1. 00:02:637 (1,1,1) - 01:20:378 (1,2,3) - 这里统一一下nc的下法？音乐上是一样的部分，其他难度同
2. 00:43:620 - 00:50:380 - 00:57:140 - 01:00:520 - 01:10:660 - finish?
3. 00:50:380 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 就这一部分是三条长白线1nc的，和kiai其余部分一样改成两条更合理
4. 01:02:210 (3) - 3->4近了
5. 01:26:716 - 有两条绿线
6. 01:27:561 - normal sample?

1. 00:03:060 (1) - 1->1保持1.4ds
2. 00:04:116 (2) - etc. 虽然合曲但normal难度放1/4短滑条还是不太合适新人玩，建议就换成一个单点
4. 00:23:340 - 00:57:140 - 01:10:660 - finish?

1. 00:04:116 (2) - 00:07:496 (2) - 01:21:857 (6) - 01:25:237 (2) - 仔细听一下应该是snap到1/6，最高难度同
2. 00:08:763 (6,1) - 00:09:397 (2,1) - 间距上区分一下？前者空了1/2后者空了1/1，读起来不太直观
3. 00:23:340 - 01:10:660 - finish?
4. 01:02:210 (6) - 01:05:802 (4) - 01:12:350 (5) - nc?

1. 00:23:340 - 00:57:140 - finish?
2. 00:41:930 (1,2,3,4) - 这个梗可以让它们尾部间距和前面这部分 00:36:860 (1,2,3) - 一样不碰到一点，看起来更加干净
3. 01:03:478 (5) - 01:16:998 - 考虑addition soft finish，感觉这里适合这样连续敲两下。如果想采用的话也加到别的diff

Garden wrote:

Easy

1. 00:02:637 (1,1,1) - 01:20:378 (1,2,3) - 这里统一一下nc的下法？音乐上是一样的部分，其他难度
   00:03:060 這裡因為跟了效果音所以才下了NC，全部難度都一樣，這個效果音是這顏色的note XD
2. 00:43:620 - 00:50:380 - 00:57:140 - 01:00:520 - 01:10:660 - finish? 下音效下到亂了... 都加了，謝謝
3. 00:50:380 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6) - 就这一部分是三条长白线1nc的，和kiai其余部分一样改成两条更合理 fix!
4. 01:02:210 (3) - 3->4近了 這我做低難度的地方都會縮點間距，前面同樣的部分都改成0.8x，感謝提醒
5. 01:26:716 - 有两条绿线
6. 01:27:561 - normal sample?

Normal

1. 00:03:060 (1) - 1->1保持1.4ds 漏了 thank you
2. 00:04:116 (2) - etc. 虽然合曲但normal难度放1/4短滑条还是不太合适新人玩，建议就换成一个单点 原本想說還是堅持一下為了跟那音效所以不改，但想想1/4好像真的很兇殘所以改了 (欸
4. 00:23:340 - 00:57:140 - 01:10:660 - finish?

Hard

1. 00:04:116 (2) - 00:07:496 (2) - 01:21:857 (6) - 01:25:237 (2) - 仔细听一下应该是snap到1/6，最高难度同 !!! 完全沒注意到，都改了!
2. 00:08:763 (6,1) - 00:09:397 (2,1) - 间距上区分一下？前者空了1/2后者空了1/1，读起来不太直观 你這麼一提發現很有道理.. 也不知道放哪好，就先擺個合理的位置 (?)
3. 00:23:340 - 01:10:660 - finish?
4. 01:02:210 (6) - 01:05:802 (4) - 01:12:350 (5) - nc?

Hanamaru

1. 00:23:340 - 00:57:140 - finish?
2. 00:41:930 (1,2,3,4) - 这个梗可以让它们尾部间距和前面这部分 00:36:860 (1,2,3) - 一样不碰到一点，看起来更加干净 調整了 謝謝
3. 01:03:478 (5) - 01:16:998 - 考虑addition soft finish，感觉这里适合这样连续敲两下。如果想采用的话也加到别的diff 說的有道理，已改~~

可能要稍检查下finish在各个diff下的统一性好的~

1. change bg to .jpg, to save space
2. if you can find a 192kbps mp3 since 128kbps is kinda eh, it's ok but if there's a higher ver use that

1. 00:03:905 (1) - remove nc theres no need to add one here since the beat doesnt change, also you're keeping things inconsistent doing that nc you got atm z
2. 00:19:960 (1,2) - you could make these paralel orz

1. 00:31:790 (4) - you could make this only a 1/2 slider and add a note on the white tick since you're missing sounds oo
2. 01:08:125 (2,4) - you could fix this blanket up : o

C00L wrote:

Right
Check! - Means it's been checked and nothing wrong has been found
Please ignore my note/slider placement on the timeline, i do that to show make my point more clearer
Red - Indicates that an unrankable issue has been found

[General]

1. change bg to .jpg, to save space
2. if you can find a 192kbps mp3 since 128kbps is kinda eh, it's ok but if there's a higher ver use that

ok, I'll change the mp3 later

[Easy]

1. 00:03:905 (1) - remove nc theres no need to add one here since the beat doesnt change, also you're keeping things inconsistent doing that nc you got atm z no. it's an idea with the hitsound in 00:03:060、00:09:186、00:22:495 so there should be a NC
2. 00:19:960 (1,2) - you could make these paralel orz it's parallel..

[Normal]

1. 00:31:790 (4) - you could make this only a 1/2 slider and add a note on the white tick since you're missing sounds oo
   no.. it's same as 00:34:536 and for me, 00:32:424 vocal is more important
2. 01:08:125 (2,4) - you could fix this blanket up : o ok

gl~

1. 00:21:650 (5,1) - there are two different rhythms, but you use the same pattern?
   
   SPOILER

   https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6397857
2. 01:03:267 (4) - finish is too loud at 1/2 beat, remove
3. 01:27:138 (4) - NC

1. 00:35:381 (4,5) - if you use 4 as 1/2 slider, 5 should be same.
   
   SPOILER

   https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6397873
2. 00:50:169 (2) - remove finish

1. 00:10:453 (2) - move it to make the flow better.
   
   SPOILER

   
2. 00:50:169 (3) - same as Normal, since there is no sound in the music
3. 01:16:575 (3) -
   
   SPOILER

   

1. 00:26:720 (2) - 00:33:480 (2) - add finish?
2. 00:43:620 (1) - sound is really small at here, volume 45%?

1. 00:04:750 (1) - Clickable sliderend to have variety? I don't like when same thing repeats over.
2. 00:12:355 (4,5,6) - This has sound in song. 00:12:777 (7,8,9) - This doesn't.
3. 00:54:605 (3,4,5,6) - It can be more spaced.
4. 01:27:561 - I would map the sound here.
5. 01:19:099 - A kind of slowing pattern instead of break would be better in this difficulty. This break shouldn't be longer than other diffs since it's harder. You can map the 'Yooo' at the end of the break if you want.

1. 00:21:861 (1,2) - 00:35:381 (1,2) - Maybe make it like these? 00:42:775 (5,6) - There is sound but no hit it is annoying :/
2. 00:46:155 (3,4) - Make sliderends clickable.
3. 00:49:958 (2,3,1) - I would make these jumps since it's kiai part. OR, Make 2-3 a slider because there is no sound on 3.
4. 00:59:041 (2,3,4) - Make these like this since its kiai -> 01:01:577 (3,4,5) -

1. 00:31:367 (3,4,5) - -> Like this?

Everything is ready, waiting for BN..

Naxess wrote:

From #modreqs
Just quickly checking some stuff

General

1. normal-hitnormal5 seems to have a 5 ms delay, as seen in audacity. Consider cutting it accordingly.
   
   I cut the hitsound for 2~3ms, it may be better now, if i cut 5ms, this ring sounds weired.
   
   
2. I'd be very careful of that spread between easy and normal. Normal has a lot higher slider velocity as well as spacing, and the rhythm is also fairly complicated for this skill level, so in those ways it's reminiscent of a Hard. This difficulty would fit better being called "Advanced", rather than "Normal". Consider changing this for the sake of proper indication of difficulty. It is harder than a Normal, so it'd only make sense if the name of the difficulty reflected that. Abhor seems to have mentioned this as well.
   hm.. acturally I'm not sure about this I'll wait a BN to check this then remap or do something else for this problem.
   
3. 128 kbps bitrate is quite low, 192 kbps would be more preferable. I'd suggest you take it off of the official video, since it's 720p.
   After looking through previous mods it appears you also mentioned this.
   yes, I forgot this haha, thank you for mention me again.
   
   
4. Tags, note that we can also take metadata from said video.
   
   1. 睦月周平 Shuhei Mutsuki (composer, arrangement, seen here)
   2. 大和守安定 Yamatonokami Yasusada 加州清光 Kashuu Kiyomitsu (characters of respective CVs, can be found here again)
   3. 第一話エンディング・テーマ first episode theme (first episode ending theme, also on the album cover)
   I think the "Shuhei Mutsuki" is not necessary to add into tags cuz no one will use this word to search this map. As another mapper mapped this song, she doesn't add this into tags, too.
   
   
5. Not entirely sure whether the artist field is correct at the moment. I'm pretty sure the CVs would be there as well, that's at least what the description of the official youtube video says. Also not sure about the '&' in between. There are other official sources as well though, for instance their homepage, however I can't check it very well. Mind providing your sources? To be entirely sure you should consider calling IamKwaN regarding this. Wouldn't want unnecessary interruptions during the ranking process.
   I had asked a QAT for this artist before I submitted, he said if the artist was too long just keep the CV... so yep I wrote the CV only I'm gonna to ask IamKwaN for this complicated metadata.
   
   
6. Change your background extension to .jpg instead of .png, as this will save file size. The format, which you are currently using, has an additional layer for transparency which is unnecessary. This suggestion seems to have been mentioned earlier as well.
   I'm typically to use the png as BG cuz the image is clear than jpg. well... I'll changed it.

Easy

1. 00:02:637 (1,1) - Refrain from stacking or overlapping objects in easy difficulties. This can be very confusing for newer players and generally objects should be visible from the moment they appear. To properly introduce new players to the game, gameplay elements, including regular hit objects, should not be obscured. Consider unstacking them.
   ^ 01:20:378 (1,2) - not stacked, but still overlapping.
   changed this to a slider
   
2. 00:11:510 - I'd say this beat is pretty strong, so having it clickable would be appropriate. Preferably a 1/1 slider to reflect the long vocal. Something like this would work, for instance.
   
   
3. 00:13:622 - Slidertick hitsounds are often discouraged. Making the same sound as regular auditory feedback might cause confusion. I'd suggest you to lower the volume to about half of what would normally be set here, 23 in this case, in order to differentiate between the two but still produce the same sound. Hearing a loud hitsound on a slidertick would seem quite odd in my opinion. This applies to all slidertick hitsounding.
   
   
4. 00:27:565 (2,3,1) - I'd be very careful of placing slider trains like these in easy difficulties. I'd have done it like this, to reduce rhythm density.
   
   
5. 00:38:550 - Regarding hitsounding, add clap and soft addition. Same goes for 00:41:930 - .
   k
   
6. 00:48:690 - This spinner recovery time is kind of questionable. At 180 bpm it is recommended to have a whole measure of recovery in easy difficulties, according to most BNs, which translates to about 3.16 beats for 142 bpm, yet this is only 2 beats. You may or may not have to remove 00:49:535 (1,2) - depending on the circumstances. Consider asking the BN who is modding your map about this to avoid problems later down the line.

I deleted some sliders and notes after spinner

I'd suggest you gather more mods before calling for BNs. 12 SP is enough for it to be iconed, but that does not mean it's ready to be.

Good luck!

Wishkey wrote:

Heyo!, initial offset seems a bit wrong beats come a bit too early, try 1388 and see how that sounds, the timing point here 00:09:834 (1) - can be deleted bc of it and just resnap the notes (seems like 4ms later) and you can also delete the timing points here 00:21:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I doubt this is the only thing in the song thats kinda offtimed since when you listen on 00:22:087 (3,7) - it just should be a tiny bit later for that strong drum so it just follows the same drum like the rest of the song. also can delete those things in the lower diffs (timing points are inconsistent atm across diffs aswell btw)

Hope that fixes it, gl!

Thank you for timing check it's better now!
00:21:876 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,1) is a problem for me before you check

1. Structrual Issue
   Overrall it's good.
2. Minor Picks
   01:03:283 - If I were you I'd choose the white tick to map the hit, you can go with it, but personally I just suggest making the hit right on the downbeat. Whether on drum or on vocal, the previous white tick is a better choice.
   
   

1. Structrual Issue
   I'm fine with the rhythm-wise stuff, but the patterns are not really fine for me. The main reason is that for 1/2 intervals, they are just fine, but for 1/1 intervals, you used 1, 1.2x, 1.4x, which may lead to confusion of players of this level. Since 1.0x is pretty like 3/4 distance for 1.4x, and you are actually using blue ticks in this diff. Suggesting to make adjust to unify the distance setting.

1. Structrual Issue
   Overall good.
   
   00:50:395 (1) - Strongly suggest making this slider normal or at least give it another combo. Prefer making it in normal velocity since it's just a Hard diff and it's pretty confusing without any notice to get this slowed down slider here. Another reason here is that you used a 1/6 + a jump here which is quite hard to tell.

1. Structrual Issue
   Clean and nice.
   
   Just make sure your timing points' hitsound setting is the same at 00:35:415 - and 00:36:030 - .
   
   00:29:169 - It's pretty easy to read as 1/2. Maybe it's not a good idea but if we make a 3/4 slider here, it will work.
   SPOILER

   
2. Minor Picks
   00:45:642 (2,5) - Since you used some other hitsounding system here it's like a little bit strange to use original whistles. Also since here is just on blue tick, I think it's good to leave it as blank.
   
   00:48:706 (1,2,3,4,1) - I love this part, both the music and your way to deal with it.

1. widerscreen support统一下哈

1. 00:02:655 (1,2,1) - 开头这里顺向flow+DS感觉有点没表现出感觉？NC拉开点距离或者改个flow像这样的？
2. 00:23:148 - 看后面的排列能理解这个NC的下法 但是这里这个flow这NC效果表现的就不明显了...
3. 01:01:804 (8,1) - 这里距离突然变近伴随这样的flow 有种刹车了的感觉 有点不太好0.0
4. 01:02:649 (2,3,4) - 这个flow也感觉有点平了 没表现出起伏嗯 可以配合前面那条改一下这里排列
5. 01:08:459 (4) - 感觉还是直接用note好吧 这样子的好像和vocal有点迷之违和
6. 01:12:368 (1) - ctrl+G接前接后都挺好的
7. 01:13:635 (4,5,1) - 4-5-6flow有点不圆滑？其实感觉这两个滑条可以都ctrl+G
8. 01:20:396 (1,2,3) - 和开头一样的NC配置？

1. 00:13:218 (1,2,3) - 这个包出来的flow有点奇怪的样子
2. 这个Hard好棒啊1111

1. 00:03:500 (1) - N的话这里大概不需要NC？
2. 01:27:156 - 不需要的绿线？

1. 00:43:635 (1) - nazi 略微没包好