Kaifin wrote:

hello, m4m from queue

Cursed

1. uncheck widescreen, you have no sb :p whoops, fixed
2. 00:43:943 (1) - i think this would have better impact without the NC, that's your choice though true
3. 01:16:914 (5) - this note doesn't exist, delete it and listen at 25% speed, its just an echo of the note at 01:16:847 - someone else told me the same thing, fixed
4. 01:20:444 (1,2,3,4) - imo, this pattern would look a lot nicer if you angled the 1 ----> 2 to match the 3 ----> 4
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   fixed, i think
5. 01:42:557 (4,5) - fix blanket
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   ahh you found it
6. 02:01:473 (3,5) - imo it would help your aesthetic if you made this the same visual spacing as 02:04:137 (1,2) - are apart, it makes things look more consistent sure
7. 02:06:735 - why ignore the triple here? its a little unclear if its a tangible note here, but theres definitely a sound, so i think maybe turning 02:06:668 (2) - into a 1/4 slider would also be a cool option added a triplet for now but i'm not sure if i'm gonna keep it, maybe it just seems weird to me because i've heard it so many times without the triple so we'll see
8. 02:31:579 (4,3) -
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9. 04:01:364 (1,2) - i know ur structure but placing this note further away or stacking it on another object further away 04:00:432 (6) - maybe? would make it a lot clearer that its 1/1, i almost misread on sightread makes sense
10. 04:07:759 (1,2) - same as above
11. 04:47:722 (3,4) - based on your other structure, why not just perfect stack these? moved it over to the right some
12. 04:53:983 - i understand what you're going for here, but it completely takes the winds out of the sails of your flow in the kiai, maybe try a rhythm like this that doesn't skip a bunch of notes in the most intense part of the song
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another thing i planned on fixing, thanks for reminding me

very clean map appreciate it!

monstrata esque? lots of hexagons hehehe

good luck! thanks kaifin!

NeBuSC2 wrote:

hey. m4m (mod here: https://osu.ppy.sh/s/481088) - you was afk, so I just modded \:D/

actually it's hard to find something here, since map is well done, but gonna try!:

00:39:148 (2) - would ctrl+g was ctrl+g'd originally but i like the sliders facing the same way with opposite parallels, it's a nice touch
00:39:814 (4) - I hear background sound I think? not really sure what you meant here
00:47:407 (1,2,3,4) - I think you should keep the overlap on end/start of sliders, so fix 00:47:940 (3) - 00:47:407 (1) - with this slider it makes cool look of one long slider with good blanket. or if you will decline it, just overlap 00:48:206 (4) - start on end of 00:48:472 (1) - eh don't really like that is clutters it up more than it needs to be, gonna leave this as is
00:50:071 (3,4) - feels random, would slider it after all a change in object usage as the section comes to a close seems fine to me
00:56:998 (1) - less sharp, place it with end of slider on 00:56:732 (4) - and blanket slider sharp with 00:57:398 (2) - widened the slider a bit, didn't do the other thing though
01:33:899 (4) - i dont know why, but I kinda would like to see it as kick-slider D: ehh seems like too much to mee
01:57:477 (4) - circles instead of slider (https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6401590 something like this maybe, give a small feel of speed in this part) going to change all of these at some point
02:59:420 (2,3) - placement swap [?] - i just dont feel this circle under this slider. stacked this and the next on the sliders heads instead of the tail

well, shit mod, but this map is so goooooddammit good and well done, so fun to play. hope you can rank it. gl hf! thanks, will return m4m soon

Spork Lover wrote:

Just here to point out a few unrankable issues before I go to bed ^^ (you don't really have to give kd since it didn't take long to find lol)

All the timestamps below have a timing point and inherited point on the same spot with different volume levels:
00:05:045
02:06:269
03:23:532
03:26:729
05:03:175
05:06:372

The background looks awesome, but isn't a recommended ratio, meaning that it letterboxes. I didn't find a version on google images that was higher resolution either, sadly ;_; If you DO find a 1080x720 or 1366x768 image, you should probably use that instead (current is 1000x750)

I checked through the hitsounds to see if there was delay as well, which there wasn't so no worries there

This song is absolutely amazing, and your map suited it very well when I played through it Good luck ^^

1. 00:41:812 (1) - idk maybe can be with single circle and start 1/4 reverse thingy on 00:42:078 - to emphasize that drrrr sound like on 00:37:016 (1) - and 00:40:213 (1) - yea I know that pointed one has short drrr thingy compared to that two but it would be great if you catched the beats with same way
2. 00:53:535 (5) - Would suggest to CTRL + G this for emphasize vocal's pitch thingy
3. 01:16:980 (5) - Maybe stack this on 01:17:114 (6) - plays better cuz of clap sound, stacking on slidertail feels awkward imo
4. 01:29:369 (3) - move this to 267|210 for balanced spacing with 01:28:970 (1,2) -
5. 01:36:429 (5) - remove reverse to make 01:36:962 - clickable, or you can start this reverse on 01:36:163 - instead like how 01:42:557 (4) - is working right now.
6. 01:55:079 (3,4) - just my preference though, this would be emphasize better with those vocals when you stacked the head instead of tail
   
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7. 01:56:677 (1) - CTRL + G will create much better flow imo, then you can flip 01:57:077 (2,3) - as well
   
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8. 02:21:988 (4,5,1) - I think this can be nerfed a bit and do some bigger jump on 02:21:721 (3) - instead since that beat is not really strong enough to jump
9. 03:12:342 (3) - and 03:12:608 (4) - ctrl + g works better here imo ;3
10. 03:19:269 (1,4) - and 03:19:669 (3,6) - maybe balance their semi-stack thingy since they are on same combo color so it looks random with current one
11. 03:21:933 (4,1) - nazi xd
12. 04:25:343 (1) - ocd thingy, move this to 230|137
13. 05:22:224 (4) - this one is kinda awkward to see since you only used 1/2 reverse just here from 05:10:635 - you can use reverse on other prev. parts or just remove that reverse :3

1. 00:12:771 (5) - should be 1/2 slider instead? cuz you have sliders at 00:13:570 (2,4) -
2. 00:14:370 (4) - probably this note should be stacked under 00:13:837 (3) - tail, you stacked less intensive sounds before, like 00:05:045 (1,2) - 00:06:643 (1,2) - etc
3. 00:15:169 (2) - reverse thing: they should have spacing like 00:12:238 (4,5) -, 00:09:041 (4,5) - etc
4. 00:22:362 (4,2) - they may be stacked properly
5. 00:47:673 (2) -there's kinda boring that you have put a lot sliders, would be better if you change this slider to two notes, pretty strong beats
6. 00:52:735 (1,2) - 01:01:261 (1,2) - use same distance snapping between slider and circle. These two patterns are same, but in the first you have more spacing between what is kinda strange
7. 01:16:581 (3,4) - imo but ctrl+g rhythm would fit much better, circle on the red tick would feel itself more comfortable since drum sound
8. 01:20:444 (1,2,3,4) - I think 01:20:444 (1,2) - 01:20:977 (3,4) - should have same shape, there're no difference, it would look more aesthetic as well
9. 01:30:568 (3,4) - probably should be like 3/4 slider+1/2 slider cuz you have used same patterns before
10. 02:19:457 (2) - I'd move it to 80 270, now I see almost linear flow with unstable spacing, what is uncomfortable in game
11. 02:22:787 - can't be really agree with 1/1 gap here, it's unreasonable imo, the drum on white tick is pretty clear
12. 02:29:714 (1) - imo 1/2+ two circles instead would follow better with the song. Also given that you always have maped triplets it will be more reasonable
13. 02:45:700 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - you might do these patterns more interesting by gradually increase the distance between objects. If you save distance between 02:45:700 (1,2,3) - you are increasing it between 02:46:499 (1,2,3) - and doing even over between 02:47:298 (1,2,3) -
14. 03:29:393 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I has been kinda surprised by seeing really hard jumps there. Your map had pretty easy patterns before but now. Okay, probably it's supported by the song is true, only one thing: 03:29:393 (3,4,5,6) - I think there're no need to do a circles, sliders would be enough since these clap sounds have been started from 03:29:926 (1) -

Akitoshi wrote:

m4m w

Cursed

1. 00:41:812 (1) - idk maybe can be with single circle and start 1/4 reverse thingy on 00:42:078 - to emphasize that drrrr sound like on 00:37:016 (1) - and 00:40:213 (1) - yea I know that pointed one has short drrr thingy compared to that two but it would be great if you catched the beats with same way this is something i thought about for a long time but never could really decide on which one (cause like you said it's shorter) but I think I'm gonna ask people if I should go with this or keep it with what I have. no change yet though
2. 00:53:535 (5) - Would suggest to CTRL + G this for emphasize vocal's pitch thingy
3. 01:16:980 (5) - Maybe stack this on 01:17:114 (6) - plays better cuz of clap sound, stacking on slidertail feels awkward imo
4. 01:29:369 (3) - move this to 267|210 for balanced spacing with 01:28:970 (1,2) -
5. 01:36:429 (5) - remove reverse to make 01:36:962 - clickable, or you can start this reverse on 01:36:163 - instead like how 01:42:557 (4) - is working right now. idk i think having the vocal played passively makes the next part that's mapped to the piano stand out more... maybe though if someone else agrees
6. 01:55:079 (3,4) - just my preference though, this would be emphasize better with those vocals when you stacked the head instead of tail
   
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   eh probably not, don't wanna lower spacing that much :p
7. 01:56:677 (1) - CTRL + G will create much better flow imo, then you can flip 01:57:077 (2,3) - as well
   
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8. 02:21:988 (4,5,1) - I think this can be nerfed a bit and do some bigger jump on 02:21:721 (3) - instead since that beat is not really strong enough to jump
9. 03:12:342 (3) - and 03:12:608 (4) - ctrl + g works better here imo ;3
10. 03:19:269 (1,4) - and 03:19:669 (3,6) - maybe balance their semi-stack thingy since they are on same combo color so it looks random with current one
11. 03:21:933 (4,1) - nazi xd
12. 04:25:343 (1) - ocd thingy, move this to 230|137
13. 05:22:224 (4) - this one is kinda awkward to see since you only used 1/2 reverse just here from 05:10:635 - you can use reverse on other prev. parts or just remove that reverse :3 sorry for being so indecisive, but i'ma leave this for now because to me it fits to change things up a bit with the more dense section. open to change if someone else points this out

Good map, goodluck! thanks, will return m4m soooon!~

FCL wrote:

hello there
[general]
stretched background, you have to fix that, probably working on this, kinda

[diff]

1. 00:12:771 (5) - should be 1/2 slider instead? cuz you have sliders at 00:13:570 (2,4) - to me there's a very obvious "1, 2, 3" sound where i started using the 1/2 sliders, which isn't present 00:12:771 (5)
2. 00:14:370 (4) - probably this note should be stacked under 00:13:837 (3) - tail, you stacked less intensive sounds before, like 00:05:045 (1,2) - 00:06:643 (1,2) - etc
3. 00:15:169 (2) - reverse thing: they should have spacing like 00:12:238 (4,5) -, 00:09:041 (4,5) - etc sorry, wasn't completely sure what you meant here x-x
4. 00:22:362 (4,2) - they may be stacked properly
5. 00:47:673 (2) -there's kinda boring that you have put a lot sliders, would be better if you change this slider to two notes, pretty strong beats
6. 00:52:735 (1,2) - 01:01:261 (1,2) - use same distance snapping between slider and circle. These two patterns are same, but in the first you have more spacing between what is kinda strange accident, thanks for catching it
7. 01:16:581 (3,4) - imo but ctrl+g rhythm would fit much better, circle on the red tick would feel itself more comfortable since drum sound
8. 01:20:444 (1,2,3,4) - I think 01:20:444 (1,2) - 01:20:977 (3,4) - should have same shape, there're no difference, it would look more aesthetic as well i can see where you're coming from, but i kinda like how this looks so ehhhhhh
9. 01:30:568 (3,4) - probably should be like 3/4 slider+1/2 slider cuz you have used same patterns before that could be argued 01:21:510 (1,2,3,4,5) here too, but i personally think a lil bit of change is good and it helps keeps things fresh and interesting. if i continued doing 3/4 into 1/2 stuff the map would be very long and repetitive, and by doing what i've done i'm able to use different patterns and make it overall more fun to play imo
10. 02:19:457 (2) - I'd move it to 80 270, now I see almost linear flow with unstable spacing, what is uncomfortable in game
11. 02:22:787 - can't be really agree with 1/1 gap here, it's unreasonable imo, the drum on white tick is pretty clear ignoring the drum there was a conscious choice because i think the current rhythm is more interesting to play, and still hits all the high notes of the drums. the lil roll on the white tick is not as strong (imo) as what i have mapped, so leaving it unmapped isn't that bad. maybe i'm digging my own grave here, but if someone thought this was a serious problem i guess i'd change it. (really like this part though)
12. 02:29:714 (1) - imo 1/2+ two circles instead would follow better with the song. Also given that you always have maped triplets it will be more reasonable
13. 02:45:700 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3) - you might do these patterns more interesting by gradually increase the distance between objects. If you save distance between 02:45:700 (1,2,3) - you are increasing it between 02:46:499 (1,2,3) - and doing even over between 02:47:298 (1,2,3) -
14. 03:29:393 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - I has been kinda surprised by seeing really hard jumps there. Your map had pretty easy patterns before but now. Okay, probably it's supported by the song is true, only one thing: 03:29:393 (3,4,5,6) - I think there're no need to do a circles, sliders would be enough since these clap sounds have been started from 03:29:926 (1) - yeah i know the jump section is a little unexpected but the song gets seriously harder as the map continues, so this is like a warning lol. i purposely made the combo of 4 jumps smaller so that the player isn't caught off guard by 4 sliders into some crazy never before seen jumps. basically i tried to do my best to make this part build up how it should imo

gl, good map thanks so much for the nm

Mentai wrote:

m4m, i'm actually pretty poor at modding fast bpm songs with high SR, i get lost easily

i'll try and point out anything i notice though

00:59:396 (2,4) - so far you've been consistently stacking underneath the slider end when reuisng locations, i think this deviation just makes it look like a mistake

01:06:057 (3,4) - seems odd that you would do 2 1/2 here and do 2 circles here when there is only a strong sound on the 4 circle, not the 5 here 01:07:122 (3,4,5) i used hitsounds to help push my agenda and also the 2 1/2's are helping the vocals, while the two circles feed into the drums

01:29:369 (3,4) - feels like the same sound happens here 01:29:902 (6,1) - but with a large variance in ds explained earlier, but this one is two sets of of 1/2 then 2 circles, a theme repeated fairly often throughout the beginning of the map when applicable

01:34:964 (4,5,6) - not sure if a triple sound here is necessary kinda a compromise with all the sound going on at the time, but i'll change if someone else agrees

01:44:955 (1,2) - just a small thing, you've been doing these 1/4 overlap spacings with sliders consistently in the direction og the slider end, this looked weird yeah chances are this section will be remapped at some point

02:26:251 (4) - going from a counter-clockwise pattern to a linear pattern, i think that does its job to emphasize the beat i think lowering the ds slightly and making the slider trace back along the followpoint will make it look more subtle

02:29:714 (1) - this slider seems like its in an odd place, i think a 1/2 slider or 1/1 may be a better choice here changed this in an earlier mod

02:44:901 (1) - there's no reason to change back into 4/4 time here, the song stays in 3/4 through this part as well timing is from a ranked set so i don't really wanna touch it lol

the song should become 4/4 here 03:02:218 (1) again ^

03:29:393 (3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1) - i feel like this difficulty spike is too great, could make this more subtle by starting with 1/2 sliders and then increasing the to circles with increasing ds explained this in an earlier mod

03:40:583 (1,2) - i really really think stacking these would do great for the emphasis on them, here too 03:41:382 (1,2) - eh, thought baout that but liked the far spacing better

03:59:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - i think the ds should be increasing, not decreasing bullshit section is calming down here, and the peak of the song has passed so no reason to get bigger

05:09:302 (4) - again don't really understand the huge ds change. you're changing the flow pretty dramatically here, i think it does enough for the combo don't think this is that bad, for someone playing a 6.3 star map and making it this far this is nothing. it's fairly basic flow leaving a slider end and going into a slider head, should be fine

05:23:423 (1,2) - this is in that awkward zone where it looks like it should be blanketed but its not. might've happened beforem, but this one caught my eye as the notes slow down here moved it a bit to make it obvious blanket is not what i was going for


love the hitsounding and the song, and it's a great map too. good luck, i hope this helps. have a star thanks a ton for the mod!

-Vanilla wrote:

from my m4m

kcum

Firstly, nice map and song choice! thannks

00:05:045 (1) - I get why the hitsounds are quiet but they're almost inaudible will try to find a better volume for them, the sound sample is very quiet so it's weird to find a good volume %

01:04:991 (3) - make this straight? It will match the 2 other sliders that slider helps make it feel more circular

01:25:773 (1,4,5,6) - maybe blanket somehow don't wanna change flow for a blanket i wasn't going for

01:49:217 (1) - I felt like this whole kiai was waaay to underwhelming, the pace of the song really picks up but your spacing is consistent with the entire map previous to this. Maybe increase DS in some areas or convert some sliders to circles (not a good idea, go with first option) the map builds up very gradually with the song until you realize the third and fourth kiais are pretty hard, so it's natural that the first kiai is pretty easy comparitvely. that being said maybe you're right, it's too underkill so I'll go and increase spacing on some things


01:50:017 (5,6) - maybe have equal DS with the whole combo? right

I really do like how you interpreted some of the song with your patters, such as 01:53:480 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - thanks

01:55:612 (1) - just because consistency says so, this should either be curved or completely straight. This is the only slider in the kiai that has a sharp turn to it

02:09:466 (1) - I think this works better as a repeat slider with a circle added on the empty red tick (works better in my eyes because you mapped a whole slider to 'nothing' this part is playing completely to drums and ignoring vocals, so it makes sense to me

from 02:48:098 (1) - to 02:50:496 (1) - I think needs some more hitsounds somewhere.. it sounds empty found some places claps sounded fitting

03:07:546 (1,2) - increase spacing a bit maybe a tiny bit, just because this angle and this pattern is already weird

03:28:860 (1,2,3) - I think these should be farther spaced away, just so the whole combo feels like its unified explained this part in another mod post, baiscally i just want the buildup to be very noticeable so if a player misses 3:30 into a map it's not because of some "random bullshit jump section" (even if it seems that way xd)

04:39:463 (2,3) - theres a followpoint between here, idk if you wanted to increase the spacing slightly but it looks out of place lmao thanks, fixed some other follow points in this section too i never noticed

04:43:993 (1) - this spinner makes sense, but I think there could be something mapped between here, like slider spam into a stream or something idk, especially how youre about to go into the last kiai i really dislike the idea of adding a stream into this map when there has never been a time for one to be used before.. but i dunno maybbbbbbbbeeeeeee

05:09:569 (1,2,3,4,5) - increase ds maybe? i have a very subjective explanation for the low ds here that I will spare you of, however if more people think that this should be changed i'll probably die fix it

again, nice map! reminds me of one of my favorites; Nanairo Anniversary from Rizia... thanks! i love rizia maps~

Cerulean Veyron wrote:

Hello! M4M, sorry for the delay ;n;

[- - Cursed - -]

1. 00:29:023 (1,2) - The spacing here might need to be a little more further, like a simple 1x or 1.2x distance spaced, for being less crowed other than the blanket you've did was quite too close. Or maybe stack the circle onto the slider tail as how you've did on the previous note, that would probably show a little more consistency patterning. increased the spacing to 1.0, i think stacking here is a bad idea because the sound on 2 is pretty strong
2. 00:57:797 (4,1) - 01:06:323 (4,1) - I would probably think this kind of jump that looks pretty big on low notes/vocals of the song track isn't very out-coming alongside the music, unlike the jumps over 01:05:257 (4,1) - or 01:10:586 (5,1) - that probably represents better than these. changed the pattern on the first one and nerfed the second one by moving the slider before the 1/1 a lil higher
3. 01:31:101 (1,2) - Kinda the same as before, for spacing up the circle a little further. It wouldn't hurt flow ofc, just try placing it a little lower and done~ moving this down would create a way bigger jump than i wanted moving to 01:31:634 (3) here, and would create distance pretty bad distance inconsistencies for the next section
4. 01:41:092 (2,4) - Might flow better if these were to be Ctrl + G for structure, and would also create a jump when swapping placements between (4) and (5). Flowing would really head towards slider (5)'s head more precise in landing. remapped this section shortly after you posted mod hehe
5. 01:45:221 (2,3,4) - You could possibly try a triangular structure here, by spacing up (3) and place a bit higher. Something like this pattern might look better imo. Ehh clearly not the best one but it suits though! ^
6. 01:52:148 (4,5) - Optional objective: Just my personal opinion, you could probably rotate this a little more anti-clockwise, approx 15deg to make a similar the movement alike the previous slider 01:51:882 (3) - , for the structural flow to look more aesthetically outpacing.sure
7. 02:00:940 (1) - That kind of patterning is really fine and okay, but based on structure it's quite a little sharp though. Well, the only thing to do is to Ctrl + J this slider (1) for a smoother movement after the previous curved sliders. agree, also i hate this slider shade so killed it
8. 02:38:506 (2,3,4) - This feels a little bit awkward when (1) and (2) are going onward to a direction, while (3) and (4) are kinda doing some back-and-forth or parallel. There are two things you could do something better than this flowing imo; Ctrl + G each one of these sliders for a continuous structure, or swap placements between (2) and (3) to equal the patterning. I don't mind any different way of yours than these as long as it counts tbh, just something I kinda don't feel right. alternated between sliders pointing down/up, maybe this'll match it better
9. 03:20:335 (1) - That slider kink is pretty much delaying the dense feeling of the intense chorus, and probably doesn't make great performance over cursor movements during that. So I may prefer redoing this slider into a better sliding position than the current, or rotate a bit clockwise if you want to keep it that way.i think this slider being a slider that you can hold and get away with is pretty fitting because the flow of the previous section is weird, and having a "rest" is helpful to make this part not feel unbearably uncomfortable
10. 03:26:729 - Uhmm, these two timing points are fine to be stacked together in the same setting. But here, the inherited point has a different volume than the timing one. So you should check this for sure. an oversight, thanks
11. 04:07:226 (3,4,5,1) - The same thing for the spacing. But about the jumping, the jump between (3) and (4) is pretty much bigger than (5) and (1). While there's a stronger downbeat between that, I guess you should swap the spacing for the note density there. A big jump on a low note looks pretty sudden tbh.fixed
12. 05:10:634 (1) - These sliders are not snapped properly to what you intended to do, as they are snapped before the inherited point with the slider velocity change here. Try checking this out. fixed

Pretty good map overall~
Best of Luck! thankss

Low wrote:

[General]
- drum-hitclap.wav, drum-hitfinish.wav, drum-hitnormal.wav, and drum-hitwhistle.wav are all identical to the default drum hitsounds, and are therefore just wasting space in the .osz. delete these
- same thing as above but with soft-hitnormal.wav and soft-hitwhistle.wav

Low wrote:

m4m

[General]
- you have "gahata" listed twice in the tags. you only need one for the search to come up; delete one of them i got these tags from the ranked set, but i'll change this anyways cause whatever i can fix it if it needs to be fixed
- you also have "vocaloid" listed twice. delete the "vocaloid" tag. having only "vocaloid4" in the tags is fine because even though there's a 4 at the end, a search for "vocaloid" will still have this map as a result due to the way osu! handles searching ^
- add "UTAUカバー" and "utaite" to tags for obvious reasons. add "karenT" to tags because it's cillia's record label alrighty
- drum-hitclap.wav, drum-hitfinish.wav, drum-hitnormal.wav, and drum-hitwhistle.wav are all identical to the default drum hitsounds, and are therefore just wasting space in the .osz. delete these shiirn helped me clarify below
- same thing as above but with soft-hitnormal.wav and soft-hitwhistle.wav ^
- is it possible for you to get a larger version of your bg image (1366x768)? if you can, i recommend using that so it looks better on widescreen resolutions. if not, it's fine unfortunately using that resolution of this image stretches it all to hell, so I had to settle
- the first timing section should be 3/4. the music indicates this by placing a heavier "music box" sound at the start of each measure after talking with chaos (god bless him) i now know that for osu's sake this doesn't change anything and is basically a moot point. i also took the timing/ mp3 from the ranked set (i should probably credit him somewhere) so yeah, this is perfectly fine
- 03:30:991 - a 3/4 timing section should go here and last all the way to 04:25:343 somehow i deleted this out, fixed
- 04:42:128 - the timing section here is inaccurate to the music and should be deleted. this is because the 4/4 rhythm lasts until the start of the chorus ( 04:46:124 ). listen carefully same here, fixed

[Cursed]
00:25:826 (1) - the "jerk" at the start of this slider feels against the flow of the map; like it doesn't belong. i suggest doing something like this to fit better

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i kinda like the jerking motion, because for one it doesn't really require any extra effort from the player, two i think it looks nice, and three it helps emphasize the drawn out vocal better, because of the odd shape
00:57:398 (2,3) - why is this manually stacked? it doesn't make sense; i would just have this be automatically stacked as you did at 00:58:463 (2,3) complete accident i found like minutes after i submitted, fixed
01:07:922 (2) - reversing this carries the flow from 01:07:655 (1) much better agree
01:20:178 (5) - instead of the slight curve upwards on this slider, i think you should curve it downwards. it's more aesthetically pleasing when paired with the sliders around it ( 01:19:778 (3) and 01:20:444 (1) ) sure
01:24:440 (4) - reverse for better flow im starting to just decide to change all of these that people think needed to be changed, i wasn't really that attached to them anyways, and it does help the flow a bit
01:40:959 (1) - why is there a NC here? you didn't place one at 01:37:761 (4), and the music at these parts is structurally identicalpiano is doing something here, else i'd just use some 1/1 sliders in the rhythm and not nc however i'll nc the other one for consistency, whoops
02:01:473 (3,5) - the overlap between these two objects is not necessarily ugly, but it's out of place compared to the way you've been mapping with little overlap. i suggest moving (5) down and to the left a bit sure, kept it basically at the same distance but to the left more
02:17:991 (1,2,3,4) - these don't link into each other all too well. a pattern that i found pleasant to play is this

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i can see why you would say that, but nobody has ever missed here and it doesn't play uncomfortably, however if someone else points it out i'll probably mess around with it
03:21:134 (4) - feels way better to have this reversed sur
04:03:496 (3) - same as above i don't like how this looks when i reverse it, however i'm still open to changes here
04:25:343 (1) - it would make for a really cool effect to remove the break after this note and just have the ticking sound in the music be playing. the HP drain is lenient enough so that you don't really need this break as well i like
04:42:394 (1,2) - it's unrankable to silence the beginnings of sliders and circles. make these at least 10~15% volume they're at 10% now but if i need to bump them up a tiny bit more i'll do it but i'll hate it
04:54:383 (4) - reverse for flow reversing here makes the transition into the next 3/4 slider really awkwrad, not gonna touch this one for now

this is a decent map. however, nothing you did really stood out to me in terms of patterns and general effect. i chalk this up to you being a relatively inexperienced mapper, though, and not you simply being a dull mapper. with that said, i see potential in your mapping! good luck thanks

William K wrote:

Hi~

[Cursed]

1. 01:48:152 (1) - Maybe you could make this the same as 01:47:086 (1,2) - for consistency, they sound the same too. eh, i think this is fine. also one of the sliders are 1/1 while the other is 3/4 so they should play somewhat differently anyways
2. 00:08:242 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - Maybe you could start the variaties at 00:11:439 - , since that 00:08:242 (1,2,3) - is still the part of 00:05:045 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4,5,1,2) - . i think this is fine for now, although it might get changed in the future.. however this point was kinda hard to read anyways
3. 00:41:812 (1) - Maybe you could make the sound at 00:42:078 - with 1/4 reverse slider for consistency with 00:40:213 (1) - because it feels like... ignored, not like the others. i could, however i think the 1/1 slider into the stacked circle fits the end of this section nicely, and also the buzzing noise is significantly shorter than the other times i used the repeat sliders
4. 00:46:741 (2,3) - The spacing here feels too sudden imo, compared to the one at 00:45:941 (4,5) - . How about making the spacing similar to 00:45:941 (4,5) - ? nah, this plays well for emphasis. also it's a 6 star map so there's gonna be some big spacings
5. 02:38:240 (1,2,3,4) - Seems like you're following vocals here. If yes, the vocals at the slider-head of 02:38:773 (3) - feels more stronger than 02:39:039 (4) - . How about making 02:39:039 (4) - have a 2.00x - something spacing too? It looks neater and will have an easier gameplay. evened out spacing
6. 04:25:343 (1) - Making this a spinner? The instrument is still on there, it's pretty strong too. in another mod it was suggested to reomve a break that was here and just let the hp drain to make the song feel more natural.. i liked that idea don't wanna mess around here
7. 05:10:102 (5,6) - Not making this a jump? XD end of the map, it's sorta like a fake buildup to save myself from the long winded explanation i have
8. 04:08:558 (1) - CTRL+G here fits better imo. eh

That's all from me :3 GL~

Osuology wrote:

possible m4m placeholder??? I asked you while you were online but you were afk

no use this one.png ??? do I just have it because I dl'd old version or??? yeah this is now a nice "asdf.jpg" so i'd redl

00:05:045 () - Here you have a green line on a red line, the green line changes the hitsound volume, so you need to set both to the same, it's unrankable.

00:22:629 (1) - You stop having the downbeat jumps here, which signified vocal, but now you stop doing that? not sure what you mean here

00:51:936 (2,3,4) - Hard pattern to play considering the angle... it doesn't really match imo considering you've been using easy snappy flow for this rhythm

00:53:002 (2,3) - I noticed spacing is really big here compared to other spacing in this section, it seems weird to me. I don't buy that it introduces a new section, considering the spacing has nothing to do with the section in the first place, and it's not arranged for the start of the section. For emphasis? Why didn't you empathize the other ones that come after this then? 01:01:261 (1,2,3) - all 3/4 stuff at the start of the new verses or whatever these are follow this same logic, where it's a 3/4 into a circle with a quick snap to a second circle then it gets very flowy

01:17:979 (5,6,7,8) - Overmapped, I know that overmapping isn't always bad and is fairly subjective, but considering how you hitsound it, it really doesn't sound like triplets at all, just 1/2 notes.

01:19:245 (6,1) - Spacing? i know this is weird but i'm keeping it because i realy like this pattern and stacking the two circles before it makes the jump easier

03:15:805 (5) - I expected this to be under the hitcircle next to it... I think it makes sense and looks better aesthetically. im not sure which circle you mean tbh but
03:20:202 (6) - ^ i'll do this one

03:30:991 () - You have a green line and timing section thing again, but here it's both volume and custom hitsound samples.

04:46:923 (5,6) - Spacing from 5 to 6 is small, it looks weird in structure and patterning. i use a lot of short spaced "jumps" like this throughout all the kiais, but i did make this look a bit nicer (idk why this is in red then)

Regraz wrote:

Change BG to .jpg format. Save a lot of file size tbh my mistake

01:17:114 (6) - Remove or make 5 a slider extended here. 6 is too weak to be mapped as a circle. removed
Many inappropriate jumps could be pointed out like this: 01:59:342 (3,4,5,1) - Vocals on (4,5) are really in low pitches which should not be assigned with large jumps. while I agree there are some jumps that are maybe a bit big in some opinions, I think they are okay for a few reasons. One it keeps consistent with where I was applying emphasis earlier, where the vocals were much stronger. This section you pointed out came immediately after the high point of this kiai, so it feels a little bit weaker. While this jump in particular could be a bit smaller, changing this too much would mess with the structure of this pattern, and because higher intensity is what I'm going for in the kiai, I want this to be difficult -- consistently.
02:06:735 (3) - Remove, 1/4 could be hardly heard. done
02:23:719 (3,4) - 02:24:785 (3,4) - These overlaps are really meh. Not recommended. did some things to make them look nicer
02:48:298 (2) - ^ removed the note
03:07:013 (4,5,6,1) - Flow is ruined here. changed this around

03:30:325 (4) - I guess you should remove this or replace 3 by a slider. done, and changed these jumps around a bit
03:45:045 (4) - Remove.
03:46:378 (2) - ^
03:47:443 (4) - ^
03:49:041 (4) - ^
03:51:440 (4) - ^ Many other similar issues, you could get on them by yourself.

i dunno i hear drum stuff in the background, and I have at least one other person who also hears stuff going on in the background, while another says there's not much there. either way I really want to leave this as it creates a really fun experience with the added speed and note density to a unique section of the song, helping buildup into the whats supposed to be the hardest part, the jumps at the highest intensity.

03:59:766 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4) - No, it's really demoralizing to build up star difficulties by suddenly placing some pp jumps. That's quite under-skilled.

i thinks jumps express the song nicely imo, this is a very high intensity before going into the slower section with a lot of reverse sliders and simplistic rhythm. however that being said I did nerf the distance between them all by a bit, so I hope that's okay

04:13:753 (4,5,6) - Should be in smaller jumps. nerfed a tiny bit

04:25:343 (1) - You may consider adding some breaktime after this note. took it out after another mod but im gonna put it back in

04:46:390 (2,3,4) - 2-3 should be smaller in spacing than 3-4. tried to nerf a bit
Not very recommend the jumps in the last Kiai tbh, nerfed the big one near the end a bit
And the patterns are quite repetitive: 3/4slider+note and several 1/2 stuufs and then 3/4.... while it may be repetitive, i tried to make this more interesting as the final section by adding more circles instead of sliders to create a higher sense of pressure and intensity for the final hard part of the song. it might not be the most interesting thing to look at in the world for some people, but I think it does it's job nicely

So many 3/4s, if there are clearly audible sounds at 3/4, then they prob be fine but there aren't.

not sure what this was in reference to, are you meaning I should mute some 3/4? honestly at this point I don't even know which ones should be muted and which should not if that's what you mean, cause i've heard it like this for so long. but the 3/4 in general are for grabbing the vocals while still being able to map the kicks, leading for a harder map in general.