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it may just be too bad for you
Lully
Nya!!
_Meep_
Meep!
_Meep_
mods cuz he wanted me to,he forced me onto a bed and.. yea you can guess what happened.
nyaaaaaaaaaaaaa
00:02:169 (8) - NC
00:03:026 (1) - Remove NC
00:03:883 (7) - NC
00:05:062 (4,5) - I can understand from 4 to 5, but why then is the jump to 00:05:597 (1) - so far?
00:13:740 (1,2,3,4) - 2hard4a5*map
00:17:383 (5,6,7) - Why are the triples placed in the middle of slider 00:17:062 (4) - ?
00:18:026 (8,1) - No distance?
00:19:312 - 00:21:026 - EMPTY??
00:22:526 (7,8,1) - Again,why in the middle of the slider 00:22:205 (6) -
00:25:955 (5,6,1,2,3,4) - Form is ugly,make a appropriate/good circle with a slider first then convert it to notes plez
00:27:455 (1,2,3,4) - yus, again , 3harrd5a5*map
00:24:240 (7,8,1) - 2HARD4A5*MAP
00:27:883 (5) - NC when SV change pls
00:28:740 (6) - Remove NC
00:29:597 (8) - NC
00:31:097 (1,2) - I dont hear anything that has to do with a triple
00:34:955 - Dont give players time to rest lol
00:41:597 (3) - Fix length
00:44:169 (5,6,7,8) - No distance?
00:45:883 (1,2) - Overlap is ugly
00:45:026 (8) - NC
00:45:883 (1) - Remove NC
00:46:740 (5) - NC
00:54:883 (1,2) - I know this is a good idea, but this idea seriously is falling out of context,this is barely possible lol

EDIT: 1. Notes are all over the place,more like even if you do copy paste it many times,the distance between each note isn't constant,which makes it very messy.
2. Making impossible but fun jumps = makes it harder to rank
Lully
teteteteteteteteeeeee
free mods from nyu.
bless (n)yu.

remember that im just beeing honest.

easy
In general.. could be a beginner diff tbh.
Flows weird. Stacks meh.
Tbh, you seem very unexperienced with easy diffs.

00:00:455 (1,2) - why did u decided to do something like this? try it like this http://puu.sh/rBGZA.jpg
00:03:883 (3,4) - also try to rip overlaps. they look bad and are confusing for beginner players. Also try something like this http://puu.sh/rBH1B.jpg
In easy diffs DS (Distance Snap) should be constant. - Try to fix dem DS Errors in the whole map. Try it with 0,5x distance spacing for circles/sliders with a wide gap ( http://puu.sh/rBH6a.jpg ) and 1x for circles/sliders with a 1 white tick gap ( http://puu.sh/rBH7X.jpg )
00:09:026 (4) - Add NC. In easys you should have an NC at every big white tick.
00:14:169 (1) - this slider should have a symmetric shape http://puu.sh/rBHbu.jpg
00:17:597 (5) - weird flow.. try something like this to make the flow better and rip the overlap http://puu.sh/rBHdh.jpg
00:19:312 (6) - NC this
00:27:883 - you should really remap the whole kiai. The kiai time is there to empathize the songs main flow and also kiai sections should really be a bit harder. but not that much easier..

<:

hyper seems cool


meep's light insane
whoa, this diff seems to have.. a really big lack of a nice followable flow.
what are u even following

00:04:740 (3,4,5) - why did u made this here a completly different flow? this makes no sense tbh. change 00:01:312 (3,4,5,3,4,5) - to the same flow. please. the other ones are like.. 1 of the baddest things to do ever. xd
00:02:169 (1,3) - stack
00:05:062 (4,5) - fix blanket
00:11:597 (1,2,3) - same thing for them and 00:08:383 (1,2,3,4,5,6,1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - make them the same flow as 00:10:740 (7,8,1,2,3) - the other ones are tbh, cancer to play.
00:12:455 - strong beat, place circle.
00:13:740 - this section here's cool. nice flow, nice patterns blabla.
00:15:347 (4) - would try here something like this since this is a 3/4 jump not a 1/2 jump as the others http://puu.sh/rBHzA.jpg
00:17:490 (2,3) - smth like this looks much better http://puu.sh/rBHwa.jpg
00:18:026 (4) - weird flow, place to
00:18:776 (6) - already mentioned 3/4 jump, not 1/2
00:21:026 - bad flow begins, i already mentioned how 2 fix.
00:27:883 - the world of flow changes begins. sigh...
00:30:455 (4,5,6,7) - what is this suffer to play? wtf. pls. change the flow completly or do something like this http://puu.sh/rBHET.jpg
00:32:383 (4,5,6) - ^
00:35:169 (2) - why is this a 1/1 slider? explain it or re:do the section.
00:43:312 - change the flow ~ could be slider thingys.
00:50:169 (4) - doesnt even fits the song
00:51:883 (1,2,3,4) - ^ wtf

"nyaa!!" diff is overdone af.
LeQuack
Here's the mod you requested :)

Easy

  • Only a general mod for now because it is un-moddable in its current state
  1. Easy diffs must have all distances be the same, turn on distance snap and fix the errors found in aimod
    http://puu.sh/rBLuz/fc62edc3fb.png
  2. Easy diffs also can't have overlaps (unless the notes are really far apart and distance snap doesn't work) move this to comply with distance
  3. Easy diff can't use the blue ticks, try and fin a simpler rhythm to follow that only uses red and white ticks (change to 1/2 beat snap divisor to ensure notes don't occur on blue ticks)
  4. Unless it is really called for (which it isn't in this case) don't change the velocity of sliders in easy diffs
  5. NC usually occurs on every big white tick (the one that happens every four white ticks) Re-do your NC's to follow this (although i would do it every second big white tick in the kiai time)
  6. 00:45:883 (6) - Sliders should end on beats that are weaker than the slider start but in this case the end of this slider is very strong and should be clickable here is a suggestion

    I may come back to mod this once problems are fixed

nyu's Normal

  • In its current state this is a hard diff
  1. Tag conflicts with other diffs
  2. cs should not be 4, i would recommend 3-3.5 for a normal diff
  3. 00:01:312 (2) - this should be the same as 00:03:026 (2,2) - (or they can be the same as this slider if this becomes a hard diff)
  4. 00:01:955 (3) - Wouldn't recommend this note at a normal diff (alright for hard tho)
  5. 00:08:169 (3,4,5) - not suitable for a normal diff (blue ticks should not see use in normal)
  6. 00:09:026 - This should not be a slider end but rather sonething clickable (start of a slider or a note) it should also be NC here
  7. 00:10:740 - ^
  8. 00:12:455 - ^
  9. 00:22:740 - ^ (you get the idea, i think you should be able to figure the other ones out)
  10. 00:25:526 (3,4) - this is more normal suitable but because i think this should be a hard you should copy the previous patterns and put them here
  11. 00:37:312 (1) - Thisn slider should end on the red tick because of the sound it is following as well as the fact that the white tick it finishes on should be clickable
    If you want this to still be a normal diff then you will need to re-map and i can mod again if that occurs

Hyper
  1. 00:03:883 (6) - NC
  2. 00:09:026 (7) - Don't like the shape of this currently (also NC)
  3. 00:13:740 (1,2,3,4,5) - Spaced streams shouldn't exist at this difficulty
  4. 00:14:169 (5) - NC
  5. 00:21:026 (5) - ^
  6. 00:26:062 (1) - Start at 00:26:169 -
  7. 00:28:740 (3,4,5,6) - Consider NC"ing all of these to indicate to the player that musically it is a triplet
  8. 00:31:740 (6) - why the random whistle?
  9. 00:39:883 (5) - Add one more repeat
  10. 00:40:740 (6) - Remove one repeat and start at 00:40:740 -
  11. 00:41:597 - From here onwards you have clearly copy pasted what you just had in the kiai time and while it is good to repeat the notes and sliders used musically, visually they need to be different so i think you need to re-map from here until the end of the kiai

Meep's Light Insane
  1. 00:03:026 (3) - Place this to be under the start of 00:02:169 (1) -
  2. 00:07:312 (1,2,3,4,5,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - The jumps in this section are huge both for the diff and when compared to 00:21:026 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7) - so lower them to be the same and more suitable for this diff
  3. 00:14:169 (1) - Have this be the same distance as the rest of the stream
  4. 00:19:312 (8) - All other places with 1/4 gaps have had the notes touching so i would do the same here as currently it looks like this should be hit at 00:19:419 -
  5. 00:24:883 (8) - Either Overlap this with the end of the (7) slider or put it somewhere where it doesn't touch it at all
  6. 00:27:455 (7,8) - Maybe have these as notes to represent that the sound is different
  7. 00:30:669 (5,6,7) - Move notes like this so it looks nicer and (7) is touching the (1) slider to represent the distance in the music
  8. 00:32:383 (4,5) - with the pattern currently it looks like they are touching (i know technically they are not) and that the (5) falls on the white tick move it so it does not look so deceiving
  9. 00:35:169 (2) - move to the left so end is properly overlapping start of (1) slider (should lock into place when you hit it)
  10. 00:42:455 (5) - Change shape so it doesn't touch the (4) to be consistent with the fact that the (4) doesn't touch the (3)
  11. 00:47:812 (2) - Distance is a tiny bit off but is noticeable visually so should be corrected (move to left to have more consistent spacing)
  12. 00:51:883 (1,2,3,4) - This isn't the same as the prevoius part and these sliders don't follow music, change to better follow this section
  13. 00:54:990 (8) - Same deal with having this note touch so people understand when they need to hit it

Nya!!
  1. 00:02:597 (2,3) - Have these touch like 00:00:883 (4,5) - how they are spaced a bit further apart
  2. 00:05:597 (1) - Have this overlap with the end of 00:04:312 (2) -
  3. 00:13:740 (1,2,3,4) - The spacing of this is ridiculous, reducing spacing by a considerable amount plz
  4. 00:15:669 (9,1) - Have these noite be touching (I suggest putting the (1) higher)
  5. 00:17:383 (5,6,7) - Move these right so the player can naturally continue on after finishing the (4) slider
  6. 00:18:026 (8,1) - Same suggestion as 00:15:669 (9,1)
  7. 00:24:240 (7,8) - Reduce spacing
  8. 00:27:026 (7,8,9,10,1) - If you want to add difficulty and SR in a more suitable way, then this stream could be spaced more than the previous one (just a suggestion not something you have to do)
  9. 00:27:455 (1,3) - Make these sliders instead of having notes so you map represents that this section is different from the previous streams (as in is following a different sound) this also makes it so there aren't ridiculous jumps
  10. 00:37:955 (8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6) - move so (8) overlaps with 00:37:312 (5) -
  11. 00:41:597 (3) - NC
  12. 00:53:597 (1,2,3,4,5,6) - No need for 1/8 snapping just make the sliders end on the respective blue ticks
  13. 00:46:740 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - Unlike your other diff, you reversed this one however it is still the same pattern, i would suggest changing it but you might get away with it here
  14. 00:54:883 (1,2) - Spacing i think is too big but may be passable as it is only two notes

The map is still in its early stages and you will need to get alot of mods before it is in a rankable state, PM me if you don't understand anything i put in here and call me back when you have got more mods and the map has changed a bunch and i may do a re-mod

Good Luck :D
Lully

LeQuack wrote:

nyu's Normal

  • In its current state this is a hard diff What are you talking about? This is a normal.. Normal diff. The sr fits and its clearly mapped like a normal, so i dont know what you mean.
  1. Tag conflicts with other diffs not my bad, Lukas fix this pls ~
  2. cs should not be 4, i would recommend 3-3.5 for a normal diff its okay to chose this cs. however, for normal diffs its okay to even take cs5
  3. 00:01:312 (2) - this should be the same as 00:03:026 (2,2) - Fixed, i cant remember making them like this tho..
  4. 00:01:955 (3) - Wouldn't recommend this note at a normal diff (alright for hard tho) fits for a normal.
  5. 00:08:169 (3,4,5) - not suitable for a normal diff (blue ticks should not see use in normal) fits for a normal.
  6. 00:09:026 - This should not be a slider end but rather sonething clickable (start of a slider or a note) it should also be NC here As you can see, im doing this more often. So its fine how i mapped it.
  7. 00:10:740 - ^
  8. 00:12:455 - ^
  9. 00:22:740 - ^ (you get the idea, i think you should be able to figure the other ones out)
  10. 00:25:526 (3,4) - this is more normal suitable but because i think this should be a hard you should copy the previous patterns and put them here why should i copy it? its a completly different beat.
  11. 00:37:312 (1) - Thisn slider should end on the red tick because of the sound it is following as well as the fact that the white tick it finishes on should be clickable
    If you want this to still be a normal diff then you will need to re-map and i can mod again if that occurs Sigh.. its a completly normal mapped Normal diff. Tbh, you are talking just completly nonsense. xd
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Cheesecake
[General]

  1. Um you basically don't have a hard diff since Hyper is mapped closer to an Insane, best to get another diff in to close the gap (also I graphed your spread http://cdn.shigetora.pw/i/qjiostr.png look at that!)
  2. Why does nyu's Normal have a different bg?
  3. Check AiMod for those tag conflicts!
[Easy]

  1. Ok so you've used different distance snaps throughout which if you take a read here that's like not allowed so yeah use one spacing pls
  2. 00:15:347 (2,4) - I wouldn't recommend making blue ticks clickable in an Easy, can really throw off baby players. Ending sliders on blue ticks is ok at this BPM I guess
  3. 00:39:883 (2,3) - Having a 1/2 gap between objects on Easy is a nono
  4. 00:55:312 (1) - Might as well end it on the downbeat, good place to end the map rhythmically
[nyu's Normal]

  1. 00:01:312 (2) - Why does this end on a blue tick while 00:02:169 (1,1) - land on white ticks?
  2. 00:28:740 (3,1) - Blanket between the start of (1) and the border of (3) can be improved, if you're gonna do blanket structure like this it better be perfect!
  3. 00:30:776 (3,1) - This tiny overlap isn't pretty, make it more like 00:19:312 (1,1) - (00:32:169 (3,1) - 00:45:883 (3,1) - too)
  4. 00:55:419 (1) - Like in Easy make it end on the downbeat
[Hyper]

  1. 00:13:740 (1,2,3,4,5) - ok what the fuck
  2. 00:28:740 (3,4,5,6) - do you hate people or something this is gonna confuse people so bad
  3. 00:35:169 (1,2,3,4) - There's no 1/4 sound here!
  4. 00:39:240 (2,4) - Ctrl+G these to make them less stupid to play
  5. 00:41:597 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - did you actually copy&paste all of this LOL dont do that
[Meep's Light Insane]

  1. 00:01:955 (5) - Placing this on the slider end is a little funky, cos it creates a linear path on 00:01:633 (4,5,1) - which doesn't feel good when you go backwards on that path with the slider, stacking (5) on the head of (2) works better, the large angle doesn't really matter since there's ample time between each object
  2. 00:03:026 (3) - stack this tho
  3. 00:12:455 - Are you missing a circle here?
  4. 00:24:455 (7,8) - This looks super messy think of something different, maybe stack the tail of (8) underneath the tail of (7) although you'd have to shuffle objects around a bit to make it fit
  5. 00:27:026 (5,6) - These would be more appropriate as circles, since the 1/4 sound is the same beat four times it makes sense to make each one of them have the same importance, circles do that! The next two sliders are appropriate for obvious reasons
  6. 00:27:883 (1) - It's so much prettier like this
  7. 00:30:990 (6,7) - :thinking:
  8. 00:34:740 (1,2) - jesus christ these stacks
  9. 00:55:312 - Add a circle here to make the beat clickable, since spinners are not clickable objects!
tatemae
[nyu's Normal]
00:03:883 (1,2) - blanket is better
00:22:526 (5) - try revers
00:14:169 (1,2) - ugly imo

nice diff, but http://puu.sh/rD2DR/53fa3c3606.png too monotonously

[Meep's Insane]
00:35:597 (3,4,5,1) - The pattern desigining is a bit messy here
00:36:455 (1,2,3,4) - weird undermapping

[Hard]
00:14:597 (3) - have this clickable pls
00:15:883 (1) - ^
Lully

SherryCherry wrote:

[nyu's Normal]
00:03:883 (1,2) - blanket is better now blanket
00:22:526 (5) - try revers nah doesnt fit tbh
00:14:169 (1,2) - ugly imo same, fixed.

nice diff, but http://puu.sh/rD2DR/53fa3c3606.png too monotonously i think thats fine for normal diffs with such a lengh

dont kd, will mod other diffs tomorrow

Cheesecake wrote:

[General]
  1. Why does nyu's Normal have a different bg? Because nyu doesnt likes the normal bg. <:

[nyu's Normal]

  1. 00:01:312 (2) - Why does this end on a blue tick while 00:02:169 (1,1) - land on white ticks? what? they are all on a white tick.
  2. 00:28:740 (3,1) - Blanket between the start of (1) and the border of (3) can be improved, if you're gonna do blanket structure like this it better be perfect! fix
  3. 00:30:776 (3,1) - This tiny overlap isn't pretty, make it more like 00:19:312 (1,1) - (00:32:169 (3,1) - 00:45:883 (3,1) - too) fixed
  4. 00:55:419 (1) - Like in Easy make it end on the downbeat fixed
thank u both <3

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Topic Starter
Seolv
:)

Cheesecake wrote:

[General]

  1. Um you basically don't have a hard diff since Hyper is mapped closer to an Insane, best to get another diff in to close the gap (also I graphed your spread http://cdn.shigetora.pw/i/qjiostr.png look at that!) Will fix that in future
  2. Check AiMod for those tag conflicts!
fixed

[Easy]

  1. Ok so you've used different distance snaps throughout which if you take a read here that's like not allowed so yeah use one spacing pls
  2. 00:15:347 (2,4) - I wouldn't recommend making blue ticks clickable in an Easy, can really throw off baby players. Ending sliders on blue ticks is ok at this BPM I guess fixed
  3. 00:39:883 (2,3) - Having a 1/2 gap between objects on Easy is a nono Not fixing.
  4. 00:55:312 (1) - Might as well end it on the downbeat, good place to end the map rhythmically
mkay.


[Hyper]

  1. 00:13:740 (1,2,3,4,5) - ok what the fuck Oops xD
  2. 00:28:740 (3,4,5,6) - do you hate people or something this is gonna confuse people so bad agreed.fixed.
  3. 00:35:169 (1,2,3,4) - There's no 1/4 sound here! fix
  4. 00:39:240 (2,4) - Ctrl+G these to make them less stupid to play fix
  5. 00:41:597 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9,1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,1,2,3,4,5,6) - did you actually copy&paste all of this LOL dont do that
fix
Thx 4 mod ;3
_Meep_
I remapped mine cuz the previous one was cancer,so ye
Topic Starter
Seolv
Whoever finds this can leave a mod because it's finished.
Just wanted to point it out c;
Thx modders :D
Setomi
Hi, saw this map in #modreq and I've wanted to get into standard modding for a while now so here we go!

[Easy]
00:15:455 (2) - How come this is not on a blue tick like 00:17:062 (2)? There's no different change in sound between these two patterns
00:24:455 (4) - Why is this on a blue tick? Might just be a miss but should be changed one 1/4 back
00:53:597 (3) - Maybe add some slight distance to this because of the heavy finish soun
00:54:883 (4,5) - Give these two slightly more action, even tho it's an easy diff this ending feels a bit tame

[nyu's Normal]
00:01:312 (2) - Why is this ending on a blue tick but not 00:03:026 (2) - & 00:04:740 (2)?
Maybe make them all equal because there's no special sound change here

The red tick on 00:22:955 is empty but filled at 00:24:669, how come? SherryCherry said you clould try reverse and that's not a bat idea. I think you could consider that or adding a circle to replicate the upcoming pattern

00:25:740 (4) - This is starting on a passive white tick, consider changing to an active sound on a blue tick. Currently it doesn't feel natural to play it on a 1/2 pattern, a 1/4 pattern would feel more natural like you've done before

[Hard]

Since you added a circle here 00:03:776 (4) - you could spice this 00:04:740 (3) - up a bit timeline to give the section a gradual rise in difficulty

From 00:14:169 to 00:19:312 it feels a bit too undermapped considering how you mapped previously and ahead.

00:24:455 (1,2) - I know you're trying to map the gradual rise in fx but this is a bit boring

00:50:169 (1,2,3,4) - This part follows no general rythm. First we have 1/1 spacing focused on the drums. Then this 00:50:812 (3) - making voice active and drums passive. Then this 00:51:240 (4) - active on an empty beat, missing the drum and ending on a slider end (passive) on a voice beat.
00:51:240 (4) - This feels a bit too intense considering how you've mapped before and after. A good way to make it a less intense but still have it intense is to simply: switch out the first three 1/4's with two 1/2 sliders timeline, then rearrange the final 1/4 slider and circles too fit appropriatly to the new sliders (reduce spacing on circles and/or remove some).
00:54:455 (2,3,4) - Considering how you've previously mapped 1/4's this feels very tame as a finisher, consider spicying it up a bit.


[Meep's Insane]

00:43:526 (2,3,4,5) - Due to you using circles here I think you could change the spacing a bit between them to make it a bit more intressting
00:48:240 (5,6) - Could change this into a 1/4 slider for a bit more natural movement

Looks and feels polished in general

Hope this was usefull & gl!
Lully
I will update my diff if Lukas already does...
Setomi

nyu - wrote:

I will update my diff if Lukas already does...
Why wouldn't u update?
zhuxiaoyan
this song is very annoying

meep insane
why do you make this 00:07:312 (1,2) - larger spacing than 00:07:740 (2,3) - , they are pretty much the same sounds
00:13:740 (7) - i would recommend ncing for the slider velocity change
why do you make 00:14:169 (1,2) - larger spacing than 00:14:597 (2,3) - , they are pretty much the same sounds.
00:16:740 (3,4,1) - either use the claps throughout the map or remove this one.
00:21:026 (1,2) - this blanket is terrifying
00:31:955 (4,5) - stack these better under 00:31:097 (5) -
00:32:812 (7) - move the end node a little bit to blanket 00:32:491 (6) - better
00:32:491 (6,1) - omg just do this
00:35:169 (2,3) - this spacing makes no sense, its a stronger/louder/higher pitched beat than 00:35:169 (2) - yet its spaced out closer than 00:34:740 (1,2) -
00:36:347 - there's not really a significant beat here, no reason to map it with 00:36:240 (5) -
00:36:883 - 00:37:955 - you literally ignored so many mappable sounds its ridiculous
00:42:026 (2,3) - this spacing makes no sense, its a stronger/louder/higher pitched beat than 00:42:026 (2) - yet its spaced out closer than 00:41:597 (1,2) -
00:48:347 (6,1) - no reason to decrease the spacing
00:55:312 (1) - ugh space this out farther from 00:54:990 (8) - because 00:55:312 (1) - is a loud ass sound and thats how emphasis works

hard
its basically a light insane, there are 1.15x ds streams, yeah no

nyu normal
im not modding because i literally saw 3 1/4 sliders right next to eachother. please, just make a dedicated diff. this song is really hard to map i know, but either map the 1/4 or just simplify it.

easy
please oh please just stick to 1.0 spacing in an easy. im begging you. also, the sv is too damn fast, that needs to change.
00:02:169 (1) - umm did you mean to make it a 2/1 slider?

nothing much rhythmically wrong except the easy looks totally freaking unorganized, and the spacing can easily be confused (and i mean really easily) as 1/2 or 1/4.
-Zel
IRC mod best mod
22:55 [ L u k a s ]: or CtB
22:55 [ L u k a s ]: should I ask Ascendance?
22:55 WindZel: he already did a map on this exact song
22:56 [ L u k a s ]: yeah
22:56 [ L u k a s ]: that's why lmao
22:56 [ L u k a s ]: next diff plz
22:56 WindZel: if he agrees np but I don't think he wants to do it again
22:56 [ L u k a s ]: she*
22:56 [ L u k a s ]: ;)
22:57 WindZel: I wasn't aware
22:57 [ L u k a s ]: :D
22:57 [ L u k a s ]: okay Hard diff
22:58 WindZel: 00:09:883 (3) - maybe tou should ctrl + h this
22:58 [ L u k a s ]: oh yeah ^^
22:58 [ L u k a s ]: okay
22:58 [ L u k a s ]: fixed
22:59 WindZel: 00:13:740 (5,6,7,8) - try to find a way to make this straight
22:59 [ L u k a s ]: meh
22:59 [ L u k a s ]: will keep that
22:59 [ L u k a s ]: :3
22:59 WindZel: up to you
23:00 [ L u k a s ]: Imma remap the Easy diff and try to map a Normal myself without deleting nyu's diff
23:00 WindZel: 00:15:347 (3) - maybe make a double here to not start the slider on a blue tick
23:00 WindZel: sure
23:00 [ L u k a s ]: And I may add more diffs so that BNs see that I tried as hard as I possibly can
23:01 WindZel: or just extend it like this http://puu.sh/rK6eL/78de277dc4.jpg
23:02 [ L u k a s ]: fixed
23:02 WindZel: blue ticks are awkward to play
23:03 WindZel: 00:35:383 (3,4,5) - too spaced
23:03 [ L u k a s ]: except when they are in a stream
23:03 [ L u k a s ]: :3
23:03 WindZel: well true
23:03 [ L u k a s ]: my DS shows that it's completely fine
23:03 WindZel: 00:37:097 (3,4,5) - same with these
23:03 WindZel: well it's fine but not so fine to play
23:04 WindZel: objectively yes, subjectively no
23:04 WindZel: 00:40:740 (5,6,7,8,9) - please don't do this stream like this
23:05 [ L u k a s ]: fixed even before you said it
23:05 [ L u k a s ]: xD
23:05 [ L u k a s ]: I just didnt update ;w;
23:06 WindZel: 00:55:740 (1) - is this necessary, if you're going to keep it make it at least start on the blue tick before 00:55:312 (5) -
23:07 [ L u k a s ]: wait what
23:07 [ L u k a s ]: how
23:07 [ L u k a s ]: I dont get what you are talking about
23:07 [ L u k a s ]: Keeped as it is
23:07 WindZel: like the spinner
23:07 WindZel: do you even need it there
23:07 [ L u k a s ]: I do
23:08 [ L u k a s ]: It must have at least one spinner
23:08 [ L u k a s ]: That says in the rules
23:08 [ L u k a s ]: RULES
23:08 [ L u k a s ]: Not guidelines
23:08 WindZel: if you're going to keep it at least start it 1 tick after the last circle
23:08 [ L u k a s ]: okay
23:09 WindZel: I don't there's a rule about at least 1 spinner though
23:10 WindZel: I'll move on to the final diff
23:11 [ L u k a s ]: okay
23:11 [ L u k a s ]: you can start now thx
23:11 WindZel: this is confusing as it is not a stream but a series of singletaps
23:11 WindZel: 00:12:455 (1,2,3,4,5,6) -
23:12 WindZel: but they still have the same spacing as 00:11:597 (3,4) - for example
23:12 [ L u k a s ]: okay
23:12 WindZel: this is more clear
23:12 WindZel: 00:19:312 (1,2,3,4) -
23:12 [ L u k a s ]: because they are all short sliders that together form a little slider stream
23:12 [ L u k a s ]: okay
23:13 WindZel: I kinda get that but you don't treat it like a stream you treat it as singletaps
23:14 [ L u k a s ]: okay
23:14 [ L u k a s ]: moving on
23:14 WindZel: 00:26:169 (1,2,3,1,2,3,1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - I guess this is ok as it is the final diff, but such a sudden jump in difficulty
23:15 [ L u k a s ]: meh
23:15 [ L u k a s ]: keeping that
23:15 WindZel: you can
23:16 WindZel: it's just i'd expect rest of the map to be as challenging as that
23:17 WindZel: 00:32:169 (5) - doesn't follow the flow if you turn it 90 degrees that the end lands on 00:31:955 (4) - it would make more sense
23:17 [ L u k a s ]: okay
23:17 [ L u k a s ]: I would just keep whole diff as it is, I like it tbh
23:17 [ L u k a s ]: thanks :3
23:17 WindZel: 00:37:633 (3) - this is horrible though
23:18 WindZel: you can't put a circle on a blue tick without any support
23:18 [ L u k a s ]: I-I didn't notice that Imma fix it
23:18 [ L u k a s ]: okay thanks\
23:19 WindZel: my suggestion is http://puu.sh/rK7jP/27d7bd8988.jpg
23:20 WindZel: 00:47:919 (4) - why this on a blue tick too
23:20 WindZel: it doesn't make rhythmically sense
23:20 [ L u k a s ]: okay thanks
23:20 [ L u k a s ]: okie
23:21 WindZel: 00:54:669 (6) -
23:21 WindZel: I don't get this
23:21 WindZel: there is no reason to have this here
23:22 WindZel: do it like http://puu.sh/rK7vI/6777ea8003.jpg
Dump 2 OP
Lully
thanks
-Zel
Oops double post
_Meep_

Setomi wrote:

[Meep's Insane]

00:43:526 (2,3,4,5) - Due to you using circles here I think you could change the spacing a bit between them to make it a bit more intressting Fixed
00:48:240 (5,6) - Could change this into a 1/4 slider for a bit more natural movement Can't,the 1/4 slider would overlap the next slider too much.

Looks and feels polished in general
Thanks for modding~!
Hope this was usefull & gl!
-Kyu
M4M~
what is this song lol

Ultra Beginner
check this


00:17:597 (1) - delete NC?
00:24:455 (3) - how about delete this note and change it into a slider? it's basically the same thing you did with 00:38:169 (1) -
00:46:740 (4) - lengthen this slider until 00:48:455 - it's like what you did on 00:33:026 (5) -
00:49:312 (1) - NC

Collab Normal
try to map it until it reaches every edge of the screen,feels uncomfortable playing at the same spot all over

00:19:312 (1) - lengthen this slider until the red tick maybe?
00:27:669 - add a note here
00:38:169 (1) - somehow make this slider as the same as this one 00:39:455 (5) -
00:51:026 (3) - nudge this down a bit

Meep's Insane
00:13:740 (7) - NC for aesthetic?
00:37:097 - i think you missed a note here
00:40:740 (1) - delete NC and NC 00:41:169 (2) - here?
00:41:169 (2) - just a suggestion,make the slider like this
Lully
Ending the slider on the white tick is fine there. There is no need to end it on the red tick just because of that small vocal thingy.
Also, the other slider u mentioned in my part has pretty much the same concept.
So.. no change in my part.
<:
Topic Starter
Seolv

ExKyu wrote:

M4M~
what is this song lol

Ultra Beginner
check this
fixed.

00:17:597 (1) - delete NC? Why? NC should be right there.
00:24:455 (3) - how about delete this note and change it into a slider? it's basically the same thing you did with 00:38:169 (1) - nope, need place for slider.
00:46:740 (4) - lengthen this slider until 00:48:455 - it's like what you did on 00:33:026 (5) - bad idea since in that part every slider is following the same beat so it would be unusual to extend that slider.
00:49:312 (1) - NC No reason for NC.

Collab Normal
try to map it until it reaches every edge of the screen,feels uncomfortable playing at the same spot all over

00:19:312 (1) - lengthen this slider until the red tick maybe?
00:27:669 - add a note here
00:38:169 (1) - somehow make this slider as the same as this one 00:39:455 (5) -
00:51:026 (3) - nudge this down a bit nothing changed c:
VicoTeen
Hello there :)

General review : Everything seems good (NC, timing, spacing), but those :

Ultra Beginner :

00:15:883 (2,1,2) - the end of the first slider should be aligned with the start of the second one vertically, to make a right-angle. And the circle should be aligned too then
00:17:597 (1) - Why NC ?
00:41:597 (1,2) - try to reposition the first slider to make the end of this one and the start of the second aligned to make a straight line, like this (that's not a big deal but well): http://image.noelshack.com/fichiers/201 ... ginner.png
00:43:312 (2,3) - put the second slider to make a right-angle with the first one
00:46:740 (4,5) - same with the circle
00:51:026 (7) - just to say it's welle aligned with other ones so this one is good. But if you foloow my "right-angle" instruction maybe it would be better to make an other right-angle. Right-angle fantasy !
00:53:597 (9,1) - same (right-angle)

Collab Normal :

00:49:312 (3) - Weird construction of slider. It feels like you wanted to keep the flow right ? But why with a curve ? In my opinion you should copy this slider instead : 00:42:455 (3)

Meep's insane :

00:32:491 (6,7,1) - The last slider is not exactly parallel with the first one. (or should be)

LeQuack's Nya~ :

Swag map.
00:18:455 (3) - NC
00:20:919 - I would have put a circle there (sounds like it)
LeQuack

VicoTeen wrote:

Hello there :)
LeQuack's Nya~ :

Swag map. Thanks :D
00:18:455 (3) - NC Fixed
00:20:919 - I would have put a circle there (sounds like it) Following the bed squeak sound here so there is no reason to add this note in
Thanks for the mod

Mod and Self-Update (Now with 100% more hitsounds)
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