DJ TOTTO feat.3L - Youkakushi -Ayakashi Kakushi- · forum

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

jonathanlfj 2016-10-03T01:59:43+00:00

This beatmap was submitted using in-game submission on December 31, 2016 at 8:55:39 AM

Artist: DJ TOTTO feat.3L
Title: Youkakushi -Ayakashi Kakushi-
Source: 東方妖々夢〜 Perfect Cherry Blossom.
Tags: Raose Trust 東方Project Touhou Necrofantasia ネクロファンタジア beatmania IIDX Konami BEMANI×東方Project Ultimate MasterPieces 八雲紫 Yukari Yakumo ZUN 安保さゆり Sayuri Anpo Reitaisai 12 博麗神社例大祭12
BPM: 169.95
Filesize: 4125kb
Play Time: 02:01
Difficulties Available:

Easy (1.57 stars, 149 notes)
Extra Stage (5.39 stars, 628 notes)
Normal (2.23 stars, 262 notes)
Raose's Hard (3.29 stars, 360 notes)
Trust's Lunatic (4.56 stars, 502 notes)

Download: DJ TOTTO feat.3L - Youkakushi -Ayakashi Kakushi-
Information: Scores/Beatmap Listing
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cs5

2014-02-18 01:39 11t: you should try some 3L maps with NC
2014-02-18 01:39 11t: her NC voice sustains like no other

first to FC Extra Stage with NC gets 1 year supporter from me

Last edited by jonathanlfj 2016-12-31T13:55:57+00:00, edited 13 times in total.

X Light

456 posts

Joined August 2012

X Light 2016-10-03T02:06:59+00:00

wow first

kanor

925 posts

Joined August 2013

kanor 2016-10-05T08:30:58+00:00

wow second

Adol Christin

875 posts

Joined October 2012

Adol Christin 2016-10-19T13:34:53+00:00

jonathanlfj wrote:
2014-02-18 01:39 11t: you should try some 3L maps with NC
2014-02-18 01:39 11t: her NC voice sustains like no other

first to FC with NC gets 1 year supporter from me

Rest in peace... #60000+ player can't accept this challenge....... attempt to pass it first.....

Lily Bread

1,228 posts

Joined December 2014

Lily Bread 2016-10-26T14:42:57+00:00

咦为什么是6/4..副歌听起来像是3/4的样子

Mirash

Beatmap Nominator

705 posts

Joined June 2013

Mirash 2016-12-12T10:38:34+00:00

Hello!

Extra Stage
00:04:681 (1,2) - o look there is a blanket that can be improved
00:07:152 (1,1) - maybe it could be placed like 00:06:976 (2,2) -
00:16:332 (3) - you didn't NC this, but nced 00:20:568 (1) - i see, its starting new section, but i'd make them same
01:32:589 (1) - ^
01:58:008 (1) - ^
00:47:576 (2,3) - slightly off
00:54:460 (5,6) - 5 can blanket better with the end of 6
01:08:582 (3,1) - this can stack to 01:07:876 (2) - better
01:14:407 (6) - this is not on perfect line with 01:13:701 (2,3,5) -
01:38:238 (3,5,6) - same slightly off
It is fun to play!

Trust's Insane
00:10:683 (8) - make spacing like here 00:10:241 (5,6) -
00:21:627 (1,2) - 00:31:159 (4,5) - 00:36:455 (1,2) - 00:39:809 (6,7) - id make such distances all same
00:46:340 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - look like circles got grid snapped. spacing between them aren't same and stream looks strange because of it
00:50:400 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^actually same goes for all streams, turn off grid snap and redo them for neat look
00:55:166 (7,2) - you can stack them better
01:02:227 (2,3) - that is awkward placement in my opinion, and you done it once, so i suggest something like this http://i.imgur.com/2DOPbGK.png
01:32:766 (1,1,1) - if with NCs you are highlighting increasing sounds then NC everything - 01:33:295 (2,3)
01:36:826 (4,6) - blanket
01:41:592 (9,10,11) - these sliders representing different sound from 01:41:239 (7,8) i'd Ctr+G them so it looks like http://i.imgur.com/wUBKdyn.jpg
And the ending feels like it should be mapped

Raose's Hard
00:31:159 (4,5,6) - make distance between them equal
01:42:475 (3,4,5) - maybe here too, but it looks ok as it is now

That is it, cant find much ;;

tutuhaha

3,000 posts

Joined October 2010

tutuhaha 2016-12-12T22:12:54+00:00

[Easy]
00:01:504 (2) - 这个我觉得在白线结尾也完全没问题啊
00:03:622 (4,5) - 就只提一次啊....这种放在easy里太危险了，把这俩统一变成一条slider的话，虽然节奏上少了那种冲击力但是重在安全..............而且节奏也是可以接受的这样？
1/2的slider+slider还可以，但是1/2的note+slider就真的有点...
00:59:403 (2) - 这里只在这块放一个note的话，节奏上也不会有什么太大问题？

[Normal]
00:03:975 (3) - 我个人比较倾向把③放到这？
00:08:918 (1,2) - 平行？
00:12:095 (4,5) - 这俩用弯的slider可能感觉会比较好
00:29:394 (x) - 这块..我觉得应该还是有音的？
01:34:354 (x) - ^
01:59:068 (1) - spinner从这里开始比较好？

[Hard]
01:19:880 (4) - hmm...arrow feel weird on this part :O

[Insane]
00:55:166 (7,2) - adjust and overlap better？
01:20:144 (12) - delete

[Extra]
00:27:805 (6) - 这个1/4怪怪的，我觉得用1/2就足够了？...
没别的了，就是insane和hard之间的跨度有点危险啊
\:D/

Fushimi Rio

Fushimi Rio 2016-12-13T07:18:15+00:00

Sorry for late

[General]
Make the last spinner start at 01:59:068 - feels better imo.

[Easy]
00:03:798 (5) - 同上面说的其实这条在稍前的红线结尾也可以接受
00:12:095 (5,6) - 同上不过这个位置有点偏可能不好改
00:59:403 (2,1) - 我印象里新人似乎不太会打这种比较短的滑条还是简单点好吧

[Normal]
01:41:945 - 试试加个clap？

[Raose's Hard]
01:10:700 (3,4) - looks not so good. change 4 to a straight slider?
01:17:761 (4,5) - I think use the same rhythm as 01:21:998 (4,5) - , 01:26:234 (4,5) - could be better.

[Trust's Insane]
00:03:622 (2) - to emphasize 00:03:798 - , try some diffrent rhythm here?
01:02:227 (2,3,4) - flow could be better imo. move 4 upward (like x200 y112)?

[Extra Stage]
00:32:219 (1,4) - stack
01:02:757 (5) - stack到3的尾巴上感觉好一点现在相对而言跳有点小了
01:41:768 (2,3) - ctrl+g? 和01:07:170 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 的顺序保持一致
01:53:066 (1,2) - 前面的flow都是来回跳这里我觉得ctrl+g更舒服

Good luck!

Shad0w1and

1,588 posts

Joined April 2011

Shad0w1and 2016-12-14T01:27:11+00:00

好棒的腿。这腿我可以舔十年

Ext
00:27:452 (5,6,1) - 本来读图距离没什么问题，但是5的comboburst挡住了1就很不善良了，最好移出来

Trust
01:32:060 - consider change NC

SPOILER

Raos
00:06:446 (3,1) - blanket
00:08:565 - consider highlight 00:08:741 - 00:08:565 - so change it to 1/2

SPOILER

00:52:342 (4,5) - turn on stacking view and do the blanket
01:49:535 (4,5) - blanket?

norma
00:26:923 (3,1) - b
00:35:396 (3,1) - b
00:39:103 (2,4) - b

eas
00:09:977 (2,3) - b
00:14:213 (2,3) - b
01:01:874 (3,4) - b
水完跑

Last edited by Shad0w1and 2016-12-14T01:48:03+00:00, edited 1 time in total.

Kamio Misuzu

580 posts

Joined November 2012

Kamio Misuzu 2016-12-14T01:31:27+00:00

比较一下还是更喜欢dark phoenix啊……

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

jonathanlfj 2016-12-14T02:14:45+00:00

Kamio Misuzu wrote:
比较一下还是更喜欢dark phoenix啊……

dark phoenix 画风根本不一样 xDD

Raose

698 posts

Joined July 2012

Raose 2016-12-14T02:59:10+00:00

tutuhaha wrote:
[Hard]
01:19:880 (4) - hmm...arrow feel weird on this part :O i think it's ok, but if others say so i'll change

Shad0w1and wrote:
Raos
00:08:565 - consider highlight 00:08:741 - 00:08:565 - so change it to 1/2 i like the 1/4 kick slider for now, but i'll keep it in mind
SPOILER
01:49:535 (4,5) - blanket? don't wanna ;_;

Everything else not mentioned is fixed

code

osu file format v14

[General]
AudioFilename: totto.mp3
AudioLeadIn: 0
PreviewTime: 59668
Countdown: 0
SampleSet: Soft
StackLeniency: 0.2
Mode: 0
LetterboxInBreaks: 0
WidescreenStoryboard: 1

[Editor]
Bookmarks: 100798
DistanceSpacing: 1.2
BeatDivisor: 4
GridSize: 4
TimelineZoom: 1.4

[Metadata]
Title:Youkakushi -Ayakashi Kakushi-
TitleUnicode:妖隠し -あやかしかくし-
Artist:DJ TOTTO feat. 3L
ArtistUnicode:DJ TOTTO feat. 3L
Creator:jonathanlfj
Version:Raose's Hard
Source:東方妖々夢 〜 Perfect Cherry Blossom
Tags:Raose Trust 東方Project Touhou Necrofantasia ネクロファンタジア beatmania IIDX Konami  BEMANI×東方Project Ultimate MasterPieces 八雲 紫 Yukari Yakumo ZUN 安保 さゆり Sayuri Anpo Reitaisai 12 博麗神社例大祭12
BeatmapID:1152834
BeatmapSetID:516454

[Difficulty]
HPDrainRate:5
CircleSize:4
OverallDifficulty:6
ApproachRate:7
SliderMultiplier:1.5
SliderTickRate:1

[Events]
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//Break Periods
//Storyboard Layer 0 (Background)
//Storyboard Layer 1 (Fail)
//Storyboard Layer 2 (Pass)
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Kamio Misuzu

580 posts

Joined November 2012

Kamio Misuzu 2016-12-14T13:23:19+00:00

no kd Extra的00:02:033 (4) - 这里这个不如删掉，我开头打了三遍都miss，进edit才看出来slider头上有个note，不放成四分之一速度听根本听不出来的。开始我还以为是overmap OAO

~~话说不做dark Phoenix的嘛？有一首“人形裁判”很不错诶~~

kisata

521 posts

Joined September 2012

kisata 2016-12-15T03:50:59+00:00

[Extra Stage]
imo OD9, there's nothing too complex here and it's a bit too easy with 8.5

00:01:504 (3,4,5,1) - I really dislike this pattern. The way this pattern reads with the stack is awkward. On top of that, the note that 00:02:033 (4) - is mapping is so feint as to be almost undiscernible from the music except on 25% speed (even then you have to be listening very carefully or you'll miss it). I think this should just be remapped to make it more clearer, or at the very least delete 4.
00:04:858 (2) - 00:13:331 (2) - and any other instances of sliders like that. I get why you did it, but I kinda feel like the player should be clicking on that synth tone on the white ticks, like as in here 00:09:271 (3) -. Granted, it would be more difficult now to fix this, and the current pattern is acceptable if missing some emphasis it otherwise should have. Up to you if you want to change it.
00:12:978 (3,1,2) - could do something like this
01:19:174 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - and 01:27:647 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I'm rather curious why you decided to map both of these with the two 1/4 sliders. It's not terrible or anything, just a bit weird. Is it because of the tone shift on 01:19:527 (4) - ? I think I'd just rather have them both as all circles.
01:41:768 (2,3) - I'd consider switching both these notes on the timeline. I think it's a bit more natural that way and it would still work well with 01:42:121 (1,2,3) -

[Trust's Insane]
Why not lunatic? This is a Touhou based song after all.

00:04:858 (2) - Same concern that I had in jonny's diff. Especially since you hit the note with sliderends in 00:08:918 (1) - and 00:17:391 (1) - . It's a prominent note, and I think the player should always have feedback from it in some form.

No other complaints, nice diff.

[Raose's Hard]

00:05:740 (1) - and 00:14:213 (4,5,6) - not that I don't mind mixing it up a bit, but why not map the 1/4 the first time?

nice diff

Trust

1,240 posts

Joined March 2012

Trust 2016-12-16T01:34:48+00:00

SPOILER

Mirash wrote:
Trust's Insane
00:21:627 (1,2) - 00:31:159 (4,5) - 00:36:455 (1,2) - 00:39:809 (6,7) - id make such distances all same not really a big deal
00:46:340 (6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13,1) - look like circles got grid snapped. spacing between them aren't same and stream looks strange because of it
00:50:400 (4,5,6,7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - ^actually same goes for all streams, turn off grid snap and redo them for neat look they look fine
01:02:227 (2,3) - that is awkward placement in my opinion, and you done it once, so i suggest something like this http://i.imgur.com/2DOPbGK.png
01:36:826 (4,6) - blanket they're already blanketed
01:41:592 (9,10,11) - these sliders representing different sound from 01:41:239 (7,8) i'd Ctr+G them so it looks like http://i.imgur.com/wUBKdyn.jpg
And the ending feels like it should be mapped no thanks

tutuhaha wrote:
[Insane]
01:20:144 (12) - delete why?

imoutosan wrote:
[Trust's Insane]
01:02:227 (2,3,4) - flow could be better imo. move 4 upward (like x200 y112)? eh i think its ok

apaffy wrote:
[Trust's Insane]
00:04:858 (2) - Same concern that I had in jonny's diff. Especially since you hit the note with sliderends in 00:08:918 (1) - and 00:17:391 (1) - . It's a prominent note, and I think the player should always have feedback from it in some form. agree about the feedback thing but i sorta like how 1/1 sliders play to this part of the track
No other complaints, nice diff. tyty

jonathanlfj

Elite Mapper

2,568 posts

Joined February 2010

Topic Starter

jonathanlfj 2016-12-16T02:54:14+00:00

Mirash wrote:
Hello!

Extra Stage
00:04:681 (1,2) - o look there is a blanket that can be improved
00:07:152 (1,1) - maybe it could be placed like 00:06:976 (2,2) - trying to create back and forth motion
00:16:332 (3) - you didn't NC this, but nced 00:20:568 (1) - i see, its starting new section, but i'd make them same
01:32:589 (1) - ^
01:58:008 (1) - ^
00:47:576 (2,3) - slightly off
00:54:460 (5,6) - 5 can blanket better with the end of 6
01:08:582 (3,1) - this can stack to 01:07:876 (2) - better
01:14:407 (6) - this is not on perfect line with 01:13:701 (2,3,5) -
01:38:238 (3,5,6) - same slightly off
It is fun to play!

tutuhaha wrote:
[Easy]
00:01:504 (2) - 这个我觉得在白线结尾也完全没问题啊
00:03:622 (4,5) - 就只提一次啊....这种放在easy里太危险了，把这俩统一变成一条slider的话，虽然节奏上少了那种冲击力但是重在安全..............而且节奏也是可以接受的这样？
1/2的slider+slider还可以，但是1/2的note+slider就真的有点... 说实话我觉得stack被妖魔化了，我把这图给beginner打一般都没有什么问题
00:59:403 (2) - 这里只在这块放一个note的话，节奏上也不会有什么太大问题？

[Normal]
00:03:975 (3) - 我个人比较倾向把③放到这？这里跟鼓点
00:08:918 (1,2) - 平行？
00:12:095 (4,5) - 这俩用弯的slider可能感觉会比较好
00:29:394 (x) - 这块..我觉得应该还是有音的？跟钢琴
01:34:354 (x) - ^
01:59:068 (1) - spinner从这里开始比较好？

[Extra]
00:27:805 (6) - 这个1/4怪怪的，我觉得用1/2就足够了？... 跟钢琴
没别的了，就是insane和hard之间的跨度有点危险啊
\:D/

imoutosan wrote:
Sorry for late

[General]
Make the last spinner start at 01:59:068 - feels better imo.

[Easy]
00:03:798 (5) - 同上面说的其实这条在稍前的红线结尾也可以接受
00:12:095 (5,6) - 同上不过这个位置有点偏可能不好改这个应该没问题
00:59:403 (2,1) - 我印象里新人似乎不太会打这种比较短的滑条还是简单点好吧

[Normal]
01:41:945 - 试试加个clap？

[Extra Stage]
00:32:219 (1,4) - stack
01:02:757 (5) - stack到3的尾巴上感觉好一点现在相对而言跳有点小了这里故意弄的小一点，之后是逐渐加大的
01:41:768 (2,3) - ctrl+g? 和01:07:170 (1,2,3,1,2,3) - 的顺序保持一致这里因为滑条的方向不一致，ctrlg的话打起来很别扭
01:53:066 (1,2) - 前面的flow都是来回跳这里我觉得ctrl+g更舒服

Good luck!

Shad0w1and wrote:
好棒的腿。这腿我可以舔十年 prpr

Ext
00:27:452 (5,6,1) - 本来读图距离没什么问题，但是5的comboburst挡住了1就很不善良了，最好移出来这里从来没见有人miss过。。。挺喜欢现在这样的

norma
00:26:923 (3,1) - b
00:35:396 (3,1) - b
00:39:103 (2,4) - b

eas
00:09:977 (2,3) - b
00:14:213 (2,3) - b
01:01:874 (3,4) - b
水完跑

Kamio Misuzu wrote:
no kd Extra的00:02:033 (4) - 这里这个不如删掉，我开头打了三遍都miss，进edit才看出来slider头上有个note，不放成四分之一速度听根本听不出来的。开始我还以为是overmap OAO ok

~~话说不做dark Phoenix的嘛？有一首“人形裁判”很不错诶~~ 实在是没时间作图qq

apaffy wrote:
[Extra Stage]
imo OD9, there's nothing too complex here and it's a bit too easy with 8.5 8.8 it is
00:01:504 (3,4,5,1) - I really dislike this pattern. The way this pattern reads with the stack is awkward. On top of that, the note that 00:02:033 (4) - is mapping is so feint as to be almost undiscernible from the music except on 25% speed (even then you have to be listening very carefully or you'll miss it). I think this should just be remapped to make it more clearer, or at the very least delete 4.
00:04:858 (2) - 00:13:331 (2) - and any other instances of sliders like that. I get why you did it, but I kinda feel like the player should be clicking on that synth tone on the white ticks, like as in here 00:09:271 (3) -. Granted, it would be more difficult now to fix this, and the current pattern is acceptable if missing some emphasis it otherwise should have. Up to you if you want to change it. this is intentionally undermapped to provide rhythm variety and a break for players, the song is way too dense to cover every layer of music
00:12:978 (3,1,2) - could do something like this
01:19:174 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - and 01:27:647 (2,3,4,5,6,7,1) - I'm rather curious why you decided to map both of these with the two 1/4 sliders. It's not terrible or anything, just a bit weird. Is it because of the tone shift on 01:19:527 (4) - ? I think I'd just rather have them both as all circles. its because the piano becomes dominant on the 5th beat, hence the transition from short DS sliders to notes with higher DS; in fact this entire section is gradually increasing in DS to match the relative intensity of the music
01:41:768 (2,3) - I'd consider switching both these notes on the timeline. I think it's a bit more natural that way and it would still work well with 01:42:121 (1,2,3) - as i've explained before switching these kills the flow in this section ans the sliders are oriented differently from the previous pattern

no reply = fixed as is. Thanks for the mods!

Natsu

8,074 posts

Joined September 2012

Natsu 2016-12-20T04:15:19+00:00

General
[]

01:59:156 (1) - 5% or 10% volume at the end pls

Trust's Lunatic
[]

00:00:445 (1) - idk I feel really weird that you didn't start mapping from here, personally I think you can map something there without much effort >:
00:03:975 - you really need to map this, since the rhythm is actually wrong, if you notice from 00:03:622 (1) - to 00:04:505 (3) - there are 6 beats that are divided in group of two not in 2 + 3
00:34:337 (1) - move this a bit down to avoid it being really close to the hp bar, I think it is even touching it.
00:57:285 (12) - there are not 1/4 beats in the music just 1/2 beats, even your hitsouding sounds weird, 2 1/2 circles or a 1/2 slider would fit the song better.
01:16:173 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - there are 1/4s yes, but the 1/2s are way stronger, also placing a stream here kind ruins the effect of the next one 01:17:055 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - were the beats are really clear, I'd suggest adding 1/4 sliders or mapping 1/2s at 01:16:173 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13)
01:19:174 (2,3,4,5) - probably changing these beats to sliders would work better as jonathan did.
01:27:647 (2,3,4,5) - same as above, since having circles at 01:27:647 (2,3,4,5) - were the beats aren't prominents ruins the effect of 01:28:000 (6,7,8,9,10) -

Raose's Hard
[]

I think that you should also map the first part
I'd add more triplets for better spread, since Trust's diff is using a lot of streams.

Easy
[]

00:02:563 (3,4) - spacing, seems the stack leniency is making the objects overlap.
00:43:339 (2,3) - I think you should avoid overlapping them, since the other 1/2 overlaps make this pattern really confused to play, 00:42:810 (1,2,3,4) -
00:58:697 (1) - maybe this is too soon after the spinner, i'd just remove 00:58:697 (1,2) - and start mapping at 00:59:756 (1) -
01:19:880 (4,5) - spacing is a bit off due to the stack leniency
01:32:589 (6) - remove a repeat and add a circle at 01:33:648 - with NC and then remove the one at 01:34:708 (1) -

Pho

1,785 posts

Joined November 2013

Pho 2016-12-20T23:45:52+00:00

M4M o/ Complementing Natsu's mod

Bold: Fix quickly/unrankable issues
Purple: Questionable
Red: Highly recommend

[General]

widescreen on extra stage
Would rename Easy-Normal to Normal-Advanced actually, like you don't usually see regular 1/2 rhythms on Easies at this bpm or such dense rhythms in Normal.
BG resolution is a bit off it seems

[Raose's Hard]

01:49:535 (4,5) - this non-blanket taunts me
Could need more circle-only triples as Natsu said or else spread is kinda broken.

[Trust's Lunatic]

Could actually use NCing after every stanza instead after every 2. Combos get really big at the more stream-heavy parts
00:08:211 (9) - 00:16:685 (9) - Would make these a 1/4 slider actually to make it more fitting the strings
00:23:745 (1,2,3,4) - it's actually nice, but feels out of plce since you only used the slow motion pattern only once. Should correlate more with 00:31:159 (4,5) -
00:59:315 (2) - NC?
01:21:998 (10) - Last repeat's overmapped, crop it.

[Extra Stage]

Subjective, but you could try to go for narrow angles here for better emphasis: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6856390
Only thing i'm a bit annoyed about are the tapsessions at 01:37:885 - and 01:45:299 - because i'm missing a good connection to the music here which you had earlier in the 1st kiai with these doublestacks for the vocal. But it's well-structured, maybe i'm just too nitpicky

Wow, feelin' bad since I don't know what else to mod on this set, all diffs look pretty clean already.
Call me back when you're ready

Raose

698 posts

Joined July 2012

Raose 2016-12-21T07:57:08+00:00

apaffy wrote:
[Raose's Hard]
00:05:740 (1) - and 00:14:213 (4,5,6) - not that I don't mind mixing it up a bit, but why not map the 1/4 the first time? changed first pattern to map 1/4 to include more 1/4s
nice diff

Pho wrote:
[Raose's Hard]
01:49:535 (4,5) - this non-blanket taunts me changed pattern
Could need more circle-only triples as Natsu said or else spread is kinda broken.

anything else not mentioned is fixed

thanks!
added more triplets

code

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[Editor]
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Creator:jonathanlfj
Version:Raose's Hard
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jonathanlfj

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jonathanlfj 2016-12-25T04:33:03+00:00

Natsu wrote:
General
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01:59:156 (1) - 5% or 10% volume at the end pls
Easy
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00:02:563 (3,4) - spacing, seems the stack leniency is making the objects overlap.
00:43:339 (2,3) - I think you should avoid overlapping them, since the other 1/2 overlaps make this pattern really confused to play, 00:42:810 (1,2,3,4) -
00:58:697 (1) - maybe this is too soon after the spinner, i'd just remove 00:58:697 (1,2) - and start mapping at 00:59:756 (1) -
01:19:880 (4,5) - spacing is a bit off due to the stack leniency
01:32:589 (6) - remove a repeat and add a circle at 01:33:648 - with NC and then remove the one at 01:34:708 (1) - I decided to go with something different here, really like the way that slider leads into the kiai so gonna keep it

Pho wrote:
M4M o/ Complementing Natsu's mod

Bold: Fix quickly/unrankable issues
Purple: Questionable
Red: Highly recommend

[General]
widescreen on extra stage
Would rename Easy-Normal to Normal-Advanced actually, like you don't usually see regular 1/2 rhythms on Easies at this bpm or such dense rhythms in Normal. I think it's fine given the actual playing dynamics of each diff, plus that would become inconsistent with touhou naming conventions
BG resolution is a bit off it seems im using the source resolution here, fixing the dimensions would require enlargement or reduction which will decrease the quality of the BG
[Extra Stage]
Subjective, but you could try to go for narrow angles here for better emphasis: https://osu.ppy.sh/ss/6856390 good suggestion, but i want this part to travel horizontally across the screen to give that finale feel to it
Only thing i'm a bit annoyed about are the tapsessions at 01:37:885 - and 01:45:299 - because i'm missing a good connection to the music here which you had earlier in the 1st kiai with these doublestacks for the vocal. But it's well-structured, maybe i'm just too nitpicky actually i've considered changing that, you just gave me a good excuse to not be lazy xD
Wow, feelin' bad since I don't know what else to mod on this set, all diffs look pretty clean already.
Call me back when you're ready

No reply = fixed as-is. Thanks for the mods!

Waiting for Trust to return from vacation for his update

Trust

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Trust 2016-12-28T04:54:11+00:00

SPOILER

Natsu wrote:
Trust's Lunatic
00:00:445 (1) - idk I feel really weird that you didn't start mapping from here, personally I think you can map something there without much effort >: it's fine
00:03:975 - you really need to map this, since the rhythm is actually wrong, if you notice from 00:03:622 (1) - to 00:04:505 (3) - there are 6 beats that are divided in group of two not in 2 + 3 i follow the snares, not interested in mapping every audible sound here
00:34:337 (1) - move this a bit down to avoid it being really close to the hp bar, I think it is even touching it. sure
00:57:285 (12) - there are not 1/4 beats in the music just 1/2 beats, even your hitsouding sounds weird, 2 1/2 circles or a 1/2 slider would fit the song better. changed
01:16:173 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) - there are 1/4s yes, but the 1/2s are way stronger, also placing a stream here kind ruins the effect of the next one 01:17:055 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8,9) - were the beats are really clear, I'd suggest adding 1/4 sliders or mapping 1/2s at 01:16:173 (7,8,9,10,11,12,13) good idea
01:19:174 (2,3,4,5) - probably changing these beats to sliders would work better as jonathan did. i like it as is
01:27:647 (2,3,4,5) - same as above, since having circles at 01:27:647 (2,3,4,5) - were the beats aren't prominents ruins the effect of 01:28:000 (6,7,8,9,10) - this one too

Pho wrote:
[Trust's Lunatic]
Could actually use NCing after every stanza instead after every 2. Combos get really big at the more stream-heavy parts im ok with big combos
00:08:211 (9) - 00:16:685 (9) - Would make these a 1/4 slider actually to make it more fitting the strings alright
00:23:745 (1,2,3,4) - it's actually nice, but feels out of plce since you only used the slow motion pattern only once. Should correlate more with 00:31:159 (4,5) - ehh i want to keep this
00:59:315 (2) - NC? sure
01:21:998 (10) - Last repeat's overmapped, crop it. ok

Ty for the mods~

Natsu

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Natsu 2016-12-31T03:35:02+00:00

the source is inconsistent, check Raose's Hard . lol

jonathanlfj

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jonathanlfj 2016-12-31T13:56:12+00:00