?

easy
seems fine

[]
Solid set, good luck!
JeZag
518 posts
Joined August 2013
JeZag
hey, m4m here

easy
This is already good. Below are minor stuff
00:16:968 (4,2) - Since you've already made this, could you make it blanket?
00:19:262 (3) - https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6300891
I much prefer this rhythm cause it emphasizes strings and stuff. (ofc make a better pattern or smth)
00:19:790 There's honestly not much here in the song, so above highlighted rhythm is preferred
00:53:321 (2,1) - Could be made better (uneven)

normal
00:01:085 (1,2) - I would make 00:01:085 (1) longer rhythm wise so that its tail is where 00:01:615 (2) is. This is better imo because then the tail, or releasing the slider, matches the "k" sound instead of clicking. Also, no sound on 00:01:437 so you don't want a tail there to begin with.
I know that now it resembles 00:03:909 (1,2), but i honestly don't like the current rhythm :/
00:07:968 (4,5) - Argh this is close to a blanket which makes it worse
00:39:379 (3,4,5) - This rhythm is a bit uncomfortable. I suggest this (only look at rhythm, not placement) https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6300973
01:09:732 (3,6) - Could you make these double taps? I feel that normal is "easy enough" for stacked hitcircles.

Mochi's hard
00:00:202 (1,2,3,1,1,2,3,4,1,2,1,2,1,2,3,4,1,2,3) - I would prefer this whole section to have a consistent, low, SV then have it change on the long sliders. Would you mind kicking everything here (except the current slow ones) down a notch?
00:36:379 (3,5) - I am not a fan of this intersection. Doesn't look nice
00:37:437 (6,1) - This too doesn't look nice imo
00:40:967 (2,4,5) - Make an actual blanket pls
01:01:614 (1,2) - :(
01:06:732 (2,3,4,1) - Weird spacing. Can you make more consistent? Putting 01:07:084 (4) as a jump BELOW 01:06:908 (3) feels more comfortable if you really want a jump there.
01:09:379 (2,3,4,1) - This might look harder, but I think the jumps are easier to hit this way: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6301055
i sqeezed the rhythm to make it fit in one snapshot, but of course, the combo # correspond to actual combo #.
If you don't want jumps that far, you can keep as is.
01:18:732 (1,2,3) - Difficult to read... I would make this into a repeating slider, or space further so that it isn't confused for jumps right after 01:18:379 (4,5,1).
01:24:026 (4) - ctrl+g and place further away. having the head face the other way is weird.
01:24:908 (1,2) - blanket pls

Azure's hard
00:09:555 (1,2,3,4) - You can do something cool here with SV to adjust to that bg sound
00:18:555 (2,3) - No sound here in the music and no hitsounds on these sliders. To me, it sounds like this is just noise... what's its purpose?
I concede that there is a slight sound at the head and tail of 00:18:555 (2), but nothing in between.
00:20:496 (7) - I would recommend you make this 3/4 slider, shooting into 00:20:849 (8). You can make the SV wacky for this one too if you want.
https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6301127 <-- lazy example to prove a point.
00:44:143 (3,4) - I think this is the wrong rhythm to use here. I'm thinking a hitcircle + 1/1 slider from red tick to red tick.

insane
00:50:143 (3,1) - Blanket could be improved
idk what to say lol. gj

good luck getting rank!
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu
fixed some.thanks
KappaPraise
316 posts
Joined November 2015
KappaPraise
Hi o/, M4M

Insane
I hate singletap xd
  1. 00:07:261 (4,5) - unreadable spacing still looks like 1/2
  2. 00:09:379 - this and this 00:09:555 - sould me clickable imo, add circles there please and start spinner here 00:09:643 -
  3. 00:13:261 (1) - NC
  4. 00:14:320 (3) - suggest you instead of 1/1 slider make 1/2 this pause works well with this 00:14:320 (3,1) - huge spacing, this in insane, but not over 7* extra for this jumps :V
  5. 00:14:849 (1) - NC
  6. 00:22:967 (4,5) - I think you should ignore this sounds, they are breaking whole rhythm, little pause feels better here
  7. 00:25:967 (4) - um, are you trying following piano here? Actually its follow until next circle and I dont think, thats follow piano with your BSD
  8. 00:28:084 (2,6) - meh, dont like this overlap
  9. 00:31:790 (6) - this direction breaking flow ._. try something like this
  10. 00:36:026 (4,1,2) - balance space between them please
  11. 01:08:232 - um, there no sounds?
  12. 01:11:496 (5) - circle please
    Nazi box
    blankets
    00:14:849 (1,2,3,4,1,2) - this can be better
    00:15:732 (3,4) -
    00:17:320 (4,5) -
    00:20:849 (1,3) - you should make blanket with last object in stack, but not first
    00:37:790 (1,2) - ^
    00:22:261 (1,2) -
Sry, I need to go, leave this like NM.
_Meep_
1,707 posts
Joined April 2014
_Meep_
m4m?
zemods by ze meep
Insane
[00:15:202 (1,2) - Blanket properly
00:15:732 (3,4) - Blanket Properly
00:22:261 (1,2) - Blanket properly
00:24:202 (3) - Put 2nd bezier to X:286 Y:40?
00:43:790 (2,3) - Blanket properly
00:51:026 (2,1) - Blanket?
00:51:467 (3,4) - Fix please,I don't see how this fits the slow part of the song, do something like https://gyazo.com/5e717a1e2f987d7b017b2f28017d3602
00:54:290 (5,6) - ^
01:15:908 (1,2) - Blanket if you want
01:21:379 (1,2) - Blanket properly?

EDIT :

Azure's Hard
00:09:555 (1,2,3,4) - The jump to the notes may be a bit hard. even though its near the first part of the song,it may be very difficult for hard mode players to know that its all 3/4 sldiers
00:12:555 (3,4) - too far?
00:15:732 (3,4) - ^
00:17:673 (5) - change to https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6352033 so that the jump to 00:18:026 (1) - is smoother?
00:18:908 (3,4) - connect them
00:20:849 (8) - NC
00:21:202 (1) - Remove NC
00:21:379 (2,3,4,5) - Why are they suddenly so close together?
00:22:173 (5,1) - It may be a bit far for hard mode players
00:24:026 (4,1) - 1/1 gap.why so close?
00:39:996 (4) - Why is 4 hidden below 3? why isn't it the same as 00:42:732 (3,4,5) - ?
01:15:908 (4,5) - Blanket this better
01:18:202 (2,5) - have 2 curve the same direction as 5,looks better
01:22:614 (8) - remove NC
Why is the SV in timing panel slower than mochi's hard? o-o (idk if this is even an error)

Mochi's hard
00:39:732 (2,3,4) - Why is 3 hidden under 2?
00:40:967 (2,4,5) - Blanket properly
00:52:437 (5,7) - blanket properly
01:06:908 (3,4) - Why is the DS here different than
01:06:732 - From here,I'd rather you either copy 01:03:908 (2,3) - or you do this https://gyazo.com/8afb551d97a610619653119aed2ac214 (look at timeline)
01:24:908 (1,2) - Blanket?

Normal
Seems fine

Easy
Try to nerf it,the SR is 1.7,which is well above the criteria for 'Easy' Difficulties.

GL rankin'
Lefia
674 posts
Joined August 2014
Lefia
M4M

mod
[Easy]

1.79 too high, pls nerf it
AR 5 too high, how about 4 or 3.5 ?

00:27:202 (2,3,4,5) how about do the same thing with 00:30:026 (2,3,4,5)
00:35:673 (3,4) use 4 circle in a row is not suitable with easy diff , how about change it with 1/1 slider
01:09:732 (2,4) the hitclap sound too loud, reduce the volume into 50% or 45%
01:21:202 (2) strong beat at 01:21:379 , how about 1/2 slider?

[Normal]

00:05:143 how about make this red thick clickable?
00:34:084 (5,6) for better rhythm, how about you use two 1/2 slider that like you did at 00:27:732 (3,4)
00:45:20 (4,5,6) not very suitable with the song, how about change the (6) with 1/2 slider or change (5,6) with 1/1 slider or make the "ta" (red thick) clickable
01:07:161 (3,4,5,6) how about like this?

01:09:732 same as easy diff
01:22:084 make it clickable with two 1/2 slider

[Azure's Hard]

00:09:202 add something here cause piano's sound (?)
00:12:379 NC should be here
00:19:261 strong beat, you should make it clickable or make the rhythm like this from 00:18:908 since the rhythm isn't suitable

00:19:967 (3,4) you shouldn't make (4) clickable , change (3) with 1/2 slider
00:56:143 (6) NC
00:58:967 (1,2,3,4) how about like this?

01:07:437 (1,2,3,4) (3) musn't be hidden under the slider, since there is really powerful drum here, make (2) with (3) have same spacing with (3) to (4)
01:09:379 (2) how about you use 1/2 slider, cause there's vocal's voice "de" at the white thick

GL~
-Atri-
3,047 posts
Joined March 2013
-Atri-
還接insane gd嗎
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu

KuranteMelodii wrote:

還接insane gd嗎
不接了 抱歉
Curisu
2,241 posts
Joined January 2010
Curisu
Old Game

Important / Suggestion

[Easy]
00:26:497 (1,2,3,4,5) - 会更建议和00:29:321 (1,2,3,4,5)用一样的节奏型 Easy的话Slider头放长白线也稍微自然
01:08:850 (1,3) - 可读性/跟节奏 有条件可以延长1/2

[Normal]
Fine

[Momochikun]
00:16:084 (4) - x,y = 316,106 nazi
00:37:790 (1) - The direction of this should be acw instead of cw for flow imo
01:00:732 ~ 01:01:437 - Curve
60732,-100,4,2,1,40,0,0
60908,-100,4,2,1,50,0,0
61084,-100,4,2,1,60,0,0
61261,-100,4,2,1,70,0,0
61437,-100,4,2,1,75,0,0
01:02:849 (1) - higher-than-regular sv (1.5x) fits better than slower one imo
01:06:732 (2,3) - didn't find the jump between those circles necessary (in contrast of (3, 4))
01:16:790 - +soft whis, 01:16:967 - delete whis

[Azure-chan]
00:18:555 (2,3) - 雖然原曲聽得出很細微的hi-hat不過和前後對比/和最顯著的主節奏比較不合
00:24:026 (4) - better rhythm imo
00:30:555 (5,6) - jump稍微有些用意不明(相對的, 00:33:379 (4,5) jump下效果会好一点)

[Insane]
00:01:085 (1,2,3) - 其实跟vocal还是把节奏处理的和00:03:908 (1,2,3)近似好些(主要是, 背景的piano导致了00:01:967和00:02:143缺少circle的情况下会有一点违和)
00:39:026 (5) - 会建议不要clap而下成Normal hit, 因为和00:38:673 (4,1)overlap; 这时候00:39:555 (2)就可以下成clap去凸显00:40:261 (6)的不同种类的clap;
00:41:849 (5) - ^
00:57:026 (3) - Soft hit, 照原曲也是感觉不用过渡
01:09:732 - 觉着这里的拍手声的音色会稍微有点不合 SC1 Clap(跟原曲)也可以
或者试试这个自制物? 调成了那种融合bgm的感觉
01:11:143 - ^
Last edited by Curisu , edited 1 time in total.
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu

Curisu wrote:

Old Game

Important / Suggestion

[Easy]
00:26:497 (1,2,3,4,5) - 会更建议和00:29:321 (1,2,3,4,5)用一样的节奏型 Easy的话Slider头放长白线也稍微自然反正都跟鼓的随便吧
01:08:850 (1,3) - 可读性/跟节奏 有条件可以延长1/2考虑一下吧 还是习惯跟军鼓

[Insane]
00:01:085 (1,2,3) - 其实跟vocal还是把节奏处理的和00:03:908 (1,2,3)近似好些(主要是, 背景的piano导致了00:01:967和00:02:143缺少circle的情况下会有一点违和)前面那部分跟的钢琴，音比较多，后面钢琴音少才这么放的
00:39:026 (5) - 会建议不要clap而下成Normal hit, 因为和00:38:673 (4,1)overlap; 这时候00:39:555 (2)就可以下成clap去凸显00:40:261 (6)的不同种类的clap; 不过音乐就是snare啊。。虽然你这个想法倒是不错
00:41:849 (5) - ^^
00:57:026 (3) - Soft hit, 照原曲也是感觉不用过渡重听一下改成了clap..
01:09:732 - 觉着这里的拍手声的音色会稍微有点不合 SC1 Clap(跟原曲)也可以
或者试试这个自制物? 调成了那种融合bgm的感觉嗯 收下了
01:11:143 - ^^
Thx ww
Azure
771 posts
Joined November 2010
Azure
SPOILER
osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: audio.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 62320
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.3
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
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DistanceSpacing: 1.3
BeatDivisor: 4
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[Metadata]
Title:God Save The Girls
TitleUnicode:God Save The Girls
Artist:Shimoji Shino
ArtistUnicode:下地紫野
Creator:No_Gu
Version:Azure's Hard
Source:ステラのまほう
Tags:Stella no Mahou kz livetune Magic Azure Momochikun
BeatmapID:1100085
BeatmapSetID:517164

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OverallDifficulty:6
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Most of mods are fixed. thanks
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu
update
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
Steal my family computer to check map

(See end and I closed it instantly, see you and another mapper next time, I will back soon LOL)

[Easy]
01:25:879 (1) - 這個轉盤頭最好弄到紅線讓新手玩家能即時反應，Normal弄這樣我倒是沒意見。

[Normal]
00:50:496 (4) - 挑個沒疊好

[Mochi's Hard]
00:39:908 (4) - Why this stream not move to (325|129)? Don't stack it imo
00:54:202 (3) - Stack better

[Azure's Hard]
00:22:790 (3,1) - 這個倒是能判斷空拍可以，但是這個00:23:849 (3,4) - 因為跟前面擺的類似感覺有點判斷不出來這不是空拍所以還是建議疊起來?
00:44:496 (4) - 現在Hard超過3.00x以上的跳都會被認為跳得有點遠，還是縮減一下。
00:56:849 (8) - 這個跳的距離不行，這屬於Insane跳的距離了，這邊的梗要改一下

[Insane]
00:42:379 (2) - 這應該可以移到下面stack一下。
00:52:879 (4,5) - 這段到後面幾個的串的距離怎麼那麼大，感覺成了雙倍bpm在打了。
Momochikun
1,926 posts
Joined October 2012
Momochikun
Fixed :3

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96,216,32143,5,2,1:2:0:0:
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144,352,32849,2,0,L|280:340,1,120,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
428,312,33379,1,0,0:0:0:0:
428,312,33555,2,0,P|456:256|452:200,1,120,2|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
320,200,34084,2,0,P|341:219|382:236,1,60,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
440,112,34437,2,0,P|412:121|377:148,1,60,0|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
452,200,34790,1,0,0:0:0:0:
436,28,34967,6,0,P|372:44|324:80,1,120,2|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,128,35496,1,0,0:0:0:0:
183,75,35673,2,0,P|134:41|76:28,1,120,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
56,156,36202,1,2,0:0:0:0:
76,140,36290,1,0,0:0:0:0:
96,124,36379,6,0,L|88:212,1,60,2|4,1:2|1:3,0:0:0:0:
52,312,36732,1,4,1:3:0:0:
180,284,36908,2,0,L|328:276,1,120,4|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
424,324,37437,2,0,L|456:276,3,30,12|0|0|0,1:2|1:0|1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
456,272,37790,6,0,P|446:214|452:152,1,120,4|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
480,68,38320,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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260,28,38849,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,80,39026,6,0,L|116:168,1,72,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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48,208,39732,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,280,39908,1,0,1:0:0:0:
112,280,39996,1,0,0:0:0:0:
112,280,40084,2,0,P|116:316|108:364,1,60,0|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
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200,352,40614,6,0,L|276:344,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
336,300,40967,1,8,1:2:0:0:
336,300,41143,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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400,68,41849,6,0,L|312:72,1,72,8|0,1:2|0:0,0:0:0:0:
408,52,42202,6,0,L|344:56,1,60,0|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
264,28,42555,1,0,0:0:0:0:
176,36,42732,1,0,1:0:0:0:
172,32,42820,1,0,0:0:0:0:
168,28,42908,2,0,P|164:72|172:104,1,60,0|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
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140,176,43437,6,0,B|92:164|46:175|46:175|72:196,1,120,0|8,1:0|1:2,0:0:0:0:
208,236,43967,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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336,72,45732,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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48,212,47320,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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220,72,48379,2,0,L|196:127,1,60,8|0,1:2|1:0,0:0:0:0:
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268,168,48820,1,0,1:0:0:0:
252,184,48908,1,0,1:0:0:0:
236,200,48996,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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268,164,51467,1,0,1:0:0:0:
252,176,51555,2,0,P|220:180|176:176,1,60,8|2,1:3|1:3,0:0:0:0:
112,84,51908,6,0,P|144:80|188:84,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
84,68,52261,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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88,292,52879,1,0,1:0:0:0:
108,304,52967,2,0,L|180:300,1,60,8|0,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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160,260,55437,2,0,P|191:242|227:216,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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288,172,56055,1,0,0:0:0:0:
280,152,56143,2,0,L|352:140,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
444,208,56496,2,0,L|384:217,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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400,44,57202,2,0,L|340:53,1,60,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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64,160,58614,1,8,2:2:0:0:
64,160,58790,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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224,276,59673,2,0,P|220:316|212:356,1,60,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
321,228,60026,2,0,P|315:264|313:308,1,60,8|0,0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
256,192,60379,12,0,61614,1:0:0:0:
404,288,61967,6,0,P|400:328|392:368,1,60,2|2,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
308,276,62320,1,0,1:0:0:0:
308,276,62408,1,0,1:0:0:0:
308,276,62496,1,0,1:0:0:0:
222,158,62673,1,2,1:3:0:0:
308,130,62849,1,8,1:2:0:0:
360,203,63026,1,0,0:0:0:0:
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222,158,64261,2,0,P|280:124|356:152,2,143.999995605469,8|0|8,0:0|1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
292,220,65143,2,0,P|356:240|428:196,1,143.999995605469,0|0,1:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
468,124,65673,2,0,P|464:88|472:48,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
512,208,66026,6,0,P|516:244|508:284,1,71.9999978027344,0|0,1:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
436,340,66379,1,8,0:0:0:0:
344,292,66555,1,0,1:0:0:0:
344,292,66643,1,8,2:3:0:0:
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404,100,69379,1,0,1:0:0:0:
412,104,69732,1,10,1:2:0:0:
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56,204,71320,1,10,0:0:0:0:
48,220,71408,1,2,0:0:0:0:
40,236,71496,1,2,0:0:0:0:
32,252,71584,1,2,0:0:0:0:
24,268,71673,6,0,P|88:244|160:272,2,143.999995605469,0|8|0,1:0|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
88,340,72555,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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224,172,73437,1,8,0:0:0:0:
288,104,73614,1,0,1:0:0:0:
308,116,73702,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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504,184,74496,6,0,P|524:116|496:36,2,143.999995605469,4|8|0,0:2|0:0|1:0,0:0:0:0:
340,200,75379,1,0,1:0:0:0:
248,184,75555,2,0,L|168:176,1,71.9999978027344,8|0,0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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164,156,78555,1,2,0:0:0:0:
164,156,78643,1,2,0:0:0:0:
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216,252,79614,1,4,1:3:0:0:
280,324,79790,6,0,B|312:320|312:320|332:328|332:328|368:324,1,90,2|0,1:3|0:0,0:0:0:0:
440,324,80143,6,0,L|448:236,2,60,4|0|8,0:0|0:0|0:0,0:0:0:0:
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360,32,82437,1,0,1:0:0:0:
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232,100,84114,1,8,1:3:0:0:
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No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu

smallboat wrote:

Steal my family computer to check map

(See end and I closed it instantly, see you and another mapper next time, I will back soon LOL)

[Easy]
01:25:879 (1) - 這個轉盤頭最好弄到紅線讓新手玩家能即時反應，Normal弄這樣我倒是沒意見。k

[Normal]
00:50:496 (4) - 挑個沒疊好k

[Insane]
00:42:379 (2) - 這應該可以移到下面stack一下。k
00:52:879 (4,5) - 這段到後面幾個的串的距離怎麼那麼大，感覺成了雙倍bpm在打了。这个确实有点争议。。我个人是觉得这个梗比较适合这里鼓的音量渐变。实在不行我再改吧
thank your for mod
update
Shad0w1and
1,588 posts
Joined April 2011
Shad0w1and
http://puu.sh/s3Zbr/ffd94ff590.flv
臭了和屁股相爱相杀最棒。有空再去撞臭了啊
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu

Shad0w1and wrote:

http://puu.sh/s3Zbr/ffd94ff590.flv
臭了和屁股相爱相杀最棒。有空再去撞臭了啊
撞不动了
thx

upload the video
smallboat
1,687 posts
Joined January 2010
smallboat
Bubbled
No_Gu
2,954 posts
Joined January 2011
Topic Starter
No_Gu

smallboat wrote:

Bubbled
Thank you very much /w\
Myxo
osu! Alumni
3,103 posts
Joined December 2012
Myxo
Popping bubble over quality issues.



[Insane]

The map starts out really nice but has some really weird choices later. Also it starts feeling overmapped in the chorus. More details below.

00:07:261 (4,5) - This is very easy to misread. The clear pattern 00:06:732 (1,2,3,4,5) - calls for continous movement and the sudden stop in movement is not intuitive. The rhythm change is not indicated in any way. Also, the same pattern 00:00:203 (1,2,3,4,5) - 00:03:026 (2,3,4,5,6) - was used without the spacing gimmick before. Please change the structure of this pattern or atleast place a NC on 00:07:614 (5) - to make reading more comfortable.

00:51:026 (2,3,4) - 00:52:437 (3,4,5) - This is nearly impossible. Circle-to-circle 1/4-jumps like these are very hard to perform and should be introduced well. Here you are using them in a calm section of the song where they don't really fit, there is almost no indication that they are coming and they are a huge difficulty spike in this map. For a solution, you could stack both circles under the slidertail or use a triplet with regular spacing.

01:11:496 (5) - You have been using 1/4-sliders for the special drum sounds here 01:11:143 (3,4) - so it feels weird to use another one right after, even though there is no sound like that. I would recommend to replace this one with a single circle or have a triplet here.

There are a lot of unnecessary triplets in this map overall. A lot of them work well as emphasis, but some of them feel really overmapped and don't really complement the song. Some examples:
00:57:026 (3,4,5) - Sounds really weird and doesn't really emphasize anything.
01:08:320 (4,5,6) - ^
01:11:673 (1,2,3) - This one is even more odd because it starts on a white tick. Either move it to 01:12:202 - or (even better) get rid of it completely.
01:22:084 (3,4,5) - Another weird sounding one.

[Azure's Hard]

Some rhythm choices here are really weird.

00:12:379 (1) - As the start of a new section, this should have a NC.
00:18:908 (3,4) - Really weird rhythm here. 00:18:996 - Feels overmapped, especially for a Hard difficulty, and 00:19:261 - is a very, very strong sound so it should probably be clickable. Maybe you could use this rhythm instead? http://puu.sh/sfMfS/6103cb0ba1.jpg
00:20:849 - Shouldn't the NC be here instead of 00:21:202 - ?
00:22:173 (5) - This rhythm doesn't really work since 00:22:261 - is a stronger beat than 00:22:173 - so it feels weird to click at the blue tick here. Maybe you could replace this slider with 2 circles?
00:23:673 (2,3,4) - Another odd rhythm choice. 00:24:202 - is the strongest beat around here, so it should be clickable. Also, the jump + stack combo doesn't really work here, it creates an usual emphasis. What about using this rhythm for this combo http://puu.sh/sfMtG/ac7f2358fa.jpg and evening out the spacing between (3) and (4)?
00:39:732 - The triplet in the music starts here, not at 00:39:908 - . It feels off at the moment. Same at 00:42:555 -
00:47:320 (7) - For the emphasis, it would make more sense to have this near (6), so there is a jump towards the next object. Like this? http://puu.sh/sfMAW/fada5eacfa.jpg
00:57:467 (1) - Same issue as 00:22:173 -. Replace it with 2 circles?
01:22:173 (6) - ^

[Normal]

The spacing used in this map (1.8x) is really high. Newbie players have to speed up significantly after every slider, which is very uncomfortable. This map should have used a higher Slider Velocity (so the spacing doesn't need to be so high) or a much lower DS (preferably 1.2x or lower).
If you disagree with this, please get some Normal-level players to testplay this map and ask them for opinions on this topic.



The mapset is nice overall, however there could have been more mods, especially for Azure's diff since it requires some more polish. I find Normal unacceptable in its current state, though. Please reply to this mod carefully for the things you don't want to change.
No_Gu
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bye
-Atri-
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-Atri-
可惡，我最期待飛的圖這樣就快墳了
Curisu
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Joined January 2010
Curisu
可惡，我最期待飛的圖這樣就墳了
BanchoBot
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