Speechless
[Hoshi]
AR可以高一点 那9.2吧
个人不太喜欢 preview point放的太靠后,这样循环的速度太快了 我倒觉得还可以,后面还半分钟呢作为preview足够了
00:01:819 (5,6) - 不太明白这里的节奏,00:01:965 - 钢琴的重音在这里结果这里是滑条尾
00:03:566 - 漏音
这里主要跟vocal,如果跟钢琴的话这里vocal的多变节奏就可惜掉了
00:04:732 (5) - 更应该出现在00:04:877 - 这里
听了一下很明显不是
这一段不知道是怎么选择跟音乐的,感觉钢琴要优先于其他的声音比如人声,所以尽量跟钢琴比较好,人声基本上可以忽略,在没有钢琴的时候再跟人声 这个因人而异吧,我比较偏向于跟人声,毕竟r&b元素是个不可忽略的特色,跟钢琴的话就显得没什么创意了
00:18:275 (1) - 换成1/4折返滑条,00:18:421 - 这里是有东西的
这里作为男女声过渡,我还是决定用一个慢速滑条直接带过,过渡段忽略一些节奏会更加突出前后节奏差异
00:42:159 (5) - NC? 可以
01:28:615 (1) - 这里的NC就不用了,如果是要突出 01:28:906 (1) - 这里的 NC的话就不需要在离他这么近的一个地方再来一个 NC,区别待遇
这里是考虑后面那个三角梗的读图,我觉得nc一下更好读一些
01:30:071 (5) - 也是换成1/4折返滑条,01:30:217 - 这里也是有东西的,而且这里放1/2的话个人感觉节奏好像不是太好
嗯确实有东西,但我偏向用1/2的意思是故意在这里把节奏拉长,来突出前后节奏紧促部分
01:57:013 (9) - ctrl+G? 这里我有考虑过,男声的音调是一致的,因此滑条走向上也一致处理更好些
02:38:081 (5) - NC? 可以
03:21:625 - 03:22:207 - 这两个点还是填上比较好,不需要空着,否则紧凑感一下就断了
确实,但这里也确实不想做得紧凑感太强2333而且这个跳应该也能某种程度上弥补一下节奏空缺,并不无聊
03:35:897 (3) - 换成1/4滑条,因为 03:36:042 - 这里并不是一个应该空着的地方,有钢琴,另外最好能保持空1/2的间距,否则这里突然变成空出一个3/4的点感觉好像也不太好
依然是固执地只想跟人声_(:з」∠)_
04:04:877 (4) - 这里也应该是3/4滑条,节奏和之前完全一样 我觉得不太一样啊……思考
04:12:450 (1) - 这个 NC太长了,建议04:13:615 (3,6,9) - 这三个 NC 好的
04:31:528 - 试试看在这里用一个1/2滑条和一个circle代替之前出现的3/8位置上的滑条 http://puu.sh/rAULa/df1dd5a9fa.jpg
这个建议好评,改了
05:03:129 (5,6,7,8) - 这里的间距我感觉可以比之前四个的间距更大一点,然后 NC
你的想法挺好,但我有点害怕最后难度太大被喷,实在不敢再做更难了orz
就这样了我知道你一条都不会改的 哪有,我改了好几条呢orz
AR可以高一点 那9.2吧
个人不太喜欢 preview point放的太靠后,这样循环的速度太快了 我倒觉得还可以,后面还半分钟呢作为preview足够了
00:01:819 (5,6) - 不太明白这里的节奏,00:01:965 - 钢琴的重音在这里结果这里是滑条尾
00:03:566 - 漏音
这里主要跟vocal,如果跟钢琴的话这里vocal的多变节奏就可惜掉了
00:04:732 (5) - 更应该出现在00:04:877 - 这里
听了一下很明显不是
这一段不知道是怎么选择跟音乐的,感觉钢琴要优先于其他的声音比如人声,所以尽量跟钢琴比较好,人声基本上可以忽略,在没有钢琴的时候再跟人声 这个因人而异吧,我比较偏向于跟人声,毕竟r&b元素是个不可忽略的特色,跟钢琴的话就显得没什么创意了
00:18:275 (1) - 换成1/4折返滑条,00:18:421 - 这里是有东西的
这里作为男女声过渡,我还是决定用一个慢速滑条直接带过,过渡段忽略一些节奏会更加突出前后节奏差异
00:42:159 (5) - NC? 可以
01:28:615 (1) - 这里的NC就不用了,如果是要突出 01:28:906 (1) - 这里的 NC的话就不需要在离他这么近的一个地方再来一个 NC,区别待遇
这里是考虑后面那个三角梗的读图,我觉得nc一下更好读一些
01:30:071 (5) - 也是换成1/4折返滑条,01:30:217 - 这里也是有东西的,而且这里放1/2的话个人感觉节奏好像不是太好
嗯确实有东西,但我偏向用1/2的意思是故意在这里把节奏拉长,来突出前后节奏紧促部分
01:57:013 (9) - ctrl+G? 这里我有考虑过,男声的音调是一致的,因此滑条走向上也一致处理更好些
02:38:081 (5) - NC? 可以
03:21:625 - 03:22:207 - 这两个点还是填上比较好,不需要空着,否则紧凑感一下就断了
确实,但这里也确实不想做得紧凑感太强2333而且这个跳应该也能某种程度上弥补一下节奏空缺,并不无聊
03:35:897 (3) - 换成1/4滑条,因为 03:36:042 - 这里并不是一个应该空着的地方,有钢琴,另外最好能保持空1/2的间距,否则这里突然变成空出一个3/4的点感觉好像也不太好
依然是固执地只想跟人声_(:з」∠)_
04:04:877 (4) - 这里也应该是3/4滑条,节奏和之前完全一样 我觉得不太一样啊……思考
04:12:450 (1) - 这个 NC太长了,建议04:13:615 (3,6,9) - 这三个 NC 好的
04:31:528 - 试试看在这里用一个1/2滑条和一个circle代替之前出现的3/8位置上的滑条 http://puu.sh/rAULa/df1dd5a9fa.jpg
这个建议好评,改了
05:03:129 (5,6,7,8) - 这里的间距我感觉可以比之前四个的间距更大一点,然后 NC
你的想法挺好,但我有点害怕最后难度太大被喷,实在不敢再做更难了orz
就这样了我知道你一条都不会改的 哪有,我改了好几条呢orz
Garden
开机1pc 神触oooorz
add j-pop r&b rnb to tag? 好
Hoshi
谢谢,这摸已经神无敌了,基本上每条都改了
可以顺便求个mu吗大神_(:з」∠)_
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add j-pop r&b rnb to tag? 好
Hoshi
- 00:07:790 (1,2,3) - 移一下1,2让2到1,3的头一样距离? 好的
- 03:09:537 (1,2,3) - 05:00:217 (1,2,3) - 类似^ 也改了
- 00:42:159 (5) - 一样的两圈这里或许考虑nc 好的
- 00:47:401 (1,2) - 这里1/4的spacing比较迷,好像是第一次出现,导致我读的时候还以为节奏有变化.. 看了下前后感觉这里一般的分开就好 你说的很对,改掉了
- 01:04:877 (7) - 考虑nc,vocal停一下的感觉,像这里 00:09:829 (9,1) - 好的
- 01:21:042 (8) - 这块nc有点长,或许这里可以加一个,和声忽然切入 ok~
- 01:49:440 (2,3,4,5,6,7) - 音乐里也没什么强烈的变化这里的跳显得和整张图感觉不搭,前面部分都是注重移动的控制,像是another day的感觉。考虑45 67削成23一样的ds 嗯没错,按你说的削成一样ds的了,虽然还是有点跳_(:з」∠)_
- 02:01:965 (1) - 往后的一小段都可以考虑中间加点nc什么的,, 好的
- 03:26:431 - 03:27:596 - etc.. clap? 好像加了也不会显得很吵 嗯加了一些clap
- 03:36:625 (5,6) - 建议换成个1/2滑条,这一句中间是连着的更合vocal 厉害,改了
- 03:50:314 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - 和前面一样用那种错开一点的摆法比较美 嗯这里就暂时不改了,觉得这个样子也不难看其实2333(被踢飞
- 04:12:450 (1,2) - 这块nc还是拆拆,每个断句都可以加 好的
- 04:28:178 (7,8) - 用和 04:27:887 (6,7) - 一样的视觉距离? 嗯好的
- 04:52:062 (1) - 可以整体修下距离让这里不碰血条 修好了
- 04:55:557 (1,2) - 这个跳铺垫不太够啊.. 没什么其它好想法啊哭;w;
- 04:57:741 (8,1,2,3) - 好像断在这,不过我对这段倒是没什么意见 确实有点难了_(:з」∠)_
谢谢,这摸已经神无敌了,基本上每条都改了
可以顺便求个mu吗大神_(:з」∠)_
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O-Moei
Hi !, 🌀NM or 💑M4M, yours to decide
I'll do m4m, will mod your map when I have free time...Tomorrow maybe?
✨ = Suggestion (Common opinion. No change, no problem)
💧 = Uuhhh? (Something feels wrong around here...)
💥 = Warning !!! (Yu know wat tu du xD )
lol really love those small cute icons <3
Here we go...
General
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Hoshi
✨00:18:275 (1,2) - Try to delete (2) then make (1) a reverse, lovelier rhythmic play (like this :03:43:615 (8,9,1) - )
hmm actually these two parts are not exactly the same. In the former one there's a falling tone, and what with that is a relax part, which is the woman's voice. Yet in the latter one, it's a rising tone with some intense drum snares, and what with that is also a part that filled with drum sounds, which is as intense as the previous part. So I choose to use a slow 1/2 slider in 00:18:275 (1,2) - and quick 1/4 clicks with large distance in 03:43:615 (8,9,1) -. You may try these two parts later and you'll understand my words.
✨00:32:838 (3,2) - Stack miss ?, but me would just grab 00:33:421 (1,2) - so that (2) stacked with it
Okay I know what you mean Fixed~
✨02:10:702 (4) - This can be NC for variety
03:25:266 (4) - ^
:) Fixed~
✨02:38:955 (9) - I personally (well, most people, me guess xd) don't like it like this. How about like this ?
Well okay, Fixed that~
✨02:54:974 (3,4) - Can please curve them a bit more ? feels neater compared to 02:54:392 (1,2) -
Well actually 02:53:809 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - is a symmetrical pattern, so I don't want to break that sry ;w;
✨02:54:974 (3) - This flow doesn't seemed nice compared to 02:54:683 (2) - . Making 02:54:974 (3) - 's sliderhead at least stacked with 02:55:557 (1) - 's slidertail would much more nicely playable
Same as above ;w;
✨02:59:489 (2,4) - Stack miss
oops fixed
Oke, that's all from me. All e best :)
I'll do m4m, will mod your map when I have free time...Tomorrow maybe?
✨ = Suggestion (Common opinion. No change, no problem)
💧 = Uuhhh? (Something feels wrong around here...)
💥 = Warning !!! (Yu know wat tu du xD )
lol really love those small cute icons <3
Here we go...
✨00:18:275 (1,2) - Try to delete (2) then make (1) a reverse, lovelier rhythmic play (like this :03:43:615 (8,9,1) - )
hmm actually these two parts are not exactly the same. In the former one there's a falling tone, and what with that is a relax part, which is the woman's voice. Yet in the latter one, it's a rising tone with some intense drum snares, and what with that is also a part that filled with drum sounds, which is as intense as the previous part. So I choose to use a slow 1/2 slider in 00:18:275 (1,2) - and quick 1/4 clicks with large distance in 03:43:615 (8,9,1) -. You may try these two parts later and you'll understand my words.
✨00:32:838 (3,2) - Stack miss ?, but me would just grab 00:33:421 (1,2) - so that (2) stacked with it
Okay I know what you mean Fixed~
✨02:10:702 (4) - This can be NC for variety
03:25:266 (4) - ^
:) Fixed~
✨02:38:955 (9) - I personally (well, most people, me guess xd) don't like it like this. How about like this ?
Well okay, Fixed that~
✨02:54:974 (3,4) - Can please curve them a bit more ? feels neater compared to 02:54:392 (1,2) -
Well actually 02:53:809 (3,4,1,2,3,4) - is a symmetrical pattern, so I don't want to break that sry ;w;
✨02:54:974 (3) - This flow doesn't seemed nice compared to 02:54:683 (2) - . Making 02:54:974 (3) - 's sliderhead at least stacked with 02:55:557 (1) - 's slidertail would much more nicely playable
Same as above ;w;
✨02:59:489 (2,4) - Stack miss
oops fixed
Oke, that's all from me. All e best :)
Thanks for your modding~<3
Update~