Camellia - I Can Fly In The Universe [OsuMania] · forum

Wadu

Topic Starter

Wadu 2016-10-04T21:20:40+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on יום שישי 25 נובמבר 2016 at 23:10:03

Artist: Camellia
Title: I Can Fly In The Universe
Tags: psytrance,evening,trance,electro,edm
BPM: 175
Filesize: 10209kb
Play Time: 06:48
Difficulties Available:

Extraterrestrial - 7Key (7.34 stars, 7250 notes)

Download: Camellia - I Can Fly In The Universe
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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Test your skills with this well-structured beatmap, which contains elements that will challenge you for sure!
This map requires stamina, SV control, concentration and the abillity to handle complicated streams! Beware of 1/16 bursts!
Are you up to the challenge?

Special Thanks

Thanks to the people who helped along the way with testplays, stars and/or mods!

Evening for SV and BG.
jakads for modding and 3 stars!
pporse for modding and 3 stars!
SwitchAxe for modding and 2 stars!
CometicRush for modding and a star!
Hollas for modding and a star!
ajeemaniz for modding and a star!
Shinora- for modding.
Chocoliti for modding.
roko100789 for modding.
chistoefur for modding.
[Shana Lesus] for modding.
Protastic101 for modding.
Mwalls Ho for 8 stars!
Rivals_7 for 5 stars!
ZeroCalamity for a star!
Zei- for a star!
hk7326 for a star!
qodtjr for a star!
[ Dark_Choco ] for a star!
JinJin for testplays.
Alternater for testplays.

Last edited by Wadu 2018-01-22T07:41:59+00:00, edited 91 times in total.

Shinora-

34 posts

Joined January 2015

Shinora- 2016-10-05T01:09:42+00:00

Hihi, the mod as you requested ^^

am I a mod?

2016-09-25 17:27 Shinora-: uhhh i would judge this as a stamina map
2016-09-25 17:27 Shinora-: i'm so tired right now lol
2016-09-25 17:28 Shinora-: but it's pretty cool
2016-09-25 17:28 CHARGE: haha thanks

2016-09-25 17:28 Shinora-: just those stairs that are... a bit awkward to hit them correctly
2016-09-25 17:28 CHARGE: it's 7 minutes
2016-09-25 17:28 CHARGE: hahaha
2016-09-25 17:28 CHARGE: a nightmare is coming
2016-09-25 17:28 CHARGE: trust me
2016-09-25 17:29 Shinora-: I like it, hope I can test it later
2016-09-25 17:29 Shinora-: Another thing I would say
2016-09-25 17:29 Shinora-: I recommend you to remove the "7K" on the difficulty name
2016-09-25 17:29 Shinora-: since there are just one difficulty
2016-09-25 17:31 Shinora-: so about those stairs
2016-09-25 17:31 Shinora-: they are a bit awkward to hit
2016-09-25 17:31 Shinora-: trust me :>
2016-09-25 17:31 CHARGE: Okay thanks!
2016-09-25 17:31 CHARGE: ill try to take it from other maps
2016-09-25 17:32 CHARGE: i really dont know how to map them
2016-09-25 17:32 CHARGE: only this part?
2016-09-25 17:32 CHARGE: 01:14:225 (74225|6) -
2016-09-25 17:32 CHARGE: how about this? is that ok?
2016-09-25 17:32 Shinora-: let me see
2016-09-25 17:32 Shinora-: yeah that's the part I'm mentioning
2016-09-25 17:33 CHARGE: oh
2016-09-25 17:33 CHARGE: and this00:43:368 (43368|4) -
2016-09-25 17:33 CHARGE: 00:43:368 (43368|4) -
2016-09-25 17:33 CHARGE: this part ^
2016-09-25 17:33 CHARGE: also needs modding?
2016-09-25 17:33 Shinora-: sure, a burst like this isn't the best thing in the world
2016-09-25 17:34 Shinora-: 00:42:768 -
2016-09-25 17:34 Shinora-: http://puu.sh/rnFBV/b8a71accc3.png
2016-09-25 17:34 Shinora-: this is very uncomfortable
2016-09-25 17:35 Shinora-: since, after that, comes some 1/8 stairs, I think
2016-09-25 17:36 Shinora-: yeah, 1/8 stairs
2016-09-25 17:36 Shinora-: I would say you just to nerf it a little bit
2016-09-25 17:37 CHARGE: okay
2016-09-25 17:37 Shinora-: but, in general, it's a very nice map

2016-09-25 17:37 Shinora-: I love it
2016-09-25 17:38 Shinora-: The song is pretty cool too
2016-09-25 17:38 Shinora-: It would fit very well with some sv changes
2016-09-25 17:38 Shinora-: but for that, you would find someone who knows about
2016-09-25 17:39 Shinora-: *should
2016-09-25 17:40 CHARGE: im uploading the new part here:
2016-09-25 17:40 CHARGE: 00:41:653 (41653|6) -
2016-09-25 17:40 CHARGE: just do it in editor
2016-09-25 17:40 CHARGE: lol it took off like 0.2*
2016-09-25 17:40 CHARGE: but its more playable now
2016-09-26 19:37 Shinora-: uhmmm the svs fits pretty well, but
2016-09-26 19:37 CHARGE: so u can see all of the SV
2016-09-26 19:37 CHARGE: there are pretty cool
2016-09-26 19:37 Shinora-: the speed one it's higher than I guess to be comfortable
2016-09-26 19:37 CHARGE: can u try again?

maybe on editor
2016-09-26 19:37 Shinora-: let me see them
2016-09-26 19:38 Shinora-: Hey
2016-09-26 19:38 Shinora-: try to change the first session
2016-09-26 19:38 Shinora-: from
2016-09-26 19:38 Shinora-: 00:22:110 -
2016-09-26 19:38 Shinora-: 00:41:310 -
2016-09-26 19:38 Shinora-: to here
2016-09-26 19:38 Shinora-: that 1,5x sv
2016-09-26 19:39 Shinora-: try to change it to 1,25
2016-09-26 19:39 CHARGE: okay
2016-09-26 19:39 CHARGE: haha a lot of work
2016-09-26 19:40 Shinora-: just select all of them with ctrl
2016-09-26 19:40 Shinora-: Uhhhh the sv changes are okay
2016-09-26 19:40 Shinora-: I would say to you decrease the speed up's sv value a bit
2016-09-26 19:41 Shinora-: feels very umconfortable for who are playing
2016-09-26 19:41 CHARGE: only this part?
2016-09-26 19:41 CHARGE: and the rest?
2016-09-26 19:42 Shinora-: I think making this all the map would be better
2016-09-26 19:42 Shinora-: and
2016-09-26 19:42 Shinora-: 00:46:796 -
2016-09-26 19:42 Shinora-: this sv
2016-09-26 19:42 Shinora-: 0,5x is too low for a pattern like that
2016-09-26 19:42 CHARGE: yeah
2016-09-26 19:43 Shinora-: I recommend you to put something around 0,8~0,7
2016-09-26 19:43 CHARGE: x1.0?
2016-09-26 19:43 CHARGE: oh
2016-09-26 19:43 CHARGE: okay
2016-09-26 19:44 Shinora-: It isn't a good ideia mix dense patterns with a slowdown ~.~
2016-09-26 19:45 CHARGE: yea
2016-09-26 19:45 CHARGE: i hate it too
2016-09-26 19:45 CHARGE: 01:08:739 -
2016-09-26 19:45 CHARGE: is it too much here?
2016-09-26 19:45 Shinora-: dude
2016-09-26 19:46 Shinora-: I laugh so hard with this
2016-09-26 19:46 Shinora-: You have no ideia
2016-09-26 19:46 CHARGE: hahaha why
2016-09-26 19:46 Shinora-: i don't know
2016-09-26 19:46 Shinora-: but
2016-09-26 19:46 Shinora-: yeah these svs aren't enjoyable at all
2016-09-26 19:46 CHARGE: too much?
2016-09-26 19:47 Shinora-: yeap
2016-09-26 19:47 Shinora-: 7,8x
2016-09-26 19:47 Shinora-: wtf
2016-09-26 19:48 CHARGE: so remove it here?
2016-09-26 19:48 Shinora-: yeap
2016-09-26 19:48 Shinora-: or you can
2016-09-26 19:48 Shinora-: just put a "non-notable" sv session here
2016-09-26 19:48 Shinora-: like 1,2 on the first sv
2016-09-26 19:48 Shinora-: and 0,8 on the one after it
2016-09-26 19:51 CHARGE: 1.2 and 0.8?
2016-09-26 19:51 Shinora-: yep
2016-09-26 19:51 Shinora-: 1.2 on the highest one
2016-09-26 19:51 Shinora-: and 0.8 on the lowest
2016-09-26 19:53 Shinora-: it will take time to work on this
2016-09-26 19:53 Shinora-: also
2016-09-26 19:54 Shinora-: before this sv session
2016-09-26 19:54 Shinora-: have another one
2016-09-26 19:54 Shinora-: with 2,0x and 0,1x, I think
2016-09-26 19:54 Shinora-: Can't remember right now
2016-09-26 19:54 Shinora-: I changed all them to 1,4x and 0,6x, respectively
2016-09-26 19:55 Shinora-: It seems to fit better than the previous ones
2016-09-26 19:55 CHARGE: u said 1.2 and 0.8
2016-09-26 19:56 Shinora-: yep
2016-09-26 19:56 Shinora-: 1.2 and 0.8 starts here
2016-09-26 19:56 Shinora-: sec
2016-09-26 19:56 Shinora-: 01:08:739 -
2016-09-26 19:56 Shinora-: all those "warps", I put 1.2 and 0.8
2016-09-26 19:56 Shinora-: aaaaand from here
2016-09-26 19:56 Shinora-: 01:08:053 -
2016-09-26 19:56 Shinora-: to here
2016-09-26 19:56 Shinora-: 01:08:739 -
2016-09-26 19:57 Shinora-: I put 1.4 and 0.6
2016-09-26 19:57 Shinora-: Or you can just leave them with 1.2 and 0.6
2016-09-26 19:57 Shinora-: wops
2016-09-26 19:57 Shinora-: 1.2 and 0.8
2016-09-26 20:01 CHARGE:

2016-09-26 20:01 CHARGE: internet probs
2016-09-26 20:01 CHARGE: hmm
2016-09-26 20:01 CHARGE: so 1.2 and 0.8 or 1.4 0.6?
2016-09-26 20:01 Shinora-: yep
2016-09-26 20:01 Shinora-: I thnk 1.2 and 0.8 fits better
2016-09-27 18:24 CHARGE: btw, how about od 8.5 and hp 8.5?
2016-09-27 18:24 Shinora-: I think I should
2016-09-27 18:24 CHARGE: too much?
2016-09-27 18:24 CHARGE: now its 8 and 8
2016-09-27 18:24 Shinora-: Guess 8.5 OD is a bit high
2016-09-27 18:24 CHARGE: should i change it?
2016-09-27 18:25 Shinora-: since your map has some ln sessions
2016-09-27 18:25 CHARGE: so what would u suggest?
2016-09-27 18:25 CHARGE: 8 8/
2016-09-27 18:25 CHARGE: ?
2016-09-27 18:25 Shinora-: HP 8.5 is fine
2016-09-27 18:25 Shinora-: OD 8.5 is a bit high than it should
2016-09-27 18:25 Shinora-: imo
2016-09-27 18:26 CHARGE: so 8.5 hp
2016-09-27 18:26 CHARGE: 8 od
2016-09-27 18:27 Shinora-: yep
2016-09-27 18:40 Shinora-: uhmmm the patterns are okay
2016-09-27 18:40 CHARGE: awesome job
2016-09-27 18:40 Shinora-: but there are some awkward svs here or there
2016-09-27 18:41 CHARGE: speccing ZeroCalamity plays
2016-09-27 18:41 CHARGE: if u wanna spec too
2016-09-27 18:41 CHARGE: yeah
2016-09-27 18:41 CHARGE: can u track them?
2016-09-27 18:41 CHARGE: i saw some parts
2016-09-27 18:41 Shinora-: 04:59:139 -
2016-09-27 18:41 Shinora-: here
2016-09-27 18:42 Shinora-: 05:38:910 -
2016-09-27 18:42 Shinora-: here too
2016-09-27 18:43 Shinora-: God, my hands are burning like there is no tomorrow
2016-09-27 18:43 CHARGE: hahha
2016-09-27 18:43 CHARGE: stamina song
2016-09-27 18:43 CHARGE: u didnt pause
2016-09-27 18:43 CHARGE: <:
2016-09-27 18:44 Shinora-: yep, i'm dying
2016-09-27 18:50 CHARGE: 04:57:768 -
2016-09-27 18:50 CHARGE: isnt it good?
2016-09-27 18:50 CHARGE: the sv here?
2016-09-27 18:51 Shinora-: they aren't really bad
2016-09-27 18:52 Shinora-: but it's very uncomfortable
2016-09-27 18:52 Shinora-: you can change their values a bit
2016-09-27 18:52 Shinora-: instead of removing them
2016-09-27 18:53 CHARGE: to?
2016-09-27 18:53 Shinora-: let me see
2016-09-27 18:53 Shinora-: try 1,4x

Pretty good map btw ~~(it hurt my stamina too @.@)~~, hope it can be ranked soon, I loved it! Good luck!!

Wadu

Topic Starter

Wadu 2016-10-05T01:12:48+00:00

I have applied all that, thanks a lot!

imariL

370 posts

Joined February 2011

imariL 2016-10-07T15:06:57+00:00

Column 0 1 2 3 4 5 6

00:51:853 - beat missing? add note at 4 or something else

~~01:14:225 ~ 01:18:339 - used only 1/8 stairs at here, but I prefer using 1/16 at 01:16:968 since it can express being more faster~~ If you change this part, you should change other burst part too.

01:23:396 - beat missing

02:00:853 ~ 02:03:596 - I think using higher SV at this part is more fit with song

02:36:510 ~ 02:41:996 - maybe remap this part?

I think 02:37:496 (157496|4,157496|6,157496|5) - these notes should be at 02:37:196
Also, 02:37:668 (157668|5,157668|6,157668|4) - these should be at 02:37:453
and 02:37:839 (157839|4,157839|5,157839|6) - these should be at 02:37:710

02:39:382 (159382|1,159382|0,159382|2,159553|2,159553|1,159553|0,159725|0,159725|1,159725|2) - these notes too, maybe replace with same beat which I wrote

Also, I prefer using pattern and beats which I wrote upside, at 02:39:939 and 02:41:310 here too with using Ctrl+H

02:36:639 - beat missing, add note
02:36:853 - beat missing, add note
02:37:325 - beat missing, add note
02:39:082 - beat missing, add note
02:39:768 - beat missing, add note

02:41:996 ~ 02:46:110 - Since these parts are nice so I recommend you to remap 02:36:510 ~ 02:41:996 this part

03:38:268 (218268|0) - Delete? Synth sound started at 03:38:053 and end at 03:38:225

03:44:396 ~ 03:44:739 - This part, you should use 1/6, not 1/8

04:54:639 - 04:54:810 - I don't think quadruple notes should be necessary at here. maybe reduce it?

05:39:939 - burst should be end at 05:40:282

05:40:368 - beat missing

Good Luck!

Wadu

Topic Starter

Wadu 2016-10-07T16:06:51+00:00

All missing beats have been fixed.
01:14:225 ~ 01:18:339 have been changed to 1/16 playable bursts. also on the other part.
02:00:853 ~ 02:03:596 sv changed to 1.0.
02:36:510 ~ 02:41:996 has been remapped.
03:44:396 ~ 03:44:739 changed to 1/6.
04:54:639 - 04:54:810 changed to 3 notes.

Assembled everything you said. Thank you for your mod!

Comet_M

89 posts

Joined May 2014

Comet_M 2016-10-08T11:01:14+00:00

Hello CHARGE! Delivered some suggestions!

Columns : 1 | 2 | 3 | 4 | 5 | 6 | 7

Vociferous Armageddon

- 00:39:853 : Missing hihat (I don't know its exact name :p) sound, maybe add to 7?
- 00:40:196 : ^^^^ like this? http://puu.sh/rBIpj/beffaa8bc9.png
- 00:47:653 : This part looks similar to 00:50:396 , 00:53:139 , 00:55:882 . Is there any reason to put 2 notes in one beat? (*consistency problem, yeah)
- 01:36:339 : Maybe you may consider putting a LN here, there's voice that'll fit the LN.
- 01:43:625 : Consider making a jack here, like 01:44:396 ~ 01:45:082
- 02:25:539 ~ 02:28:282 : Inherited points are not snapped?
- 02:45:425 ~ 02:46:110 : Like this? http://puu.sh/rBIIQ/e93778060c.png -- looks more smoothier
- 03:12:125 : I hear small hihat sound here, maybe add a note?
- 03:14:739 (194739|3) , 03:15:596 (195596|1) : Actually two instruments merge, and the sound 03:14:739 (194739|3) is indicating seems lasting until 03:16:282.
- 03:31:325 (211325|5) - I think this crash should go here (03:31:368) - HS misplaced, maybe?

- 03:36:853 ~ Modifing some notes to fit the squeaking sounds will be interesting, like this : http://puu.sh/rBIXW/099fea559c.png (03:37:025 ~ 03:37:882 , for example.)
- 03:52:625 : http://puu.sh/rBJ6F/cf20f36454.png, just to follow the tone of the voice.
~~- 04:26:739 - I thought someone was farting~~
- 04:53:653 ~ 04:56:396 : Well, it looks to tricky -- maybe lessing the note density?
- 05:20:825 (320825|1,320825|0) : These two goes 05:20:796 (1/6 snap)
- 05:31:968 : Remove this? Silence here.
- 05:40:282 : Add to 6? Need a relatively strong sound.

Others look great to me!

Great song, great beatmap, great SVs, everything is just GREAT!

I hope this beatmap get ranked soon, Good Luck!

Last edited by Comet_M 2016-10-08T18:31:25+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Wadu

Topic Starter

Wadu 2016-10-08T13:01:14+00:00

Thank you very much for your notes. I have assembled everything you mentioned.
Thanks for a great mod!

roko100789

105 posts

Joined September 2013

roko100789 2016-10-08T14:57:43+00:00

Hey
I tried

|1|2|3|4|5|6|7|

Playability

• 01:20:225 (80225|3,80396|3,80568|3) - You should evade those. They appear quite a lot in the whole map, and it's kinda hard to hit them. In this specific place, you could do something like

.
• 01:22:625 - Same anchor stuff at column 4;
• 01:25:368 - ^ at 5;
• 01:26:910 - ^ at 4, and so on, you probably got it. I'd just take a lot of space mentioning every single place where this triple anchor (not sure if it's the correct name) happens, so I'll just link until where it goes.
• 04:59:139 - ~ 05:15:596 - Happens again around 2 times
• Won't mention 02:47:482 - ~ 03:20:396 - because it's pretty hard to evade those when you have long notes, neither 03:31:368 - ~ 03:50:568 - because of the amount of notes.
• 05:41:653 - You should move 05:41:739 (341739|4,341782|2) - to 3 and 2, respectively; the burst coming up would be smoothier to hit.
• 01:24:339 - Since the last minijacks were in the left hand, you should move 01:24:682 (84682|0) - to 5
• 01:25:025 - You could try to rearrange this section to move the "minijacks" on 1 and 3 to another column, OR you can keep it, but move 01:27:939 - to the right hand, which would also make you need to rearrange the section. Stuff like that might happen again in the map and I probably didn't notice them, so you should take a deeper look.

• About 01:16:968 - ~ 01:17:996 - and 04:53:653 - ~ 04:56:396 - As Chocoliti said, the song asks for it, but it's really hard to hit those bursts, and in my opinion, they're way harder than the rest of the map. You shouldn't really do anything with them right now, just wait for more mod and/or testplays, but consider that you may have to take them out.

Totally unnecessary stuff

Since you don't have anything stopping you from doing so, you could take care of the pitch at the beginning, so
• 00:02:910 (2910|6,3082|5) - you could move them to one column below (6 and 5), and so on with all of these notes until 00:04:453 - and then move 00:04:625 (4625|5) - to 4, 00:04:796 (4796|1) - to 1 and 00:04:968 (4968|0) -
• You could also move 00:05:310 (5310|3) - to 2, and if you do all of those, you have to do it again with the next section, between 00:05:653 - and 00:11:139 - . I don't think you have to do it again on the next sections because of the long notes, but it's up to you.
• 04:15:253 - You could also try to preserve the pitch here, since there isn't anything stopping you from doing so.
• 06:26:910 - There's also some pitch issues that you can fix in this section.

I started the mod yesterday, and you uploaded it, so some of this may not make sense, since I don't know if you changed anything other than the bursts.
I don't really think this was helpful at all, so if you want me to, just poke me ingame and I'll try to take a look at the map again.
Also, good luck with the map!

Wadu

Topic Starter

Wadu 2016-10-08T16:26:45+00:00

Thank you very much for the mod! It helped a lot (:

pporse

362 posts

Joined October 2014

pporse 2016-10-09T03:54:31+00:00

hello :^)

column set
1 2 3 4 5 6 7

ICFITU

[General]

current bg size is 1365x768.
you should change bg size.

what is 'normal-hitnormal-old.wav'
if it is unused hitsound, you should delete it.

uncheck 'Widescreen Support'

[Vociferous Armageddon]
00:04:968 (4968|1,5139|2,5310|3) - it is a little bit weird as pitch.
00:04:968 (4968|1) - move to 5th column
00:05:139 (5139|2) - move to 4th column
00:05:310 (5310|3) - move to 3rd column

00:10:453 (10453|1,10625|2,10796|3,10968|4) - ^ same as before.

00:16:453 (16453|0) - move to 4th or 5th column for pitch.
00:21:939 (21939|0) - move to 5th or 6th column for pitch.

00:41:310 - add a note? you used 4-chords, except here.
01:05:482 - 01:05:653 - add a note. you should use 3-chords.
01:11:396 - add a note

01:30:125 - add a note? it's your intention?_?
01:30:425 (90425|6) - shift to 01:30:339 - this sound is started at 01:30:339 -

01:33:425 - add a note? i think you should use 3-chords in there.

01:52:325 (112325|2) - delete. there is no sound.
and 01:52:282 (112282|1,112368|3) - change to 2-chords

01:59:996 (119996|0,119996|2,119996|5) - i don't think that this 3chords is necessary.
you did not use notes at 01:58:625 - i think it is better to remove 3chords.

03:09:425 (189425|3) -
03:14:739 (194739|3) -
03:20:310 (200310|4) -
well, i think that it is misplaced.
03:09:425 (189425|3) - ▽

03:14:739 (194739|3) - ▽

03:20:310 (200310|4) - ▽

but my opinion may be incorrect. consider it

03:31:068 (211068|2,211068|3,211110|5,211110|4,211110|6,211282|3,211282|4) - used too many notes.
I think it would be better to reduce notes.

04:58:089 (298089|5,298218|3,298303|0,298389|2,298475|3,298646|0,298732|6,298903|2,298989|1,299075|5) -
i'm not sure that it is fine. @_@..

nice map

Wadu

Topic Starter

Wadu 2016-10-09T09:15:47+00:00

I have applied your mod! Thank you very much for the great advices.

SwitchAxe

117 posts

Joined March 2014

SwitchAxe 2016-10-09T20:20:03+00:00

Ok here we go! (introduction patterns were already discused via game chat)
Columns: 1 / 2 / 3 / 4 / 5 / 6 / 7

Vociferous Armageddon

*01:33:082 (93082|0,93082|1,93253|0,93510|0,93682|0) - try moving some notes from 1 to other place on the other side of the LN, one or two notes.
*01:41:310 (101310|5,101310|1,101310|6,101310|0,101310|4,101310|2,101653|3) - (personal opinion!) change LN pattern:
1) http://puu.sh/rDjVZ/aca31fc1ae.jpg / 2) http://puu.sh/rDjQJ/03322a8811.jpg(previos notes need fix with this pattern) /
3) http://puu.sh/rDk82/425b382f93.jpg
*01:49:882 (109882|4) - sound represented on this ln is shorter( lift at 01:50:053 -)
*01:50:139 - add minijack i hear sound repeating like in 01:50:396 - to make this 01:50:139 - - 01:50:910 - section's pattern {minijack minijack no-jack} wich fits better
*01:52:625 - this can be LN start + 3 notes instead of 2(add it in 5), this beat sounds very strong. if you take this suggestion, move 01:52:710 (112710|4) - to 6
*02:08:910 (128910|2) - what does this note represent? if you wanted to represent the new sound that starts at 02:08:739 - i recomend a 1/1 LN.
*02:09:510 (129510|6,129596|6,129682|6) - make this 3 notes jack a jackhammer , sound deserves more density (recomended pattern: [67] [67] [67])
*02:20:482 - ^ (rec:note placing [12][12][12])
*05:48:939 - ^ (rec:note placing [67] [67] [67])
>(in the previous three recs, compare with ->05:59:910 - here its a good single note jack situation)

*02:40:753 (160753|0,160753|1,160753|2,160925|1,160925|2,160925|0,161096|0,161096|1,161096|2) - i find this ammount of notes exagerated, but i like the idea of adding density to this stream, try this maibe: http://puu.sh/rDdl0/80b186c05b.png
*03:53:139 - kick missing add note
*04:58:710 - make this jack, note placing up to you
*05:19:710 - to 05:20:396 - why no burst? SV compensates lack of notes but i still find it like a sudden diff drop (i may be mistaken)
*05:28:625 - to 05:29:310 - add minijacks (if you accept this rec, consider removing 05:28:796 (328796|0) -)
-Posible note placings: 1) http://puu.sh/rDeTs/a2be07e2a8.jpg (four minijacks) / 2) http://puu.sh/rDeYj/5867686aba.jpg (two mini jacks, leaving short LN)/
3) http://puu.sh/rDf2Q/6431c20642.png (two mini jacks leaving short LN) / 4) http://puu.sh/rDffX/9b3f54d808.png (changes entire's section pattern)
*05:56:568 (356568|3) - move to 4 to make a better transition to next long LN

Well, this map is just amazing, and was really hard for someone with my 7k mapping/modding skills to find misakes.
There is any "important" mistake, or at least i haven't seen one.
Feel free to reject any of the suggestions if you dont agree!

Good luck with this map, hope it gets ranked soon since it deserves it

.

Wadu

Topic Starter

Wadu 2016-10-09T23:14:37+00:00

SwitchAxe wrote:
Ok here we go! (introduction patterns were already discused via game chat)
Columns: 1 / 2 / 3 / 4 / 5 / 6 / 7
Vociferous Armageddon
*01:33:082 (93082|0,93082|1,93253|0,93510|0,93682|0) - try moving some notes from 1 to other place on the other side of the LN, one or two notes.
*01:41:310 (101310|5,101310|1,101310|6,101310|0,101310|4,101310|2,101653|3) - (personal opinion!) change LN pattern:
1) http://puu.sh/rDjVZ/aca31fc1ae.jpg / 2) http://puu.sh/rDjQJ/03322a8811.jpg(previos notes need fix with this pattern) /
3) http://puu.sh/rDk82/425b382f93.jpg
*01:49:882 (109882|4) - sound represented on this ln is shorter( lift at 01:50:053 -)
*01:50:139 - add minijack i hear sound repeating like in 01:50:396 - to make this 01:50:139 - - 01:50:910 - section's pattern {minijack minijack no-jack} wich fits better
*01:52:625 - this can be LN start + 3 notes instead of 2(add it in 5), this beat sounds very strong. if you take this suggestion, move 01:52:710 (112710|4) - to 6
*02:08:910 (128910|2) - what does this note represent? if you wanted to represent the new sound that starts at 02:08:739 - i recomend a 1/1 LN.
*02:09:510 (129510|6,129596|6,129682|6) - make this 3 notes jack a jackhammer , sound deserves more density (recomended pattern: [67] [67] [67])
*02:20:482 - ^ (rec:note placing [12][12][12])
*05:48:939 - ^ (rec:note placing [67] [67] [67])
>(in the previous three recs, compare with ->05:59:910 - here its a good single note jack situation)

*02:40:753 (160753|0,160753|1,160753|2,160925|1,160925|2,160925|0,161096|0,161096|1,161096|2) - i find this ammount of notes exagerated, but i like the idea of adding density to this stream, try this maibe: http://puu.sh/rDdl0/80b186c05b.png
*03:53:139 - kick missing add note
*04:58:710 - make this jack, note placing up to you
*05:19:710 - to 05:20:396 - why no burst? SV compensates lack of notes but i still find it like a sudden diff drop (i may be mistaken)
*05:28:625 - to 05:29:310 - add minijacks (if you accept this rec, consider removing 05:28:796 (328796|0) -)
-Posible note placings: 1) http://puu.sh/rDeTs/a2be07e2a8.jpg (four minijacks) / 2) http://puu.sh/rDeYj/5867686aba.jpg (two mini jacks, leaving short LN)/
3) http://puu.sh/rDf2Q/6431c20642.png (two mini jacks leaving short LN) / 4) http://puu.sh/rDffX/9b3f54d808.png (changes entire's section pattern)
*05:56:568 (356568|3) - move to 4 to make a better transition to next long LN
Well, this map is just amazing, and was really hard for someone with my 7k mapping/modding skills to find misakes.
There is any "important" mistake, or at least i haven't seen one.
Feel free to reject any of the suggestions if you dont agree!

Good luck with this map, hope it gets ranked soon since it deserves it .

I would expand but I've actually agreed with anything you mentioned.
I have changed everything you said! Thank you very much for this useful mod.
Thank you!!

KaySon_old_1

KaySon_old_1 2016-10-10T00:17:40+00:00

behdiyuwsbrdepows wew mod for hire
column 1/2/3/4/5/6/7

SPOILER

wew ok
02:03:510 - i don't hear the extra tiny sound for another another note to be added in the 4 column

02:09:082 - drum beat here, may want to add note in column 5 and 7

02:23:482 (143482|5,143653|5,143825|5,143996|5,144253|5,144425|5,144596|5,144768|5) - I advise you not to have a 4 note anchor twice on the same finger

02:23:653 (143653|1,143825|1,143996|1,144253|1,144425|1,144596|1,144768|1) - this is fine to me, i would lower but playable

02:23:653 (143653|1,143825|1,143996|1,144253|1,144425|1,144596|1,144768|1) - 02:23:653 (143653|1,143825|1,143996|1,144253|1,144425|1,144596|1,144768|1) - I hear a drum sound bouncing off the left and right ear, try adding a note between the 4 column like this http://puu.sh/rDyfe/b6ad5028d3.jpg

02:25:539 (145539|1,145710|1,145882|1,146053|1,146139|1,146310|1,146482|1,146653|1,146739|1) - i don't hear a signature sound for all of this, move around a bit plox

06:15:939 - very loud sound, may beed to add note in column 6 and 7 to insinuate it

the sounds on this note here and with the rest of them, personal preference, there should be a little mini LN for extra creativity

AND DONE, all in all, i very nice chart with a blast of creativity and SV done right, good job dood, gives KDs

Wadu

Topic Starter

Wadu 2016-10-10T01:03:09+00:00

Hollas wrote:
behdiyuwsbrdepows wew mod for hire
column 1/2/3/4/5/6/7

SPOILER
wew ok
02:03:510 - i don't hear the extra tiny sound for another another note to be added in the 4 column

02:09:082 - drum beat here, may want to add note in column 5 and 7

02:23:482 (143482|5,143653|5,143825|5,143996|5,144253|5,144425|5,144596|5,144768|5) - I advise you not to have a 4 note anchor twice on the same finger

02:23:653 (143653|1,143825|1,143996|1,144253|1,144425|1,144596|1,144768|1) - this is fine to me, i would lower but playable

02:23:653 (143653|1,143825|1,143996|1,144253|1,144425|1,144596|1,144768|1) - 02:23:653 (143653|1,143825|1,143996|1,144253|1,144425|1,144596|1,144768|1) - I hear a drum sound bouncing off the left and right ear, try adding a note between the 4 column like this http://puu.sh/rDyfe/b6ad5028d3.jpg

02:25:539 (145539|1,145710|1,145882|1,146053|1,146139|1,146310|1,146482|1,146653|1,146739|1) - i don't hear a signature sound for all of this, move around a bit plox

06:15:939 - very loud sound, may beed to add note in column 6 and 7 to insinuate it

the sounds on this note here and with the rest of them, personal preference, there should be a little mini LN for extra creativity

AND DONE, all in all, i very nice chart with a blast of creativity and SV done right, good job dood, gives KDs

- Added missing notes, modified the notes you mentioned.
Thanks!

chistoefur

47 posts

Joined April 2015

chistoefur 2016-10-10T01:18:56+00:00

hello! just a little (and my first) mod coming through since I don't really know how to map 7k c:

questionable mod

01:52:368 - missing note here

02:01:796 - unecessary double here? since all the other notes are singles

02:11:310 - add single note here?

02:22:282 - ^

02:27:768 - unecessary double

02:35:418 - missing note (roughly around here, the timing is weird there so I can't tell exactly where)

03:54:339 - should be triple here

03:56:739 - ^

03:57:425 - ^^

03:58:453 - ^^^

(also not too sure about the last 4, not sure if intentionally mapped like that or not)

Hope my mod was of service to you

Great map, great song, really hope you can rank it

Wadu

Topic Starter

Wadu 2016-10-10T08:34:38+00:00

chistoefur wrote:
hello! just a little (and my first) mod coming through since I don't really know how to map 7k c:

questionable mod
01:52:368 - missing note here

02:01:796 - unecessary double here? since all the other notes are singles

02:11:310 - add single note here?

02:22:282 - ^

02:27:768 - unecessary double

02:35:418 - missing note (roughly around here, the timing is weird there so I can't tell exactly where)

03:54:339 - should be triple here

03:56:739 - ^

03:57:425 - ^^

03:58:453 - ^^^

(also not too sure about the last 4, not sure if intentionally mapped like that or not)

Hope my mod was of service to you
Great map, great song, really hope you can rank it

Not questionable at all, great mod! Thanks!
Added missing notes you mentioned.
btw, here: 02:35:418 I saw what you mean,
and on editor it DOES seem that there is a note missing, but if you playtest it, the SV makes it fine. ^_^
and how did i miss the triples... :3
mod applied, thanks so much for this wonderful and useful mod! <3

DeletedUser_259972

DeletedUser_259972 2016-10-10T10:03:32+00:00

"mod?"

2016-10-10 18:25 jakads: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1098761 Camellia - I Can Fly In The Universe [Vociferous Armageddon]] <osu!mania> |7K|
2016-10-10 18:25 jakads: y u left?
2016-10-10 18:26 CHARGE: its not specing
2016-10-10 18:26 CHARGE: sec
2016-10-10 18:33 jakads: woah
2016-10-10 18:33 jakads: ok
2016-10-10 18:33 jakads: that record's way better holy hell
2016-10-10 18:33 CHARGE: insane
2016-10-10 18:33 CHARGE: do u think you can fc it ?
2016-10-10 18:33 CHARGE: when its ranked?
2016-10-10 18:34 jakads: SVs are little tough
2016-10-10 18:34 jakads: gotta need some moddings on SVs but
2016-10-10 18:34 CHARGE: Please consider modding this
2016-10-10 18:34 CHARGE: it will be ranked for sure if you mod this
2016-10-10 18:34 CHARGE: Please please <333
2016-10-10 18:34 jakads: map is great are you sure this is your second map? xD
2016-10-10 18:34 CHARGE: just a little mod
2016-10-10 18:34 CHARGE: yes sir :3
2016-10-10 18:34 CHARGE: i promise
2016-10-10 18:34 jakads: hmm wait a bit
2016-10-10 18:34 CHARGE: wanna try the beginning of my third?
2016-10-10 18:34 jakads: I had some unreadable SVs
2016-10-10 18:34 CHARGE: kk send me via editor
2016-10-10 18:35 CHARGE: ill change that
2016-10-10 18:35 CHARGE: cuz if it was unreadable for you, it's unreadable for god
2016-10-10 18:35 CHARGE: :3
2016-10-10 18:38 jakads: basck
2016-10-10 18:38 jakads: back
2016-10-10 18:39 jakads: 00:22:110 - ~ 00:42:339 - 
2016-10-10 18:39 jakads: this is just pure memorization
2016-10-10 18:40 CHARGE: is it bad?
2016-10-10 18:40 CHARGE: memorization is a skill
2016-10-10 18:40 jakads: yeah I hated this SV on the original Evening's one lmao
2016-10-10 18:40 CHARGE: isnt it?
2016-10-10 18:40 jakads: yeah it is unless the map itself is 7 stars lmao
2016-10-10 18:40 CHARGE: btw, od 7.7 is ok?
2016-10-10 18:40 CHARGE: bcz of LN
2016-10-10 18:40 jakads: od was fine
2016-10-10 18:41 CHARGE: it was 8.5
2016-10-10 18:41 CHARGE: kk
2016-10-10 18:41 CHARGE: i think 8.5 is too much cuz LN part
2016-10-10 18:41 jakads: 00:22:110 - ~ 00:23:182 - also these are 1/8 snap SV
2016-10-10 18:41 jakads: 00:23:653 - ~ and why are these 1/4
2016-10-10 18:41 CHARGE: why not?
2016-10-10 18:42 jakads: for consistency
2016-10-10 18:42 CHARGE: what would you suggest?
2016-10-10 18:42 jakads: making all 1/8 like 00:22:110 - ~ 00:23:182 -
2016-10-10 18:43 CHARGE: is there any chance you can mod it?
2016-10-10 18:43 CHARGE: i can wait weeks for your mod
2016-10-10 18:43 CHARGE: i really dont mind
2016-10-10 18:43 CHARGE: i want quality
2016-10-10 18:43 jakads: I'm modding right now lmao
2016-10-10 18:43 jakads: modding via chat kek
2016-10-10 18:43 CHARGE: Will you be able to post that?
2016-10-10 18:43 jakads: yeah
2016-10-10 18:43 jakads: it's called irc modding
2016-10-10 18:44 CHARGE: yeah i know ^_^ shinora did it with me
2016-10-10 18:44 CHARGE: okay
2016-10-10 18:44 CHARGE: what else?
2016-10-10 18:44 CHARGE: ill fix that
2016-10-10 18:45 jakads: 00:45:425 - ~ 00:46:796 - If you wanted player to memorize the upcoming note, it's fine but
2016-10-10 18:45 jakads: if not, too intense
2016-10-10 18:46 CHARGE: yeah
2016-10-10 18:46 CHARGE: maybe i should make it lower sv
2016-10-10 18:46 jakads: yea
2016-10-10 18:46 jakads: 01:18:425 - this one too
2016-10-10 18:47 jakads: maybe 1.2~1.3?
2016-10-10 18:47 CHARGE: instead of 10?
2016-10-10 18:48 jakads: instead of 1.4
2016-10-10 18:49 CHARGE: yeah
2016-10-10 18:49 CHARGE: looks better
2016-10-10 18:49 jakads: 02:54:339 (174339|2,174339|0,174339|1,174339|4,174425|6,174425|3,174510|1,174510|2,174596|6) - there's wubwub-y sound here
2016-10-10 18:49 jakads: if you see other parts they were all LNs
2016-10-10 18:49 jakads: so maybe here too? 'w'
2016-10-10 18:50 CHARGE: the LN were on this part:
2016-10-10 18:50 CHARGE: 02:03:596 -
2016-10-10 18:50 CHARGE: u wanna make it like this?
2016-10-10 18:50 jakads: nah like other wubwubs
2016-10-10 18:51 jakads: 02:48:853 (168853|2,169068|5) - 
2016-10-10 18:51 jakads: (also that LN should be 1/4 snapped)
2016-10-10 18:51 CHARGE: yeah
2016-10-10 18:51 CHARGE: 02:49:110 -
2016-10-10 18:51 CHARGE: ill add a note here
2016-10-10 18:51 CHARGE: maybe small LN
2016-10-10 18:51 CHARGE: yeah, cuz it is the sound
2016-10-10 18:52 jakads: isn't that 1/4 snap?
2016-10-10 18:52 jakads: 02:49:068 (169068|5) - this one should go to 02:49:110 -  imo
2016-10-10 18:52 CHARGE: http://image.prntscr.com/image/91dcf1ea9de843ba9d53bdd136bbe2e1.png
2016-10-10 18:52 CHARGE: like that?
2016-10-10 18:52 CHARGE: looks good?
2016-10-10 18:53 jakads: sure sure
2016-10-10 18:53 CHARGE: 02:54:425 -
2016-10-10 18:53 CHARGE: here ill remove the notes
2016-10-10 18:53 CHARGE: its quiet
2016-10-10 18:53 jakads: yeye
2016-10-10 18:53 jakads: maybe putting LN is gud idea too
2016-10-10 18:54 CHARGE: like that
2016-10-10 18:54 CHARGE: http://prntscr.com/cs0aoc
2016-10-10 18:54 CHARGE: how's that part? 04:53:653 -
2016-10-10 18:54 CHARGE: i find it playable
2016-10-10 18:54 jakads: that's fine
2016-10-10 18:54 jakads: 03:05:439 (185439|1) - also what's this snap kek
2016-10-10 18:54 CHARGE: yeah sec
2016-10-10 18:55 CHARGE: hmm
2016-10-10 18:55 CHARGE: 03:05:439 -
2016-10-10 18:55 CHARGE: it starts here though
2016-10-10 18:55 CHARGE: hear with 25%
2016-10-10 18:55 CHARGE: don't you think?
2016-10-10 18:56 jakads: oh hmm
2016-10-10 18:56 jakads: yeah actually seems right
2016-10-10 18:56 jakads: 03:09:339 (189339|0) - finish?
2016-10-10 18:57 CHARGE: 03:09:425 (189425|3) - finish here instead?
2016-10-10 18:57 jakads: ye
2016-10-10 18:57 CHARGE: kk
2016-10-10 18:58 jakads: 05:53:653 - this SV is weird
2016-10-10 18:58 CHARGE: yeah i feel you
2016-10-10 18:58 CHARGE: but
2016-10-10 18:58 CHARGE: 05:53:825 -
2016-10-10 18:58 CHARGE: here there is a sound
2016-10-10 18:58 CHARGE: you suggest removing the sv here?
2016-10-10 18:58 jakads: nah readjust them
2016-10-10 18:58 jakads: wait
2016-10-10 18:59 jakads: 05:53:653 - 2x 05:53:696 - 1x 05:53:739 - 0.5x something like that
2016-10-10 18:59 jakads: it's too fast
2016-10-10 19:00 CHARGE: yeah
2016-10-10 19:00 CHARGE: much better!
2016-10-10 19:00 CHARGE: ^_^
2016-10-10 19:00 jakads: and I think it's gud :D
2016-10-10 19:00 CHARGE: thats it?
2016-10-10 19:00 jakads: what more? :^)
2016-10-10 19:00 CHARGE: no pattern issues?
2016-10-10 19:01 CHARGE: is the slowjam ok?
2016-10-10 19:01 CHARGE: you tell me
2016-10-10 19:01 CHARGE: :P
2016-10-10 19:01 jakads: slowjam was very good
2016-10-10 19:01 jakads: patterns are fun
2016-10-10 19:01 CHARGE: kk great
2016-10-10 19:01 jakads: BNs and modders will help you fix your patterns
2016-10-10 19:01 CHARGE: so just post the mod please so i can give you kodus and write you on the thank you list!
2016-10-10 19:01 CHARGE: you're already there
2016-10-10 19:01 CHARGE: :P
2016-10-10 19:01 jakads: testplay and mod and kudosu star :^)

noice

Wadu

Topic Starter

Wadu 2016-10-10T10:04:20+00:00

jakads wrote:

"mod?"

2016-10-10 18:25 jakads: ACTION is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1098761 Camellia - I Can Fly In The Universe [Vociferous Armageddon]] <osu!mania> |7K|
2016-10-10 18:25 jakads: y u left?
2016-10-10 18:26 CHARGE: its not specing
2016-10-10 18:26 CHARGE: sec
2016-10-10 18:33 jakads: woah
2016-10-10 18:33 jakads: ok
2016-10-10 18:33 jakads: that record's way better holy hell
2016-10-10 18:33 CHARGE: insane
2016-10-10 18:33 CHARGE: do u think you can fc it ?
2016-10-10 18:33 CHARGE: when its ranked?
2016-10-10 18:34 jakads: SVs are little tough
2016-10-10 18:34 jakads: gotta need some moddings on SVs but
2016-10-10 18:34 CHARGE: Please consider modding this
2016-10-10 18:34 CHARGE: it will be ranked for sure if you mod this
2016-10-10 18:34 CHARGE: Please please <333
2016-10-10 18:34 jakads: map is great are you sure this is your second map? xD
2016-10-10 18:34 CHARGE: just a little mod
2016-10-10 18:34 CHARGE: yes sir :3
2016-10-10 18:34 CHARGE: i promise
2016-10-10 18:34 jakads: hmm wait a bit
2016-10-10 18:34 CHARGE: wanna try the beginning of my third?
2016-10-10 18:34 jakads: I had some unreadable SVs
2016-10-10 18:34 CHARGE: kk send me via editor
2016-10-10 18:35 CHARGE: ill change that
2016-10-10 18:35 CHARGE: cuz if it was unreadable for you, it's unreadable for god
2016-10-10 18:35 CHARGE: :3
2016-10-10 18:38 jakads: basck
2016-10-10 18:38 jakads: back
2016-10-10 18:39 jakads: 00:22:110 - ~ 00:42:339 - 
2016-10-10 18:39 jakads: this is just pure memorization
2016-10-10 18:40 CHARGE: is it bad?
2016-10-10 18:40 CHARGE: memorization is a skill
2016-10-10 18:40 jakads: yeah I hated this SV on the original Evening's one lmao
2016-10-10 18:40 CHARGE: isnt it?
2016-10-10 18:40 jakads: yeah it is unless the map itself is 7 stars lmao
2016-10-10 18:40 CHARGE: btw, od 7.7 is ok?
2016-10-10 18:40 CHARGE: bcz of LN
2016-10-10 18:40 jakads: od was fine
2016-10-10 18:41 CHARGE: it was 8.5
2016-10-10 18:41 CHARGE: kk
2016-10-10 18:41 CHARGE: i think 8.5 is too much cuz LN part
2016-10-10 18:41 jakads: 00:22:110 - ~ 00:23:182 - also these are 1/8 snap SV
2016-10-10 18:41 jakads: 00:23:653 - ~ and why are these 1/4
2016-10-10 18:41 CHARGE: why not?
2016-10-10 18:42 jakads: for consistency
2016-10-10 18:42 CHARGE: what would you suggest?
2016-10-10 18:42 jakads: making all 1/8 like 00:22:110 - ~ 00:23:182 -
2016-10-10 18:43 CHARGE: is there any chance you can mod it?
2016-10-10 18:43 CHARGE: i can wait weeks for your mod
2016-10-10 18:43 CHARGE: i really dont mind
2016-10-10 18:43 CHARGE: i want quality
2016-10-10 18:43 jakads: I'm modding right now lmao
2016-10-10 18:43 jakads: modding via chat kek
2016-10-10 18:43 CHARGE: Will you be able to post that?
2016-10-10 18:43 jakads: yeah
2016-10-10 18:43 jakads: it's called irc modding
2016-10-10 18:44 CHARGE: yeah i know ^_^ shinora did it with me
2016-10-10 18:44 CHARGE: okay
2016-10-10 18:44 CHARGE: what else?
2016-10-10 18:44 CHARGE: ill fix that
2016-10-10 18:45 jakads: 00:45:425 - ~ 00:46:796 - If you wanted player to memorize the upcoming note, it's fine but
2016-10-10 18:45 jakads: if not, too intense
2016-10-10 18:46 CHARGE: yeah
2016-10-10 18:46 CHARGE: maybe i should make it lower sv
2016-10-10 18:46 jakads: yea
2016-10-10 18:46 jakads: 01:18:425 - this one too
2016-10-10 18:47 jakads: maybe 1.2~1.3?
2016-10-10 18:47 CHARGE: instead of 10?
2016-10-10 18:48 jakads: instead of 1.4
2016-10-10 18:49 CHARGE: yeah
2016-10-10 18:49 CHARGE: looks better
2016-10-10 18:49 jakads: 02:54:339 (174339|2,174339|0,174339|1,174339|4,174425|6,174425|3,174510|1,174510|2,174596|6) - there's wubwub-y sound here
2016-10-10 18:49 jakads: if you see other parts they were all LNs
2016-10-10 18:49 jakads: so maybe here too? 'w'
2016-10-10 18:50 CHARGE: the LN were on this part:
2016-10-10 18:50 CHARGE: 02:03:596 -
2016-10-10 18:50 CHARGE: u wanna make it like this?
2016-10-10 18:50 jakads: nah like other wubwubs
2016-10-10 18:51 jakads: 02:48:853 (168853|2,169068|5) - 
2016-10-10 18:51 jakads: (also that LN should be 1/4 snapped)
2016-10-10 18:51 CHARGE: yeah
2016-10-10 18:51 CHARGE: 02:49:110 -
2016-10-10 18:51 CHARGE: ill add a note here
2016-10-10 18:51 CHARGE: maybe small LN
2016-10-10 18:51 CHARGE: yeah, cuz it is the sound
2016-10-10 18:52 jakads: isn't that 1/4 snap?
2016-10-10 18:52 jakads: 02:49:068 (169068|5) - this one should go to 02:49:110 -  imo
2016-10-10 18:52 CHARGE: http://image.prntscr.com/image/91dcf1ea9de843ba9d53bdd136bbe2e1.png
2016-10-10 18:52 CHARGE: like that?
2016-10-10 18:52 CHARGE: looks good?
2016-10-10 18:53 jakads: sure sure
2016-10-10 18:53 CHARGE: 02:54:425 -
2016-10-10 18:53 CHARGE: here ill remove the notes
2016-10-10 18:53 CHARGE: its quiet
2016-10-10 18:53 jakads: yeye
2016-10-10 18:53 jakads: maybe putting LN is gud idea too
2016-10-10 18:54 CHARGE: like that
2016-10-10 18:54 CHARGE: http://prntscr.com/cs0aoc
2016-10-10 18:54 CHARGE: how's that part? 04:53:653 -
2016-10-10 18:54 CHARGE: i find it playable
2016-10-10 18:54 jakads: that's fine
2016-10-10 18:54 jakads: 03:05:439 (185439|1) - also what's this snap kek
2016-10-10 18:54 CHARGE: yeah sec
2016-10-10 18:55 CHARGE: hmm
2016-10-10 18:55 CHARGE: 03:05:439 -
2016-10-10 18:55 CHARGE: it starts here though
2016-10-10 18:55 CHARGE: hear with 25%
2016-10-10 18:55 CHARGE: don't you think?
2016-10-10 18:56 jakads: oh hmm
2016-10-10 18:56 jakads: yeah actually seems right
2016-10-10 18:56 jakads: 03:09:339 (189339|0) - finish?
2016-10-10 18:57 CHARGE: 03:09:425 (189425|3) - finish here instead?
2016-10-10 18:57 jakads: ye
2016-10-10 18:57 CHARGE: kk
2016-10-10 18:58 jakads: 05:53:653 - this SV is weird
2016-10-10 18:58 CHARGE: yeah i feel you
2016-10-10 18:58 CHARGE: but
2016-10-10 18:58 CHARGE: 05:53:825 -
2016-10-10 18:58 CHARGE: here there is a sound
2016-10-10 18:58 CHARGE: you suggest removing the sv here?
2016-10-10 18:58 jakads: nah readjust them
2016-10-10 18:58 jakads: wait
2016-10-10 18:59 jakads: 05:53:653 - 2x 05:53:696 - 1x 05:53:739 - 0.5x something like that
2016-10-10 18:59 jakads: it's too fast
2016-10-10 19:00 CHARGE: yeah
2016-10-10 19:00 CHARGE: much better!
2016-10-10 19:00 CHARGE: ^_^
2016-10-10 19:00 jakads: and I think it's gud :D
2016-10-10 19:00 CHARGE: thats it?
2016-10-10 19:00 jakads: what more? :^)
2016-10-10 19:00 CHARGE: no pattern issues?
2016-10-10 19:01 CHARGE: is the slowjam ok?
2016-10-10 19:01 CHARGE: you tell me
2016-10-10 19:01 CHARGE: :P
2016-10-10 19:01 jakads: slowjam was very good
2016-10-10 19:01 jakads: patterns are fun
2016-10-10 19:01 CHARGE: kk great
2016-10-10 19:01 jakads: BNs and modders will help you fix your patterns
2016-10-10 19:01 CHARGE: so just post the mod please so i can give you kodus and write you on the thank you list!
2016-10-10 19:01 CHARGE: you're already there
2016-10-10 19:01 CHARGE: :P
2016-10-10 19:01 jakads: testplay and mod and kudosu star :^)

noice

Thanks for your mode and amazing gameplay! Applied everything when we talked.
Cheers! <3

Rivals_7

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Rivals_7 2016-10-10T10:04:23+00:00

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Arzenvald

4,033 posts

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Arzenvald 2016-10-10T17:00:21+00:00

IRC

23:16 CHARGE: Hey ajee!
23:16 CHARGE: love your maps man!
23:17 ajeemaniz: !
23:17 ajeemaniz: why thank you!
23:18 CHARGE: Was wondering if you could take a look at my maps and maybe consider to mod/fav/star it :D
23:18 CHARGE: it's probably gonna be ranked
23:18 *CHARGE is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1098761 Camellia - I Can Fly In The Universe]
23:18 ajeemaniz: lets see, i have couple 10 minutes before i offline
23:18 CHARGE: 7k 7.3*
23:18 ajeemaniz: @u@
23:18 ajeemaniz: 7K YES
23:18 CHARGE: Oke
23:18 CHARGE: modded by jakads, pporse, chocoliti and 7 more
23:18 CHARGE: pretty much ready for rank
23:19 ajeemaniz: i see its well modded
23:19 CHARGE: Oh thank you ^^
23:19 ajeemaniz: have you try to find some more feedback at #osumania ?
23:20 CHARGE: I talk to high-tier players
23:20 CHARGE: for playtests
23:20 CHARGE: inteliser, jakads, cheetose, sillyfangirl and more
23:20 CHARGE: they liked it
23:20 *ajeemaniz is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1098761 Camellia - I Can Fly In The Universe [Vociferous Armageddon]] <osu!mania> |7K|
23:21 ajeemaniz: HMMM i know i can pass that stream but idk what will happen after that 
23:22 ajeemaniz: jk im rusty af orz
23:22 CHARGE: haha just wait and see!
23:23 ajeemaniz: 01:16:968 (76968|0) - nope, i'll definitely dead here hahah
23:23 CHARGE: :PP
23:23 CHARGE: how does it look?
23:24 ajeemaniz: so far it looks like the chart is well charted
23:24 *ajeemaniz is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1098761 Camellia - I Can Fly In The Universe [Vociferous Armageddon]] <osu!mania> -NoFail |7K|
23:24 CHARGE: Thanks a bunch!
23:24 ajeemaniz: wait, i want to try to finish the whole thing
23:26 ajeemaniz: do you play o2jam before
23:27 ajeemaniz: or chart any o2jam file
23:28 CHARGE: nope
23:28 CHARGE: 2nd map ever did
23:29 ajeemaniz: :o
23:30 ajeemaniz: my right hand's dead atm
23:31 ajeemaniz: maaan this is tiring, but actually i loved it, how the stream flows
23:31 CHARGE: Tyvm!!
23:33 ajeemaniz: for a streamy map with 7 stars in game, this should be playable with current OD & HP setting with 1500+ rank.. yes yes
23:34 ajeemaniz: 1 thing though
23:34 ajeemaniz: this part with the SV transition 00:22:796 (22796|4,22968|1,23139|0) - 
23:36 ajeemaniz: 00:23:653 (23653|2,23739|3) - this one reads as 1/4, but with the green line stopped at 00:23:825 (23825|5) - , it creates some unreadable gap
23:36 ajeemaniz: that's kind of serious issue
23:38 ajeemaniz: 00:26:396 (26396|0,26396|6,26482|1,26482|5) - 00:27:253 (27253|5,27339|3) - 00:29:139 (29139|6,29225|5) - 00:31:882 (31882|4,31968|5) - 00:32:739 (32739|6,32825|4) - 00:34:625 (34625|6,34710|0) - etc etc
23:39 ajeemaniz: perhaps you can simply remove the SV on these 1/4? imo it doesn't really emphasize anything and rather unreadable.. ask Evening for SV things.
23:41 ajeemaniz: ping
23:42 CHARGE: Fixed it
23:42 ajeemaniz: @.@
23:42 ajeemaniz: wow
23:42 CHARGE: yeah
23:42 CHARGE: much better now
23:42 CHARGE: lemme upload
23:42 CHARGE: tell me if its better
23:42 ajeemaniz: alright, im still checking the other SVs, they are really nice to play
23:42 CHARGE: thanks to evening for that
23:42 CHARGE: :P
23:43 ajeemaniz: >:T 1 thing though.. i will pass this without NF..
23:43 ajeemaniz: not sure when ;w;
23:43 CHARGE: '   
23:43 CHARGE: Well
23:43 CHARGE: it sure as hell will give u pp
23:43 CHARGE: :P
23:43 ajeemaniz: still cant believe its B able with NF
23:44 ajeemaniz: as long as you don't bump the OD and HP
23:44 CHARGE: its 7.7 bcz of the LN part
23:44 CHARGE: you think if should be more?
23:44 CHARGE: btw, can u consider shooting some stars? ^^
23:44 ajeemaniz: i'll consider to shoot some star, but im not finished yet :P
23:44 CHARGE: Oke ^^
23:45 CHARGE: it wont upload
23:45 CHARGE: weird
23:45 CHARGE: what would you suggest for od?
23:45 CHARGE: and hp?
23:45 CHARGE: let's say, od 8 and hp 8.7?
23:45 ajeemaniz: no no no
23:45 ajeemaniz: don't raise it
23:46 CHARGE: http://prntscr.com/cs5hxu
23:46 CHARGE: any idea why its stucked like that?
23:46 ajeemaniz: you can lower the OD to 7.1 if you want to bump the HP
23:46 ajeemaniz: hp 8.6-8.8 is reasonable
23:47 ajeemaniz: but that's my opinion, you better ask other BN too
23:47 CHARGE: Alrighty :) thx
23:47 CHARGE: weird
23:47 CHARGE: its stucked on 11%
23:48 ajeemaniz: restart your osu and retry
23:49 ajeemaniz: 04:47:739 (287739|6) -  add 1 more note to emphasize the kick
23:49 CHARGE: Good idea
23:49 ajeemaniz: 04:47:739 (287739|6) -  add 1 more note to emphasize the kick
23:50 CHARGE: Posted
23:50 ajeemaniz: 04:57:853 (297853|3) - prolly ghost note
23:50 CHARGE: check the sv?
23:50 CHARGE: why?
23:50 ajeemaniz: the SV is ok
23:50 CHARGE: there isnt a kick there
23:50 CHARGE: or i missed it
23:50 ajeemaniz: now checking the note consistency
23:50 CHARGE: its just like here
23:50 CHARGE: 04:47:568 -
23:51 ajeemaniz: 04:47:653 (287653|3,287739|6,287825|5) - these three has stronger sound, its ok to emphasize 04:47:739 (287739|6) - 
23:51 ajeemaniz: you know its couple bar before next phase
23:52 ajeemaniz: 04:47:739 (287739|6,309510|5,309682|3,309853|2) - i cant feel any beat here, prolly ghost note
23:53 CHARGE: ok got it
23:53 ajeemaniz: 05:18:082 (318082|5,318253|6) - you can add doubles here https://puu.sh/rEgPC/4a597c50f5.png
23:53 CHARGE: btw can u post it as a irc mod?
23:53 ajeemaniz: of course
23:53 ajeemaniz: wait until i finish checking xD
23:53 ajeemaniz: 05:20:996 (320996|2) - prolly ghost note, cant hear any beat
23:54 CHARGE: Yep yep
23:54 CHARGE: aight you're right
23:54 ajeemaniz: 05:26:653 (326653|2,326825|4) - same,05:26:568 (326568|3,326739|0) - make LN
23:55 CHARGE: 05:26:653 (326653|2,326825|4) -
23:55 CHARGE: ghosts?
23:55 ajeemaniz: can't hear any 1/4 beats
23:55 CHARGE: 05:26:910 -
23:55 CHARGE: ln until here?
23:55 ajeemaniz: yep
23:55 CHARGE: or red?
23:56 CHARGE: i think until here
23:56 CHARGE: 05:26:739 -
23:56 CHARGE: the sounds stops there
23:56 ajeemaniz: https://puu.sh/rEh04/211d8124de.png
23:56 CHARGE: do you agree?
23:56 ajeemaniz: something like that can works too
23:57 CHARGE: oh thats cool
23:57 CHARGE: ^^
23:57 CHARGE: yep
23:57 ajeemaniz: some 1/8 and 1/16 build up would be considered as dump, but i can't judge.. better asks Feerum or Blocko for that
23:57 ajeemaniz: 05:48:939 (348939|5,349025|5,349110|5) - 05:59:910 (359910|5,359996|5,360082|5) - can you move it to 5th column, to differentiate with the beginning part?
23:58 CHARGE: isnt it too many spaces?
23:58 ajeemaniz: na, it can be fun with index & ring finger to jack them
23:58 ajeemaniz: just a suggestion
23:58 ajeemaniz: and variation
23:58 CHARGE: so we have more parts of these
23:59 CHARGE: 05:59:910 -
23:59 CHARGE: here too?
23:59 ajeemaniz: yep, don't forget to move this 06:00:168 (360168|4) - to avoid previous jack
23:59 CHARGE: ill be back later man, i really gtg. ill stay online so i can see your mod
23:59 ajeemaniz: ok
23:59 CHARGE: <3
23:59 ajeemaniz: i'll post it now
23:59 ajeemaniz: its done anyway :P
23:59 ajeemaniz: the rest is great! i cant wait to see this ranked.. lemme post it now

we fixed some things about SV transition, ghost notes, and other things.
perhaps the OD can be set lower, 7-7.2 due the speed up and SV, while the HP can be raised up, hp 8.6-8.8.. just my suggestion

good luck in ranking man! damn this map is fun

Wadu

Topic Starter

Wadu 2016-10-10T17:04:16+00:00

ajeemaniz wrote:

IRC

23:16 CHARGE: Hey ajee!
23:16 CHARGE: love your maps man!
23:17 ajeemaniz: !
23:17 ajeemaniz: why thank you!
23:18 CHARGE: Was wondering if you could take a look at my maps and maybe consider to mod/fav/star it :D
23:18 CHARGE: it's probably gonna be ranked
23:18 *CHARGE is listening to [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1098761 Camellia - I Can Fly In The Universe]
23:18 ajeemaniz: lets see, i have couple 10 minutes before i offline
23:18 CHARGE: 7k 7.3*
23:18 ajeemaniz: @u@
23:18 ajeemaniz: 7K YES
23:18 CHARGE: Oke
23:18 CHARGE: modded by jakads, pporse, chocoliti and 7 more
23:18 CHARGE: pretty much ready for rank
23:19 ajeemaniz: i see its well modded
23:19 CHARGE: Oh thank you ^^
23:19 ajeemaniz: have you try to find some more feedback at #osumania ?
23:20 CHARGE: I talk to high-tier players
23:20 CHARGE: for playtests
23:20 CHARGE: inteliser, jakads, cheetose, sillyfangirl and more
23:20 CHARGE: they liked it
23:20 *ajeemaniz is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1098761 Camellia - I Can Fly In The Universe [Vociferous Armageddon]] <osu!mania> |7K|
23:21 ajeemaniz: HMMM i know i can pass that stream but idk what will happen after that 
23:22 ajeemaniz: jk im rusty af orz
23:22 CHARGE: haha just wait and see!
23:23 ajeemaniz: 01:16:968 (76968|0) - nope, i'll definitely dead here hahah
23:23 CHARGE: :PP
23:23 CHARGE: how does it look?
23:24 ajeemaniz: so far it looks like the chart is well charted
23:24 *ajeemaniz is playing [https://osu.ppy.sh/b/1098761 Camellia - I Can Fly In The Universe [Vociferous Armageddon]] <osu!mania> -NoFail |7K|
23:24 CHARGE: Thanks a bunch!
23:24 ajeemaniz: wait, i want to try to finish the whole thing
23:26 ajeemaniz: do you play o2jam before
23:27 ajeemaniz: or chart any o2jam file
23:28 CHARGE: nope
23:28 CHARGE: 2nd map ever did
23:29 ajeemaniz: :o
23:30 ajeemaniz: my right hand's dead atm
23:31 ajeemaniz: maaan this is tiring, but actually i loved it, how the stream flows
23:31 CHARGE: Tyvm!!
23:33 ajeemaniz: for a streamy map with 7 stars in game, this should be playable with current OD & HP setting with 1500+ rank.. yes yes
23:34 ajeemaniz: 1 thing though
23:34 ajeemaniz: this part with the SV transition 00:22:796 (22796|4,22968|1,23139|0) - 
23:36 ajeemaniz: 00:23:653 (23653|2,23739|3) - this one reads as 1/4, but with the green line stopped at 00:23:825 (23825|5) - , it creates some unreadable gap
23:36 ajeemaniz: that's kind of serious issue
23:38 ajeemaniz: 00:26:396 (26396|0,26396|6,26482|1,26482|5) - 00:27:253 (27253|5,27339|3) - 00:29:139 (29139|6,29225|5) - 00:31:882 (31882|4,31968|5) - 00:32:739 (32739|6,32825|4) - 00:34:625 (34625|6,34710|0) - etc etc
23:39 ajeemaniz: perhaps you can simply remove the SV on these 1/4? imo it doesn't really emphasize anything and rather unreadable.. ask Evening for SV things.
23:41 ajeemaniz: ping
23:42 CHARGE: Fixed it
23:42 ajeemaniz: @.@
23:42 ajeemaniz: wow
23:42 CHARGE: yeah
23:42 CHARGE: much better now
23:42 CHARGE: lemme upload
23:42 CHARGE: tell me if its better
23:42 ajeemaniz: alright, im still checking the other SVs, they are really nice to play
23:42 CHARGE: thanks to evening for that
23:42 CHARGE: :P
23:43 ajeemaniz: >:T 1 thing though.. i will pass this without NF..
23:43 ajeemaniz: not sure when ;w;
23:43 CHARGE: '   
23:43 CHARGE: Well
23:43 CHARGE: it sure as hell will give u pp
23:43 CHARGE: :P
23:43 ajeemaniz: still cant believe its B able with NF
23:44 ajeemaniz: as long as you don't bump the OD and HP
23:44 CHARGE: its 7.7 bcz of the LN part
23:44 CHARGE: you think if should be more?
23:44 CHARGE: btw, can u consider shooting some stars? ^^
23:44 ajeemaniz: i'll consider to shoot some star, but im not finished yet :P
23:44 CHARGE: Oke ^^
23:45 CHARGE: it wont upload
23:45 CHARGE: weird
23:45 CHARGE: what would you suggest for od?
23:45 CHARGE: and hp?
23:45 CHARGE: let's say, od 8 and hp 8.7?
23:45 ajeemaniz: no no no
23:45 ajeemaniz: don't raise it
23:46 CHARGE: http://prntscr.com/cs5hxu
23:46 CHARGE: any idea why its stucked like that?
23:46 ajeemaniz: you can lower the OD to 7.1 if you want to bump the HP
23:46 ajeemaniz: hp 8.6-8.8 is reasonable
23:47 ajeemaniz: but that's my opinion, you better ask other BN too
23:47 CHARGE: Alrighty :) thx
23:47 CHARGE: weird
23:47 CHARGE: its stucked on 11%
23:48 ajeemaniz: restart your osu and retry
23:49 ajeemaniz: 04:47:739 (287739|6) -  add 1 more note to emphasize the kick
23:49 CHARGE: Good idea
23:49 ajeemaniz: 04:47:739 (287739|6) -  add 1 more note to emphasize the kick
23:50 CHARGE: Posted
23:50 ajeemaniz: 04:57:853 (297853|3) - prolly ghost note
23:50 CHARGE: check the sv?
23:50 CHARGE: why?
23:50 ajeemaniz: the SV is ok
23:50 CHARGE: there isnt a kick there
23:50 CHARGE: or i missed it
23:50 ajeemaniz: now checking the note consistency
23:50 CHARGE: its just like here
23:50 CHARGE: 04:47:568 -
23:51 ajeemaniz: 04:47:653 (287653|3,287739|6,287825|5) - these three has stronger sound, its ok to emphasize 04:47:739 (287739|6) - 
23:51 ajeemaniz: you know its couple bar before next phase
23:52 ajeemaniz: 04:47:739 (287739|6,309510|5,309682|3,309853|2) - i cant feel any beat here, prolly ghost note
23:53 CHARGE: ok got it
23:53 ajeemaniz: 05:18:082 (318082|5,318253|6) - you can add doubles here https://puu.sh/rEgPC/4a597c50f5.png
23:53 CHARGE: btw can u post it as a irc mod?
23:53 ajeemaniz: of course
23:53 ajeemaniz: wait until i finish checking xD
23:53 ajeemaniz: 05:20:996 (320996|2) - prolly ghost note, cant hear any beat
23:54 CHARGE: Yep yep
23:54 CHARGE: aight you're right
23:54 ajeemaniz: 05:26:653 (326653|2,326825|4) - same,05:26:568 (326568|3,326739|0) - make LN
23:55 CHARGE: 05:26:653 (326653|2,326825|4) -
23:55 CHARGE: ghosts?
23:55 ajeemaniz: can't hear any 1/4 beats
23:55 CHARGE: 05:26:910 -
23:55 CHARGE: ln until here?
23:55 ajeemaniz: yep
23:55 CHARGE: or red?
23:56 CHARGE: i think until here
23:56 CHARGE: 05:26:739 -
23:56 CHARGE: the sounds stops there
23:56 ajeemaniz: https://puu.sh/rEh04/211d8124de.png
23:56 CHARGE: do you agree?
23:56 ajeemaniz: something like that can works too
23:57 CHARGE: oh thats cool
23:57 CHARGE: ^^
23:57 CHARGE: yep
23:57 ajeemaniz: some 1/8 and 1/16 build up would be considered as dump, but i can't judge.. better asks Feerum or Blocko for that
23:57 ajeemaniz: 05:48:939 (348939|5,349025|5,349110|5) - 05:59:910 (359910|5,359996|5,360082|5) - can you move it to 5th column, to differentiate with the beginning part?
23:58 CHARGE: isnt it too many spaces?
23:58 ajeemaniz: na, it can be fun with index & ring finger to jack them
23:58 ajeemaniz: just a suggestion
23:58 ajeemaniz: and variation
23:58 CHARGE: so we have more parts of these
23:59 CHARGE: 05:59:910 -
23:59 CHARGE: here too?
23:59 ajeemaniz: yep, don't forget to move this 06:00:168 (360168|4) - to avoid previous jack
23:59 CHARGE: ill be back later man, i really gtg. ill stay online so i can see your mod
23:59 ajeemaniz: ok
23:59 CHARGE: <3
23:59 ajeemaniz: i'll post it now
23:59 ajeemaniz: its done anyway :P
23:59 ajeemaniz: the rest is great! i cant wait to see this ranked.. lemme post it now

we fixed some things about SV transition, ghost notes, and other things.
perhaps the OD can be set lower, 7-7.2 due the speed up and SV, while the HP can be raised up, hp 8.6-8.8.. just my suggestion

good luck in ranking man! damn this map is fun

Thanks for the mod! Loved it!

QQwiwi2012

115 posts

Joined July 2012

QQwiwi2012 2016-10-11T15:48:09+00:00

like it

Protastic101

Elite Nominator

1,160 posts

Joined July 2015

Protastic101 2016-10-15T13:20:14+00:00

ok, sorry for being a little late, incoming shit mod now. Also, note: when I send screenshots, the highlighted notes are the ones that have been moved around.

col 1->7

weee

[General]

Jesus man, the note:LN ratio is 11:1 and you're using OD 7.1 XD Please raise it to 8.3 at least so that getting a good accuracy isn't a matter of mashing.
Please delete normal-hitnormal-old.wav from the song folder since it isn't used in the map at all.
This is more my personal opinion, but Vociferous in the diff name doesn't really flow that well to me. Like, the song's intense and all, but I think just Armageddon is fine. That's just my opinion though ¯\_(ツ)_/¯

[Vociferous Armageddon]00:20:739 (20739|2,22110|0) - Can I suggest swapping the LN and short note here? this is more of a trivial thing, but 00:20:568 (20568|2,20739|2) may feel a little out of place since there have been no accidental 1/2 jacks throughout this entire section.
00:25:368 (25368|5,25539|6) - I'd also suggest switching columns here too so that the longer LN is in 7 and the shorter in 6. I think it just feels a bit nicer when LNs move towards the center column, but that's my preference.
00:25:539 (25539|0) - You might also consider moving this to 3 to avoid a 1/2 jack with 00:25:368 (25368|0,25539|0)
00:28:110 (28110|6,28453|6,28796|6,29139|6) - This 4 note stack. It might not be that big of a playability issue, but it'd be better to try and balance out the hands since you already have a 1/2 trill at 00:28:110 (28110|6,28282|5,28453|6,28625|5) Maybe try this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6323647
00:31:968 (31968|1,31968|5,32053|0,32053|6) - For consistency, shouldn't you remove one note from each of these jumps since 00:29:225 (29225|5,29310|2) is the same sound as the above, but are single notes.
00:29:825 - I also might suggest adding a note here in 2 since the sound is much louder than the surrounding ones.
00:30:339 (30339|0) - Also, this makes a 3 note stack with the previous two notes, so move this to 6 instead?
00:32:825 (32825|4) - For a little symmetry, move this to 6 so that it's a reflection of 00:32:910 (32910|1)
00:35:310 (35310|0) - Note sure if this 1/2 minijack was intentional, but considering you don't use them at all in this diff, I'd move this to 5 or 7.
00:38:225 (38225|2,38310|0,38396|1) - The lack of symmetry here makes me cri. Try moving 00:38:225 (38225|2) to 1, then shifting 00:38:310 (38310|0,38396|1) once to the right.
00:54:168 (54168|0) - move to 3 and 00:54:253 (54253|6) move to 1 for a simple 7 - 5 - 3 - 1 roll?
01:07:282 (67282|3,67453|3,67625|3) - Oh. As I've been saying, you don't use jacks like these in this section, so I'd recommend moving the notes around like so https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6323712
01:08:568 (68568|4,68739|4,68910|4,69082|4) - This stack too. Try this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6323728
01:25:710 (85710|3,85882|3,86053|3) - At this point in the song, I can't keep up in the editor, so I'm looking for stacks now. Anyways, try moving 01:25:882 (85882|3) to 6.
01:26:910 (86910|3,87082|3,87253|3) - same for this. I'm not sure if it's being done intentionally. Maybe move 01:27:082 (87082|3) to 3.
01:29:310 - Calm down there Satan x_x Might consider reducing the .1 SV to .2 I get it's a teleport SV or whatever, but still, that's ridiculously brutal in the middle of a jumpstream.
01:32:139 (92139|3,92310|3) - Not a stack, but I do think the pattern could be made into a roll like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6323786
01:40:196 - 01:40:539 - 01:40:882 - 01:41:053 - Since these hihats are way louder than the synths here, I'd consider making them doubles. What about this? https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6323807
01:53:653 (113653|4,113996|5) - Swap columns with the LN and short note since the LN is right after 01:53:396 (113396|4,113482|4) and I'd consider giving the player a moment of rest to recover from a jack.
02:23:482 (143482|4,143653|4,143825|4,143996|4,144168|4,144339|4,144510|4,144682|4) and 02:23:653 (143653|2,143825|2,143996|2,144168|2,144339|2,144510|2,144682|2) - We gotta figure these stacks out man Q_Q Currently, the only solution I see to it is removing the LN 02:22:796 (142796|6) as it's constricting your columns to 6. I think it's fine to ignore the synth in favor of the intense kicks here.
02:42:939 (162939|3) - Move this to 2 to make a right -> left roll which I think plays better than the spaceship pattern at 02:42:682 (162682|4,162768|3,162853|2,162939|3,163025|4) which is pretty right hand heavy.
03:12:125 (192125|3,192168|1,192168|0,192168|2) - I'd prefer making this pattern flow in the same direction as 03:11:910 (191910|3,191996|4,192082|5,192168|6) so move 03:12:125 (192125|3) to 1 and shift 03:12:168 (192168|2,192168|0,192168|1) one column to the right.
03:33:168 (213168|3) - Move to 3 and move 03:33:253 (213253|5) to 4 to make a roll with 03:33:168 (213168|3,213253|5,213339|4,213425|5,213510|6)
03:39:082 (219082|3,219253|3,219253|2) - I'd consider control H and putting the trill onto both hands rather than the thumb.
03:49:068 (229068|3,229068|4) - Remove one note from this jump? It's the same sound as 03:41:825 (221825|6,221868|5,221910|4,221953|3) which is only mapped with singles.
04:40:025 (280025|1,280196|1,280368|1) - Stack. Maybe shift 04:40:453 (280453|2,280453|3) once to the right and move 04:40:368 (280368|1) to 3.
04:58:282 (298282|2,298368|2,298625|4,298710|4) - Why not make the jacks consistent in this measure? Cause 04:58:282 (298282|2,298368|2) are different pitches, so it'd be surprising to only use jacks without a clear pattern in this measure. I'd recommend something like this https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6327616
05:08:953 (308953|1,308953|2,308996|4,308996|3) - Why are these doubles when the louder sound at 05:09:939 (309939|0,309982|1,310025|2,310068|3) are single? For consistency, I'd recommend making the first burst single notes only.
05:14:739 (314739|6,314782|5,314825|4,314868|3) - Going off the above, this burst is single too when it's the same sound as the one I mentioned above. So either make the first burst single notes or this burst have doubles.
05:26:010 (326010|1,326182|5) - Uh, I think these are ghost notes. There are no synth sounds like there are at 05:26:053 (326053|2,326096|3,326139|4)
05:34:453 (334453|0) - I'd consider making this a 1/1 LN for the held synth.
05:36:896 (336896|1,336982|3,337153|3) - Again, I do believe these are ghost notes. If this were a dump chart, I think it'd be fine but I'd try not putting notes that don't have musical support for them cause a lot of players play by sound and intuition.
06:00:168 (360168|3) - Why not make this a 1/2 LN and have 06:00:425 (360425|3) shield it?
06:32:910 (392910|5,393082|6) and 06:27:425 (387425|5,387596|6) - Why not swap columns and have them be a mirror of 06:30:168 (390168|0,390339|1) ? So instead of the longer LN being in 6, it's in 7.
Also, regarding the final SVs at the end, maybe you might consider toning down the speed to start at the LN 06:46:796 instead :<

Wadu

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Wadu 2016-10-15T20:24:45+00:00

Wow! That was an impressive mod.
Thank you very much, feel free to check out the changes

Now there are much less stacks, and the map feels much better to play.
Thanks again!

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Bendo Na Bendo 2016-10-17T18:56:23+00:00

Really good map, fun and dense

Wadu

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Wadu 2016-10-17T22:27:37+00:00

Bendo Na Bendo wrote:
Really good map, fun and dense

Thank you!

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