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Lasse
soft-sliderslide4 gets shown as unused, but 04:22:499 - section uses it so no problem there
I see kwan checked metadata already so that should be fine

00:04:732 (5) - what is this mapped to? pretty sure you wanted this to be on 00:04:877 - for piano lol
00:18:712 (2) - vocal snapping is kinda weird here so this feels really off. male vocal somehow sounds more like it would be on 00:18:761 - or map the other one on white tick?
00:41:576 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - great
00:46:382 (2) - why is this such a huge jump? No vocal and just basic drum beat doesn't really justify this. and the spacing of surrounding objetcs is much lower so this stands out even though it shouldnt
00:52:062 (1) - no idea why this is suddenly mapped as reverse slider? it's liek the only one in the whole part
01:09:683 - rhythm on this feels kinda off with how drums and vocals go. maybe http://i.imgur.com/DZvdzpF.jpg or
01:20:751 (6,7,1) - sudden drop in spacing doesnt really work here I think. maybe you can rearrange 6/7 ?
01:29:343 (1) - how about comboing like http://i.imgur.com/yCejQmd.jpg ? would make the downbeat stand out more and look nice too
01:47:547 (6,7) - just feels so wrong to play with all the movement the pattern before builds up : ( think stacking like http://i.imgur.com/C5cQVJp.jpg would work better with the song if you insist on keeping a stack here.
02:24:974 (4,1,2) - movement here feels so forced because it's kinda linear with so many spacing changes
02:57:887 (1,3,4) - check this with stacking, looks weird ingame. should manually move 02:58:615 (3,4) - to fix
03:20:023 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ autostack kinda breaks your pattern here, really noticeable cause 2-3 gets no followpoint while all others do. maybe you can do a manual stack to left? http://i.imgur.com/WbShU7B.jpg
03:24:683 (1,2,1,2,3) - more of ^
04:10:848 (4) - higher spacing would really help with reading this rhythm here, like you did on 04:05:751 (3,4) -
04:48:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nice!
04:58:469 (5) - movement into this slider feels so forced cause it completely breaks everything from before, why not something like http://i.imgur.com/IVhyChH.jpg


sure it was only submitted a week ago, but it's a nice map and got quite some mods already, so feel free to call me for a recheck
Topic Starter
Streliteela

Lasse wrote:

soft-sliderslide4 gets shown as unused, but 04:22:499 - section uses it so no problem there
I see kwan checked metadata already so that should be fine

00:04:732 (5) - what is this mapped to? pretty sure you wanted this to be on 00:04:877 - for piano lol
lol yea, fixed
00:18:712 (2) - vocal snapping is kinda weird here so this feels really off. male vocal somehow sounds more like it would be on 00:18:761 - or map the other one on white tick?
hmm that's the point...it seems that the male vocal is off the main rhythm here...Okay I decide to add a 1/4 slider in 00:18:858 (2) - as well. Thanks god that weird male vocal is so weak that could also be ignored. Hope it's better this time.
00:41:576 (1,2,3,4,1,2,3,4) - great <3
00:46:382 (2) - why is this such a huge jump? No vocal and just basic drum beat doesn't really justify this. and the spacing of surrounding objetcs is much lower so this stands out even though it shouldnt
Yes you're right, decreased the jump already.
00:52:062 (1) - no idea why this is suddenly mapped as reverse slider? it's liek the only one in the whole part
:(Well not sure if it is my personal feeling, but it seems the snare sound in 00:52:207 - could be heard much clearer than that in 01:48:130 - 03:02:693 - and 04:54:537 (2) - . So I choose to keep it sry :(
01:09:683 - rhythm on this feels kinda off with how drums and vocals go. maybe http://i.imgur.com/DZvdzpF.jpg or
Okay, fixed as you said :)
01:20:751 (6,7,1) - sudden drop in spacing doesnt really work here I think. maybe you can rearrange 6/7 ?
Yea okay rearranged this part...Hope it better now.
01:29:343 (1) - how about comboing like http://i.imgur.com/yCejQmd.jpg ? would make the downbeat stand out more and look nice too
Okay, fixed~
01:47:547 (6,7) - just feels so wrong to play with all the movement the pattern before builds up : ( think stacking like http://i.imgur.com/C5cQVJp.jpg would work better with the song if you insist on keeping a stack here.
Okay I renounce the use of stack here. Maybe 1.3x ds would be better?
02:24:974 (4,1,2) - movement here feels so forced because it's kinda linear with so many spacing changes
:(ummm I think it's okay to play tho :( sry no fixed here
02:57:887 (1,3,4) - check this with stacking, looks weird ingame. should manually move 02:58:615 (3,4) - to fix
03:20:023 (1,2,3,4,5) - ^ autostack kinda breaks your pattern here, really noticeable cause 2-3 gets no followpoint while all others do. maybe you can do a manual stack to left? http://i.imgur.com/WbShU7B.jpg
03:24:683 (1,2,1,2,3) - more of ^
Well I changed the stack leniency to 2 now and it looks much much better ;w;
04:10:848 (4) - higher spacing would really help with reading this rhythm here, like you did on 04:05:751 (3,4) -
Okay increased the space :)
04:48:566 (1,2,3,4,5,6,7,8) - nice! <333
04:58:469 (5) - movement into this slider feels so forced cause it completely breaks everything from before, why not something like http://i.imgur.com/IVhyChH.jpg
Yup fixed~

sure it was only submitted a week ago, but it's a nice map and got quite some mods already, so feel free to call me for a recheck
Thanks for your modding <3 Really high quality mod that helps me a lot~^_^
Updated~
Lasse

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soft-sliderslide4 gets shown as unused, but 04:22:499 - section uses it
Beomsan
gratz
sahuang

Beomsan wrote:

gratz
#2
Atrue
要是我能点心就肯定摸了 QAQ
my angel yayoi
很想摸(
然而实力不够……其实是没多少时间仔细摸
如果11月左右还没火没心(肯定火了心了Q了还全是10分)我就跑回来填坑!真的!放鸽子也不敢放S神鸽子!
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来晚了,GG
Topic Starter
Streliteela

nika mika wrote:

很想摸(
然而实力不够……其实是没多少时间仔细摸
如果11月左右还没火没心(肯定火了心了Q了还全是10分)我就跑回来填坑!真的!放鸽子也不敢放S神鸽子!
嘿嘿,给颗星表示诚意

来晚了,GG
其实我只是在等第十四天oorz超市大神说不点speedrank所以至少要等到传图日期后两周 :(
谢谢你的星星啦~ :)
Chaoslitz
可 達 S ! ! !

[Beyond the Horizon]
  1. 01:06:625 (5,1,2) - 這兒對比起 01:05:751 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5)一堆的圈, 節奏上我轉折有點大, 試試把01:06:625 (5) - 換2個1/4滑條? (01:08:955 (5,6,1,2) - 就像這兒節奏也挺密)
  2. 01:12:741 (3,4,1,2) - 這兒flow怪怪的, 大概是因為01:13:033 (1,2) - 的距離比之前少而且是在來回的方向
  3. 01:14:634 (7,1) - 不用overlap吧? 可能讀錯1/4 qwq (例如 01:31:382 (5,1) - )
  4. 01:26:285 (7,1) - NC了不stack比較好吧
  5. 01:36:333 (1,2) - 好像太遠...orz
  6. 01:54:974 (1,2,3,4) - 這兩個跳的對比...有點大
  7. 02:11:139 (3) - 我覺得這變成兩個圈能夠突出02:11:285 這downbeat
  8. 02:20:023 - 把那個綠色的break刪掉
  9. 02:20:606 (1,2) - ...按pattern應該ctrl+g
  10. 02:43:906 (1,2,3) - 跟01:06:625 (5,1,2)差不多
  11. 03:37:790 (2,3,4) - Same as 01:54:974 (1,2,3,4)

把完整的歌詞也放cw啊(
Topic Starter
Streliteela

Chaoslitz wrote:

可 達 S ! ! ! 呆 呆 超 ! ! !

[Beyond the Horizon]
  1. 01:06:625 (5,1,2) - 這兒對比起 01:05:751 (4,5,1,2,3,4,5)一堆的圈, 節奏上我轉折有點大, 試試把01:06:625 (5) - 換2個1/4滑條? (01:08:955 (5,6,1,2) - 就像這兒節奏也挺密)
    这地方其实是故意这样的,虽然说后面01:08:955 (5,6) - 这里和前面很像,但其实后面这个地方vocal和前面是有差别的。我希望能把这种差别做出来;而且这部分我主要都是在根据人声的缓急变化来下物件和决定ds,这里明显是只有一个拉长的人声所以一个1/2滑条完全足够imo ;w;
  2. 01:12:741 (3,4,1,2) - 這兒flow怪怪的, 大概是因為01:13:033 (1,2) - 的距離比之前少而且是在來回的方向
    嗯这地方主要也是考虑做出来vocal的缓急变化,所以某些地方的ds会故意被弄大或者缩小;w;确实是难读一些不过我觉得这种变化还是蛮合曲的;w;
  3. 01:14:634 (7,1) - 不用overlap吧? 可能讀錯1/4 qwq (例如 01:31:382 (5,1) - )
    嗯你说的对,改掉了~
  4. 01:26:285 (7,1) - NC了不stack比較好吧
    嗯,改了
  5. 01:36:333 (1,2) - 好像太遠...orz
    其实第二和第三段kiai的这个部分是用的差不多的ds(第一和第四段是一种),个人test的时候感觉那个长滑条其实不用滑到尾就可以紧接着点下一个物件了(好像是od的缘故?不太清楚),所以实际上的距离并没有看上去那么大;w;
  6. 01:54:974 (1,2,3,4) - 這兩個跳的對比...有點大
    嗯,改掉了
  7. 02:11:139 (3) - 我覺得這變成兩個圈能夠突出02:11:285 這downbeat
    好,改了
  8. 02:20:023 - 把那個綠色的break刪掉
    嗯去掉了
  9. 02:20:606 (1,2) - ...按pattern應該ctrl+g
    之前竟然没发现XD改了
  10. 02:43:906 (1,2,3) - 跟01:06:625 (5,1,2)差不多
    这里倒是改了,因为前后没有什么对比的需要了~
  11. 03:37:790 (2,3,4) - Same as 01:54:974 (1,2,3,4)
    嗯调整了一下

把完整的歌詞也放cw啊( 太长了啊ooorz而且我最喜欢的就是这几句话owo前面很多都太啰嗦了啦XD
Thanks for your modding~~<3
Updated!
Chaoslitz
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感謝S大神


(那就把完整的歌詞多發我一次啊
sahuang
恭喜!!!!!!>///<
Karen
呆呆超放错了icon
Lily Bread
wa,恭喜
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Karen wrote:

呆呆超放错了icon
Rumia-
s醬恭喜
Topic Starter
Streliteela
Thanks everyone~>w<~
Lavender
s sauce good god
Beomsan
you did it
ranked EZ
Athrun
Very beautiful beatmap, where it compliments the song very well, and to top it off, the hitsounds are beautiful.
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